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City of Joy Written by GERALD BRACH & ROLAND JOFFE October 1990 Early Draft FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES ONLY CITY OF JOY FADE IN: TITLE SEQUENCE. EXT. BIHAR - DAY (DAWN, SUMMER, MID-1980) Heat that has mass. That rises off the parched earth in shimmering waves. After a moment, we see what appear to be figures coming out of the haze, one by one. A family with their few belongings: HASARI PAL, 33, his wife, ALOKA, 28, and their children, daughter, AMRITA, 13, sons MANOOJ and SHAMBU, 11 and 9; HASARI'S MOTHER and FATHER. They embark toward the night, the rising sun behind them. EXT. ROADSIDE - BUS STOP - DAY (DAWN) Hasari's Father passes a gourd of precious water. Hasari serves the children first. Shambu gulps entirely too much, the others forcing him to stop by a unified force of will. Embarrassed, he passes the cup to his brother, who sips, as does his sister. Aloka barely wets her lips, insisting on leaving the last drops for Hasari. And now, a rooster tail of dust rises up behind the approaching bus and the old parents bid farewell to their son's family. There is an intense sadness at leaving the land and Hasari's Mother clings to him... HASARI I'll send money soon. His Mother nods, as Hasari erupts in a small cough which, by habit, he suppresses. His Mother crushes Aloka to her. HASARI'S MOTHER

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City of JoyWritten byGERALD BRACH & ROLAND JOFFEOctober 1990Early DraftFOR EDUCATIONALPURPOSES ONLYCITY OF JOYFADE IN:TITLE SEQUENCE.EXT. BIHAR - DAY (DAWN, SUMMER, MID-1980)Heat that has mass. That rises off the parched earth inshimmering waves. After a moment, we see what appear tobe figures coming out of the haze, one by one. A familywith their few belongings: HASARI PAL, 33, his wife,ALOKA, 28, and their children, daughter, AMRITA, 13,sons MANOOJ and SHAMBU, 11 and 9; HASARI'S MOTHER andFATHER. They embark toward the night, the rising sunbehind them.EXT. ROADSIDE - BUS STOP - DAY (DAWN)Hasari's Father passes a gourd of precious water. Hasariserves the children first. Shambu gulps entirely toomuch, the others forcing him to stop by a unified forceof will. Embarrassed, he passes the cup to his brother,who sips, as does his sister. Aloka barely wets herlips, insisting on leaving the last drops for Hasari.And now, a rooster tail of dust rises up behind theapproaching bus and the old parents bid farewell to theirson's family. There is an intense sadness at leavingthe land and Hasari's Mother clings to him...HASARII'll send money soon.His Mother nods, as Hasari erupts in a small cough which,by habit, he suppresses. His Mother crushes Aloka toher.HASARI'S MOTHERDon't let the children out of yoursight. Not for a moment.Now the children. She wants to keep them here even asthe old man touches her, reminding her she must let themgo.HASARI'S MOTHERHelp your parents. Don't fightwith each other. And, Manooj,

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stay away from the cinema, do youhear?Shambu, his eyes big as saucers, whispers to hisgrandma...(CONTINUED)2.CONTINUED:SHAMBUI don't want to go. There are badmen with long knives who stealchildren.That does it: Hasari's Mother dissolves in tears, butthe old man nevertheless unlooses her insistently fromthe children. Aloka and the children get on the bus asthe old man embraces his son.HASARI'S FATHERA man's journey to the end of hisobligations is a very long road.Yours begins here.EXT. ROADSIDE/INT. BUS - DAYThere's not an empty inch inside the little vehicle oron top. The passengers are silent. A woman breast feedsa baby. Several passengers fan themselves. Many sleep.The Pals squeeze wearily into the rear seat.MANOOJ(to his neighbor)Our farm has died, so we aremoving to Calcutta to become rich!Hasari and Aloka look at each other: If only it were thepursuit of wealth and not survival. The woman understands.And now the BUS GRINDS forward and the Pals lookback. Hasari coughs, suppresses it... as silence falls.The elder Pals stand huddled together in the dust and wesee, nestled behind a boulder at the roadside, a tiny,blue flower -- beautiful and fragile, but like all thingsalive, determined to live... and we hear the sound of aDOZEN VOICES CHANTING a quiet mantra in unison as we --DISSOLVE TO:INT. ASHRAM - ANOTHER FLOWER - DAYThis flower floats gently in a bowl of water. The TITLESEND as we PULL BACK SLOWLY to reveal a dozen Anglos,several Indians, and one Kenyan seated cross-leggedbefore an aging Yogi, who's quietly urging the supplicantsto find "their light, allow your white light tofill your spirit's eye." Above, ceiling fans move theair.(CONTINUED)

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3.CONTINUED:As we PAN the group, we see that everyone has his/hereyes closed in earnest meditation... until we COME TO anAmerican, MAX LOEB, 29, who pops open first his right eye-- looks to his right and left -- closes his right eyeand opens his left eye -- looks left and right... andthen, instead of continuing the mantra and the search forhis white light, expels a stream of air through hispursed lips, making a vibrating, flatulent sound, oneindicative of sizeable frustration and dismissal.MAXGet serious.Around him, other single eyes pop open, searching for thesource of this unmeditative sound. Max nods and smilesa wry smile as if to say: This just ain't doin' it forme, folks.INT. SPARTAN ROOM - TRUMPET - DAYMax closes the trumpet case and starts chucking hisclothes and books in a knapsack and a small valise. Wenotice the Hebrew letter chai on a gold chain around hisneck. His girl friend, BETSY KAHN, overdressed somewhatin an Indian style, endeavors to exercise the inner peaceshe's been pursuing...BETSYI swear to God, you never giveanything enough time! What didyou expect in five days, Max?MAXOnly what they promise in thebrochure: Inner peace, serenity,and a nice chant that gets rid ofthis rock in my gut. E.S.T., theydo you in a weekend.BETSYI would really appreciate it ifyou wouldn't be terribly glib justnow, Max.That's okay with Max, who's willing to eschew communicationof all kinds and just finish heaving his stuff inthe valise.BETSYAm I to assume you'll be at theairport in Calcutta a week fromtomorrow?(CONTINUED)4.

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CONTINUED:MAXImpossible to predict, Betsy IleneKahn. Maybe you better give me myticket.BETSYScrew you, Max -- I paid for it!How many times am I going to letyou walk out on me and come back?MAXI think only you can answer that,Betsy Ilene Kahn.She slaps him.MAXDo you really think that's anappropriate way to get rid of yourWestern rage, Bets?She swings at him again. He catches her hand hard in hisfist.MAXOne slap is romantic. Two wouldcall for retaliation... Lend me ahundred dollars.She yanks free, begins to chant her mantra as he grabshis knapsack and valise and goes out the door. Now,she's silent and, in the simplest sense, deeply hurt.She can't help herself; she cares. We STAY WITH hera moment as we --DISSOLVE TO:EXT. COUNTRY AIRPORT (ASSAM) - WINDING ROAD - DAYCool, lush hills. A little pack of single-engine twoandfour-seaters. Max, in shorts and University ofMiami T-shirt, hot, sweaty, appears around a bend in theapproach road.INT. AIRPORT - WAITING ROOMA small service desk. A CLERK, who doubles as GroundControl on the microphone, passing on the prevailing windand the active runway. We hear the STATIC-BACKED VOICEof a PILOT, giving his call numbers, then announcinghe's clear for immediate takeoff on the active runway.The Clerk CLICKS off and finds Max.(CONTINUED)5.CONTINUED:MAXHow you doin'?The Clerk gives Max a warm smile.

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CLERKHello.MAXI've always wanted to walk into alittle airport just about likethis one and ask the guy at thecounter the following question.Ready?The Clerk nods; he's at Max's ervice.MAXWhen's the next flight to anywhere?CLERKTo Bombay. Tomorrow, at oneo'clock in the afternoon.A beat --- the Clerk with his smile, Max with his, onesimply warm, the other giving off simmering heat.EXT. AIRPORT - LOW ANGLE - DAYMax sits on the ground, up against the building, playinga jazz line quietly and rather well on his trumpet. Apair of well-shod feet ENTER the FRAME. Max looks up.ANOTHER ANGLEThe rubicund face of VEEJAY CHATTERGEE, 50, and moreBritish than Churchill. Behind him, his cherubic wife,RAVI... and making her way toward the enclave of smallplanes, their daughter, MANUBAI, 26.VEEJAYI say, are you looking for a wayout of here? We have an extraseat. Where are you wanting togo?Max's eyes flick from Veejay to the back view of Manubaias she continues on and back to Veejay.MAXI'm wanting to go wherever you'rewanting to take me.6.INT. 180 FOUR-SEATER - DAYMax is crammed into the back seat with the plump Ravi.ANOTHER ANGLEWe see now that, contrary to our assumption that Veejaywould be in the left seat, it's Manubai who's flying theplane. The NOISE of the ENGINE forces them to speaksomewhat loudly.VEEJAYWe were among the fortunate backin '48. We got out of East Bengalbefore partition destroyed so many.

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We make mattresses. The RajahDouble Spring.Veejay has an old flask out.VEEJAYWe don't have a flight attendanton this flight...(passing the flask)Are you a musician, Mr. Loeb?MAXUnattached trumpet player andrecently-certified associate guru.As he takes a hit on the flask, Max's eye focuses on thelittle mirror on the dash. In it he can see Manubai'seyes. If we were to judge by what he sees in them, shedoesn't find him the least bit amusing. He smiles hissmile at her.EXT. HOWRAH STATION (CALCUTTA) - DAY (EARLY MORNING)A huge bridge dominates the skyline. The train trundlesto a stop, its WHISTLE clearing the way. People hang onits sides, sit on the roof... and now flood the platform,flowing into the station, clearing a view for us of thePals, clinging to their baggage in the middle of thishuman anthill.CLOSE ON THEM (MOVING)Hands reach out with sweets to sell, with tea, asking formoney.MANOOJDaddy, I'm scared.(CONTINUED)7.CONTINUED:HASARIScared? No -- why? This is veryexciting. As soon as we get toour friend's house, everythingwill be fine.But, despite Hasari's charade of confidence, they (andwe) are overwhelmed by the size of the station and thedesperate energy of the humanity around them. As theypress on, a small beggar woman huddled on the platformturns her eyes eerily on Manooj... as a deformed handstretches INTO the FRAME. Aloka senses someone: Abeggar, face half-hidden and eaten away by leprosy. Thisterrifying image presses the boys tightly to theirmother and moves Hasari to encircle Armita with one handand attempt to wrap the other three inside the embrace ofhis other hand. It does not seem possible that he can

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protect all of them against the predatory eyes watchingthem. He moves them quickly to a wall...HASARIWait right here. Don't move.WITH HASARIHe moves to a line of VENDORS, shows a piece of paper toone, as he digs out his precious screw of money to make apurchase of sweets from the Vendor.HASARIPlease, can you direct me to myfriend at this address? We areto stay with him.The Vendor gives the address a look, shows it to theVendor next to him. Both look at Hasari.VENDOR #1There's no such address as this inCalcutta.HASARIBut that's not possible.VENDOR #1Of course it is possible! I havelived here all my life. You arenew. Who would know if a placeexists or does not?VENDOR #2Bombay, perhaps. Delhi. Lookthere.(CONTINUED)8.CONTINUED:Dear God, what now? Stunned, Hasari hands Vendor #1 arupee and, with the sweets, turns back to his family, hisface going through a magical transformation as heprepares to suggest to the family that all is well.EXT. CHOWRINGHEE LANE - DAY (MIDDAY SUN)A few clean and cared-for Ambassador cars sweep into thegateway of the Grand Hotel, past a gateman.RACK FOCUS TO:FEET - MAIDANFeet tramping the pulsating tarmac, sending up dust.ANOTHER ANGLEThe Pals, scared, dispirited, weary, consumed by thecrowd. They've been walking a long time. Shambu cries;Aloka tries to ease his fear. They stop numbly at theedge of the park, put their bundles down against a longwall.Across the way, a thin policeman shares a cigarette with

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a group of traders. There is a deeply fearful look inHasari's eyes, a look he is having difficulty controllingnow. He needs to revive the family's confidence. Hetakes out his precious bundle of rupees and gives one toManooj. Manooj, though, is fixed on the cinema acrossthe street. Hasari indicates a stall just across themain road.HASARIManooj, go and get some fruit.Come straight back.Delighted with his task, Manooj sets off, his eyes on themarquee of the theater with its huge cardboard cutout ofKumar Kapur, starring in Hot Gun. Hasari calls out tohim to watch where he's going; the mere crossing of thestreet is a potential parental nightmare. A hand rufflesManooj's head and a TALL MAN with dark eyes and a sweetsmile comes at the boy's anxious parents.GANGOOLY (TALL MAN)Yes, hello, brother. Bihar, am Icorrect?HASARIYes, how did you know?(CONTINUED)9.CONTINUED:Hasari is torn between speaking to the man and watchinghis son's incredible journey across the street.GANGOOLYLet me say only that the terriblemalevolence that has visited yourpart of the country affects us all.HASARIThree years without rain. Nothingcame out of the earth but debts.GANGOOLYTerrible. And now, the family onthe street. It is not acceptable.(smile widens)And if I can't help, my name is notMr. Gangooly... Which, blessedly,it is.And now a smile as full as the sky above.EXT. SMALL BUILDING IN BACK STREET - DAYA brick slides out of the wall.We're BEHIND the brick and see Gangooly's soft face as hereaches in and pulls out a key.The street is small and empty. Though the houses are

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nothing much, to the Pals, they look like palaces.Manooj and Shambu run about in delight. Gangooly motionsfor quiet. With a flourish, he opens the door.INT. SMALL ROOM - DAYGangooly enters, glances around, waves the Pals in.They're amazed. There's a cage occupied by two parrots.In one corner, a small altar dedicated to the goddessLakshmi is decorated with some flowers and, behind atorn, plastic curtain in a corner, part kitchen, partwash place, containing a tap with running water.GANGOOLYBe free -- look around.On the faces of the family is one thought: Is itpossible? Amrita goes right to the parrots.GANGOOLYThey'll need feeding. Give themseed. But don't spoil them.(CONTINUED)10.CONTINUED:He bows briefly before the altar as he moves to thewashing area.GANGOOLYAnd now, one of the miracles oflife in the city. One and two...He turns on the tap and a stream of brown WATER GURGLESout. The Pals are hypnotized, the fists around theirhearts begin to ease.GANGOOLYHoly water from the Ganges! Flowsout forever. Come -- touch it.Manooj and Shambu put their hands under the tap.GANGOOLYDrink! It's as pure as the dew onShiva's lips.They drink. Gangooly claps in delight... and beckonsHasari aside.FAVORING GANGOOLY AND HASARIGANGOOLYNow, this place is yours for twoweeks. My cousin, Moti, is away,traveling. Normally, the renttakes fifty rupees for a week, butfor a brother, forty. No, don'tthank me.Hasari pulls out his little screw of money.HASARI

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I have only seventy-five, but assoon as I have work...GANGOOLYGive me the fifty, pay the restnext week. You'll find work, Itrust you. Aren't I from Bihar,too? Yes.And the money is in his hand. He joins his handstogether.GANGOOLYYou are pleased? Then Mr. Gangoolyis pleased. It's how I am.(CONTINUED)11.CONTINUED:He turns on his heel and he's gone. For a moment, thePals are still, swept from the brink of catastrophe tosalvation... and now, as one, they release their sheerand utter joy.INT. CHATTERGEE STAIRCASE - DAYRavi and Veejay leading Max up the grand staircase,Manubai in the foyer, looking after them.INT. GUEST ROOM - DAYRavi leads the way into a lovely guest bedroom.RAVII hope this is all right. Theroom hasn't been aired or the bedturned, but --VEEJAYOh, he doesn't care about that, doyou, Max? Here, look here.Veejay opens a little cupboard, stocked with liquor.VEEJAYHelp yourself. Be comfortable.Ravi, come on, go, go, let's leavethe young man to himself.Obediently, Ravi goes. Veejay follows. Max goes to thewindow.HIS POVThe beautiful Manubai in the garden.MAXHe lies down on the bed. He's found Nirvana.INT. MAIN ROOM - DAYIt's Hasari who watches now. There's LAUGHTER from Alokaand Amrita. Joyful SHOUTS from the boys. Hasari isalone in the main room, on his knees, in front of thepile of their baggage and bundles. He turns his attention

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from the laughter to a just-opened, old suitcase.He takes out a small tea box. Opens it delicately.(CONTINUED)12.CONTINUED:It's full of something brown. He pushes his fingers inand feels this bit of earth with a tenderness that'salmost religious, puts a pinch to his nose and breathesit in. The LAUGHTER and SHOUTING from the bathing areais GROWING.INT. BATHING AREAShambu is paddling near the tap. Aloka is bending overthe drain and Amrita is rinsing her heavy, dark hairwith a pot. Manooj is nearby, rubbing himself with anold towel. Hasari enters unnoticed and looks at thegroup with tenderness... and with gratitude for theirgood fortune.A MAN, red with anger, yanks the curtain aside, stares.The family freezes. Aloka's hair drips unnoticed on hersari.MANWhat are you doing here? Who areyou?HASARIMy name is Pal, Hasari. Mr.Gangooly rented this space to --MANMr. Who?HASARIGangooly. You must be his cousin,Mr. Moti.MANI don't know any Gangooly and myname is Binal and this is my home-- get out!The furious Binal, followed by the Pals, goes into themain part of the room. A small crowd has been attractedby the noise.HASARIBut this is true. We paid him adeposit of fifty --BINALA man goes out because he has towork, and some beggar tries tomove in while his back is turned.(CONTINUED)13.

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CONTINUED:This while Binal has begun to throw things out onto thestreet, though this cleansing of his home doesn't stophim from picking up a stick. The odd sympathizer meetswith...BINALSo, should I suffer if they areso stupid to jump into the firstmouth that wants to eat them?He turns with the stick on Hasari.BINALYou're lucky I don't kill you!Hasari looks at Manooj, who drops his eyes. They collectthe remainder of their possessions and hurry out thedoor.EXT. SMALL STREET - DAYFull of neighbors. There's a suppressed violence in theair. A man pushes Aloka. Sweat streaming down his face,Hasari confronts the man. A WOMAN pushes the men apart.WOMANGo to the river. Try to squeezein there.EXT. VICTORIA MONUMENT - STREET - NIGHT (DUSK)Calcutta broiling: Buses, vendors, carts, rickshaws,children beg at car windows. The Pals stand, uncertain,and for the first time a rickshaw fills Hasari's eye,carrying two passengers. But now he shoulders his burdenand leads the family toward the river. We HOLD untilthey grow small against the setting sun, gleaming redagainst the white domes of the Victoria Monument.INT. CHATTERGEE'S LIBRARY - TORSO - NIGHTMoving through the dark, a figure, touching things,looking at photographs of the Chattergees. We heara MUFFLED DIALOGUE mixed with the SINGING a la DeanMartin of "Everybody Loves Somebody Sometime":"Goddamn it, boy, what's the matter with you? --"Everybody loves somebody sometime" -- "Go for it,son!" -- "Sure, Dad, whatever you say, Dad." --"Everybody falls in love somehow" -- "You're the dad,Dad." Now, a humidor. Max opens it, takes out acigar, takes two. Takes five. Senses someone. Turns.14.ANOTHER ANGLERavi in her bathrobe.MAXI'm starving.He gives her his best saint's smile.

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RAVIWell, you don't want to eat thoseawful cigars. Come with me, we'llwake up the cook, she'll fix yousomething proper.EXT. KITCHEN - WINDOW - NIGHTTHROUGH the window, we see the bleary-eyed cook layingout food as Ravi chatters away at Max, he with a beatificgrin on his face as he feeds himself.EXT. RIVER BANK - HOWRAH BRIDGE - DAYThe bridge etched against the dawn sky. The corpse ofan indigent is collected and put on a cart.MANOOJWith his eyes open, watching the dead man being removed.FAMILYAfter their humiliating flight, they found refuge here.Tiny figures huddled together with their baggage andbundles, near a tree, not far from the steps that dipdown to the smooth water. Hasari's eyes, too, are onthe dead man, that warning. He kneels beside Manooj,strokes him. The boy's eyes turns to the man's,wondering if the man can provide for them.HASARIDon't let it frighten you. Youhave to be brave. I know we'llfind work today.Fear and doubt fill Manooj's eyes. He nods.EXT. DOCKS - DAYHasari at the gates, the family huddled together inthe b.g. The man behind the gate shakes his head,points.15.ANOTHER ANGLEA line of a hundred men stretches from a door. Hasariis on the edge of panic, but when he turns to the family,he's wearing his confident smile. As before, he gathersthe family into the protectorate of his arms and guidesthem onward. As he pushes off into the sea of humanity,we PULL BACK AND UP, FILLING the FRAME WITH street uponstreet, disappearing Hasari.FROM STREET - INTO WORKSHOP - HASARI AND OWNERTwo plump men in shirt sleeves look coolly at Hasari.The elder shakes his head. The younger shows Hasarithe door.Outside, an increasingly desperate Hasari findsAloka before a small shrine, saying a prayer.EXT. BARA BAZAR - DAY

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Aloka huddled with Manooj and Amrita. Hasari talkingto the owner of a small market stall. Shambu is peeringinto a shop with male mannequins in the window.INT. MEN'S SHOP - MOVING MIRRORIn the moving mirror we see counters and shelves of men'sclothing.The mirror stops at Max slipping into a kurta before anaudience of Ravi, Manubai, and a salesman.RAVIIt's not extravagant at all. Youcan't go around all week in yourtribal garb.Max sees a boy's face pressed to the glass: he indicatesthe shirt, for the boy's approval. The boy smiles awonderful smile.RAVINow he looks civilized, doesn'the, Manubai?MANUBAIAlmost.Max looks at her. She at him.16.EXT. MEN'S SHOP - DAYMan leans down, whispers to the smiling boy...MAXYou sure I look all right?The little boy nods. Max slips him several rupees...and he, Manubai, and Ravi fold themselves into her tinycar as --ANOTHER ANGLEShambu runs to his dejected family.SHAMBULook! A man gave me these manymoneys!HASARIWhat man? Why -- did you ask himfor money?SHAMBUHe just gave it to me.HASARIWhere is he?Shambu looks, but the car's gone.HASARIDon't do that. We're not beggars.Shambu is devastated. Out of his own desperation,Hasari feels he's been a little rough on the boy. Heholds him close.

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HASARIGo back to the river. Wait for meby the tree. Don't go anywhere.Do you understand?Aloka, the boys nod. We WATCH them as Hasari headsoff, quickly becoming a small figure disappearing intothe sea.EXT. JUTE MILL DAY - LATE AFTERNOON SUNStarting to sink. We PAN DOWN TO Hasari stepping toa grilled window as the man ahead moves out.17.INT. JUTE MILL - DAYA flaking gray wall, half-obscured with moldering files.The grilled window lets in a little light and the quietsupplications of those outside.An old CLERK at a desk. A voice calls out. The Clerklooks up, crosses to the grill.Hasari's tense face through the bars. A TRUCK RUMBLESpast, drowning out the words... except these: "...tradeunion." The Clerk shakes his head sadly. On the vergeof panic, Hasari hangs onto the window...CLERKDo you have family?HASARIYes, yes of course. But I'mthree days without work. I'lltake anything.The Clerk digs in his pocket, presses two rupees onHasari.CLERKHere, now go away.HASARINo, I don't want you to give me --The next man in line forcibly moves Hasari out of theway.CLERKIn this city, a man with a familycan't be proud. Take it!The Clerk waves him away, turns his attention to thenext man.INT. CHATTERGEE RECEPTION ROOM - DAY (LATE AFTERNOON)Manubai's face. Then Max's. Then hers. Then his.Looking at each other. Five days. Kiss. Ravi.MAXI said you have three days toget me into bed, and I'm bettingyou can't do it.

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(CONTINUED)18.CONTINUED:MANUBAIIt's all right for you to use mymother as your tour guide andmeal ticket, because she'll getsomething nice out of it. Butwhat would I get?He stares at her a moment, then gets up, goes around thetable.MAXWell, gee, I don't know. Maybe Icould say something so amusingthat you'd laugh so hard it wouldbreak that hot poker you have upyour ass.She stares at him. He bends to kiss her. She doesn'tpull away... but after a moment he realizes she isn'tresponding. He continues the kiss, but he opens hiseyes... to find her staring at him. He pulls back.They stare at each other another moment, then Maxsenses someone in the doorway.RAVIStaring at them, disappointment filling her eyes.MAXThe same sound of frustration and ennui he made in theashram.EXT. CHATTERGEE HOME - DAYHis arm around Max, Veejay guides the young man towarda waiting taxi.VEEJAYBelieve me, I understand, but youknow how women are. Do you haveenough money?Max gives him a non-commital shrug. Veejay winks,stuffs the money into Max's pocket.EXT. GREEN ACRES COURTYARD - COW - DAY (LATE AFTERNOON)Bare feet... and then sneakered feet step over the sleepingbovine, who turns a disinterested eye up.19.ANOTHER ANGLEMax is guided by a grumpy hall PORTER wearing an offwhiteshirt and bellbottoms through the walled and wellplanted courtyard of an inexpensive hotel. Max gives thecow a bemused eye...INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAY

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The room is utterly utilitarian. The Porter turns on aceiling fan, sending an army of cockroaches scurryingfor calmer terrain. Max clearly doesn't care forcockroaches.PORTERIt pleases you?MAXNo fruit basket? No mini bar?Max hands the Porter several rupees.PORTERBar? Of course -- many, many.But make care, Sahib. Please,for me. If it is lady you liketo know -- yes? -- you let me.Huh? Very sweet girl, goodnature, very sweet. Or boy, verygood...Max puts a finger on the Porter's head, turns him forthe door.PORTERNo like boy? Something then forsmoke -- mmmh, very good for smoke!AT DOORMax eases the Porter out. As the door is closing...PORTERMaybe you like two girls -- looka little Chinese, but very greatpleasure.Max smiles his smile and disappears the Porter behind theclosed door. The smile disappears and the FAN gets hisattention; it has an annoying rhythm and sound. Heflicks the switch, but the fan continues to snap around.(CONTINUED)20.CONTINUED:He stares at it... and startles us by suddenly flickingout a hand and grabbing the blade, stopping the fan.He lets go. The fan is still. He carries his knapsackto the tub; it has brown stains along the middle andthe water has a brown tinge as it flows out of the tap.He sits on the edge of the tub, dumps his knapsack onthe floor, picks up a half-dozen pamphlets from theashram.CLOSE ON PAMPHLETSGuides to inner peace.RESUMEHe wings the pamphlets at the trashcan.

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EXT. RIVERBANK - HOWRAH BRIDGE - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Hasari comes around the corner of a warehouse, a smileon his face, clutching some bananas and dried grain.His relief -- and ours -- is short-lived.TREE AND BANKThe space where he left the family has been clearedand taken over by trucks. He's lost his family.HOWRAH BRIDGE ROADA group of Hindus are celebrating a puja, the womensinging canticles at the top of their lungs; the mentossing a little boy happily back and forth... as thepanic-stricken Hasari rushes up.HASARIMy wife, my children...Hasari rushes on. Suddenly we --CUT TO:UNDER BRIDGE - DAYHis head turns and his eyes look this way, that way...until out of the near silence, we hear a distant,extraordinary word...(CONTINUED)21.CONTINUED:CHILD (O.S.)Daaaaaaddddddyyyyy!The word catches Hasari's ear. He looks into the seaof people along the river bank under the bridge.CHILD (O.S.)Daaaaaadddddddyyyy!As in a dream, Shambu rises up out of the sea of bodies... and runs to his father.SHAMBUDaaaaadddddyyyy!Now, Aloka, Amrita, Manooj appear, rising up out of thesea, ending Hasari's nightmare.A warrior returning from battle, Hasari engulfs thelittle boy.HASARII told you to remain where I leftyou! I told you to stay there!MANOOJThe police came!SHAMBUWe said we had to meet you, butthey didn't care! They weremean!As before, Hasari tries to engulf the rest of his family

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in the protectorate of his arms. In the b.g., Arun andhis family.ALOKAThese friends have found space.They will share with us.Hasari looks at the tiny space. The roof is cardboardand cloth and half an old movie poster featuring theactor Kumar Kapur. Hasari looks at his tiny bit offood, debates a moment... then puts his hands together,addresses these generous people.HASARII would be proud if you wouldshare our food with us.Everyone looks at the food; there is no disguising theirhunger.22.EXT. BRIDGE - NIGHTDistant transistor MUSIC as we PAN DOWN: The Palchildren sleep despite the QUIET MOANS and nightmareCRIES around them, the two boys huddled together, Amritaclose to her mother.Hasari comes out of the dark. Aloka looks at him. Heshakes his head. He slumps beside her. Aloka strokesHasari, looking lovingly at him.ALOKAI remember the first time I sawyou, on the day of our marriage.Wearing a bright yellow turban.You asked me my name and you said,'You are a very beautiful girland I am wondering whether youwill find me appealing.'He strokes her tenderly in return... but now, overwhelmedwith despair, she begins to weep.HASARIWhat?She doesn't want to say it, doesn't want to wake thechildren.HASARIIt's all right -- what?ALOKAI miss the village. There Icould help.Hasari pulls Aloka close, strokes her.EXT. GREEN ACRES - NIGHTThe sky turns red. The Porter looks up, shakes his head:Poor young man, stuck with only a trumpet for company.

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INT. MAX'S ROOMMax sits on the floor in a corner and plays as we hearthe sound of a fierce WHISTLE and a SCREAMING ENGINE.EXT. SETTLEMENT - CLOSE ON BULLDOZER - DAWNA gigantic earthmover lurches into position.23.ANOTHER ANGLESwarming police.PALSAwaken -- startled, disoriented. Aloka gentles thechildren as Hasari moves instinctively toward the threat.SCENEA black ambassadorial car pulls up, out of which stepsa BABU. A microphone and speaker has been set up.Another car unloads several politicos with party banners.A minion hands the Babu the mike; he wants to get on withit before this turns into a political rally. Hasari isclose to him, as is Arun.BABUThe municipality has directed usto carry out the destruction ofthis settlement. All of you mustgo -- now!For a moment there is a babble of fear and frustration.Then from Hasari's side, Arun confronts the Babu.ARUNFor what reason?The Babue appears disconcerted. He's not accustomed tothe poor asking questions.BABUBecause this settlement isimpeding construction work.ARUNWe're not moving! Why shouldwe move? Who is the municipality?We are! This is our home!BABUI have my orders.ARUNIf we're driven from here, whereshould we go?BABUI'll give you five minutes togather your things. Then, thesettlement comes down.(CONTINUED)24.

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CONTINUED:ARUNWhy should you alone be burdenedwith such a task? Let me help!Arun begins to tear his shelter apart, and to heave thepieces at the Babu, who retreats. Others soon take upthe call to vent their frustration, hurling things atthe police and at the driver of the tractor. Quicklywe've got a full-scale riot. The police wade into thecrowd, pounding people with their sticks, Arun one ofthe first to get hit. He staggers into Hasari's arms.FAVORING PALS/ARUN AND HIS FAMILYUnbelievable! Panic-stricken, Hasari and Aloka gatherthe children and their few belongings... as beside thema woman goes down from a stick to the head; Aloka stopsinstinctively to help the woman, but Hasari grabs her,trying to shelter her and the children as well as Arun'swife and children, clutching Arun to him as in the chaosthey manage to escape.EXT. CHURCH - CLOSE ON BILLBOARD - DAYOn the billboard: A maharajah sleeping snugly on a thickmattress. From his dreamland he inquires solicitously:"Have you ever thought of a Rajah Double Spring as apresent?" We PAN DOWN and FIND the Pals and Arun and hisfamily, panting, terrified, beneath the sign.SHAMBUDaddy, are we going to die here?Hasari can see on everyone's face this question.HASARINo! Today, I'm just a mangy dogon the street, but soon, I swear,I'll look other men in the eye!(a beat)I swear.Yet on his face we see the extraordinary pressure to makethis promise reality.EXT. SIDE OF RESTAURANTHasari reaches the head of a line and receives a smallhandout. Turning away, he studies the morsel of food.His head aches, his belly screams with hunger... but hetakes only a single bite, then carefully wraps the restin a cloth and knots it.(CONTINUED)25.CONTINUED:He feels a tug at his elbow. It's a 15-year-old BOY withthick, scholarly spectacles.

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RAFIK (BOY)Why live like a beggar when youcan live like a maharajah?Hasari stares at the boy.INT. BLOOD DISPENSARY - CLOSE ON HASARI'S ARM - DAYA needle injected, blood flowing into a bottle.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari seated on a stool, watching his blood leave hisbody, his face broken out in perspiration.HASARII thought you were only taking alittle.ATTENDANTWe pay more, we take more.HASARII'm feeling a little dizzy.ATTENDANTIt'll pass.HIS POVRafik and a thin man chatting easily and exchanging cigaretteswith another attendant. His vision BLURS.HASARI AND NURSEWith his free hand, he begins to grapple for the Attendantto keep his balance, starts to fall... and theSCREEN GOES BLACK.FADE IN:EXT. DISPENSARY - DAYA woozy Hasari gives Rafik his share; Rafik in turn givesthe thin man his share. The thin man bows his farewell.(CONTINUED)26.CONTINUED:RAFIKBlood is the oil well of the poor,brother. Now, give me anotherthree and I'll give you these.He opens his hand with its dirty nails. In it lie alittle group of pills, like highly-colored sweets.HASARIWhat are those?RAFIKVitamins. Take these and you cangive again in a week.While Hasari considers, Rafik pours the pills intoHasari's hand, takes the three rupees. Hasari downs thepills.

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RAFIKOne week. Here. The same time.And he's gone, leaving Hasari, woozy but at least, forthe moment, blessed to count his money.INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHTMax lies on his messed bed, contorted, with his feet upover his head against the wall. A book lies open besidehim. A half-eaten room service meal, many hours old,moulders on the bedside table. Max is babbling a mocksports case into his fist...MAXThey're in the shotgun. There'sthe snap from center, the clock isrunning -- five, four, three -- hehas an open man at the Notre Dametwenty for the victory... and hefreezes. He freezes! Mr. Chokechokes. The fans go --A KNOCK at the door. Max shuts up, falls off the wall.He crosses to the door. Opens it. POOMINA is 16,beautiful and exotic-looking behind her excessive makeup.ANOTHER ANGLE - FAVORING MAXThe porter pushes the girl gently into the room, smilingat Max, nodding. The door is closed.27.MAX AND POOMINAHe may have been receptive to a "sweet, young girl," butnot a kid in her teens.MAXGot an I.D. on you?(she doesn't get it)How old are you?POOMINATwenty, sahib.MAXI buy that.She approaches him seductively.POOMINAI can do anything you want, sahib.She fingers the Hebrew letter at Max's throat, on itsgold chain. For a moment, Max is mesmerized by thischild; but then, as she begins more serious ministrations,he pulls back.MAXHold it, time out. Time, there'stime out on the field.POOMINA

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Is problems, sahib?MAXIs problems, yeah, just a couple.POOMINANo, please, yes, I can --There's something desperate in her that makes him put afinger to her lips and say...MAXHow 'bout some chow?(she doesn't get it)I was just about to order some roomservice. Food. I call, they come,we eat.She stares at him.INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHT (HALF HOUR LATER)Max smokes a Monte Cristo and watches Poomina, like afrightened little animal, devour the last of a GreenAcres room service meal and then wrap a small piece offish in the paper napkin.(CONTINUED)28.CONTINUED:She looks up at him, delivers a small burp. Covers hermouth in charming embarrassment.POOMINANow, you are ready for greatpleasure, yes?MAXWatching you eat was my greatpleasure. Now you go home.As he escorts her toward the door, Poomina is distressed.Max realizes she can't leave empty-handed. He pulls outsome notes.MAXFor you.She hasn't given up, though, and as he takes the money,she stands on tiptoe and kisses him. Torn, Max beginsto respond. He stops himself, his grip on her causingher discomfort. His breath comes in little bursts.MAXYou're a very wet kisser. Work onit, get in touch in five years.He leads her toward the door. Like some lunatic comedy.she resists. He pushes. She locks her knees. He opensthe door.MAXGoddamn it, cut it out! Now, good

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night.He muscles her out the door, closes it, wipes his lips.He stares at a parade of cockroaches gliding along thewall as he listens to her CRYING quietly on the otherside of the door. He debates... and he loses. Opens thedoor. Poomina stands there; the tears stop and a liptwitchingsmile lights her face.MAXFive years already? Gee, timereally flies when you have nomoral conviction.She slides into his arms, pressing against him. With hisshoulder, he closes the door, leaving us outside.INT. BACK ALLEY - BAR - FLAMING LIGHT - NIGHTA bare light bulb; a SCRATCHY vinyl RECORD on a turntable.(CONTINUED)29.CONTINUED:Poomina watches Max do a sleight-of-hand trick with acoin. He tosses it up, brings his hands past each other,then holds out his fists; she picks on... but the otherholds the penny. Fooled, she laughs. He does it again;she points to one fist -- empty -- then other -- alsoempty. Max reaches behind her ear and... produces thecoin. She loves it, her laughter escalating. But thenshe seesm to read something in the b.g. where we see fourthugs, two of whom will become known to us as THE GOONDA,a capo to the local "mafia" chieftan, and ASHOKA, son ofthe local Godfather. Ashoka works on a pimple on hischin. The Goonda meticulously cleans a spot of mud withspit from one of his expensive new running shoes. Maxeyes the thugs eyeing him.MAXShort guys! Quit lookin' at us!This remark goes over big with the thugs. Max doesn'tcare. He knocks off the last of the beer in his bottle.The bartender brings them two shots of something in twounmatched glasses.POOMINASpecial drink for you, sahib.Only the most man can drink it.You make try. For me.MAXFor you, I would drink batteryacid.POOMINA

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Who that finish first. I bet!She puts her glass to her lips and, in a childish,exaggerated way, mimes waiting for him to commence adrinking race with her. The two of them toss off what'sin their glasses. The bangla in Max's glass is strongerthan battery acid. He does an elaborate routine involvingthe pain, the surprise, the sheer awfulness of thedrink. But puts it down with mock machismo.POOMINAI beat!MAXI really don't think so -- oh no,nay, nay! I never lose the trulyirrelevant contest.POOMINAWe have fun some more. I betagain!(CONTINUED)30.CONTINUED:She turns to the bartender, calls for two more. All thewhile, in the b.g., The Goonda and his two thugs watchemotionlessly and Ashoka works on his acne.EXT. BAR - NIGHTMax sings "Take It to the Limit" with enormous inebriatedsincerity as Poomina helps him out of the bar. There's abig black motorcycle parked outside. Max glances at itas they start down the alley. As he looks back to theroad ahead, he finds The Goonda in front of him. Maxisn't so drunk that he doesn't sense what this is about.He looks behind him. Indeed, the other two goons arethere. Ashoka straddles the big cycle.MAXWell well. Seek punishment and yeshall find.Knowing what's coming, Max nevertheless unleashes abeautiful howl and tries to trample The Goonda offtackle.From behind, he's hit with a length of stick.He goes down, looks up through blasted eyes at Ashoka astwo sticks now land against his shoulder and his head...EXT. MAHARAJAH SIGN - NIGHTThe Pals sleep beneath the sign. Hasari awakens fromrestive sleep to the sound of a FIGHT. He gets up. Theothers awaken.ARUNDon't go -- what are you doing?HASARI

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It sounds like someone needs help.Hasari bolts for the corner.ALLEYWAYAs Hasari turns into the head of the alley, he can seethree men beating someone, a fourth man standing off tothe side, watching.HASARIWhat are you doing?(calling back)A man's being beaten here!As Hasari runs down the alley, the MOTORCYCLE FIRES UPand SCREAMS OFF and the three goons take flight.31.HASARI AND MAXHasari runs up, reaches out to Max, who's barely on hisfeet. As Hasari touches Max, Max turns and belts Hasariin the nose, nailing Hasari to the wall as Max collapsesat Hasari's feet. Hasari grabs his nose with one handand kneels beside the fallen Max... as a shadow movesand startles Hasari. He peers into the dark... andPoomina steps into the light.INT. CLINIC/SCHOOL (CITY OF JOY) - MAX'S POV - CRUCIFIX- DAYThe crucifix sways. Now Max's eyes RACK FOCUS TO thecherubic face of JOAN BETHAL, peering AT the CAMERAwithout sympathy.ANOTHER ANGLEMax on a cot in a tiny, spare room, a butterfly bandageunder one eye. Joan, Irish, short, stout, hovers overhim. Behind her, Hasari Pal.JOANGood morning, junior, welcome toour country.Max manages to sit up. Wishes he hadn't.MAXOh, I like the way the room movesin circles.(checking out hisaccommodations)I suppose I should inquire where Iam.JOANYou're in the City of Joy.MAXIs that geographic or spiritual?JOANOh, now we require that each

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visitor decide that for himself.This gentleman and a young ladybrought you here.MAXDid I do that to your nose?(as Hasari nods)I'm sorry.(CONTINUED)32.CONTINUED:Hasari shrugs, smiles... and a gigantic rat drops inMax's lap. He leaps to his feet and against the wall.The rat scurries away.MAXWhat was that -- a Shetland pony?JOANI would have to inspect it moreclosely, but I believe that wasone of our economy-size rats.Max clambers for the door. Too late, Joan thinks tosay...JOANWatch your --Max cracks his head on the door frame.MAXThanks -- got it.He ducks outside for some air.EXT. CLINIC/SCHOOL - NIZAMUDHIN LANE - MAX'S FACEStunned.SQUAREIn the dawn light, he finds himself in a small square ina slum, an open sewer running before him. He's repulsed.MAXPardon the expression, but JesusH. Christ.From the tea shop, SURYA, a stout old Hindu man dressedin Western clothes, raises a hand in greeting to Joan.On the door Max and Joan have come through: "City of JoySelf Help School & Clinic." Across the way, a young manis dandling a baby on his knee, rubbing its back andsniffing at its neck. Small group of children around ablackboard with a teacher, MARGARETA, doing numbers.RAM CHANDAR, the rickshaw puller, readies to go out towork. Trying to orient himself, Max turns...ANOTHER ANGLE... to find perhaps fifty people, largely women andchildren, staring at him.

