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A. These sentences has how to good business email.
B. 1.Business Email is short, and written concisely.
2.Include a telephone number to the signature of the email.
3.these documents has important point when Email is written.
4.Because basic writing of business Email is written.
5.Because the example for writing mail is written.
C.We can learn a good point and a bad point when I write an email.Email is convenient not to know the Email adress and compact but written letter must know it and isn't compact so Email is useful better than written letter.
I should adopt the advantage how to write the email.
D.I think these articles explain the difference between Email and written letter and explain how to write the Business email.
A First, write a salutation. If you are writing to someone you don't know, a simple "Hello" is adequate. Using a salutatio such as "Dear Mr Smith," is too formal. Next, write the sentences. Make it easy for reader to read, combine Upper & lowercase, use white space and legible font. Also make it easy for the reader to reply yes or no or give a short answer. Last, Include a telephone number to the signature of the email. This will give the recipient the chance to telephone if necessary.
Bto: [email protected]: good information
Hi Tom, I got a good information about new market. Please contact with me.Kazuki KuroiwaUniversity of Aizu student012-345-678
C When I wrote email, I took some mistakes. And I sent email without checking for mistakes.
D Business email is more formal than personal email. For example, I can't use any emoticons. Also I mustn't leave subject line blank. And it is necessary to include a telephone number to the signature of the email. In personal email, these things aren't needed.
TO: [email protected]: [email protected]: April 27th Wednesday,2010SUBJECT: Our Business
Dear Brine
Hello,
I write about Business Email so I answer five question.
A : I think Business e-mail is very clear and simple so it is very easy to use Business e-mail.
B : In the future, we will work at the company. Probably, we use the Business e-mail so we must know how to write it. If we know it, it benefits ourselves.
C : I made a plan to make a recycle shop with the class of last week. Then, I though a lot of plans. First, I make a stock to collect funds and am bought by various people. Second, I build a company and gather workers. Finally, If there is the garbage which is usable to various people, they have you hand it over and processes it and makes an article with themselves and I call in a visitor with advertisements.
D: I show the working conditions that are advantageous to a worker and find an abundant worker.
E : I want precise advice because there is not knowledge about management at all.
Thank you for listening my opinion.
2.MEMORANDUM
TO: [email protected]: [email protected]: April 27th Wednesday, 2010SUBJECT: Our Business
A. Our company is recycle shop company. Our business will be in Aizu Wakamatu.
B. Recently, there are a lot of garbage all over the world and many Environmental problems has happened. Our mission is to reduce a lot of garbage for the earth by recycle.
C. Our goal is many customers will use our company and a lot of garbage will be reduced. Then we want to solve many Environmental problems.
D. For our business, customers are very important. Because we can't goal achievement without it.
E. We will treat everything that need to recycle especially electric appliance. Recently, there are many electric garbage in the world so I think recycling electric appliance is important for our business.
F. When starting our business, our business will may not be major business. But for our life, recycle is very useful and we believe many people will aware importance of our business.
G. After Riemann shock, business condition in the world was too bad. But it is chance for our to success our business. Many people will save money and pay more attention to our business.
A.1.＜まるみや＞It is where in Tokyo, but they buy it and go for discarded things.Moreover, they buy the old articles such as the early period of Edo era,Meiji era,Taisho era, Showa era.
2.＜APARU＞They sell clothes, a new article, an accessory at a bargain price in the recycling center of suit Maine and sell the clothes of the American direct import.
3.＜Book off＞They buy a book and the magazine which have finished reading and sell it to a visitor.
B.1.I choose them because they are famous shop.2.I choose them because sales are good.3.I choose them because I like them.4.I choose them because I think the device of the shop is good.5.I choose them because there is a person working with a smile.
C.I use them because they have good how to set articles forming a line in the store, I think it to hurt for reference.
D.Our company processes a recycled product and sells and we take the questionnaire and obtain a necessary article by every method.
2. CONTENT ORGANIZER -
A: We write a map. Also, we write some information about our shop. For reading easily, we use many colors and emphasize important words.
