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WRITING EXPOSITORY ESSAYS
Building on the knowledge of paragraph writing presented in the previous units, this is
designed to teach you how to write expository essays, covering such issues as essay
organization, essay outlining, common patterns of essay organization and essay
checklist. If you read carefully and do all of the practices and unit assignmentsthoughtfully, we guarantee that you will find the task of developing an expository essay
much easier and that your writing will improve.
1. ESSAY ORGANIZATION
1.1. An Overview of Essay and Essay Organization
As you have learned previously, a paragraph is a group of sentences about one topic and
has three main structural parts: the topic sentence, supporting sentences (the body), and the
concluding sentence. Similarly, an essay is a group of paragraphs about one topic and also has
three main parts: the introduction, the body, and the conclusion. The following diagram shows
that a paragraph and an essay have the same basic plan.
THE PARAGRAPH
Introductory Paragraph__
THE ESSAY
General Statements
THESIS STATEMENT
TOPIC SENTENCE
Supporting Sentences
(Concluding Sentence)
Topic Sentence
Body
(Supporting Sentences)
Concluding Sentence
__ Body Paragraphs __ _
TOPIC SENTENCE
Supporting Sentences
(Concluding Sentence)
TOPIC SENTENCE
Supporting Sentences
(Concluding Sentence)
Concluding Paragraph___ CONCLUDING SENTENCE(S)
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Final Thoughts
Writing an essay is no more difficult than writing a paragraph, except that an essay is
longer. The methods of organization and thesupporting techniques are the same for both; so you
can apply those methods and techniques you have learned in developing paragraphs into
composing an essay.In this unit, we are concerned with the expository essay, that is, a piece of writing in
which you are presenting information in response to a particular statement / question. The
expository essay is perhaps the most common form of assessment exercise in schools, colleges
and universities with its length varying from 500 to 3,000 words according to the requirements of
each subject.
1.2. The Three Parts of an Essay
As mentioned earlier, an essay consists of three major parts: the introductory paragraph,
the body, and the concluding paragraph.
E.g.: Read the following essay as a model of essay organization.
THE COMPUTER REVOLUTION, PART I
We live in the age of technology. Everyday, new technology appears, ranging from
mini-CDs that contain entire encyclopedias to giant space telescopes that can send
photographs of distant stars back to Earth. Of all the new technological wonders,
personal computers have probably had the greatest influence on the daily lives of
average people. Through computers, we can now talk to people in any country, research
any topic: work, shop, bank, and entertain ourselves. Personal computers have
especially revolutionized communication and business practices in the past twenty
years.
Perhaps the most important effect of personal computers has been to expand our
ability to communicate with the outside world. A lonely invalid in Minnesota can talk
with a similarly house-bound person in Mississippi. Schoolchildren in Manhattan can
talk via computer to schoolchildren in Moscow. A high school student can obtain
statistics for a history paper from a library in London. A single computer user can send
an e-mail message to millions of people all over the world with one keystroke. Computer
users can get together in an on-line chat room to discuss their interests and problems
with others who have similar interests and problems. For example, a person whose
hobby is collecting antique guns can share information with other gun collectors via
computer. A person who is planning a vacation and wants to know the names of the best
beaches in Hawaii can ask others who have already been there for suggestions. People
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even start on-line romances in chat rooms! The possibilities of computerized
communication are indeed unlimited.
Besides improving communication, personal computers have made it possible to
do business from home. You can take care of personal business. For example, you can
buy airline tickets, send flowers to a friend, pay your bills, buy and sell stocks, and even
pay your taxes from your home computer at any time of the day or night. This is a greatconvenience for people who are busy during the day and for physically disabled people
who find it hard to leave their homes. Moreover, telecommuting working at home
instead of going to the office has become a choice for thousands of business people.
Suzanne Carreiro, a financial manager for a large company in downtown Manhattan,
has telecommuted from her home in New Jersey for the past two years. She goes to her
office only once a week. Four days a week, she works at home and communicates with
her staff by computer. She says, I am much more productive when I work at home
because there are no interruptions. I also dont have to spend three hours travelling to
and from the office every day. I save myself time, and I save my company money by
telecommuting.
In brief, the computer age has arrived, and it is changing our lives. Computers
have made communicating and doing business faster and more convenient, and they
have greatly increased our access to information. Just as the invention of automobiles
had an unplanned consequence the growth of suburbs so will the invention of
personal computers. We will have to wait and see what these unintentional consequences
will be.
1.2.1. The Introductory Paragraph
The introductory paragraph is the first paragraph of the essay. It introduces the
topic of the essay and arouses the readers interest.
