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    ENHANCING MOTIVATION THROUGH WRITING PORTFOLIOS

    A Thesis Presented by

    ANGEL MONSALVE SNCHEZ

    Submitted to the School of Languages of

    Universidad de Antioquia, Medelln in fulfillmentof the requirements for the degree of

    MAGISTER EN ENSEANZA Y APRENDIZAJE DE LENGUAS EXTRANJERAS

    February 2014

    Masters in Foreign Language Teaching and Learning

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    Copyright by ANGEL MONSALVE SNCHEZ 2014

    All Rights reserved

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    ENHANCING MOTIVATION THROUGH WRITING PORTFOLIOS

    A Thesis Presented by

    ANGEL MONSALVE SNCHEZ

    Approved as to style and content by:

    ____________________________________, Chair

    ___________________________________

    , Committee Member

    ___________________________________, Committee Member

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    John Jairo Giraldo, School Director

    Escuela de Idiomas

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    ACKNOWLEDGMENTS

    I would like to thank all my professors and peers from the Masters in Foreign

    Language Teaching and Learning at Universidad de Antioquia for enlightening this

    study with their views and constructive comments. Special thanks to the Director of the

    program, Dr. Doris Correa for her commitment and guidance, and to my advisors,

    Professors Adriana Gonzlez and Jaime Usma for patiently reading and rereading my

    countless attempts, and for helping me understand that uncertainty is a crucial condition

    for the teacher-researchers life. I am indebted to participants at Centro Colombo

    Americano for their devotion and enthusiasm, and to the academic department for their

    support.

    I owe my deepest gratitude to my mom and my family for their love and

    understanding, and for showing me the meaning of honesty, perseverance, and

    solidarity. And to Claudia who always encouraged me to keep going, even when the

    path led me to dead-end tunnels.

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    ENHANCING MOTIVATION THROUGH WRITING PORTFOLIOS

    February 2014

    ANGEL MONSALVE SNCHEZ, UNIVERSIDAD DE ANTIOQUIA MEDELLIN,

    COLOMBIA

    Directed by: Professor Jaime Usma Wilches

    ABSTRACT

    Writing portfolios have been used mainly as tools to improve writing skills

    and/or forms of alternative assessment. However, little attention has been directed to

    other possibilities offered by this multipurpose teaching-learning strategy. The present

    paper reports a small scale research done in a private institution in the city of Medelln,

    Colombia with a class of 15 EFL teenage students. The results of this case study reveal

    the significant contribution of a writing portfolio to enhance studentsmotivation

    toward English learning, as well as the knowledge gained about contents and how

    learners came to reflection on themes and self-reflection on their own learning process.

    Key words: writing portfolios, motivation, learning, reflection

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    Table of Contents

    Introduction ....................................................................................................................... 1

    Conceptual Framework ..................................................................................................... 3

    Motivation In EFL ............................................................................................................ 3

    The Socio-Dynamic Perspectives. ................................................................................ 5

    The Motivation-Learning Connection .............................................................................. 6

    Writing Portfolios ............................................................................................................. 7

    Motivation And Writingportfolios .................................................................................... 8

    Setting ............................................................................................................................... 9

    Method ............................................................................................................................ 10

    Data Collection ............................................................................................................... 12

    Data Analysis .................................................................................................................. 13

    Findings .......................................................................................................................... 14

    The Writing Portfolio To Arise Students Motivation.................................................... 15

    The Writing Portfolio To Improve Students Writing Skills .......................................... 19

    Learning The Language. ............................................................................................. 19

    Learning About The Writing Process. ........................................................................ 25

    Learning About Content. ............................................................................................ 27

    Discussion ....................................................................................................................... 30

    Writing Portfolios: Much More Than Alternative Assessment And Writing ................. 30

    Motivation And Learning Integrated In A Virtuous Circle ............................................ 32

    Conclusions ..................................................................................................................... 34

    References ....................................................................................................................... 37

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    Table of Figures

    Figure 1. Countries and Food. First Draft. Juliana and Natalia, April 28, 2011. 22

    Figure 2.Countries and Food. Third Draft. Juliana and Natalia, May 5, 2011. 22

    Figure 3.Natural Wonders. Second Draft. Natalia, May 14, 2011. 24

    Figure 4.Natural Wonders. Final Draft. Natalia, June 7, 2011. 24

    Figure 5.Natural Wonders. Final Vesion. Felipe, June 7, 2011 29

    Figure 6.The Virtuous Circle that Integrates Motivation and Learning. 33

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    Introduction

    Motivation is an internal impulse that activates diverse mechanisms which make

    possible the execution of specific actions. In social psychology, Ryan and Deci (2000)

    define motivation as the driving force that moves individuals to do something. Such a

    force depends on multiple internal, external, and social factors which can change over

    time, making the levels of motivation variable (see e. g. Drnyei, 2005).

    In the education and research fields, motivation is a broad term that gathers

    diverse approaches and views. Dornyei, (1998) states, Although motivation is a term

    frequently used in both educational and research contexts, it is rather surprising how

    little agreement there is in the literature with regard to the exact meaning of the

    concept (p. 117). In education, motivation is an essential component influenced by

    cognitive, emotional, and volitional factors conducive to learning (Huitt, 2011).

    Whereas in research, motivation in English as a foreign language (EFL) has been

    nourished by several views over the last fifty years and such views have undergone

    significant transformations (Drnyei & Ushioda, 2010).

    In order to foster students motivation, one of the strategies that best suits such a

    purpose is the writing portfolio, which is framed in project work and accounts for

    classroom work over a period of time. Writing portfolios (WP) have been broadly

    defined by Paulson and Paulson (1991) as intentional collections of students writings

    that display effort investment, improvement, attainment, and reflection on different

    matters.

    Most of the research and literature on WP in EFL is centered on assessment and

    writing skills (e. g. Aydin, 2010; Genesee & Upshur, 1996; and Nunes, 2004),

    disregarding other possibilities offered by these multifaceted teaching and learning

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    tools. Nonetheless, a few studies have established a connection between WP and

    motivation (e. g. Binder & Lopez-Nerney, 2003; Lam & Lee, 2010; Tran, 2007). They

    agreed on stating that WP can be an effective strategy to enhance students motivation

    toward English learning and use, since students assume it as a challenging task that

    requires effort but leads them to improve their language knowledge and performance,

    which boosts their interest, motivation, and engagement. A review of the most

    influential journals in Colombia confirms that no study has established a clear

    connection between these two research fields. Instead, studies on writing portfolios in

    Colombia have centered exclusively on assessment and/or development of writing skills

    (Torres, 2009; Vifara & Lpez, 2011).