B: In heading, write useful information about goods. Next, we write the paragraphs for example, information of service, branch, new topic and etc. Also we include a map.
C:1. Map of our company.2. Service guide.3. Information of goods.4. Information of our company.5. Information of branch.
D: Because we want many customers to understand about our shop and come to our shop.
3. PLAN DEVELOPER -
Recycle ShopRecycle Shop 00123-456-789
Purpose and History of the Company• We establish recycle shops because garbage all over
the world wants to be used effectively.Prices
• Price of handyBenefits of using your product
• We sell them because it is a recycling commodity, the profit are more than usual commodities.
Contact Details and Office Location• There are a lot of parking lots and the building is
wide. It is near from the station.Outline
• It uses, the garbage thrown away is processed, and a new commodity is made. Those commodities are offered to the customer by a better price. In addition, to match it to customer's needs, it sends out questionnaires from the customer several times on the moon.
Parking lot• 100 parking space is secured for each floor. There
are 300 in total because this shop exists to the third floor. Parking fees become free if shopping for 1000 yen or more.
Events
• The event is held on the weekend every week. A
famous entertainer is concretely invited, and the guest is attracted. Moreover, it uses it as the mini live opening the doors.
• Fireworks are held in the rooftop on August 1 and a live countdown is held on the New Year's Eve on the Christmas party and December 31 on December 24.
Map of office
Address: University of Aizu, Ikkimachi, Aizuwakamatsu-city, Fukusshima
1. INFORMATION RESEARCHER-
A1.Recycle MartMainly on high-quality import furniture, furniture, brand-name product, household appliance, tableware, miscellaneous goods, musical instrument, figure skating, and USED. Moreover, they treat clean articles.
2.Reproduction StudioThey buy discarded things and help moving. Moreover, they perform the periodical service such as the house cleaning.
3.Buying Up MarketNot only the recycling product but also the selling thing buys anything.
B1.We have security to the household appliance article for three months, and the brand-name product publishes a sale certificate.
2.When you sold an article, you feel the point of the reward card.
3.We buy a business trip with one telephone and give a service.
4.We do the help of the moving not only I buy discarded things.
5.The thing which seems to sell buys anything.
CRelief,Profit,Feelings.
DIt puts an important point in offering advantageous service and a pure article to be common with the shop which we think about.
2. CONTENT ORGANIZER-
AWe write business content by the end of this week and write a business place, the business date and time in next week. We write the news about a concrete event in the week after next.
BRecycle Shop Aizu.
C1.Service contents.
2.To offer safe articles.
3.The event that is performed once a week.
4.The abundant assortment of goods that affected the needs of the visitor.
5.Price.
DBecause We make the pamphlet which We easy to watch and a visitor seems to be plain and wants We have a shop come in peace and to do satisfactory shopping.
3. PLAN DEVELOPER
Recycle Shop “MASSYU”
Aizu Wakamatsu
0120-456-789
Masahiro OkazakiKazuki KuroiwaTakumi Inoue
Environment friendly commodity
Submitted to Wednesday, 9 June 2010
(Executive Summary 1) A. Recycle Shop “MASSYU”
B. Be useful for people by the effective use of a lot of garbage that exists in our circumferences. It is a goal if useless garbage is lost.
C. The stock is issued because the slathers of money and the worker are necessary to put the plan into reality and various people buy it.
D. It comes to cooperate also for other people to decrease garbage if the effort that we decrease garbage is done.
(Executive Summary 2) A. There are two businesses. First, I think Company. Second, I think Non-profit-making activist organization too. Moreover, there are two legals. First, I think Property right. Second, I think Copyright too.
B. About 10 billion yen. To manage the shop, this money is spent.
C. The outline of the budget is building expense, a labor cost, a running cost, and a the cost of materials.
D. It tries to decrease garbage to the point where money is spent. The consumer will make the effort to decrease garbage.
(Description of the Business ) 1. Company. Stocks are collected and a lot of purchase capitals are collected.
2. The commodity not only is bought and sold but also the event at a rate of one during the week is held. The guest enjoys it.
3. Because the commodity not only is bought but also it makes efforts to the reduction of garbage only. Environment friendly business.