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(CONTINUED)33.CONTINUED:He knows them by type: patients. He looks at the signon the door.MAXYou a doctor?JOANOh no, I'm a corporate executive.Doctor arrives at half seven, butonly three days a week.MAXThis is obviously one of thosethree days.JOANIndeed. What brings you to ourcountry?MAXI came to find my white light.JOANAh, yes. I take it you didn'tfind it.MAXKept opening the doors and windowsof my spirit, but couldn't see agoddamn thing.JOANWhat do you do in America?Max is slow to answer. Discreetly, Hasari hangs back,listens.JOANOh, how exciting. Must besomething illegal. Are you acriminal of some sort?MAXI suppose that depends how youdefine the word: I'm a doctor.JOANI see. How long are you here?Perhaps I could recruit you for --MAXForget it. You've got your nonpracticingCatholics. I'm a nonpracticingdoctor.(CONTINUED)34.CONTINUED:

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JOANHow very distressing. Why's that?MAXFound out I just really don't likesick people. Well, I'm outtahere. I owe you one.JOANI can't imagine ever divining howto collect, but there are a few ofus Indians, you know, who believethe tourist trade ought to beencouraged.Max turns to Hasari. Hasari is incredibly shy, canbarely meet Max's eyes.MAXThank you very much. Let me...He goes for his money.HASARINo, please.Max finds his pockets empty. Then reaches for his wrist-- his watch is gone -- and then his throat -- his chaiis gone, too.JOANI'm afraid they cleaned you out.Ram, here's your first rider.(to Max)Take this.She holds out several rupees toward him. All eyes onthem.JOANGo on, it's all right. You'll oweme two.EXT. STREET - FLYING FEET - DAYMax in the rickshaw, Hasari running alongside Ram, anexuberant smile slashed across his face.HASARIYou see, I can keep up.(CONTINUED)35.CONTINUED:RAMKeep up, of course. Anyone canrun at this pace. But you thinkit's easy to run and to pull?HASARII can do it. I could pull it.MAX

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Come on, give him a shot. He's asfast as you and looks twice asstrong.RAMWill you still pay me when he runsyou into a ditch?MAXAbsolutely. I trust the man.Suddenly, Ram comes to a stop.RAMAll right, you, come, step in here.Hasari looks on Max with enormous gratitude. Ram putsthe shafts down, has a short coughing fit, spits somephlegm, looks at Max.MAXI hope you're taking something forthat.Ram waves him off as Hasari lifts the shafts to his hips.RAMNow, fine, pull, go.Hasari tries to pull, but the center of gravity isn'teasy to find. This is enormously difficult and Hasari'svery clumsy at it. The street is crowded. The trafficis beginning to back up behind them. The driver andconductor of the tram let fly a tirade of insults.RAMSee, mister! What did I tellyou? Come on! What do you thinkthis is -- some village street?You've got to move quickly.He turns to Max.RAMYou see, it takes a gift.(CONTINUED)36.CONTINUED:MAXI say he can do it. I'll bet youthe fare he can do it.(play by play)What do you think, rickshaw fans,can he do it?The crowd isn't in for fun. Hasari strains forward.The rickshaw moves with him. Ram moves alongside,shouting instructions and oaths. A cop comes on the run,screaming at Hasai... which makes Ram importune morestrongly and Max joke more vociferously.

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Even under this incredible pressue, Hasari gainsconfidence and begins to move quicker, earning shoutsof approval from Max and Ram, who now has troublekeeping up as they make their way through the maelstrom,an avalanche of oaths following them.INT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYAt first all we see are feet on a marble floor. TheGoonda's in his running shoes, then Ram and Hasari'sbare feet.This is the partitioned splendor of an old housesprinkled with the relics of a grand colonial past.Everything is baroque, rotting and somehow impressive.Hasari has never been anywhere like this, and is caughtbetween curiosity and fear of breathing.INT. "THRONE ROOM"The three men enter a large room shuttered from the sunlight-- dusty and packed with a ramshackle assortmentof furniture. Two fat blue titmice perch in a cage nextto ambitious plaster portrait of Napolean.Sitting behind a desk is Ashoka, leaning over a mirror,squeezing a balky pimple.Near a large window, his 60-year-old father, GHATAK, ina European jacket and dhoti, works with intense concentrationat repairing a pair of broken glasses with atwist of fine wire.The three new arrivals stand silent and respectfulbefore the desk. At last, without raising his head...ASHOKANot a tongue between you then?(CONTINUED)37.CONTINUED:RAMYes, yes, I am wondering, sir,we are, is it possible you mighthave something for my friend?Ram indicates Hasari, as if there might be some questionto whom he's referring. Ashoka attacks the pimple.RAMLet me explain it for your ears,sir. My cousin from Bihar hasjust arrived in our city --GOONDAThey've brought a small present-- of respect.The Goonda places a small bundle of rupees on the desk.

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Ashoka allows himself a disinterested glance atHasari.ASHOKASo, you want to be a human horse?RAMOh yes! I have personally witnessedhis excellence -- yes.ASHOKAHe doesn't talk? Can he neigh atleast?(to Hasari)You -- do your ears function?HASARIOh yes, Babu. Can I... uhm...?ASHOKANeigh! Like a horse.Ashoka pulls back his lips, shows his teeth and imitatesa neigh: "Ne-igh! Ne-igh!"HASARIWell, yes, Babu, I can do that.Would you like me to imitate ahorse?Finished with the pimple, Ashoka wipes a finger on hisshirt and takes a helping off a plate of sweetcakesas...38.ANOTHER ANGLEBehind him, The Godfather walks up to the desk, puttinghis glasses on. He barely glances at his son, butwaves him out of the chair.Ashoka doesn't like it, but he steps aside. As he does,he turns a look of hatred on Hasari. Through no fault ofhis own, Hasari has made an enemy. Ghatak chews on a panand casts a benevolent eye on Hasari.GHATAKLift your longhi.Hasari does. The Godfather looks at his legs and thighs.GHATAKThe wise men of our nation say thatnirvana is the attainment of astate of supreme detachment. Forme, nirvana is counting eachevening, one by one, the rupeesearned by my two thousand andforty-six rickshaws.Hasari doesn't know whether to respond. A glance atRam tells him not to. Ghatak gestures for Hasari to

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lower his longhi.GHATAKYou are with family?HASARII have a wife and three children,Babu.GHATAKAnd they must eat, heh. Theworld is full of open mouths.He chews on this a moment, then opens a drawer... andholds a small, tinkling rickshaw bell toward Hasari.Hasari understands that, incredibly, he has a job. Hisbreath is so shallow, he can barely utter his gratitude.He takes the bell.HASARII shall be eternally grateful toyou. From now on, I shall be asthe youngest of your brothers.GHATAKStay loyal. These days, it's acrop nobody plants.The Godfather turns his beatific and Godlike smile onHasari Pal.(CONTINUED)39.EXT. MATTRESS SIGN - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Transitor MUSIC. The Pals load the rickshaw that standsat the road with Ram in it. There are embraces with thebruised Arun and his family.EXT. SQUARE - NIGHT (EARLY EVENING)We hear the BELL TINKLING as the rickshaw, pulled byHasari, carrying Ram and Aloka (holding Shambu) arrives(Amrita and Manooj trotting beside their father). Surya,Selima, other neighbors greet them as they come. ThePals glance into the school at Joan, who's teachingan evening class.WITH PALSReverentially, they follow Ram inside as Joan watches.INT. RAM'S HUT - NIGHTA door opens. Moonlight. Faces peer through the door.Ram lights an oil lamp. In the glow, the family looksaround their tiny space. Hardly able to suppress smiles.HASARISomeone has blessed us. A job, aroof, a school. Soon I'll be ableto send money home...(looking at Amrita)

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... and put away a little bit foryour dowry.In their excitement, the boys run.OUTSIDEand up to the roof, under the stars. We LOOK UP WITHthem and:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. GREEN ACRES - ON SKY - NIGHTPAN DOWN TO Max on his balcony playing his trumpet as wecontinue toDISSOLVE TO BLACK.40.FADE IN:EXT. SQUARE AND STREET (CITY OF JOY) - DAYAbout twenty tattered street kids faces shining with enjoyment.They run and shout as they pursue somethingjust out of frame.WIDE SHOTThe cause of the excitement is Hasari running TOWARD us,feet flying, as he pulls the rickshaw, loaded with a hugesack. Manooj and Shambu are clinging to the sides of themachine.Ram stands in the center of the square. He shouts acommand and Hasari struggles to bring the rickshaw to astop. It's not easy and Sunil -- who's arriving -- has tojump out of the way to the accompaniment of apologies fromHasari and Ram and hoots of laughter from the children.Outside the clinic, a line of perhaps seventy-five waitpatiently, watching as Hasari takes off again. The wheelsof the rickshaw hit a rut. Hasari loses control, the sacktips back and Hasari is lifted into the air, feet kickingas he tries to regain his balance. Aloka and Amrita,sitting near the bawling Ram, can't hold back theirlaughter.EXT. SQUARE - HIGH ANGLE - DAYThe square is set with obstacles. As Ram shouts instruction,we see Hasari negotiate them with much increasedskill. He stops in front of a small group. It's hisfamily, plus Joan and Surya. With an exhausted smile, hesigns to Aloka and Amrita to get in. They do, and Hasaritakes them triumphantly around the circuit.HIGH ANGLEHasari's triumphant ride continues and we:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. PARK STREET - DAYHasari rubs the moonstone in his ring on the shafts, then

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touches his heart and his forehead. A SCHOOL GIRL inuniform, approaches the rickshaw stand. We also seeseveral other pullers, Rassoul, Chomotkar, Ramatullah.SCHOOL GIRLRickshaw wallah!(CONTINUED)41.CONTINUED:RAMLet Hasari go!The line of rickshaw pullers turns to Hasari. The otherpullers wish him well as he comes forward. His heartpounds; ever so politely, he helps the School Girl intohis carriage. She gives him the address of the St. PiusSchool.HASARII'm sorry, I don't know where thatis. You're my very first passenger.SCHOOL GIRLReally. Well, I hope I bring youluck.She gives him a sweet smile.SCHOOL GIRLThat way, and then to the right.His moment has arrived. He looks at Ram... and thrustshis hips forward, setting off into the insanity of thetraffic, eyes flicking left and right. A HORN RAILS athim and a taxi tries to run him down, calling and laughingas Hasari jumps in terror.RAM(calling)Feed the police!Other pullers laugh, call after Hasari... and as heapproaches the first corner, he manages to pull out arupee and deposit it into the hand of the impassivetraffic policeman and then turn right.EXT. ST. PIUS - DAYThe School Girl hands him a slip of paper.SCHOOL GIRLThis is my home address. Pick meup promptly at seven each morning.HASARIYes, thank you, you can depend onme.The girl runs into the school yard, met immediately byfriends. Hasari looks around at the clean, bustlingschool, at all the children in their crisp uniforms and

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a look of great yearning comes over his face.42.INT. SMALL RESTAURANT - DAYMax is trying to explain to the waiter what he wants.MAXBeef. You know -- cow? Minced,little salt, pepper, slap it flatlike this, throw it on the grill,flip it.Now, though, he just glimpses the shiny gas tank andengine of a motorcycle around the hip of the waiter.He leans out.ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka, astride his motorcycle, GUNNING the ENGINE as aboy runs out of a store with an armload of cassettes.WITH MAX AND WAITERMAXPut it on the grill, I'll be rightback.WITH ASHOKAHe pulls the boy's ear, REVS the ENGINE to go... andsenses someone close. He turns to find an Americanhovering at his shoulder.MAXYou know, I have to say youreally don't look Jewish. Ibelieve that's mine.He reaches for the necklace with the Hebrew letter.Ashoka recognizes Max. Looks around for help. There isnone.ASHOKADon't touch me. No one touches me.MAXReally?Max grabs Ashoka... who breaks free, and GUNS the CYCLEdown a side street. Max gives chase, his aching ribsslowing him a bit.43.SEVERAL CUTSAshoka, glancing back, begins to open up some distance.Yet, Max hangs tough, weaving like a broken field runnerthrough the mass of bodies and vehicles. Now, suddenly,he loses Ashoka. He has to make a choice about thiscorner or that one. He chooses.EXT. CITY OF JOY - AROUND CORNER - DAY (EARLY EVENING)A COP steps into his path. He sees Ashoka up ahead. He'shopelessly out of breath.

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MAXOh... great... good...good timing...him!He can't talk and breathe. He points desperately. TheCop glances where Max points, but he makes no move togive chase.COPMay I see your passport?MAXPassport? I'm in the middle of ahigh speed chase. That guy --COPPassport please.A crowd has begun to form. In the distance, we see agroup of girls carrying cricket equipment COMING AT us.MAXIt's in my hotel room.COPPassport, please, now.MAXReady my lips: I do not have mypassport with me at this...(he gets it)Ah, I see, said the blind man.The Cop obviously is doing this at Ashoka's behest. Maxstarts around the Cop. The Cop, however, sticks his clubin Max's face; there's fire in Max's eyes... but a handtakes the Cop's stick before Max can make a big mistake.44.ANOTHER ANGLE - FAVORING OWNER OF HANDThe girls with the cricket equipment (and Margareta,the teacher). The hand belongs to Joan Bethel.JOANWell, all right, junior, so you'llowe me three.EXT. POST OFFICE - DAYA scribe finishes writing a note home for Hasari. Thescribe hands it to Hasari.INSERT - NOTE AND MONEY ORDER"We are well. Manooj does not go in the cinema. I amearning my living as a rickshaw wallah. It is myhonor to send you this."RESUMEWith great pride, Hasari pays the scribe, seals the moneyorder with the message in an envelope, licks the flap,and puts the envelope into the mail slot.EXT. SQUARE (CITY OF JOY) - TEA SHOP - DAY (DUSK)

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Surya plays his zither. Max and Joan sit at a table. Maxpops little boiled candies into his mouth from a dish onthe table.JOANOh, it was just a whim in thebeginning really -- to try toconvince them not to be so bloodypassive, that they could pullthemselves up on their own. Iget a little money from a Swissorganization. Now it's become abit more than I can manage.MAXIt's got to be like trying todrill a hole in water, though.JOANWe just need a few more hands onthis little life raft we've setafloat here.(CONTINUED)45.CONTINUED:They stare at each other. Shambu has become one ofSurya's tea boys and refills their tea.JOANYou know what I've come to thinkin my middle age, Max?MAXNope, no, earthly idea. You'repretty much outta my league,thought-wise.JOANThere are really only threeactions open to a person.MAXOnly three -- okay. And what arethey?JOANTo run, to spectate, to commit.Max peers at her a moment, then around the square.MAXHas it occurred to you that thisobsession with charity is really aflaw in your character?JOANCharity! It's not charity, dearchild, it's love. You're very

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badly twisted around, aren't you?MAXOne of us sure as hell is.The clinic's part-time doctor, SUNIL DASGUPTA, comes outof the clinic after a very long day.SUNILI'm off for home, Sister Joan. Apleasure to meet you, Dr. Loeb.MAXThe same.SUNILSee you day after tomorrow.JOANGood night, God bless, Doctor.(a beat)Generous young man.(CONTINUED)46.CONTINUED:As he watches Sunil head away, Max senses something comingat him from the side. A soccer ball almost hits him;he jumps up, handles the ball athletically.SQUAREHe begins to play with Manooj and several other children.Shambu leaves his post in the tea shop to join them.MANOOJAre you the American doctor? Areyou coming here to help us.MAXNo, I'm the visiting Americansoccer star, El Max.MANOOJDo you go to the cinema inAmerica, El Max?MAXWhen I was your age -- two movies,plus cartoons every Saturday.Aloka and Amrita are cooking on an open fire bucket. Maxalmost knocks the fire over. Aloka looks at him, apologetic,shy... as Manooj knocks Shambu down at Max's feet.Max scoops the little boy up...MAXThere you go, little guy. Ut --what's this?Reaching behind Shambu's ear, Max produces a boiled sweet.Aloka watches this with a smile; their eyes touch again...as Manooj lets out a cry at the sight of their father.

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ANOTHER ANGLERam and Hasari return home. Hasari can hardly walk.Shambu runs to his father, explaining excitedly...SHAMBUDaddy, there is the doctor fromAmerica. He saw two movies everySaturday. What's in your fist?Open, Daddy!Shambu pries his father's fist open: seeds.(CONTINUED)47.CONTINUED:SHAMBUSeeds? Why?HASARISo we can watch something grow.EXT. RAM'S HUNT NIGHT - UPSTAIRSChildren leaning down as smoke wafts up. We FOLLOW thesmoke DOWN TO Max's cigar. Aloka and Amrita laying thefood out. Shambu rubbing his father's aching legs asHasari and Manooj plant the seeds in Hasari's little teacaddy full of earth from home. Max is watching this"family" huddled around the father.RAMAnother few months, I'll be ableto pay off the moneylender in myvillage and go home and open agrocery shop. All around me sacksoverflowing with all kinds of daland rice, aromatic spices, pilesof vegetables... and at night, I'lllie on my back beneath the treessniffing fresh aubergines.This beautiful picture burrows into Hasari's mind. Fora moment, he goes there -- home, to the village...RAMIf my wife will let me come withina hundred miles of the place whereshe herself resides.Ram laughs, Hasari smiles...HASARIAmrita, I saw a beautiful weddingsari today.Amrita is terribly embarrassed.RAMIt was six hundred rupees only.He laughs at the impossibility of the price.

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MAXThat's only 40 dollars, isn't it?HASARIIf you have it.(CONTINUED)48.CONTINUED:MAXI'll send it to you from Americawhen I get home tomorrow.HASARIThat's very generous but no,thank you.MAXRepayment for punching you in thenose.HASARIYou have repaid me by sharing oursupper.Joan indicates that Max should let it go. Hasari everso carefully waters the tea box.RAMDoctor Big Brother, I myself wouldbe willing to accept a gift. Couldyou give me five rupees in a note --ten, perhaps. My ankle is badlyswelled; the higher the number themore the swelling sinks.Max has to laugh.MAXI don't have a cent on me. I'llowe you.RAMHow much?Now everyone's attentions is taken by a CRY from Shambu,who expels his breath, his terrified eyes directing ourattention to...ANOTHER ANGLEIt's an amazing sight. Two lepers: ANOUAR, bearded witha sharp intelligent, unmarked face, makes his way alongon a small wheeled board, at an amazingly fast pace,ahead of SAID, a huge, mute leper. They stop some feetaway. Lepers aren't often welcome. Out from behind Saidsteps Poomina.POOMINAJoan Di, my sister!(CONTINUED)

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49.CONTINUED:She sees Max, gasps, throws herself behind Said. Joanlooks at Max -- he starts to speak, she points a fingerthat silences him...JOANIt was Poomina who brought you tous. She has herself and hersister to support. It's all right,Poomina. Anouar, what is it?She moves to them. They're all three badly out of breath.WITH JOAN AND LEPERSANOUARIt's Meeta! It's her time. Butsomething is wrong. The midwivesdon't know what to do! Dr. Sunil,could he help, perhaps?JOANDr. Sunil isn't here.POOMINAMeeta will die.ANOTHER ANGLEJoan turns to Max, who hasn't heard the exchange.JOANMax, I wouldn't ask, but it's anemergency. A pregnancy gone awry.It's a leper. Could you have alook?Max is clearly thrown by the sight of the lepers.MAXI don't have any experience withleprosy.JOANGood Christ, son, because she'sa leper doesn't mean she's notbuilt like a woman!HASARII can run and get Dr. Sunil.JOANIt's too far.(CONTINUED)50.CONTINUED:Suddenly, impulsively...ALOKAI could help. I've had threebabies.

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RAMYou can't do that. They'reoutcasts, they're unclean.There are murmurs of assent from the others.JOANOh nonsense! It's not contagious!A beat -- everyone fixed on Max.HASARIYou're a doctor, how can you nothelp?EXT. PATH-NIGHTThe moon reflects off the dark puddles of muddy waterthat line the side of the railway tracks. Anouarpropels his board with astonishing agility along thepath, Said and Poomina running with him. Max, Joan,carrying a first aid bag, Aloka and Hasari following,slipping and sliding on the rough ground with itspuddles and sewage.EXT. RAILWAY LINE - LEPER HUTS - NIGHTThe little procession arrives outside the three roughhuts, made of bamboo, plastic sheeting, cloth, woodand cardboard. A few shadows materialize. Lepers --staring silently.Anouar points into a hut. Joan and Aloka precede Maxinside. Max forgets to bend and bumps his head.INT. HUT - NIGHTThe only light is the feeble waver from a candle. Theblind Meeta lies on a rough mattress on the ground. Herragged sari is pulled up to her middle. Her face runswith sweat, her hair is plastered to her face. A girlwith black eyes is fanning her with a piece of wood.Meeta sends up a SOFT, uninterrupted MOAN. A wedge ofblood-soaked cloth is between her legs.(CONTINUED)51.CONTINUED:A middle-age leper is leaning over her -- a midwife,encouraging Meeta with a string of commands in theirown language.Max kneels, Aloka at his side. His breathing becomesshallow... but then he pulls off the blood-soakedbandages. Between Meeta's legs he can just make outthe bottom of a foot. The child is breached. Maybealready dead.ALOKAWill she die?Max goes into reflex actions. Joan has opened the first

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aid kit. There's a flashlight among the medicine,alcohol, compresses, scissors, etc. He hands the flashlightto Aloka as...MAX(to Joan)Pull me two c.c.'s of Coramine.He nods at Aloka; she illuminates the scene.MAXUh-oh, uh-oh, who's this coming'down the lane? Why it's -- is itpossible -- way over here, inIndia -- yes, it's Mr. Choke.He comes to a stop. Everyone stares at him. Meetamoans. For a moment, he stays frozen. Aloka reachesout instinctively, wipes the sweat from his eyes. Thisgesture seems to free him; he looks at her, looks at theroom and its expectant, trusting faces...MAXI'm going to have to turn it --the baby. Tell her she has torelax these muscles as much asshe can.He doesn't finish the sentence. Aloka speaks softly toMeeta as Max takes Meeta's arm, makes a tourniquet.Joan hands him the syringe and he injects. Hands thesyringe back to Joan and begins to work at turning thebaby.Aloka takes Meeta's hand and it's a moment before werealize Aloka, with her fine hand, is holding Meeta'sfingerless palm.52.OUTSIDEA small group waits, trying to determine from the soundswhat's happening inside. Anouar pours tea from a pot onthe small fire, offers the cup to Hasari. Hasari staresat the cup, doesn't want to be impolite, but more thanthat, doesn't want to touch the cup. He shakes his head,smiles. Anouar drinks off the tea.INSIDESweat pours down Max's face into his eyes. He shakes itout. Aloka leans forward and, with her new sari, wipesthe sweat away again. Max nods thanks.MAXTell her again to breathe in shortlittle bursts now.He demonstrates. Aloka does the same to Meeta. Meetatries to cooperate. And suddenly Max has the baby

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turned.MAXAll right! Now, tell her to push.Aloka translates. Meeta pushes. The midwife, the littlegirl, Aloka lean forward.MAXAgain. Yes! Again. It's coming.OUTSIDENo one is sitting now. Everyone hangs close to thedoor. Only Hasari remains apart, seated on a tree stumpin the middle of the quad. He coughs; suppresses it.INSIDEMAXI've got the head. Come on,little baby, come on, littlebaby. Be alive, be alive, bealive.Aloka wipes the sweat away again. He looks at her, hisvoice squeezed out through his teeth.MAXWe've got it, we've got it. Yeah!(CONTINUED)53.CONTINUED:He seems as released as Meeta. Then he gives a lastgentle tug and a CRY squeezes out of the little piece oflife in his hands. Max is fairly overwhelmed by the lifein his hands. Poomina steps close, a smile on her lovelyface, and touches the baby in Max's hands.EXT. LANE - NIGHTMax, Joan, Aloka and Hasari walk in silence down NizamudhinLane. There is only the mingled sound of COUGHING,MOANING, and a TRANSISTOR RADIO nearby playing a popularsong. Outside the clinic, they stop. She takes his hand.JOANFor a non-practicing doctor, thatwas pretty practiced.MAXNever been so scared in my life.It's a warm, open moment between them. But now there'sthe ongoing desperation of her needs.JOANMax, please, won't you change yourmind? We desperately need anotherdoctor. Full-time. Think aboutit -- just give us a couple ofmonths.

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MAXCan't do it. Maybe you've got itin you to be a saint. I justdon't.JOANThen what do you want? What areyou going to be when you grow up?Good night, Aloka, Hasari.Joan goes inside, leaving Max, Aloka, and a very uncomfortableHasari alone a moment.ALOKAThank you for allowing me to gowith you.MAXYou could make a helluva nurse.A little smile comes over her face; no one's ever paidher that kind of compliment. She goes into Ram's hut,leaving Max and Hasari now.(CONTINUED)54.CONTINUED:HASARII think perhaps you are a goodman.Hasari brings his hands together and goes inside.EXT./INT. JOAN'S AND THE PAL'S (ALTERNATE) - NIGHTMax hears Joan praying inside.JOAN (O.S.)Jesus, my brother, you who I amtrying to believe are the lightand salvation of the puking world...THE PALSAloka sits huddled with her husband while their childrensleep; they listen...JOAN (O.S.)Please see that we are living inmadness and darkness here...MAXlistens.JOAN (O.S.)... and we need help. Om, Jesus,om and amen.Suddenly, he hurtles into motion. He runs down the alley,his stride stretching out, swallowing up the distancebetween here and the world beyond the City of Joy in

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great gulps.EXT. CALCUTTA AIRPORT - ESTABLISHING - DAYA busy, urban airport as opposed to the small countryairport in which we saw Max earlier. V.O. we hear...BETSY (V.O.)Yes, yes, yes, that's right, yes!I turned in your ticket!55.INT. AIRPORT - DAYIt's a small place; it's sweltering, and it's packedwith hundreds of families shoulder to shoulder. ThoughBetsy's trying to be discreet, it's not a very privateplace, as we see by the number of people watching Maxand Betsy.BETSYI bought it, I got a refund!MAXBut I want to go home with you.BETSYYou want to go home with me?MAXYes.BETSYThen prove it.MAXGood -- how -- name it.BETSYBuy yourself a ticket.MAXI would love to do that, BetsyIlene, boy would I love to dojust that, but I'm financiallyembarrassed at the --BETSYUse your credit cards.MAXWhat credit cards? You know Imaxed them before we left. Justlend me --BETSYNo! You won't pay me back; younever have. Oh, Max!MAXThey're calling our flight. Iwant to go home with you, BetsyIlene Kahn. Because I have avision. It's...

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He's trying to woo and charm her. He mimes a kind ofhouse shape.(CONTINUED)56.CONTINUED:MAXI see you and me, Betsy IleneKahn, nibbling toward each otherthrough a quarter pounder withcheese, chugalugging a frostylight beer -- great taste! Lessfilling! Bowling! I want to gobowling, Besty Ilene Kahn!He fires a strike through the watching crowd.MAXI want... Oh, my Lord Amighty, Iwant so many American things --BETSYOh, stop it! You have no earthlyidea what you want, Max! Andstop calling me Betsy Ilene Kahn.MAXIsn't that your name?BETSYYou call me Betsy Ilene Kahn likeyou just met me yesterday.MAXWhat should I call you? My girl,my significant other --BETSYDon't get cute! You get cute andI swear to God --- you told me onceI look like my mother!MAXYou do -- so what?BETSYSee -- you don't understand!MAXHow could I possibly notunderstand a conversation as easyas this one, Betsy Ilene.BETSYI hate you!MAXNa ya don't.(CONTINUED)57.

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CONTINUED:BETSYI stood by you for three years!MAXI know.BETSYI supported you through yourinternship!MAXYou did.BETSYWhy? It was never working. Whathave I been thinking all theseyears -- that you'd change?You're the most self-pitying,self-destructive, self...She can't find anything fierce enough, so she abates,tries to get it together to make a dignified exit.BETSYBut you've taught me something,Max. You never finish anything.Well, I quit. I've found mylight and I'm free of you.She heads for the gate, people parting to give her awide berth.MOVING SHOT - TOWARD THE GATEMAXWill you at least call my motherand ask her to empty my savingsaccount and wire --BETSYDo it yourself, Max. Call hercollect. You should have calledher weeks ago anyway just becauseshe's your mother!(to herself)White light, white light...!She hands her ticket and boarding pass over and she'sthrough the gate. Max turns to find the audience fixedon him.(CONTINUED)58.CONTINUED:MAXGuerilla theater, folks. 'All theworld's a stage.' Don't know ifthat word reached you here yet.

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If you'd care to show yourappreciation by a small donation...Many smiles... and several instant offers of rupees. Abeat, then...MAXAw, what the hell.... Swallowing his incredible embarrassment, Max takesthe money.EXT. SQUARE - DAY (EARLY MORNING)The line is long. At this moment, Joan is checking achild's throat with a tongue-depressor. Aloka is walkingbeside her with a fistful of depressors and a bag fordisposal. Hasari and Ram are getting ready to leave.Anouar appears at Joan's waist.ANOUARGood morning, Joan Di. Dr. Loebsaid many of us could be helped;that all it would take is moneyfor medication.Anouar hands Joan some newspaper in which something iswrapped. Joan opens the paper. Inside is a good deal ofmoney.ANOUARPlease buy the medication for us.If we cannot come here to receiveit, perhaps Dr. Loeb would cometo us.JOANI'll be happy to buy the medication,but Dr. Loeb is not part of thisendeavor, Anouar; there is only hischerished memory.ANOUARThen perhaps I am having visions.Anouar's focus is up the lane. Joan follows his focusto:59.THEIR POVMax approaches. A buzz about Max's heroics; hands comingtogether. Max raises a hand in benediction, makes thesign of the cross. Max claps Hasari on the shoulder;Hasari brings his hands together and gives Max agenuinely pleased smile. Children circle and touch him,Manooj and Shambu among them.BACK TO SCENEMAXGood morning! Good morning!

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Heckuva morning! Getting readyto practice medicine without alicense, Sister Joan? You don'tsee me soliciting conversions,do you?JOANWell, well, well, I do so love tobe surprised.MAXOkay, for starters, pick me outsomeone with something easy I canheal, make me look good.(to Aloka)Aloka, you're my assistant, let'sgo.Aloka smiles, she nods, she accepts.JOANMax, knock it off, give us a bitof hush.(as he does)What happened?MAXI changed my mind.JOANAnd I'm a bloody bathing beauty.MAXOkay, so I got left.JOANSmart girl... So how long am Istuck with you?MAXTwo weeks -- or until Mom sends mea ticket.(CONTINUED)60.CONTINUED:JOANNot worth the aggravation of yourprattle every day. Six months --and not a day less.MAXNo way. Six weeks -- and that'smy best offer.JOANTwo months -- and that's my finaloffer.MAX

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(a beat)Done.JOANJesus and Mary. The Lone Rangerrides again.And now smiles creep onto all their faces as Max goesinside, followed by Joan... and then Aloka -- after shelooks at Hasari, gets his nod of encouragement. Too late,Joan says...JOANWatch your --Thud!MAXThanks -- got it.The children titter. The teacher, Margareta, admonishesthem to pay attention and be polite... as we --FADE OUT.FADE IN:EXT. SCHOOL GIRL'S HOUSE - HASARI'S WHEELS - DAY (TWOWEEKS LATER)The wheels spinning furiously and then stopping abruptly.Hasari, dripping with sweat, panting. The School Girlcomes running toward him. After her, in the b.g., herMOTHER.SCHOOL GIRLHasari, where have you been? I'vebeen waiting almost five minutes.(CONTINUED)61.CONTINUED:HASARII'm sorry, forgive me. It won'thappen again.SCHOOL GIRLWe're not going to school today.You're taking my mother and me tothe Bara Bazar. I'm gettingmarried!HASARIOh, I am so pleased for you!Panting helplessly, Hasari smiles... as he helps theSchool Girl's Mother into the rickshaw.MOTHERGood morning, Hasari.HASARIGood morning, missus.Briskly, he takes up the shafts and sets off.

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MOTHERTurn right at that corner, Hasari.HASARIIt's farther that way, missus.MOTHERNo, not really. Turn there,please.Obediently, Hasari turns (as Ramatullah, heading theother way, passes; they wave) and Hasari pulls AWAY FROMus.EXT. SECOND WEDDING SHOP - DAYHe helps them out of the rickshaw in front of anexpensive-looking bridal shop.SCHOOL GIRLYou must remember this shop,Hasari, when it's your daughter'stime. This is the nicest in thecity.The Mother gives the School Girl a withering look andhustles her into the shop. Hasari can just barelyhear...(CONTINUED)62.CONTINUED:MOTHER (O.S.)Don't say things like that. He'snever going to be able to buyanything here.ON HASARIHe watches from outside, a look of determination comingover his face. Suddenly a pair of fingers takes hold ofhis ear, twisting his face painfully.ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka, with The Goonda and two henchmen, in the b.g.ASHOKANot working? How will my fathereat this evening?HASARII was just...ASHOKAYou have a daughter?HASARIYes, Babu.MARWARI (O.S.)Rickshaw wallah!Called to work, Hasari starts for his rickshaw, butAshoka hangs on to his ear for another uncomfortable

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moment... as he slips a rupee into Hasari's shirt pocket.ASHOKAKeep working. Give this to SisterJoan and your friend the doctorwhen you go home.Now he hands Hasari a sealed envelope and turns his earloose. Hasari springs toward his passenger.INT. EXAMINING ROOM - DAYMax with his stethoscope to Meeta's baby. Meeta in abrightly-colored sari and a lot of bracelets and Alokalooks on. Poomina clings to the wall.(CONTINUED)63.CONTINUED:MAXHe's just malnourished. Is shegiving him the milk we gave her orselling it?Aloka asks Meeta in Hindi. Meeta clearly swears she'sgiving the baby the milk. Aloka pushes her.ALOKANot all. Most.MAXTell her to give all the milk tothe baby.Aloka does so as Max bounces the baby, coos to it playfully.The baby pees all over him. Aloka translatesquickly. Meeta starts apologizing. Poomina can't helplaughing. Max reminds Meeta that that's once for eachof the two weeks of the baby's life. Aloka soothes Meetaas she hustles her, Poomina, and the baby out, thenquickly begins to wipe Max's face with a clean rag. Thisisn't something she's accustomed to doing, but she'sdoing it before she has time to think. Max finds himselfconscious of her closeness to him... and then she becomessuddenly self-conscious and she backs off, ducks herhead. He peeks up under.MAXPsst.She looks at him.MAXIt's okay.He smiles. So does she.EXT. SQUARE - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Sunil stands outside the clinic, rolling his sleevesdown. Anouar waits at a polite distance. Exhausted butexhilarated, Max and Aloka emerge with an elderly woman

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patient, Max singing Chuck Berry to the woman's embarrasseddelight: "They're really rockin' in Boston, inPhiladelphia, P.A..." Sunil looks at his Americancolleague, smiles a small smile.SUNILGood night, I'll see you day aftertomorrow.MAXGood night, Sunil.(CONTINUED)64.CONTINUED:"... Deep in the heart of Texas, around the FriscoBay..." Manooj and Shambu come charging at Max with thesoccer ball, hoping to engage him as a playmate. Hasarireturns home with his rickshaw.Selima waves at Max, indicates she's cooking dinner.Joan wanders out of the school as the kids are releasedand go charging through the square. Joan has the Palkids in hand.SELIMAVery special supper for youtonight, Doctor Big Brother! Willyou stay?MAXWish I could, Selima, because I'msure hungry! Sixteen hours ofpestilence and misery always makeme famished. I have to go with myman Anouar tonight. I've gotlepers to heal!ANOUARNo, no, you know how patient weare. Eat, eat.MAX(to Aloka)You're not tired, are you?ALOKANot if you're not.Between Hasari and Aloka, there's just a flicker oftension; evidently, this has become Max's (and her)normal day. But he's also worried about the note fromAshoka. Joan joins them with the Pal children.JOANWell, I think we've got three verygood potential scholars here.Behind the children's backs, she points at Manooj and

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indicates the kid's really got a head.JOANGiven him some time here, he'llbe good enough for a proper school.HASARIIt's more than a father could hope.(CONTINUED)65.CONTINUED:MAXFifteen years from now: Miami,Florida, Dr. Manooj Pal, inassociation with Dr. Maxwell Loeb.For a moment, Hasari is swept up in this little reverie,then remembers reality.HASARI(giving her the note)From the godfather's son. For youand the doctor.Amidst instant concern, Joan opens the envelope. Looksat Max. We hear the sound of BANGLADESH MUSIC.INT. GODFATHER'S "THRONE ROOM" - OLD RADIO - DAYThe MUSIC is of days gone by, playing on an old RADIO.Sticks of burning incense send off trails of smoke. Thegodfather, MR. GHATAK, Looking infirm, wipes a tear fromhis eye.GHATAKAcha!Now we see Max and Joan seated on cushions before thegodfather, tea in hand. Max catches a glimpse in ananteroom of several thugs with several young girls, oneof whom is Poomina. She catches a glimpse of Max as shedisappears past a door. A moment later, her head peeksaround the door frame. She brings her hands together.ASHOKA (O.S.)You!Poomina quickly disappears. Max's attention is pulledback to the godfather...GHATAKI understand that you're interestedin expanding your clinic and freeschool, and that you intend tostart treating lepers in the Cityof Joy.JOANWe'd like to better serve theentire community, Mr. Ghatak.

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(CONTINUED)66.CONTINUED:GHATAKOf course. That's very good.Admirable. And we'd be pleased torent you suitable space. But youmust understand that certainpayments will go up.JOANI understand the rent would haveto go up if we rent largerquarters from you, Mr. Ghatak, butwhy should we have to pay moreprotection?GHATAKMore people, more potentialtrouble. Strangers. If I don'tcharge you, what will I tellothers?JOANBut we can't afford it!GHATAKSurely if you can expand, you canpay more.Joan throws up her hands -- how do you reason with thisman?MAXAm I stupid, but isn't thisprotection money money we'repaying you to protect us from you?GHATAKWe live in chaotic times, MissBethel, Doctor. I control theCity of Joy and maintain it as amodel of harmony. It's a miracle,but a very fragile miracle.MAXAnd how are we threatening yourmiracle?GHATAKI admire your courage in choosingto work in such a violent place,Miss Bethel.(MORE)(CONTINUED)67.