    The present study attempts to fill this gap by analyzing how a writing portfolio

    contributed to raise and maintain students motivation to learn English in an EFL course

    adopting a socio-dynamic perspective (Drnyei & Ushioda, 2010).This paper describes

    a small scale study of how a group of EFL students reacted to the elaboration of a

    writing portfolio. The concepts that became manifests were: interest, goal setting, effort

    investment, and achievement. The analysis of the data rendered other categories that

    represent the concept of motivation, such as students self-confidence and the feelings

    of competence, effort, enthusiasm, and progress. These elements were crucial to

    improve skills such as research, discussion, reflection, and writing. The study was

    carried out in a private institution with a group of 15 teenagers between the ages of14

    and 16, and displayed how students assumed the writing process with commitment,

    devotion, and interest for learning about language and content. The study revealed the

    feasibility of utilizing reading, research, class discussion, and writing to keep students

    motivated toward English learning based on effort investment and goal achievement, in

    times when most young learners are reticent to write for academic purposes.

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    Furthermore, the data analysis indicated that participants obtained meaningful gains in

    terms of language learning (vocabulary and grammar), content learning (about

    countries, food, and natural wonders), and raised awareness as a consequence of

    reflection (ecological conscience).

    In order to better understand the connection between writing portfolios,

    motivation, and learning this study asks the following research question: How does a

    writing portfolio contribute to enhance students motivation to learn Englishfrom a

    socio-dynamic perspective?

    Conceptual Framework

    Three concepts are presented in this section as theoretical fundamentals to frame

    the study: students motivation, learning, and writing portfolios. In addition, some

    sidelight concepts derived from such fundamentals along with their common bonds are

    analyzed from socio-critical views.

    Motivation in EFL

    In spite of all the research and literature on motivation in education, there is no

    consensus on a unique definition or orientation. On the one hand, this is due to the fact

    that motivation is not a fixed state of mind. On the contrary, it depends on multiple

    variables. On the other hand, this is because motivation is a concept that has undergone

    fundamental shifts over time and diverse perspectives in the field of L2 research. Such

    conceptions have steadily evolved, from Gardners social psychological approach which

    was a linear cause-effect system in the early sixties to the current socio-dynamic

    perspectives, characterized by more complex and holistic views such as individual

    differences and the power of context on them. Ryan and Deci (2000) broadly defined

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    motivation as a force that moves an individual to do something. Later, Drnyei and

    Ushioda (2010) point out three indispensable facts in the term motivation: the choice of

    a particular action or why students decide to embark on a task or action, thepersistence

    with it or why they spend time persevering with its development, and the effort

    expended on it or how hard they work to achieve the goals (p. 4). These authors made

    an overview of the different periods of EFL research on motivation, the paramount

    principles of which are presented here.

    In the early seventies social psychologists Wallace Lambert and Robert Gardner

    studied how several ethnolinguistic communities in Canada learned English as a second

    language as well as the customs, culture, and behavior of those communities (Gardner

    1985). The key concepts of Gardners theory were: the willingness to acquire the

    language due to specific interests to make part of a community, the attitudes towards

    such learning process in order to identify with members of that community, and the

    effort invested to integrate the community by means of learning the language. Gardner

    defined motivation as a combination of effort plus desire to achieve the goal of

    learning the language plus favorable attitudes towards learning the language (p.10).

    The limitations of Gardners theory reside in his linear, cause -effect behaviorist view of

    motivation as well as the overgeneralization made from studies in particular

    communities, and the lack of classroom research.

    After some critiques of the social psychological period by Crookes and Schmidt

    (1991), on the limitation of the motivation concept to the social psychological field and

    the unclear borders between attitude toward L2 culture and motivation, Zoltn Drnyei

    (2005) coined the term cognitive-situated period for the new trend in L2 motivation

    research. This period met two needs: first, it fused L2 motivation research with the

    cognitive revolution; and second, it moved from ethnolinguistic communities to

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    classroom settings. This period introduced four components to motivation in the

    education field: interest, relevance, expectancy, and satisfaction. Interest is closely

    related to enthusiasm and pleasure and, as a concept has prevailed over time.

    Expectancy aims at succeeding in the development of the task; whereas satisfaction is

    directly proportional to the relevance of the task and the learners performance in its

    execution. Critiques of this period are associated to short term periods in the studies and

    the analysis of specific tasks, disregarding the fact that motivation cannot be maintained

    in the same level during long learning processes.

    The process-oriented period emerged in the late1990sgiving preponderance

    to studies undertaken through long periods of time, as a second language acquisition.

    Drnyei and Ott (1998) presented a model of the process of L2 motivation with

    three phases: preactional (wishes and hopes, goals, and intentions); actional

    (subtasks, action control, and appraisal of goals achieved); and postactional

    (evaluation, elaboration of new standards and strategies, and further planning). This

    model, undoubtedly, was more complete albeit still linear in the connection of the

    three phases and thereby behaviorist. In addition, the lack of factors such as the self

    and the context made this period ephemeral, becoming a transition to a more

    complex approach which has been adopted in this study, the socio-dynamic

    perspectives.

    The socio-dynamic perspectives.

    The main contribution of the socio-dynamic perspectives to the field of EFL

    motivation research resides in the analysis of the complexity of the diverse components

    involved in motivational factors and their interrelations. The most relevant attribute is

    the view of motivation from a critical perspective amalgamated with the individual and

    the context. Such factors are crucial in the socio cultural theory. As Drnyei and

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    Ushioda (2010) observe, Linear approaches to motivation cannot do full justice to the

    unique individuality, agency, intentionality and reflexive capacities of human beings as

    they engage in the process of language learning (p. 76). This socio-dynamic approach

    was adopted for this study in the frame of a socio-cultural view of teaching, learning,

    and research which aims at analyzing the interactions of students, the group, the teacher,

    and the task in the classroom.

    The Motivation-Learning Connection

    In these socio-dynamic perspectives, learning is tackled in terms of achievement

    framed in multiple factors that blend the individuals, their backgrounds, goals, and

    intentions with their social world and the context. For these perspectives, high levels of

    motivation often evolve into student learning. Drnyei and Ushioda(2010)suggest

    that,we should view language learning as a sociocultural and sociohistorically situated

    process, rather than as primarily a cognitive psycholinguistic process (p. 71). Such a

    conception of learning necessarily integrates the self and the context with cognitive,

    motivational, and affective agents in the classroom. Moreover, Ushioda (2009) points

    out the importance of designing real tasks for real learners, in real contexts to foster

    social relations in order to view motivation as an organic process that emerges through

    this complex system of interrelations (p. 220).

    There exist two notions of central importance in the motivation-learning relation

    from socio-dynamic perspectives: motivational flow and motivational task processing.

