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41 CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDING A. The Description of Data In this chapter, the writer would like to present result the description of data collection of the research. Data of the research was taken from observation and the students’ test result. These observations carried out to know the students’ error of writing in the descriptive text. The population of this study was taken from a first grade of SMAN 1 Baros consist of 20 students as participant. In addition, the writer also conducted an interview to the students consist 5 students and English teacher to get more details data. 1. The Result of Data Test To know the result of the test of students’, the writer made a table and a graphic of students’ error in descriptive text writing that is taken from the data analysis. In the table bellow is the recapitulation of students’ error classified on the classification of error, which are made by students’.

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CHAPTER IV

RESEARCH FINDING

A. The Description of Data

In this chapter, the writer would like to present result the

description of data collection of the research. Data of the research

was taken from observation and the students’ test result. These

observations carried out to know the students’ error of writing in

the descriptive text.

The population of this study was taken from a first grade

of SMAN 1 Baros consist of 20 students as participant. In

addition, the writer also conducted an interview to the students

consist 5 students and English teacher to get more details data.

1. The Result of Data Test

To know the result of the test of students’,

the writer made a table and a graphic of students’

error in descriptive text writing that is taken from the

data analysis.

In the table bellow is the recapitulation of

students’ error classified on the classification of error,

which are made by students’.

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Table 4.1 :

The Recapitulation of students’ Error

No

.

Students

Initial

Classification of Error Total

Error Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 Ac 1 3 4

2 Am 4 4 4 3 15

3 AK 1 3 2 6

4 AR 5 2 3 10

5 DS 1 8 5 14

6 EK 1 4 1 6

7 Fi 1 4 5

8 FM 2 3 1 2 8

9 It 2 1 3

10 Ju 2 6 1 9

11 LS 1 2 6 1 10

12 Mi 2 3 4 1 10

13 Nu 1 1 2 1 5

14 NA 3 2 3 8

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Based on the table data of recapitulation

students’ error on descriptive text writing above, the

writer concluded that the score of error was made by

all of students’ at first grade of SMAN 1 Baros is so

high. The classification of error are four aspects, they

are; Omission, Addition, Selection, and Ordering. The

following score of error obtained by each aspect

Omission: 36 (22,08 %), Addition: 38 (23,31 %),

Selection: 72 (44,71 %), and Ordering: 17 (10,42 %).

15 NK 3 2 1 6

16 PR 1 2 7 1 11

17 RN 1 1 4 1 7

18 SH 1 1 3 1 6

19 SN 3 2 3 8

20 VS 3 3 5 1 12

Total 36 38 72 17 163

Percentage 22,08 % 23,31 % 44,17 % 10,42 % 100 %

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2. Interview

In this case, the writer conducted the

interview to the students consist of 5 students and

English teachers’. From the result of the students’

interview and English teachers’, the writer could

describe and identify the perception of students’ and

teacher on error of descriptive text writing.

a. The English Teachers’ Interview

In the English teachers’

interview, the writer submitted some of

questions which related to the research. In

the stage, the writer would explain the

result of interview which tended to

teachers’ perception of students’ on error

of descriptive text writing.

From all the questions that

purposed to the teacher, the writer

concluded that according to the teacher’s

opinion that the students’ still do not

understand fully formation of writing. In

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fact they are confused in understanding on

presenting words to sentences, especially

still lack of vocabulary. So that when

studying about writing material many

error on writing of descriptive text made

by students’.

b. The Students Interview

In the students’ interview, the

writer interview of students’ consist 5

students’ at first grade to get information

about the students’ of error on descriptive

text writing. The writer will conclude

from all of the answers obtained from the

students’.

From 5 of students’, only 2

students’ who feel happy to learn English,

3 others feeling less to learn it, and most

all of the students’ still find it difficult to

understand the material about writing and

the reason was almost the same, because

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they lack of the vocabulary and confused

in presenting words on writing, they

assumed that memorize the vocabulary is

so difficult, and also to select the word in

present sequence sententce, which include

formation writing.

B. The Analysis of Data

The score of the test by counting on percentage

according to the formula that processing technique the formula of

data, the writer uses is descriptive analysis technique

(percentage), with the percentage from the frequency of

information and divided with number of cases.

1. Classification of Error and Their Reconstruction

in the bellow, the writer decsribed each

students’ error in the writing text, classified them into

four aspects, namely the omission, addition, selection,

and ordering, and the correction of writing

composition students’. The writer divides each table

into three column: the first column consist of

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students’ original writing, and the second column is

the reconstruction of the writing made by the writer

based on writing text rules, and the third column is

the score how many total students’ error hade made

every aspects.