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CONTINUED:GHATAK (CONT'D)Your neighbors in the City of Joy,they're not educated, they'regiven to violence, to meanness, Ican promise you they won't likehaving lepers among them, butbecause they know you're under myprotection...He dispatches a globule of spit into the copper urn nextto his right toe... and tries to get to his feet. TheGoonda hurries forward to help him.GHATAKDoctor, do you like our music?MAXWell, I can't say I've developed acraving for it yet.GHATAKIt's difficult to appreciate whatwe don't understand, isn't it?Let me put it another way: Theworld is a terrible place. Onlythe ruthless prevail. My son willmake the arrangements with you.One of the thugs helps the godfather outside, where, inthe b.g., we see him listening to his music and potteringin his garden. As Max and Joan turn, Max finds himselfface to face with Ashoka, who wears Max's necklace andchai. There's a long pause as the two of them take theother's measure.MAX(to Ashoka)I like your taste in neckwear.Joan puts a cautioning hand on Max's arm. Ashoka seemsjust the slight bit uneasy dealing with Max and so keepstrying to direct himself to Joan. He smokes a longIndian cigarette.ASHOKAThe entire package we're proposingwill cost you three thousand rupeesa month.Joan is taken aback by the sum.JOANIf we pay you that, we won't haveany money for supplies.(CONTINUED)68.

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CONTINUED:ASHOKAI'm told you're very resourceful.MAXI think I see a solution. May I?What if we were to work out aprofit-sharing arrangement? Wegive you a share of our net profit.ASHOKAHow do you expect to make a profitoff of lepers and the poor, Doctor?MAXBeats the hell outta me, asshole.But you've obviously found a way.The question would seem to be whether Ashoka will haveMax killed here or outside the house. His eyes on Max,Ashoka puts the cigarette out against the back of hishand... and smiles at Max.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYJoan is furious.JOANHave you gone right off yourrocker!? These people don't havea sense of humor. Are you tryingto get yourself killed?MAXI don't think so... but with me,any duplicity is possible.He tickles her; she knocks his hands away; he tickles heragain.JOANStop it, you... you... you nudnick!He doesn't stop, and as she storms off down the street,he stays right on her, tickling away.INT. METAL PIECEWORK SHOP - DAYIt's dark and claustrophobic. The air vibrates with theSQUEAL and CLATTER of METAL. About twenty kids sit in aline, back to back, manipulating a series of lethal andunprotected lathes and polishers. No one can hear hisneighbor.69.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari, with Shambu in the rickshaw, arrives to take thechildren home. As he looks inside, he notices...HASARI'S POVNot far from Amrita sits a handsome boy (Subash). Hecatches Amrita's eyes. Amrita is sweetly embarrassed

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to find her father staring at her.ON HASARIBut he can't help but smile. At the same time he's remindedmoment to moment of his various obligations.EXT. SIDE STREET - DAYThe three kids in the rickshaw. An ambassador carswerves in front of Hasari, forcing him to jam to a stop,jolting the kids. The Goonda sits in the back seat withAshoka, who carves his fingernails with a switchbladeknife. He crooks a finger at Hasari. Hasari leans closeand Ashoka takes him by the ear.ASHOKAWho gave you your rickshaw?HASARIThe Godfather.ASHOKAWho provides the food you eat?HASARIThe Godfather.ASHOKARemember: Loyalty.He gives Hasari's ear a last tug... and the car continueson, leaving Hasari. He looks at his children, ashamedto have been cowed. Manooj fixes his father with a hardlook.EXT. JOAN'S ROOM - KIDS - ABOVE - NIGHTLeaning over, listening, taking in the aroma of...70.INT. JOAN'S ROOMMax's cigar. He sits slightly apart from Joan, Sunil,Aloka, Ram, Hasari, Selima, Margareta, Surya, SALADDIN,ASHISH and Shanta, Aristotle John, MEHBOUB, Anouar, andSaid.Hasari is stretched out, Aloka rubbing his screaminglegs. Throughout the following, their eyes meet anddeflect...SALADDINThe Godfather is at leastcivilized. The son is vicious.Remember the last elections -- theMolotov coctails, the blows withiron bars. They'll throw us out.We won't be able to find anyoneelse to rent to us. We'll justhave to agree to pay what hewants.MEHBOUB

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Saladdin's right. Neither naturenor the people with the powerhave any conscience. We have topay.A sigh escapes Surya. He shakes his head. Eyesflick at him.ASHISHWhat do you say, Doctor BigBrother?SUNILI think we must try to break theGodfather's hold on us.This is startling and is met with a babble of cautiousagreement and dispute.SUNILPlease, hear me out. But I thinkwe have to be very cautious.MAXHow the hell do you proceed withcaution against these people?You can't. You have to riskeverything.(MORE)(CONTINUED)71.CONTINUED:MAX (CONT'D)You try to negotiate with thesepeople, you make compromises withthem, they'll eat you alive. Standup against them now and they'llfold. I guarantee it. Underneath,they're cowards, they got no guts.We show them we're strong andthe'll just move on to easierpickings.ASHISHWe? You have an airplane ticket.Still, he's clearly piqued a lot of support.SUNILYou know, Max, this is notAmerican gangster television.SALADDINYes, if you're wrong, you don'thave to be here.MAXI'm not wrong. You bow your heads,

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you plead with your Gods to dowhat you won't do yourselves.You put up with this nightmareas if there were no choice. I'mtelling you, if you don't standup to that little pimple facenow, he'll own you for the restof your lives.Everyone stares at him. Many of them want to buy hiscommitment. There's another large sigh from Surya.Aloka and Hasari's eyes bang off of each other, shesilently urging him to speak. He's deeply conflictedand deeply frightened.ANOUAREven though I am invisible to someof you and I don't have a completeset of legs to stand on, I standwith the Doctor Big Brother. Maybenature doesn't have a conscienceor those with the power, but don'twe?Said, the giant mute, mades an unintelligible sound inhis throat, but clearly he's agreeing with Anouar.(CONTINUED)72.CONTINUED:MARGARETAI agree with Anouar and Max Daddah.I think it's worth the chance.Silence... until Aloka and Hasari's meet again and, outof his terrible fear and conflict, he says very shyly...HASARIIs it permitted to speak?There are quick nods around the room. With great difficulty,Hasari says his piece.HASARII want my children to be educatedand cared for; this is our home,we have never had such friends.But many of us owe a great debtto the Godfather. He is strongand could kill us... But we mustchoose. I trust my Big Brother.I say we must stand up.There's still dissension, but somewhat more support.Said makes a fierce, unintelligible supportive sound.Surya sighs again. Eyes flick at the old man.

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SUNILSister Joan, what do you think,really?JOANWell, I think Max has hit on theheart of what we're trying to buildhere: a self-help society. Eachof us has to decide for himself.As for me, I suppose I think,really, that if the bastards aregoing to suck us dry, I'd like toget in a couple of good lefthandersbefore I turn the othercheek.SALLADINBut who will rent to us!Surya clucks his tongue and shakes his head; everyoneassumes he is preparing a heated refutation of theresisters. His sighs, though, have been a buildingcommitment.(CONTINUED)73.CONTINUED:SURYAI have a property I will rent youfor two hundred rupees a month,and not a rupee less. As forprotection... you are on your own.Many of the faces are uncertain -- Hasari's notable amongthem.MONTAGE - INT./EXT. COWSHEDS - DAYA) Two cows are shooed out of the ramshackle building asbustling activity on the new clinic begins. Cleaningthe place. Debris being torn out, hurled into apile in the street.B) Said, with the strength of three men, holds up a heavybeam while Hasari tries to secure it. Max, hot,smelly, and hating the place, stands in the middle ofthe room, wishing he were elsewhere. The beams startsto slip. Max leaps to Hasari's side.C) We see that Max and Hasari are thrown together againin some carpentering task in uneasy camaraderie. Afinger pokes Max on the back. He turns to findPoomina holding out two cups of tea.D) The whole group shares a meal, prepared under thedirection of Selima, though the lepers remain separatefrom the normals. Anouar leads the lepers in singing

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a song. Joan and Margareta pick it up, as do severalother of the normals.E) Equipment from the old school/clinic being moved fromthe square down here.F) Max and Aloka do one of those dances where two peoplewith arms loaded try to go around each other. Finallyhe says he'll stand still and she should go aroundhim. They both laugh. Hasari watches.G) As Max puts medicine into a cabinet, Ram peeks in,nods his approval, "helpfully" passes Max somethingMax can reach just fine himself, shows Max an enormoushole in his shorts and hits Max for ten rupees.H) A small truck carrying a charitable organization'slogo on the side is being unloaded of powdered milkand various other things.(CONTINUED)74.CONTINUED:I) UPSTAIRS AND STAIRWELLHasari and Max move the last cot upstairs and intoplace beside a window that will come into play at theend (It looks down on the street). Hasari nods to Max,indicating he should look.J) THEIR POVEveryone gathered as Shanta and Ashish put a bannerabove the door: "You are invited to the festival ofthis world and your life is blessed." The assemblageapplauds and embraces.K) UPSTAIRSHasari smiles at Max, brings his hands together, butdoesn't embrace the doctor.EXT. CLINIC - NIGHTEveryone lingers, adults and children. Max plays histrumpet, accompanying Surya on his zither. Manoojhovers over Max.MANOOJDoctor Big Brother, aren't yougoing to smoke your evening cigar?Max points at his trumpet, continues playing.MANOOJPlease.Max indicates his pocket. Manooj takes out a cigar and aclip. Clips the cigar, holds it out to Max, who indicatesManooj should light it, and keeps playing. Manoojlooks at Hasari, who nods. Shambu holds a match to it.Everyone watches as if this were a major event. Manoojtakes a puff, chokes, offers the cigar to Mehboub, who

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takes it, puffs, passes it. Everyone relaxes, enjoys thepeacefulness of the smoking and the aroma wafting upward.Ram taps at Max's elbow.RAMIt has come to me tonight to writea letter to my wife.Ram produces a mangled one piece letter -- envelope.RAMPlease.(CONTINUED)75.CONTINUED:He thrusts the paper at Max. Max takes a pen from hispocket.MAXOkay -- shott.RAMYes -- what is the word -- thatword -- when land is watered...with canals?MAX"Irrigation"?RAMYes, yes, that word, I want thatword in the letter.Max looks at him, nods, waits. Ram stares at Max; waits.MAXWell?RAMWell?MAXWhat would you like to say toyour wife?RAMI don't know, Max Daddah. If Iknew what to say to my wife, I'dnever have left home.Everybody laughs, though Ram's remark hits Max on adeeper level. Manooj slides in beside him.MANOOJWhy do you have to go home, DoctorBabu?ALOKABecause he doesn't live here,Manooj. This is not his home.A look between Max and Aloka; Hasari's eyes flicking atboth of them... as Aloka's eyes come to Hasari. The

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cigar reaches Ram. As Max starts to write, Ram takesa large puff and blows a huge ring out of his mouth. WeFOLLOW it.76.ABOVEA whole row of faces on rooftops enjoying the cigar.This as we:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. GREEN ACRES - THROUGH RICKSHAW WHEELS - DAYTHROUGH the WHEELS we see Max come briskly out of thehotel carrying his doctor's bag. He's met by the sightof Hasari between the shafts of his rickshaw and Anouarand Meeta perched on the seat.MAXOn no! Lepers! Lepers in myneighborhood!ANOUARSshh! Doctor Big Brother,please, we are pretending notto be lepers.MAXOh, oh, I didn't get the concept-- of course, not lepers. I thinkyou're going to fool a lot ofpeople. I have only one question:Why are you here?ANOUARWe've come to take you to thedispensary in grand style on thisspecial day, haven't we, Hasari?HASARIYes.MAXNa, I'll just trot alongside Hasari.HASARINo, please, get in.Max climbs into the rickshaw beside the two lepers andHasari pulls away.ANOUARMeeta's very excited by this ridethrough Calcutta. You see, she'snever been sightseeing before.Meeta, of course, is blind. Max, Hasari, Anouar laugh.MAXYou're incorrigible, Anouar.(CONTINUED)77.

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CONTINUED:ANOUARYes, yes, I know, thank you verymuch.As the rickshaw disappears into the sea of people andvehicles, we hear Anouar and Max LAUGHING.EXT. SIDE STREET - DAYMargareta, Manooj, Shambu, Shoba, several other kids and,at the end of the line, Poomina, all carrying water ontheir heads toward the City of Joy. Suddenly, someonewhispers to Poomina. One of Ashoka's thugs. She glancesafter Margareta and the other kids who are turning acorner and steps into:ALLEYWAYWhere Ashoka waits.ASHOKAYou taking that to the clinic?(as she nods)You like it there?(as she nods)And they love your smile, don'tthey?She's fearful now and doesn't respond. He grabs her,the water pitcher crashes to the ground, he puts hisknife into her mouth and lays her face open on both sidewith his knife.EXT. CITY OF JOY - DAYAloka comes TOWARD us leading a group of lepers. Andstops. Her hand goes to her mouth.THEIR POV - CLINIC - FROM DISTANCETwo hundred normal people lined up outside the gaily bedeckeddispensary -- many mothers with small children intheir arms. Shanta sees Aloka, gestures to indicate theincredible turn-out. The normals at the end of the lineturn to look at the approaching LEPERS.LEPER WOMANIt is too beautiful to believe.(CONTINUED)78.CONTINUED:As if indeed she were right, their path is suddenly cutoff by the Goonda and a commando of thugs, armed withsticks and iron bars, backed up by a group carryingbanners with slogans proclaiming in Hindi, Urdu, English:"We Don't Want Lepers Here!" There's a sudden uneasysilence. Behind the thugs a short distance is the

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policeman who harassed Max earlier and another cop.Joan hurries forward.GOONDAGood morning, Sister to the poor.JOANYes, Mr. Bhose?GOONDAThose people aren't coming intothis neighborhood.JOANThey are going to be treated atthe dispensary. You have noright to stop them.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari arrives with Max, Anouar, and Meeta.JOANGo ahead, Aloka, take them inside.The Goonda puts his hand on Aloka. The policeman in theb.g. keep their distance.JOANTake your hands off her, youwaster!Joan is seized by a sudden fury and grabs the Goonda.He grabs her much harder. Said growls and pushesforward. Several thugs turn, step in to neutralize him.Joan elbows the Goonda and tires to westle free of him.As a reflex he raises his hand. And as he does, it'sseized.ANOTHER ANGLEMax (with Hasari in the b.g., confused, conficted). Maxslings the Goonda against the side of a truck.GOONDAThat was a mistake, Doctor.(CONTINUED)79.CONTINUED:MAXThe mistake's yours, putz.(to Aloka)Get these people inside.Aloka starts forward, leading the lepers. She's stoppedby a sudden blow from the Goonda's stick across hershoulders, knocking her to the ground, bleeding from theneck.Hasari bolts for his wife, gets caught up in the melee.Max swings around on the Goonda and for the first time werealize how strong he is, and that he knows how to box.

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The Goonda goes down and violence erupts. Anouar ischopping at the legs of one of the thugs working on Said.The massive Said tears free and starts to beat the crapout of the two thugs holding him.The noise brings everyone out of the square, those linedup at the clinic, the children from the school.Sunil comes flying out of the clinic.A stampede of those waiting outside the dispensary andthose normally in the crowded alley ensues. Shanta runsinside for help. Shopkeepers barricade their shopwindows.One of the thugs pours gasoline over Anouar and lights amatch. Hasari kneels beside Aloka when he sees thematch ignite the tiny leper. Without thinking, Hasarihurls himself on top of Anouar, rolling him in the dirtand against his own body to put out the flames.Joan shouts, demanding the violence stop. She's hitfrom behind; she decides talk isn't going to do it. Shegrabs a piece of lumber and starts to fight.ANGLE ON DISPENSARYAn EXPLOSION in the doorway, scattering anyone who remainsin the area of the dispensary doorway, badly woundingMehboub.More people with sticks. Hasari goes down under severalbodies. Max reaches Aloka, helps her up, sends her towardthe clinic. He tears an attacker off of Hasari and theyfight back to back a moment. A SECOND EXPLOSION nearthem... and through the smoke Max sees...80.ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka astride his motorcycle, behind his dark glasses,with more thugs, these with Molotov cocktails and pickaxes,ready to raze the clinic and school and thesurrounding neighborhood.Sunil drags Mehboub inside.People chant: "White Monkeys, go home! White Monkeys,go home! No lepers here! No lepers here!" The thugscock their iron bars and bricks and Molotov cocktails.Max picks up an iron bar of his own and starts forAshoka. Suddenly, there's a DETONATION followed by aBLAST of air so fierce, Max is thrown to the ground.A bottle of GASOLINE has EXPLODED just behind him. He'senveloped in smoke.An assailant bears down on Joan with a cutlass. As theassailant is about to strike, Hasari seizes the attackerand hurls him backward. Ashish steps in and slashes theassailant with his own weapon, startling, even repelling

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Hasari.From all over the lane, young fighters have come and joinedthe fray, not bothering to choose sides but merely enjoyingthe release. Hasari lunges for a woman under attack by aboy, arriving too late to stop the boy from plunging hisknife into the woman's belly. Hasari fights his way tothe woman, but she staggers into the mob.Max knocks down one of the thugs only to have another handgrasp his shoulder. He turns, fist cocked to find Poomina,her hands holding her face together. Slowly, she takeshands away. The sides of her face have been laid open.Max sweeps her up in his arms, heads for the clinic.MAXOh, little girl, little girl...Joan is suddenly beside Ashoka.JOANWe'll pay! All right then, so byall means, protect us!Ashoka raises a hand, The Goonda blows a whistle, andthe fighting stops as suddenly as it began. The combatantsare breathing heavily. There is silence but forthe groans and cries of the wounded and grieving.ASHOKAIn a world such as ours, everyoneneeds protection. For the fee wediscussed, from this day forward,I can assure you nothing like thiswill happen again.(CONTINUED)81.CONTINUED:A beat... Saladdin is at Joan's shoulder. Ashoka pointsa finger at Hasari.ASHOKAYou. I warned you about thecompany you keep.He REVS his MOTORCYCLE and SCREECHES away, leaving Hasaristaring after him in his dust.INT. COURTYARD - DAYPeople peer in through every opening. Mehboub's chest isbandaged. Sunil squeezes through the packed courtyardand hallway, Ashish carrying a wounded woman behind him.Hasari steps into a doorway, us WITH him.INT. EXAMINING ROOM - MAX, ALOKA, POOMINAMax, blood crusted on her face, sutures Poomina's awfulfacial wound as Aloka prepares a compress.ALOKA

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Will she... Her face, will it...MAXIf she's very careful and doesn'tdo anything to open the wound, thescarring will be minimal.(to Poomina)Do you understand? You can't...You have to stay here.(to Joan)You make her stay here.JOANI'll try.MAXDon't goddamn try, Joan! Goddamndo it!Poomina peers through her pain at Max, his hands puttingher back together.MAX(a litany)I hate this place, I hate thisplace, I hate this place.Max looks at the doorway and he locks eyes with Hasari.Max breaks the contact. Hasari stares at him as we hearthe godfather's MUSIC on the RADIO.82.EXT. GODFATHER'S COURTYARD - HAND AND PENCIL - DAYA hand tap, tap, taps against a ledger.COURTYARDAshoka sits behind a little table, picking absently athis face. The Goonda is slouched near the table, smokinga cigarette and fiddling with a thin switch. (It's difficultfor him to show Ashoka the respect his inheritedposition gives him.) The Goonda has a bruise under oneeye from his altercation in the City of Joy yesterday.The air is filled with the MUFFLED SOUNDS OF the STREET.FROM here, we can see the evermore enfeebled godfatherin his "throne room," wrapped in a cashmere, listeningto the radio. Ashoka looks up, stares impassively atsomeone.ASHOKAWell. What have you got to say?ANOTHER ANGLEFor the first time, we see who Ashoka's speaking to.HASARII told them that your fatherprovides us with a great deal andthat --

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Ashoka slams his hand on the register.ASHOKAFrom this minute, you are off thelist! You will leave your rickshawhere... where it will be reservedfor a man who deserves our trust.He stands up. Hasari is near tears.HASARIPlease, Babu, this is as if theground has opened up. I have tospeak to Mr. Ghatak!Hasari starts for the house. The Goonda stops him and,quickly, has Hasari on his knees, his arm twisted painfullybehind his back. Ashoka jumps at Hasari, grabshis ear.ASHOKAMy father's ill! You are speakingto me!(CONTINUED)83.CONTINUED:HASARII have a family!ASHOKAThe decision is made. I have madeit. Now get out before I have Mr.Bhose break your legs.He gives Hasari's ear a vicious twist and slams his headagainst the table.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYThe side gate opens and Hasari is shoved out. Stumbling,he runs to the fence, peers through. Two men are pullinghis rickshaw into the courtyard. Hasari watches as asteel shutter is pulled down, cutting his livelihood fromsight.ANGLE THROUGH BAR - HASARINumb, compromised, defeated. Perhaps the low point ofhis life.INT. CLINIC - JOAN'S ROOM - "RAFT OF MEDUSA" - NIGHTFlickering candlelight illuminates the "Raft of Medusa."Max rails at Joan.MAXI just don't... I don't want to...I don't want to care! I don't wantto care this much! I just don'twant to be invested in you people.In people! I became a goddamn

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doctor because my goddamn fatherwanted me to be a goddamn doctorbecause he was a goddamn doctor!He was the goddamn king ofdoctors! It's too goddamn hard!Out of breath, out of words, Joan reaches out and takesMax to her, brings him beside her on the cot. Beneaththe "Raft of Medusa," she sits with an arm around Max, asif he were her son.JOANNot everyone's cut out for this.You did the best you could.Better than many. It's all right.(CONTINUED)84.CONTINUED:MAXI didn't do the best I could! Idid what I always do! I shot mybig mouth off and did a half-assedjob. And what I want to do now isI want to go back to America andmake money and live a life withoutentanglements and demands andpeople hanging on me.JOAN(a beat)You know, the fact is from theminute we're born we'reshipwrecked. Some see that as alifetime of drowning, of fear,others only to endure, but totriumph. It's all in theindividual spirit, isn't it?MAXGot it: To run, to spectate, tocommit.(raises his hand)Running spectator.JOANThen, by all means, go home, Max,and go with my blessing and myeternal friendship.The candlelight flickers against them as they sit sideby side. Neither speaks.EXT. RAM'S HUT - TEA SHOP - NIGHTAt the tea shop, a group relive the day's events. The

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children sleep. Aloka sits outside, worried aboutHasari.Max comes out, meets Aloka's eyes and looks away. She'sheard the conversation.Hasari, drunk, comes down the slope. Face to face withMax.HASARIThey took away my rickshaw.Aloka's hand flies to her mouth. Hasari peers at Maxwith his drunken gaze. It's a terrible moment for Max,but...(CONTINUED)85.CONTINUED:MAXSo what do you want me to do aboutit -- get it back for you?Max takes away a step. Stops.MAXI'm sorry. I'm going home.Because this isn't my fight. Igot one person to look after --me.Hasari stares at Max. On the roof, the children listen.At the tea shop, the late-night talkers listen.MAXAll right, I'm running out, okay?Because I'm a coward, this is me,this is what I do, I get in overmy head, I let people down, I run.HASARIBut I trusted you.MAXWell, that was your goddamnmistake!Max walks away, leaving Hasari desolate. Aloka comes tohim.HASARII don't know how I'm going to paythe rent, how we're going to eat.ALOKAWe have what is saved for Amrita'sdowry.The thought of using the dowry is yet another awful blowto Hasari's hopes.HASARIThe children must leave the

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school; they'll have to work. Andyou will not have anything to dowith the clinic or those peopleanymore.Ram joins them.RAMWhat I earn is yours, too.(CONTINUED)86.CONTINUED:HASARIYou can't support all of us. Youhave a family in your village, too.Hasari touches his friend and goes into:INT. RAM'S HUTAlone in his pain, he spots his tea caddy in which heplanted his seeds over a month ago. He bends over totenderly touch the growing shoot and water the earth.He looks up and the three children are staring at him.What will their father do now to keep them alive?INT. BLOOD DISPENSARY - CLOSE ON HASARI'S ARM - DAYThe needle injected, Hasari's blood flowing into abottle.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari seated on the stool, watching his blood leave hisbody, his face again broken out in perspiration.HIS POV - RAFIKWaiting.BACK TO SCENE - HASARIHis face immobile, his thoughts distant. The Attendantstarts to pull the needle out. Hasari stops his hand.HASARITake more.The Attendant shakes his head.HASARITake more.The Attendant looks at Rafik, who shrugs, nods... andallows the blood to flow on out of Hasari's body.EXT. BLOOD BANK - DAYBarely ambulatory, Hasari starts down the street, but hasto stop, lean against a wall. Through his woozy haze, hethinks he sees an apparition.87.ANOTHER ANGLEThere, in the entrance to a building, is Gangooly.Seeing a potential victim, he swoops in.GANGOOLY

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Not well, brother?HASARIStill stealing from refugees?Gangooly looks at Hasari, recognizes him, and gives himan amazing smile.GANGOOLYWell, yes, I remember you, ofcourse -- hello! I am delightedto see you -- yes. And tell meimmediately, please -- your littlefamily, your beautiful children,everyone eats, yes. Come, have acup of tea or a little somethingstronger, we must celebrate.Gangooly starts to move, to position himself for a getaway.Hasari blocks his egress, unsmiling.GANGOOLYAh, well, you're angry at me, yes,I wondered if that was still onyour mind -- I am full of regretabout that, yes, even a littletormented. What can I say? I havethe spirit of an eagle trapped inthe body of a crow.HASARII'm touched.GANGOOLYMy friend, I am lame and I am poor.Does that mean that I shouldn'tsurvive? Huh? When a man isstruggling in a rough sea, heclutches onto what he can or hedrowns. You don't look so well.HASARII lost my rickshaw.Gangooly gives Hasari an appraising look for a moment,then...(CONTINUED)88.CONTINUED:GANGOOLYAch! I have an offer. No,listen! Shiva be my witness, youmust at least think about this.Please, I can help... Or my nameis not Mr. Gangooly.HASARI

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Which, fortunately, it is.EXT. STREET - MOVING SHOT - DAYGangooly guiding Hasari onward.GANGOOLYRemove the children from the school-- no, why? When you, the father,can make a small sacrifice. Naturehas foreseen your plight. For shehas given you two eyes, yes, andtwo kidneys. But. To live, youhave need of one only. I have afriend who sold his kidney -- thisone -- and now -- believe me, thisis the truth -- he lives in a brickhome... which he owns.That smile.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE (MITRA & CO. EXPORTERS) - JUDASDOOR - DAYA forbidding face appears at the grill, stares out.INT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE - DAYHasari and Gangooly enter. A repulsive smell almostmakes Hasari gag. Gangooly takes Hasari's arm and steershim through the gloom. Hasari discovers the origin ofthe smell.A line of skeletons arranged along the walls. Tablesstacked with bones: skulls, spines, rib cages, handsand feet. Each skeleton sports a label with a price inU.S. dollars.Crouched among the bones and packing crates are men working.Some smoke, some have masks over their faces. Theyscrape and clean and decorticate. They skillfullyassemble their grisly creations, emotionless but likeartists.89.POV - MANAGER'S OFFICE - DAYTHROUGH a dusty, glass, interior window, we see, almostin mime, the manager examining Hasari.INT. MANAGER'S OFFICEWith a smile, the manager produces some papers. Hasarishakes his head, starts for the door. Gangooly stopshim.GANGOOLYOf course, take some time, thinkabout it. People all over theworld, anxiously waiting, willingto pay. 15,000 rupees for akidney. 25,000 for an eye.

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Gangooly winks, peers at Hasari with a single eye, andsmiles.INT./EXT. TAXI - ROAD TO AIRPORT - DAYHeat haze on the road. As we FOCUS, we FIND Max, Joan,Aloka, also with their thoughts. Joan gazes out thewindow of the taxi. Max looks at the back of Joan's heada moment, then looks at Aloka, who sits between them.She deflects his eyes forward.JOANHasari has forbid her to haveanything more to do with us. He'dbe very angry if he knew she wasseeing you off.Max looks at Joan. Looks out the window.INT. AIRPORT - DEPARTURE AREA - WIDE SHOT - DAYFirst we see joyous people greeting arriving passengers;parents greet a young man returning from college abroad.The way clears and we CLOSE IN ON Max, Joan, and Aloka, atiny island in this sea of people at the moment of theirparting. Max empties all the money out of his pockets.MAXThis is for Poomina. When I gethome...He thrusts the money on Joan and Max offers his hand;she goes through the hand to embrace Max. Then Max andAloka look at each other.(CONTINUED)90.CONTINUED:ALOKAYou did good things.(chokes up, butmanages)Thank you for coming to ourcountry.And now Max heads out the door.INT. CAFETERIA - ALOKA AND JOAN - DAYSparsely populated. They sit in isolation at a tableover a cup of tea.JOANIt's not like he's royalty oranything, so I'm not persuaded wehave to wait for the plane toactually take off.ALOKANo. We should go.Yet, they remain another moment... then get up. Joan

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puts her arm around Aloka and they turn to go. The lookson their faces suggest they've come face to face withsomething startling.ANGLE ON DOORMax. Standing inside the departure doorway.MAXWhat were those three choicesagain?Their faces. And his with just a wistful version of hisold grin... and we --FADE OUT.FADE IN:EXT. COMPOUND - DAYHasari returns. Goes into Ram's hut.INT. RAM'S HUT - DAYHe finds his family... and Max. The two men stare ateach other.(CONTINUED)91.CONTINUED:MAXI need Aloka at the clinic.(as Hasari stares)All right, they, the patients,need her. She's a good nurse.(as Hasari stares)Come on, man, this is between youand me. Why take the kids out ofschool, why punish your wife?Hasari holds his anger in; he moves to a mat and liesdown, his back to Max. But Max doesn't go.MAXI have a little money, I can getit from the States...HASARIIt's not a question of money.We'll survive on our own.That's it. Hasari lies with his back to Max. After somemoments of silence, Aloka indicates Max should go. Andhe does. After another moment...ALOKAMaybe he's right. The clinic isfor everyone and if I am needed --Hasari bolts up, a look of anger on his face we've neverseen.HASARINo! I'm your husband and you'll

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do as I say! Unless, of course,you've become an American wife andthen you'll do as you please!HASARIStay away from them. They are notpart of us. They will only be goodto you as long as you please them.The children, Aloka are frozen, she very close to tears.Hasari lies back down, again turns his back on them.EXT. LEPER COLONY (DAWN) - DAYThe small colony alive; a line of patients outside a door.92.INT. ROOM - DAYMax unwraps a bandage from a leper's partial limb. Looksaround for Aloka. She's not there. Said is acting ashis nurse. Points at his instruments.MAXHand me the scissors, please.Helpfully Said hands him the tweezers.MAXScissors, scissors.He demonstrates. Said fumbles through the instruments,picking up the scissors by the ends.MAXNot that end -- No, that's fine,thanks, I've got it.EXT. LEPER COLONY - DAYMax comes out with his last patient. Anouar waits.ANOUARMax Daddah, you are finished?(Max nods)Follow me.Anouar takes off down the lane and disappears quicklyinto a little building, Max following.INT. TANNERY - DAYMax follows Anouar past bubbling cauldrons and heaps ofanimal skins. The place stinks fiercely. Anouar andMax exit into...A SMALL YARDTwo young men (the two pullers Chomotkar and Ramatullah)... and something covered with a tarp.MAXYou didn't steal this.RAMATULLAHThe police, Sahib, they stole it.We stole it from them.(CONTINUED)

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93.CONTINUED:The pullers whip the tarp off. A battered rickshaw, thesprings poking out of the seat, the broken wheels lyingin the body, the finish scarred and gouged, one shaftbroken.MAXHow much?EXT. SQUARE - DAYMax comes into the square. Aloka and Selima are preparingmeals. Manooj, Shambu, and three other boysplaying. Ram is trying to jolly Hasari, who's deep inhis own reverie. Max stands in front of Hasari.MAXI'd like to show you something.Just take a minute.A beat as Hasari fixes Max with an empty stare and thefamily waits to see if Hasari will respond.MAXGo ahead. Go on.EXT. COURTYARD AND STORAGE SHED - CLINICThe sound of a PADLOCK being UNLOCKED. DARK SCREEN.Light flashes. Max and Hasari appear in the doorway.Surprised by the light, a few rats scurry off. Somewherea dog BARKS. Slated, shafted light. He indicatesa corner.THE RICKSHAWPiled up in its ruin.MAXI'm good with my hands. You'regood with yours. What do you say?Hasari looks at Max, part resentful, part touched.HASARIIf I were to go on the street withthis machine, I would end up in agutter with my throat cut.(CONTINUED)94.CONTINUED:MAXWell, it's yours if you want it.You know the license, the cops,all that can be fixed. You'llown this -- it'll have nothing todo with the Godfather.HASARIDoctor Daddah, I'm just a small

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man. Don't try to tempt me againwith big thoughts.Hasari starts to leave. Max blocks his way.MAXYou didn't want me to quit. Well,I came back.HASARIBut can you be trusted?MAXI hope so.Hasari can see the hope and desire in Max's face. Aftera moment, Max steps aside. Hasari bends his head andmakes off. Leaving Max and a small sigh ofdisappointment.EXT. LATRINES - FOUNTAIN - ALOKA - DAY (DAWN)She takes her morning absolutions, bathing in the fountain.The process is extremely sensual, though there isnot even a glimpse of her nakedness as she moves herclothing around, cleansing this area, then that. Sheglances up to see...ANOTHER ANGLEMax, in an Indian shirt, heading for the square; rathernaturally, he brings his hands together in the Indiansalutation. He carries several bottles of distilledwater, a large value pack of bar soap, and a carton ofmedical supplies. As he passes, his eyes hook onAloka's. He lifts a hand in greeting. After a moment,she ducks her head. He turns and continues on comingface to face with Ram, an enormous smile on his face.With him, Hasari. He glances at his wife in the water.MAX(to Hasari)Going to look for work?(CONTINUED)95.CONTINUED:When Hasari doesn't answer...RAMYes, he is.Ram has a small coughing fit.MAXAre you taking your medicine?RAMYes, yes, but look at this.He points at the wheel of his rickshaw; the rim iscracked. Scornfully, Hasari walks on. Max and Ramglance after him. Max digs out several rupees. Ram

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takes them and goes. Max looks after the two men asthey disappear. When he turns...ANOTHER ANGLE...he finds himself face to face with Aloka. Without aword, they start walking side by side toward the square.It's several seconds before she says...ALOKAHe's very proud.They walk on in silence -- two friends, separated by agulf.EXT. DOCKS - FROM THE GATE - DAYMen moving like ants into the bow of the ship. Hasari islocked out, turned away without work.EXT. METRO CONSTRUCTION SITE - DAYA huge gouge in the black mud, sunlight streaming throughsteel girders across it. Hasari emerges from the ground,looking for someone. Stops him. The foreman shakes hishead, no, before Hasari even has the chance to ask forwork.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE - EXTREME CLOSEUP - HASARI'SFACE - DAYThen we see he's standing outside Mitra & Co., staring atit, wondering if it's time to sell part of himself. No!We see on his face a look that tells us he will not bebeaten.96.EXT. CLINIC - COURTYARD - DAYThe street children's school now takes up two rooms.Children peer out of one room now as, to the accompanimentof Surya's zither, twenty or so girls are doing someIndian classical dancing, under the eye of a young Indianteacher.Across the way, in the other room, some children aretranslating Bengali words into English. A boy is writingon the board. It's Manooj. We see that Shambu is in thesame class.INT. EXAMINING ROOMFROM BEHIND, we watch Max take a wrapping off ofPoomina's wound, Joan assisting him. Indeed, Ashokaextended Poomina's smile on either side of her mouth.The scars are healing as nicely as could be expected.Max did a fine job.MAXYou must have had a good doctor.Still no running, jumping, pickingup anything heavy. And you stayhere. You're going to help Sister

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Joan and you're going to school.Do you understand?A beat, Poomina nods. But now a look of abject fearcomes over her face.The Goonda stands in the doorway. Max begins singing"Sweet Little Sixteen." The Goodna stares impassivelyat Max.THE GOONDATime to collect the rent, Sister.JOANOf course. Come with me, please.Joan leaves, followed by The Goonda. Max works carefullyat the fine line of scabbing on Poomina's scar...but then something takes his attention.ACROSS THE COURTYARDManooj, with a small tin of food, looks this way andthat... and then sneaks into the shed.EXT. SHED - DAYWe hear a, TAP, TAP, TAP. The door is half open. Thepadlock is hanging on its chain. Max opens the door.97.INT. STORAGE ROOMStartled, frightened, Hasari presses himself against thewall, as does Manooj. Hasari is wearing a wet dhoti,caught in the middle of straightening the wheel rim ofthe old rickshaw.HASARIClose the door!Max is very surprised but, needless to say, pleased. Helooks at the rickshaw, looks at Hasari.HASARIClose the door. The Godfatherhas more eyes than a pineapple.Max quickly closes the door. The half light is brokenby thin beams of light that dance with dust.Hasari studies Max a moment, then moves to put the firstwheel on. Instinctively, Manooj moves to his side, takeshold of the rickshaw so Hasari can slip the wheel on.Hasari nods and goes for the other wheel. Manooj movesaround to the other side, hefts the carcass. Hasarislips on the second wheel. Hasari looks at Max. Maxbrings his hands together and starts to go.HASARII was saying to Manooj that if aman bows down too many times,there will come a day when he willno longer be able to stand upright.

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The two men look at each other... and then Hasari getson with his work.MAXI promised Manooj and Shambu I'dtake them to the movies. Is itall right?HASARI(a beat)If a man makes a promise...Max brins his hands together and starts for the door.Hasari picks up one of the worn seat boards.INT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHTWe're TRACKING WITH a moving bag of peanuts behind a rowof boy's heads. On the screen in front of them, a "medievalera" sword battle between the great Kumar Kapur anda legion of bad guys.(CONTINUED)98.CONTINUED:We hear the sound of CRACKING NUTS as we MOVE FROM Manoojto three kids we've seen in the neighborhood (two boysManooj's age and Shoba, who's Shambu's age) and then toShambu, each kid dipping into the bag in his turn.Finally: Max's (and on the other side of him, Amritaand Poomina.) The bag arrives... empty.MAX(whispering)Thanks, guys. Who wants to go formore peanuts?No one. We're talking about rapt attention. We hearNUTS CRACKING. Max smiles.EXT. STREET - NEAR CITY OF JOY - NIGHTMax and the boys walking home after the movie, the boysdancing around each other, acting out the fight sequences,all of the sword-fighting against Max, who battles themall over the street, in and around cars, Poomina and Amritalooking on shyly, as El Max fights to save their honor.MANOOJI can't decide if I want to beKumar Kapur or a doctor.MAXHa ha! You can be both! ManoojPal, swashbuckling physician!MANOOJYou're so much fun, El Max. Iwish my daddy were as much fun asyou.

