English Writing

Hobbies

By Zhang Sunlian

From Gangzhong Secondary School

Free Talk

• Do you have any hobbies?

• What are they?

• What is your favourite hobby?

• Why?

• Do you have any spare time for them?

• ……

1.How many parts are there in an article?

2.What should we pay attention to before writing?

My hobby• I am a 15-year-old student in Grade 9. Though I

am busy with my study, I would like to spend my spare time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano,reading,surfing the Internet.

• One of my favourite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I was at a very young age. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my writing ability. While reading, I can learn a lot. For example,by reading Lu Xu’s articles, I come back to the old time of China.

• I think reading really affects my life. I hope more and more friends will love reading.

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Introduction （ 2—3 句话）“凤头”

Main body （ 6—8 句话）“猪肚” Conclusion （ 1—2 句话） “豹尾”

{ I have ……

I like ……

{ Your favourite hobby

Why?

{ I think……

I hope……

How many parts are there in the article?

What should we pay attention to ?

My hobby• I am a 15-year-old student in Grade 9. Though I

am busy with my study, I would like to spend my spare time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, reading,surfing the Internet.

• One of my favourite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I was at a very young age. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my writing ability. While reading, I can learn a lot. For example,by reading Lu Xu’s articles, I come back to the old time of China.

• I think reading really affects my life. I hope more and more friends will love reading.

主题

My hobby• I am a 15-year-old student in Grade 9. Though I

am busy with my study, I would like to spend my spare time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, reading,surfing the Internet.

• One of my favourite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I was at a very young age. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my writing ability. While reading, I can learn a lot. For example,by reading Lu Xu’s articles, I come back to the old time of China.

• I think reading really affects my life. I hope more and more friends will love reading.

人称

My hobby• I am a 15-year-old student in Grade 9. Though I

am busy with my study, I would like to spend my spare time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, reading,surfing the Internet.

• One of my favourite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I was at a very young age. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my writing ability. While reading, I can learn a lot. For example,by reading Lu Xu’s articles, I come back to the old time of China.

• I think reading really affects my life. I hope more and more friends will love reading.

时态以一般现在时为主

My hobby• I am a 15-year-old student in Grade 9. Though I

am busy with my study, I would like to spend my spare time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, reading,surfing the Internet.

• One of my favourite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I was at a very young age. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my writing ability. While reading, I can learn a lot. For example,by reading Lu Xu’s articles, I come back to the old time of China.

• I think reading really affects my life. I hope more and more friends will love reading. 字数

90 词左右

抄

组集

连

列审

作文

5. 组段成篇，加主题句

1. 审清题意， 构建框架

3. 连词成句， 变换句式

2. 抓住要点， 列关键词

4. 集句成段，添连接词

6. 抄写规范，避免错误

如何写作

Let’s practice!

Hobbies and studies• 我有许多爱好，喜爱足球、唱歌和购物 .

• 目前旅游是我最喜欢的爱好 , 因为我想更多的了解世界。但是，每天我有很多家庭作业；要花如此多的时间做家庭作业，以致不能为我的爱好找到时间了；对此我真的感到遗憾；

• 我不想因为家庭作业而放弃全部爱好， 我希望我能在学业与爱好之间获取平衡

社团（ clubs) 在学生的学习生活中扮演着重要角色。社团活动中，同学们可以相互学习，共同提高。假设你是学生会主席 Sam, 请根据下表提示用英语为学校的社团写一封倡议书，简述参加社团的重要性，说明社团活动组织情况，并给参加社团的同学提出建议。

Importance

learn a lot of knowledge;

get rich experience

learn to communicate with others

…

Kind, Time & Place

Science Club, Reading Club, Drawing Club;…

At 4.00 every Friday afternoon;

On the second and third floors of the teaching building.

Advice

take part in the activities

Plan time carefully

…

注意： 1 ）表达中必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；

2 ）词数 90 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

3 ）表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear fellow students,

Clubs play an important role in our school life. In club activities, we can learn a lot from the students with the same hobbies and improve ourselves.____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Sam

评价 : 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1. fluency 流畅 consecution 条理 : (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking word( ) ending ( )

2. Choice of words and sentences:

The number of spelling mistakes ( )

The number of grammar mistakes ( )

Does he write good words or sentence? ( )

3.Others:_____________________________

A (13-15 分 ) : 包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚．

B (10-12 分 ) : 基本包含要点，有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚．

C (7-9 分 ) : 内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意．

D (4-6 分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达．

E (1-3 分 ) : 只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．

　得分： ________ 评价人 :_________

Dear fellow students, Clubs play an important role in the school life. In

club activities ,we can learn a lot from the students with the same hobbies and improve ourselves. If you join the clubs, you can learn a lot of knowledge and get rich experience. It’s good for you to communicate with others. Also, you can make a lot of friends and meet all kinds of people.

There are many kinds of clubs for you to choose from, such as the Science Club, the Reading Club, Drawing Club. Club activities begin at 4.00 every Friday afternoon, on the second and third floors of the teaching building. Finally here is some advice for you . You’d better choose one or two clubs because you don’t have much time for many activities. Also, you ought to take an active part in the activities on time. Besides, it’s necessary for you to plan your time carefully.

I hope you can achieve a balance between study and club activities and feel happy in the clubs.

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