(Industry Analysis) 1. Is it a fad? Ans: Yes. The earth where we live is annoyed about the problem of garbage now.
2. Is it seasonal? Ans: Yes. The event held by the season is different.
3. Is it increasing or decreasing? Ans: Yes. The number of thrift shops keeps increasing every year.
4. Does it simply grow with the population? Ans: Yes. The number also of those who come to the shop increases when gaining population.
5. Is the market always there, always the same? Ans: No. Every week, the event that holds the sold commodity is also different.
6. What are the factors affecting the growth of the market, and of market share? Ans: People are attending to to the recycling commodity. I think that I will exert the influence in addition in the future.
7. Where are they located? Ans: Aizu wakamatsu. It is Rich green place.
8. How large is the market? Ans: In half Tokyo Dome. Size of entering of about 1 or 20,000 people.
9. What are their characteristics? Ans: Fashionable shop matched to young person's needs. Design matched to fashion.
10. What percentage of that market is the business' share? Ans: About 10 percent. It will increase in the future.
11. Who are the potential customers for the business' product or service? Ans: All visitor people are.
(Vision Statement) It grows up to the shop of 2 and three stores in each administrative divisions. It is paid attention as an earth friendly shop.
(Vision Trigger) Slogan “ It is an easy shop in the environment often cheap every day. “
(Mission Statement) We decrease useless garbage, and clean the town where we live. Because the earth as of now is threatened.
(Business Objectives)
It is general to do the service suitable for the business to gain. Therefore, each business is different.
(Marketing) Product: There are roughly separately two. One is a commodity recycled by 100 percent. The second is a commodity that processes a new commodity with the guy who recycles.
Price: The cost of the commodity is added to the tax and the profit as well as a general company and it becomes a matched price.
Place: Fukushima prefecture assembly of Aizu Wakamatsu City.
Promotion: 10 billion yen is first prepared, and it allocates it in construction expenses, the the cost of materials, and the cost of the labor cost and the event.
(Competitive Analysis) Our business name is Recycle Shop “MASSYU.” The place is Aizu Wakamatsu. Our shop owner are Masahiro Okazaki, Kazuki Kuroiwa and Takumi Inoue.
The eminence of the weak point of our company is still low though the competitor is selling only the recycled commodity. The event is held to get over the weak point, the celebrity is invited, and it makes oneself better known.
(Legal Structure)
1. Company
2. Masahiro Okazaki, Kazuki Kuroiwa, Takumi Inoue
3. There is no hierarchical relationship in our company, and it is equal.
(Management Expertise) 1. The final academic background is an University of Aizu graduate.
2. It worked for serving and the producing company.
3. 800,000 of basic wage 300,000 and executive allowances 500,000 in total.
4. Recyclable waste that becomes unnecessary by guest and tries to be thrown away.
(Support Personnel)
Offer an easy commodity by an easy price. Offer a commodity satisfying of the guest.
(Introduction to Financial Planning) <Development of Financial Objectives> The garbage thrown away to our circumference is recycled and useless garbage is decreased because it is thought that the environment of the town where we live improves.
<Sources of Information> 1. News of television 2. Class of society 3. News of Yahoo Japan 4. Conversation with friend
<Time Line for Required Filings> Permission is taken in the writer by using the one for the copyright not to contravene a law when men in buckram and the thing are handled when violating it. I think that it is a best bet.
<Accounting System> 1.The account of The Toho Bank is used based on the Tohoku region.
A. The portion of the profits is transferred to customer and lender's accounts asa dividend. As a result, the customer and the lender are kept from trusting.
B. The classification of general business cost is used. The one that the cost andthe tax were added to the profit becomes business cost.
C. The outline of the budget is input to the personal computer, and it summarizesit in the table and the graph.
D. The computer is always using it. I want to be engaged in the business trip mealand the amusement. And, I want to record them in the diary.
E. I knew that the necessity for understanding the system of the bookkeeping for a long time, so it keeps still studying the bookkeeping.
(Summary) An unnecessary recyclable waste is received from general people. It is made to recycle by cleaning those commodities, and it is sold to the guest to process it
to a new commodity. The event is held during the week at a rate of one so that the guest should not become tedious feelings.