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Max stops the fight, takes Manooj by the shoulders.MAXI wish my father loved me likeyour father loves you. Your dad'sa very special man. And now, engarde!As the battle continues, the bright beams of a truckcome at them.MAXTime out, men. Off the streettill this truck passes.(CONTINUED)99.CONTINUED:The kids move toward the wall of the building they'repassing, but the truck seems to turn toward them, seemingnot to intend to pass, but to hit them.The look on Max's face lets us know he senses somethingterrible is in the offing here. He shouts for the kidsto get out of the way, shoving the kids closest to himinto a doorway. He turns to Shambu, who's behind him,calls to him.But in a panic, Shambu doesn't move into the shelter ofthe building on his right... but tries to run across thestreet. Max leaps for the little boy too late... as thetruck just misses Max and clips Shambu hard, sending thelittle boy flying.EXT. SQUARE - NIGHTManooj runs ahead of everyone as he charges into Ram'shut, crying for his father. Behind Manooj come theothers, Max carrying Shambu in his arms. Hasari andAloka, Ram, Joan, others in the square hurtle out oftheir huts.MAXI can't do anything here. He'sgot a compound fracture, hehemorrhaging. We've got to getto a hospital -- now!JOANYou'll never get a taxi at thishour.EXT STREET - HASARI'S FEET - DAY (EARLY EVENING)He pounds along, the wheels wobbling and squeaking,urging people out of his way. Max runs alongside Hasari.Aloka sits on the seat with Shambu, whose quiet moaningfills her ears. Blood drips down the rickshaw.EXT. PARK STREET - FROM THE RICKSHAW - DAY

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Several taxis waiting for clients outside a row ofrestaurants. Hasari and Aloka watch as Max argues withthe drivers. They won't take a bleeding passenger.SAME STREET - MOMENTS LATERThe race to the hospital continues.100.EXT. MEDWAR PINE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL - NIGHTThe arrive at the gates of the huge, Victorian hospital.People sleep outside the gates.INT. HOSPITAL - CORRIDOR - SIDE ROOM - DAYThe wards are full, as are the corridors. Patients onbeds and stretchers everywhere. Most have at least onemember of their family to look over them. In a sideroom, Max is arguing with a porter who tells him he can'thelp him. Max slaps some rupees into the porter's hand,tells him to take him to the person in charge.Shambu is fading. Aloka smooths the sweat from his brow,trying to keep Shambu alive by force of will and love.Then Max is back, standing over her with another man. Itmay take a moment before we recognize the ATTENDANT fromthe Blood Bank.MAXThey'll admit him, but we have topay for the blood. I gave him allI had. He wants more. Do you haveanything?ALOKASister Joan gave me this.Aloka holds out a fistful of rupees. The Attendant blowsthrough his lips, indicating it's a paltry sum. Maxgrabs the money and shoves it at the Attendant.MAXWe haven't got any more!The Attendant doesn't move... until he sees Max is aboutto explode.MAXIf this child dies while youstand here, I'll kill you.The Attendant is smart enough not to push any further.MAXNow, I need an X-ray room and Ineed an O.R. nurse.ATTENDANTNot possible. You can't givecare, you're an American. Youmust be an Indian doctor.(CONTINUED)

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101.CONTINUED:MAXThen take me to one!As Max takes flight with the Attendant, Aloka strokesShambu and Hasari hovers. We CLOSE IN ON Shambu'sinanimate face and HOLD a moment.ANOTHER ANGLEMax hurtles down the corridor with a young INTERN intow. Almost a kid, he's been up for days. But he'sgoing to help.INTERNThis way, please.Max scoops Shambu up and rushes down the corridor behindthe Intern, leaving Hasari and Aloka looking after him.His arm comes around her shoulders.EXT. HOSPTIAL - DAY (DAWN)Hasari and Aloka wait. People are starting to move about.HASARIYou're my wife, Aloka, you and mychildren are all my wealth. Butif Max Daddah and Big Sister Joanhave need of you, you may go tothem.Max comes out of the hospital. The two Pals stare athim.MAXWe pinned his leg. Couple ofmonths, he'll be better thanever. They want to keep himtoday. We're a good team.Gimme five.He smiles, holds out a palm for them to slap. Theylook at the palm, unsure what this means. Yet, eachtakes Max's hand.EXT. CLINIC - COURTYARD - DAYThe whole community is here, around the tree.(CONTINUED)102.CONTINUED:JOANI don't think it was an accident.I think they were aiming for Max.So, what we have to ask ourselvesis whether his presence isendangering all of us.ANOUAR

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Even from my low vantage point, Iknow this: It's the son. He'smad.HASARIMax Daddah is our friend. Ifthey're trying to harm him, thenthey're trying to harm all of us.We must stand by him as one.INT. SHED - CLOSE ON TWO PAINTBRUSHES - NIGHTdip into a little box of paints. The boys look on as thetwo men paint an intricate design on the shafts. Shambusits in the rickshaw seat. He wears an ankle to hipcast. Manooj is spelling words and urging Shambu tofollow suit. Aloka is putting out a tray of food. Ram,Ramatullah, and Chomotkar slip in, quickly close thedoor. The two pullers focus on the rickshaw, Ram on Max.RAMDoctor Daddah, please, veryimportant, only one moment.MAXThis is going to cost me everyrupee I didn't make today.Ram thrusts an envelope into Max's hand.MAXA letter from your wife.Ram nods nervously. Max looks at the postmark as heslices it open with a finger.MAXThis is postmarked six weeks ago.RAMSo?(CONTINUED)103.CONTINUED:MAXSo, what have you been doing --incubating it?RAMI was afraid.Ram waits, his hands twisting each other.MAX'My dear husband...'RAMOh that's very hopeful so far!MAX'Your words brought tears of joyto my arid eyes.'

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RAMOh, I'm in love! My wordsbrought tears to her arid eyes!(then fearful)What does that mean -- arid?Manooj throws his hand up.MANOOJI know! Dry.MAXCorrect. Her eyes were dry, yourletter irrigated them.RAMAaah!He snatches the letter, crushes it to his heart. Noticesthe finish work on the rickshaw.CHOMOTKARThis is a puka nasgar. What acurse that you can't use it.HASARII'm going on the streets tomorrow.This gets everyone's attention. The pullers shake theirheads, they're worried for him.MAXListen. I don't want you to thinkI'm crazy, but I don't think thattruck was an accident.(MORE)(CONTINUED)104.CONTINUED:MAX CONT'D)I think Ashoka was after me. Youcan bet he'll be after you too.HASARII'm going to speak to his father.MAXCan I go with you? I'll go withyou. Can I go with you if I shutup?A beat... and Hasari gives him a small nod.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYGhatak is literally carried out of the house by anorderly and placed into his car. There's a driverand there is the Goonda. They start down the street.We're WITH the car. Suddenly, the driver slams on thebrakes and from:ANOTHER ANGLE

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We see Hasari and Max blocking the street with the newrickshaw. The Goonda jumps out of the car, comesthreateningly at Hasari.HASARIBabu, please, I beg you, hearmy words!As the Goonda is about to land on Hasari we hear afeeble...GHATAKWait.The Goonda backs off. The Godfather waves Hasari andMax close. Hasari brings his gleaming rickshaw to thewindow of the car, Max at his shoulder.HASARIMay I say first, Babu, I wish youlong life and good health.GHATAKAcha! They take me now to thescientists. They stick needles inme, take pictures of my insides,study them, and then tell me whatI know.(CONTINUED)105.CONTINUED:The Godfather stares at Hasari, flicks his eyes at Max.Waits.HASARIWhen you gave me work, I swore Iwould be as your youngest brother.Your son thinks I have beendisloyal. He took my rickshaw.With my friend, I have remade thisone. I beg you to let me go againonto the streets. I have my family.The old man looks at the rickshaw, at the obvious carethat went into its renovation, at this unlikely teamof refurbishers. He reaches a shaking hand out towarda shaft. Hasari brings it close. The old man rubs theshaft.GHATAKIt is very beautiful.HASARIThank you, Babu.GHATAKIf I may say, it has an allure.HASARI

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An allure, Babu -- thank you.The Godfather stares at Hasari, then at Max.GHATAKThe world is chaos. We struggleto build something permanent,then our bodies betray us, our sonsbetray us.(to Hasari now)Yes, you may take your rickshawout. If you can face up to my son.The Goonda gets back into the car and the car pulls awayand we are left with Hasari and Max as moment.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE (MITRA & CO) - DAYHasari enters.INT. MANAGER'S OFFICE - DAYThe manager stares at Hasari, as he consumes a pot ofrice and vegetable curry. Gangooly hovers like a crow.Hasari stares at the contract before him.(CONTINUED)106.CONTINUED:HASARIIf a man dies and he's not burned,what do you think becomes of hissoul?The manager turns his palms up, continues chewing.Hasari stares through the window at the row of skeletons.HASARII must provide for my family.GANGOOLYOh, it's a noble fate. If indeedyour wheel ceases to turn, you willhelp educate somewhere in thisgreat world a fine doctor.Hasari bends to the contract and laboriously signs hisname.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYHasari arrives to an outcry of anger. There are severaldozen rickshaws. Among the passersby, we see umbrellas,as the people on the street try to combat the incredibleheat.HASARIWhat's going on?CHOMOTKARThe Godfather ill! The son israising the rent!Ashoka is on his front steps with a loudspeaker before a

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growing crowd of pullers. He's backed up by the Goondaand a dozen of his thugs. The loudspeaker liftsAshoka's voice above the anger.ASHOKADo you know how much it costs tochange the spoke in a wheel? Orhow much baksheesh I have to paythe police?Impulsively, Hasari moves forward. Cries from pullers:"Who will be the victims of this madness? You?" "Hellno!" "You don't need the six rupees each old cratebrings you per day to fill your belly! For us, it meansdeath!" The street is so packed with rickshaw andpullers now that cars can't get through. A chorusof HORNS HONK; drivers scream.(CONTINUED)107.CONTINUED:RAMATULLAHWe haven't been breaking ourbacks between the shafts of ourrickshaws in order to weep foryou!Hasari continues forward, his eyes on Ashoka.CHOMOTKARThe only thing that matters is thebundle of rupees we take to themunshi each month to feed and toanswer the daily needs of ourchildren!RASSOUL steps up on a telagarhi with a loudspeaker.RASSOULListn to me! Listen now! Listento me!(when the pullersquiet)Friends! I ask you to vote for anunlimited strike. Inkalabadzindabad! Long live therevolution! Rickshaw Workers Unionzindabad!A strike? No income at all? The slogan is taken upby a small percentage of the assemblage. Fear anddoubt on many faces.ASHOKAThat's what I thought. Allright, get to work! Customers

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are waiting!ON HASARISomething detonates in him and he jumps onto the telagarhiand grabs the microphone from Ashoka. Policearrive in vans.HASARIFriends! The Godfather at leastis a caring man! This one,though, the son --A signal from Ashoka and one of the thugs knocks Hasaridown.(CONTINUED)108.CONTINUED:ASHOKAWe helped this man! We gave hima job, a place to live! This ishow he shows his gratitude. Geton the streets now! Or turn inyour machines!Hasari gets up and tries to speak.HASARIFriends -- don't! If we stand --He gets hit again. A number of the pullers come forwardand a riot starts. The police move in, beat and arrestmany of the demonstrators. Ramatullah and Chomotkartry to help Hasari, but they are descended on by copswho hurl them aside and beat Hasari senseless untilthe:SCREEN GOES BLACK.FADE IN:INT. BONSAL COURT - DAYBirds flying below ceiling. The room has a barred cagerunning all around its edge; the cage is filled to nearoverflowing. Hasari stands before the JUDGE, his facecovered with blood, his body a mass of aches and welts.At the back of the room, Max and Aloka; elsewhere,Ashoka, the Goonda, and several of his thugs.HASARIThe life of a rickshaw puller isnot one a man would choose if hehad a choice. Our feet blisterand burn up from the boilingasphalt, our noses burn from thefumes of countless motor cars andbuses, our backs curve permanentlyfrom the loads we carry hour after

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hour, day after day. But I amproud to be one of the human horseswho carry my countryman from placeto place and I am thankful for theopportunity to make a living. ButI will not keep silent anymore andI will not be cheated andthreatened anymore. Life is hardenough. No more.Ramatullah starts to applaud. Rassoul follows suit.The Judge bangs his gavel.(CONTINUED)109.CONTINUED:JUDGESilence!(when it's silent)This man will be permitted touse his rickshaw without let orhindrance. And I will make arestraining order against Mr.Ghatak.Cheers from the pullers. The Judge bangs his gavel.JUDGEI haven't finished theseproceedings. For his part in thisdisturbance, I fine the defendant50 rupees.HASARIFifty rupees, Your Honor?That's --JUDGEPay at this time or spend sevendays in jail!Seven days in jail will cost him far more than fiftyrupees. As he reaches into his pocket for his screwof money, a hand suddenly protrudes into the cage throughthe bars.RAMATULLAHHasari!And now another hand with several rupees reaches through.RASSOULHasari!Now a dozen voices call his name and a dozen hands reachthrough the bars with rupees clutched in their fists andpress the money into Hasari's hands. The Judge, Max andAloka, and certainly Ashoka watch this in amazement. The

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Judge bangs his gavel.Max turns, shoots a little finger gun and winks at Ashoka.CLOSE ON ASHOKAON his face, we see pure hatred for these two men.110.EXT. CITY OF JOY - DAYAmrita, Manooj, and Shambu. With them, Subash flirtingwith Amrita, incurring the wrath and admiration of herbrothers, causing her to flush.THUNDER sounds. They all look up. Rain starts to fall.People run outside of workshops and huts, crying, "Therains, the rains." Suddenly, a THUNDERCLAP shakes theearth and rain begins to bombard them. The rain falls,the WIND HOWLS, and people in the lane are dancing,praising the beginning of the monsoon season. Men tearoff their shirts, women rush out fully clothed, singing.Swarms of naked children run about. The kids run towardthe clinic/school.EXT. CLINIC COURTYARD - DAYHasari is locking his rickshaw into the shed. Staff andseveral patients come out of the examining rooms -- Joan,Aloka, Sunil, Anouar, Poomina. Margareta and herstudents, a new teacher, Bandona, her students come out ofthe classrooms... They're all swept up in dancing, Joan'smetal cross jumping about as if it were beating out time.From his balcony, Max emerges with his trumpet and playsthe first bars of "Singin' In the Rain." Everyone lookshis way; he begins to hum and sing as he jumps over thebalcony to the ground and takes off in a wild, improvished,but damn good version of Gene Kelly's dance inthe rain, bringing Anouar on his cart in as his dancingpartner. Everyone in the courtyard crowds around them,laughing and encouraging the dancer/singers on. Thenumber builds to an extraordinary climax with Max slidingthrough mud to an exquisite finish at Joan's feet.There's thunderous applause.INT. CLINIC - NIGHTRain. Max, The Pals, Ram, Joan, Anouar, Meeta and theBaby, Poomina, Saladdin, Mehboub, Ashish, Shanta,Margareta, Bandona, and the other members of the committeesharing a meal.HASARIReally -- a boyfriend, Amrita?AMRITANo!Amrita whacks Manooj.(CONTINUED)

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111.CONTINUED:MANOOJYes, she does. His name is SubashGhosh. His father owns the workshop.HASARIIs there someone you care about?The look in Amrita's eyes tells us indeed there is.Hasari smiles at Amrita and then at Aloka.HASARIThen I must speak to his fatherand I must complete your dowry.Amrita squeezes close to her mother. This is seriousand joyous.HASARIYou will make people sigh at howbeautiful you are. And I shalldrop tears of joy.RAMAt my wedding I became sofrightened, my father gave methings to drink to calm me down.I went out to piss and fell asleepunder the village tree. When Iwoke I thought it was the tree I'dmarried. I still love that tree.The laugh. But Hasari's attention is on his daughter.He reaches a loving hand to her.INT. GREEN ACRES - MAX'S BATHROOM - TUB FAUCET - NIGHTA rag has been wrapped around the faucet and water runsslowly and silently down into the nearly filled tub. Thescene is illuminated dimly by a flashlight with fingersover the beam.ON MAXHe sleeps. Suddenly he's grabbed, his eyes spring openin fear. Hands yanks him out of bed, slam him up againstthe wall, then hurtle him across the room and into:BATHROOMWhere the tub has been filled. His head is slammed downunderwater and he's held there struggling.(CONTINUED)112.CONTINUED:His head is yanked up and through bleary eyes he sees aknife at his throat and the Hewbrew letter chai danglingfrom the knife - wielder's neck, illuminated by aflashlight.

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ASHOKAGo home, Doctor.Before he can respond, he's slammed down into the tub ofwater again and held there until it seems his lungs willexplode. Then he's dumped backward, gasping for breath.EXT. CITY OF JOY - SQUARE - NIGHTMax on the run through the rain, carrying his belongings.CLINICHe pounds through the puddles, past a sleepy old watchman,and through the gate.INT. COURTYARD - NIGHTHe bangs on Joan's door. She opens the door in her Indianpajamas. One look at him...JOANWhat's happened?MAXAshoka ordered me to go home.Well, I've come home.A beat. She steps aside, he steps in, and the door closeshim safely inside.EXT. PARK CIRCUS - DAYThe rickshaw station. The rain pours down. Peopleclambor for rickshaws. The line moves forward as fastas the pullers can take on passengers. Hasari, Ram,Ramatullah, Chomotkar look at the stalled buses, thestreetcars, the taxis, the private cars.CHOMOTKARWhat a joy it is to survey thisdisaster! We will all make afortune!(CONTINUED)113.CONTINUED:HASARIThe monsoon is the great Durga'sgift to the human horse!Hasari glances at Ram, who isn't a part of the joking.HASARIWhat's the matter?RAMI'm wet and I'm cold. Yourdaughter is getting married. Timeis passing. I want to go home tomy wife.Chomotkar touches Hasari, nods across the street. There,we see the Goonda and two thugs.RAMATULLAH

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Hasari!It's Hasari's turn. He can't stay to talk with Ram now.He has to go.MARWARI #4How much to the market?HASARIEight rupees.MARWARI #4What! I won't pay it!HASARIWho else needs a ride? I amavailable at a price!Several others crowd and shove toward him.MARWARI #4No! Take me -- I'll pay, let'sgo!HASARIThe price just went up! Tenrupees! In advance.The Marwari hesitates only as long as it takes him to digin his soaking wet pants and to slap the bills intoHasari's hand and climb aboard. Hasari sets out withgreat difficulty -- and greater determination -- throughthe floodwaters, flicking his eyes at the Goonda as hegoes.114.EXT. WEDDING SHOP - DAYWater pours down. FROM HERE we see Hasari inside, puttingmoney down in front of the shop owner and then hustlingback into the rain and taking up his shafts. We WATCH theowner look after him with a touch of disdain as he comesinto the window and takes down the beautiful green andgold sari.EXT. CLINIC - GUTTERS - NIGHTWater pouring from above; the gutters overflow with refuse.We PAN UP to the clinic.INT. CLINIC COURTYARDWater pouring off the room into the courtyard. Hasarilocks his rickshaw into the shed and turns out, attentionto Max, Aloka, Joan, Poomina, Margareta, Mehboub, severalothers trying to patch leaking roof tiles and keepsupplies high and dry.INT. CLINIC ROOMHasari enters. Max looks at him, doesn't like the lookof the obviously exhausted man.HASARIHow can I help?

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EXT. CIRCULAR ROAD - FISTFUL OF RUPEES (RUNNING MONTAGE)- DAYAn Anglo couple jockeying for preference. Hasari selectsthem from a crowd. This is the beginning of RUNNINGMONTAGE.A) He runs AT us from different directions with riders-- pushing, pushing -- the water getting higher, ourFOCUS VARIOUSLY IN NORMAL AND SLOW MOTION ON hisfeet, his tensed muscles; for a moment, we hear onlyhis breathing, the sound of his feet on the pavement,the RAIN AGAINST the CANOPY of the rickshaw.B) He drags up with an entire, well-to-do family of six,packed into the rickshaw.C) He stumbles to a stop outside the emergency entranceto the hospital, carrying a mother and her sickchild.(CONTINUED)115.CONTINUED:D) An upper-crust Brahmin dressed in crisp white, anumbrella protecting him against the harsh elements.E) Four uniformed school children huddled, laughingtogether under the rickshaw's canopy.INT. LEPER COLONY - MEETA'S ROOM - DAYThe rain continues, as does the work in the clinic. Maxis working on Anouar, Aloka assisting. Meeta and thebaby (now 6 months old) in the b.g.ANOUARI think Aloka would have a gentlertouch than you, Max Daddah. Maybeshe should perform this surgery onher own.Aloka ducks her eyes, embarrassed.MAXLast time you told me you weremore than two women could manage.ANOUARYes, but given a choice between oneand none, I will accept the one.Max lifts Anouar off the table and places him on hiscart.MAXOkay, you ought to be good foranother few days. Send in thenext patient.Anouar scoots out. Max and Aloka both turn to theinstruments lying on the table and knock a pair of

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scissors to the floor. Simultaneously, they bend to pickit up and bang heads.LOW ANGLEThe first impulse of each is to touch the other's head.But almost simultaneously, their hands freeze short oftouching. Several months ago, Max might have tried tokiss her; now, though, there is friendship and affection.FROM here, we see a pair of bare feet. We COME WITH Maxand Aloka UP.116.ANOTHER ANGLEShoba, a deeply concerned look on his face. Slowly hishands come forward, holding his parrot, with a brokenwing. He puts the parrot on the examining table.INT. POST OFFICE - DAYHasari seals a letter and a money order into an envelope,seals, and puts it into the slot. He is clearlyexhausted. Outside he can see two Sikh merchants at hisrickshaw, looking around in the rain for him. He hurriestoward the door.HASARIHere! I'm here!INT. SUBASH'S HOUSE - NIGHTAloka and three women huddled beside a window, Amritahalf hidden behind them. We PAN ACROSS a staircase TOanother window, THROUGH which we see a doorway. In thedoorway, Subash turns to smile a shy smile at Amrita; heshrugs. PAST him now, we see Hasari facing SUBASH'SFATHER and three UNCLES, surly men with hair matted withmustard oil. The Ghoshes are all seated on low chairsand stools. Hasari is standing.INT. ROOM - NIGHTMr. Ghosh and the Uncles stare at Hasari, who standspolitely and hopefully before them.MR. GHOSH (SUBASH'S FATHER)You're a rickshaw puller, am Icorrect?HASARIYes, that's correct.He looks at his brothers, on either side. They look athim.MR. GHOSHAnd I a partner in the workshopwhere your daughter is employed.Were you aware of that?HASARIYes, yes, I was, my daughter told

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me, thank you.(CONTINUED)117.CONTINUED:MR. GHOSHYes, well then, perhaps you cantell me why I would permit my sonto marry your daughter.Mr. Ghosh raises his palms. It's all over as far ashe's concerned.UNCLE #1Just a moment, please.The brothers huddle, whisper just loudly enough forHasari to hear.UNCLE #1Are you saying there's no wayyou'd consider this match?Mr. Ghosh shakes his head, shrugs his palms.UNCLE #1Perhaps some inducement? Wouldthat be of any help?MR. GHOSH(considering this)What could he possibly offer?UNCLE #1Probably nothing. But perhaps,in fairness, we should find out.Mr. Ghosh shrugs. The huddle breaks. All five menstare at Hasari.EXT. STREETS - DAYHasari, mouth half open, flecked with spume, pulls ahuge Marwari. He's pouring sweat, his eyes are bloodshot.He has never looked more like a horse.They arrive at a cross street. The Marwari gets downand pays Hasari. Hasari slumps against the rickshawand, while he awaits his next rider, counts his crumpledpile of notes and coins.EXT. CLINIC - DAYMax, Joan, Aristotle John, Margareta, Mehboub, perhapsa dozen others trying to raise the level of the lowwall at the entrance with bricks. The wall caves in.Other people in the neighborhood rush to rebuild it.(CONTINUED)118.CONTINUED:MAX(shouting to the

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others)My dear friends, it's justoccurred to me what inspired meto stay here.Thinking he's about to make some cogent remark aboutthis unified effort...MARGARETAWhat's that, Doctor Big Brother?MAXThe opportunity to acquirewaterfront property at a reasonableprice.Joan begins to laugh; the others don't get it, queryeach other as to what's funny about that.JOANI hate to admit it, junior, butthat was actually quite witty.She whacks him on the shoulder with a wet, muddy paw.JOANUt-nobody laugh; it's a naturaldisaster -- we have guests.Everyone turns to...ANOTHER ANGLEManubai and Ravi, their car parked at the entryway tothe clinic. A big puddle separates them.MAXI'd throw my cape down, but I'mall out of dry capes.He sloshes through the water to them, wiping his muddyhands on his pants. He offers a semi-clean hand toeach in turn.MAXIt's very nice to see you. Bothof you.RAVIWe heard you were still here.Vijay wanted to send some things.(CONTINUED)119.CONTINUED:She indicates the car, which is packed with dry foodand such.MAXShall we unload the car?RAVIYes, yes, by all means.Max whistles, indicates the car. People come and start

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unloading it, Ravi showing the way, leaving Max andManubai alone a moment, Aloka flicking her eyes at thetwo of them.MANUBAII'm surprised. I really didn'tthink you'd stick it out.MAXPeople grow older; sometimes theyeven grow up.He smiles a sweet smile at her. She smiles back at him.EXT. MUD BANK - WIDE SHOT - DAYAnouar on Said's shoulders. The big mute runs, followedby Hasari and a phalanx of rickshaw pullers: Chomotkar,Rassoul, Ramatullah-Joan, Aloka, Manooj, several othersin the rickshaws, Max and Sunil, each with his doctor bag-- all of them running in silhouette along the embankmentin the rain.ARISTOTLE JOHNWhere can we take them? We can'ttake them back to the clinic. Noone will put up with it.SALADDINWe can't let them drown, can we?Eh, Max Daddah?EXT. LEPER COLONY - DAYThe leper colony is submerged. The parents have puttheir children on the roofs and the relatively ablebodiedlepers are piling charpoys one on top of anotherto protect the sick and the infirm. Meeta and her babyare on a roof. The mud bank is too slippery to get therickshaws down and back up.HASARIIt's too deep!(CONTINUED)120.CONTINUED:A beat.EXT. LEPER COLONY - PAIR MUDDY, PARTIAL HANDS - SAMEDAY - SOME MINUTES LATERA leper clings to a rope as several of the human horsespull him and others up the mud bank.ANOTHER ANGLEMax, Hasari, Rassoul, and Chomotkar up to their necksin water; Hasari and Rassoul have a door on theirshoulders; on top of the door, a sick leper woman.Max is lifting one child, then another onto the door.The two pullers make their way slowly toward the mud

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bank.ON MUD BANKAloka, Joan, helping lepers into rickshaw.MEETAAnouar!ANOUARMax Daddah!ON MEETA AND BABYThe hut starts to come apart under them. Max andChomotkar quickly move to the house with another door.MAXWe're here! We're here!Chomotkar holds the door up as Meeta holds the babyout in the direction of Max's voice. Max catches thebaby as the house slips down, then grabs Meeta, whoclings to him.EXT. MUD BANK - DAYHasari pulling the lead rickshaw. Anouar on Max'sshoulders, the two of them leading a terrible ensembleversion of "Hound Dog." An air of festivity amonglepers and rescuers.They come to a bridge made of two planks over rushingwater.(CONTINUED)121.CONTINUED:Several rickshaws go across but as Max and Anouar startover, suddenly the ground gives way beneath Max's feet.Anouar falls free; someone grabs him; but a blackishstream rushes into Max's mouth and in an instant he'sswept beneath the gurgling filth. The density of thefilth makes his effort to surface ineffective. Itlooks for all the world like he's going to drown.ON OTHERSMax has disappeared. Instinctively, Hasari dives intothe maelstrom. He, too, disappears. After some moments,Hasari surfaces, spitting the filth out of his mouth.He dives again, comes up somewhere else. Dives a thirdtime. Is down. Is down. Is down. Then suddenlybursts out of the filth, dragging the unconscious formof Max Loeb into the air. More people have gathered.Cries of:OTHERSIt's the doctor. Save Doctor BigBrother!Aloka passes a baby to someone and helps Hasari pushMax up onto the bank. But now Hasari doesn't know

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what to do and turns to his wife.Aloka quickly clears Max's mouth and begins to administermouth-to-mouth resuscitation. She blows, shebreathes; she blows, she breathes. People crowd in.Aloka blows, she breathes. It seems, though, that byhis stillness and by the looks on people's faces thatMax is dead. Yet, more determined still, Aloka goeson; blows, breathes...CLOSE ON ALOKA AND MAXAnd now Max gags, his body erupts in spasm, and heexplodes a stream of black liquid out of his lungs.Aloka supports his forehead as Max retches again andthen comes still. A beat.INT. CLASSROOM - NIGHTWe PAN ACROSS members of our group -- lepers andnormals -- passing bowls of rice in a simple communalmeal, Singing a religious song quietly. On the floorin the b.g., Anouar is writing something on a slightlydamp stretch of cloth with a child's crayon. Saidtakes the cloth and tacks it to the wall. What Anouarhas written is this, "All that is not given is lost."Everyone in the room stares at the words.122.INT. CLINIC - MAX'S ROOM - NIGHTMax opens his eyes to find Joan, Hasari, Aloka, and thechildren keeping a vigil.MAXOh, Jesus, the guy went to sleepwhen he was supposed to be working?I gotta get up --He tries to get up. Joan pushes him back down.JOANSshh, sshh, sshh! No heroics,junior. Lay back. You're allright.MAXAll right.(a distant laugh)Yeah, I am, I'm all right.He is a little delirious. The boys come close, kneelat his side, instinctively reach out to him.MAXWant you guys to know something.About me. Wanted to be theworld's greatest heart surgeon,just one better than my dad. Justone. First time I'm the lead

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surgeon on a case, the main guy, Ichoke. Froze. The chief made mestep aside. My teacher. Had totake over for me. Went intoradiology. Photography. Had tohave somethin' easy. No pressure.Wasn't too nuts about myself.Quit.Hasari reaches out and touches Max, telling him with atouch that it's all right. He stares up through blearyeyes at all of them with utterly open love. Amritaholds out a small gift to him: It's a banana leaf,holding a small scoop of rice and surrounded by littledecorative leaves.MAXYou people... You...(a beat)I love you guys.EXT. RAM'S HUT - TWO MONTHS LATER - DAYA group gathered on a dry, sunny afternoon, peering intothe hut. We FOCUS on the growing flower in the teacaddy in the window and then go THROUGH the window into:123.INT. PALS' ROOM - DAYHasari, Max (dressed quite India), the local Hara Giri,Mr. Ghosh and the four Ghosh uncles crammed into thetiny room. Members of our group jam the doorway,spectating. The air is close.HASARII can offer no more than I'veoffered! No more! All right,I'll add two dhotis, two vests,and a punjabi. But that's all.Mr. Ghosh lights up a bidi, looks at his brothers,wrinkles his brows at Hasari.MR. GHOSHThat's all? Did he say that'sall?HASARIMy daughter's qualities will makeup for what is lacking.SUBASH'S FATHERWell, it won't do! I am firm inrequiring for my exceptional sonthe bicycle, 1000 repees... andone ounce of gold.HASARI

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That's robbery! The child of arajah might be worth that, andI'm not even sure of that!Impossible!We linger on Shambu a moment.INT. ST. PIUS SCHOOL - HEADMISTRESSES' OFFICE - DAYSister Cecilia, in full habit, looks over a sheaf oftest scores.Then she peers up at...ANOTHER ANGLEManooj, seated between Hasari and Max.SISTER CECILIAWell, indeed I think Sister Joanis right -- we've got a prospecthere. We'll start you off with afew classes; if that works out,we'll make a proper student of you.(CONTINUED)124.CONTINUED:Hasari can't believe his ears. Manooj sits frozen. Maxgrins.EXT. NARROW LANE - NEAR CITY OF JOY - DAYAmrita, Subash, and Shambu heading home from the workshop.Shambu's cast is gone. Subash flirts withAmrita. They see Hasari, Max, and Manooj coming towardthem. Manooj runs to them, shouting that he's going tothe school; Amrita, Subash, Shambu congratulate him...HASARI AND MAXSuddenly the rickshaw wheels jam. They turn to findtwo men, one of whom has slammed a stick into Hasari'sspokes. Retribution, it would seem, has arrived.The kids stop, huddle instinctively together in fear.Our policeman disappears into a doorway as shuttersclose up and down this little street. There are thugsat both ends. No one else is visible on the street.The two men stare at Hasari a moment, smiling. Thenone gets into the rickshaw, crosses his legs as if hemight want transport. But now he whips out a narrowbladed knife, and still staring at Hasari, begins toslice up the newly covered seats of the rickshaw. Maxlooks around, trying to cool things.MAXHey, come on, don't do this.VOICEWell, what's the problem here?They turn, Ashoka. Behind him, the Goonda.

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ASHOKAYou've become very brave of late,haven't you?MAXDon't do this.ASHOKAOh, I do what I please. You see,my father's dead, I'm in chargenow. So you will get off mystreets, you will leave mycountry, and that clinic andschool will close.(CONTINUED)125.CONTINUED:MAXWhy?ASHOKAMy father was weak. He let youand your European friend givethese little people ideas. It'sover.MAXYou can't do this!He takes no more than a step at Ashoka, a hand coming up,when he's hit hard from behind. Goes to his knees.MAXJesus Christ.His hand comes away from the back of his head with blood.He tries to rise and is hit again.HASARI(to the kids)Get back! Stay back!ASHOKANo, no, come forward. Come.Ashoka glides toward the petrified Amrita. The Goondaremains unmoving, watchful. Ashoka puts out his handwith its rings, and strokes Amrita's cheek.ASHOKAWhat a little woman already, hey?HASARIPlease, don't touch her, Babu.ASHOKAWhat did you say?HASARII said, Please, don't touch her.Hasari glances over his shoulder, his eyes bouncing off

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the Goonda's impassive face. Now, the knife comes out ofAshoka's pocket, snaps open, glints in the light.ASHOKAShe's going to give someone a lotof enjoyment. Yes.(CONTINUED)126.CONTINUED:There's a moment of unbearable tension as everyone, includingthe Goonda, realizes this man is out of control.ASHOKA(to the Goonda)He said 'please' didn't he?'Please, don't touch her?'The Goonda stares at Ashoka... And now Ashoka reaches outand we FOLLOW CLOSE on his hand as it moves ever soslowly through space to settle on Amrita's breast.And now Hasari explodes. He hits Ashoka. A hard punchto the chest. Ashoka stumbles and falls to one knee.The Two Thugs make a move to come to his rescue... but acurious thing stops them: the Goonda's arm, outstretchedacross their path, his eyes alerting them not to proceed.Max lurches to his feet unsteadily.ASHOKABhose, help me!Hasari unloads a punch into Ashoka's face; Ashoka's nosepours blood; he starts to whimper. He clutches Hasarihard to him. Holds him. Hasari struggles, slams hispalm into Ashoka's chin, sending Ashoka to the ground,sending the knife skidding across the ground. Hasarigrabs the knife, straddles Ashoka, about to kill. But hecan't do it.HASARILife is hard enough. No more.Leave us alone.Hasari backs off, leans against a wall, stares down atAshoka, his hands in tight against his body.Manooj and Shambu stare at their father in awe.Shambu sees something on the ground where the first blowwas delivered to Ashoka's chest. Everyone has movedslightly to one side. He bends and closes his fistaround something.The Goonda steps between Ashoka and Max and Hasari.GOONDAYou won't be bothered again.A look from the Goonda and the Thugs vanish, leaving

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Ashoka cowering in a doorway on his knees.(CONTINUED)127.CONTINUED:Shutters start to open, people begin to appear again indoorways and windows.Fearing for his life, Ashoka suddenly bolts.Max is fixed on Hasari. He lets up a scream of exultation,his hand going out for a "five" from Hasari. Thekids charge toward Hasari.Then everyone freezes.Hasari lists to his right side and blood starts to pourfrom the knife wound in his abdomen under his pressingarm.EXT. MAX'S ROOM - UPSTAIRS BALCONY - NIGHTFrom here we can see Hasari on Max's cot under "The Raftof the Medusa" in the little room overlooking the street.Out here, the two doctors are alone.MAXWhy don't you go on home. I'llstay with him.Sunil nods. Max grips Sunil's hand strongly. Sunil goesdown the steps. Max moves to Hasari's bedside. Hewatches Hasari breathing. He looks up at "The Raft ofthe Medusa."INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHT (SEVERAL HOURS LATER)A thin stream of dawn light coming through the halfclosedshutters.FROM HERE - THE BALCONYThrough the open door, we can just see Joan, prayingquietly. Close around her, Anouar, Meeta, Surya, Margareta,Poomina...THE ROOMBeneath "The Raft of the Medusa," Hasari Pal speaks tohis family and Max, Aloka sitting close to the bed, theChildren on the bed beside their father, and Max standingclose.(CONTINUED)128.CONTINUED:HASARIA man's journey to the end of hisobligations is a very long road.And you have to remember that youcan never give up. We pray thatlife will bless us, that we willbe kings, with possessions and

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money that we can rule over allaround us. But it's a mist; theonly thing that makes it possibleto endure life is our love, onefor the other.A beat, the family and Max tightly bound together. Andnow we hear the dim sounds of RICKSHAW BELLS.HASARII was dreaming the sound ofrickshaw bells, and now I hearthem.Max opens the windows. Manooj helps his father sit up.COURTYARD - THEIR POVOutside, there are rickshaw pullers filling the courtyardand spilling out into the street. When the window opens,all the Pullers start ringing their bells and the room isfull of their music.HASARIAre they here for me?Unquestionably, they are.HASARIA city so big. When we arrived,we didn't have a place to live, afriend.He smiles.OUTSIDEThe many hands with their ringing bells.CLOSE ON WINDOWThe tiny figure of Shambu joins Max in the window. Maxbends close.(CONTINUED)129.CONTINUED:SHAMBU(whispering)Is my father going to die?Max makes the same sound he made in the ashram at thebeginning of the movie, though this sound of dismissaldifferent.MAXGet serious.INT. RAM'S HUT - HASARI'S FACE - DAYHasari mirrors Max's expression of dismissal!HASARIGet serious! I've agreed to thebicycle, I've agreed to the 1000rupees! I can go no further. I

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have nothing more to give!OUTSIDE THE HUTEveryone crowded around the door. From within, we DIMLYHEAR the negotiations continue. Max approaches from theclinic. Shambu slips down the steps from above as...MAXHow's it going?RAMAll that stands between them nowis the ounce of gold. MaxDaddah, Joan Di -- is she a goodreader?MAXWhat do you mean?RAMShe read this letter to me.( he shows Max)But I think she must have read itwrong. She said my wife writesthat irrigation has come to ourvillage.MAXBut that's great.(CONTINUED)130.CONTINUED:RAMBut it means I should go home tomy wife.MAXI thought that's why we've beenwriting all these letters.RAMYes, of course, I love her fromhere, yes; but, what if I go homeand find I don't love her fromthere.Shambu takes him by the hand and tugs him quickly to theedge of the tea shop. The little boy indicates Maxshould bend close. Max leans down.SHAMBUDaddy needs gold, right?Max nods. And Shambu brings his fist up from under thetable.CLOSE ON SHAMBU'S HANDHe opens his hand to disclose what he scooped off theground during the fight: Max's necklace and Hebrew

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letter.SHAMBUDo you think this is pretend goldor real?MAX AND SHAMBUMax stares at the little boy's hopeful face.INT. PAL'S ROOM - FLOWERWe see the fully blossomed flower in the tea caddy andthen Hasari's fingers come INTO THE FRAME. He carefullysnips the flower free of its stalk.ANOTHER ANGLEAmrita is dressed in the beautiful sari her father boughther. Father and daughter are alone. He hands her theflower and adjusts her veil tenderly.(CONTINUED)131.CONTINUED:HASARIYou never did belong to me. Youwere only lent to me by God untilyou marry and continue the wheelof life.Amrita stares at her loving father and slowly her armscome up around his neck, the flower against his curvedback. Tears fill Hasari's eyes, but a smile graces hislips.EXT. SQUARE - DAY - EARLY EVENINGThe procession to the courtyard begins when a BRASS BANDstrikes up, accompanied by singing and shouting. Tinylights have been strung over the street. We see Max andManubai. Margareta and a group of children. Joan withPoomina. Anour, Meeta, Said. Everyone who's become partof the family is present.EXT. CLINIC COURTYARD - DAY (DUSK)The procession arrives and enters. Smoke from the chulas.Light from a half dozen lamps.Subash and his procession make their entrance. A ritualveil is fixed to Subash's face. The Pujari waves forHasari to come to his place. Hasari turns to Max.HASARII would be pleased if you wouldstand with me in the place ofhonor to the right of my daughter.Deeply touched, Max nods... and the two men step forward...as Subash is motioned forward by the Pujari.Subash sits beside Amrita.THE CEREMONY

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A flame. The shyness of bride and groom as the ceremonyproceeds with the winding of the red thread. Hasarilooks on with unspeakable pride, Max beside him. We seethe faces of all our family again: Aloka, Manooj andShambu, Joan, Poomina, Surya, Selima, Aristotle John,etc.132.THE WHEELTurning. As Amrita and Subash, joined by the thread,circle the flame... as we PULL BACK AND UP. Now we seethe clinic and school and the surrounding area, thealleys full of people and activity. As we continue toPULL BACK, we see the entirety of the City of Joy andthen beyond -- Calcutta, its teeming streets -- life continuingas the sun sets against an infinite sky and weROLL END CREDITS.FADE OUT.