There are several ways to write an introductory paragraph. In this course, you will
learn to write a funnel introductory paragraph, which consists of two parts: a few general
statements about your subject to attract your readers attention and a thesis statementto state the
specific subdivisions of your topic and/or the plan of your paper.
General statements introduce the topic of the essay, and give the reader
background information on the topic. They should lead your reader gradually from a very
general idea of your topic to a very specific idea. In other words, the first general statement in a
funnel introductory paragraphjust introduces the topic. Like the lens of a camera moving in for
a close-up picture, each subsequent sentence becomes more and more focused on a specific
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topic, and finally leads into the thesis statement. There is no exact rule about the number of
general statements you need; however, you should try to write at least three or four, and they
should be interesting enough to hold the readers attention. It is permissible to sprinkle a few
interesting details in the general statements in order to attract the readers interest. However, you
should not give any details that belong in the body of the essay.
The thesis statement for an essay is just like a topic sentence for a paragraph: itnames the specific topic and the controlling ideas or major subdivisions of the topic that will be
discussed in the body of the essay. Besides, it often indicates the method of organization such as
chronological order, ororder of importance.
The Introductory paragraph has two parts:
1. General Statements
2. A Thesis Statement
General Statements:
1. introduce the topic of the essay.
2. give background information on the topic
The Thesis Statement:
1. states the main topic.
2. lists the subdivisions of the main topic.
3. may indicate the method of organization of the essay.
4. is usually the last sentence in the introductory paragraph.
E.g.: Reread the introductory paragraph in the previous example about
COMPUTER REVOLUTION, PART I.
We live in the age of technology. Everyday, new technology appears, ranging from mini-
CDs that contain entire encyclopedias to giant space telescopes that can
send photographs of distant stars back to Earth. Of all the new
technological wonders, personal computers have probably had
the greatest influence on the daily lives of average people.
Through computers, we can now talk to people in any
country, research any topic: work, shop, bank, and
entertain ourselves.Personal computers have
especially revolutionized communication
and business practices in the past
twenty years.
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Notice how the sentences gradually move from the general topic of technology to the
specific topic of two areas that have been changed by personal computer. This introductory
paragraph is like a funnel: very wide at the top, increasingly narrow in the middle, and very
small at the neck or bottom.
- The first two sentences introduce the general topic of technology. The mini-CDs
and giant telescopes are mentioned to attract the readers interest.- The next two sentences narrow the general topic of technology to the specific
topic of personal computers. The details keep the reader interested without
revealing the essay contents.
- The final sentence is the thesis statement. It names the two subtopics or specific
areas changed by personal computers: communication and business.
1.2.2. The Body
The body of the essay is made up of one or more paragraphs. Each of these
paragraphs supports the thesis statement by developing a sub-division of the topic, so the
number of paragraphs in the body will vary with the number of subdivisions. Besides, in each
of the body paragraphs, there is a topic sentence, supporting sentences and sometimes a
concluding sentence.
The reader should be able to see that there is a logical progression throughout the
body of the essay. A discriminating and economic use of connectives and transition signals
within and between paragraphs can help provide this unity. Your reader should obtain a clear
sense of how your paragraphs relate to one another, and to the subject and thesis of the essay.
E.g. Read the two body paragraphs of the essay COMPUTER REVOLUTION,
PART I. The topic sentence of each paragraph introduces an area that has been changed by
personal computers. Then each topic sentence is followed by several sentences that give specific
examples of the changes.
Thesis statement
Personal computers have especially revolutionized communication and business
practices in the past twenty years.
Perhaps the most important effect of personal computers has been to expand our
ability to communicate with the outside world. A lonely invalid in Minnesota can talk
with a similarly house-bound person in Mississippi. Schoolchildren in Manhattan can
talk via computer to schoolchildren in Moscow. A high school student can obtain
statistics for a history paper from a library in London. A single computer user can send
an e-mail message to millions of people all over the world with one keystroke. Computer
users can get together in an on-line chat room to discuss their interests and problems
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with others who have similar interests and problems. For example, a person whose
hobby is collecting antique guns can share information with other gun collectors via
computer. A person who is planning a vacation and wants to know the names of the best
beaches in Hawaii can ask others who have already been there for suggestions. People
even start on-line romances in chat rooms! The possibilities of computerized
communication are indeed unlimited.Besides improving communication, personal computers have made it possible to
do business from home. You can take care of personal business. For example, you can
buy airline tickets, send flowers to a friend, pay your bills, buy and sell stocks, and even
pay your taxes from your home computer at any time of the day or night. This is a great
convenience for people who are busy during the day and for physically disabled people
who find it hard to leave their homes. Moreover, telecommuting working at home
instead of going to the office has become a choice for thousands of business people.