(Supporting Documentation) <Resume> We are always deepening the exchange with people in the town through the festival. The volunteer work that can participate participates all. In addition, it makes an effort like improving the communications ability by doing the byte.
<Letter of Intent> To receive various articles from your country, we satisfy your demand.
<Letter of Recommendation> 1. It is recruitment of the part-time job. Is the salary about 2000 yen and time 14 o'clock of Thursday?Until 15:30. the place It is Nishiaizu Mishima (For one hour in one way). Clothes are clothes that may be dirty.
2. It is recruitment of the party. The budget is within 3000 yen starting around Wakamatsu Station from about 19 o'clock.
<Special Awards, Achievements> When I was a high school student, I am the director of the track & field team.
<Newspaper and Magazine Clippings> The local revitalization conference is held on the college premises.
<Additional Relevant Information Supporting Your Business> The building lease is about 10 billion yen and cost accounting is a pull of the profit from the fixed price. The partnership unites with people in the region around Okazaki, Kuroiwa, and Inoue and is served at the end.
1A1.Recycle MartMainly on high-quality import furniture, furniture, brand-name product, household appliance, tableware, miscellaneous goods, musical instrument, figure skating and USED. Moreover, they treat clean articles.
2.Reproduction StudioThey buy discarded things and help moving. Moreover, they perform the periodical service such as the house cleaning.
3.Buying Up MarketNot only the recycling product but also the selling thing buys anything.
BWe take over recyclable waste local inhabitants are not necessary, and to throw away. Furthermore, I finish it a good article by processing it.
C1.Open for 24 hours
2.Eco friendly articles
3.Cheap articles
4.High quality articles
5.Distribute an advertisement and cancel a commercial
DWe reduce as possible much garbage, and the influence that is good for environment is given. We give priority to a global environment over the profit.
2AWe designed the shop which was kind to both environment and a shop in the world where warming became the problem .
BThe making of shop which is kind to earth's environment
C1.We offer the article to be satisfied with a lot of victors.
2.There are many article to be able to buy at a reasonable price.
3.We sell the article which reused garbage.
4.We sell a safe article.
5.The article which a visitor wants is put in the place that it is easy to look at.
DWhen there was little recyclable waste which We can make good use of, We think about such an idea a lot because a point how process it.
Feasibility Report
A1. We offer the article to be satisfied with a lot of victors.
2. There are many articles to be able to buy at a reasonable price.
3. We sell the article which reused garbage.
4. We sell a safe article.
5. The article which a visitor wants is put in the place that it is easy to look at.
BWe take over recyclable waste local inhabitants are not necessary, and to throw away. Furthermore, I finish it to a good article by processing it.
C1. Is not the light of the building too bright?
2. Does not the noise sound?
3. Do we do not have to worry sunlight to be disturbed?
Da. Open for 24 hours.
b. It is a one coin mainly.
c. Our shops.
d. We distribute an advertisement and cancel a commercial.
1We designed the shop which was kind to both environment and a shop in the world where warming became the problem.
2We collect recyclable waste positively to lose useless garbage.
31) Eco friendly articles.
2) Cheap articles.
3) High quality articles.
4We reduce as possible much garbage, and the influence that is good for environment is given. We give priority to a global environment over the profit.
5We can reduce a certain garbage for the purpose of first and can hold down the price, too.
6When there was little recyclable waste which We can make good use of, We think about such an idea a lot because We become a point how We process it.
1A<First sample> Not only the recycling product but also the selling thing buys anything.
<Second sample>They buy discarded things and help moving. Moreover, they perform the periodical service such as the house cleaning.
<Third sample>Mainly on high-quality import furniture, furniture, brand-name product, household appliance, tableware, miscellaneous goods, musical instrument, figure skating, and USED. Moreover, they treat clean articles.
B1.The thing which seems to sell buys anything.
2.When you sold an article, you feel the point of the reward card.
3.We buy a business trip with one telephone and give a service.
4.We do the help of the moving not only I buy discarded things.