THE ENDCity of JoyWritten byGERALD BRACH & ROLAND JOFFEOctober 1990Early DraftFOR EDUCATIONALPURPOSES ONLYCITY OF JOYFADE IN:TITLE SEQUENCE.EXT. BIHAR - DAY (DAWN, SUMMER, MID-1980)Heat that has mass. That rises off the parched earth inshimmering waves. After a moment, we see what appear tobe figures coming out of the haze, one by one. A familywith their few belongings: HASARI PAL, 33, his wife,ALOKA, 28, and their children, daughter, AMRITA, 13,sons MANOOJ and SHAMBU, 11 and 9; HASARI'S MOTHER andFATHER. They embark toward the night, the rising sunbehind them.EXT. ROADSIDE - BUS STOP - DAY (DAWN)Hasari's Father passes a gourd of precious water. Hasariserves the children first. Shambu gulps entirely toomuch, the others forcing him to stop by a unified forceof will. Embarrassed, he passes the cup to his brother,who sips, as does his sister. Aloka barely wets herlips, insisting on leaving the last drops for Hasari.

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And now, a rooster tail of dust rises up behind theapproaching bus and the old parents bid farewell to theirson's family. There is an intense sadness at leavingthe land and Hasari's Mother clings to him...HASARII'll send money soon.His Mother nods, as Hasari erupts in a small cough which,by habit, he suppresses. His Mother crushes Aloka toher.HASARI'S MOTHERDon't let the children out of yoursight. Not for a moment.Now the children. She wants to keep them here even asthe old man touches her, reminding her she must let themgo.HASARI'S MOTHERHelp your parents. Don't fightwith each other. And, Manooj,stay away from the cinema, do youhear?Shambu, his eyes big as saucers, whispers to hisgrandma...(CONTINUED)2.CONTINUED:SHAMBUI don't want to go. There are badmen with long knives who stealchildren.That does it: Hasari's Mother dissolves in tears, butthe old man nevertheless unlooses her insistently fromthe children. Aloka and the children get on the bus asthe old man embraces his son.HASARI'S FATHERA man's journey to the end of hisobligations is a very long road.Yours begins here.EXT. ROADSIDE/INT. BUS - DAYThere's not an empty inch inside the little vehicle oron top. The passengers are silent. A woman breast feedsa baby. Several passengers fan themselves. Many sleep.The Pals squeeze wearily into the rear seat.MANOOJ(to his neighbor)Our farm has died, so we aremoving to Calcutta to become rich!Hasari and Aloka look at each other: If only it were the

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pursuit of wealth and not survival. The woman understands.And now the BUS GRINDS forward and the Pals lookback. Hasari coughs, suppresses it... as silence falls.The elder Pals stand huddled together in the dust and wesee, nestled behind a boulder at the roadside, a tiny,blue flower -- beautiful and fragile, but like all thingsalive, determined to live... and we hear the sound of aDOZEN VOICES CHANTING a quiet mantra in unison as we --DISSOLVE TO:INT. ASHRAM - ANOTHER FLOWER - DAYThis flower floats gently in a bowl of water. The TITLESEND as we PULL BACK SLOWLY to reveal a dozen Anglos,several Indians, and one Kenyan seated cross-leggedbefore an aging Yogi, who's quietly urging the supplicantsto find "their light, allow your white light tofill your spirit's eye." Above, ceiling fans move theair.(CONTINUED)3.CONTINUED:As we PAN the group, we see that everyone has his/hereyes closed in earnest meditation... until we COME TO anAmerican, MAX LOEB, 29, who pops open first his right eye-- looks to his right and left -- closes his right eyeand opens his left eye -- looks left and right... andthen, instead of continuing the mantra and the search forhis white light, expels a stream of air through hispursed lips, making a vibrating, flatulent sound, oneindicative of sizeable frustration and dismissal.MAXGet serious.Around him, other single eyes pop open, searching for thesource of this unmeditative sound. Max nods and smilesa wry smile as if to say: This just ain't doin' it forme, folks.INT. SPARTAN ROOM - TRUMPET - DAYMax closes the trumpet case and starts chucking hisclothes and books in a knapsack and a small valise. Wenotice the Hebrew letter chai on a gold chain around hisneck. His girl friend, BETSY KAHN, overdressed somewhatin an Indian style, endeavors to exercise the inner peaceshe's been pursuing...BETSYI swear to God, you never giveanything enough time! What didyou expect in five days, Max?MAX

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Only what they promise in thebrochure: Inner peace, serenity,and a nice chant that gets rid ofthis rock in my gut. E.S.T., theydo you in a weekend.BETSYI would really appreciate it ifyou wouldn't be terribly glib justnow, Max.That's okay with Max, who's willing to eschew communicationof all kinds and just finish heaving his stuff inthe valise.BETSYAm I to assume you'll be at theairport in Calcutta a week fromtomorrow?(CONTINUED)4.CONTINUED:MAXImpossible to predict, Betsy IleneKahn. Maybe you better give me myticket.BETSYScrew you, Max -- I paid for it!How many times am I going to letyou walk out on me and come back?MAXI think only you can answer that,Betsy Ilene Kahn.She slaps him.MAXDo you really think that's anappropriate way to get rid of yourWestern rage, Bets?She swings at him again. He catches her hand hard in hisfist.MAXOne slap is romantic. Two wouldcall for retaliation... Lend me ahundred dollars.She yanks free, begins to chant her mantra as he grabshis knapsack and valise and goes out the door. Now,she's silent and, in the simplest sense, deeply hurt.She can't help herself; she cares. We STAY WITH hera moment as we --DISSOLVE TO:

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EXT. COUNTRY AIRPORT (ASSAM) - WINDING ROAD - DAYCool, lush hills. A little pack of single-engine twoandfour-seaters. Max, in shorts and University ofMiami T-shirt, hot, sweaty, appears around a bend in theapproach road.INT. AIRPORT - WAITING ROOMA small service desk. A CLERK, who doubles as GroundControl on the microphone, passing on the prevailing windand the active runway. We hear the STATIC-BACKED VOICEof a PILOT, giving his call numbers, then announcinghe's clear for immediate takeoff on the active runway.The Clerk CLICKS off and finds Max.(CONTINUED)5.CONTINUED:MAXHow you doin'?The Clerk gives Max a warm smile.CLERKHello.MAXI've always wanted to walk into alittle airport just about likethis one and ask the guy at thecounter the following question.Ready?The Clerk nods; he's at Max's ervice.MAXWhen's the next flight to anywhere?CLERKTo Bombay. Tomorrow, at oneo'clock in the afternoon.A beat --- the Clerk with his smile, Max with his, onesimply warm, the other giving off simmering heat.EXT. AIRPORT - LOW ANGLE - DAYMax sits on the ground, up against the building, playinga jazz line quietly and rather well on his trumpet. Apair of well-shod feet ENTER the FRAME. Max looks up.ANOTHER ANGLEThe rubicund face of VEEJAY CHATTERGEE, 50, and moreBritish than Churchill. Behind him, his cherubic wife,RAVI... and making her way toward the enclave of smallplanes, their daughter, MANUBAI, 26.VEEJAYI say, are you looking for a wayout of here? We have an extraseat. Where are you wanting to

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go?Max's eyes flick from Veejay to the back view of Manubaias she continues on and back to Veejay.MAXI'm wanting to go wherever you'rewanting to take me.6.INT. 180 FOUR-SEATER - DAYMax is crammed into the back seat with the plump Ravi.ANOTHER ANGLEWe see now that, contrary to our assumption that Veejaywould be in the left seat, it's Manubai who's flying theplane. The NOISE of the ENGINE forces them to speaksomewhat loudly.VEEJAYWe were among the fortunate backin '48. We got out of East Bengalbefore partition destroyed so many.We make mattresses. The RajahDouble Spring.Veejay has an old flask out.VEEJAYWe don't have a flight attendanton this flight...(passing the flask)Are you a musician, Mr. Loeb?MAXUnattached trumpet player andrecently-certified associate guru.As he takes a hit on the flask, Max's eye focuses on thelittle mirror on the dash. In it he can see Manubai'seyes. If we were to judge by what he sees in them, shedoesn't find him the least bit amusing. He smiles hissmile at her.EXT. HOWRAH STATION (CALCUTTA) - DAY (EARLY MORNING)A huge bridge dominates the skyline. The train trundlesto a stop, its WHISTLE clearing the way. People hang onits sides, sit on the roof... and now flood the platform,flowing into the station, clearing a view for us of thePals, clinging to their baggage in the middle of thishuman anthill.CLOSE ON THEM (MOVING)Hands reach out with sweets to sell, with tea, asking formoney.MANOOJDaddy, I'm scared.(CONTINUED)

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7.CONTINUED:HASARIScared? No -- why? This is veryexciting. As soon as we get toour friend's house, everythingwill be fine.But, despite Hasari's charade of confidence, they (andwe) are overwhelmed by the size of the station and thedesperate energy of the humanity around them. As theypress on, a small beggar woman huddled on the platformturns her eyes eerily on Manooj... as a deformed handstretches INTO the FRAME. Aloka senses someone: Abeggar, face half-hidden and eaten away by leprosy. Thisterrifying image presses the boys tightly to theirmother and moves Hasari to encircle Armita with one handand attempt to wrap the other three inside the embrace ofhis other hand. It does not seem possible that he canprotect all of them against the predatory eyes watchingthem. He moves them quickly to a wall...HASARIWait right here. Don't move.WITH HASARIHe moves to a line of VENDORS, shows a piece of paper toone, as he digs out his precious screw of money to make apurchase of sweets from the Vendor.HASARIPlease, can you direct me to myfriend at this address? We areto stay with him.The Vendor gives the address a look, shows it to theVendor next to him. Both look at Hasari.VENDOR #1There's no such address as this inCalcutta.HASARIBut that's not possible.VENDOR #1Of course it is possible! I havelived here all my life. You arenew. Who would know if a placeexists or does not?VENDOR #2Bombay, perhaps. Delhi. Lookthere.(CONTINUED)8.

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CONTINUED:Dear God, what now? Stunned, Hasari hands Vendor #1 arupee and, with the sweets, turns back to his family, hisface going through a magical transformation as heprepares to suggest to the family that all is well.EXT. CHOWRINGHEE LANE - DAY (MIDDAY SUN)A few clean and cared-for Ambassador cars sweep into thegateway of the Grand Hotel, past a gateman.RACK FOCUS TO:FEET - MAIDANFeet tramping the pulsating tarmac, sending up dust.ANOTHER ANGLEThe Pals, scared, dispirited, weary, consumed by thecrowd. They've been walking a long time. Shambu cries;Aloka tries to ease his fear. They stop numbly at theedge of the park, put their bundles down against a longwall.Across the way, a thin policeman shares a cigarette witha group of traders. There is a deeply fearful look inHasari's eyes, a look he is having difficulty controllingnow. He needs to revive the family's confidence. Hetakes out his precious bundle of rupees and gives one toManooj. Manooj, though, is fixed on the cinema acrossthe street. Hasari indicates a stall just across themain road.HASARIManooj, go and get some fruit.Come straight back.Delighted with his task, Manooj sets off, his eyes on themarquee of the theater with its huge cardboard cutout ofKumar Kapur, starring in Hot Gun. Hasari calls out tohim to watch where he's going; the mere crossing of thestreet is a potential parental nightmare. A hand rufflesManooj's head and a TALL MAN with dark eyes and a sweetsmile comes at the boy's anxious parents.GANGOOLY (TALL MAN)Yes, hello, brother. Bihar, am Icorrect?HASARIYes, how did you know?(CONTINUED)9.CONTINUED:Hasari is torn between speaking to the man and watchinghis son's incredible journey across the street.GANGOOLYLet me say only that the terrible

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malevolence that has visited yourpart of the country affects us all.HASARIThree years without rain. Nothingcame out of the earth but debts.GANGOOLYTerrible. And now, the family onthe street. It is not acceptable.(smile widens)And if I can't help, my name is notMr. Gangooly... Which, blessedly,it is.And now a smile as full as the sky above.EXT. SMALL BUILDING IN BACK STREET - DAYA brick slides out of the wall.We're BEHIND the brick and see Gangooly's soft face as hereaches in and pulls out a key.The street is small and empty. Though the houses arenothing much, to the Pals, they look like palaces.Manooj and Shambu run about in delight. Gangooly motionsfor quiet. With a flourish, he opens the door.INT. SMALL ROOM - DAYGangooly enters, glances around, waves the Pals in.They're amazed. There's a cage occupied by two parrots.In one corner, a small altar dedicated to the goddessLakshmi is decorated with some flowers and, behind atorn, plastic curtain in a corner, part kitchen, partwash place, containing a tap with running water.GANGOOLYBe free -- look around.On the faces of the family is one thought: Is itpossible? Amrita goes right to the parrots.GANGOOLYThey'll need feeding. Give themseed. But don't spoil them.(CONTINUED)10.CONTINUED:He bows briefly before the altar as he moves to thewashing area.GANGOOLYAnd now, one of the miracles oflife in the city. One and two...He turns on the tap and a stream of brown WATER GURGLESout. The Pals are hypnotized, the fists around theirhearts begin to ease.GANGOOLY

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Holy water from the Ganges! Flowsout forever. Come -- touch it.Manooj and Shambu put their hands under the tap.GANGOOLYDrink! It's as pure as the dew onShiva's lips.They drink. Gangooly claps in delight... and beckonsHasari aside.FAVORING GANGOOLY AND HASARIGANGOOLYNow, this place is yours for twoweeks. My cousin, Moti, is away,traveling. Normally, the renttakes fifty rupees for a week, butfor a brother, forty. No, don'tthank me.Hasari pulls out his little screw of money.HASARII have only seventy-five, but assoon as I have work...GANGOOLYGive me the fifty, pay the restnext week. You'll find work, Itrust you. Aren't I from Bihar,too? Yes.And the money is in his hand. He joins his handstogether.GANGOOLYYou are pleased? Then Mr. Gangoolyis pleased. It's how I am.(CONTINUED)11.CONTINUED:He turns on his heel and he's gone. For a moment, thePals are still, swept from the brink of catastrophe tosalvation... and now, as one, they release their sheerand utter joy.INT. CHATTERGEE STAIRCASE - DAYRavi and Veejay leading Max up the grand staircase,Manubai in the foyer, looking after them.INT. GUEST ROOM - DAYRavi leads the way into a lovely guest bedroom.RAVII hope this is all right. Theroom hasn't been aired or the bedturned, but --VEEJAY

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Oh, he doesn't care about that, doyou, Max? Here, look here.Veejay opens a little cupboard, stocked with liquor.VEEJAYHelp yourself. Be comfortable.Ravi, come on, go, go, let's leavethe young man to himself.Obediently, Ravi goes. Veejay follows. Max goes to thewindow.HIS POVThe beautiful Manubai in the garden.MAXHe lies down on the bed. He's found Nirvana.INT. MAIN ROOM - DAYIt's Hasari who watches now. There's LAUGHTER from Alokaand Amrita. Joyful SHOUTS from the boys. Hasari isalone in the main room, on his knees, in front of thepile of their baggage and bundles. He turns his attentionfrom the laughter to a just-opened, old suitcase.He takes out a small tea box. Opens it delicately.(CONTINUED)12.CONTINUED:It's full of something brown. He pushes his fingers inand feels this bit of earth with a tenderness that'salmost religious, puts a pinch to his nose and breathesit in. The LAUGHTER and SHOUTING from the bathing areais GROWING.INT. BATHING AREAShambu is paddling near the tap. Aloka is bending overthe drain and Amrita is rinsing her heavy, dark hairwith a pot. Manooj is nearby, rubbing himself with anold towel. Hasari enters unnoticed and looks at thegroup with tenderness... and with gratitude for theirgood fortune.A MAN, red with anger, yanks the curtain aside, stares.The family freezes. Aloka's hair drips unnoticed on hersari.MANWhat are you doing here? Who areyou?HASARIMy name is Pal, Hasari. Mr.Gangooly rented this space to --MANMr. Who?HASARI

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Gangooly. You must be his cousin,Mr. Moti.MANI don't know any Gangooly and myname is Binal and this is my home-- get out!The furious Binal, followed by the Pals, goes into themain part of the room. A small crowd has been attractedby the noise.HASARIBut this is true. We paid him adeposit of fifty --BINALA man goes out because he has towork, and some beggar tries tomove in while his back is turned.(CONTINUED)13.CONTINUED:This while Binal has begun to throw things out onto thestreet, though this cleansing of his home doesn't stophim from picking up a stick. The odd sympathizer meetswith...BINALSo, should I suffer if they areso stupid to jump into the firstmouth that wants to eat them?He turns with the stick on Hasari.BINALYou're lucky I don't kill you!Hasari looks at Manooj, who drops his eyes. They collectthe remainder of their possessions and hurry out thedoor.EXT. SMALL STREET - DAYFull of neighbors. There's a suppressed violence in theair. A man pushes Aloka. Sweat streaming down his face,Hasari confronts the man. A WOMAN pushes the men apart.WOMANGo to the river. Try to squeezein there.EXT. VICTORIA MONUMENT - STREET - NIGHT (DUSK)Calcutta broiling: Buses, vendors, carts, rickshaws,children beg at car windows. The Pals stand, uncertain,and for the first time a rickshaw fills Hasari's eye,carrying two passengers. But now he shoulders his burdenand leads the family toward the river. We HOLD untilthey grow small against the setting sun, gleaming red

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against the white domes of the Victoria Monument.INT. CHATTERGEE'S LIBRARY - TORSO - NIGHTMoving through the dark, a figure, touching things,looking at photographs of the Chattergees. We heara MUFFLED DIALOGUE mixed with the SINGING a la DeanMartin of "Everybody Loves Somebody Sometime":"Goddamn it, boy, what's the matter with you? --"Everybody loves somebody sometime" -- "Go for it,son!" -- "Sure, Dad, whatever you say, Dad." --"Everybody falls in love somehow" -- "You're the dad,Dad." Now, a humidor. Max opens it, takes out acigar, takes two. Takes five. Senses someone. Turns.14.ANOTHER ANGLERavi in her bathrobe.MAXI'm starving.He gives her his best saint's smile.RAVIWell, you don't want to eat thoseawful cigars. Come with me, we'llwake up the cook, she'll fix yousomething proper.EXT. KITCHEN - WINDOW - NIGHTTHROUGH the window, we see the bleary-eyed cook layingout food as Ravi chatters away at Max, he with a beatificgrin on his face as he feeds himself.EXT. RIVER BANK - HOWRAH BRIDGE - DAYThe bridge etched against the dawn sky. The corpse ofan indigent is collected and put on a cart.MANOOJWith his eyes open, watching the dead man being removed.FAMILYAfter their humiliating flight, they found refuge here.Tiny figures huddled together with their baggage andbundles, near a tree, not far from the steps that dipdown to the smooth water. Hasari's eyes, too, are onthe dead man, that warning. He kneels beside Manooj,strokes him. The boy's eyes turns to the man's,wondering if the man can provide for them.HASARIDon't let it frighten you. Youhave to be brave. I know we'llfind work today.Fear and doubt fill Manooj's eyes. He nods.EXT. DOCKS - DAYHasari at the gates, the family huddled together in

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the b.g. The man behind the gate shakes his head,points.15.ANOTHER ANGLEA line of a hundred men stretches from a door. Hasariis on the edge of panic, but when he turns to the family,he's wearing his confident smile. As before, he gathersthe family into the protectorate of his arms and guidesthem onward. As he pushes off into the sea of humanity,we PULL BACK AND UP, FILLING the FRAME WITH street uponstreet, disappearing Hasari.FROM STREET - INTO WORKSHOP - HASARI AND OWNERTwo plump men in shirt sleeves look coolly at Hasari.The elder shakes his head. The younger shows Hasarithe door.Outside, an increasingly desperate Hasari findsAloka before a small shrine, saying a prayer.EXT. BARA BAZAR - DAYAloka huddled with Manooj and Amrita. Hasari talkingto the owner of a small market stall. Shambu is peeringinto a shop with male mannequins in the window.INT. MEN'S SHOP - MOVING MIRRORIn the moving mirror we see counters and shelves of men'sclothing.The mirror stops at Max slipping into a kurta before anaudience of Ravi, Manubai, and a salesman.RAVIIt's not extravagant at all. Youcan't go around all week in yourtribal garb.Max sees a boy's face pressed to the glass: he indicatesthe shirt, for the boy's approval. The boy smiles awonderful smile.RAVINow he looks civilized, doesn'the, Manubai?MANUBAIAlmost.Max looks at her. She at him.16.EXT. MEN'S SHOP - DAYMan leans down, whispers to the smiling boy...MAXYou sure I look all right?The little boy nods. Max slips him several rupees...and he, Manubai, and Ravi fold themselves into her tinycar as --

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ANOTHER ANGLEShambu runs to his dejected family.SHAMBULook! A man gave me these manymoneys!HASARIWhat man? Why -- did you ask himfor money?SHAMBUHe just gave it to me.HASARIWhere is he?Shambu looks, but the car's gone.HASARIDon't do that. We're not beggars.Shambu is devastated. Out of his own desperation,Hasari feels he's been a little rough on the boy. Heholds him close.HASARIGo back to the river. Wait for meby the tree. Don't go anywhere.Do you understand?Aloka, the boys nod. We WATCH them as Hasari headsoff, quickly becoming a small figure disappearing intothe sea.EXT. JUTE MILL DAY - LATE AFTERNOON SUNStarting to sink. We PAN DOWN TO Hasari stepping toa grilled window as the man ahead moves out.17.INT. JUTE MILL - DAYA flaking gray wall, half-obscured with moldering files.The grilled window lets in a little light and the quietsupplications of those outside.An old CLERK at a desk. A voice calls out. The Clerklooks up, crosses to the grill.Hasari's tense face through the bars. A TRUCK RUMBLESpast, drowning out the words... except these: "...tradeunion." The Clerk shakes his head sadly. On the vergeof panic, Hasari hangs onto the window...CLERKDo you have family?HASARIYes, yes of course. But I'mthree days without work. I'lltake anything.The Clerk digs in his pocket, presses two rupees onHasari.

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CLERKHere, now go away.HASARINo, I don't want you to give me --The next man in line forcibly moves Hasari out of theway.CLERKIn this city, a man with a familycan't be proud. Take it!The Clerk waves him away, turns his attention to thenext man.INT. CHATTERGEE RECEPTION ROOM - DAY (LATE AFTERNOON)Manubai's face. Then Max's. Then hers. Then his.Looking at each other. Five days. Kiss. Ravi.MAXI said you have three days toget me into bed, and I'm bettingyou can't do it.(CONTINUED)18.CONTINUED:MANUBAIIt's all right for you to use mymother as your tour guide andmeal ticket, because she'll getsomething nice out of it. Butwhat would I get?He stares at her a moment, then gets up, goes around thetable.MAXWell, gee, I don't know. Maybe Icould say something so amusingthat you'd laugh so hard it wouldbreak that hot poker you have upyour ass.She stares at him. He bends to kiss her. She doesn'tpull away... but after a moment he realizes she isn'tresponding. He continues the kiss, but he opens hiseyes... to find her staring at him. He pulls back.They stare at each other another moment, then Maxsenses someone in the doorway.RAVIStaring at them, disappointment filling her eyes.MAXThe same sound of frustration and ennui he made in theashram.EXT. CHATTERGEE HOME - DAY

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His arm around Max, Veejay guides the young man towarda waiting taxi.VEEJAYBelieve me, I understand, but youknow how women are. Do you haveenough money?Max gives him a non-commital shrug. Veejay winks,stuffs the money into Max's pocket.EXT. GREEN ACRES COURTYARD - COW - DAY (LATE AFTERNOON)Bare feet... and then sneakered feet step over the sleepingbovine, who turns a disinterested eye up.19.ANOTHER ANGLEMax is guided by a grumpy hall PORTER wearing an offwhiteshirt and bellbottoms through the walled and wellplanted courtyard of an inexpensive hotel. Max gives thecow a bemused eye...INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAYThe room is utterly utilitarian. The Porter turns on aceiling fan, sending an army of cockroaches scurryingfor calmer terrain. Max clearly doesn't care forcockroaches.PORTERIt pleases you?MAXNo fruit basket? No mini bar?Max hands the Porter several rupees.PORTERBar? Of course -- many, many.But make care, Sahib. Please,for me. If it is lady you liketo know -- yes? -- you let me.Huh? Very sweet girl, goodnature, very sweet. Or boy, verygood...Max puts a finger on the Porter's head, turns him forthe door.PORTERNo like boy? Something then forsmoke -- mmmh, very good for smoke!AT DOORMax eases the Porter out. As the door is closing...PORTERMaybe you like two girls -- looka little Chinese, but very greatpleasure.Max smiles his smile and disappears the Porter behind the

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closed door. The smile disappears and the FAN gets hisattention; it has an annoying rhythm and sound. Heflicks the switch, but the fan continues to snap around.(CONTINUED)20.CONTINUED:He stares at it... and startles us by suddenly flickingout a hand and grabbing the blade, stopping the fan.He lets go. The fan is still. He carries his knapsackto the tub; it has brown stains along the middle andthe water has a brown tinge as it flows out of the tap.He sits on the edge of the tub, dumps his knapsack onthe floor, picks up a half-dozen pamphlets from theashram.CLOSE ON PAMPHLETSGuides to inner peace.RESUMEHe wings the pamphlets at the trashcan.EXT. RIVERBANK - HOWRAH BRIDGE - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Hasari comes around the corner of a warehouse, a smileon his face, clutching some bananas and dried grain.His relief -- and ours -- is short-lived.TREE AND BANKThe space where he left the family has been clearedand taken over by trucks. He's lost his family.HOWRAH BRIDGE ROADA group of Hindus are celebrating a puja, the womensinging canticles at the top of their lungs; the mentossing a little boy happily back and forth... as thepanic-stricken Hasari rushes up.HASARIMy wife, my children...Hasari rushes on. Suddenly we --CUT TO:UNDER BRIDGE - DAYHis head turns and his eyes look this way, that way...until out of the near silence, we hear a distant,extraordinary word...(CONTINUED)21.CONTINUED:CHILD (O.S.)Daaaaaaddddddyyyyy!The word catches Hasari's ear. He looks into the seaof people along the river bank under the bridge.CHILD (O.S.)Daaaaaadddddddyyyy!

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As in a dream, Shambu rises up out of the sea of bodies... and runs to his father.SHAMBUDaaaaadddddyyyy!Now, Aloka, Amrita, Manooj appear, rising up out of thesea, ending Hasari's nightmare.A warrior returning from battle, Hasari engulfs thelittle boy.HASARII told you to remain where I leftyou! I told you to stay there!MANOOJThe police came!SHAMBUWe said we had to meet you, butthey didn't care! They weremean!As before, Hasari tries to engulf the rest of his familyin the protectorate of his arms. In the b.g., Arun andhis family.ALOKAThese friends have found space.They will share with us.Hasari looks at the tiny space. The roof is cardboardand cloth and half an old movie poster featuring theactor Kumar Kapur. Hasari looks at his tiny bit offood, debates a moment... then puts his hands together,addresses these generous people.HASARII would be proud if you wouldshare our food with us.Everyone looks at the food; there is no disguising theirhunger.22.EXT. BRIDGE - NIGHTDistant transistor MUSIC as we PAN DOWN: The Palchildren sleep despite the QUIET MOANS and nightmareCRIES around them, the two boys huddled together, Amritaclose to her mother.Hasari comes out of the dark. Aloka looks at him. Heshakes his head. He slumps beside her. Aloka strokesHasari, looking lovingly at him.ALOKAI remember the first time I sawyou, on the day of our marriage.Wearing a bright yellow turban.You asked me my name and you said,

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'You are a very beautiful girland I am wondering whether youwill find me appealing.'He strokes her tenderly in return... but now, overwhelmedwith despair, she begins to weep.HASARIWhat?She doesn't want to say it, doesn't want to wake thechildren.HASARIIt's all right -- what?ALOKAI miss the village. There Icould help.Hasari pulls Aloka close, strokes her.EXT. GREEN ACRES - NIGHTThe sky turns red. The Porter looks up, shakes his head:Poor young man, stuck with only a trumpet for company.INT. MAX'S ROOMMax sits on the floor in a corner and plays as we hearthe sound of a fierce WHISTLE and a SCREAMING ENGINE.EXT. SETTLEMENT - CLOSE ON BULLDOZER - DAWNA gigantic earthmover lurches into position.23.ANOTHER ANGLESwarming police.PALSAwaken -- startled, disoriented. Aloka gentles thechildren as Hasari moves instinctively toward the threat.SCENEA black ambassadorial car pulls up, out of which stepsa BABU. A microphone and speaker has been set up.Another car unloads several politicos with party banners.A minion hands the Babu the mike; he wants to get on withit before this turns into a political rally. Hasari isclose to him, as is Arun.BABUThe municipality has directed usto carry out the destruction ofthis settlement. All of you mustgo -- now!For a moment there is a babble of fear and frustration.Then from Hasari's side, Arun confronts the Babu.ARUNFor what reason?The Babue appears disconcerted. He's not accustomed tothe poor asking questions.

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BABUBecause this settlement isimpeding construction work.ARUNWe're not moving! Why shouldwe move? Who is the municipality?We are! This is our home!BABUI have my orders.ARUNIf we're driven from here, whereshould we go?BABUI'll give you five minutes togather your things. Then, thesettlement comes down.(CONTINUED)24.CONTINUED:ARUNWhy should you alone be burdenedwith such a task? Let me help!Arun begins to tear his shelter apart, and to heave thepieces at the Babu, who retreats. Others soon take upthe call to vent their frustration, hurling things atthe police and at the driver of the tractor. Quicklywe've got a full-scale riot. The police wade into thecrowd, pounding people with their sticks, Arun one ofthe first to get hit. He staggers into Hasari's arms.FAVORING PALS/ARUN AND HIS FAMILYUnbelievable! Panic-stricken, Hasari and Aloka gatherthe children and their few belongings... as beside thema woman goes down from a stick to the head; Aloka stopsinstinctively to help the woman, but Hasari grabs her,trying to shelter her and the children as well as Arun'swife and children, clutching Arun to him as in the chaosthey manage to escape.EXT. CHURCH - CLOSE ON BILLBOARD - DAYOn the billboard: A maharajah sleeping snugly on a thickmattress. From his dreamland he inquires solicitously:"Have you ever thought of a Rajah Double Spring as apresent?" We PAN DOWN and FIND the Pals and Arun and hisfamily, panting, terrified, beneath the sign.SHAMBUDaddy, are we going to die here?Hasari can see on everyone's face this question.HASARI

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No! Today, I'm just a mangy dogon the street, but soon, I swear,I'll look other men in the eye!(a beat)I swear.Yet on his face we see the extraordinary pressure to makethis promise reality.EXT. SIDE OF RESTAURANTHasari reaches the head of a line and receives a smallhandout. Turning away, he studies the morsel of food.His head aches, his belly screams with hunger... but hetakes only a single bite, then carefully wraps the restin a cloth and knots it.(CONTINUED)25.CONTINUED:He feels a tug at his elbow. It's a 15-year-old BOY withthick, scholarly spectacles.RAFIK (BOY)Why live like a beggar when youcan live like a maharajah?Hasari stares at the boy.INT. BLOOD DISPENSARY - CLOSE ON HASARI'S ARM - DAYA needle injected, blood flowing into a bottle.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari seated on a stool, watching his blood leave hisbody, his face broken out in perspiration.HASARII thought you were only taking alittle.ATTENDANTWe pay more, we take more.HASARII'm feeling a little dizzy.ATTENDANTIt'll pass.HIS POVRafik and a thin man chatting easily and exchanging cigaretteswith another attendant. His vision BLURS.HASARI AND NURSEWith his free hand, he begins to grapple for the Attendantto keep his balance, starts to fall... and theSCREEN GOES BLACK.FADE IN:EXT. DISPENSARY - DAYA woozy Hasari gives Rafik his share; Rafik in turn gives

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the thin man his share. The thin man bows his farewell.(CONTINUED)26.CONTINUED:RAFIKBlood is the oil well of the poor,brother. Now, give me anotherthree and I'll give you these.He opens his hand with its dirty nails. In it lie alittle group of pills, like highly-colored sweets.HASARIWhat are those?RAFIKVitamins. Take these and you cangive again in a week.While Hasari considers, Rafik pours the pills intoHasari's hand, takes the three rupees. Hasari downs thepills.RAFIKOne week. Here. The same time.And he's gone, leaving Hasari, woozy but at least, forthe moment, blessed to count his money.INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHTMax lies on his messed bed, contorted, with his feet upover his head against the wall. A book lies open besidehim. A half-eaten room service meal, many hours old,moulders on the bedside table. Max is babbling a mocksports case into his fist...MAXThey're in the shotgun. There'sthe snap from center, the clock isrunning -- five, four, three -- hehas an open man at the Notre Dametwenty for the victory... and hefreezes. He freezes! Mr. Chokechokes. The fans go --A KNOCK at the door. Max shuts up, falls off the wall.He crosses to the door. Opens it. POOMINA is 16,beautiful and exotic-looking behind her excessive makeup.ANOTHER ANGLE - FAVORING MAXThe porter pushes the girl gently into the room, smilingat Max, nodding. The door is closed.27.MAX AND POOMINAHe may have been receptive to a "sweet, young girl," butnot a kid in her teens.MAX

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Got an I.D. on you?(she doesn't get it)How old are you?POOMINATwenty, sahib.MAXI buy that.She approaches him seductively.POOMINAI can do anything you want, sahib.She fingers the Hebrew letter at Max's throat, on itsgold chain. For a moment, Max is mesmerized by thischild; but then, as she begins more serious ministrations,he pulls back.MAXHold it, time out. Time, there'stime out on the field.POOMINAIs problems, sahib?MAXIs problems, yeah, just a couple.POOMINANo, please, yes, I can --There's something desperate in her that makes him put afinger to her lips and say...MAXHow 'bout some chow?(she doesn't get it)I was just about to order some roomservice. Food. I call, they come,we eat.She stares at him.INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHT (HALF HOUR LATER)Max smokes a Monte Cristo and watches Poomina, like afrightened little animal, devour the last of a GreenAcres room service meal and then wrap a small piece offish in the paper napkin.(CONTINUED)28.CONTINUED:She looks up at him, delivers a small burp. Covers hermouth in charming embarrassment.POOMINANow, you are ready for greatpleasure, yes?MAXWatching you eat was my great

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pleasure. Now you go home.As he escorts her toward the door, Poomina is distressed.Max realizes she can't leave empty-handed. He pulls outsome notes.MAXFor you.She hasn't given up, though, and as he takes the money,she stands on tiptoe and kisses him. Torn, Max beginsto respond. He stops himself, his grip on her causingher discomfort. His breath comes in little bursts.MAXYou're a very wet kisser. Work onit, get in touch in five years.He leads her toward the door. Like some lunatic comedy.she resists. He pushes. She locks her knees. He opensthe door.MAXGoddamn it, cut it out! Now, goodnight.He muscles her out the door, closes it, wipes his lips.He stares at a parade of cockroaches gliding along thewall as he listens to her CRYING quietly on the otherside of the door. He debates... and he loses. Opens thedoor. Poomina stands there; the tears stop and a liptwitchingsmile lights her face.MAXFive years already? Gee, timereally flies when you have nomoral conviction.She slides into his arms, pressing against him. With hisshoulder, he closes the door, leaving us outside.INT. BACK ALLEY - BAR - FLAMING LIGHT - NIGHTA bare light bulb; a SCRATCHY vinyl RECORD on a turntable.(CONTINUED)29.CONTINUED:Poomina watches Max do a sleight-of-hand trick with acoin. He tosses it up, brings his hands past each other,then holds out his fists; she picks on... but the otherholds the penny. Fooled, she laughs. He does it again;she points to one fist -- empty -- then other -- alsoempty. Max reaches behind her ear and... produces thecoin. She loves it, her laughter escalating. But thenshe seesm to read something in the b.g. where we see fourthugs, two of whom will become known to us as THE GOONDA,a capo to the local "mafia" chieftan, and ASHOKA, son of

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the local Godfather. Ashoka works on a pimple on hischin. The Goonda meticulously cleans a spot of mud withspit from one of his expensive new running shoes. Maxeyes the thugs eyeing him.MAXShort guys! Quit lookin' at us!This remark goes over big with the thugs. Max doesn'tcare. He knocks off the last of the beer in his bottle.The bartender brings them two shots of something in twounmatched glasses.POOMINASpecial drink for you, sahib.Only the most man can drink it.You make try. For me.MAXFor you, I would drink batteryacid.POOMINAWho that finish first. I bet!She puts her glass to her lips and, in a childish,exaggerated way, mimes waiting for him to commence adrinking race with her. The two of them toss off what'sin their glasses. The bangla in Max's glass is strongerthan battery acid. He does an elaborate routine involvingthe pain, the surprise, the sheer awfulness of thedrink. But puts it down with mock machismo.POOMINAI beat!MAXI really don't think so -- oh no,nay, nay! I never lose the trulyirrelevant contest.POOMINAWe have fun some more. I betagain!(CONTINUED)30.CONTINUED:She turns to the bartender, calls for two more. All thewhile, in the b.g., The Goonda and his two thugs watchemotionlessly and Ashoka works on his acne.EXT. BAR - NIGHTMax sings "Take It to the Limit" with enormous inebriatedsincerity as Poomina helps him out of the bar. There's abig black motorcycle parked outside. Max glances at itas they start down the alley. As he looks back to theroad ahead, he finds The Goonda in front of him. Max

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isn't so drunk that he doesn't sense what this is about.He looks behind him. Indeed, the other two goons arethere. Ashoka straddles the big cycle.MAXWell well. Seek punishment and yeshall find.Knowing what's coming, Max nevertheless unleashes abeautiful howl and tries to trample The Goonda offtackle.From behind, he's hit with a length of stick.He goes down, looks up through blasted eyes at Ashoka astwo sticks now land against his shoulder and his head...EXT. MAHARAJAH SIGN - NIGHTThe Pals sleep beneath the sign. Hasari awakens fromrestive sleep to the sound of a FIGHT. He gets up. Theothers awaken.ARUNDon't go -- what are you doing?HASARIIt sounds like someone needs help.Hasari bolts for the corner.ALLEYWAYAs Hasari turns into the head of the alley, he can seethree men beating someone, a fourth man standing off tothe side, watching.HASARIWhat are you doing?(calling back)A man's being beaten here!As Hasari runs down the alley, the MOTORCYCLE FIRES UPand SCREAMS OFF and the three goons take flight.31.HASARI AND MAXHasari runs up, reaches out to Max, who's barely on hisfeet. As Hasari touches Max, Max turns and belts Hasariin the nose, nailing Hasari to the wall as Max collapsesat Hasari's feet. Hasari grabs his nose with one handand kneels beside the fallen Max... as a shadow movesand startles Hasari. He peers into the dark... andPoomina steps into the light.INT. CLINIC/SCHOOL (CITY OF JOY) - MAX'S POV - CRUCIFIX- DAYThe crucifix sways. Now Max's eyes RACK FOCUS TO thecherubic face of JOAN BETHAL, peering AT the CAMERAwithout sympathy.ANOTHER ANGLEMax on a cot in a tiny, spare room, a butterfly bandageunder one eye. Joan, Irish, short, stout, hovers over

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him. Behind her, Hasari Pal.JOANGood morning, junior, welcome toour country.Max manages to sit up. Wishes he hadn't.MAXOh, I like the way the room movesin circles.(checking out hisaccommodations)I suppose I should inquire where Iam.JOANYou're in the City of Joy.MAXIs that geographic or spiritual?JOANOh, now we require that eachvisitor decide that for himself.This gentleman and a young ladybrought you here.MAXDid I do that to your nose?(as Hasari nods)I'm sorry.(CONTINUED)32.CONTINUED:Hasari shrugs, smiles... and a gigantic rat drops inMax's lap. He leaps to his feet and against the wall.The rat scurries away.MAXWhat was that -- a Shetland pony?JOANI would have to inspect it moreclosely, but I believe that wasone of our economy-size rats.Max clambers for the door. Too late, Joan thinks tosay...JOANWatch your --Max cracks his head on the door frame.MAXThanks -- got it.He ducks outside for some air.EXT. CLINIC/SCHOOL - NIZAMUDHIN LANE - MAX'S FACEStunned.