Suzanne Carreiro, a financial manager for a large company in downtown Manhattan,
has telecommuted from her home in New Jersey for the past two years. She goes to her
office only once a week. Four days a week, she works at home and communicates with
her staff by computer. She says, I am much more productive when I work at home
because there are no interruptions. I also dont have to spend three hours travelling to
and from the office every day. I save myself time, and I save my company money by
telecommuting.
1.2.3. The Concluding Paragraph
The concluding paragraph is the last paragraph of the essay, in which you tell the
reader that you have completed the essay. This is achieved by either writing a summary of the
main points discussed in the body of the essay or by paraphrasing the thesis statement; i.e.,
rewriting the thesis statement in different words. Then you add your final comments on the
subject food for thought. Since this is your last opportunity to make your point, you should
write a strong, effective message that will be remembered.
The concluding paragraph does three things:
It signals the end of the essay.
It summarizes the main points.
It leaves the reader with the writers final thoughts on the subject.
The concluding paragraph consists of:
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the concluding sentences
and the final thoughts
The first part of the concluding paragraph concluding sentences summarizes
the main point or repeats the thesis statement in different words. This may require one or more
than one sentence. The first sentence of a concluding paragraph sometimes, but not always,
begins with a conclusion transition signal such as In brieforIn short. It is not always necessary
to use a conclusion signal, and you should avoid the overused phrases In conclusion and In
summary.
E.g.:
Thesis statement
Personal computers have especially revolutionized communication and business
practices in the past twenty years.
Concluding sentences
In brief, the computer age has arrived, and it is changing our lives. Computers
have made communicating and doing business faster and more convenient, and they have
greatly increased our access to information.
In the second part of the concluding paragraph final thoughts you may write
your final comments on the subject of your essay. This is where you express your opinion, make
a judgement, or give a recommendation. However, do not add any new ideas in the conclusion
because it is the end of your essay. Just comment on what you have already discussed.
E.g.:
Final thoughts
Just as the invention of automobiles had an unplanned consequence the growth of
suburbs so will the invention of personal computers. We will have to wait and see what
these unintentional consequences will be.
2. ESSAY OUTLINING
Outlining is an important step in the writing process because it helps you organize your
ideas, write more quickly and improve your grammar. It is even more important to make an
outline when you are planning an essay because an essay is longer and more complex, and you
have many more ideas and details to organize.
The rules and techniques that you have already learned for paragraph outlining can be
applied to essays. The only additional element is the numbering of each paragraph with Roman
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numerals. For example, in a five-paragraph essay, the introduction is paragraph I; the three
paragraphs of the body are II, III, and IV; and the conclusion is paragraph V.
Previously, you learned how to make simple and detailed outlines for a paragraph. Now
lets expand your knowledge and learn how to make an outline for an essay.
As you remember, a simple outline for a paragraph looks like this.
Topic Sentence (Topic Sentence underlined)
A. First Supporting Point
B. Second Supporting Point (These are equal in importance
C. Third Supporting Point & written in parallel form)
etc.
Concluding Sentence (Concluding Sentence underlined)
An outline for an essay looks like this:
ESSAY OUTLINE
I. Thesis Statement
II. Topic Sentence
A. First Supporting Point
1. Supporting Detail
2. Supporting Detail
B. Second Supporting Point
1. Supporting Detail
2. Supporting Detail
3. Supporting Detail
C. Third Supporting Point
Supporting Detail
(Concluding Sentence)
III. Topic Sentence
A. First Supporting Point
Supporting Detail
B. Second Supporting Point
1. Supporting Detail
2. Supporting Detail
C. Third Supporting Point
Supporting Detail
(Concluding Sentence)
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IV. Topic Sentence
A. Supporting Detail
B. Supporting Detail
C. Supporting Detail
D. Supporting Detail
(Concluding Sentence)V. Concluding sentences
Final thoughts
Notice these important points:
- The topic sentence of each paragraph is given a Roman
numeral (I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX, X, etc.)
- Each supporting point is given a capital letter (A, B, C, D,
etc.). If there are no supporting point but only supporting details, then they
are given capital letters as in IV of the preceding essay outline.
- Each supporting detail is given an Arabic number (1, 2, 3,
4, 5, etc.)
- Each time the outline moves from a Roman numeral to a
capital letter to an Arabic number, the text is indented. Indenting makes it
easy to see the movement from big to small, from main ideas to specific
details.
