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CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDING
A. The Description of Data
In this chapter, the writer would like to present result the
description of data collection of the research. Data of the research
was taken from observation and the students’ test result. These
observations carried out to know the students’ error of writing in
the descriptive text.
The population of this study was taken from a first grade
of SMAN 1 Baros consist of 20 students as participant. In
addition, the writer also conducted an interview to the students
consist 5 students and English teacher to get more details data.
1. The Result of Data Test
To know the result of the test of students’,
the writer made a table and a graphic of students’
error in descriptive text writing that is taken from the
data analysis.
In the table bellow is the recapitulation of
students’ error classified on the classification of error,
which are made by students’.
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Table 4.1 :
The Recapitulation of students’ Error
No
.
Students
Initial
Classification of Error Total
Error Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 Ac 1 3 4
2 Am 4 4 4 3 15
3 AK 1 3 2 6
4 AR 5 2 3 10
5 DS 1 8 5 14
6 EK 1 4 1 6
7 Fi 1 4 5
8 FM 2 3 1 2 8
9 It 2 1 3
10 Ju 2 6 1 9
11 LS 1 2 6 1 10
12 Mi 2 3 4 1 10
13 Nu 1 1 2 1 5
14 NA 3 2 3 8
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Based on the table data of recapitulation
students’ error on descriptive text writing above, the
writer concluded that the score of error was made by
all of students’ at first grade of SMAN 1 Baros is so
high. The classification of error are four aspects, they
are; Omission, Addition, Selection, and Ordering. The
following score of error obtained by each aspect
Omission: 36 (22,08 %), Addition: 38 (23,31 %),
Selection: 72 (44,71 %), and Ordering: 17 (10,42 %).
15 NK 3 2 1 6
16 PR 1 2 7 1 11
17 RN 1 1 4 1 7
18 SH 1 1 3 1 6
19 SN 3 2 3 8
20 VS 3 3 5 1 12
Total 36 38 72 17 163
Percentage 22,08 % 23,31 % 44,17 % 10,42 % 100 %
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2. Interview
In this case, the writer conducted the
interview to the students consist of 5 students and
English teachers’. From the result of the students’
interview and English teachers’, the writer could
describe and identify the perception of students’ and
teacher on error of descriptive text writing.
a. The English Teachers’ Interview
In the English teachers’
interview, the writer submitted some of
questions which related to the research. In
the stage, the writer would explain the
result of interview which tended to
teachers’ perception of students’ on error
of descriptive text writing.
From all the questions that
purposed to the teacher, the writer
concluded that according to the teacher’s
opinion that the students’ still do not
understand fully formation of writing. In
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fact they are confused in understanding on
presenting words to sentences, especially
still lack of vocabulary. So that when
studying about writing material many
error on writing of descriptive text made
by students’.
b. The Students Interview
In the students’ interview, the
writer interview of students’ consist 5
students’ at first grade to get information
about the students’ of error on descriptive
text writing. The writer will conclude
from all of the answers obtained from the
students’.
From 5 of students’, only 2
students’ who feel happy to learn English,
3 others feeling less to learn it, and most
all of the students’ still find it difficult to
understand the material about writing and
the reason was almost the same, because
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they lack of the vocabulary and confused
in presenting words on writing, they
assumed that memorize the vocabulary is
so difficult, and also to select the word in
present sequence sententce, which include
formation writing.
B. The Analysis of Data
The score of the test by counting on percentage
according to the formula that processing technique the formula of
data, the writer uses is descriptive analysis technique
(percentage), with the percentage from the frequency of
information and divided with number of cases.
1. Classification of Error and Their Reconstruction
in the bellow, the writer decsribed each
students’ error in the writing text, classified them into
four aspects, namely the omission, addition, selection,
and ordering, and the correction of writing
composition students’. The writer divides each table
into three column: the first column consist of
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students’ original writing, and the second column is
the reconstruction of the writing made by the writer
based on writing text rules, and the third column is
the score how many total students’ error hade made
every aspects.
1. Name : Acih
Descriptive Text
Ir. H. Joko Widodo was born on 21 June 1961 in the Surakarta.
He is populer with name Jokowi, he were someone president
Indonesia.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is have
skin is brown, and his face is oval.