1. Name : Acih

Descriptive Text

Ir. H. Joko Widodo was born on 21 June 1961 in the Surakarta.

He is populer with name Jokowi, he were someone president

Indonesia.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is have

skin is brown, and his face is oval.

He was children they are kaesang pangarep, kahiyang ayu, and

Gibran Rakabuming Raka. He is very respected people cause Attitude

Familiar, polite, and appaise another so that this moment, he is Finished

leader state.

Reconstruction

Ir. H. Joko Widodo was born on 21 June 1961 in the Surakarta.

He is populer with name Jokowi, he is president of Indonesia.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. His skin is

brown, and his face is oval.

He has children they are kaesang pangarep, kahiyang ayu, and

Gibran Rakabuming Raka. He is very respected people cause Attitude

Familiar, polite, and appaise another so that this moment, he is Finished

leader state.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 3

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2. Name : Amja

Descriptive Text

His name Ir H. Joko widodo or the more famili argreeted Jokowi

and bornin Surakarta, Central Java 21 June 1961 age 54 years was

the 7th

president of Indonesia who toox office on October 20. 2014.

He was 3 children, they are Kaesang pangarep, Kahyang ayu, and

Gibran rakabuming raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair an body medium he is

have skin is born and his face .

After conducting task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi

challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia 2014. Luck him

Jokowi is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is realy

populist.

Reconstruction

His name Ir H. Joko widodo or more famili argreeted Jokowi and

born in Surakarta, Central Java 21 June 1961, his age 54 years. He was

the 7th

president of Indonesia who toox office on October 20. 2014.

He has 3 children, they are Kaesang pangarep, Kahyang ayu, and Gibran

rakabuming raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair an body medium he has

skin is brown and his face oval.

After conducting task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi

challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia 2014. Jokowi is very

friendly although he is the highest officer he is realy populer.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

4 4 4 3

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3. Name : Anisa Khopipah

Descriptive Text

He is the president of RI to-7, and he was often in a more

intimate greetings Jokowi president. He served as president in 2014 in

elections PDI-P political party headed by former president Megawati

Soekarno Putri daughter RI to 4 During the 2014 Jokowi shock elected

president of Indonesia. And was represented by vice president Jusuf

Kall.

He is good man, honest, generous and thoughtful. He was liked

and respected by the community. his clever man, he has tall body, short

hair, oval face, he had a thin body, he was smiling, pointed nose he also

has a mole on the cheek, he has brown skin.

Reconstruction

He is the 7th

president of RI, and he was often in a more intimate

greetings Jokowi president. He elected as president in 2014 in elections

PDI-P political party headed by former the 4th

president Megawati

Soekarno Putri RI, During the 2014 Jokowi shock elected president of

Indonesia. And was represented by vice president Jusuf Kall.

He is good man, honest, generous and thoughtful. He was liked

and respected by the community. his clever man, he has tall body, short

hair, oval face, he has a thin body, he was smiling, pointed nose he also

has a mole on the cheek, he has brown skin.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 3 2

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4. Name : Anisya Ramadhinasari

Descriptive Text

Ir. Jokowidodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

presiden of Indonesia who come to office since october 20. 2014. He

was cleated diong with vice presiden elektion 2014. He born June

21, 1961 (54 year old) Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo

(M.1986).

The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown, and body

thin. He three children.

Reconstruction

Ir. Jokowidodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who come to office since october 20. 2014. He

was elected with vice president election 2014. He was born June 21,

1961 (54 year old) Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo

(M.1986).

He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body

thin. He has three children.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

5 2 3

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5. Name : Dedi Sephadi

Descriptive Text

His full name is Ir. Joko Widodo, hi was born in Sura karta 21

June 1961, he was 3 chil dren. They are, Kane sans Paragraph, Ka

hiyang Ayu, and Gibran Raka buming Raka.

Jokowi is very friendly al though , he is the hig hest ofiler, he

is really popular.

Reconstruction

His full name is Ir. Joko Widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961, he has 3 children. They are, Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang

Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.

Jokowi is very friendly although he is the highest officer, he is

really popular.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 8 5

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6. Name : Egatama K

Descriptive Text

Ir. H. Joko widodo or familiarly called Jokowi is a Indonesian 7th

President. He have 3 children and he wife names Iriana widodo. He

Born in Surakarta June 1961.

Jokowi have a body that tall and thin, he have short black hair,

thick eyebrows and brow eyes and he has a mole on his right cheek.

