Dialectical JournalDialectical JournalPeer EditPeer Edit

QUOTESQUOTES• There should be two quotes. If one There should be two quotes. If one

is missing write is missing write MISSING QUOTESMISSING QUOTES

• Missing setup? Missing setup? Write NO SETUPWrite NO SETUP

• Missing line #? Missing line #? Write LINE #??Write LINE #??

• Punctuation leading into the quote?Punctuation leading into the quote? If If incorrect or missing, circle and fix it incorrect or missing, circle and fix it for them. for them.

• Incorrect formatting? Incorrect formatting? Circle and write Circle and write NEED TO FIXNEED TO FIX– ““Suddenly I realize/ That…I would Suddenly I realize/ That…I would

break/ Into blossom” (ll. 22-24).break/ Into blossom” (ll. 22-24).

QUOTESQUOTES

• Does the quote/example Does the quote/example support the topic? If not write support the topic? If not write DOES NOT SUPPORT TOPICDOES NOT SUPPORT TOPIC

• If the setup is weak or the If the setup is weak or the quote could be blended more, quote could be blended more, write write WORK ON SETUPWORK ON SETUP

ANALYSISANALYSIS• Each quote should be followed by Each quote should be followed by

at least two sentences of analysis. at least two sentences of analysis. If not, write If not, write TOO SHORTTOO SHORT

• If the sentence is incomplete or a If the sentence is incomplete or a fragment write fragment write AWKAWK

• if I, me, my, we, us, our or you is if I, me, my, we, us, our or you is used used circle itcircle it

ANALYSISANALYSIS

• Are there key words from the question Are there key words from the question in the analysis? If not write in the analysis? If not write ADD KEY ADD KEY WORDS FROM QUESTIONWORDS FROM QUESTION

• Does the analysis make sense and Does the analysis make sense and explain: explain: 1. 1. How How Wright used imagery?Wright used imagery?

• 2. 2. HowHow that image shows joy? that image shows joy?