    The first is associated to high interest in tasks that are perceived as challenging but

    doable through engagement; the second entails performance, behaviors, and the active

    and constant participation of learners at doing the activities that the tasks comprise

    (Drnyei & Ushioda, 2010). These key concepts feature the level of involvement that

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    learners can develop doing a task which raises interest due to its authenticity and close

    relation with the real world.

    Writing Portfolios

    Writing portfolios (WP) offer a wide variety of possibilities for student and

    classroom centered teaching and learning. They have been defined by Weigle (2007) as

    a collection of students work that display their effort, improvement, and attainment

    over a period of time. For this study, WP intend to situate learners in a real-life

    circumstance such as writing an article about a natural park, facing linguistic limitationsas writers, in a true setting such as the classroom and their peers. All those components

    raise interest through interrelations among the task, the self, the other, the context, and

    the use of language (Gottlieb, 1995). In consequence, the whole process offers multiple

    options in the teaching and learning process. WP also lead learners to showcase

    genuineness and uniqueness interacting with peers and strengthening social relations,

    become agents of their own intellectual growth, be aware of their virtues and

    shortcomings through self-reflection, and develop critical thinking through the

    evaluation of the issues they are researching and writing about. As Paulson, Paulson,

    and Meyer (1991) point out, portfolios provide the students with the opportunity to

    reflect about learning, about the meaning of contexts, and about themselves as learners.

    Additionally, WP permit both students and teachers to reflect on strengths,

    weaknesses, and the learning process (Paulson & Paulson, 1991). Furthermore, through

    the implementation of WP teachers can determine students abilities, predilections, and

    learning styles as this way of teaching is eminently student-centered (Nunes, 2004).

    This classroom tool has been used from the mid-1980s as a form of alternative

    assessment that accounts for authentic work in the classroom facilitating teaching and

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    learning; according to White (1994, cited in Conrad, 2001), portfolios bring teaching,

    learning, and assessment together as mutually supportive activities, as opposed to the

    artificiality of conventional tests (p. 27). Regarding the academic benefits, Aydin

    (2010) points out that Portfolio keeping in EFL writing is beneficial to the

    improvement of vocabulary and grammar knowledge, reading, research, and writing

    skills (p. 194).

    Other characteristics of WP pertinent to this study highlighted by Hamp-Lyons

    and Condon (2000) include: they are accumulations of students works rather than

    single writings, they allow the student to show and develop different skills, they enable

    the student to participate in selecting the topics, discussing and reflecting about content,

    and evaluating their own and peers works; in addition, the student can see their own

    progress and learning of language and contents. The authors claim that a simple

    collection of students writings does not constitute a real writing portfolio, unless it

    implies reflection. Such foundations of WP have given rise to a task design based on

    process rather than product which enables students interaction, decision making, and

    reflective thinking.

    Motivation and Writing Portfolios

    One tool that epitomizes the characteristics of a sociocultural approach to

    motivation and learning is the writing portfolio. Firstly, because it is carried out mostly

    in a learning environment as a classroom, which relate the self and the context; and

    secondly, because it is an uncommon practice that becomes challenging and demanding

    in terms of language performance, gathering the features of motivational flow and

    motivational task processing aforementioned; which are key factors of the socio-

    dynamic perspective. WP are versatile teaching and learning tools that can serve diverse

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    purposes. The vast majority of research on writing portfolios has been done in the fields

    of assessment and/or development of writing skills (e. g. Aydin, 2010; Nunes, 2004). In

    the field of enhancing motivation few studies have treated such symbiotic relationship

    in the classroom (Binder & Lopez-Nerney, 2003; Lam & Lee, 2010; Tran, 2007). These

    studies share the experience of presenting a challenging task such as a writing portfolio

    to engage students in a demanding process and improve their motivation based on goal

    achievement. In Colombia, Torres (2009) explored the use of writing portfolios and

    self-assessment to promote critical thinking, Ariza (2003) analyzed the possibilities of

    oral portfolios to enhance oral skills, and Vifara and Lpez (2011) examined the

    convenience of using portfolios in the EFL curriculum of three different university

    programs, highlighting the importance of alternative assessment, and autonomous and

    collaborative learning.

    Setting

    This study was conducted in a renowned private English institute with over 60

    years of experience in teaching English as a foreign language (EFL) in Medelln,

    Colombia. This institution offers courses to children, teenagers, and adults. Courses

    comprehend basic, intermediate, and advanced levels. The institutional philosophy

    promotes project work and alternative forms of assessment. Part of those practices are

    commonly represented in portfolio projects that show samples of students works used

    as teaching and learning strategies framed in this untraditional methodology. These

    portfolios often contain story retelling, workshops, progress reports, interviews, reading

    comprehension exercises, journals, brochures, flyers, writing pieces, and videos made

    by students. The duration of each course in the teenagers program is 10 weeks with two

    classes of 90 minutes a week. The whole cycle takes four years to complete.

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    Participants in this study consisted of 15 students (the whole class), all non-

    English speakers in a Basic 6 course, placed in the A2 level according to the Common

    European Framework (2001), and aged between 14 and 16 years old. All the

    participants came from 9thand 10thgrades in private schools of the Metropolitan Area in

    Medelln. Students had low amounts of exposure to English at school (4 hours per week

    on average). Furthermore, in some schools their English instruction was mostly in

    Spanish and, as seen in the previous course (Basic 5) they were weak in writing.

    Students were not familiar with the use of writing portfolios or other strategies

    addressed to writing in English in their schools. At the beginning, most students showed

    anxiety due to frustrating writing experiences from the past, and they manifested that

    undertaking a writing portfolio was beyond their reach. One feature that made the

    research easier, was the fact that there were no meaningful ethnographic differences

    among the students since they were about the same age, came from the same city, and

    belonged to similar socio-economic groups; they even shared tastes regarding hobbies,

    music, food, etc.

    Method

    In order to respond to the research question, a descriptive case study was

    conducted in light of the qualitative paradigm. According to Yin (1984), descriptive

    case studies narrate a set of events in order to show readers how the investigation was

    conducted and how a particular phenomenon is analyzed in depth within a specific

    setting. Likewise, Hitchcock and Hughes (1995) list several features of case studies: a

    detailed description of events important to the case, the analysis of such events, the

    importance of understanding events through participants perceptions, and the active

    involvement of the researcher in the case. In accordance with these principles, the study

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    presents real examples of real people and real situations as a way to scrutinize the

    research process, and how it relates to theory (Cohen, Manion, & Morrison, 2007).

    Prior to beginning the course, students had been informed on the intention of

    doing a research to study the effects of a WP on their motivation to learn English and a

    plan was designed including the techniques to collect the data, its forms and dates; as

    well as the form the WP should be presented to the students. The study was conducted

    once they knew what the task consisted on, the purpose, and the methodology. As the

    course consisted of 16 classes (32 hours) and the class met twice a week, it was

    necessary to make the most of every single class to gather evidence. That means classes

    were planned so that every session was aimed at one specific activity of the WP (e. g.

    present information searched, group discussion, drafting, teacher or peers correction,

    reflection).

