extra homework

School life

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morning exercise

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extra homework

Necessary VS Unnecessary

Write the opinion.Write two topic sentences.

I think it is unnecessary. If students can’t do homework carefully, they may fail in the tests. As a result, some of them may even hate study. If they do extra homework too late, they may feel tired and become weak. If students feel tired because of extra homework, students won't do their homework carefully. If students do the homework carefully, they will get higher marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

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I think it is unnecessary. If students can’t do homework carefully, they may fail in the tests. As a result, some of them may even hate study. If they do extra homework too late, they may feel tired and become weak. If students feel tired because of extra homework, students won't do their homework carefully. If students do the homework carefully, they will get higher marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

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I think it is unnecessary. If students can’t do homework carefully, they may fail in the tests. As a result, some of them may even hate study. If they do extra homework too late, they may feel tired and become weak. If students feel tired because of extra homework, students won't do their homework carefully. If students do the homework carefully, they will get higher marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

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I think it is unnecessary. If students can’t do homework carefully, they may fail in the tests. As a result, some of them may even hate study. If they do extra homework too late, they may feel tired and become weak. If students feel tired because of extra homework, students won't do their homework carefully. If students do the homework carefully, they will get higher marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

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Are topic sentences in good order? I think it is unnecessary.

All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

If they do extra homework too late, they may feel tired and become weak. If students feel tired because of extra homework, students won't do their homework carefully.

If students can’t do homework carefully, they may fail in the tests. As a result, some of them may even hate study.

How to write an argumentation well? Show opinions

Give topic sentences

be relevant (和…相关 )

be organized

Organize topic sentences.

How to make topic sentences more believable? I think it is necessary. If we do a lot of extra homework, we will get higher marks. And we will know more knowledge and win prizes in the contests by doing extra homework. All in all, I think doing extra homework is a good idea.

How to make topic sentences more believable? 1. We will get higher marks. 2. I used to be poor at Maths. So I began to do extra homework after school. I studied so hard that I even forgot my meals. After two months' hard work, I got A Grade in Maths.1. We will win the prizes. 2. As an old saying goes:" The early bird gets the worm." My friend Tom used to play a lot. But he is used to doing extra homework now. And not for long, he won the first prize in the English contest.

personal experiencenumbers

sayingsexamples

Is it perfect now? I think it is necessary. doing extra home work can help us get higher marks. I used to be poor at Maths. So I began to do extra homework after school. I studied so hard that I even forgot my meals. After two months' hard work, I got A Grade in Maths. as an old saying goes:" The early bird gets the worm." My friend Tom used to play a lot. But he is used to doing extra homework now. And not for long, he won the first prize in the English contest. All in all, I think doing extra homework is a good idea.

First of all,

What’s more,

1. Show opinions

2. Give topic sentences

be relevant (和…相关 ) be organized be believable ( 可信的 ) be logical ( 逻辑的 )

Add some supporting details.

3. Make conclusions

1. Show opinions

2. Give topic sentences

be relevant (和…相关 ) be organized be believable ( 可信的 ) be logical ( 逻辑的 )

How to make conclusions? 1. Summary All in all, I think it is unnecessary because it does harm to both mental and physical health.2. Saying As an old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. It is unnecessary for us to do extra homework.

How to make conclusions? 3. Encouragement Although our school life is busy, we can still learn a lot through extra homework. So I think it is a good idea.4. Wish. I think doing extra homework is helpful to our study. I hope more students will try their best to overcome the difficulties and achieve success in the end.Add conclusions.

My opinion on extra homework Nowadays, students hold different ideas about whether it is good idea to do extra homework. Some of them think it is necessary because it is good for their study. Through doing extra homework, they can learn more knowledge and skills so that they can do well in the tests and win prizes in the contests. Others think the opposite. Doing extra homework will make students feel tired and stressful. As a result, they can’t pay attention to the teachers. What’s more, if they spend too much time doing extra homework, their eyes will get hurt. In my opinion, everything has two sides. We should face it in a positive way and never give up.

Make comments (评论 )

contents( 内容分 )

Show opinionsGive topic sentencesMake the conclusion

Structures( 结构分 )

Topic sentences are relevant to the opinion.Topic sentences are well organized.Add details to topic sentencesUse transitional words

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Summary1. How to write an argumentation

2. Parents ask us to do extra homework.

Some of you think it is ... But others think the opposite ...

In my opinion, ,,

Have a critical thinking

Be positive towards life

AssignmentSituation: Nowadays, students are asked to have lessons on Saturdays. Is it necessary to do that? Show your opinions and give your reasons.

How to write an argumentation

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Huixian Milton

Types

All the advantages1

All the disadvantages2

Both advantages and disadvantages

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All the advantagesopinion

Topic sentence Supporting sentence

It is a good idea ..

