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CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY REVIEW
TYPE : CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY
TITLE : THE EFFECTS OF STANDING UP YOUR GIRLFRIEND ON A DATE
ORGANIZATION OF ESSAY
This essay have introductory paragraph which have 3 sentences , body paragraph 1 which have 4
sentences , body paragraph 2 which have 3 sentences , body paragraph 3 which have 5 sentences,
and for the concluding paragraph , it have 3 sentences. This is a complete essay which has all the
organization of the essay starting from introduction to conclusion.
In this essay pattern, the effects of a certain situation are explained in separate paragraphs. For
the cause and effect essay, basically the author will write about the cause and the effect, but in
this essay, the author more discuss on the effect only.
The author explain the reasons and the result using cause and effect transition , the first effect ,
the most significant effect , the second main effect .
PARAGRAPH
The author mentions the main idea or topic sentence at the introductory paragraph. The author
did not write the topic sentence in the first sentence, the author writes the topic sentence in the
second sentence. I can see the author states the topic sentence that generally introduces the
information that follow in the supporting sentences of the paragraph. Before the author moves to
another paragraph,the author using a connectors to link each other. There a 3 body paragraph and
the author tell different effect for each paragraph. Lastly, the concluding paragraph, the author
giving his opinion about conclusion of the effect and the solution.
Introductory Paragraph (3 Sentences)
Present Situation : opinion Dating is a very common practice among teenagers,
but some of them don’t even know what to do or what
not to do.
Present Situation : effects The purpose is to discuss the three main effects of
“ standing up your girlfriend on a date”
The essay will (Essay outline) This essay is directed to male teenagers that do not
know what happens if you stand up your girlfriend on a
date
Body Paragraph 1 (4 Sentences)
The first effect (Topic sentence) The first effect of standing up a girl is that she will be
waiting for you at least 20 minutes
Example During this period of time she may start thinking why
you did not appear
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Depending on the girl, she will think of good reasons of
why you did not appear, understand you, and forgive
you.
But most of the girls will go crazy and want to kill you
slowly and painfully after the first 10 minutes of
waiting for you.
Body Paragraph 2 (3 Sentences)
The second effect (Topic sentence) The second main effect of standing up your girlfriend
on a date would be that she may never talk to you
again.
Example This is maybe a very reasonable action after you stand
her up; at least you should make a phone call to tell
you are not going to be able to go
Sometimes even if you make a phone call, the girl may
feel too offended to understand any reasons, and she
may stop talking to you.
Body Paragraph 3 (5 Sentences)
The last effect (Topic sentence) The most significant effect of standing up a girlfriend
on a date is that she can have a bigger brother with
very bad temper.
In this case not only your possibilities of dating a girl
again are in danger, but also your health.
If by accident you stand up a girl on a date, explain to
her why you could not go; that way at least she will be
less angry.
Example 1 Be aware of this especially if she has a big brother.
Example 2 Many times getting stood up is such a big deal for the
girl that she tells all her friends and family.
If she has a bigger brother with bad temper, run
because this can be the last time you stand up.
Concluding Paragraph (3 Sentences)
Topic sentence The effects of standing up a girl on a date as you can
notice are very dangerous affecting your further
possibilities of dating again, so you better avoid it.
Summary of the essay : solution Every time you are thinking of dating someone, plan
what you can to have a good date, and never stand up
just because you want.
Future Statement Think a little bit of the consequences of standing up
before you do it.
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THESIS STATEMENT
Basically the thesis statement is appear early in the essay and it conveys two kinds of
information which is topic and viewpoint.
Topic : The three main effects
Viewpoint : of “standing up your girlfriend on a date”
Thesis Statement: the three main effects of “standing up your girlfriend on a date”
The author expressed his thesis statement as an opinion. The author’s opinion tells the reader the
three main effects of “standing up your girlfriend on a date” and the reader will expect more
from the author the three effects.
TOPIC SENTENCES & SUPPORTING DETAILS
When I read , The purpose is to discuss the three main effects of “standing up your girlfriend on a
date.” , a question is appear in my mind . In this case , the question in my mind should be like , “ What
are the three effects?” . I want to expect that the rest of the paragraph will give an answer to my question.
Topic Sentence Supporting Details
Body paragraph 1
Effect of standing up a girl is that she will be
waiting for you at least 20 minutes
The author point out the supporting details by
giving reason
During this period of time she may start
thinking why you did not appear
Body paragraph 2
Main effect of standing up your girlfriend on a
date would be that she may never talk to you
The author point out the supporting details by
giving opinion
This is maybe a very reasonable action after
you stand her up; at least you should make a
The Three Main Effects Of
“Standing Up Your Girlfriend on a Date”
she will be
waiting for you at
least 20 minutes
she can have a
bigger brother with
very bad temper
she may never
talk to you
again
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again.
phone call to tell you are not going to be able
to go
Body paragraph 3
Most significant effect of standing up a
girlfriend on a date is that she can have a
bigger brother with very bad temper.
The author point out the supporting details by
giving example
Be aware of this especially if she has a big
brother.
Many times getting stood up is such a big deal
for the girl that she tells all her friends and
family.
Concluding Paragraph
The effects of standing up a girl on a date as
you can notice are very dangerous affecting
your further possibilities of dating again, so
you better avoid it.
The author point out the supporting details by
giving opinion
Every time you are thinking of dating someone,
plan what you can to have a good date, and
never stand up just because you want.
STRENGTH AND WEAKNESS
Strength Weakness
The thesis statement is related to the topic sentence where is coherence each
other.
The author give a clear viewpoint for this essay
The author only tells the effect and
didn’t come out the idea what is
causing dating
The author didn’t using a connector for
the last paragraph.
The author should give more
supporting details to support the topic
sentence
The author didn’t enclose the evidence
of the essay from the expert
CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY REVIEW
The Effects of Standing Up Your Girlfriend on a Date
Dating is a very common practice among teenagers, but some of them don’t even know what to
do or what not to do. This essay is directed to male teenagers that do not know what happens if
you stand up your girlfriend on a date. The purpose is to discuss the three main effects of
“standing up your girlfriend on a date.”
The first effect of standing up a girl is that she will be waiting for you at least 20 minutes. During
this period of time she may start thinking why you did not appear. Depending on the girl, she
will think of good reasons of why you did not appear, understand you, and forgive you. But most
of the girls will go crazy and want to kill you slowly and painfully after the first 10 minutes of
waiting for you.
The second main effect of standing up your girlfriend on a date would be that she may never talk
to you again. This is maybe a very reasonable action after you stand her up; at least you should
make a phone call to tell you are not going to be able to go. Sometimes even if you make a phone
call, the girl may feel too offended to understand any reasons, and she may stop talking to you.
The most significant effect of standing up a girlfriend on a date is that she can have a bigger
brother with very bad temper. In this case not only your possibilities of dating a girl again are in
danger, but also your health. If by accident you stand up a girl on a date, explain to her why you
could not go; that way at least she will be less angry. Be aware of this especially if she has a big
brother. Many times getting stood up is such a big deal for the girl that she tells all her friends
and family. If she has a bigger brother with bad temper, run because this can be the last time you
stand up.
The effects of standing up a girl on a date as you can notice are very dangerous affecting your
further possibilities of dating again, so you better avoid it. Every time you are thinking of dating
someone, plan what you can to have a good date, and never stand up just because you want.
Think a little bit of the consequences of standing up before you do it.
Resource : http://www.eslbee.com/effects_of_standing_up_your_girlfriend_on_a_date.htm