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English ARC Work Sample Joe
Mid Stage 5 English – Persuasive Essay – Grade C
Conveys an understanding of Gothic genre
Describes and narrates. More analysis needed of film techniques
Lack of topic sentence
English ARC Work Sample Joe
Unconvincing attempt to persuade the reader through the listing of textual detail
Recognises the impact of the music but more detail needed about its effect
Grade Commentary
Joe’s response shows a sound understanding of genre and film techniques. It is highly descriptive with some understanding of how cinematic techniques can shape an audience’s response. A stronger structure and more sustained argument would enhance the response.
Joe’s response demonstrates characteristics typically produced by a student performing at a Grade C standard midway through Stage 5.