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Catigan, Angienette Richelle N.
2014-0703
A. Detest Simplifable Jargon
Original:
In this case, Weng Sai Qin as !na"le t# testi$% in the
a&'inistrati(e
)r#cee&ings "e$#re the *I+ "eca!se she le$t the c#!ntr% #n
e"r!ar% , 13,
#r e(en "e$#re the a&'inistrati(e c#')laint against
)etiti#ner as instit!te&.
Re(ise&:
/ere, Weng Sai Qin as !na"le t# testi$% in c#!rt "eca!se she
le$t the c#!ntr%
"e$#re the c#')laint against )etiti#ner as instit!te&.
Rec#r&s, ). 3
B. Use Strong and Precise Verbs
Original:
he )etiti#ners an& the )ri(ate res)#n&ent are
s!"stantiall% in agree'ent
c#ncerning the $acts as $#!n& "% the rial C#!rt.
Re(ise&:
*#th )arties agree& s!"stantiall% c#ncerning the $acts as
$#!n& "% the rial
C#!rt.
.R. N#. 5-1440, e"r!ar% 10, 16
C. Turn -ion Words into Verbs
Original:
Where$#re, it is res)ect$!ll% )ra%e& that a$ter )r#)er
hearing, the &e$en&ant
"e a&!&ge& g!ilt% #$ c#nte')t #$ c#!rt, an& "e
c#''itte& t# )ris#n !ntil heith&ras the a))licati#n, #r
as8s $#r the cancellati#n an& re(#cati#n #$ an%
a!th#rit% that 'ight "e grante& hi' in case N#. 46602 #$ the
9!"lic Ser(ice
C#''issi#n.
Re(ise&:
Where$#re, it is res)ect$!ll% )ra%e& that a$ter )r#)er
hearing, the &e$en&ant
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"e a&!&ge& g!ilt% #$ c#nte')t #$ c#!rt, an& "e
c#''itte& t# )ris#n !ntil he
ith&ras the a))licati#n, #r as8s an% a!th#rit% t# "e
cancelle& an& re(#8e&
that 'ight "e grante& hi' in case N#. 46602 #$ the 9!"lic
Ser(ice
C#''issi#n.
.R. N#. 5-4174, N#(e'"er 2, 136
D. Simpli! "ord! P#rases
Original:
he )laintis-a))ellants rel% #n the s!r(e% )lats #$ the clai's #$
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#n the t# 'ining clai's, hich )lats ere a))r#(e& in 107 "%
the +irect#r
#$ 5an&s an& #n a )!"licati#n entitle& ;he
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&. 'a(e $%er!t#ing )ou "rite spea(able
Original:
It is, h#e(er, here c#nten&e& $#r the s!ret% that the
c#!rt erre& in h#l&inghi' lia"le $#r an% )art #$ the
&e"te&ness hich is the "asis #$ this acti#n.
Re(ise&:
/#e(er, it is c#nten&e& here $#r the s!ret% that the
c#!rt erre& in h#l&ling
hi' lia"le $#r an% )art #$ the &e"te&ness hich is the
"asis #$ this acti#n.
.R. N#. 5-13307, e"r!ar% 3, 11