He was children they are kaesang pangarep, kahiyang ayu, and
Gibran Rakabuming Raka. He is very respected people cause Attitude
Familiar, polite, and appaise another so that this moment, he is Finished
leader state.
Reconstruction
Ir. H. Joko Widodo was born on 21 June 1961 in the Surakarta.
He is populer with name Jokowi, he is president of Indonesia.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. His skin is
brown, and his face is oval.
He has children they are kaesang pangarep, kahiyang ayu, and
Gibran Rakabuming Raka. He is very respected people cause Attitude
Familiar, polite, and appaise another so that this moment, he is Finished
leader state.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 3
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2. Name : Amja
Descriptive Text
His name Ir H. Joko widodo or the more famili argreeted Jokowi
and bornin Surakarta, Central Java 21 June 1961 age 54 years was
the 7th
president of Indonesia who toox office on October 20. 2014.
He was 3 children, they are Kaesang pangarep, Kahyang ayu, and
Gibran rakabuming raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair an body medium he is
have skin is born and his face .
After conducting task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi
challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia 2014. Luck him
Jokowi is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is realy
populist.
Reconstruction
His name Ir H. Joko widodo or more famili argreeted Jokowi and
born in Surakarta, Central Java 21 June 1961, his age 54 years. He was
the 7th
president of Indonesia who toox office on October 20. 2014.
He has 3 children, they are Kaesang pangarep, Kahyang ayu, and Gibran
rakabuming raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair an body medium he has
skin is brown and his face oval.
After conducting task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi
challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia 2014. Jokowi is very
friendly although he is the highest officer he is realy populer.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
4 4 4 3
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3. Name : Anisa Khopipah
Descriptive Text
He is the president of RI to-7, and he was often in a more
intimate greetings Jokowi president. He served as president in 2014 in
elections PDI-P political party headed by former president Megawati
Soekarno Putri daughter RI to 4 During the 2014 Jokowi shock elected
president of Indonesia. And was represented by vice president Jusuf
Kall.
He is good man, honest, generous and thoughtful. He was liked
and respected by the community. his clever man, he has tall body, short
hair, oval face, he had a thin body, he was smiling, pointed nose he also
has a mole on the cheek, he has brown skin.
Reconstruction
He is the 7th
president of RI, and he was often in a more intimate
greetings Jokowi president. He elected as president in 2014 in elections
PDI-P political party headed by former the 4th
president Megawati
Soekarno Putri RI, During the 2014 Jokowi shock elected president of
Indonesia. And was represented by vice president Jusuf Kall.
He is good man, honest, generous and thoughtful. He was liked
and respected by the community. his clever man, he has tall body, short
hair, oval face, he has a thin body, he was smiling, pointed nose he also
has a mole on the cheek, he has brown skin.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 3 2
50
4. Name : Anisya Ramadhinasari
Descriptive Text
Ir. Jokowidodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
presiden of Indonesia who come to office since october 20. 2014. He
was cleated diong with vice presiden elektion 2014. He born June
21, 1961 (54 year old) Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo
(M.1986).
The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown, and body
thin. He three children.
Reconstruction
Ir. Jokowidodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who come to office since october 20. 2014. He
was elected with vice president election 2014. He was born June 21,
1961 (54 year old) Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo
(M.1986).
He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body
thin. He has three children.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
5 2 3
51
5. Name : Dedi Sephadi
Descriptive Text
His full name is Ir. Joko Widodo, hi was born in Sura karta 21
June 1961, he was 3 chil dren. They are, Kane sans Paragraph, Ka
hiyang Ayu, and Gibran Raka buming Raka.
Jokowi is very friendly al though , he is the hig hest ofiler, he
is really popular.
Reconstruction
His full name is Ir. Joko Widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961, he has 3 children. They are, Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang
Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.
Jokowi is very friendly although he is the highest officer, he is
really popular.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 8 5
52
6. Name : Egatama K
Descriptive Text
Ir. H. Joko widodo or familiarly called Jokowi is a Indonesian 7th
President. He have 3 children and he wife names Iriana widodo. He
Born in Surakarta June 1961.