- Letters and numbers are used when there are two or more
items in a group. In the essay outline, only one supporting detail is given
under II.C and III.A and C, therefore, no numbers are given. However, the
single supporting detail is indented in line with the other supporting details
that are numbered.
Note: An outline is only a guide to help you as you write your essay. It can be changed at
any time; that is, you can make additions or deletions to your outline as you are writing.
E.g.: Read the detailed outline below for the essay on The Advantages and
Disadvantages of Living in the Twentieth Century.
THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING
IN THE TWENTIETH CENTURY
I. Living in the twentieth century offers certain advantages, such as a higher standard of
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living, but it also has some disadvantages, such as a polluted environment, the
depersonalization of human relationships, and the weakening of spiritual values.
II. The biggest advantage of living in the twentieth century is the high standard of living
we enjoy.
A. More money for less hard work1. More office workers than manual labourers
2. Higher salaries
3. Increased government services
a. Social security
b. Unemployment benefits
c. Disability insurance
B. Longer life expectancy
1. Better medical care
a. More hospitals, doctors, nurses
b. Advances in medical technology
2. Improved nutrition
3. More leisure time
C. Modern conveniences
1. Communication
a. Telephones
b. Radio and television
2. Labour-saving machines in the home
a. Dishwashers
b. Washing machines
c. Vacuum cleaners
3. Faster transportation
III. One of the main disadvantages of living in the twentieth century is that we are living
in an increasingly polluted environment.
A. Air pollution
1. Smog
2. Nuclear fallout
B. Water pollution
1. Chemical wastes from factories
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a. Dead fish
b. Contaminated drinking water supplies
2. Raw sewage from cities
3. Oil spills from ships
IV. A second disadvantage of living in the twentieth century is the depersonalization ofhuman relationships.
A. People and machines
1. Automated vending machines, banks, etc.
2. Tape recorded telephone answering
3. Computerized dating services
B. People and numbers
1. Social security numbers
2. Credit card numbers
V. The final disadvantage of living in the twentieth century is the weakening of spiritual
values.
A. Materialistic culture
B. Faith in science instead of in religion
VI. In conclusion, although the twentieth century has indeed given us a lot of advantages
by making us richer, healthier and freer to enjoy our lives, it has, in my opinion, not made
us wiser. The twentieth century has also made our earth dirtier, our people less humane,
and our spiritual lives poorer. We should continue to enjoy the benefits of technological
advancements because they free us to pursue our interests and goals. However, we must
make a concerted effort to preserve our natural environment for future generations.
Moreover, we should take the time now to make our lives more meaningful in an
increasingly impersonal, computerized world.
3. COMMON PATTERNS OF ESSAY ORGANIZATION
Organizing an essay is essentially similar to organizing a paragraph; the only difference
is that instead of working with single sentences, you are working with paragraphs. You can use
the same patterns (or combination of patterns) for essays as you use for paragraphs.
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In the following section, four of the most common and useful patterns of essay
organization will be introduced: chronological order, logical division of ideas, cause and effect,
and comparison and contrast.
3.1. Chronological Order
As you have learned in Writing paragraphs, chronological order is order by time. It is
used in almost all academic fields to describe historical events as well as to write biographies andautographies. Besides, chronological order is used in scientific and technical writing to explain
physical, chemical, biological, and mechanical processes, such as how a machine works, how a
chemical reaction takes place, how a certain biological process occurs, and so on. It is also used
to give directions or instructions how to perform a chemistry experiment, how to operate a
piece of equipment, etc.
In a chronological process essay, the main steps are the topics of the paragraphs.
E.g.: Read the following essay explaining the process of treating sewage to
make impure water pure again as an example of essay organized using chronological order. The
thesis statement is in bold; the topic sentences of those paragraphs that explain a major step in
the process are underlined; and the between-paragraph transition signals are circled.
A SEWAGE TREATMENT PROCESS
Sewage treatment requires the removal of major contaminants from waste water in
order to purify it for reuse. This process takes place in sewage treatment plants and
requires the use of special equipment and chemicals. The sewage treatment process is
divided into three stages: primary treatment, secondary treatment, and tertiary
treatment.
, large, heavy, suspended
solids are removed from the sewage inflow. The polluted water passes through a screen
into a grit chamber. Large organic solids drop to the bottom of the grit chamber. Then
the polluted water continues to flow into a settling tank, where sludge from the water
drops into the sludge digestion tank. From there, it flows out to a drying bed. The water
continues to flow through the system, to begin the next phase of the treatment process.