    Yet this was the first systematic study on WP done by the teacher, there was a

    previous review of literature and studies on that field. The implementation of the WP

    began on the first class with the presentation of the task to the students. It was clear that

    they did not know what a WP was; most of them had the idea that it embodied a binder

    to keep their papers. Therefore, the teacher explained the task as a process rather than a

    product along with the methodology which consisted of writing two texts; the first with

    three drafts and a final version and the second with two drafts and a final version. Later,

    the students and the teacher explored topics related to the contents of the course and

    opted for countries, food, and natural wonders as writing topics. Accordingly, the first

    homework consisted on choosing a country and searching information on its food.

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    Data Collection

    The process of gathering the data took two months. This study arose from the

    need to contribute to the understanding of WP as a strategy to motivate students to learn

    English, the data gathered reports their reactions throughout the process, as well as the

    teachers reflections based on learners works and comments. The data consisted of: the

    portfolio, evaluation forms, the teachers journal, individual and focus group interviews

    of students. A description of these data is presented below.

    The portfolioconstituted the tangible part of the WP and evidenced howstudents went through the whole process. Two final writings were produced, the first

    supported by three drafts and the second by two drafts. Consequently, the quality of the

    work prevailed over the quantity, but this did not mean the samples did not represent

    meaningful evidence of students commitment and progress (Hewitt, 1994).The first

    writing was on countries and food and the second was on natural wonders of one page

    each, that is, seven pages per student. The first writing was done in groups (six pairs and

    a trio), whereas the second was individual work. Along with the writing portfolio

    students wrote their personal reflections on their writing process (See Appendix 1).

    These reflections contained three questions inquiring about students feelings, reactions,

    and perceptions about the writing process. For every draft, students wrote a personal

    reflection.

    A record of the teachers personal notes was kept in a journal with sixteen

    entries reporting the most relevant aspects of the process. The purpose of the journal

    was for the teacher to reflect on the studentsprogress in the writing process and how

    tasks went, in order to make adjustments or give students additional information or

    guidance. This technique is defined by Freeman (1998) as, Regular accounts of

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    teaching-learning plans that include classroom occurrences and include personal

    philosophies, feelings, reactions, reflections, observations, and explanations (p.93).

    Interviews of students were conducted in order to unveil the perceptions,

    opinions and reactions that the writing portfolio generated in them and the extent to

    what they see it as different from traditional teaching and assessment practices,

    including tests. For that purpose, three students who volunteered were interviewed;

    thissample size, in Creswells words (2005) is adequate, It is typical in qualitative

    research to study a few individuals or a few cases (p. 73). The interviews were

    intended to elicit learners perceptions and feelings toward the writing portfolio as an

    alternative teaching-learning practice. As Kvale claims (1996), interviews Focus on the

    dynamics of interactions between interviewer and interviewee, and a critical attention to

    what is said (p. 20). The interviews were semi-structured and included four general

    questions and eight probe and check questions (See Appendix 2).

    After the individual interviews, a focus group interview was conducted. The

    participants were the whole class (15) as a way to get to know the voices of all students

    and corroborate information from the individual interviews (See Appendix 3). The aim

    of focus group interviews is described by Morgan (1998) as, To gain insight and

    understanding by hearing from people in depth (p.56).

    Data Analysis

    The analysis was tackled using content analysis as a method inherent to case

    study, especially based on Richards (2003) principles of analysis and representation of

    describing, classifying, and connecting themes that enabled to work from data to theory.

    The data collected were analyzed separately and then some common patterns emerged;

    such similarities made possible the triangulation of data, which favored the validity of

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    the study. The analysis emphasizes students reflections throughout the process of

    writing the portfolio as well as their answers in the individual and focus group

    interviews; then, the information was crossed with the teachers reflections from the

    journal in order to obtain more solid and accurate evidence.

    Portfolios were analyzed by comparing the changes and progress from one draft to

    another and to the final version. Even though the focus of this study is not assessment,

    elements such as coherence, cohesion, organization, grammar usage, and the amount

    and quality of vocabulary used were taken into consideration. Students reflections were

    analyzed by grouping views, feelings, reactions, and judgments; establishing common

    patterns which then were compared to reflections from the teachers journal. The

    individual and focus group interviews were conducted in Spanish due to students

    limitations to speak in English, then transcribed, and translated into English by the

    teacher. Later, recurrent themes were extracted and compared to students reflections

    and notes of the teachers journal, to unveil the emerging categories.

    Concerning ethical issues, as participants were teens a communiqu was sent to

    parents informing them of the purpose of the study and how students would participate;

    a consent form was attached and then was signed by all parents. It is worth noting that

    the academic coordinator of the institution granted permission after being informed

    about the research and the data collection process.

    Findings

    This section presents a detailed description of the way the WP contributed to

    enhance student motivation to learn English in an EFL classroom setting. This

    examination generated important data on the way the WP contributed to improve

    students motivation and the gains in learning in terms of language and content. As

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    concluded from the data analysis, and will be expanded in this section, the WP turned

    out to be a good strategy to raise and maintain motivation during the process, as it was a

    challenging assignment which contributed to gain language learning, specifically

    vocabulary and grammar and content learning; as well as the improvement of writing

    skills, in terms of organization and the adoption of a writing method. A brief description

    of the evolution of the task is presented in order to better understand how the WP was

    undertaken in the course.

    The Writing Portfolio to Arise Students Motivation

    From the early stages, students felt motivated due to their participation in the

    selection of topics, pair work, research, and the gains and results that the WP enabled

    them to see. The WP contributed to raise and maintain students motivation mainly

    because they achieved goals and perceived improvement in several skills associated

    with the writing process (e. g. research, discussion, and writing). In short, students

    remained motivated insofar as they saw results.

    The first thing that awakened students motivation was the possibility of

    participating in the selection of the writing topics. This empowerment made them feel

    they were active rather than passive subjects in the development of the task, which

    boosted their self-confidence, as students voices are not often heard when it comes to

    decision making in the classroom. Students active participation in the selection of

    topics and activities, as well as their gains along the process are clear in two passages,

    one of an individual interview and the other of the focus group:

    These articles are our own work, because we chose the topics, we wrote

    the articles and we gave them our personal touch. Its not somethingwe

    took from Google. (Student 2, focus group interview, June 10,2011).