It is good for our study.

We can get higher marks in the tests.We can get prizes in the contests

All the advantages As Grade Nine students, we have plenty of homework to do. And parents ask us to extra homework so that we may get higher marks in the tests. I think it is a good idea to do that. There are several reasons. First of all, it is good for our study. Doing extra homework can help us improve our skills and enable us to have higher marks in the tests. What's more, it is good for our future. If we do extra homework, we can learn what others can't learn in class. And we may get prizes in the contests, which is extremely helpful to the entrance exam. All in all, I think it is important for us to do extra homework.

All the disadvantagesopinion

Topic sentence Supporting sentence

It is a bad idea ...

It is bad for our health.

If we spend too much time on it, our eyes will get hurt.If we don’t have to time to form habits, we will feel so stressful that we may even hate going to school.

It is bad for our study.

If we stay up late to do extra homework, we will be so tired that we won’t pay attention to the teachers next day.

All the disadvantages Nowadays, besides homework designed by the teachers, more and more parents buy reference books and ask their children to do extra homework. I think it is unnecessary for students to do that. There are seveal reasons. First of all, it’s bad for study. If we spend too much time on extra homework, we will feel too tired to pay attention to the lessons next day. What’s more, doing extra homework is bad for our health. Too much homework will make us feel streesful. As a result, we will become weaker and weaker. All in all, I don’t think it’s a good idea to do extra homework and I hope we will have less homework to do in the near future.

Both advantages and disadvantagesopinion

Topic sentence Supporting sentence

Is it good or bad?

Some people think.. ...

Others think the opposite.. ...

Summary Nowadays, besides homework designed by the teachers, more and more parents buy reference books and ask their children to do extra homework. But is it a good idea to do that? Some people think it is a good idea to do extra homework...

Others think the opposite...

In my opinion, I think every coin has two sides. Although our school life is busy and tiring, we still need to face it in a positive way.

Face it in a positive way!

Every coin has two sides!

Nowadays, more and more parents buy reference books and ask their students to do extra homework. I think it is a bad idea. If students have a lot of homework, they may hate study. If they do homework too late, they may not have enough time to sleep. Students also need time for hobbies and exercise. If students do the homework carefully, they will get high marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

What do you think of this article?

writer’s view?

Nowadays, more and more parents buy reference books and ask their students to do extra homework. I think it is a bad idea. First, if students have a lot of homework, they may hate study. What's more, if they do homework too late, they may not have enough time to sleep and feel tired. Besides, students also need time for hobbies and exercise. Last but not least, if students do the homework carefully, they will get high marks. All in all, I think doing extra homework is not a good idea.

What do you think of this article?

Look and match make the structure logicalTopic sentences Supporting details

It is bad for our mental health.

It is bad for our physical health.

If students have a lot of homework, they may hate study. If they do homework too late, they may not have enough time to sleep and feel tired.

Students may feel stressful.Students may become weaker and weaker.

How to organize your supporting sentences? 1. It is bad for our study. 2. I used to study until eleven p.m.. Next day, I felt so tired that I can't listen carefully to the teachers. As a result, I failed in five tests in just one month.

个人经历和数字

1. It is bad for our health. 2. As an old saying goes:" All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." My friend Tom is an example. He used to stay up late for study. And not for long, he is in hospital now.

他人经历和引用

Think and writeIt is bad for our physical health. It is bad for our mental health

It is bad for our study...

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Summary 评分表先自己 check，然后再总结

Name Name Tick(√)Describing situation &Showing viewTelling reasonsMaking ConclusionsAdverbs of sequence( 顺序词 )

Structures(结构分 ) Topic sentences &Supporting SentencesSpelling mistakes

The more clearly you think, the better composition you will write.Rainbow comes after a storm.

AssignmentSituation: Nowadays, students are asked to have lessons on Saturdays. Is it necessary to do that? Show your opinions and give your reasons.

Discuss and match

Topic sentences Supporting details

It is bad for our mental health.

It is bad for our physical health.

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How can the reasons be organized? We can use the adverbs of sequence (顺序词 ) as following.表顺序： First, Second, Third...表列举 : For example, First of all, On one hand, On the other hand...表并列 : and, or, also, too, as well;表递进 : What’s more, In addition, Besides, More importantly... 表总结 : All in all, In one word, In short

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Extra homework have lessons at weekends

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morning exercise ...

Extra homework(额外的 )

Situation: Nowadays, besides homework designed by the teachers, more and more parents ask their children to do extra homework. Is it necessary to do extra homework? Show your opinions and give your reasons.

Nowadays, besides homework designed by the teachers, more and more parents ask their children to do extra homework.

Describing situation1

Showing opinions & Giving reasons2

Making a conclusion3

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