, organic matter is further broken up and
removed. As the water flows from the settling tank into the aeration tank, it combines
with air. This process increases the oxygen content of the water and also increases the
number of microorganisms that feed on dissolved wastes. Then the water flows into a
second settling tank, where more sludge drops out. From there, the water flows into a
chlorination chamber. In this phase of the process, chlorine kills most of the harmful
bacteria.
During the primary stage oftreatment
In the secondary stage
After leaving the chlorinationchamber
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The water begins the
stage of treatment. In this stage, remaining chemical impurities,
mainly phosphates and nitrates, are removed by chemical and physical means. Now the
water is ready for reuse.
To summarize, waste water can be made reusable in sewage treatment facilities by
undergoing a three-stage treatment process. These stages include primary treatment,which removes about 35 percent of the organic pollutants; secondary treatment, which
removes up to 90 percent of the remaining organic pollutants by chlorination; and
finally, the tertiary treatment, in which the last impurities nitrates and phosphates are
dissolved.
3.2. Logical Division of Ideas
Logical division of ideas is a form of essay organization that is used to group related
items according to some quality they have in common. Logical division can be useful in planning
a paper because a broad subject can be subdivided into several categories or groups that will
narrow the topics for discussion. Then, each subdivision topic can be discussed in order.
E.g.: Read the following essay about styles of rock and roll music as an
example of essay using logical division of ideas as a method of organizing the information. The
thesis statement is in bold; the topic sentences of the body paragraphs underlined; and the
between-paragraph transition signals are circled.
STYLES OF ROCK AND ROLL MUSIC
There is no stopping rock and roll. Since its birth in the fifties, rock and roll has
become the most lively force in popular culture. It was born as a child of jazz, blues, and
country music. More recently, it has been influenced by movies, television, sex, drugs,
art, literature, and electronics. Since its birth, rock and roll has grouped and regrouped
into an explosion of styles: folk rock, soul, Motown, hard rock, jazz rock, country rock,
heavy metal, punk rock, reggae, new wave, rap, and so on. Each type has its own style,
themes, and stars. Three of the more successful styles are rap, heavy metal, and reggae.
the newer styles of rock and roll is rap. Rap is a form of dance music
in which the singers rappers speak in rhythm and rhyme rather than sing. Rap first
appeared in the mid-seventies in the discos of New York Citys black neighbourhoods.
Disco DJs teamed up with rappers to play songs for dancers at parties. At first, the role
of the rapper was to keep the beat going with hand claps while the DJ changed records.
Soon, rappers added lyrics, slogans, rhymes, and call-and-response exchanges with the
audience. Early rap songs were mainly about dancing, partying, and the romantic
tertiary orfinal
Oneof
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adventures of the rappers, but politics became an important theme in the late eighties
and nineties. Although rap is primarily the music of young black males, the first white
rappers appeared in 1980, and a woman rapper, Queen Latifah, began her career in
1989. M.C. Hammers 1990 album Please Hammer Dont Hurt Em has sold fifteen
million copies, making it the best-selling rap album of the decade.
style of rock and roll music is heavy metal. Quite differentfrom rap, heavy metal is a style of rock and roll that uses highly amplified electric
guitars for its sound. It was born in the early sixties when American and British guitarists
started putting distortion into their music. The most successful bands have had the fastest
and most creative guitarists: Jimi Hendrix, Ted Nugent, and Eddie Van Halen. Almost as
important as the guitarists are the singers, who have great theatrical ability, vocal range,
and sex appeal. In the seventies, heavy metal bands turned to outdoor sports arenas,
staging elaborate concerts with light shows and amplified sound. Popular heavy metal
bands include Led Zeppelin, Motley Crue, Poison, Guns n Roses, and Metallica.
A style of rock and roll is reggae, which was born on the Carribean
island of Jamaica in the sixties and spread throughout the world in the seventies. It
developed from a kind of Afro-Carribean music called mento, which was sung and played
on guitars and drums. Some musicians changed mento into a music style called sko by
adding a hesitation beat. A few years later, other musicians changed sko, and reggae was
born. Reggaes special sound comes from reversing the roles of the instruments. The
guitar plays the rhythm and the bass plays the melody. An important influence on reggae
music was the Rastafarian cult. The Rastafarians added unusual sound mixes, extra-slow
tempos, strange lyrics, and mystical-political themes. The best-known reggae musician in
the United States is the late Bob Marley.