He has a characteristic always wear batik clothes and he was also

friendly, nice, smiling and also a wise leader. That’s why he was elected

president of Indonesia.

Reconstruction

Ir. H. Joko widodo or familiarly called Jokowi is a Indonesian 7th

President. He has 3 children and his wife names Iriana widodo. He was

Born in Surakarta June 1961.

Jokowi has a body that tall and thin, he has short black hair, thick

eyebrows and brow eyes and he has a mole on his right cheek.

He has a characteristic always wear batik clothes and he was

friendly, nice, smiling and a wise leader. That’s why he was elected

president of Indonesia.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 4 1

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7. Name : Fitriawati

Descriptive Text

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961. He was 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang

ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is

have skin is born and his face .

After conducting a task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi

challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia. Lucky him Jokowi

is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is really populist.

Reconstruction

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961. He has 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang ayu,

and Gibran Rakabuming raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. His

skin is brown and his face oval.

After conducting a task as the governor of Jakarta, Jokowi

challenges his lock to be the president of Indonesia. Lucky him Jokowi

is very friendly al though he is the hig hest officer he is really popular.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 4

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8. Name : Fitri Meliyani

Descriptive Text

His full name Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961, he work to offce as President RI. He has 3 children, he is

Kaesan, Kahiyang, and Ayu.

He is the president RI to 7 and before he is th guverment of

capital city of Indonesia, Jakarta.

He is nice, generous, th oughtful, he looks friendly becayse he

often keeps smile. He has tall body, he has brown skin, he has slim

body, he has pointed no se, he has oval face and short hair.

Reconstruction

His full name Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961, he work to office as President RI. He has 3 children, they

are Kaesan, Kahiyang, and Ayu.

He is the 7th

president RI and before he is the governor of

capital city of Indonesia.

He is nice, generous, thoughtful, he looks friendly becayse he

often keeps smile. He has tall body, he has brown skin, he has slim

body, he has pointed nose, he has oval face and short hair.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

2 3 1 2

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9. Name : Ita

Descriptive Text

President of Indonesia today is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he born in

surakarta, 21 June 1961. He has 3 children. They are Kaesang pangarep,

Kahiyang Ayu, and Gibran Rakabumi.

Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair and tall body. He

look friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him.

Jokowi is an Indonesian politican. He is the governor of capital

city of Indonesia jakarta 2012-2017. His political career begins since

he joined Indonesian democratis party – struggle (PDI-P).

Reconstruction

President of Indonesia is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in

surakarta, 21 June 1961. He has 3 children. They are Kaesang pangarep,

Kahiyang Ayu, and Gibran Rakabumi.

Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair and tall body. He

look friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him.

Jokowi is an Indonesian politican. He is the governor of capital

city of Indonesia jakarta in 2012-2017. His political career begins since

he joined Indonesian democratis party – struggle (PDI-P).

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

2 1

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10. Name : Juheriah

Descriptive Text

Nama Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in surakarta. June 21 1961.

Better known by the nickname Jokowi.

Producers and he is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the

2000-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia

with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two brothers and one sister.

The name is: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang ayu.

Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has colour

brown skin. And he has pointed nose.

Reconstruction

Nama Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in surakarta. June 21 1961.

Better know by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2000-2015 elected

twice. then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two boys and one daughter.

Their name are: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang

ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has brown

skin. And he has pointed nose.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

2 6 1

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11. Name : Liah Sari

Descriptive Text

Name Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21

1961, better known by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.

Producers and he is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the

2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia

with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Two

brothers and one sister, the name is they are Kaesang Pangarep,

Gibran Raka Buming and Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and

he has short black hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Reconstruction

Name Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21

1961, better known by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected

twice. then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Two boys

and one daughter, their name are Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran Raka

Buming and Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short

black hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 2 6 1

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12. Name : Milawati

Descriptive Text

Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21 1961

better know by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.

Producers. He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-

2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia with his

deputy Jusuf Kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. Theyare

Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang Ayu, Gibran Rakabuming. He hobby

rock music lovers education. Jokowi to be widely compared, he has tall

body and sher hair, he has colour brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Reconstruction

Ir. H. Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta June 21 1961

better known by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected

twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are

Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang Ayu, Gibran Rakabuming. He has hobby

rock music lovers education. Jokowi to be widely compared, he has tall

body and short hair, he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

2 3 4 1

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13. Name : Nurpadilah

Descriptive Text

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961. He was 3 chil dren they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang

Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He is

have skin born and his face .