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    We can choose the themes of our interest and also learn vocabulary and

    expressions that may be useful(Interview student 1, June 7, 2011)

    The students views coincide with a teachers journal entry on the students role in the

    selection of the topics and the activities:

    The students and I checked out the contents of the course in the program

    and the textbook in terms of topics, lessons, grammar, vocabulary, and

    tasks. We agreed that for the next class everyone was going to bring

    proposals for the topics and activities to class.(Teachers journal,April 14, 2011)

    Two aspects seem to have favored a good start. First, students felt their opinions counted

    from the beginning of the process. Second, their active participation in crucial decisions,such as the selection of topics made the task more interesting and enjoyable, since it was

    their decision instead of an imposition.

    Once students felt they could participate in decision making, they engaged in the

    task and suggested that they tackled the first writing in pairs adducing it would be easier

    and more comfortable knowing they were not alone. This decision enhanced students

    interest in exploring the possibilities this new challenge offered, allowed team work,

    collaborative learning, and interaction. Working in pairs favored a transition from initial

    self-doubt to subsequent self-confidence, since pupils shared the same fears and

    uncertainties. In this regard a student said:

    This activity seemed to me really fun and involved ourselves and united us

    as classmates .We also learnt more about our classmates.(Interview 2,June 7, 2011)

    In this manner, learners felt more comfortable asking questions that might seem

    silly when they are not the only ones who do not know the answer. This inquiring

    practice became quite common throughout the process, especially in the first writing.

    These gainspotentiated learners communication skills due to interaction with peers and

    the teacher. Concerning the benefits of pair work to raise motivation, one student said:

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    realized they could do it, and then to interest generated by new learning as a product of

    the work done.

    With the pupils hooked on the task and a growing interest in doing better works it

    was clear they had a positive perception of the WP. At the beginning, learners showed

    mixed feelings with regard to undertaking the WP. They were anxious due to frustrating

    writing experiences from the past, and manifested overtly that the dare of tackling a

    writing portfolio was beyond their reach, but the activity was regarded as a challenging

    task that generated expectations. The task raised and maintained learners interest as far

    as they saw gains in knowledge and development of skills. Hence, the anguish produced

    by facing a new academic challenge turned to self-confidence as they realized it was

    feasible. Two entries in the teachers journal describe two moments at the early stage of

    the project, when students were anxious about the writing process.

    It is clear that students are not used to writing in English; some of them

    seem confused about how to start doing their work.(Teachersjournal,

    April 28, 2011).

    Today we began working on the writing portfolio. I am very anxious

    about how it will turn out and how to tackle the work and sort out

    difficulties. However, students attitude and enthusiasm and the endeavor

    to do it made me feel better.(Teachers journal, April 28, 2011)

    On the other hand, a students response in the individual interview reflects how proud

    she felt of the work done by the end of the process:

    I think I have made a great effort; I have done my best to do a good job. I

    have worked hard searching for information, and in my opinion, I did it

    well.(Interview 3, June 7, 2011)

    In this first stage of the implementation of the WP what constituted a source of

    anxiety, fear of failure, and insecurity turned to an engine that propelled learners

    to gain confidence and feel motivated to write good compositions and learn.

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    The Writing Portfolio to Improve Students Writing Skills

    The WP turned out to be a useful tool not only to enhance studentsmotivation

    but also to facilitate their learning. As it is generally known, motivation is a desirable

    element in learning. In this study there were several elements that made motivation and

    learning converge. First, students participated in making decisions, second, pair work

    favored interaction, and third, the task raised their interest since it constituted a

    significant learning experience. Hence, the WP was the vehicle used to achieve gains in

    knowledge about language comparing the drafts, especially in vocabulary increase,

    grammar usage, and organization. Additionally, students learned about the writing

    process itself and about the contents treated. The analysis suggests that these gains in

    knowledge were fueled by the motivation resulting from a constant growth throughout

    the development of the task.

    Learning the language.

    The course 6thof the youth program proposes clear objectives addressed to

    improve the use of the language around two main themes: food and natural wonders.

    Such objectives, by and large, are oriented to enhance the employment of linguistic

    elements and learn vocabulary and expressions related to food, cooking, ingredients,

    and functions of language in a restaurant on the one hand, and knowing about some

    natural wonders and components of the ecosystems on the other. Some of the specific

    achievement indicators proposed by the institution are intended to allow students to:

    understand information and infer the meaning of words from different texts, identify

    specific information from narrative and descriptive texts, write coherent articles that

    describe foods and places from different countries, use connectors and punctuation

    marks appropriately, show understanding of audiovisual texts presented in class,

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    express ideas and opinions about the topics in debates, interviews, and class discussions,

    and make clear presentations about the topics. Nonetheless, since this study is centered

    on the WP the indicators for this specific group were centered on the improvement of

    grammar, increase of vocabulary, and text organization in connection with the

    development of writing skills. Such skills entail research, class discussion, and writing

    coherently with correct use of connectors and punctuation. The analysis of students

    learning in this study will be focused on these specific aspects.

    The first sign of students advancement was perceptible in the increase of

    vocabulary which is recurrent in the students reflections and interviews as shown

    below. In this direction, three students highlighted the improvement of specific

    linguistic elements such as vocabulary and learning on the topics treated.

    I think the vocabulary increases a lot while we knowmore in detail

    about the places and foods we chose.(Interview student 3, June 7,2011)

    In their reflections, students referred to how their vocabulary increased when answering

    to the question: What new elements did you learn, regarding English use?

    Many words we did not know as mussel, coleslaw, and steak; and we

    were aware of what we were translating, so there was learning in depth,

    not only copying the information but translating it into English. That

    made the writing process more difficult but we learnt new words.

    (Students reflectionsform 2, Laura and Estefana, May 3, 2011)

    We improved our drafting and writing as well as the vocabulary that

    increased a lot.(Students reflectionsform 2, Juliana and Natalia,May 3, 2011)

    All students agreed on the vocabulary increase, as a result of the procedure of

    researching, reading, and writing the drafts. They remarked that some words they did not

    know before the course are now a part of their lexicon.

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    The second element students highlighted as a fundamental gain in learning is the

    improvement of grammar usage. The fact that the approach and methods of the institution

    do not regard grammar as the essential factor of the teaching-learning process, but as a

    sidelight component of the language, makes students hardly refer to it as a major gain.

    Instead, they remark the amelioration of the writing works from one draft to another

    through claims such as we learned how to write some sentences. In the reflections of

    the second draft for the first writing, to the question: What new elements did you learn,

    regarding English use? A student answered:

    New words, how to spell them, and how to write some sentences

    (Students reflectionsform 2, Gabriel and Juan, May 3, 2011)

    Whereas in the focus group interview a student was more specific on the development

    of academic skills such as research, grammar, and vocabulary saying that:

    The influence of the writing portfolio was very positive because we not only

    investigated about the topic, but also put our personal touch. We did it, wewrote the articles, our grammatical skills improved, now we have more

    vocabulary; so, it is our work.(Student 1, focus group interview, June10, 2011).

