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Name: Alvin Tung Kwong Choong( BK12110017) Session 1Main Title: The Commercialisation of the Herbal Industry In MalaysiaIndividual Topic: Research and Development (R&D) as a way to commercialise the herbal industry in Malaysia.StageInformation

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Thesis StatementInteresting StatisticsDefinition of herbal / remedies/ products.

One of the main way to enhance commercialisation of herbal products in Malaysias herbal industry is Research and Development (R&D) through biotechnology development, discover of variety of herbal products and improvement of planting and harvesting technologies.

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Question to be answer:

Support:Benefits of herbalsHistorical info of herbals

Where herbal raw materials come from?How potentially herbal products are?Has it been widely used by the people?

Facts, Info, Derivation Of Words

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Question to be answer:

Support:One of the measurement to enhance commercialisation through R&D can be taken is by biotechnology development

How existing biotechnology works?Why it should be improve ?Whats the problems face by herbal industries nowadays?How to enhance or improve?

Interesting facts on biotechnology development.

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Question to be answer:

Support:Another two methods to enhance commercialisation through R&D is to discover and develop a variety of herbal products.

Why it should be variety ?What are the advantages of variety ? How potentially if variety herbal discover?How we can resolve this problem?

Interesting facts on Malaysia too focus on some herbal commercialisation only.

Body Paragraph 3Topic Sentence:

Question to be answer:

Support:Another way to enhance commercialisation through R&D is to improve planting and harvesting technologies.

How existing planting and harvesting technologies work?Why does R&D in planting and harvesting technologies have to be done?What are the recommendation towards this problem?How are planting and harvesting technologies being improved?

Creative idea about the future technologies.

ConclusionSum up main points and recommendations

Final comment:

Repeat problems and solutions in short and simple ways.

What is the future of the herbal industry?Greatly appreciate the growth of herbal industry in Malaysia.