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SQUAREIn the dawn light, he finds himself in a small square ina slum, an open sewer running before him. He's repulsed.MAXPardon the expression, but JesusH. Christ.From the tea shop, SURYA, a stout old Hindu man dressedin Western clothes, raises a hand in greeting to Joan.On the door Max and Joan have come through: "City of JoySelf Help School & Clinic." Across the way, a young manis dandling a baby on his knee, rubbing its back andsniffing at its neck. Small group of children around ablackboard with a teacher, MARGARETA, doing numbers.RAM CHANDAR, the rickshaw puller, readies to go out towork. Trying to orient himself, Max turns...ANOTHER ANGLE... to find perhaps fifty people, largely women andchildren, staring at him.(CONTINUED)33.CONTINUED:He knows them by type: patients. He looks at the signon the door.MAXYou a doctor?JOANOh no, I'm a corporate executive.Doctor arrives at half seven, butonly three days a week.MAXThis is obviously one of thosethree days.JOANIndeed. What brings you to ourcountry?MAXI came to find my white light.JOANAh, yes. I take it you didn'tfind it.MAXKept opening the doors and windowsof my spirit, but couldn't see agoddamn thing.JOANWhat do you do in America?Max is slow to answer. Discreetly, Hasari hangs back,

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listens.JOANOh, how exciting. Must besomething illegal. Are you acriminal of some sort?MAXI suppose that depends how youdefine the word: I'm a doctor.JOANI see. How long are you here?Perhaps I could recruit you for --MAXForget it. You've got your nonpracticingCatholics. I'm a nonpracticingdoctor.(CONTINUED)34.CONTINUED:JOANHow very distressing. Why's that?MAXFound out I just really don't likesick people. Well, I'm outtahere. I owe you one.JOANI can't imagine ever divining howto collect, but there are a few ofus Indians, you know, who believethe tourist trade ought to beencouraged.Max turns to Hasari. Hasari is incredibly shy, canbarely meet Max's eyes.MAXThank you very much. Let me...He goes for his money.HASARINo, please.Max finds his pockets empty. Then reaches for his wrist-- his watch is gone -- and then his throat -- his chaiis gone, too.JOANI'm afraid they cleaned you out.Ram, here's your first rider.(to Max)Take this.She holds out several rupees toward him. All eyes onthem.

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JOANGo on, it's all right. You'll oweme two.EXT. STREET - FLYING FEET - DAYMax in the rickshaw, Hasari running alongside Ram, anexuberant smile slashed across his face.HASARIYou see, I can keep up.(CONTINUED)35.CONTINUED:RAMKeep up, of course. Anyone canrun at this pace. But you thinkit's easy to run and to pull?HASARII can do it. I could pull it.MAXCome on, give him a shot. He's asfast as you and looks twice asstrong.RAMWill you still pay me when he runsyou into a ditch?MAXAbsolutely. I trust the man.Suddenly, Ram comes to a stop.RAMAll right, you, come, step in here.Hasari looks on Max with enormous gratitude. Ram putsthe shafts down, has a short coughing fit, spits somephlegm, looks at Max.MAXI hope you're taking something forthat.Ram waves him off as Hasari lifts the shafts to his hips.RAMNow, fine, pull, go.Hasari tries to pull, but the center of gravity isn'teasy to find. This is enormously difficult and Hasari'svery clumsy at it. The street is crowded. The trafficis beginning to back up behind them. The driver andconductor of the tram let fly a tirade of insults.RAMSee, mister! What did I tellyou? Come on! What do you thinkthis is -- some village street?

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You've got to move quickly.He turns to Max.RAMYou see, it takes a gift.(CONTINUED)36.CONTINUED:MAXI say he can do it. I'll bet youthe fare he can do it.(play by play)What do you think, rickshaw fans,can he do it?The crowd isn't in for fun. Hasari strains forward.The rickshaw moves with him. Ram moves alongside,shouting instructions and oaths. A cop comes on the run,screaming at Hasai... which makes Ram importune morestrongly and Max joke more vociferously.Even under this incredible pressue, Hasari gainsconfidence and begins to move quicker, earning shoutsof approval from Max and Ram, who now has troublekeeping up as they make their way through the maelstrom,an avalanche of oaths following them.INT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYAt first all we see are feet on a marble floor. TheGoonda's in his running shoes, then Ram and Hasari'sbare feet.This is the partitioned splendor of an old housesprinkled with the relics of a grand colonial past.Everything is baroque, rotting and somehow impressive.Hasari has never been anywhere like this, and is caughtbetween curiosity and fear of breathing.INT. "THRONE ROOM"The three men enter a large room shuttered from the sunlight-- dusty and packed with a ramshackle assortmentof furniture. Two fat blue titmice perch in a cage nextto ambitious plaster portrait of Napolean.Sitting behind a desk is Ashoka, leaning over a mirror,squeezing a balky pimple.Near a large window, his 60-year-old father, GHATAK, ina European jacket and dhoti, works with intense concentrationat repairing a pair of broken glasses with atwist of fine wire.The three new arrivals stand silent and respectfulbefore the desk. At last, without raising his head...ASHOKA

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Not a tongue between you then?(CONTINUED)37.CONTINUED:RAMYes, yes, I am wondering, sir,we are, is it possible you mighthave something for my friend?Ram indicates Hasari, as if there might be some questionto whom he's referring. Ashoka attacks the pimple.RAMLet me explain it for your ears,sir. My cousin from Bihar hasjust arrived in our city --GOONDAThey've brought a small present-- of respect.The Goonda places a small bundle of rupees on the desk.Ashoka allows himself a disinterested glance atHasari.ASHOKASo, you want to be a human horse?RAMOh yes! I have personally witnessedhis excellence -- yes.ASHOKAHe doesn't talk? Can he neigh atleast?(to Hasari)You -- do your ears function?HASARIOh yes, Babu. Can I... uhm...?ASHOKANeigh! Like a horse.Ashoka pulls back his lips, shows his teeth and imitatesa neigh: "Ne-igh! Ne-igh!"HASARIWell, yes, Babu, I can do that.Would you like me to imitate ahorse?Finished with the pimple, Ashoka wipes a finger on hisshirt and takes a helping off a plate of sweetcakesas...38.ANOTHER ANGLEBehind him, The Godfather walks up to the desk, puttinghis glasses on. He barely glances at his son, but

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waves him out of the chair.Ashoka doesn't like it, but he steps aside. As he does,he turns a look of hatred on Hasari. Through no fault ofhis own, Hasari has made an enemy. Ghatak chews on a panand casts a benevolent eye on Hasari.GHATAKLift your longhi.Hasari does. The Godfather looks at his legs and thighs.GHATAKThe wise men of our nation say thatnirvana is the attainment of astate of supreme detachment. Forme, nirvana is counting eachevening, one by one, the rupeesearned by my two thousand andforty-six rickshaws.Hasari doesn't know whether to respond. A glance atRam tells him not to. Ghatak gestures for Hasari tolower his longhi.GHATAKYou are with family?HASARII have a wife and three children,Babu.GHATAKAnd they must eat, heh. Theworld is full of open mouths.He chews on this a moment, then opens a drawer... andholds a small, tinkling rickshaw bell toward Hasari.Hasari understands that, incredibly, he has a job. Hisbreath is so shallow, he can barely utter his gratitude.He takes the bell.HASARII shall be eternally grateful toyou. From now on, I shall be asthe youngest of your brothers.GHATAKStay loyal. These days, it's acrop nobody plants.The Godfather turns his beatific and Godlike smile onHasari Pal.(CONTINUED)39.EXT. MATTRESS SIGN - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Transitor MUSIC. The Pals load the rickshaw that standsat the road with Ram in it. There are embraces with thebruised Arun and his family.

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EXT. SQUARE - NIGHT (EARLY EVENING)We hear the BELL TINKLING as the rickshaw, pulled byHasari, carrying Ram and Aloka (holding Shambu) arrives(Amrita and Manooj trotting beside their father). Surya,Selima, other neighbors greet them as they come. ThePals glance into the school at Joan, who's teachingan evening class.WITH PALSReverentially, they follow Ram inside as Joan watches.INT. RAM'S HUT - NIGHTA door opens. Moonlight. Faces peer through the door.Ram lights an oil lamp. In the glow, the family looksaround their tiny space. Hardly able to suppress smiles.HASARISomeone has blessed us. A job, aroof, a school. Soon I'll be ableto send money home...(looking at Amrita)... and put away a little bit foryour dowry.In their excitement, the boys run.OUTSIDEand up to the roof, under the stars. We LOOK UP WITHthem and:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. GREEN ACRES - ON SKY - NIGHTPAN DOWN TO Max on his balcony playing his trumpet as wecontinue toDISSOLVE TO BLACK.40.FADE IN:EXT. SQUARE AND STREET (CITY OF JOY) - DAYAbout twenty tattered street kids faces shining with enjoyment.They run and shout as they pursue somethingjust out of frame.WIDE SHOTThe cause of the excitement is Hasari running TOWARD us,feet flying, as he pulls the rickshaw, loaded with a hugesack. Manooj and Shambu are clinging to the sides of themachine.Ram stands in the center of the square. He shouts acommand and Hasari struggles to bring the rickshaw to astop. It's not easy and Sunil -- who's arriving -- has tojump out of the way to the accompaniment of apologies fromHasari and Ram and hoots of laughter from the children.Outside the clinic, a line of perhaps seventy-five wait

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patiently, watching as Hasari takes off again. The wheelsof the rickshaw hit a rut. Hasari loses control, the sacktips back and Hasari is lifted into the air, feet kickingas he tries to regain his balance. Aloka and Amrita,sitting near the bawling Ram, can't hold back theirlaughter.EXT. SQUARE - HIGH ANGLE - DAYThe square is set with obstacles. As Ram shouts instruction,we see Hasari negotiate them with much increasedskill. He stops in front of a small group. It's hisfamily, plus Joan and Surya. With an exhausted smile, hesigns to Aloka and Amrita to get in. They do, and Hasaritakes them triumphantly around the circuit.HIGH ANGLEHasari's triumphant ride continues and we:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. PARK STREET - DAYHasari rubs the moonstone in his ring on the shafts, thentouches his heart and his forehead. A SCHOOL GIRL inuniform, approaches the rickshaw stand. We also seeseveral other pullers, Rassoul, Chomotkar, Ramatullah.SCHOOL GIRLRickshaw wallah!(CONTINUED)41.CONTINUED:RAMLet Hasari go!The line of rickshaw pullers turns to Hasari. The otherpullers wish him well as he comes forward. His heartpounds; ever so politely, he helps the School Girl intohis carriage. She gives him the address of the St. PiusSchool.HASARII'm sorry, I don't know where thatis. You're my very first passenger.SCHOOL GIRLReally. Well, I hope I bring youluck.She gives him a sweet smile.SCHOOL GIRLThat way, and then to the right.His moment has arrived. He looks at Ram... and thrustshis hips forward, setting off into the insanity of thetraffic, eyes flicking left and right. A HORN RAILS athim and a taxi tries to run him down, calling and laughingas Hasari jumps in terror.

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RAM(calling)Feed the police!Other pullers laugh, call after Hasari... and as heapproaches the first corner, he manages to pull out arupee and deposit it into the hand of the impassivetraffic policeman and then turn right.EXT. ST. PIUS - DAYThe School Girl hands him a slip of paper.SCHOOL GIRLThis is my home address. Pick meup promptly at seven each morning.HASARIYes, thank you, you can depend onme.The girl runs into the school yard, met immediately byfriends. Hasari looks around at the clean, bustlingschool, at all the children in their crisp uniforms anda look of great yearning comes over his face.42.INT. SMALL RESTAURANT - DAYMax is trying to explain to the waiter what he wants.MAXBeef. You know -- cow? Minced,little salt, pepper, slap it flatlike this, throw it on the grill,flip it.Now, though, he just glimpses the shiny gas tank andengine of a motorcycle around the hip of the waiter.He leans out.ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka, astride his motorcycle, GUNNING the ENGINE as aboy runs out of a store with an armload of cassettes.WITH MAX AND WAITERMAXPut it on the grill, I'll be rightback.WITH ASHOKAHe pulls the boy's ear, REVS the ENGINE to go... andsenses someone close. He turns to find an Americanhovering at his shoulder.MAXYou know, I have to say youreally don't look Jewish. Ibelieve that's mine.He reaches for the necklace with the Hebrew letter.Ashoka recognizes Max. Looks around for help. There is

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none.ASHOKADon't touch me. No one touches me.MAXReally?Max grabs Ashoka... who breaks free, and GUNS the CYCLEdown a side street. Max gives chase, his aching ribsslowing him a bit.43.SEVERAL CUTSAshoka, glancing back, begins to open up some distance.Yet, Max hangs tough, weaving like a broken field runnerthrough the mass of bodies and vehicles. Now, suddenly,he loses Ashoka. He has to make a choice about thiscorner or that one. He chooses.EXT. CITY OF JOY - AROUND CORNER - DAY (EARLY EVENING)A COP steps into his path. He sees Ashoka up ahead. He'shopelessly out of breath.MAXOh... great... good...good timing...him!He can't talk and breathe. He points desperately. TheCop glances where Max points, but he makes no move togive chase.COPMay I see your passport?MAXPassport? I'm in the middle of ahigh speed chase. That guy --COPPassport please.A crowd has begun to form. In the distance, we see agroup of girls carrying cricket equipment COMING AT us.MAXIt's in my hotel room.COPPassport, please, now.MAXReady my lips: I do not have mypassport with me at this...(he gets it)Ah, I see, said the blind man.The Cop obviously is doing this at Ashoka's behest. Maxstarts around the Cop. The Cop, however, sticks his clubin Max's face; there's fire in Max's eyes... but a handtakes the Cop's stick before Max can make a big mistake.44.

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ANOTHER ANGLE - FAVORING OWNER OF HANDThe girls with the cricket equipment (and Margareta,the teacher). The hand belongs to Joan Bethel.JOANWell, all right, junior, so you'llowe me three.EXT. POST OFFICE - DAYA scribe finishes writing a note home for Hasari. Thescribe hands it to Hasari.INSERT - NOTE AND MONEY ORDER"We are well. Manooj does not go in the cinema. I amearning my living as a rickshaw wallah. It is myhonor to send you this."RESUMEWith great pride, Hasari pays the scribe, seals the moneyorder with the message in an envelope, licks the flap,and puts the envelope into the mail slot.EXT. SQUARE (CITY OF JOY) - TEA SHOP - DAY (DUSK)Surya plays his zither. Max and Joan sit at a table. Maxpops little boiled candies into his mouth from a dish onthe table.JOANOh, it was just a whim in thebeginning really -- to try toconvince them not to be so bloodypassive, that they could pullthemselves up on their own. Iget a little money from a Swissorganization. Now it's become abit more than I can manage.MAXIt's got to be like trying todrill a hole in water, though.JOANWe just need a few more hands onthis little life raft we've setafloat here.(CONTINUED)45.CONTINUED:They stare at each other. Shambu has become one ofSurya's tea boys and refills their tea.JOANYou know what I've come to thinkin my middle age, Max?MAXNope, no, earthly idea. You're

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pretty much outta my league,thought-wise.JOANThere are really only threeactions open to a person.MAXOnly three -- okay. And what arethey?JOANTo run, to spectate, to commit.Max peers at her a moment, then around the square.MAXHas it occurred to you that thisobsession with charity is really aflaw in your character?JOANCharity! It's not charity, dearchild, it's love. You're verybadly twisted around, aren't you?MAXOne of us sure as hell is.The clinic's part-time doctor, SUNIL DASGUPTA, comes outof the clinic after a very long day.SUNILI'm off for home, Sister Joan. Apleasure to meet you, Dr. Loeb.MAXThe same.SUNILSee you day after tomorrow.JOANGood night, God bless, Doctor.(a beat)Generous young man.(CONTINUED)46.CONTINUED:As he watches Sunil head away, Max senses something comingat him from the side. A soccer ball almost hits him;he jumps up, handles the ball athletically.SQUAREHe begins to play with Manooj and several other children.Shambu leaves his post in the tea shop to join them.MANOOJAre you the American doctor? Areyou coming here to help us.MAX

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No, I'm the visiting Americansoccer star, El Max.MANOOJDo you go to the cinema inAmerica, El Max?MAXWhen I was your age -- two movies,plus cartoons every Saturday.Aloka and Amrita are cooking on an open fire bucket. Maxalmost knocks the fire over. Aloka looks at him, apologetic,shy... as Manooj knocks Shambu down at Max's feet.Max scoops the little boy up...MAXThere you go, little guy. Ut --what's this?Reaching behind Shambu's ear, Max produces a boiled sweet.Aloka watches this with a smile; their eyes touch again...as Manooj lets out a cry at the sight of their father.ANOTHER ANGLERam and Hasari return home. Hasari can hardly walk.Shambu runs to his father, explaining excitedly...SHAMBUDaddy, there is the doctor fromAmerica. He saw two movies everySaturday. What's in your fist?Open, Daddy!Shambu pries his father's fist open: seeds.(CONTINUED)47.CONTINUED:SHAMBUSeeds? Why?HASARISo we can watch something grow.EXT. RAM'S HUNT NIGHT - UPSTAIRSChildren leaning down as smoke wafts up. We FOLLOW thesmoke DOWN TO Max's cigar. Aloka and Amrita laying thefood out. Shambu rubbing his father's aching legs asHasari and Manooj plant the seeds in Hasari's little teacaddy full of earth from home. Max is watching this"family" huddled around the father.RAMAnother few months, I'll be ableto pay off the moneylender in myvillage and go home and open agrocery shop. All around me sacksoverflowing with all kinds of dal

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and rice, aromatic spices, pilesof vegetables... and at night, I'lllie on my back beneath the treessniffing fresh aubergines.This beautiful picture burrows into Hasari's mind. Fora moment, he goes there -- home, to the village...RAMIf my wife will let me come withina hundred miles of the place whereshe herself resides.Ram laughs, Hasari smiles...HASARIAmrita, I saw a beautiful weddingsari today.Amrita is terribly embarrassed.RAMIt was six hundred rupees only.He laughs at the impossibility of the price.MAXThat's only 40 dollars, isn't it?HASARIIf you have it.(CONTINUED)48.CONTINUED:MAXI'll send it to you from Americawhen I get home tomorrow.HASARIThat's very generous but no,thank you.MAXRepayment for punching you in thenose.HASARIYou have repaid me by sharing oursupper.Joan indicates that Max should let it go. Hasari everso carefully waters the tea box.RAMDoctor Big Brother, I myself wouldbe willing to accept a gift. Couldyou give me five rupees in a note --ten, perhaps. My ankle is badlyswelled; the higher the number themore the swelling sinks.Max has to laugh.

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MAXI don't have a cent on me. I'llowe you.RAMHow much?Now everyone's attentions is taken by a CRY from Shambu,who expels his breath, his terrified eyes directing ourattention to...ANOTHER ANGLEIt's an amazing sight. Two lepers: ANOUAR, bearded witha sharp intelligent, unmarked face, makes his way alongon a small wheeled board, at an amazingly fast pace,ahead of SAID, a huge, mute leper. They stop some feetaway. Lepers aren't often welcome. Out from behind Saidsteps Poomina.POOMINAJoan Di, my sister!(CONTINUED)49.CONTINUED:She sees Max, gasps, throws herself behind Said. Joanlooks at Max -- he starts to speak, she points a fingerthat silences him...JOANIt was Poomina who brought you tous. She has herself and hersister to support. It's all right,Poomina. Anouar, what is it?She moves to them. They're all three badly out of breath.WITH JOAN AND LEPERSANOUARIt's Meeta! It's her time. Butsomething is wrong. The midwivesdon't know what to do! Dr. Sunil,could he help, perhaps?JOANDr. Sunil isn't here.POOMINAMeeta will die.ANOTHER ANGLEJoan turns to Max, who hasn't heard the exchange.JOANMax, I wouldn't ask, but it's anemergency. A pregnancy gone awry.It's a leper. Could you have alook?Max is clearly thrown by the sight of the lepers.

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MAXI don't have any experience withleprosy.JOANGood Christ, son, because she'sa leper doesn't mean she's notbuilt like a woman!HASARII can run and get Dr. Sunil.JOANIt's too far.(CONTINUED)50.CONTINUED:Suddenly, impulsively...ALOKAI could help. I've had threebabies.RAMYou can't do that. They'reoutcasts, they're unclean.There are murmurs of assent from the others.JOANOh nonsense! It's not contagious!A beat -- everyone fixed on Max.HASARIYou're a doctor, how can you nothelp?EXT. PATH-NIGHTThe moon reflects off the dark puddles of muddy waterthat line the side of the railway tracks. Anouarpropels his board with astonishing agility along thepath, Said and Poomina running with him. Max, Joan,carrying a first aid bag, Aloka and Hasari following,slipping and sliding on the rough ground with itspuddles and sewage.EXT. RAILWAY LINE - LEPER HUTS - NIGHTThe little procession arrives outside the three roughhuts, made of bamboo, plastic sheeting, cloth, woodand cardboard. A few shadows materialize. Lepers --staring silently.Anouar points into a hut. Joan and Aloka precede Maxinside. Max forgets to bend and bumps his head.INT. HUT - NIGHTThe only light is the feeble waver from a candle. Theblind Meeta lies on a rough mattress on the ground. Herragged sari is pulled up to her middle. Her face runs

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with sweat, her hair is plastered to her face. A girlwith black eyes is fanning her with a piece of wood.Meeta sends up a SOFT, uninterrupted MOAN. A wedge ofblood-soaked cloth is between her legs.(CONTINUED)51.CONTINUED:A middle-age leper is leaning over her -- a midwife,encouraging Meeta with a string of commands in theirown language.Max kneels, Aloka at his side. His breathing becomesshallow... but then he pulls off the blood-soakedbandages. Between Meeta's legs he can just make outthe bottom of a foot. The child is breached. Maybealready dead.ALOKAWill she die?Max goes into reflex actions. Joan has opened the firstaid kit. There's a flashlight among the medicine,alcohol, compresses, scissors, etc. He hands the flashlightto Aloka as...MAX(to Joan)Pull me two c.c.'s of Coramine.He nods at Aloka; she illuminates the scene.MAXUh-oh, uh-oh, who's this coming'down the lane? Why it's -- is itpossible -- way over here, inIndia -- yes, it's Mr. Choke.He comes to a stop. Everyone stares at him. Meetamoans. For a moment, he stays frozen. Aloka reachesout instinctively, wipes the sweat from his eyes. Thisgesture seems to free him; he looks at her, looks at theroom and its expectant, trusting faces...MAXI'm going to have to turn it --the baby. Tell her she has torelax these muscles as much asshe can.He doesn't finish the sentence. Aloka speaks softly toMeeta as Max takes Meeta's arm, makes a tourniquet.Joan hands him the syringe and he injects. Hands thesyringe back to Joan and begins to work at turning thebaby.Aloka takes Meeta's hand and it's a moment before werealize Aloka, with her fine hand, is holding Meeta's

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fingerless palm.52.OUTSIDEA small group waits, trying to determine from the soundswhat's happening inside. Anouar pours tea from a pot onthe small fire, offers the cup to Hasari. Hasari staresat the cup, doesn't want to be impolite, but more thanthat, doesn't want to touch the cup. He shakes his head,smiles. Anouar drinks off the tea.INSIDESweat pours down Max's face into his eyes. He shakes itout. Aloka leans forward and, with her new sari, wipesthe sweat away again. Max nods thanks.MAXTell her again to breathe in shortlittle bursts now.He demonstrates. Aloka does the same to Meeta. Meetatries to cooperate. And suddenly Max has the babyturned.MAXAll right! Now, tell her to push.Aloka translates. Meeta pushes. The midwife, the littlegirl, Aloka lean forward.MAXAgain. Yes! Again. It's coming.OUTSIDENo one is sitting now. Everyone hangs close to thedoor. Only Hasari remains apart, seated on a tree stumpin the middle of the quad. He coughs; suppresses it.INSIDEMAXI've got the head. Come on,little baby, come on, littlebaby. Be alive, be alive, bealive.Aloka wipes the sweat away again. He looks at her, hisvoice squeezed out through his teeth.MAXWe've got it, we've got it. Yeah!(CONTINUED)53.CONTINUED:He seems as released as Meeta. Then he gives a lastgentle tug and a CRY squeezes out of the little piece oflife in his hands. Max is fairly overwhelmed by the lifein his hands. Poomina steps close, a smile on her lovelyface, and touches the baby in Max's hands.

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EXT. LANE - NIGHTMax, Joan, Aloka and Hasari walk in silence down NizamudhinLane. There is only the mingled sound of COUGHING,MOANING, and a TRANSISTOR RADIO nearby playing a popularsong. Outside the clinic, they stop. She takes his hand.JOANFor a non-practicing doctor, thatwas pretty practiced.MAXNever been so scared in my life.It's a warm, open moment between them. But now there'sthe ongoing desperation of her needs.JOANMax, please, won't you change yourmind? We desperately need anotherdoctor. Full-time. Think aboutit -- just give us a couple ofmonths.MAXCan't do it. Maybe you've got itin you to be a saint. I justdon't.JOANThen what do you want? What areyou going to be when you grow up?Good night, Aloka, Hasari.Joan goes inside, leaving Max, Aloka, and a very uncomfortableHasari alone a moment.ALOKAThank you for allowing me to gowith you.MAXYou could make a helluva nurse.A little smile comes over her face; no one's ever paidher that kind of compliment. She goes into Ram's hut,leaving Max and Hasari now.(CONTINUED)54.CONTINUED:HASARII think perhaps you are a goodman.Hasari brings his hands together and goes inside.EXT./INT. JOAN'S AND THE PAL'S (ALTERNATE) - NIGHTMax hears Joan praying inside.JOAN (O.S.)

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Jesus, my brother, you who I amtrying to believe are the lightand salvation of the puking world...THE PALSAloka sits huddled with her husband while their childrensleep; they listen...JOAN (O.S.)Please see that we are living inmadness and darkness here...MAXlistens.JOAN (O.S.)... and we need help. Om, Jesus,om and amen.Suddenly, he hurtles into motion. He runs down the alley,his stride stretching out, swallowing up the distancebetween here and the world beyond the City of Joy ingreat gulps.EXT. CALCUTTA AIRPORT - ESTABLISHING - DAYA busy, urban airport as opposed to the small countryairport in which we saw Max earlier. V.O. we hear...BETSY (V.O.)Yes, yes, yes, that's right, yes!I turned in your ticket!55.INT. AIRPORT - DAYIt's a small place; it's sweltering, and it's packedwith hundreds of families shoulder to shoulder. ThoughBetsy's trying to be discreet, it's not a very privateplace, as we see by the number of people watching Maxand Betsy.BETSYI bought it, I got a refund!MAXBut I want to go home with you.BETSYYou want to go home with me?MAXYes.BETSYThen prove it.MAXGood -- how -- name it.BETSYBuy yourself a ticket.MAX

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I would love to do that, BetsyIlene, boy would I love to dojust that, but I'm financiallyembarrassed at the --BETSYUse your credit cards.MAXWhat credit cards? You know Imaxed them before we left. Justlend me --BETSYNo! You won't pay me back; younever have. Oh, Max!MAXThey're calling our flight. Iwant to go home with you, BetsyIlene Kahn. Because I have avision. It's...He's trying to woo and charm her. He mimes a kind ofhouse shape.(CONTINUED)56.CONTINUED:MAXI see you and me, Betsy IleneKahn, nibbling toward each otherthrough a quarter pounder withcheese, chugalugging a frostylight beer -- great taste! Lessfilling! Bowling! I want to gobowling, Besty Ilene Kahn!He fires a strike through the watching crowd.MAXI want... Oh, my Lord Amighty, Iwant so many American things --BETSYOh, stop it! You have no earthlyidea what you want, Max! Andstop calling me Betsy Ilene Kahn.MAXIsn't that your name?BETSYYou call me Betsy Ilene Kahn likeyou just met me yesterday.MAXWhat should I call you? My girl,my significant other --

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BETSYDon't get cute! You get cute andI swear to God --- you told me onceI look like my mother!MAXYou do -- so what?BETSYSee -- you don't understand!MAXHow could I possibly notunderstand a conversation as easyas this one, Betsy Ilene.BETSYI hate you!MAXNa ya don't.(CONTINUED)57.CONTINUED:BETSYI stood by you for three years!MAXI know.BETSYI supported you through yourinternship!MAXYou did.BETSYWhy? It was never working. Whathave I been thinking all theseyears -- that you'd change?You're the most self-pitying,self-destructive, self...She can't find anything fierce enough, so she abates,tries to get it together to make a dignified exit.BETSYBut you've taught me something,Max. You never finish anything.Well, I quit. I've found mylight and I'm free of you.She heads for the gate, people parting to give her awide berth.MOVING SHOT - TOWARD THE GATEMAXWill you at least call my motherand ask her to empty my savings

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account and wire --BETSYDo it yourself, Max. Call hercollect. You should have calledher weeks ago anyway just becauseshe's your mother!(to herself)White light, white light...!She hands her ticket and boarding pass over and she'sthrough the gate. Max turns to find the audience fixedon him.(CONTINUED)58.CONTINUED:MAXGuerilla theater, folks. 'All theworld's a stage.' Don't know ifthat word reached you here yet.If you'd care to show yourappreciation by a small donation...Many smiles... and several instant offers of rupees. Abeat, then...MAXAw, what the hell.... Swallowing his incredible embarrassment, Max takesthe money.EXT. SQUARE - DAY (EARLY MORNING)The line is long. At this moment, Joan is checking achild's throat with a tongue-depressor. Aloka is walkingbeside her with a fistful of depressors and a bag fordisposal. Hasari and Ram are getting ready to leave.Anouar appears at Joan's waist.ANOUARGood morning, Joan Di. Dr. Loebsaid many of us could be helped;that all it would take is moneyfor medication.Anouar hands Joan some newspaper in which something iswrapped. Joan opens the paper. Inside is a good deal ofmoney.ANOUARPlease buy the medication for us.If we cannot come here to receiveit, perhaps Dr. Loeb would cometo us.JOANI'll be happy to buy the medication,

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but Dr. Loeb is not part of thisendeavor, Anouar; there is only hischerished memory.ANOUARThen perhaps I am having visions.Anouar's focus is up the lane. Joan follows his focusto:59.THEIR POVMax approaches. A buzz about Max's heroics; hands comingtogether. Max raises a hand in benediction, makes thesign of the cross. Max claps Hasari on the shoulder;Hasari brings his hands together and gives Max agenuinely pleased smile. Children circle and touch him,Manooj and Shambu among them.BACK TO SCENEMAXGood morning! Good morning!Heckuva morning! Getting readyto practice medicine without alicense, Sister Joan? You don'tsee me soliciting conversions,do you?JOANWell, well, well, I do so love tobe surprised.MAXOkay, for starters, pick me outsomeone with something easy I canheal, make me look good.(to Aloka)Aloka, you're my assistant, let'sgo.Aloka smiles, she nods, she accepts.JOANMax, knock it off, give us a bitof hush.(as he does)What happened?MAXI changed my mind.JOANAnd I'm a bloody bathing beauty.MAXOkay, so I got left.JOANSmart girl... So how long am I

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stuck with you?MAXTwo weeks -- or until Mom sends mea ticket.(CONTINUED)60.CONTINUED:JOANNot worth the aggravation of yourprattle every day. Six months --and not a day less.MAXNo way. Six weeks -- and that'smy best offer.JOANTwo months -- and that's my finaloffer.MAX(a beat)Done.JOANJesus and Mary. The Lone Rangerrides again.And now smiles creep onto all their faces as Max goesinside, followed by Joan... and then Aloka -- after shelooks at Hasari, gets his nod of encouragement. Too late,Joan says...JOANWatch your --Thud!MAXThanks -- got it.The children titter. The teacher, Margareta, admonishesthem to pay attention and be polite... as we --FADE OUT.FADE IN:EXT. SCHOOL GIRL'S HOUSE - HASARI'S WHEELS - DAY (TWOWEEKS LATER)The wheels spinning furiously and then stopping abruptly.Hasari, dripping with sweat, panting. The School Girlcomes running toward him. After her, in the b.g., herMOTHER.SCHOOL GIRLHasari, where have you been? I'vebeen waiting almost five minutes.(CONTINUED)61.

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CONTINUED:HASARII'm sorry, forgive me. It won'thappen again.SCHOOL GIRLWe're not going to school today.You're taking my mother and me tothe Bara Bazar. I'm gettingmarried!HASARIOh, I am so pleased for you!Panting helplessly, Hasari smiles... as he helps theSchool Girl's Mother into the rickshaw.MOTHERGood morning, Hasari.HASARIGood morning, missus.Briskly, he takes up the shafts and sets off.MOTHERTurn right at that corner, Hasari.HASARIIt's farther that way, missus.MOTHERNo, not really. Turn there,please.Obediently, Hasari turns (as Ramatullah, heading theother way, passes; they wave) and Hasari pulls AWAY FROMus.EXT. SECOND WEDDING SHOP - DAYHe helps them out of the rickshaw in front of anexpensive-looking bridal shop.SCHOOL GIRLYou must remember this shop,Hasari, when it's your daughter'stime. This is the nicest in thecity.The Mother gives the School Girl a withering look andhustles her into the shop. Hasari can just barelyhear...(CONTINUED)62.CONTINUED:MOTHER (O.S.)Don't say things like that. He'snever going to be able to buyanything here.ON HASARI

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He watches from outside, a look of determination comingover his face. Suddenly a pair of fingers takes hold ofhis ear, twisting his face painfully.ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka, with The Goonda and two henchmen, in the b.g.ASHOKANot working? How will my fathereat this evening?HASARII was just...ASHOKAYou have a daughter?HASARIYes, Babu.MARWARI (O.S.)Rickshaw wallah!Called to work, Hasari starts for his rickshaw, butAshoka hangs on to his ear for another uncomfortablemoment... as he slips a rupee into Hasari's shirt pocket.ASHOKAKeep working. Give this to SisterJoan and your friend the doctorwhen you go home.Now he hands Hasari a sealed envelope and turns his earloose. Hasari springs toward his passenger.INT. EXAMINING ROOM - DAYMax with his stethoscope to Meeta's baby. Meeta in abrightly-colored sari and a lot of bracelets and Alokalooks on. Poomina clings to the wall.(CONTINUED)63.CONTINUED:MAXHe's just malnourished. Is shegiving him the milk we gave her orselling it?Aloka asks Meeta in Hindi. Meeta clearly swears she'sgiving the baby the milk. Aloka pushes her.ALOKANot all. Most.MAXTell her to give all the milk tothe baby.Aloka does so as Max bounces the baby, coos to it playfully.The baby pees all over him. Aloka translatesquickly. Meeta starts apologizing. Poomina can't helplaughing. Max reminds Meeta that that's once for each

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of the two weeks of the baby's life. Aloka soothes Meetaas she hustles her, Poomina, and the baby out, thenquickly begins to wipe Max's face with a clean rag. Thisisn't something she's accustomed to doing, but she'sdoing it before she has time to think. Max finds himselfconscious of her closeness to him... and then she becomessuddenly self-conscious and she backs off, ducks herhead. He peeks up under.MAXPsst.She looks at him.MAXIt's okay.He smiles. So does she.EXT. SQUARE - DAY (EARLY EVENING)Sunil stands outside the clinic, rolling his sleevesdown. Anouar waits at a polite distance. Exhausted butexhilarated, Max and Aloka emerge with an elderly womanpatient, Max singing Chuck Berry to the woman's embarrasseddelight: "They're really rockin' in Boston, inPhiladelphia, P.A..." Sunil looks at his Americancolleague, smiles a small smile.SUNILGood night, I'll see you day aftertomorrow.MAXGood night, Sunil.(CONTINUED)64.CONTINUED:"... Deep in the heart of Texas, around the FriscoBay..." Manooj and Shambu come charging at Max with thesoccer ball, hoping to engage him as a playmate. Hasarireturns home with his rickshaw.Selima waves at Max, indicates she's cooking dinner.Joan wanders out of the school as the kids are releasedand go charging through the square. Joan has the Palkids in hand.SELIMAVery special supper for youtonight, Doctor Big Brother! Willyou stay?MAXWish I could, Selima, because I'msure hungry! Sixteen hours ofpestilence and misery always makeme famished. I have to go with my

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man Anouar tonight. I've gotlepers to heal!ANOUARNo, no, you know how patient weare. Eat, eat.MAX(to Aloka)You're not tired, are you?ALOKANot if you're not.Between Hasari and Aloka, there's just a flicker oftension; evidently, this has become Max's (and her)normal day. But he's also worried about the note fromAshoka. Joan joins them with the Pal children.JOANWell, I think we've got three verygood potential scholars here.Behind the children's backs, she points at Manooj andindicates the kid's really got a head.JOANGiven him some time here, he'llbe good enough for a proper school.HASARIIt's more than a father could hope.(CONTINUED)65.CONTINUED:MAXFifteen years from now: Miami,Florida, Dr. Manooj Pal, inassociation with Dr. Maxwell Loeb.For a moment, Hasari is swept up in this little reverie,then remembers reality.HASARI(giving her the note)From the godfather's son. For youand the doctor.Amidst instant concern, Joan opens the envelope. Looksat Max. We hear the sound of BANGLADESH MUSIC.INT. GODFATHER'S "THRONE ROOM" - OLD RADIO - DAYThe MUSIC is of days gone by, playing on an old RADIO.Sticks of burning incense send off trails of smoke. Thegodfather, MR. GHATAK, Looking infirm, wipes a tear fromhis eye.GHATAKAcha!Now we see Max and Joan seated on cushions before the

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godfather, tea in hand. Max catches a glimpse in ananteroom of several thugs with several young girls, oneof whom is Poomina. She catches a glimpse of Max as shedisappears past a door. A moment later, her head peeksaround the door frame. She brings her hands together.ASHOKA (O.S.)You!Poomina quickly disappears. Max's attention is pulledback to the godfather...GHATAKI understand that you're interestedin expanding your clinic and freeschool, and that you intend tostart treating lepers in the Cityof Joy.JOANWe'd like to better serve theentire community, Mr. Ghatak.(CONTINUED)66.CONTINUED:GHATAKOf course. That's very good.Admirable. And we'd be pleased torent you suitable space. But youmust understand that certainpayments will go up.JOANI understand the rent would haveto go up if we rent largerquarters from you, Mr. Ghatak, butwhy should we have to pay moreprotection?GHATAKMore people, more potentialtrouble. Strangers. If I don'tcharge you, what will I tellothers?JOANBut we can't afford it!GHATAKSurely if you can expand, you canpay more.Joan throws up her hands -- how do you reason with thisman?MAXAm I stupid, but isn't this

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protection money money we'repaying you to protect us from you?GHATAKWe live in chaotic times, MissBethel, Doctor. I control theCity of Joy and maintain it as amodel of harmony. It's a miracle,but a very fragile miracle.MAXAnd how are we threatening yourmiracle?GHATAKI admire your courage in choosingto work in such a violent place,Miss Bethel.(MORE)(CONTINUED)67.CONTINUED:GHATAK (CONT'D)Your neighbors in the City of Joy,they're not educated, they'regiven to violence, to meanness, Ican promise you they won't likehaving lepers among them, butbecause they know you're under myprotection...He dispatches a globule of spit into the copper urn nextto his right toe... and tries to get to his feet. TheGoonda hurries forward to help him.GHATAKDoctor, do you like our music?MAXWell, I can't say I've developed acraving for it yet.GHATAKIt's difficult to appreciate whatwe don't understand, isn't it?Let me put it another way: Theworld is a terrible place. Onlythe ruthless prevail. My son willmake the arrangements with you.One of the thugs helps the godfather outside, where, inthe b.g., we see him listening to his music and potteringin his garden. As Max and Joan turn, Max finds himselfface to face with Ashoka, who wears Max's necklace andchai. There's a long pause as the two of them take the

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other's measure.MAX(to Ashoka)I like your taste in neckwear.Joan puts a cautioning hand on Max's arm. Ashoka seemsjust the slight bit uneasy dealing with Max and so keepstrying to direct himself to Joan. He smokes a longIndian cigarette.ASHOKAThe entire package we're proposingwill cost you three thousand rupeesa month.Joan is taken aback by the sum.JOANIf we pay you that, we won't haveany money for supplies.(CONTINUED)68.CONTINUED:ASHOKAI'm told you're very resourceful.MAXI think I see a solution. May I?What if we were to work out aprofit-sharing arrangement? Wegive you a share of our net profit.ASHOKAHow do you expect to make a profitoff of lepers and the poor, Doctor?MAXBeats the hell outta me, asshole.But you've obviously found a way.The question would seem to be whether Ashoka will haveMax killed here or outside the house. His eyes on Max,Ashoka puts the cigarette out against the back of hishand... and smiles at Max.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYJoan is furious.JOANHave you gone right off yourrocker!? These people don't havea sense of humor. Are you tryingto get yourself killed?MAXI don't think so... but with me,any duplicity is possible.He tickles her; she knocks his hands away; he tickles her

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again.JOANStop it, you... you... you nudnick!He doesn't stop, and as she storms off down the street,he stays right on her, tickling away.INT. METAL PIECEWORK SHOP - DAYIt's dark and claustrophobic. The air vibrates with theSQUEAL and CLATTER of METAL. About twenty kids sit in aline, back to back, manipulating a series of lethal andunprotected lathes and polishers. No one can hear hisneighbor.69.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari, with Shambu in the rickshaw, arrives to take thechildren home. As he looks inside, he notices...HASARI'S POVNot far from Amrita sits a handsome boy (Subash). Hecatches Amrita's eyes. Amrita is sweetly embarrassedto find her father staring at her.ON HASARIBut he can't help but smile. At the same time he's remindedmoment to moment of his various obligations.EXT. SIDE STREET - DAYThe three kids in the rickshaw. An ambassador carswerves in front of Hasari, forcing him to jam to a stop,jolting the kids. The Goonda sits in the back seat withAshoka, who carves his fingernails with a switchbladeknife. He crooks a finger at Hasari. Hasari leans closeand Ashoka takes him by the ear.ASHOKAWho gave you your rickshaw?HASARIThe Godfather.ASHOKAWho provides the food you eat?HASARIThe Godfather.ASHOKARemember: Loyalty.He gives Hasari's ear a last tug... and the car continueson, leaving Hasari. He looks at his children, ashamedto have been cowed. Manooj fixes his father with a hardlook.EXT. JOAN'S ROOM - KIDS - ABOVE - NIGHTLeaning over, listening, taking in the aroma of...70.INT. JOAN'S ROOM

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Max's cigar. He sits slightly apart from Joan, Sunil,Aloka, Ram, Hasari, Selima, Margareta, Surya, SALADDIN,ASHISH and Shanta, Aristotle John, MEHBOUB, Anouar, andSaid.Hasari is stretched out, Aloka rubbing his screaminglegs. Throughout the following, their eyes meet anddeflect...SALADDINThe Godfather is at leastcivilized. The son is vicious.Remember the last elections -- theMolotov coctails, the blows withiron bars. They'll throw us out.We won't be able to find anyoneelse to rent to us. We'll justhave to agree to pay what hewants.MEHBOUBSaladdin's right. Neither naturenor the people with the powerhave any conscience. We have topay.A sigh escapes Surya. He shakes his head. Eyesflick at him.ASHISHWhat do you say, Doctor BigBrother?SUNILI think we must try to break theGodfather's hold on us.This is startling and is met with a babble of cautiousagreement and dispute.SUNILPlease, hear me out. But I thinkwe have to be very cautious.MAXHow the hell do you proceed withcaution against these people?You can't. You have to riskeverything.(MORE)(CONTINUED)71.CONTINUED:MAX (CONT'D)You try to negotiate with thesepeople, you make compromises with

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them, they'll eat you alive. Standup against them now and they'llfold. I guarantee it. Underneath,they're cowards, they got no guts.We show them we're strong andthe'll just move on to easierpickings.ASHISHWe? You have an airplane ticket.Still, he's clearly piqued a lot of support.SUNILYou know, Max, this is notAmerican gangster television.SALADDINYes, if you're wrong, you don'thave to be here.MAXI'm not wrong. You bow your heads,you plead with your Gods to dowhat you won't do yourselves.You put up with this nightmareas if there were no choice. I'mtelling you, if you don't standup to that little pimple facenow, he'll own you for the restof your lives.Everyone stares at him. Many of them want to buy hiscommitment. There's another large sigh from Surya.Aloka and Hasari's eyes bang off of each other, shesilently urging him to speak. He's deeply conflictedand deeply frightened.ANOUAREven though I am invisible to someof you and I don't have a completeset of legs to stand on, I standwith the Doctor Big Brother. Maybenature doesn't have a conscienceor those with the power, but don'twe?Said, the giant mute, mades an unintelligible sound inhis throat, but clearly he's agreeing with Anouar.(CONTINUED)72.CONTINUED:MARGARETAI agree with Anouar and Max Daddah.I think it's worth the chance.

