Dear Ms. Denise,

As you already know, 6DH is trying to have a class pet. I would love to have a class pet but I don’t think that we will need it. I think there are many disadvantages but there is are also some advantages, like to keeping our class cheerful.

It Having a class pet can be a good thing. because It will keep our classroom cheerful because it’s cute and joyful. And so it can It could also be fun to help be a good way of helping us be better at doing work which might be VERY BORING. Also it can help us be happy when we are sad because we might think of the pet.

But Another point of view is that it can be bad to have a class pet. It might be bad because if there is a class pet, it will could distract us from doing important work and even the Y6 exhibition. The second reason is because of the finance problems. We will certainly have somebody person to care and buy the pet’s food and playing things toys. even a person to keep the pet for holidays. We will also need somebody to take care of the pet during the holidays. The third problem to consider is who will clean up the mess? Me, us or the maid? Also how would the classroom smell? Lastly, we shouldn’t have a class pet because if it dies it will be a really sad thing to happen.

Possibly There are possible solutions to these problems. Like we can have somebody be responsible for the pet in during holidays and we can have a daily shifting job. Unfortunately, the pet might die and we don’t have a solution for that. However, let’s hope that if we get a class pet we do our best to make it not get keep it from getting stressed out.

I think it is just that we want a pet but I don’t think we need it that much. However, it will be good to have a class pet because we can be happier.

Sincerely,

Dong-kyun SHIN

Thursday 20th January 2011

You have included some good arguments, DK. I will have to consider them when I make my decision.

Good writing. Remember to read your whole piece of writing after you have finished tomake sure everything sounds ok.

Well done.