Rock and roll music is constantly changing. New styles are born, grow, change,
and produce offshoots, which in turn grow, change, and produce offshoots. Some styles
enjoy lasting popularity, but others disappeared rather quickly. However, all contribute
to the power and excitement of rock and roll music in out time.
3.3. Cause and Effect
Another common method of organizing an essay is by cause and effect. There are
basically two main ways to organize a cause and effect essay: block organization and chain
organization. In block organization, you first discuss all of the causes as a block (in one, two,
three, or more paragraphs, depending on the number of causes). Then you discuss all of the
Another
third
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effects together as a block. In chain organization, you discuss a first cause and its effect, a
second cause and its effect, and a third cause and its effect, in a chain.
BLOCK CHAIN
Cause
EffectCause
Effect
Cause
Effect
The type of cause and effect organization you choose will depend on your topic. Some
topics are more easily organized one way, and some the other way. A chain pattern is usually
easier if the causes and effects are very closely interrelated. If there is no direct cause and effect
relationship, the block type may be easier. Some topics may require a combination of block and
chain organization.
E.g.: Read the following essay about womens liberation as an example of
essay using cause and effect (combination of block and chain organization) as a method of
organizing the information. The thesis statement is in bold; the topic sentences of the body
paragraphs underlined.
WOMENS LIBERATION
Since the middle of the twentieth century, women around the world have been
seeking greater independence and recognition. No longer content with their traditional
roles as housewives and mothers, women have joined together to create the so-called
womens liberation movement. While the forces behind this international movement
vary from culture to culture and from individual to individual, the basic causes in the
United States can be traced to three events: the development of effective birth-control
methods, the invention of labour-saving devices for the home, and the advent of World
War II.The first cause of the liberation of women was the development of effective birth-
control methods, freeing women from the endless cycle of childbearing and rearing. As a
result of having a choice as to when and if to bear children, women acquired the
freedom and the time to pursue interests outside of the home. Because of the development
of birth control, women could delay having children or avoid having them altogether;
consequently, women had the opportunity to acquire an education and/or pursue a
Causes
Effects
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career.
The second event was the development of mechanized labour-saving devices for the
home, resulting in more leisure time and freedom for women. For example, fifty years
ago, a housewife spent an average of twelve to fourteen hours per day doing housework.
Due to the invention of machines such as vacuum cleaners, washing machines and
dishwashers, a housewife can now take care of her daily housework in about five hours.The third event that, at least in the United States, gave impetus to the liberation of
women was World War II. During the war, most men were serving in the military.
Consequently, women had to fill the vacancies in the labour force. Women by the
thousands went to work in factories and even took over businesses for their absent
husbands. This was a great change for the majority of American women, for they
discovered that they could weld airplanes and manage a business as well as change
diapers and bake cookies.
These three events planted the seeds of a great change in society, and the effects of
this change are being felt at all levels: in the family, in business, and in government.
One of the biggest effects of the greater independence of women is being felt in the
home. The traditional husband-wife relationship is undergoing a radical transformation.
Because so many women are working, men are learning how to share the household
tasks of cooking, cleaning, and even caring for children, In some families, there has been
a complete reversal of the traditional roles: the husband stays home while the wife earns
the familys income. It should be pointed out, however, that this is the exception, not the
rule. In most families in the United States, the husband still earns most of the money, and
the wife still does most of the housework.
The effects of womens liberation are being felt not only in the home, but also on
the job. More and more women are working, and they are demanding equal salaries and
equally responsible positions, and every year, the nations schools produce more women
doctors, lawyers, and accountants.
Politics and government are still other areas that are feeling the effects of the
womens movement. Although the United States doesnt appear ready to accept a woman
president, as some countries of the world have, women are being elected to public office
in increasing numbers. The United States currently has three women governors, which is
the highest office in a state. A few years ago, this would have been unthinkable.
Furthermore, the increasing political power of women has resulted in the proposal of an
amendment to the U.S. Constitution, called the Equal Rights Amendment, which will give
women complete equality with men by law if passed.
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In conclusion, women in the United States are acquiring greater independence,
which is causing sweeping changes in society at home, at work, and in politics. While
men may not be happy with these changes, they should always remember that it was they,
the men, who created the conditions leading to the liberation of women: men made war,
male scientists developed birth control, and businessmen earned a lot of money selling
vacuum cleaners and dishwashers.Transition Paragraphs
In the middle of the essay Womens Liberation, there is a short paragraph that
separates the causes part from the effects part. This is called a transition paragraph, which
is sometimes useful in long block organization essays.
Transition paragraphs are used to conclude the first part of the essay and
introduce the second part. It is not always necessary to write a transition paragraph, but it is
helpful when your topic is long and complex.