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Silence... until Aloka and Hasari's meet again and, outof his terrible fear and conflict, he says very shyly...HASARIIs it permitted to speak?There are quick nods around the room. With great difficulty,Hasari says his piece.HASARII want my children to be educatedand cared for; this is our home,we have never had such friends.But many of us owe a great debtto the Godfather. He is strongand could kill us... But we mustchoose. I trust my Big Brother.I say we must stand up.There's still dissension, but somewhat more support.Said makes a fierce, unintelligible supportive sound.Surya sighs again. Eyes flick at the old man.SUNILSister Joan, what do you think,really?JOANWell, I think Max has hit on theheart of what we're trying to buildhere: a self-help society. Eachof us has to decide for himself.As for me, I suppose I think,really, that if the bastards aregoing to suck us dry, I'd like toget in a couple of good lefthandersbefore I turn the othercheek.SALLADINBut who will rent to us!Surya clucks his tongue and shakes his head; everyoneassumes he is preparing a heated refutation of theresisters. His sighs, though, have been a buildingcommitment.(CONTINUED)73.CONTINUED:SURYAI have a property I will rent youfor two hundred rupees a month,and not a rupee less. As forprotection... you are on your own.Many of the faces are uncertain -- Hasari's notable among

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them.MONTAGE - INT./EXT. COWSHEDS - DAYA) Two cows are shooed out of the ramshackle building asbustling activity on the new clinic begins. Cleaningthe place. Debris being torn out, hurled into apile in the street.B) Said, with the strength of three men, holds up a heavybeam while Hasari tries to secure it. Max, hot,smelly, and hating the place, stands in the middle ofthe room, wishing he were elsewhere. The beams startsto slip. Max leaps to Hasari's side.C) We see that Max and Hasari are thrown together againin some carpentering task in uneasy camaraderie. Afinger pokes Max on the back. He turns to findPoomina holding out two cups of tea.D) The whole group shares a meal, prepared under thedirection of Selima, though the lepers remain separatefrom the normals. Anouar leads the lepers in singinga song. Joan and Margareta pick it up, as do severalother of the normals.E) Equipment from the old school/clinic being moved fromthe square down here.F) Max and Aloka do one of those dances where two peoplewith arms loaded try to go around each other. Finallyhe says he'll stand still and she should go aroundhim. They both laugh. Hasari watches.G) As Max puts medicine into a cabinet, Ram peeks in,nods his approval, "helpfully" passes Max somethingMax can reach just fine himself, shows Max an enormoushole in his shorts and hits Max for ten rupees.H) A small truck carrying a charitable organization'slogo on the side is being unloaded of powdered milkand various other things.(CONTINUED)74.CONTINUED:I) UPSTAIRS AND STAIRWELLHasari and Max move the last cot upstairs and intoplace beside a window that will come into play at theend (It looks down on the street). Hasari nods to Max,indicating he should look.J) THEIR POVEveryone gathered as Shanta and Ashish put a bannerabove the door: "You are invited to the festival ofthis world and your life is blessed." The assemblageapplauds and embraces.K) UPSTAIRS

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Hasari smiles at Max, brings his hands together, butdoesn't embrace the doctor.EXT. CLINIC - NIGHTEveryone lingers, adults and children. Max plays histrumpet, accompanying Surya on his zither. Manoojhovers over Max.MANOOJDoctor Big Brother, aren't yougoing to smoke your evening cigar?Max points at his trumpet, continues playing.MANOOJPlease.Max indicates his pocket. Manooj takes out a cigar and aclip. Clips the cigar, holds it out to Max, who indicatesManooj should light it, and keeps playing. Manoojlooks at Hasari, who nods. Shambu holds a match to it.Everyone watches as if this were a major event. Manoojtakes a puff, chokes, offers the cigar to Mehboub, whotakes it, puffs, passes it. Everyone relaxes, enjoys thepeacefulness of the smoking and the aroma wafting upward.Ram taps at Max's elbow.RAMIt has come to me tonight to writea letter to my wife.Ram produces a mangled one piece letter -- envelope.RAMPlease.(CONTINUED)75.CONTINUED:He thrusts the paper at Max. Max takes a pen from hispocket.MAXOkay -- shott.RAMYes -- what is the word -- thatword -- when land is watered...with canals?MAX"Irrigation"?RAMYes, yes, that word, I want thatword in the letter.Max looks at him, nods, waits. Ram stares at Max; waits.MAXWell?RAM

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Well?MAXWhat would you like to say toyour wife?RAMI don't know, Max Daddah. If Iknew what to say to my wife, I'dnever have left home.Everybody laughs, though Ram's remark hits Max on adeeper level. Manooj slides in beside him.MANOOJWhy do you have to go home, DoctorBabu?ALOKABecause he doesn't live here,Manooj. This is not his home.A look between Max and Aloka; Hasari's eyes flicking atboth of them... as Aloka's eyes come to Hasari. Thecigar reaches Ram. As Max starts to write, Ram takesa large puff and blows a huge ring out of his mouth. WeFOLLOW it.76.ABOVEA whole row of faces on rooftops enjoying the cigar.This as we:DISSOLVE TO:EXT. GREEN ACRES - THROUGH RICKSHAW WHEELS - DAYTHROUGH the WHEELS we see Max come briskly out of thehotel carrying his doctor's bag. He's met by the sightof Hasari between the shafts of his rickshaw and Anouarand Meeta perched on the seat.MAXOn no! Lepers! Lepers in myneighborhood!ANOUARSshh! Doctor Big Brother,please, we are pretending notto be lepers.MAXOh, oh, I didn't get the concept-- of course, not lepers. I thinkyou're going to fool a lot ofpeople. I have only one question:Why are you here?ANOUARWe've come to take you to thedispensary in grand style on this

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special day, haven't we, Hasari?HASARIYes.MAXNa, I'll just trot alongside Hasari.HASARINo, please, get in.Max climbs into the rickshaw beside the two lepers andHasari pulls away.ANOUARMeeta's very excited by this ridethrough Calcutta. You see, she'snever been sightseeing before.Meeta, of course, is blind. Max, Hasari, Anouar laugh.MAXYou're incorrigible, Anouar.(CONTINUED)77.CONTINUED:ANOUARYes, yes, I know, thank you verymuch.As the rickshaw disappears into the sea of people andvehicles, we hear Anouar and Max LAUGHING.EXT. SIDE STREET - DAYMargareta, Manooj, Shambu, Shoba, several other kids and,at the end of the line, Poomina, all carrying water ontheir heads toward the City of Joy. Suddenly, someonewhispers to Poomina. One of Ashoka's thugs. She glancesafter Margareta and the other kids who are turning acorner and steps into:ALLEYWAYWhere Ashoka waits.ASHOKAYou taking that to the clinic?(as she nods)You like it there?(as she nods)And they love your smile, don'tthey?She's fearful now and doesn't respond. He grabs her,the water pitcher crashes to the ground, he puts hisknife into her mouth and lays her face open on both sidewith his knife.EXT. CITY OF JOY - DAYAloka comes TOWARD us leading a group of lepers. Andstops. Her hand goes to her mouth.

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THEIR POV - CLINIC - FROM DISTANCETwo hundred normal people lined up outside the gaily bedeckeddispensary -- many mothers with small children intheir arms. Shanta sees Aloka, gestures to indicate theincredible turn-out. The normals at the end of the lineturn to look at the approaching LEPERS.LEPER WOMANIt is too beautiful to believe.(CONTINUED)78.CONTINUED:As if indeed she were right, their path is suddenly cutoff by the Goonda and a commando of thugs, armed withsticks and iron bars, backed up by a group carryingbanners with slogans proclaiming in Hindi, Urdu, English:"We Don't Want Lepers Here!" There's a sudden uneasysilence. Behind the thugs a short distance is thepoliceman who harassed Max earlier and another cop.Joan hurries forward.GOONDAGood morning, Sister to the poor.JOANYes, Mr. Bhose?GOONDAThose people aren't coming intothis neighborhood.JOANThey are going to be treated atthe dispensary. You have noright to stop them.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari arrives with Max, Anouar, and Meeta.JOANGo ahead, Aloka, take them inside.The Goonda puts his hand on Aloka. The policeman in theb.g. keep their distance.JOANTake your hands off her, youwaster!Joan is seized by a sudden fury and grabs the Goonda.He grabs her much harder. Said growls and pushesforward. Several thugs turn, step in to neutralize him.Joan elbows the Goonda and tires to westle free of him.As a reflex he raises his hand. And as he does, it'sseized.ANOTHER ANGLE

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Max (with Hasari in the b.g., confused, conficted). Maxslings the Goonda against the side of a truck.GOONDAThat was a mistake, Doctor.(CONTINUED)79.CONTINUED:MAXThe mistake's yours, putz.(to Aloka)Get these people inside.Aloka starts forward, leading the lepers. She's stoppedby a sudden blow from the Goonda's stick across hershoulders, knocking her to the ground, bleeding from theneck.Hasari bolts for his wife, gets caught up in the melee.Max swings around on the Goonda and for the first time werealize how strong he is, and that he knows how to box.The Goonda goes down and violence erupts. Anouar ischopping at the legs of one of the thugs working on Said.The massive Said tears free and starts to beat the crapout of the two thugs holding him.The noise brings everyone out of the square, those linedup at the clinic, the children from the school.Sunil comes flying out of the clinic.A stampede of those waiting outside the dispensary andthose normally in the crowded alley ensues. Shanta runsinside for help. Shopkeepers barricade their shopwindows.One of the thugs pours gasoline over Anouar and lights amatch. Hasari kneels beside Aloka when he sees thematch ignite the tiny leper. Without thinking, Hasarihurls himself on top of Anouar, rolling him in the dirtand against his own body to put out the flames.Joan shouts, demanding the violence stop. She's hitfrom behind; she decides talk isn't going to do it. Shegrabs a piece of lumber and starts to fight.ANGLE ON DISPENSARYAn EXPLOSION in the doorway, scattering anyone who remainsin the area of the dispensary doorway, badly woundingMehboub.More people with sticks. Hasari goes down under severalbodies. Max reaches Aloka, helps her up, sends her towardthe clinic. He tears an attacker off of Hasari and theyfight back to back a moment. A SECOND EXPLOSION nearthem... and through the smoke Max sees...80.

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ANOTHER ANGLEAshoka astride his motorcycle, behind his dark glasses,with more thugs, these with Molotov cocktails and pickaxes,ready to raze the clinic and school and thesurrounding neighborhood.Sunil drags Mehboub inside.People chant: "White Monkeys, go home! White Monkeys,go home! No lepers here! No lepers here!" The thugscock their iron bars and bricks and Molotov cocktails.Max picks up an iron bar of his own and starts forAshoka. Suddenly, there's a DETONATION followed by aBLAST of air so fierce, Max is thrown to the ground.A bottle of GASOLINE has EXPLODED just behind him. He'senveloped in smoke.An assailant bears down on Joan with a cutlass. As theassailant is about to strike, Hasari seizes the attackerand hurls him backward. Ashish steps in and slashes theassailant with his own weapon, startling, even repellingHasari.From all over the lane, young fighters have come and joinedthe fray, not bothering to choose sides but merely enjoyingthe release. Hasari lunges for a woman under attack by aboy, arriving too late to stop the boy from plunging hisknife into the woman's belly. Hasari fights his way tothe woman, but she staggers into the mob.Max knocks down one of the thugs only to have another handgrasp his shoulder. He turns, fist cocked to find Poomina,her hands holding her face together. Slowly, she takeshands away. The sides of her face have been laid open.Max sweeps her up in his arms, heads for the clinic.MAXOh, little girl, little girl...Joan is suddenly beside Ashoka.JOANWe'll pay! All right then, so byall means, protect us!Ashoka raises a hand, The Goonda blows a whistle, andthe fighting stops as suddenly as it began. The combatantsare breathing heavily. There is silence but forthe groans and cries of the wounded and grieving.ASHOKAIn a world such as ours, everyoneneeds protection. For the fee wediscussed, from this day forward,I can assure you nothing like thiswill happen again.(CONTINUED)

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81.CONTINUED:A beat... Saladdin is at Joan's shoulder. Ashoka pointsa finger at Hasari.ASHOKAYou. I warned you about thecompany you keep.He REVS his MOTORCYCLE and SCREECHES away, leaving Hasaristaring after him in his dust.INT. COURTYARD - DAYPeople peer in through every opening. Mehboub's chest isbandaged. Sunil squeezes through the packed courtyardand hallway, Ashish carrying a wounded woman behind him.Hasari steps into a doorway, us WITH him.INT. EXAMINING ROOM - MAX, ALOKA, POOMINAMax, blood crusted on her face, sutures Poomina's awfulfacial wound as Aloka prepares a compress.ALOKAWill she... Her face, will it...MAXIf she's very careful and doesn'tdo anything to open the wound, thescarring will be minimal.(to Poomina)Do you understand? You can't...You have to stay here.(to Joan)You make her stay here.JOANI'll try.MAXDon't goddamn try, Joan! Goddamndo it!Poomina peers through her pain at Max, his hands puttingher back together.MAX(a litany)I hate this place, I hate thisplace, I hate this place.Max looks at the doorway and he locks eyes with Hasari.Max breaks the contact. Hasari stares at him as we hearthe godfather's MUSIC on the RADIO.82.EXT. GODFATHER'S COURTYARD - HAND AND PENCIL - DAYA hand tap, tap, taps against a ledger.COURTYARDAshoka sits behind a little table, picking absently at

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his face. The Goonda is slouched near the table, smokinga cigarette and fiddling with a thin switch. (It's difficultfor him to show Ashoka the respect his inheritedposition gives him.) The Goonda has a bruise under oneeye from his altercation in the City of Joy yesterday.The air is filled with the MUFFLED SOUNDS OF the STREET.FROM here, we can see the evermore enfeebled godfatherin his "throne room," wrapped in a cashmere, listeningto the radio. Ashoka looks up, stares impassively atsomeone.ASHOKAWell. What have you got to say?ANOTHER ANGLEFor the first time, we see who Ashoka's speaking to.HASARII told them that your fatherprovides us with a great deal andthat --Ashoka slams his hand on the register.ASHOKAFrom this minute, you are off thelist! You will leave your rickshawhere... where it will be reservedfor a man who deserves our trust.He stands up. Hasari is near tears.HASARIPlease, Babu, this is as if theground has opened up. I have tospeak to Mr. Ghatak!Hasari starts for the house. The Goonda stops him and,quickly, has Hasari on his knees, his arm twisted painfullybehind his back. Ashoka jumps at Hasari, grabshis ear.ASHOKAMy father's ill! You are speakingto me!(CONTINUED)83.CONTINUED:HASARII have a family!ASHOKAThe decision is made. I have madeit. Now get out before I have Mr.Bhose break your legs.He gives Hasari's ear a vicious twist and slams his headagainst the table.

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EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYThe side gate opens and Hasari is shoved out. Stumbling,he runs to the fence, peers through. Two men are pullinghis rickshaw into the courtyard. Hasari watches as asteel shutter is pulled down, cutting his livelihood fromsight.ANGLE THROUGH BAR - HASARINumb, compromised, defeated. Perhaps the low point ofhis life.INT. CLINIC - JOAN'S ROOM - "RAFT OF MEDUSA" - NIGHTFlickering candlelight illuminates the "Raft of Medusa."Max rails at Joan.MAXI just don't... I don't want to...I don't want to care! I don't wantto care this much! I just don'twant to be invested in you people.In people! I became a goddamndoctor because my goddamn fatherwanted me to be a goddamn doctorbecause he was a goddamn doctor!He was the goddamn king ofdoctors! It's too goddamn hard!Out of breath, out of words, Joan reaches out and takesMax to her, brings him beside her on the cot. Beneaththe "Raft of Medusa," she sits with an arm around Max, asif he were her son.JOANNot everyone's cut out for this.You did the best you could.Better than many. It's all right.(CONTINUED)84.CONTINUED:MAXI didn't do the best I could! Idid what I always do! I shot mybig mouth off and did a half-assedjob. And what I want to do now isI want to go back to America andmake money and live a life withoutentanglements and demands andpeople hanging on me.JOAN(a beat)You know, the fact is from theminute we're born we're

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shipwrecked. Some see that as alifetime of drowning, of fear,others only to endure, but totriumph. It's all in theindividual spirit, isn't it?MAXGot it: To run, to spectate, tocommit.(raises his hand)Running spectator.JOANThen, by all means, go home, Max,and go with my blessing and myeternal friendship.The candlelight flickers against them as they sit sideby side. Neither speaks.EXT. RAM'S HUT - TEA SHOP - NIGHTAt the tea shop, a group relive the day's events. Thechildren sleep. Aloka sits outside, worried aboutHasari.Max comes out, meets Aloka's eyes and looks away. She'sheard the conversation.Hasari, drunk, comes down the slope. Face to face withMax.HASARIThey took away my rickshaw.Aloka's hand flies to her mouth. Hasari peers at Maxwith his drunken gaze. It's a terrible moment for Max,but...(CONTINUED)85.CONTINUED:MAXSo what do you want me to do aboutit -- get it back for you?Max takes away a step. Stops.MAXI'm sorry. I'm going home.Because this isn't my fight. Igot one person to look after --me.Hasari stares at Max. On the roof, the children listen.At the tea shop, the late-night talkers listen.MAXAll right, I'm running out, okay?Because I'm a coward, this is me,this is what I do, I get in over

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my head, I let people down, I run.HASARIBut I trusted you.MAXWell, that was your goddamnmistake!Max walks away, leaving Hasari desolate. Aloka comes tohim.HASARII don't know how I'm going to paythe rent, how we're going to eat.ALOKAWe have what is saved for Amrita'sdowry.The thought of using the dowry is yet another awful blowto Hasari's hopes.HASARIThe children must leave theschool; they'll have to work. Andyou will not have anything to dowith the clinic or those peopleanymore.Ram joins them.RAMWhat I earn is yours, too.(CONTINUED)86.CONTINUED:HASARIYou can't support all of us. Youhave a family in your village, too.Hasari touches his friend and goes into:INT. RAM'S HUTAlone in his pain, he spots his tea caddy in which heplanted his seeds over a month ago. He bends over totenderly touch the growing shoot and water the earth.He looks up and the three children are staring at him.What will their father do now to keep them alive?INT. BLOOD DISPENSARY - CLOSE ON HASARI'S ARM - DAYThe needle injected, Hasari's blood flowing into abottle.ANOTHER ANGLEHasari seated on the stool, watching his blood leave hisbody, his face again broken out in perspiration.HIS POV - RAFIKWaiting.BACK TO SCENE - HASARI

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His face immobile, his thoughts distant. The Attendantstarts to pull the needle out. Hasari stops his hand.HASARITake more.The Attendant shakes his head.HASARITake more.The Attendant looks at Rafik, who shrugs, nods... andallows the blood to flow on out of Hasari's body.EXT. BLOOD BANK - DAYBarely ambulatory, Hasari starts down the street, but hasto stop, lean against a wall. Through his woozy haze, hethinks he sees an apparition.87.ANOTHER ANGLEThere, in the entrance to a building, is Gangooly.Seeing a potential victim, he swoops in.GANGOOLYNot well, brother?HASARIStill stealing from refugees?Gangooly looks at Hasari, recognizes him, and gives himan amazing smile.GANGOOLYWell, yes, I remember you, ofcourse -- hello! I am delightedto see you -- yes. And tell meimmediately, please -- your littlefamily, your beautiful children,everyone eats, yes. Come, have acup of tea or a little somethingstronger, we must celebrate.Gangooly starts to move, to position himself for a getaway.Hasari blocks his egress, unsmiling.GANGOOLYAh, well, you're angry at me, yes,I wondered if that was still onyour mind -- I am full of regretabout that, yes, even a littletormented. What can I say? I havethe spirit of an eagle trapped inthe body of a crow.HASARII'm touched.GANGOOLYMy friend, I am lame and I am poor.Does that mean that I shouldn't

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survive? Huh? When a man isstruggling in a rough sea, heclutches onto what he can or hedrowns. You don't look so well.HASARII lost my rickshaw.Gangooly gives Hasari an appraising look for a moment,then...(CONTINUED)88.CONTINUED:GANGOOLYAch! I have an offer. No,listen! Shiva be my witness, youmust at least think about this.Please, I can help... Or my nameis not Mr. Gangooly.HASARIWhich, fortunately, it is.EXT. STREET - MOVING SHOT - DAYGangooly guiding Hasari onward.GANGOOLYRemove the children from the school-- no, why? When you, the father,can make a small sacrifice. Naturehas foreseen your plight. For shehas given you two eyes, yes, andtwo kidneys. But. To live, youhave need of one only. I have afriend who sold his kidney -- thisone -- and now -- believe me, thisis the truth -- he lives in a brickhome... which he owns.That smile.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE (MITRA & CO. EXPORTERS) - JUDASDOOR - DAYA forbidding face appears at the grill, stares out.INT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE - DAYHasari and Gangooly enter. A repulsive smell almostmakes Hasari gag. Gangooly takes Hasari's arm and steershim through the gloom. Hasari discovers the origin ofthe smell.A line of skeletons arranged along the walls. Tablesstacked with bones: skulls, spines, rib cages, handsand feet. Each skeleton sports a label with a price inU.S. dollars.Crouched among the bones and packing crates are men working.

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Some smoke, some have masks over their faces. Theyscrape and clean and decorticate. They skillfullyassemble their grisly creations, emotionless but likeartists.89.POV - MANAGER'S OFFICE - DAYTHROUGH a dusty, glass, interior window, we see, almostin mime, the manager examining Hasari.INT. MANAGER'S OFFICEWith a smile, the manager produces some papers. Hasarishakes his head, starts for the door. Gangooly stopshim.GANGOOLYOf course, take some time, thinkabout it. People all over theworld, anxiously waiting, willingto pay. 15,000 rupees for akidney. 25,000 for an eye.Gangooly winks, peers at Hasari with a single eye, andsmiles.INT./EXT. TAXI - ROAD TO AIRPORT - DAYHeat haze on the road. As we FOCUS, we FIND Max, Joan,Aloka, also with their thoughts. Joan gazes out thewindow of the taxi. Max looks at the back of Joan's heada moment, then looks at Aloka, who sits between them.She deflects his eyes forward.JOANHasari has forbid her to haveanything more to do with us. He'dbe very angry if he knew she wasseeing you off.Max looks at Joan. Looks out the window.INT. AIRPORT - DEPARTURE AREA - WIDE SHOT - DAYFirst we see joyous people greeting arriving passengers;parents greet a young man returning from college abroad.The way clears and we CLOSE IN ON Max, Joan, and Aloka, atiny island in this sea of people at the moment of theirparting. Max empties all the money out of his pockets.MAXThis is for Poomina. When I gethome...He thrusts the money on Joan and Max offers his hand;she goes through the hand to embrace Max. Then Max andAloka look at each other.(CONTINUED)90.CONTINUED:

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ALOKAYou did good things.(chokes up, butmanages)Thank you for coming to ourcountry.And now Max heads out the door.INT. CAFETERIA - ALOKA AND JOAN - DAYSparsely populated. They sit in isolation at a tableover a cup of tea.JOANIt's not like he's royalty oranything, so I'm not persuaded wehave to wait for the plane toactually take off.ALOKANo. We should go.Yet, they remain another moment... then get up. Joanputs her arm around Aloka and they turn to go. The lookson their faces suggest they've come face to face withsomething startling.ANGLE ON DOORMax. Standing inside the departure doorway.MAXWhat were those three choicesagain?Their faces. And his with just a wistful version of hisold grin... and we --FADE OUT.FADE IN:EXT. COMPOUND - DAYHasari returns. Goes into Ram's hut.INT. RAM'S HUT - DAYHe finds his family... and Max. The two men stare ateach other.(CONTINUED)91.CONTINUED:MAXI need Aloka at the clinic.(as Hasari stares)All right, they, the patients,need her. She's a good nurse.(as Hasari stares)Come on, man, this is between youand me. Why take the kids out ofschool, why punish your wife?

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Hasari holds his anger in; he moves to a mat and liesdown, his back to Max. But Max doesn't go.MAXI have a little money, I can getit from the States...HASARIIt's not a question of money.We'll survive on our own.That's it. Hasari lies with his back to Max. After somemoments of silence, Aloka indicates Max should go. Andhe does. After another moment...ALOKAMaybe he's right. The clinic isfor everyone and if I am needed --Hasari bolts up, a look of anger on his face we've neverseen.HASARINo! I'm your husband and you'lldo as I say! Unless, of course,you've become an American wife andthen you'll do as you please!HASARIStay away from them. They are notpart of us. They will only be goodto you as long as you please them.The children, Aloka are frozen, she very close to tears.Hasari lies back down, again turns his back on them.EXT. LEPER COLONY (DAWN) - DAYThe small colony alive; a line of patients outside a door.92.INT. ROOM - DAYMax unwraps a bandage from a leper's partial limb. Looksaround for Aloka. She's not there. Said is acting ashis nurse. Points at his instruments.MAXHand me the scissors, please.Helpfully Said hands him the tweezers.MAXScissors, scissors.He demonstrates. Said fumbles through the instruments,picking up the scissors by the ends.MAXNot that end -- No, that's fine,thanks, I've got it.EXT. LEPER COLONY - DAYMax comes out with his last patient. Anouar waits.ANOUAR

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Max Daddah, you are finished?(Max nods)Follow me.Anouar takes off down the lane and disappears quicklyinto a little building, Max following.INT. TANNERY - DAYMax follows Anouar past bubbling cauldrons and heaps ofanimal skins. The place stinks fiercely. Anouar andMax exit into...A SMALL YARDTwo young men (the two pullers Chomotkar and Ramatullah)... and something covered with a tarp.MAXYou didn't steal this.RAMATULLAHThe police, Sahib, they stole it.We stole it from them.(CONTINUED)93.CONTINUED:The pullers whip the tarp off. A battered rickshaw, thesprings poking out of the seat, the broken wheels lyingin the body, the finish scarred and gouged, one shaftbroken.MAXHow much?EXT. SQUARE - DAYMax comes into the square. Aloka and Selima are preparingmeals. Manooj, Shambu, and three other boysplaying. Ram is trying to jolly Hasari, who's deep inhis own reverie. Max stands in front of Hasari.MAXI'd like to show you something.Just take a minute.A beat as Hasari fixes Max with an empty stare and thefamily waits to see if Hasari will respond.MAXGo ahead. Go on.EXT. COURTYARD AND STORAGE SHED - CLINICThe sound of a PADLOCK being UNLOCKED. DARK SCREEN.Light flashes. Max and Hasari appear in the doorway.Surprised by the light, a few rats scurry off. Somewherea dog BARKS. Slated, shafted light. He indicatesa corner.THE RICKSHAWPiled up in its ruin.MAX

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I'm good with my hands. You'regood with yours. What do you say?Hasari looks at Max, part resentful, part touched.HASARIIf I were to go on the street withthis machine, I would end up in agutter with my throat cut.(CONTINUED)94.CONTINUED:MAXWell, it's yours if you want it.You know the license, the cops,all that can be fixed. You'llown this -- it'll have nothing todo with the Godfather.HASARIDoctor Daddah, I'm just a smallman. Don't try to tempt me againwith big thoughts.Hasari starts to leave. Max blocks his way.MAXYou didn't want me to quit. Well,I came back.HASARIBut can you be trusted?MAXI hope so.Hasari can see the hope and desire in Max's face. Aftera moment, Max steps aside. Hasari bends his head andmakes off. Leaving Max and a small sigh ofdisappointment.EXT. LATRINES - FOUNTAIN - ALOKA - DAY (DAWN)She takes her morning absolutions, bathing in the fountain.The process is extremely sensual, though there isnot even a glimpse of her nakedness as she moves herclothing around, cleansing this area, then that. Sheglances up to see...ANOTHER ANGLEMax, in an Indian shirt, heading for the square; rathernaturally, he brings his hands together in the Indiansalutation. He carries several bottles of distilledwater, a large value pack of bar soap, and a carton ofmedical supplies. As he passes, his eyes hook onAloka's. He lifts a hand in greeting. After a moment,she ducks her head. He turns and continues on comingface to face with Ram, an enormous smile on his face.

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With him, Hasari. He glances at his wife in the water.MAX(to Hasari)Going to look for work?(CONTINUED)95.CONTINUED:When Hasari doesn't answer...RAMYes, he is.Ram has a small coughing fit.MAXAre you taking your medicine?RAMYes, yes, but look at this.He points at the wheel of his rickshaw; the rim iscracked. Scornfully, Hasari walks on. Max and Ramglance after him. Max digs out several rupees. Ramtakes them and goes. Max looks after the two men asthey disappear. When he turns...ANOTHER ANGLE...he finds himself face to face with Aloka. Without aword, they start walking side by side toward the square.It's several seconds before she says...ALOKAHe's very proud.They walk on in silence -- two friends, separated by agulf.EXT. DOCKS - FROM THE GATE - DAYMen moving like ants into the bow of the ship. Hasari islocked out, turned away without work.EXT. METRO CONSTRUCTION SITE - DAYA huge gouge in the black mud, sunlight streaming throughsteel girders across it. Hasari emerges from the ground,looking for someone. Stops him. The foreman shakes hishead, no, before Hasari even has the chance to ask forwork.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE - EXTREME CLOSEUP - HASARI'SFACE - DAYThen we see he's standing outside Mitra & Co., staring atit, wondering if it's time to sell part of himself. No!We see on his face a look that tells us he will not bebeaten.96.EXT. CLINIC - COURTYARD - DAYThe street children's school now takes up two rooms.Children peer out of one room now as, to the accompaniment

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of Surya's zither, twenty or so girls are doing someIndian classical dancing, under the eye of a young Indianteacher.Across the way, in the other room, some children aretranslating Bengali words into English. A boy is writingon the board. It's Manooj. We see that Shambu is in thesame class.INT. EXAMINING ROOMFROM BEHIND, we watch Max take a wrapping off ofPoomina's wound, Joan assisting him. Indeed, Ashokaextended Poomina's smile on either side of her mouth.The scars are healing as nicely as could be expected.Max did a fine job.MAXYou must have had a good doctor.Still no running, jumping, pickingup anything heavy. And you stayhere. You're going to help SisterJoan and you're going to school.Do you understand?A beat, Poomina nods. But now a look of abject fearcomes over her face.The Goonda stands in the doorway. Max begins singing"Sweet Little Sixteen." The Goodna stares impassivelyat Max.THE GOONDATime to collect the rent, Sister.JOANOf course. Come with me, please.Joan leaves, followed by The Goonda. Max works carefullyat the fine line of scabbing on Poomina's scar...but then something takes his attention.ACROSS THE COURTYARDManooj, with a small tin of food, looks this way andthat... and then sneaks into the shed.EXT. SHED - DAYWe hear a, TAP, TAP, TAP. The door is half open. Thepadlock is hanging on its chain. Max opens the door.97.INT. STORAGE ROOMStartled, frightened, Hasari presses himself against thewall, as does Manooj. Hasari is wearing a wet dhoti,caught in the middle of straightening the wheel rim ofthe old rickshaw.HASARIClose the door!Max is very surprised but, needless to say, pleased. He

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looks at the rickshaw, looks at Hasari.HASARIClose the door. The Godfatherhas more eyes than a pineapple.Max quickly closes the door. The half light is brokenby thin beams of light that dance with dust.Hasari studies Max a moment, then moves to put the firstwheel on. Instinctively, Manooj moves to his side, takeshold of the rickshaw so Hasari can slip the wheel on.Hasari nods and goes for the other wheel. Manooj movesaround to the other side, hefts the carcass. Hasarislips on the second wheel. Hasari looks at Max. Maxbrings his hands together and starts to go.HASARII was saying to Manooj that if aman bows down too many times,there will come a day when he willno longer be able to stand upright.The two men look at each other... and then Hasari getson with his work.MAXI promised Manooj and Shambu I'dtake them to the movies. Is itall right?HASARI(a beat)If a man makes a promise...Max brins his hands together and starts for the door.Hasari picks up one of the worn seat boards.INT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHTWe're TRACKING WITH a moving bag of peanuts behind a rowof boy's heads. On the screen in front of them, a "medievalera" sword battle between the great Kumar Kapur anda legion of bad guys.(CONTINUED)98.CONTINUED:We hear the sound of CRACKING NUTS as we MOVE FROM Manoojto three kids we've seen in the neighborhood (two boysManooj's age and Shoba, who's Shambu's age) and then toShambu, each kid dipping into the bag in his turn.Finally: Max's (and on the other side of him, Amritaand Poomina.) The bag arrives... empty.MAX(whispering)Thanks, guys. Who wants to go formore peanuts?