Jokowi have a body that tall and thin, he have short black hair,
thick eyebrows and brow eyes and he has a mole on his right cheek.
He has a characteristic always wear batik clothes and he was also
friendly, nice, smiling and also a wise leader. That’s why he was elected
president of Indonesia.
Reconstruction
Ir. H. Joko widodo or familiarly called Jokowi is a Indonesian 7th
President. He has 3 children and his wife names Iriana widodo. He was
Born in Surakarta June 1961.
Jokowi has a body that tall and thin, he has short black hair, thick
eyebrows and brow eyes and he has a mole on his right cheek.
He has a characteristic always wear batik clothes and he was
friendly, nice, smiling and a wise leader. That’s why he was elected
president of Indonesia.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 4 1
53
7. Name : Fitriawati
Descriptive Text
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961. He was 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang
ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is
have skin is born and his face .
After conducting a task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi
challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia. Lucky him Jokowi
is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is really populist.
Reconstruction
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961. He has 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang ayu,
and Gibran Rakabuming raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. His
skin is brown and his face oval.
After conducting a task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi
challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia. Lucky him Jokowi
is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is really popular.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 4
54
8. Name : Fitri Meliyani
Descriptive Text
His full name Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961, he work to offce as President RI. He has 3 children, he is
Kaesan, Kahiyang, and Ayu.
He is the president RI to 7 and before he is th guverment of
capital city of Indonesia, Jakarta.
He is nice, generous, th oughtful, he looks friendly becayse he
often keeps smile. He has tall body, he has brown skin, he has slim
body, he has pointed no se, he has oval face and short hair.
Reconstruction
His full name Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961, he work to office as President RI. He has 3 children, they
are Kaesan, Kahiyang, and Ayu.
He is the 7th
president RI and before he is the governor of
capital city of Indonesia.
He is nice, generous, thoughtful, he looks friendly becayse he
often keeps smile. He has tall body, he has brown skin, he has slim
body, he has pointed nose, he has oval face and short hair.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
2 3 1 2
55
9. Name : Ita
Descriptive Text
President of Indonesia today is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he born in
surakarta, 21 June 1961. He has 3 children. They are Kaesang pangarep,
Kahiyang Ayu, and Gibran Rakabumi.
Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair and tall body. He
look friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him.
Jokowi is an Indonesian politican. He is the governor of capital
city of Indonesia jakarta 2012-2017. His political career begins since
he joined Indonesian democratis party – struggle (PDI-P).
Reconstruction
President of Indonesia is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in
surakarta, 21 June 1961. He has 3 children. They are Kaesang pangarep,
Kahiyang Ayu, and Gibran Rakabumi.
Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair and tall body. He
look friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him.
Jokowi is an Indonesian politican. He is the governor of capital
city of Indonesia jakarta in 2012-2017. His political career begins since
he joined Indonesian democratis party – struggle (PDI-P).
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
2 1
56
10. Name : Juheriah
Descriptive Text
Nama Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in surakarta. June 21 1961.
Better known by the nickname Jokowi.
Producers and he is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the
2000-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia
with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two brothers and one sister.
The name is: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang ayu.
Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has colour
brown skin. And he has pointed nose.
Reconstruction
Nama Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in surakarta. June 21 1961.
Better know by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2000-2015 elected
twice. then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two boys and one daughter.
Their name are: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang
ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has brown
skin. And he has pointed nose.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
2 6 1
57
11. Name : Liah Sari
Descriptive Text
Name Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21
1961, better known by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.
Producers and he is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the
2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia
with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Two
brothers and one sister, the name is they are Kaesang Pangarep,
Gibran Raka Buming and Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and
he has short black hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Reconstruction
Name Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21
1961, better known by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected
twice. then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Two boys
and one daughter, their name are Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran Raka
Buming and Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short
black hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 2 6 1
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12. Name : Milawati
Descriptive Text
Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21 1961
better know by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.