    In this same regard, in the same interview, a student points out the importance of

    acquiring language and content learning and mentions grammar as part of such

    advancements.

    Through the elaboration of the writing portfolio we not only learned

    grammar, but also gained general knowledge.(Student 2, focus groupinterview, June 10, 2011).

    Such gains in English learning became an additional source of motivation as

    students felt they had more tools to express their views and to do writings of higher and

    more consistent quality. The third aspect pertaining to language learning that the data

    revealed was progress in the organization of the writing works, not only in their

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    appearance but also in the structure and use of elements that favor reading and

    comprehension. Below two figures of the first and third draft for the first text on

    countries and food are shown and confirm the advancement of vocabulary, grammar

    usage, and organization.

    Figure 1. Countries and Food. First Draft. Juliana and Natalia, April 28, 2011.

    Figure 2. Countries and Food. Third Draft. Juliana and Natalia, May 5, 2011.

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    In figure one, the first version was a fragmented text, with little or no cohesion

    and with some grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation mistakes. At first sight, it is clear

    that students were not accustomed to writing in English, as they manifested overtly at

    the beginning of the course. Based on two of the achievement indicators of the

    institution, these students made meaningful progress from draft one to three with regard

    to the coherence of the text as well as the appropriation of new vocabulary and

    grammar, including the use of connectors and correct punctuation.

    Concerning figure two, progress in the text organization is noticeable. In this part

    of the process, we can see a more elaborated works in terms of form and content. On the

    one hand, the information was more complete and oriented to the real purpose of the

    topic (countries and food), also the amount of words increased. Writing seems more

    structured, and the use of grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation more refined.

    Betterment can be also seen in the way students distributed the information in

    paragraphs instead of isolated sentences, as in the first draft. A common view was that

    the first draft did not meet the requirements of an article; therefore students made an

    effort to improve the form ideas were presented. In the third evaluation form students

    referred to the evolution of the process. When asked about the differences between the

    second and third draft, students answered:

    The difference is the structure; the writing is different from the second

    draft, it is more interesting to the reader. The connectors used to link

    topics turn the text to a paragraph . (Students reflections form 3,Juliana and Natalia, May 5, 2011)

    We noticed that writing in paragraphs the information looks more

    complete, organized, and easy to understand. We also practiced our

    writing skills.(Studentsreflections form 3, Manuela and Cristian,May 5, 2011)

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    In this same regard, the progress in the writing process becomes clear in the work on

    natural wonders shown in Figures 3 and 4 below. In these samples, we can identify the

    improvement of writing in terms of vocabulary, grammar, and organization.

    Figure 3. Natural Wonders. Second Draft. Natalia, May 14, 2011.

    Figure 4. Natural Wonders. Final Draft. Natalia, June 7, 2011.

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    In the final version, it is clear that there was a lot of improvement. Its structure

    looks like an article that includes a short description of the place, its value as a natural

    and cultural site, and the writers opinion raising awareness of the importance of

    preserving this place. However, some mistakes still remain, for instance: the passage

    that reads, the square where the cross (line 2, second paragraph) is incomplete: it

    lacks an expression as is located; in the expression, an underground churchisis

    perhaps a consequence of summarizing a passage that reads church is; and at the end,

    fallowthe rules is a common mistake caused by students effort to write the word the

    same way they hear or pronounce it. Again, although the mistakes are evident, these

    pieces show the way students improved in how they structured and presented their ideas

    in the written texts according to the course expectations described above.

    To summarize, the analysis of the drafts and the final version clearly shows that

    there was meaningful progress in language learning, especially in terms of grammar

    usage, vocabulary, and text organization. Such evolution, as explained above, was

    favored by the fact that learners realized they could do a better job and therefore

    invested more effort in the next writing.

    Learning about the writing process.

    The WP helped learners become more organized and methodical when writing,

    since it was the first systematic writing exercise in English for all participants. The

    writing process consisted on four steps: first, students researched about the topics

    treated, second, they presented the information and discussed it in class, third, they

    wrote the drafts, and finally, the texts were submitted to peers and the teacher for

    consideration. As manifested by some of the students, before this process, their texts

    were transcripts or improvised attempts without enough elements or arguments. In that

    regard, a student claimed that the process of doing the writing portfolio enhanced her

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    interest in researching the themes and in the writing process itself, making a great effort

    to write a very good piece since she knew all those elements constitute an alternative to

    traditional forms of learning. In this same regard, one entry in the teachers journal

    confirms the progress students made.

    The writing portfolio has awakened my interest, first about doing

    research on the topics, and then, because I know this is a good way to

    learn.(Interview student 3, June 7, 2011)

    I monitored their work and read some texts during the class. I was

    amazed by how much they had improved. At the end of the class, I told

    them I was happy and excited with that change; they handed me theirworks and left the room delighted.(Teachers journal, May 5, 2011)

    Regarding the writing process, the two students who wrote the sample shown

    above highlighted the importance of doing research before starting to write. Therefore,

    the methodology used in the writing process became another source of motivation.

    What the student calls interest in the interview was the initial step toward continuing

    to try in a task that in other circumstances may have caused boredom.

    We sought for more information about Australia and, thanks to this we

    could go into the topics in greater depth to complete the first

    draft.(Students reflectionsform 2, Juliana and Natalia, May 3,2011)

    This quote shows the commitment of learners in the elaboration of the WP. It

    appears that students had realized that students knew that only by investing a great dose

    of effort they would see the results. Thus, the implementation of the writing portfolio

    ended up being a good strategy to raise and maintain students motivation throughout the

    process, since it was a challenging task which contributed to improve their learning and

    skills. When asked about the advantages of the writing portfolio, two students included

    positive aspects regarding order.

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    Thistype of work is more organized and one can see everything that has

    been done over the course.(Student 1, focus group interview, June10, 2011).

    In this sense, student two expanded the concept of order that the folder brings about as

    the tangible part of the writing portfolio:

    With the elaboration of the writing portfolio one can see things in a

    more concrete way; it seems to me a very organized form of doing

    works.(Student 2, focus group interview, June 10, 2011).

    With regard to the betterment of writing skills, students referred to it more in detail

    in the analysis of the WP, especially in their reflections about the process. In the

    individual interviews they used the umbrella term learningto allude to the achievements

    and progress in diverse fields.

    Writing the portfolio boosted me to keep on learning more and more.

    (Interview student 2, June 7, 2011)

    I have made a lot of progress from the beginning of the course and I feel

    I can progress much more as I go on. (Interview student 2, June 7,2011)

    The student repeatedly emphasizes the fact that learning was constant, consistent, and

    progressive as a result of the students engagement, from the beginning to the end of the

    course.

    Learning about content.

