7/23/2019 First Edit Peer Assessment

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Focus Comments Targets

Range of shot typesand editing transitions

Good variety of shots andtransitions. Allows the openingsequence to have continuityand makes it ow.

Make the shots after thepan a little longer. Alsomake the sound of raincarry on throughput.

Appropriate pace andcontent for genre

 Yes. There is no inappropriatecontent for the audience.

Maye slow down the shotsy a fraction of a second! ifthis means removing ashot! remove the shot at"#$%.

&osition and order oftitles

Good positioning ' like that the(lm title ' shown last.

 There is no link to the title) is this intentional*

'ntroduction ofcharacters

 The audience doesn+t knowmuch aout the girl which ise,ective at creating enigmacodes.

&ossily give the audiencea little it of information sothey can connect to thecharacter more.

'ntroduction of storyline -toryline is unclear ut this cane e,ective for enigma codes.

A lot of guessing has to edone.

learly an openingsequence

 Yes. The title is not featured atthe end which is good.

 Yes.

/se of sound Music is really good! reects the

mood.

 There is no sound of rain in

the (rst shot.