ELA, Grade 3, Lesson 15 - TN EDU...ELA, Grade 3, Lesson 15 Teacher Packet PBS Lesson Series 1 Let’s Review Close reading & analysis 1 2 Do you think Peter Rabbit will ever go back

ELA, Grade 3, Lesson 15Teacher Packet

PBS Lesson Series

1

Let’s Review

Close reading

& analysis

1 2

Do you think Peter

Rabbit will ever go

back into Mr.

McGregor’s garden?

Assignment

3Generate

& Plan

4Draft & revise

5Edit & publish

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Let’s Review

In the story, The Tale of Peter Rabbit, Peter Rabbit

has an adventure through Mr. McGregor’s garden.

Think about Peter’s adventure and everything that

happened to him throughout the text.

Write an opinion essay to answer this prompt: After

reading The Tale of Peter Rabbit, do you think Peter

Rabbit will ever go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden?

Give three reasons to support your point of view, using

evidence from the text and illustrations.

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Let’s Review

•A concluding statement is the writer’s final

statement and includes their opinion and reasons for their opinion.

What is a concluding statement?

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In this lesson you will learn how to write a concluding statement by reviewing your organizer and

determining how your ideas support your opinion.

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Core LessonIntroduction/Opinion

Reason 1 Reason 3Reason 2

Evidence from text Evidence from text Evidence from text

Concluding Statement

He developed a stomachache after eating lots of vegetables.

Terrible things happenedto Peter while being chasedby Mr. McGregor.

He was very tired when he finally made it home.

• looked for parsley to help his stomach feel better

• Mr. McGregor found him!• chased Peter with a rake, calling

him a thief

In The Tale of Peter Rabbit, Peter’s mom warns him to stay out of McGregor’s garden because his dad was caught there and put into a pie by Mrs. McGregor. Peter does not listen to his mom and goes into the garden. Peter Rabbit will never go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden again.

• lost his shoes in the cabbages and the potatoes

• caught in a gooseberry net, almost trapped in a sieve

• lost his jacket • wet after hiding in a watering can• feeling scared and lost

• flopped down on the floor and went to sleep

• not feeling well• mom put him to bed and gave him a

dose of camomile tea• missed eating a yummy supper of milk,

bread, and blackberries

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Core Lesson

Ask yourself, “What do I want the reader to remember most about my essay?”

1

2 Restate your opinion and your reasons.

3Fill in your graphic organizer with your concluding statement.

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Core Lesson

Peter will not go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden ever again because he came very close to being caught by Mr. McGregor.

Restate opinion

In The Tale of Peter Rabbit, Peter’s mom warns him to stay out of Mr. McGregor’s garden again because his dad was caught there and put into a pie by Mrs. McGregor. Peter does not listen to his mom and goes into the garden. Peter Rabbit will never go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden again.

Introduction/Opinion

What do I want the reader to

remember most about my opinion

essay?

How can I restate my opinion?

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Core Lesson

1. He became sick to his stomach after eating lots of

vegetables.2. Terrible things happened to Peter while being chased

by Mr. McGregor.3. He was very tired when he finally made it home.

I think Peter realized by not listening to his mom and going into Mr. McGregor’s garden, it was not worth the stomachache, being chased, and feeling very tired.

Restate reasons

ReasonsHow can I restate

my reasons to make my opinion strong?

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Core Lesson

Peter will not go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden ever again because he came very close to being caught by Mr. McGregor. I think Peter realized by not listening to his mom and going into Mr. McGregor’s garden, it was not worth the stomachache, being chased, and feeling very tired.


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him a thief









Concluding StatementPeter will not go back into Mr. McGregor’sgarden ever again because he came very close to being caught by Mr. McGregor. I think Peter realized by not listening to his mom and going into Mr. McGregor’s garden, it was not worth the stomachache, being chased, and feeling very tired..

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him a thief









Peter will not go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden ever again because he came veryclose to being caught by Mr. McGregor. I think Peter realized that by not listening tohis mom and going into Mr. McGregor’s garden was not worth the stomachache, being chased, and feeling tired. Slide 15

Let’s Review

Close reading

& analysis

1 2

Do you think Peter

Rabbit will ever go

back into Mr.


Assignment

3Generate

& Plan

4Draft & revise

5Edit & publish

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In this lesson you have learned how to use your completed

graphic organizer to write a draft by turning your ideas into

complete sentences.

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Let’s Review

Opinion Statementfrom organizer

Introduction of the text

Beginning Paragraph In The Tale of Peter Rabbit, Peter’s mom warns him to stay out of McGregor’s garden because his dad was caught there and put into a pie by Mrs. McGregor. Peter does not listen to his mom and goes into the garden. Peter Rabbit will never go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden again.