Since this paragraph is only one sentence, it could also be placed at the beginning
of the next paragraph or at the end of the previous one.
Cause and Effect Structure Words
There are words and phrases that show cause and effect relationships. They are
called cause and effect structure words.
In writing a cause and effect essay, there are many possible structure words you
can use. These words show whether you are discussing a reason or result: cause structure words
signal a reason for something; conversely, effect structure words signal the result of some action.
E.g.:
Cause structure words Effect structure words
The first cause The first effect .
The next reason .. As a result ..
Because of Therefore .
Listed in the following chart are many of the most common cause and effect
structure words.
CAUSE & EFFECT STRUCTURE WORDS
Sentence
Connectors
Coordinators Subordinators Others
To introduce a
cause or
reason
for because
since
as
because of
due to
to result from
the result of
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the effect of X
on Y
the
consequence of
To introduce
an effect or
result
as a result
as
a consequence
therefore
thus
consequently
hence
so the cause of
the reason for
to result in
to cause
to have an
effect on
to affect
3.4. Comparison and ContrastComparison and contrast is a very common and useful method of essay organization.
This form of writing is frequently used in college work, and in business and the profession as
well. Anything can be compared or contrasted such as periods in history, characters in stories,
kinds of equipment, or the qualifications of two job applicants. The only important rule to
observe is to compare and contrast things of like nature, or else the comparison or contrast will
not be valid. In other words, you can compare and contrast apples and bananas, but you cant
compare apples and typewriters.
When you make a comparison, you show how certain aspects of one item are similar to
the same aspects of another item in the same general class. A comparison answers the question,
What features do X and Y have in common? or How are X and Y similar?
When you contrast two things, you point out the differences between them; i.e., you point
out how they are not alike. A contrast answers the question, What are the differences between X
and Y? or How are X and Y different?
E.g.: Read the following model essay which analyzes two models of cars by
comparison/contrast method.
THE T-BIRD VS THE RABBIT
Buying a new car can be fun, but since there are so many fine models on the
market to choose from, the final decision can be a very difficult one to make. After
narrowing the choices down to two cars, a person can make a comparison and contrast
analysis by noting first the similarities and then the differences between, for example,
the Ford Thunderbird (popularly termed the T-Bird) and the Volkswagen Rabbit.
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The T-Bird and the Rabbit have several similarities. The T-Bird is an attractive
car; the Rabbit is too. The T-Bird will seat five people comfortably, as can the Rabbit. In
addition, the seats in the T-Bird as well as in the Rabbit are upholstered in tough vinyl.
Furthermore, both the Rabbit and the T-Bird have a 12,000-mile warranty.
Despite these similarities, the T-Bird and the Rabbit have some very important
differences in the following areas: physical dimensions, equipment, and fuel consumptionand economy.
The first major difference between the T-Bird and the Rabbit is in their physical
dimensions. The T-Bird measures 199 inches in length, whereas the Rabbit measures
only 156 inches. The difference in size between the two cars is more than three feet. This
means that the longer T-Bird has more leg room than the Rabbit. On the other hand, the
T-Bird requires a larger parking space, while the smaller Rabbit is easier to manoeuver
in crowded city streets. However just as the T-Bird is longer, it is also much heavier;
therefore, the T-Bird will give you a much smoother and quieter ride then the compact
Rabbit.
Another obvious difference between the two cars lies in their equipment. The T-
Bird has more luxury features than the Rabbit. For example, the T-Bird has power
windows, power steering, power front disc brakes, and reclining bucket seats. Although
the Rabbit has none of these extra features, it has a sunroof: the T-Bird merely has a
vinyl roof. Thus, while the driver of the T-Bird can enjoy the power of a big car, the
driver of the Rabbit can enjoy sunshine and fresh air through the sunroof.
The final difference between these two cars is in fuel consumption and economy.
The Rabbit can be filled up with $10.00 worth of gas, but it will cost twice that amount to
fill up the T-Bird. The Rabbit also has a fuel injection system, which helps to give the car
easier starts; it also uses the most economical grade of gas. In contrast, the T-Bird
requires the most expensive gas. The most important feature, however, is that the Rabbit
gets 38 miles per gallon on the highway and 24 miles in the city, whereas the T-Bird
averages only 14 miles per gallon.
In conclusion, then, although there are some superficial similarities between the
two cars, there are quite a number of important differences. The T-Bird is much larger
and more luxurious, but the Rabbit is compact and easier to manoeuver. Furthermore,
even though both cars have unique features, the Rabbit uses fuel much more
economically. Therefore, considering the high cost of gas these days, the Volkswagen
Rabbit is definitely the car to own.