Reconstruction

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta 21

June 1961. He was 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Kahiyang

Ayu, and Gibran Rakabuming Raka.

He is handsome with straight black hair and body medium. He

has skin brown and his face oval.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 1 2 1

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14. Name : Nurul Alfani

Descriptive Text

Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th

2014. He

was cleated diong with vice president elektion 2014. He born June

21st, 1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo

(M. 1986).

The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown, and body

thin. He three children.

Reconstruction

Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th

2014. He

was elected with vice president election 2014. He was born June 21st,

1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo (M.

1986).

He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body

thin. He has three children.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

3 2 3

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15. Name : Neneng Khopipah

Descriptive Text

Ir. H. Joko widodo or more familiarly called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who came to office since ocktober 20. 2014. He

was elected diong with vice president election 2014. He born June 21,

1961 in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo, current position

president of Indonesia since 2017 and education university of gadjah

mada. And he has 3 children is Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran Rakabuming

Raka, Kahiyang Ayu.

Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair, smart and tall body.

He looks friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him,

and jokowi is an Indonesia politican.

Reconstruction

Ir. H. Joko widodo or more familiarly called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who came to office since ocktober 20. 2014. He

was elected diong with vice president election 2014. He was born June

21, 1961 in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo, current

position president of Indonesia since 2017 and education university of

gadjah mada. And he has 3 children they are Kaesang Pangarep, Gibran

Rakabuming Raka, Kahiyang Ayu.

Jokowi is thin, he has brown skin, short hair, smart and tall body.

He looks friendly because he often keeps smile to everybody near him,

and jokowi is an Indonesia politican.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

3 2 1

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16. Name : Pipih Ropiah

Descriptive Text

The name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta. June

21 1961. Better know by the nickname Jokowi, are furniture.

Producers and he is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the

2000-2015 term of office twice. Later became President of Indonesia

with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two brothers and one sister.

The name is: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang ayu.

Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has colour

brown skin. And he has pointed nose.

Reconstruction

The name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta. June

21 1961. Better known by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2000-2015 elected

twice. Then became President of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 chidren two boys and one daugthter.

Their name are: Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming and Khayiang

ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has brown

skin. And he has pointed nose.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 2 7 1

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17. Name : Riski N.

Descriptive Text

Name Ir H Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta, June 21

1961 better known by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.

Producers and He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the

2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia

with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are

Kaesang pangarep, Kahiyang ayu and Gibran raka buming raka. Jokowi

begin to be widely compared in the media to U.S president Barack

Obama.

He has hobby rock music lovers Educational. He has tall body and he

has black short hair.

Reconstruction

Name Ir H Joko widodo, who was born in Surakarta, June 21

1961 better known by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of surakarta (solo) during the 2005-2015 elected

twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf kalla.

His full name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he has 3 children. They are Kaesang

pangarep, Kahiyang ayu and Gibran raka buming raka. Jokowi begin to

be widely compared in the media to U.S president Barack Obama.

His hobby is rock music lovers Educational. He has tall body and

he has black short hair.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 1 4 1

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18. Name : Siti Hadijah

Descriptive Text

Mr. Jokowi have the full name of which is Ir. H. Jokowi, and any

person called Jokowi. Jokowi born in Surakarta Central Java on

Wednesday, 21 June 1961 classified Gemini, mr Jokowi also Has great

Hobby is reading and Traveling and his wife named ny. Hj Iriana

Jokowi. Mr Jokowi Has dark brown skin or dark complexion and Has

Straight nose and a sweet smile, mr Jokowi also Has Straight black hair

Small wi Felt the bitterness of his home when displaced.

Tenement at the same place his father’s timber business in the area

Cinderejo Lor, evicted and be the center of travel services. The mother

said that Jokowi is a Figurate Little quiet, but sociable. Jokowi as a

person who Always Succumb to avoid a fight the attitude inherited from

his Parents who Always taught the meaning of sincere and to be

responsible. on 24 october 2014 a small figure. known as the style of

punk it is appointed to be the father of the president of the Republic of

Indonesia where the number of people who celebrate the Appoinment of

the president to 7 is not just ordinary people who come celebrate but

the Artist also even celebrated the concert in Jakarta monas.

Reconstruction

Mr. Jokowi has the full name of which is Ir. H. Jokowi, and any

person called Jokowi. Jokowi was born in Surakarta Central Java on

Wednesday, 21 June 1961 classified Gemini, mr Jokowi also Has great

Hobby is reading and Traveling and his wife name ny. Hj Iriana Jokowi.