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Let’s Review

Reason(topic sentence)

Evidence from text(details)

3 MiddleParagraphs

Concluding StatementEndingParagraph

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Core Lesson

Write your first reason in a complete sentence.1

2Write your evidence for that reason incomplete sentences.

3Repeat for your second and third reasons.

Write your concluding statement.4Slide 22

Core Lesson

Reason 1He developed a stomachache after eating lots of vegetables.

Peter became sick to his stomach after eating a lot of Mr. McGregor’s vegetables.

Topic Sentence

1 Write your first reason in a sentence.

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Core Lesson

Evidence from text• looked for parsley to help

his stomach feel better

• Mr. McGregor found him!

• chased Peter with a rake, calling him a thief

2 Write your evidence for that reason in complete sentences.

When he went to go look for parsley to help his stomach feel better, he ended up being found by Mr. McGregor!

Peter became sick to his stomach after eating a lot of Mr. McGregor’s vegetables.

Mr. McGregor was not happy. He got up from planting and began chasing Peter with a rake, calling him a thief.

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Core LessonWhile being chased in the garden

terrible things happened to him. He lost a shoe among the cabbages and the other shoe in the potatoes. Then he was caught in a gooseberry net, got loose and was almost trapped by Mr. McGregor in a sieve. He lost his jacket as he wriggled out of the sieve. Peter then hid in a flower-pot full of water, but he sneezed so loud Mr. McGregor found him and chased him out of the tool-shed. Then Peter was soaking wet, out of breath and scared. He was lost.

Evidence from text• lost his shoes in the cabbages

and the potatoes• caught in a gooseberry net,

almost trapped in a sieve• lost his jacket • wet after hiding in a watering

can• feeling scared and lost

Second Middle Paragraph

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Core Lesson

Evidence from text• flopped down on the floor

and went to sleep • not feeling well• mom put him to bed and

gave him a dose of camomile tea

• missed eating a yummy supper of milk, bread, and blackberries

Third Middle Paragraph

Peter was tired once he finally made it home. He flopped down on the floor and went to sleep. He was not feeling well, so his mom put him to bed and gave him a dose of camomile tea. Then he missed eating a yummy supper with his brothers of milk, bread, and blackberries.

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Core Lesson



Ending Paragraph


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Core LessonIn The Tale of Peter Rabbit, Peter’s mom warns him to stay out of McGregor’s

garden because his dad was caught there and put into a pie by Mrs. McGregor. Peter does not listen to his mom and goes into the garden. Peter Rabbit will never go back into Mr. McGregor’s garden again.

Peter became sick to his stomach after eating a lot of Mr. McGregor’s vegetables. When he went to go look for parsley to help his stomach feel better, he ended up being found by Mr. McGregor! Mr. McGregor was not happy. He got up from planting and began chasing Peter with a rake, calling him a thief.

While being chased in the garden terrible things happened to him. He lost a shoe among the cabbages and the other shoe in the potatoes. Then he was caught in a gooseberry net, got loose and was almost trapped by Mr. McGregor in a sieve. He lost his jacket as he wriggled out of the sieve. Peter then hid in a flower-pot full of water, but he sneezed so loud Mr. McGregor found him and chased him out of the tool-shed. Then Peter was soaking wet, out of breath and scared. He was lost.

Peter was tired once he finally made it home. He flopped down on the floor and went to sleep. He was not feeling well, so his mom put him to bed and gave him a dose of camomile tea. Then he missed eating a yummy supper with his brothers of milk, bread, and blackberries.


Beginning Paragraph

MiddleParagraphs

EndingParagraph

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Core Lesson

Close reading

& analysis

1 2Assignment

3Generate

& Plan

4

Draft & revise

5

Edit & publish

Do you think Peter

Rabbit will ever go

back into Mr.


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Let’s Review

•Linking words and phrases help you connect ideas and sentences, so that people can follow your ideas

What are linking words and phrases?

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Let’s Review

Personal opinion

Linking Words and Phrases

• Next• First of all• After that

Sequencing

• In conclusion• All in all• Consequently

To conclude

• In my opinion• Finally • I believe

Slide 31

Prompt

After reading the Tale of Peter Rabbit, what would Mr. McGregor do if Peter went back to

the garden again?

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ELA, Grade 3, Lesson 15 - TN EDU...ELA, Grade 3, Lesson 15 Teacher Packet PBS Lesson Series 1 Let’s Review Close reading & analysis 1 2 Do you think Peter Rabbit will ever go back