5.We have security to the household appliance article for three months, and the brand-name product publishes a sale certificate.
CAt first the general visitor watches the design of the article. We decide whether We buy it to see performance and a price next.
DWe reduce as possible much garbage, and the influence that is good for environment is given. We give environment over the profit.
2AWe write business content by the end of this week and write a business place, the business date and time in next week. We write the news about a concrete event in the week after next.
BThe making of shop where are satisfied with all the visitor.
C1.Safe articles.2.Reduce a lot of garbage.3.Peace of the earth .4.A simple price.5.Recycle.
DWe make the pamphlet which We easy to watch and a visitor seems to be plain and wants We have a shop come in peace and to do satisfactory shopping.
Instructional guide
A. A brief overview of the company and its products.
The company which handles a recycling product mainly. We do reuse or processing and sell an article local people are not necessary, and to throw away.
B. How is one of the products created or used?
We company takes over garbage to take out as recyclable waste and We reuse it newly and originally process it.
C. How does a person (customer or employee) decide what to do (what to make or what to buy)?
At first the general visitor watches the design of the article. We decide whether We buy it to see performance and a price next.
D. How are the products packaged?
We wrap articles in paper money and put them in vinyl and hand them to a visitor.
E. Is there a training program to teach employees or customers about the product? (How to use it or how to make it?)
Yes. They have an employee act according to the manual of we company.
F. Is there any extra support available for employees or customers if they need it? For example, is there a help line? Is there a FAQ (frequently asked questions)? Is your guide multi-lingual?
Yes. Our company's guide is multi-lingual.
G. How can employees or customers contact human sources of help?
We let them give each employee radio and contact them.
Recycle Shop “MASSYU”
Group G
Masahiro OkazakiKazuki Kuroiwa
Takumi Inoue
Organization of the web-brochure
・Web-Brochure explains introduction of our business.– Purpose and History of the Company– Prices– Benefits of using your product– Contact Details and Office Location
・It shows the map of our company
Organization of the business plan
・ Business plan shows about launching our business.– Description of the Business– Industry Analysis– Vision Statement– Vision Trigger– Mission Statement– Business Objectives
・ It explains about management of our company.– Marketing– Competitive Analysis– Legal Structure– Management Expertise– Support Personnel
Importance of The web brochure
・ We have security to the household appliance article for three months, and the brand-name product publishes a sale certificate.
・ When you sold an article, you feel the point of the reward card.
・ We buy a business trip with one telephone and give a service.
・ We do the help of the moving not only We buy discarded things.
・ The things which seems to sell buys anything.
Importance of the business plan
・ We offer the article to be satisfied with a lot of victors.
・ There are many articles to be able to buy at a reasonable price.
・ We sell the article which reused garbage.
・ We sell a lot of safe articles.
・ The article which a visitor wants is put in the place that it is easy to look at.
Logical arrangement of the web brochure
・ Mainly on high-quality import furniture, furniture, brand-name product, household appliance, tableware, miscellaneous goods, musical instrument, figure skating, and used. Moreover, they treat clean articles.
・ They buy discarded things and help moving. Moreover, they perform the periodical service such as the house cleaning.
・ Not only the recycling product but also the selling thing buys anything.
Logical arrangement of the business plan
・ Service contents.
・ Offer safe articles.
・ The event that is performed once a week.
・ The abundant assortment of goods that affected the needs of the visitor.
・ We make the pamphlet which We easy to watch and a visitor seems to be plain and wants We have a shop come in peace and to do satisfactory shopping.
Major headings, questions, key words
・ Major headings– The making of shop which is kind to the earth's
environment– The making of shop where are satisfied with all the
visitor
・ Major questions – What do you do to coexist with nature?– What do you do so that people are interested in
recycling?
・ Major key words– Safe articles– Reduce a lot of garbage– Peace of the earth– A simple price– Recycle
Why are they important?
We have a mission to reduce a lot of garbage in the face of the Earth to. Therefore you must recycle the garbage which you can recycle as much as possible. Furthermore, the article must be a thing satisfying a visitor. So I am cheap and must make an article with the convenience.
Thank you
