DECSRIPTIVE ESSAY ( ideal school )

Thesis statement Parents would be more willing to send their younger children to school if the school meet the needs of being an ideal school for their children.

Topic sentences (P1) School needs to provide a conducive environment for learning and the climate in school should be one that encourages learning.

Topic sentences (P2) School needs dedicated teacher who puts in effort in making learning an enjoyable yet thought-provoking experience and the gap between teachers and students , allowing the teachers to acts as counsellors when problem arise.

Topic sentences (P3) Curriculum taught in ideal school would focus on pupils’ learning rather than the teaching of the teachers.

Topic sentences (P4) Opportunities would be given for individualised learning. Students would be tested in their organisational skills and problem-solving abilities as they learn in the process.

Topic sentences (P5) School should allow students to discover their strengths and minimize their weakness by ensuring the condusiveness, teachers and lessons are all well organised.

DECRIPTIVE ESSAY ( ANNOYING CHARACTERISTICS WHICH IRRITATE YOU)

Thesis statement people doing little things can totally irritate you which is really strange.

Topic sentences (P1) Even telling lies are about significant matters, it is something difficult to tolerate.

Topic sentences (P2) Unhygienic habits that some people insist to display in publics is very annoying.

Topic sentences (P3) People being rough or ill-mannered are also annoying. They are signs of inconsideration when people behave such.

Topic sentences (P4) Telling of tales especially when it is done out of spite is irksome as people discredit other people for their own selfishness.

Topic sentences (P5) This annoying characters causes discomfort and in extreme cases harm towards others but if such behaviours could be corrected surely it would make the world a happier place to live on.

Narrative essay ( occasion- frightened )

Thesis statement The author can still feel the pressure in his head that occasion that has frightened him.

Topic sentences (P1) The author woke up late and he had to rush to school but he was caught by the prefect for not being punctual.

Topic sentences (P2) The author remembered that his last assignment that the teacher gave is still at home untouched and the author is getting scared as will be caught by the teacher.

Topic sentences (P3) The author heard the teacher’s voice loud and clear which feared him more but he told that he have already submitted the assignments.

Topic sentences (P4)

The author feels guilty of telling the lie and felt shame in having deceived a teacher who had faith on him.

Topic sentences (P5) The truth has not been found till today but the assumed relief that the author feel has been displaced by the delibitating fear that one day it would surface.

Narrative essay ( the river )

Thesis statement This particular trip would be quite adventuresome.

Topic sentences (P1) The writer’s plan to go tubing the following day itself was disturbed when they awoke the next morning to the sudden and spontaneous flashes of lightning.

Topic sentences (P2) The writer spend most of the day in that familiar cabin.

Topic sentences (P3) The writer who was about to try and get out of this was reassured by all the others as to the condition of the river and her ability to tame it.

Topic sentences (P4) The writer and the friend drove up the river until they came to they spot where they were to put the tubes into the water.

Topic sentences (P5)

The writer was thrown into the water and helpless because the tube had gotten hung on the rock

Topic sentences ( P6 ) The writer later found out that at the time the event was happening a tornado was tearing down everything in its part less then a mile away.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY ( YOUTHS HAVE MORE PROBLEMS THAN ADULT )

Thesis statement Youths go through adolescence thinking that the world is in their shoulders.

Topic sentences (P1)Youth faces an increasing competitive academic world that cannot be denied as they have endless pressure in facing education level.

Topic sentences (P2)Adults can be in pink of health if they would follow the footsteps of youth and make time to exercise because a person’s health does not deteriorate with age.

Topic sentences (P3) Youths are considered as a childish adults because it is reasoned that adult life is more problematic as youths take onto their challenges of life.

Topic sentences (P4)

Youth lifestyle is tougher than the adults as life shows no remorse for insecure and financially challenged youths who have to prepare for their adulthood.

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY ( books are not more valuable than other art )

Thesis statement Generations lack of reading but instead wasting more time infront of television or computer screen.

Topic sentences (P1) Generation reads very little as the author is curious why books are held in high regard over other media and so much controversy exists.

Topic sentences (P2) Technology is ever advancing and books being part of old establishment.

Topic sentences (P3)

Same goals depending on how skilful the author is at expressing his vision to be attracted to books and film.

Topic sentences (P4)

Imagination can be stimulated by various media in equally fulfilling way but accomplishing this are still different.

COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ( life after death )

Thesis statement Mrs. Caruso’s character underwent dramatic change for the worse after the death of her husband.

Topic sentences (P1) They are a sweet old couple who live next door whom a shy and quiet man who was George Caruso and the wife was full of life where all the neighbourhood children and grandsons live happily.

Topic sentences (P2) When George died suddenly,Mrs Caruso was a different woman.

Topic sentences (P3) Mrs Caruso was very self-sufficient as she behaves that the kids are like a poison who use to help her to clean the backyard to her and not allowing the grandsons to help her.

Topic sentences (P4)Mrs Caruso had grown bitter and old where she just wanted to be alone.

Topic sentences (P5) In the end, Mrs Caruso died all alone and finally the grand daughter finds her.

COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ( birds of a feather? )

Thesis statement My two friends Laurie and Tammy have sharply different dispositions

Topic sentences (P1)

They are similar in which these friends prefers farms than the buzy street and interest in athletics.

Difference between the two friends are much more

Topic sentences (P2) understanding than the likenesses where Laurie is carefree and easygoing with a cheerfulness and her anger passes quickly.

Topic sentences (P3) In contrast, Tammy is much less even-tempered

Topic sentences (P4) The personalities have convinced the author that being birds of feather is not essential in a friendship.

CAUSE AND EFFECT ( starting out right )

Thesis statement The author learned few values while his first job in a Italian restaurant.

Topic sentences (P1) It has taught the author how to be responsibility to handle a job and his duties.

Topic sentences (P2) The job helped the author to learn the value of money as he worked hardly and he is thinking about how to spend it but in the end in shopping mall, they just bought orange Juliuses.

Topic sentences (P3) The author learned relationship with other’s from this job as Frank, the cook in the restaurant that the author works in has helped the author to get back the bike when it was lost.

CAUSE AND EFFECT (on splitting )

Thesis statement Marriages hadn’t meet it as guys leaves wife for another woman and woman leaving husband.

Topic sentences (P1)

The author felt helpless and angry seeing the joy that he had a year back as the feeling they gave was a constructive union.

Topic sentences (P2)

The author didn’t feel angry at his friends personally as he thought it made sense but his anger was when the author

saw abandoned foundations.

Topic sentences (P3) When grandparents married there were no divorced as they learn to live each other and they were stucked than being embarrassed in community.

Topic sentences (P4) Some divorces say that divorce is beneficial, educational and they feel remarrying is no harm.

Topic sentences (P5) Freedom seen as a social progress as modern couples see marriage as nightmares.

Topic sentences (P6) Rapid rise of divorce rate and declining marriage rate represent a loss as marriage people living with another person may change attitudes and patterns.

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