    Another important gain concerning learning was the fact that students not only

    improved linguistic aspects, but also learnt about the topics, which also contributed to

    their motivation. The new knowledge obtained, first about some countries, their food

    and culture, and then about natural wonders, constituted a key factor which led students

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    to say they obtained significant learning during the process. Learning became evident

    when students shared their works in oral presentations and talked accurately about some

    facts related to the countries they had studied; facts they had not known before

    undertaking the WP Such learning was a social construction of knowledge, since it was

    mediated by the research and the discussion of the information in class. In the

    reflections about the portfolio, students answered the question: What new learning did

    you get from the research? In the following ways:

    We learnt more about Australia, its places and food. (Students

    reflections form 1, Juliana and Natalia, April 28, 2011)

    We learnt more about the culture and food from some countries.

    (Students reflectionsform 1, Julin, Cristian, and Felipe, April 28,2011)

    The students responses show that in addition to strengthening their writing

    process, the WP offered a form of learning as a social construction. Such a systematic

    writing practice made students go from transcripts to creative writing through a conscious

    analysis of the information. As a result, students attained significant content knowledge

    that goes beyond reading information in a textbook. In short, students writings show they

    utilized the information found on the internet to create their own texts through discussion,

    analysis, and reflection.

    An unexpected and positive side effect derived from content learning and the

    research and discussion practice was reflection. The fact that all students included a final

    reflection on their writings cannot be considered purely incidental. This was a value

    added product which had not been foreseen, but constituted an interesting indicator of

    how students not only learnt, but also took a stand over the implementation of the WP. In

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    fact, students reflection is the most desirable goal a teacher could set when planning the

    task, since it implies meaningful learning and critical and creative thinking.

    In the same manner, the writing process on natural wonders empowered learners

    to develop ecological conscience and sensitivity to protect natural resources. In

    addition, the students highlighted that the process was a source to extend their

    knowledge which enabled them to reflect on social and ecological issues related to the

    themes. A student calls peoples attention on the importance of raising awareness to

    preserve our natural resources through a reflection shown below.

    Figure 5. Natural Wonders. Final Vesion. Felipe, June 7, 2011

    An entry of the teachers journal confirms the relevance of students reflections.

    After doing a reading aloud exercise about how humans are destroying

    the ecosystems of some species we had a discussion where students made

    interesting reflections. Then, I asked them to write it.(Teachersjournal, May 19, 2011)

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    Clearly, as a consequence of the acquisition of knowledge and the development of

    writing skills, mainly research and discussion, students reflected on the topics which

    inspired them to write creatively through a critical analysis of contents. That is, the

    attainment of linguistic elements in addition to new knowledge about natural wonders

    acquired during the development of the task, led students to express their concern about

    the future of those places and call peoples attention on the necessity to take actions to

    preserve those places.

    Discussion

    The discussion of this study is closely related to the research findings and

    focuses on two main issues. First, the connection existing between the WP and

    motivation to learn English has not been sufficiently explored, since the vast majority of

    the studies on WP have been addressed to assessment and/or writing skills. And second,

    the WP proved to be an effective tool to fuse motivation and learning in a virtuous cycle

    that involves interest, goal setting, and effort investment as elements conducive to

    learning.

    Writing Portfolios: Much More Than Alternative Assessment and Writing

    WP constitute useful teaching and learning tools that offer both teachers and

    students opportunities to perform and learn the language and contents while interact in

    the classroom. From the beginning of the study, it became evident that the WP served as

    a strategy that raised and maintained students motivation to learn English. As the

    analysis progressed, the students writings, reflections, and opinions made clear that the

    WP became a helpful tool to learn about the language, the contents, and to reflect on the

    topics treated.

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    However, the research and literature on WP demonstrates that teachers have not

    looked into all the virtues these tools can provide as a motivational ingredient to the

    teaching-learning process. This fact is in part due to the misconception that some

    teachers and teacher trainers have of WP as sources of boredom and tiredness (Aydin,

    2010). On the contrary, WP should be regarded as challenging tasks which induce

    motivation. As Paulson, Paulson, and Meyer (1991) put it, portfolios can promote

    students motivation to learn and facilitate those learning processes. Therefore, it is

    imperative that teachers look into the benefits of WP to motivate their students to do

    research, participate in group work and discussion, and do creative writing exercises.

    As Gottlieb (1995) states, portfolios "serve as a guide for students inmaking choices and

    in demonstrating how they reason, create, strategize, and reflect''(p. 12).

    Likewise, young EFL learners often have difficulties and limitations when doing

    systematic writing exercises since this is not a common practice in the classroom. Most

    writing exercises are not systematic and do not provide them with enough elements to

    do works that showcase creativity and awareness of the topics treated. Conversely, these

    exercises generally aim at error correction and grammar usage improvement. In this

    regard, some studies report progress in grammar and vocabulary as the main gains

    resulting from WP keeping and not as a sidelight aspect of the task (e. g. Genesee &

    Upshur, 1996; Paesani, 2006, cited in Aydin 2010). On the contrary, few attempts are

    addressed to motivate learners to develop communicational skills through writing while

    learning about diverse contents and interacting with the peers and the teacher. In a study

    conducted by Binder and Lpez-Nerney (2003), they concluded that, if students found

    these activities helpful and enjoyable, they would be more motivated to learn and

    become better writers (p. 32).

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    Furthermore, as previously stated in this study, the implementation of WP in

    EFL courses should constitute true learning opportunities which empower students as

    writers through reasoning, judgment, contextualization, and criteria. In their socio-

    dynamic perspectives of motivation Drnyei and Ushioda (2010) introduced the concept

    of motivational task processing that amalgamates motivational factors associated with

    tasks and learning. As it is evident in this study, this concept describes the motivation

    that energizes learners to engage in classroom activities based on permanent appraisal

    and evaluation of results. Therefore, further research that analyzes the interconnections

    of such components is needed.

    Motivation and Learning Integrated in a Virtuous Circle

    The second big issue in this study examines the direct relation motivation-

    learning resulting from the implementation of the WP and how this relation may be

    observed in both directions. The progression in the development of this WP clearly

    showed that the task first awoke students interest, which led them to set goals and then

    invest effort to finally gain learning. Interest has always been an indispensable

    component throughout the different periods of EFL motivation research. Drnyei and

    Ushioda (2010) conceive interest in conjunction with cognitive and affective factors in

    the development of tasks. Thus, tasks become more interesting insofar as they provide

    elements that favor learning and are appealing to learners before and during their

    elaboration. That initial interest leads teachers and students to set goals in terms of

    learning and performance. This notion has its roots in what Williams and Burden (1997,

    cited in Drnyei and Ushioda 2010) called Framework ofL2 motivation and

    comprehends tenets as an appropriate level of challenge, capacity to arouse curiosity,

    intrinsic value of the activity, and students ability to set goals. All of these elements are

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    present in this study. In this particular case, goal setting made students invest a great

    effort to achieve the goals that at first seemed unattainable. Once goals were set it was

    clear that learners realized the task was doable, and so they started to invest effort to

    achieve those goals. Drnyei and Ott (1998) describe this behavioral process as the

    transformation of goals into intention involving wishes and hopes that then lead to

    action and drive learners to the achievement of goals.