Producers. He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-
2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia with his
deputy Jusuf Kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Theyare
Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang Ayu, Gibran Rakabuming. He hobby
rock music lovers education. Jokowi to be widely compared, he has tall
body and sher hair, he has colour brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Reconstruction
Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21 1961
better known by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected
twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are
Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang Ayu, Gibran Rakabuming. He has hobby
rock music lovers education. Jokowi to be widely compared, he has tall
body and short hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
2 3 4 1
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13. Name : Nurpadilah
Descriptive Text
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961. He was 3 chil dren they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang
Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is
have skin born and his face .
Reconstruction
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21
June 1961. He was 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang
Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.
He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He
has skin brown and his face oval.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 1 2 1
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14. Name : Nurul Alfani
Descriptive Text
Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th
2014. He
was cleated diong with vice president elektion 2014. He born June
21st, 1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo
(M. 1986).
The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown, and body
thin. He three children.
Reconstruction
Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th
2014. He
was elected with vice president election 2014. He was born June 21st,
1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo (M.
1986).
He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body
thin. He has three children.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
3 2 3
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15. Name : Neneng Khopipah
Descriptive Text
Ir. H. Joko widodo or more familiarly called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who came to office since ocktober 20. 2014. He
was elected diong with vice president election 2014. He born June 21,
1961 in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo, current position
president of Indonesia since 2017 and education university of gadjah
mada. And he has 3 children is Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran Rakabuming
Raka, Kahiyang Ayu.
Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair, smart and tall body.
He looks friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him,
and jokowi is an Indonesia politican.
Reconstruction
Ir. H. Joko widodo or more familiarly called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who came to office since ocktober 20. 2014. He
was elected diong with vice president election 2014. He was born June
21, 1961 in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo, current
position president of Indonesia since 2017 and education university of
gadjah mada. And he has 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran
Rakabuming Raka, Kahiyang Ayu.
Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair, smart and tall body.
He looks friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him,
and jokowi is an Indonesia politican.
Classification of Error
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3 2 1
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16. Name : Pipih Ropiah
Descriptive Text
The name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta. June
21 1961. Better know by the nickname Jokowi, are furniture.
Producers and he is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the
2000-2015 term of office twice. Later became President of Indonesia
with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two brothers and one sister.
The name is: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang ayu.
Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has colour
brown skin. And he has pointed nose.
Reconstruction
The name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta. June
21 1961. Better known by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2000-2015 elected
twice. Then became President of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two boys and one daugthter.
Their name are: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang
ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has brown
skin. And he has pointed nose.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
1 2 7 1
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17. Name : Riski N.
Descriptive Text
Name Ir H Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta, June 21
1961 better known by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.
Producers and He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the
2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia
with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are
Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang ayu and Gibran raka buming raka. Jokowi
begin to be widely compared in the media to U.S president Barack
Obama.
He has hobby rock music lovers Educational. He has tall body and he
has black short hair.
Reconstruction
Name Ir H Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta, June 21
1961 better known by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2005-2015 elected
twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.
His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are Kaesang
pangarep, Kahiyang ayu and Gibran raka buming raka. Jokowi begin to
be widely compared in the media to U.S president Barack Obama.
His hobby is rock music lovers Educational. He has tall body and
he has black short hair.
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1 1 4 1
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18. Name : Siti Hadijah
Descriptive Text
Mr. Jokowi have the full name of which is Ir. H. Jokowi, and any
person called Jokowi. Jokowi born in Surakarta Central Java on
Wednesday, 21 June 1961 classified Gemini, mr Jokowi also Has great
Hobby is reading and Traveling and his wife named ny. Hj Iriana
Jokowi. Mr Jokowi Has dark brown skin or dark complexion and Has
Straight nose and a sweet smile, mr Jokowi also Has Straight black hair
Small wi Felt the bitterness of his home when displaced.
Tenement at the same place his father’s timber business in the area
Cinderejo Lor, evicted and be the center of travel services. The mother
said that Jokowi is a Figurate Little quiet, but sociable. Jokowi as a
person who Always Succumb to avoid a fight the attitude inherited from
his Parents who Always taught the meaning of sincere and to be
responsible. on 24 october 2014 a small figure. known as the style of
punk it is appointed to be the father of the president of the Republic of
Indonesia where the number of people who celebrate the Appoinment of
the president to 7 is not just ordinary people who come celebrate but
the Artist also even celebrated the concert in Jakarta monas.