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No one. We're talking about rapt attention. We hearNUTS CRACKING. Max smiles.EXT. STREET - NEAR CITY OF JOY - NIGHTMax and the boys walking home after the movie, the boysdancing around each other, acting out the fight sequences,all of the sword-fighting against Max, who battles themall over the street, in and around cars, Poomina and Amritalooking on shyly, as El Max fights to save their honor.MANOOJI can't decide if I want to beKumar Kapur or a doctor.MAXHa ha! You can be both! ManoojPal, swashbuckling physician!MANOOJYou're so much fun, El Max. Iwish my daddy were as much fun asyou.Max stops the fight, takes Manooj by the shoulders.MAXI wish my father loved me likeyour father loves you. Your dad'sa very special man. And now, engarde!As the battle continues, the bright beams of a truckcome at them.MAXTime out, men. Off the streettill this truck passes.(CONTINUED)99.CONTINUED:The kids move toward the wall of the building they'repassing, but the truck seems to turn toward them, seemingnot to intend to pass, but to hit them.The look on Max's face lets us know he senses somethingterrible is in the offing here. He shouts for the kidsto get out of the way, shoving the kids closest to himinto a doorway. He turns to Shambu, who's behind him,calls to him.But in a panic, Shambu doesn't move into the shelter ofthe building on his right... but tries to run across thestreet. Max leaps for the little boy too late... as thetruck just misses Max and clips Shambu hard, sending thelittle boy flying.EXT. SQUARE - NIGHTManooj runs ahead of everyone as he charges into Ram's

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hut, crying for his father. Behind Manooj come theothers, Max carrying Shambu in his arms. Hasari andAloka, Ram, Joan, others in the square hurtle out oftheir huts.MAXI can't do anything here. He'sgot a compound fracture, hehemorrhaging. We've got to getto a hospital -- now!JOANYou'll never get a taxi at thishour.EXT STREET - HASARI'S FEET - DAY (EARLY EVENING)He pounds along, the wheels wobbling and squeaking,urging people out of his way. Max runs alongside Hasari.Aloka sits on the seat with Shambu, whose quiet moaningfills her ears. Blood drips down the rickshaw.EXT. PARK STREET - FROM THE RICKSHAW - DAYSeveral taxis waiting for clients outside a row ofrestaurants. Hasari and Aloka watch as Max argues withthe drivers. They won't take a bleeding passenger.SAME STREET - MOMENTS LATERThe race to the hospital continues.100.EXT. MEDWAR PINE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL - NIGHTThe arrive at the gates of the huge, Victorian hospital.People sleep outside the gates.INT. HOSPITAL - CORRIDOR - SIDE ROOM - DAYThe wards are full, as are the corridors. Patients onbeds and stretchers everywhere. Most have at least onemember of their family to look over them. In a sideroom, Max is arguing with a porter who tells him he can'thelp him. Max slaps some rupees into the porter's hand,tells him to take him to the person in charge.Shambu is fading. Aloka smooths the sweat from his brow,trying to keep Shambu alive by force of will and love.Then Max is back, standing over her with another man. Itmay take a moment before we recognize the ATTENDANT fromthe Blood Bank.MAXThey'll admit him, but we have topay for the blood. I gave him allI had. He wants more. Do you haveanything?ALOKASister Joan gave me this.Aloka holds out a fistful of rupees. The Attendant blows

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through his lips, indicating it's a paltry sum. Maxgrabs the money and shoves it at the Attendant.MAXWe haven't got any more!The Attendant doesn't move... until he sees Max is aboutto explode.MAXIf this child dies while youstand here, I'll kill you.The Attendant is smart enough not to push any further.MAXNow, I need an X-ray room and Ineed an O.R. nurse.ATTENDANTNot possible. You can't givecare, you're an American. Youmust be an Indian doctor.(CONTINUED)101.CONTINUED:MAXThen take me to one!As Max takes flight with the Attendant, Aloka strokesShambu and Hasari hovers. We CLOSE IN ON Shambu'sinanimate face and HOLD a moment.ANOTHER ANGLEMax hurtles down the corridor with a young INTERN intow. Almost a kid, he's been up for days. But he'sgoing to help.INTERNThis way, please.Max scoops Shambu up and rushes down the corridor behindthe Intern, leaving Hasari and Aloka looking after him.His arm comes around her shoulders.EXT. HOSPTIAL - DAY (DAWN)Hasari and Aloka wait. People are starting to move about.HASARIYou're my wife, Aloka, you and mychildren are all my wealth. Butif Max Daddah and Big Sister Joanhave need of you, you may go tothem.Max comes out of the hospital. The two Pals stare athim.MAXWe pinned his leg. Couple ofmonths, he'll be better than

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ever. They want to keep himtoday. We're a good team.Gimme five.He smiles, holds out a palm for them to slap. Theylook at the palm, unsure what this means. Yet, eachtakes Max's hand.EXT. CLINIC - COURTYARD - DAYThe whole community is here, around the tree.(CONTINUED)102.CONTINUED:JOANI don't think it was an accident.I think they were aiming for Max.So, what we have to ask ourselvesis whether his presence isendangering all of us.ANOUAREven from my low vantage point, Iknow this: It's the son. He'smad.HASARIMax Daddah is our friend. Ifthey're trying to harm him, thenthey're trying to harm all of us.We must stand by him as one.INT. SHED - CLOSE ON TWO PAINTBRUSHES - NIGHTdip into a little box of paints. The boys look on as thetwo men paint an intricate design on the shafts. Shambusits in the rickshaw seat. He wears an ankle to hipcast. Manooj is spelling words and urging Shambu tofollow suit. Aloka is putting out a tray of food. Ram,Ramatullah, and Chomotkar slip in, quickly close thedoor. The two pullers focus on the rickshaw, Ram on Max.RAMDoctor Daddah, please, veryimportant, only one moment.MAXThis is going to cost me everyrupee I didn't make today.Ram thrusts an envelope into Max's hand.MAXA letter from your wife.Ram nods nervously. Max looks at the postmark as heslices it open with a finger.MAXThis is postmarked six weeks ago.

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RAMSo?(CONTINUED)103.CONTINUED:MAXSo, what have you been doing --incubating it?RAMI was afraid.Ram waits, his hands twisting each other.MAX'My dear husband...'RAMOh that's very hopeful so far!MAX'Your words brought tears of joyto my arid eyes.'RAMOh, I'm in love! My wordsbrought tears to her arid eyes!(then fearful)What does that mean -- arid?Manooj throws his hand up.MANOOJI know! Dry.MAXCorrect. Her eyes were dry, yourletter irrigated them.RAMAaah!He snatches the letter, crushes it to his heart. Noticesthe finish work on the rickshaw.CHOMOTKARThis is a puka nasgar. What acurse that you can't use it.HASARII'm going on the streets tomorrow.This gets everyone's attention. The pullers shake theirheads, they're worried for him.MAXListen. I don't want you to thinkI'm crazy, but I don't think thattruck was an accident.(MORE)(CONTINUED)104.

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CONTINUED:MAX CONT'D)I think Ashoka was after me. Youcan bet he'll be after you too.HASARII'm going to speak to his father.MAXCan I go with you? I'll go withyou. Can I go with you if I shutup?A beat... and Hasari gives him a small nod.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYGhatak is literally carried out of the house by anorderly and placed into his car. There's a driverand there is the Goonda. They start down the street.We're WITH the car. Suddenly, the driver slams on thebrakes and from:ANOTHER ANGLEWe see Hasari and Max blocking the street with the newrickshaw. The Goonda jumps out of the car, comesthreateningly at Hasari.HASARIBabu, please, I beg you, hearmy words!As the Goonda is about to land on Hasari we hear afeeble...GHATAKWait.The Goonda backs off. The Godfather waves Hasari andMax close. Hasari brings his gleaming rickshaw to thewindow of the car, Max at his shoulder.HASARIMay I say first, Babu, I wish youlong life and good health.GHATAKAcha! They take me now to thescientists. They stick needles inme, take pictures of my insides,study them, and then tell me whatI know.(CONTINUED)105.CONTINUED:The Godfather stares at Hasari, flicks his eyes at Max.Waits.HASARIWhen you gave me work, I swore I

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would be as your youngest brother.Your son thinks I have beendisloyal. He took my rickshaw.With my friend, I have remade thisone. I beg you to let me go againonto the streets. I have my family.The old man looks at the rickshaw, at the obvious carethat went into its renovation, at this unlikely teamof refurbishers. He reaches a shaking hand out towarda shaft. Hasari brings it close. The old man rubs theshaft.GHATAKIt is very beautiful.HASARIThank you, Babu.GHATAKIf I may say, it has an allure.HASARIAn allure, Babu -- thank you.The Godfather stares at Hasari, then at Max.GHATAKThe world is chaos. We struggleto build something permanent,then our bodies betray us, our sonsbetray us.(to Hasari now)Yes, you may take your rickshawout. If you can face up to my son.The Goonda gets back into the car and the car pulls awayand we are left with Hasari and Max as moment.EXT. SKELETON WAREHOUSE (MITRA & CO) - DAYHasari enters.INT. MANAGER'S OFFICE - DAYThe manager stares at Hasari, as he consumes a pot ofrice and vegetable curry. Gangooly hovers like a crow.Hasari stares at the contract before him.(CONTINUED)106.CONTINUED:HASARIIf a man dies and he's not burned,what do you think becomes of hissoul?The manager turns his palms up, continues chewing.Hasari stares through the window at the row of skeletons.HASARII must provide for my family.

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GANGOOLYOh, it's a noble fate. If indeedyour wheel ceases to turn, you willhelp educate somewhere in thisgreat world a fine doctor.Hasari bends to the contract and laboriously signs hisname.EXT. GODFATHER'S HOUSE - DAYHasari arrives to an outcry of anger. There are severaldozen rickshaws. Among the passersby, we see umbrellas,as the people on the street try to combat the incredibleheat.HASARIWhat's going on?CHOMOTKARThe Godfather ill! The son israising the rent!Ashoka is on his front steps with a loudspeaker before agrowing crowd of pullers. He's backed up by the Goondaand a dozen of his thugs. The loudspeaker liftsAshoka's voice above the anger.ASHOKADo you know how much it costs tochange the spoke in a wheel? Orhow much baksheesh I have to paythe police?Impulsively, Hasari moves forward. Cries from pullers:"Who will be the victims of this madness? You?" "Hellno!" "You don't need the six rupees each old cratebrings you per day to fill your belly! For us, it meansdeath!" The street is so packed with rickshaw andpullers now that cars can't get through. A chorusof HORNS HONK; drivers scream.(CONTINUED)107.CONTINUED:RAMATULLAHWe haven't been breaking ourbacks between the shafts of ourrickshaws in order to weep foryou!Hasari continues forward, his eyes on Ashoka.CHOMOTKARThe only thing that matters is thebundle of rupees we take to themunshi each month to feed and toanswer the daily needs of our

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children!RASSOUL steps up on a telagarhi with a loudspeaker.RASSOULListn to me! Listen now! Listento me!(when the pullersquiet)Friends! I ask you to vote for anunlimited strike. Inkalabadzindabad! Long live therevolution! Rickshaw Workers Unionzindabad!A strike? No income at all? The slogan is taken upby a small percentage of the assemblage. Fear anddoubt on many faces.ASHOKAThat's what I thought. Allright, get to work! Customersare waiting!ON HASARISomething detonates in him and he jumps onto the telagarhiand grabs the microphone from Ashoka. Policearrive in vans.HASARIFriends! The Godfather at leastis a caring man! This one,though, the son --A signal from Ashoka and one of the thugs knocks Hasaridown.(CONTINUED)108.CONTINUED:ASHOKAWe helped this man! We gave hima job, a place to live! This ishow he shows his gratitude. Geton the streets now! Or turn inyour machines!Hasari gets up and tries to speak.HASARIFriends -- don't! If we stand --He gets hit again. A number of the pullers come forwardand a riot starts. The police move in, beat and arrestmany of the demonstrators. Ramatullah and Chomotkartry to help Hasari, but they are descended on by copswho hurl them aside and beat Hasari senseless untilthe:

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SCREEN GOES BLACK.FADE IN:INT. BONSAL COURT - DAYBirds flying below ceiling. The room has a barred cagerunning all around its edge; the cage is filled to nearoverflowing. Hasari stands before the JUDGE, his facecovered with blood, his body a mass of aches and welts.At the back of the room, Max and Aloka; elsewhere,Ashoka, the Goonda, and several of his thugs.HASARIThe life of a rickshaw puller isnot one a man would choose if hehad a choice. Our feet blisterand burn up from the boilingasphalt, our noses burn from thefumes of countless motor cars andbuses, our backs curve permanentlyfrom the loads we carry hour afterhour, day after day. But I amproud to be one of the human horseswho carry my countryman from placeto place and I am thankful for theopportunity to make a living. ButI will not keep silent anymore andI will not be cheated andthreatened anymore. Life is hardenough. No more.Ramatullah starts to applaud. Rassoul follows suit.The Judge bangs his gavel.(CONTINUED)109.CONTINUED:JUDGESilence!(when it's silent)This man will be permitted touse his rickshaw without let orhindrance. And I will make arestraining order against Mr.Ghatak.Cheers from the pullers. The Judge bangs his gavel.JUDGEI haven't finished theseproceedings. For his part in thisdisturbance, I fine the defendant50 rupees.HASARI

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Fifty rupees, Your Honor?That's --JUDGEPay at this time or spend sevendays in jail!Seven days in jail will cost him far more than fiftyrupees. As he reaches into his pocket for his screwof money, a hand suddenly protrudes into the cage throughthe bars.RAMATULLAHHasari!And now another hand with several rupees reaches through.RASSOULHasari!Now a dozen voices call his name and a dozen hands reachthrough the bars with rupees clutched in their fists andpress the money into Hasari's hands. The Judge, Max andAloka, and certainly Ashoka watch this in amazement. TheJudge bangs his gavel.Max turns, shoots a little finger gun and winks at Ashoka.CLOSE ON ASHOKAON his face, we see pure hatred for these two men.110.EXT. CITY OF JOY - DAYAmrita, Manooj, and Shambu. With them, Subash flirtingwith Amrita, incurring the wrath and admiration of herbrothers, causing her to flush.THUNDER sounds. They all look up. Rain starts to fall.People run outside of workshops and huts, crying, "Therains, the rains." Suddenly, a THUNDERCLAP shakes theearth and rain begins to bombard them. The rain falls,the WIND HOWLS, and people in the lane are dancing,praising the beginning of the monsoon season. Men tearoff their shirts, women rush out fully clothed, singing.Swarms of naked children run about. The kids run towardthe clinic/school.EXT. CLINIC COURTYARD - DAYHasari is locking his rickshaw into the shed. Staff andseveral patients come out of the examining rooms -- Joan,Aloka, Sunil, Anouar, Poomina. Margareta and herstudents, a new teacher, Bandona, her students come out ofthe classrooms... They're all swept up in dancing, Joan'smetal cross jumping about as if it were beating out time.From his balcony, Max emerges with his trumpet and playsthe first bars of "Singin' In the Rain." Everyone lookshis way; he begins to hum and sing as he jumps over thebalcony to the ground and takes off in a wild, improvished,

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but damn good version of Gene Kelly's dance inthe rain, bringing Anouar on his cart in as his dancingpartner. Everyone in the courtyard crowds around them,laughing and encouraging the dancer/singers on. Thenumber builds to an extraordinary climax with Max slidingthrough mud to an exquisite finish at Joan's feet.There's thunderous applause.INT. CLINIC - NIGHTRain. Max, The Pals, Ram, Joan, Anouar, Meeta and theBaby, Poomina, Saladdin, Mehboub, Ashish, Shanta,Margareta, Bandona, and the other members of the committeesharing a meal.HASARIReally -- a boyfriend, Amrita?AMRITANo!Amrita whacks Manooj.(CONTINUED)111.CONTINUED:MANOOJYes, she does. His name is SubashGhosh. His father owns the workshop.HASARIIs there someone you care about?The look in Amrita's eyes tells us indeed there is.Hasari smiles at Amrita and then at Aloka.HASARIThen I must speak to his fatherand I must complete your dowry.Amrita squeezes close to her mother. This is seriousand joyous.HASARIYou will make people sigh at howbeautiful you are. And I shalldrop tears of joy.RAMAt my wedding I became sofrightened, my father gave methings to drink to calm me down.I went out to piss and fell asleepunder the village tree. When Iwoke I thought it was the tree I'dmarried. I still love that tree.The laugh. But Hasari's attention is on his daughter.He reaches a loving hand to her.INT. GREEN ACRES - MAX'S BATHROOM - TUB FAUCET - NIGHT

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A rag has been wrapped around the faucet and water runsslowly and silently down into the nearly filled tub. Thescene is illuminated dimly by a flashlight with fingersover the beam.ON MAXHe sleeps. Suddenly he's grabbed, his eyes spring openin fear. Hands yanks him out of bed, slam him up againstthe wall, then hurtle him across the room and into:BATHROOMWhere the tub has been filled. His head is slammed downunderwater and he's held there struggling.(CONTINUED)112.CONTINUED:His head is yanked up and through bleary eyes he sees aknife at his throat and the Hewbrew letter chai danglingfrom the knife - wielder's neck, illuminated by aflashlight.ASHOKAGo home, Doctor.Before he can respond, he's slammed down into the tub ofwater again and held there until it seems his lungs willexplode. Then he's dumped backward, gasping for breath.EXT. CITY OF JOY - SQUARE - NIGHTMax on the run through the rain, carrying his belongings.CLINICHe pounds through the puddles, past a sleepy old watchman,and through the gate.INT. COURTYARD - NIGHTHe bangs on Joan's door. She opens the door in her Indianpajamas. One look at him...JOANWhat's happened?MAXAshoka ordered me to go home.Well, I've come home.A beat. She steps aside, he steps in, and the door closeshim safely inside.EXT. PARK CIRCUS - DAYThe rickshaw station. The rain pours down. Peopleclambor for rickshaws. The line moves forward as fastas the pullers can take on passengers. Hasari, Ram,Ramatullah, Chomotkar look at the stalled buses, thestreetcars, the taxis, the private cars.CHOMOTKARWhat a joy it is to survey thisdisaster! We will all make a

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fortune!(CONTINUED)113.CONTINUED:HASARIThe monsoon is the great Durga'sgift to the human horse!Hasari glances at Ram, who isn't a part of the joking.HASARIWhat's the matter?RAMI'm wet and I'm cold. Yourdaughter is getting married. Timeis passing. I want to go home tomy wife.Chomotkar touches Hasari, nods across the street. There,we see the Goonda and two thugs.RAMATULLAHHasari!It's Hasari's turn. He can't stay to talk with Ram now.He has to go.MARWARI #4How much to the market?HASARIEight rupees.MARWARI #4What! I won't pay it!HASARIWho else needs a ride? I amavailable at a price!Several others crowd and shove toward him.MARWARI #4No! Take me -- I'll pay, let'sgo!HASARIThe price just went up! Tenrupees! In advance.The Marwari hesitates only as long as it takes him to digin his soaking wet pants and to slap the bills intoHasari's hand and climb aboard. Hasari sets out withgreat difficulty -- and greater determination -- throughthe floodwaters, flicking his eyes at the Goonda as hegoes.114.EXT. WEDDING SHOP - DAYWater pours down. FROM HERE we see Hasari inside, puttingmoney down in front of the shop owner and then hustling

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back into the rain and taking up his shafts. We WATCH theowner look after him with a touch of disdain as he comesinto the window and takes down the beautiful green andgold sari.EXT. CLINIC - GUTTERS - NIGHTWater pouring from above; the gutters overflow with refuse.We PAN UP to the clinic.INT. CLINIC COURTYARDWater pouring off the room into the courtyard. Hasarilocks his rickshaw into the shed and turns out, attentionto Max, Aloka, Joan, Poomina, Margareta, Mehboub, severalothers trying to patch leaking roof tiles and keepsupplies high and dry.INT. CLINIC ROOMHasari enters. Max looks at him, doesn't like the lookof the obviously exhausted man.HASARIHow can I help?EXT. CIRCULAR ROAD - FISTFUL OF RUPEES (RUNNING MONTAGE)- DAYAn Anglo couple jockeying for preference. Hasari selectsthem from a crowd. This is the beginning of RUNNINGMONTAGE.A) He runs AT us from different directions with riders-- pushing, pushing -- the water getting higher, ourFOCUS VARIOUSLY IN NORMAL AND SLOW MOTION ON hisfeet, his tensed muscles; for a moment, we hear onlyhis breathing, the sound of his feet on the pavement,the RAIN AGAINST the CANOPY of the rickshaw.B) He drags up with an entire, well-to-do family of six,packed into the rickshaw.C) He stumbles to a stop outside the emergency entranceto the hospital, carrying a mother and her sickchild.(CONTINUED)115.CONTINUED:D) An upper-crust Brahmin dressed in crisp white, anumbrella protecting him against the harsh elements.E) Four uniformed school children huddled, laughingtogether under the rickshaw's canopy.INT. LEPER COLONY - MEETA'S ROOM - DAYThe rain continues, as does the work in the clinic. Maxis working on Anouar, Aloka assisting. Meeta and thebaby (now 6 months old) in the b.g.ANOUARI think Aloka would have a gentler

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touch than you, Max Daddah. Maybeshe should perform this surgery onher own.Aloka ducks her eyes, embarrassed.MAXLast time you told me you weremore than two women could manage.ANOUARYes, but given a choice between oneand none, I will accept the one.Max lifts Anouar off the table and places him on hiscart.MAXOkay, you ought to be good foranother few days. Send in thenext patient.Anouar scoots out. Max and Aloka both turn to theinstruments lying on the table and knock a pair ofscissors to the floor. Simultaneously, they bend to pickit up and bang heads.LOW ANGLEThe first impulse of each is to touch the other's head.But almost simultaneously, their hands freeze short oftouching. Several months ago, Max might have tried tokiss her; now, though, there is friendship and affection.FROM here, we see a pair of bare feet. We COME WITH Maxand Aloka UP.116.ANOTHER ANGLEShoba, a deeply concerned look on his face. Slowly hishands come forward, holding his parrot, with a brokenwing. He puts the parrot on the examining table.INT. POST OFFICE - DAYHasari seals a letter and a money order into an envelope,seals, and puts it into the slot. He is clearlyexhausted. Outside he can see two Sikh merchants at hisrickshaw, looking around in the rain for him. He hurriestoward the door.HASARIHere! I'm here!INT. SUBASH'S HOUSE - NIGHTAloka and three women huddled beside a window, Amritahalf hidden behind them. We PAN ACROSS a staircase TOanother window, THROUGH which we see a doorway. In thedoorway, Subash turns to smile a shy smile at Amrita; heshrugs. PAST him now, we see Hasari facing SUBASH'SFATHER and three UNCLES, surly men with hair matted with

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mustard oil. The Ghoshes are all seated on low chairsand stools. Hasari is standing.INT. ROOM - NIGHTMr. Ghosh and the Uncles stare at Hasari, who standspolitely and hopefully before them.MR. GHOSH (SUBASH'S FATHER)You're a rickshaw puller, am Icorrect?HASARIYes, that's correct.He looks at his brothers, on either side. They look athim.MR. GHOSHAnd I a partner in the workshopwhere your daughter is employed.Were you aware of that?HASARIYes, yes, I was, my daughter toldme, thank you.(CONTINUED)117.CONTINUED:MR. GHOSHYes, well then, perhaps you cantell me why I would permit my sonto marry your daughter.Mr. Ghosh raises his palms. It's all over as far ashe's concerned.UNCLE #1Just a moment, please.The brothers huddle, whisper just loudly enough forHasari to hear.UNCLE #1Are you saying there's no wayyou'd consider this match?Mr. Ghosh shakes his head, shrugs his palms.UNCLE #1Perhaps some inducement? Wouldthat be of any help?MR. GHOSH(considering this)What could he possibly offer?UNCLE #1Probably nothing. But perhaps,in fairness, we should find out.Mr. Ghosh shrugs. The huddle breaks. All five menstare at Hasari.

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EXT. STREETS - DAYHasari, mouth half open, flecked with spume, pulls ahuge Marwari. He's pouring sweat, his eyes are bloodshot.He has never looked more like a horse.They arrive at a cross street. The Marwari gets downand pays Hasari. Hasari slumps against the rickshawand, while he awaits his next rider, counts his crumpledpile of notes and coins.EXT. CLINIC - DAYMax, Joan, Aristotle John, Margareta, Mehboub, perhapsa dozen others trying to raise the level of the lowwall at the entrance with bricks. The wall caves in.Other people in the neighborhood rush to rebuild it.(CONTINUED)118.CONTINUED:MAX(shouting to theothers)My dear friends, it's justoccurred to me what inspired meto stay here.Thinking he's about to make some cogent remark aboutthis unified effort...MARGARETAWhat's that, Doctor Big Brother?MAXThe opportunity to acquirewaterfront property at a reasonableprice.Joan begins to laugh; the others don't get it, queryeach other as to what's funny about that.JOANI hate to admit it, junior, butthat was actually quite witty.She whacks him on the shoulder with a wet, muddy paw.JOANUt-nobody laugh; it's a naturaldisaster -- we have guests.Everyone turns to...ANOTHER ANGLEManubai and Ravi, their car parked at the entryway tothe clinic. A big puddle separates them.MAXI'd throw my cape down, but I'mall out of dry capes.He sloshes through the water to them, wiping his muddy

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hands on his pants. He offers a semi-clean hand toeach in turn.MAXIt's very nice to see you. Bothof you.RAVIWe heard you were still here.Vijay wanted to send some things.(CONTINUED)119.CONTINUED:She indicates the car, which is packed with dry foodand such.MAXShall we unload the car?RAVIYes, yes, by all means.Max whistles, indicates the car. People come and startunloading it, Ravi showing the way, leaving Max andManubai alone a moment, Aloka flicking her eyes at thetwo of them.MANUBAII'm surprised. I really didn'tthink you'd stick it out.MAXPeople grow older; sometimes theyeven grow up.He smiles a sweet smile at her. She smiles back at him.EXT. MUD BANK - WIDE SHOT - DAYAnouar on Said's shoulders. The big mute runs, followedby Hasari and a phalanx of rickshaw pullers: Chomotkar,Rassoul, Ramatullah-Joan, Aloka, Manooj, several othersin the rickshaws, Max and Sunil, each with his doctor bag-- all of them running in silhouette along the embankmentin the rain.ARISTOTLE JOHNWhere can we take them? We can'ttake them back to the clinic. Noone will put up with it.SALADDINWe can't let them drown, can we?Eh, Max Daddah?EXT. LEPER COLONY - DAYThe leper colony is submerged. The parents have puttheir children on the roofs and the relatively ablebodiedlepers are piling charpoys one on top of anotherto protect the sick and the infirm. Meeta and her baby

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are on a roof. The mud bank is too slippery to get therickshaws down and back up.HASARIIt's too deep!(CONTINUED)120.CONTINUED:A beat.EXT. LEPER COLONY - PAIR MUDDY, PARTIAL HANDS - SAMEDAY - SOME MINUTES LATERA leper clings to a rope as several of the human horsespull him and others up the mud bank.ANOTHER ANGLEMax, Hasari, Rassoul, and Chomotkar up to their necksin water; Hasari and Rassoul have a door on theirshoulders; on top of the door, a sick leper woman.Max is lifting one child, then another onto the door.The two pullers make their way slowly toward the mudbank.ON MUD BANKAloka, Joan, helping lepers into rickshaw.MEETAAnouar!ANOUARMax Daddah!ON MEETA AND BABYThe hut starts to come apart under them. Max andChomotkar quickly move to the house with another door.MAXWe're here! We're here!Chomotkar holds the door up as Meeta holds the babyout in the direction of Max's voice. Max catches thebaby as the house slips down, then grabs Meeta, whoclings to him.EXT. MUD BANK - DAYHasari pulling the lead rickshaw. Anouar on Max'sshoulders, the two of them leading a terrible ensembleversion of "Hound Dog." An air of festivity amonglepers and rescuers.They come to a bridge made of two planks over rushingwater.(CONTINUED)121.CONTINUED:Several rickshaws go across but as Max and Anouar startover, suddenly the ground gives way beneath Max's feet.Anouar falls free; someone grabs him; but a blackish

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stream rushes into Max's mouth and in an instant he'sswept beneath the gurgling filth. The density of thefilth makes his effort to surface ineffective. Itlooks for all the world like he's going to drown.ON OTHERSMax has disappeared. Instinctively, Hasari dives intothe maelstrom. He, too, disappears. After some moments,Hasari surfaces, spitting the filth out of his mouth.He dives again, comes up somewhere else. Dives a thirdtime. Is down. Is down. Is down. Then suddenlybursts out of the filth, dragging the unconscious formof Max Loeb into the air. More people have gathered.Cries of:OTHERSIt's the doctor. Save Doctor BigBrother!Aloka passes a baby to someone and helps Hasari pushMax up onto the bank. But now Hasari doesn't knowwhat to do and turns to his wife.Aloka quickly clears Max's mouth and begins to administermouth-to-mouth resuscitation. She blows, shebreathes; she blows, she breathes. People crowd in.Aloka blows, she breathes. It seems, though, that byhis stillness and by the looks on people's faces thatMax is dead. Yet, more determined still, Aloka goeson; blows, breathes...CLOSE ON ALOKA AND MAXAnd now Max gags, his body erupts in spasm, and heexplodes a stream of black liquid out of his lungs.Aloka supports his forehead as Max retches again andthen comes still. A beat.INT. CLASSROOM - NIGHTWe PAN ACROSS members of our group -- lepers andnormals -- passing bowls of rice in a simple communalmeal, Singing a religious song quietly. On the floorin the b.g., Anouar is writing something on a slightlydamp stretch of cloth with a child's crayon. Saidtakes the cloth and tacks it to the wall. What Anouarhas written is this, "All that is not given is lost."Everyone in the room stares at the words.122.INT. CLINIC - MAX'S ROOM - NIGHTMax opens his eyes to find Joan, Hasari, Aloka, and thechildren keeping a vigil.MAXOh, Jesus, the guy went to sleepwhen he was supposed to be working?

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I gotta get up --He tries to get up. Joan pushes him back down.JOANSshh, sshh, sshh! No heroics,junior. Lay back. You're allright.MAXAll right.(a distant laugh)Yeah, I am, I'm all right.He is a little delirious. The boys come close, kneelat his side, instinctively reach out to him.MAXWant you guys to know something.About me. Wanted to be theworld's greatest heart surgeon,just one better than my dad. Justone. First time I'm the leadsurgeon on a case, the main guy, Ichoke. Froze. The chief made mestep aside. My teacher. Had totake over for me. Went intoradiology. Photography. Had tohave somethin' easy. No pressure.Wasn't too nuts about myself.Quit.Hasari reaches out and touches Max, telling him with atouch that it's all right. He stares up through blearyeyes at all of them with utterly open love. Amritaholds out a small gift to him: It's a banana leaf,holding a small scoop of rice and surrounded by littledecorative leaves.MAXYou people... You...(a beat)I love you guys.EXT. RAM'S HUT - TWO MONTHS LATER - DAYA group gathered on a dry, sunny afternoon, peering intothe hut. We FOCUS on the growing flower in the teacaddy in the window and then go THROUGH the window into:123.INT. PALS' ROOM - DAYHasari, Max (dressed quite India), the local Hara Giri,Mr. Ghosh and the four Ghosh uncles crammed into thetiny room. Members of our group jam the doorway,spectating. The air is close.HASARI

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I can offer no more than I'veoffered! No more! All right,I'll add two dhotis, two vests,and a punjabi. But that's all.Mr. Ghosh lights up a bidi, looks at his brothers,wrinkles his brows at Hasari.MR. GHOSHThat's all? Did he say that'sall?HASARIMy daughter's qualities will makeup for what is lacking.SUBASH'S FATHERWell, it won't do! I am firm inrequiring for my exceptional sonthe bicycle, 1000 repees... andone ounce of gold.HASARIThat's robbery! The child of arajah might be worth that, andI'm not even sure of that!Impossible!We linger on Shambu a moment.INT. ST. PIUS SCHOOL - HEADMISTRESSES' OFFICE - DAYSister Cecilia, in full habit, looks over a sheaf oftest scores.Then she peers up at...ANOTHER ANGLEManooj, seated between Hasari and Max.SISTER CECILIAWell, indeed I think Sister Joanis right -- we've got a prospecthere. We'll start you off with afew classes; if that works out,we'll make a proper student of you.(CONTINUED)124.CONTINUED:Hasari can't believe his ears. Manooj sits frozen. Maxgrins.EXT. NARROW LANE - NEAR CITY OF JOY - DAYAmrita, Subash, and Shambu heading home from the workshop.Shambu's cast is gone. Subash flirts withAmrita. They see Hasari, Max, and Manooj coming towardthem. Manooj runs to them, shouting that he's going tothe school; Amrita, Subash, Shambu congratulate him...HASARI AND MAX

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Suddenly the rickshaw wheels jam. They turn to findtwo men, one of whom has slammed a stick into Hasari'sspokes. Retribution, it would seem, has arrived.The kids stop, huddle instinctively together in fear.Our policeman disappears into a doorway as shuttersclose up and down this little street. There are thugsat both ends. No one else is visible on the street.The two men stare at Hasari a moment, smiling. Thenone gets into the rickshaw, crosses his legs as if hemight want transport. But now he whips out a narrowbladed knife, and still staring at Hasari, begins toslice up the newly covered seats of the rickshaw. Maxlooks around, trying to cool things.MAXHey, come on, don't do this.VOICEWell, what's the problem here?They turn, Ashoka. Behind him, the Goonda.ASHOKAYou've become very brave of late,haven't you?MAXDon't do this.ASHOKAOh, I do what I please. You see,my father's dead, I'm in chargenow. So you will get off mystreets, you will leave mycountry, and that clinic andschool will close.(CONTINUED)125.CONTINUED:MAXWhy?ASHOKAMy father was weak. He let youand your European friend givethese little people ideas. It'sover.MAXYou can't do this!He takes no more than a step at Ashoka, a hand coming up,when he's hit hard from behind. Goes to his knees.MAXJesus Christ.His hand comes away from the back of his head with blood.

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He tries to rise and is hit again.HASARI(to the kids)Get back! Stay back!ASHOKANo, no, come forward. Come.Ashoka glides toward the petrified Amrita. The Goondaremains unmoving, watchful. Ashoka puts out his handwith its rings, and strokes Amrita's cheek.ASHOKAWhat a little woman already, hey?HASARIPlease, don't touch her, Babu.ASHOKAWhat did you say?HASARII said, Please, don't touch her.Hasari glances over his shoulder, his eyes bouncing offthe Goonda's impassive face. Now, the knife comes out ofAshoka's pocket, snaps open, glints in the light.ASHOKAShe's going to give someone a lotof enjoyment. Yes.(CONTINUED)126.CONTINUED:There's a moment of unbearable tension as everyone, includingthe Goonda, realizes this man is out of control.ASHOKA(to the Goonda)He said 'please' didn't he?'Please, don't touch her?'The Goonda stares at Ashoka... And now Ashoka reaches outand we FOLLOW CLOSE on his hand as it moves ever soslowly through space to settle on Amrita's breast.And now Hasari explodes. He hits Ashoka. A hard punchto the chest. Ashoka stumbles and falls to one knee.The Two Thugs make a move to come to his rescue... but acurious thing stops them: the Goonda's arm, outstretchedacross their path, his eyes alerting them not to proceed.Max lurches to his feet unsteadily.ASHOKABhose, help me!Hasari unloads a punch into Ashoka's face; Ashoka's nosepours blood; he starts to whimper. He clutches Hasarihard to him. Holds him. Hasari struggles, slams his

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palm into Ashoka's chin, sending Ashoka to the ground,sending the knife skidding across the ground. Hasarigrabs the knife, straddles Ashoka, about to kill. But hecan't do it.HASARILife is hard enough. No more.Leave us alone.Hasari backs off, leans against a wall, stares down atAshoka, his hands in tight against his body.Manooj and Shambu stare at their father in awe.Shambu sees something on the ground where the first blowwas delivered to Ashoka's chest. Everyone has movedslightly to one side. He bends and closes his fistaround something.The Goonda steps between Ashoka and Max and Hasari.GOONDAYou won't be bothered again.A look from the Goonda and the Thugs vanish, leavingAshoka cowering in a doorway on his knees.(CONTINUED)127.CONTINUED:Shutters start to open, people begin to appear again indoorways and windows.Fearing for his life, Ashoka suddenly bolts.Max is fixed on Hasari. He lets up a scream of exultation,his hand going out for a "five" from Hasari. Thekids charge toward Hasari.Then everyone freezes.Hasari lists to his right side and blood starts to pourfrom the knife wound in his abdomen under his pressingarm.EXT. MAX'S ROOM - UPSTAIRS BALCONY - NIGHTFrom here we can see Hasari on Max's cot under "The Raftof the Medusa" in the little room overlooking the street.Out here, the two doctors are alone.MAXWhy don't you go on home. I'llstay with him.Sunil nods. Max grips Sunil's hand strongly. Sunil goesdown the steps. Max moves to Hasari's bedside. Hewatches Hasari breathing. He looks up at "The Raft ofthe Medusa."INT. MAX'S ROOM - NIGHT (SEVERAL HOURS LATER)A thin stream of dawn light coming through the halfclosedshutters.FROM HERE - THE BALCONY

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Through the open door, we can just see Joan, prayingquietly. Close around her, Anouar, Meeta, Surya, Margareta,Poomina...THE ROOMBeneath "The Raft of the Medusa," Hasari Pal speaks tohis family and Max, Aloka sitting close to the bed, theChildren on the bed beside their father, and Max standingclose.(CONTINUED)128.CONTINUED:HASARIA man's journey to the end of hisobligations is a very long road.And you have to remember that youcan never give up. We pray thatlife will bless us, that we willbe kings, with possessions andmoney that we can rule over allaround us. But it's a mist; theonly thing that makes it possibleto endure life is our love, onefor the other.A beat, the family and Max tightly bound together. Andnow we hear the dim sounds of RICKSHAW BELLS.HASARII was dreaming the sound ofrickshaw bells, and now I hearthem.Max opens the windows. Manooj helps his father sit up.COURTYARD - THEIR POVOutside, there are rickshaw pullers filling the courtyardand spilling out into the street. When the window opens,all the Pullers start ringing their bells and the room isfull of their music.HASARIAre they here for me?Unquestionably, they are.HASARIA city so big. When we arrived,we didn't have a place to live, afriend.He smiles.OUTSIDEThe many hands with their ringing bells.CLOSE ON WINDOWThe tiny figure of Shambu joins Max in the window. Max

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bends close.(CONTINUED)129.CONTINUED:SHAMBU(whispering)Is my father going to die?Max makes the same sound he made in the ashram at thebeginning of the movie, though this sound of dismissaldifferent.MAXGet serious.INT. RAM'S HUT - HASARI'S FACE - DAYHasari mirrors Max's expression of dismissal!HASARIGet serious! I've agreed to thebicycle, I've agreed to the 1000rupees! I can go no further. Ihave nothing more to give!OUTSIDE THE HUTEveryone crowded around the door. From within, we DIMLYHEAR the negotiations continue. Max approaches from theclinic. Shambu slips down the steps from above as...MAXHow's it going?RAMAll that stands between them nowis the ounce of gold. MaxDaddah, Joan Di -- is she a goodreader?MAXWhat do you mean?RAMShe read this letter to me.( he shows Max)But I think she must have read itwrong. She said my wife writesthat irrigation has come to ourvillage.MAXBut that's great.(CONTINUED)130.CONTINUED:RAMBut it means I should go home tomy wife.

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MAXI thought that's why we've beenwriting all these letters.RAMYes, of course, I love her fromhere, yes; but, what if I go homeand find I don't love her fromthere.Shambu takes him by the hand and tugs him quickly to theedge of the tea shop. The little boy indicates Maxshould bend close. Max leans down.SHAMBUDaddy needs gold, right?Max nods. And Shambu brings his fist up from under thetable.CLOSE ON SHAMBU'S HANDHe opens his hand to disclose what he scooped off theground during the fight: Max's necklace and Hebrewletter.SHAMBUDo you think this is pretend goldor real?MAX AND SHAMBUMax stares at the little boy's hopeful face.INT. PAL'S ROOM - FLOWERWe see the fully blossomed flower in the tea caddy andthen Hasari's fingers come INTO THE FRAME. He carefullysnips the flower free of its stalk.ANOTHER ANGLEAmrita is dressed in the beautiful sari her father boughther. Father and daughter are alone. He hands her theflower and adjusts her veil tenderly.(CONTINUED)131.CONTINUED:HASARIYou never did belong to me. Youwere only lent to me by God untilyou marry and continue the wheelof life.Amrita stares at her loving father and slowly her armscome up around his neck, the flower against his curvedback. Tears fill Hasari's eyes, but a smile graces hislips.EXT. SQUARE - DAY - EARLY EVENINGThe procession to the courtyard begins when a BRASS BANDstrikes up, accompanied by singing and shouting. Tiny

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lights have been strung over the street. We see Max andManubai. Margareta and a group of children. Joan withPoomina. Anour, Meeta, Said. Everyone who's become partof the family is present.EXT. CLINIC COURTYARD - DAY (DUSK)The procession arrives and enters. Smoke from the chulas.Light from a half dozen lamps.Subash and his procession make their entrance. A ritualveil is fixed to Subash's face. The Pujari waves forHasari to come to his place. Hasari turns to Max.HASARII would be pleased if you wouldstand with me in the place ofhonor to the right of my daughter.Deeply touched, Max nods... and the two men step forward...as Subash is motioned forward by the Pujari.Subash sits beside Amrita.THE CEREMONYA flame. The shyness of bride and groom as the ceremonyproceeds with the winding of the red thread. Hasarilooks on with unspeakable pride, Max beside him. We seethe faces of all our family again: Aloka, Manooj andShambu, Joan, Poomina, Surya, Selima, Aristotle John,etc.132.THE WHEELTurning. As Amrita and Subash, joined by the thread,circle the flame... as we PULL BACK AND UP. Now we seethe clinic and school and the surrounding area, thealleys full of people and activity. As we continue toPULL BACK, we see the entirety of the City of Joy andthen beyond -- Calcutta, its teeming streets -- life continuingas the sun sets against an infinite sky and weROLL END CREDITS.FADE OUT.THE END