    The last part of the virtuous circle entails learning as a consequence of the

    motivation students showed along the process. Learning became visible in the students

    improvement in grammar and vocabulary, along with the writing process itself on the

    one hand; and the knowledge and understanding of the topics they obtained on the

    other. To sum up, this study suggests a clear connection between motivation and

    learning as a result of the implementation of the WP Thus, content learning favored the

    improvement of writing skills and these two gains in turn potentiated students

    motivation to keep on investing effort and do better works. A model that illustrates this

    symbiotic relationship is presented in figure 6.

    Figure 6. The Virtuous Circle that Integrates Motivation and Learning.

    Another issue circumscribed in learning is the reflections students came to as a

    direct consequence of the research and discussions on natural wonders. Writings

    Interest

    Goalsetting

    Effort

    investment

    Learning

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    showcased a deep understanding of the topics associated with natural parks and

    ecosystems. The paragraphs written as conclusions exhort individuals and nations to

    save the planet. The arrival at such a stage was the product of a systematic review of the

    information researched, the understanding and evaluation of that information, and a

    profound analysis through discussion which led students to write the articles with clear

    criteria and a critical eye rather than rewrite what they had read.

    Thus, the intellectual growth learners achieved permitted them to become agents

    of their transformation by taking a stand toward the subject in question. Though Hamp-

    Lyons and Condon (2000) point to reflection as a necessary condition for portfolios,

    most studies on WP do not report significant achievements regarding the

    accomplishment of this goal. Reflection clarifies students awareness of learning

    experiences and denotes not only learning but also the capacity to value, judge, modify,

    and use learning in different contexts and situations. As John Dewey (1933) said, we

    learn more from reflecting on our experience than from experience itself.

    Likewise, the implications of the present study suggest further research in the

    field of WP and the vast array of alternatives they propose to both teachers and students

    in classroom settings, as well as the positive effects they bring about in the motivation

    of learners from a socio-dynamic perspective, which favor the development of teaching-

    learning processes regarding the uniqueness of contexts and individuals.

    Conclusions

    This study revealed that the implementation of the writing portfolio in an EFL

    course was a good strategy to raise and maintain students motivation throughout the

    course. Such a motivation conducted them to learning about the language and contents

    and these gains in turn led them to reflect about the themes studied.

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    Writing portfolios have been underutilized in Colombia. The few attempts to

    implement them as teaching-learning practices have been oriented to promote

    alternative forms of assessment or to develop writing skills. As it is suggested in this

    study, WP can be used for students to obtain knowledge about diverse themes while

    feeling motivated to learn and use English in different forms (e. g. reading, class

    discussion, and writing). In this regard, further research is necessary for teachers to

    know how to make the most of such versatile tools.

    As it has been consistently shown in this study, to be successful, writing

    portfolios must become a collaborative learning experience for teachers and students

    rather than an assignment where roles are defined and separated. For this purpose,

    teachers permanent accompaniment and encouragement of students is a key factor to

    maintain motivation over time. Students, on the other hand, have to show a high degree

    of interest and motivation in the elaboration of the task as progress is not always evident

    in the immediate future. One thing is for certain, learning and other academic results are

    closely related to the levels of motivation shown throughout the process; that is,

    learning is directly related to the levels of motivation.

    As this study was undertaken in a relatively short period of time, an element that

    certainly requires further studies in the same field is the ideal time span in the

    implementation and elaboration of WP. As is generally known, levels of motivation

    vary and are not sustainable for long periods of time. Therefore, the enthusiasm that

    students showed in a 10 week course presented ups and downs and could have depleted

    after some weeks more. On the whole, students assumed the writing process with

    commitment, responsibility, and devotion, in part because it was challenging and

    constituted a new learning experience that tested the development of their skills. In

    addition, as students always had the perception and evidence of their academic growth

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    Apendix 1

    Students reflections on the WP

    Writing 1 (countries and food)

    First draft

    1. What did you do to get the information?

    2. What new learning did you get from the research?

    3. What difficulties did you have to get the information?

    After analyzing and discussing the information in pairs, students wrote the first draft, and

    three more questions were posed:

    1.What new learning did you get during the process of comparing the information and

    writing the first draft?

    2. What difficulties did you face in this activity?

    3. How can this version be improved in the next session?

    Second draft

    1. What improvements and new elements were included in the second

    draft?

    2. What new elements did you learn, regarding content?

    3. What new elements did you learn, regarding English use?

    Third Draft

    1. What differences did you find between the second draft, where the information was

    separated into isolated parts, and this draft with the structure of a paragraph?

    2. What improvements did you include after correcting the mistakes from the second

    draft?

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    Appendix 2

    Individual interview

    1. Qu opinas del portafolio como medio de evaluacin?

    2. Qu beneficios le ves a la elaboracin de este portafolio?

    3. Le ves alguna desventaja? Y Por qu?

    4. Qu diferencias encuentras entre esta prctica evaluativa y otras tradicionales

    tales como quizzes y exmenes?

    5. Cmo crees que el portafolio a influido en tu motivacin?, positiva o

    negativamente?

    6. En cuanto a tu motivacin en la clase, que beneficios le has visto como le ha

    contribuido a tu motivacin?

    7. Qu cambios notas en tu actitud en la clase al desarrollar el proyecto y en

    especial a la elaboracin de este portafolio?

    8. Cmo ha contribuido el portafolio a tu proceso de aprendizaje?

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    Apendix 3

    Focus group interview

    Questions:

    1. Qu opinas del portafolio como medio de evaluacin?

    2. Por qu te pareci bueno?

    3. Te parece que es algo que acumula todo el trabajo que has hecho durante el

    Trimestre?

    4. qu tipo de trabajo hacen para elaborar el portafolio dentro y fuera de clase?

    5. Qu diferencias encuentras entre esta forma de aprender y otras tradicionales

    como quizzes o exmenes?

    6. Cmo crees que el portafolio ha influido en tu motivacin, positiva o

    negativamente?

    7. qu cambios notas en la actitud de clase al resolver el trabajo del proyecto, en

    especial la elaboracin del portafolio?

    8. Cules beneficios le ves al portafolio y porqu?

    9.

    Qu mejoras han visto en su aprendizaje con la realizacin del WP?

    10.Es decir, ustedes recomendaran esta forma de trabajar en clase a sus

    compaeros de colegio?

    11.Por qu creen que se sintieron tan motivados al hacer este tipo de trabajo?