Reconstruction
Mr. Jokowi has the full name of which is Ir. H. Jokowi, and any
person called Jokowi. Jokowi was born in Surakarta Central Java on
Wednesday, 21 June 1961 classified Gemini, mr Jokowi also Has great
Hobby is reading and Traveling and his wife name ny. Hj Iriana Jokowi.
Mr Jokowi Has dark brown skin or dark complexion and Has Straight
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nose and a sweet smile, mr Jokowi also Has Straight black hair
Small we Felt the bitterness of his home when displaced.
Tenement at the same place his father’s timber business in the area
Cinderejo Lor, evicted and be the center of travel services. The mother
said that Jokowi is a Figurate Little quiet, but sociable. Jokowi as a
person who Always Succumb to avoid a fight the attitude inherited from
his Parents who Always taught the meaning of sincere and to be
responsible. on 24 october 2014 a small figure. known as the style of
punk it is appointed to be the father of the president of the Republic of
Indonesia where the number of people who celebrate the Appoinment of
the 7th
president is not just ordinary people who come celebrate but the
Artist also even celebrated the concert in Jakarta monas.
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1 1 3 1
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19. Name : Siti Nabilah
Descriptive Text
Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th
2014. He
was cleated diong with vice president elektion 2014. He born June
21st, 1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo
(M. 1986).
The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown and body
thin. He three children.
Reconstruction
Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th
president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th
2014. He
was elected with vice president election in 2014. He was born June 21st,
1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo (M.
1986).
He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body
thin. He has three children.
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3 2 3 2
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20. Name : Vivi Suminar
Descriptive Text
His the name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta,
June 21st 1961. Better know by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.
Producers and he is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the
2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia
with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 children, two brothers and one sister.
The name is Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming raka and Kahiyang
Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has
brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Reconstruction
His name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta, June
21st 1961. Better known by the nickname Jokowi.
He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected
twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.
Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 children, two boys and one daughter.
Their name are Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming raka and
Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair,
he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.
Classification of Error
Omission Addition Selection Ordering
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2. Graphic of Students’ Error
Figure 4.1 : Graphic of Students’ Error
Based on graphic is clearly that the difference in
the number of error made by the students’. The level of
errors made by students’ in the Selection aspect is very high
compared to others, especially when compared to the
Ordering, the level difference errors is so far, while the
Addition and also Omission it same in the centre. In fact,
the level of difficulties of the most difficult for students’ is
on aspect selection, because of difficulties still lack of the
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vocabulary and confused selecting words in present
sequence sentence, include formation on writing.
3. Diagram Percentage Classification of Error
Figure 4.2 :
Diagram Percentage Classification of Error
Based on diagram, the first highest error rate
occurred on Selection reach to 44,71% and be rounded to
45%, and the second highest error rate is Addition reach to
23,31% and be rounded to 23%, the third highest error rate
is Omission reach to 22,08% and be rounded to 22%, and
the last error rate is Ordering and be rounded to 10,42% but
22%
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in fact when it rounded, the percentage is only difference
1% and the percentage of ordering is 10%.
C. The Analysis of Classification of Error and Causes
After identifying each students’ error, the writer would
like to analyse the students’ error in their writing based on their
classification of error, they are:
1. Omission
Error of Omission are characterized by the
absence of an item that must appear in well-formed
utterence although any morpheme any morpheme or
word in sentence is potencial candidate for omission.
In this case, there were 36 errors (22,08 %).
2. Addition
Error of Addition is a type of error which
must not appear in a well-formed uttereance. Students
feel confused with formulas of tenses, and then
sometimes when they construct passive voice to
active voice sentence they add the word that which
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must not apppear. In this case, there were 38 errors
(23,31 %).
3. Selection
Error of Selection are characterized by the
use of the wrong form of the morpheme. Students still
can not distiguish which are reguler verb and
irreguler, which are present tense and past tense, and
which are subject and object. In this case, there were
72 errors (44,71 %).
4. Ordering
Error of Ordering is incorrect placement of a
morpheme or group. Sometimes, students made
mistakes in drafting the word or a group of word that
wherease to draft the word and group of word in
English and Indonesia is different. In this case, there
were 17 errors (10,42 %).