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There are two major techniques you need to learn in order to write good comparison and
contrast essays.
- Appropriate use of comparison and contrast structure words.
- Logical organization of the points of comparison and contrast.
Listed in the charts below are some of the words and phrases used to write about
similarities and differences.COMPARISON STRUCTURE WORDS
Sentence
Connectors
Subordinators Coordinators Others
similarly
likewise
also
too
as
just as
and like
just like
alike
similar (to)
the same as
both and
not only but
also
compare to
CONTRAST STRUCTURE WORDS
Sentence
Connectors
Subordinators Coordinators Others
on the other hand
in contrast
however
by / in comparison
although
though
even though
whereas
while
but
yet
different (from)
dissimilar
unlike
to differ (from)
to compare to
to compare with
There are several ways to organize a comparison and contrast essay. Presented here are
the two basic forms: point-by-point organization and block organization. Each type of
organization is illustrated in the following models.
Study the models very carefully. Notice how the thesis statement tells the reader what
type of organization will be used in the body of the essay. In addition, notice the different ways
in which the outlines are written, depending upon the controlling idea(s) in the thesis statement.
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Model 1: Point-by-point organization
In point-by-point comparison and contrast organization, you make a sentence-by-
sentence comparison of two (or more) items or subjects. For example, if you were comparing
two jobs, you might make an outline like the following.
Thesis statement One way to decide between two job offers is to make a point-by-
point comparison of their features.I.
II.
III.
IV.
The salaries of job X and job Y are approximately equal.
A. Job Xs salary
B. Job Ys salary
Job X offers the same fringe benefits as job Y.
A. Job Xs fringe benefits
B. Job Ys fringe benefits
In contrast to job Y, job X offers good opportunities for
advancement.
A. Job Xs opportunities for advancement
B. Job Ys opportunities for advancement
Unlike the high-pressure and competitive atmosphere at company
X, the atmosphere at company Y seems congenial and supportive.
A. Atmosphere at company X
B. Atmosphere at company YModel 2: Block organization Type 1
In Type 1 block organization, you discuss the features of your items or subjects in
blocks. That is, in the first paragraph, you discuss all of the features of the first item. Then in the
second paragraph, you explain all of the same features of the second item in the same order that
they were discussed in the first paragraph.
Thesis statement One way to decide between two job offers is to consider the
advantages of job X and job Y.I.
II.
Job X offers several advantages.
A. Salary
B. Fringe benefits
C. Opportunity for advancement
D. Workplace atmosphere
Job Y also offers some advantages.
A. Salary
B. Fringe benefits
C. Opportunity for advancement
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D. Workplace atmosphereModel 3: Block organization Type 2
In Type 2 block organization, you discuss all of the similarities of the items in one
paragraph and all of their differences in a separate paragraph(s) or vice-versa. (See the essay
The T-Bird vs. the Rabbitin the previous example.)
Thesis statement One way to decide between two job offers is to evaluate what the
similarities and differences are before making your final decision.I.
II.
The salary and fringe benefits of job X and job Y are almost the
same.
A. Salary (Job X and job Y)
B. Fringe benefits (Job X and job Y)
Although the salary and fringe benefits are equal, there are big
differences in the areas of workplace atmosphere and opportunity
for advancement.
A. Workplace atmosphere
1. Job X
2. Job Y
B. Opportunity for advancement
1. Job X
2. Job Y
Note: when you have completed your discussion of the features of the first item or
subject, use a comparison and contrast structure word, phrase or clause to refer to it and to
introduce the second item or subject
E.g.: Like job X, job Y
In contrast to job X, job Y
In spite of their similarities / differences
4. ESSAY CHECKLIST
This checklist details all the things you have learned about writing paragraphs and essays.
It is a good idea to keep this checklist in front of you when you are writing. It will remind you of
all the essential elements of a good essay. After you have finished your first draft, check your
essay forevery item on the list. If any item is missing, add it before you write your final draft.
Essay organization
Introduction
General statements
Thesis statement
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Body
Logical and appropriate pattern of
organization for the topic (chronological
order, logical division of ideas, comparison-
contrast, cause-effect, etc.)
Between-paragraph transitionsConclusion
Summary of the main points or paraphrase of
the thesis, and your final comments on the
topic
Paragraph organization
Topic sentence for each paragraph
Supporting sentences
Concrete support
Unity
Coherence (Transition signals plus Logical
order)
Concluding sentence (if necessary)