Mr Jokowi Has dark brown skin or dark complexion and Has Straight

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nose and a sweet smile, mr Jokowi also Has Straight black hair

Small we Felt the bitterness of his home when displaced.

Tenement at the same place his father’s timber business in the area

Cinderejo Lor, evicted and be the center of travel services. The mother

said that Jokowi is a Figurate Little quiet, but sociable. Jokowi as a

person who Always Succumb to avoid a fight the attitude inherited from

his Parents who Always taught the meaning of sincere and to be

responsible. on 24 october 2014 a small figure. known as the style of

punk it is appointed to be the father of the president of the Republic of

Indonesia where the number of people who celebrate the Appoinment of

the 7th

president is not just ordinary people who come celebrate but the

Artist also even celebrated the concert in Jakarta monas.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

1 1 3 1

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19. Name : Siti Nabilah

Descriptive Text

Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th

2014. He

was cleated diong with vice president elektion 2014. He born June

21st, 1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and couple is Iriana Joko widodo

(M. 1986).

The has pointed nose, short hair, and has skin brown and body

thin. He three children.

Reconstruction

Ir. Joko widodo or more familiary called Jokowi is the 7th

president of Indonesia who come to office since October 20th

2014. He

was elected with vice president election in 2014. He was born June 21st,

1961 (54 years old) in Surakarta and his wife is Iriana Joko widodo (M.

1986).

He has pointed nose, short hair, and he has skin brown, and body

thin. He has three children.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

3 2 3 2

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20. Name : Vivi Suminar

Descriptive Text

His the name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta,

June 21st 1961. Better know by the nickname Jokowi are furniture.

Producers and he is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the

2005-2015 term of office twice. Later became president of Indonesia

with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 children, two brothers and one sister.

The name is Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming raka and Kahiyang

Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair, he has

brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Reconstruction

His name is Ir. H. Joko widodo, he was born in Surakarta, June

21st 1961. Better known by the nickname Jokowi.

He is the mayor of Surakarta (Solo) during the 2005-2015 elected

twice. Then became president of Indonesia with his deputy Jusuf Kalla.

Ir. H. Joko widodo has 3 children, two boys and one daughter.

Their name are Kaesang pangarep, Gibran rakabuming raka and

Kahiyang Ayu. Joko widodo has tall body and he has short black hair,

he has brown skin and he has pointed nose.

Classification of Error

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

3 3 5 1

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2. Graphic of Students’ Error

Figure 4.1 : Graphic of Students’ Error

Based on graphic is clearly that the difference in

the number of error made by the students’. The level of

errors made by students’ in the Selection aspect is very high

compared to others, especially when compared to the

Ordering, the level difference errors is so far, while the

Addition and also Omission it same in the centre. In fact,

the level of difficulties of the most difficult for students’ is

on aspect selection, because of difficulties still lack of the

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vocabulary and confused selecting words in present

sequence sentence, include formation on writing.

3. Diagram Percentage Classification of Error

Figure 4.2 :

Diagram Percentage Classification of Error

Based on diagram, the first highest error rate

occurred on Selection reach to 44,71% and be rounded to

45%, and the second highest error rate is Addition reach to

23,31% and be rounded to 23%, the third highest error rate

is Omission reach to 22,08% and be rounded to 22%, and

the last error rate is Ordering and be rounded to 10,42% but

22%

23% 45%

10%

Omission Addition Selection Ordering

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in fact when it rounded, the percentage is only difference

1% and the percentage of ordering is 10%.

C. The Analysis of Classification of Error and Causes

After identifying each students’ error, the writer would

like to analyse the students’ error in their writing based on their

classification of error, they are:

1. Omission

Error of Omission are characterized by the

absence of an item that must appear in well-formed

utterence although any morpheme any morpheme or

word in sentence is potencial candidate for omission.

In this case, there were 36 errors (22,08 %).

2. Addition

Error of Addition is a type of error which

must not appear in a well-formed uttereance. Students

feel confused with formulas of tenses, and then

sometimes when they construct passive voice to

active voice sentence they add the word that which

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must not apppear. In this case, there were 38 errors

(23,31 %).

3. Selection

Error of Selection are characterized by the

use of the wrong form of the morpheme. Students still

can not distiguish which are reguler verb and

irreguler, which are present tense and past tense, and

which are subject and object. In this case, there were

72 errors (44,71 %).

4. Ordering

Error of Ordering is incorrect placement of a

morpheme or group. Sometimes, students made

mistakes in drafting the word or a group of word that

wherease to draft the word and group of word in

English and Indonesia is different. In this case, there

were 17 errors (10,42 %).