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    WHAT IS NEWS?

    SLIDE A

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    NEWS

    News is an oral or written report ofan event that happened, ishappening, will happen in theNorth, East, West, or South that isof interest to the reader and whichshould be reported.But what is interesting to one is

    not always interesting to another.

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    Elements of the News

    Conflict

    Immediacy or TimelinessProximity or NearnessProminenceSignificanceNames

    Drama

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    Elements of the News

    Oddity and Unusualness

    Romance and AdventureSexProgress

    AnimalsNumber

    Emotion

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    BASIC RULE IN WRITING:

    ACCURACY

    BREVITYCLARITY

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    NEWS WRITING EXERCISE

    Identify the elements involved onthe following headlines. There maybe more than one answer.

    Principal issues new school policyDog saves masters life by attackingrobbers

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    NEWS WRITING EXERCISE

    Cure for AIDS discovered

    Man becomes pregnantIcebergs appear in NorthernLuzon

    Senator injured in a caraccident

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    NEWS WRITING EXERCISE

    Two solons lambaste each other,then end in a fist fightWoman permitted to celebrateholy mass

    Filipino wins Miss World title10 killed in shootoutBakla hinalay ng negrang tomboy

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    Different forms of writing anincident

    Situation: A fire brokeout and four personsmade their separateessays on whathappened.

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    For a 10-year-old grade schoolpupil,

    I saw a fire. It was a big red

    fire. It burned a house. Therewere many people around.Some men put water on the

    fire.

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    For a romantic high schoolstudent,

    Fearful scarlet tongues

    arose to the star-studdedheaven and licked greedilyat the doomed edifice while

    the stout-hearted firefightersrisked their all to quench theterrible conflagration.

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    For a lady bystander,

    You know, Mare, there was a

    fire in our community. I thinkit cost the owner a great dealof money. The date was

    August 8. August is theeighth month. So I bet in thelottery, 8-16-24-32-40- 48.

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    For a campus paper writer,

    A fire of undetermined origin razedto the ground a two-storeyapartment owned by lawyer HermanLagon of 80 Lopez Jaena St., JaroIloilo City, last night. Four trucks

    from the Jaro Fire Station subduedthe fire within an hour. The damageestimated by the police at P500,000

    was covered by insurance.

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    The combination of simple,

    dignified and vivid articlesproduces a copy simpleenough for Mr. AverageReader to understand. Wecall it news article.

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    Narrative vs News

    (Example: Dog hero story)

    Narrative: Pyramid (fromless important to climax)

    News: Inverted Pyramid(from climax to lessimportant)

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    Sample News

    Headline (ulo ng balita)

    Dog dies saving blindmaster

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    Sample News

    Lead (pamatnubay) Mostimportant facts

    A FOUR-YEAR-OLD dogsaved the life of his blind master,

    Thursday night, but the caninesloyalty cost the trusty animal hislife.

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    Sample News

    Bridge Elaboration of leadIn serious condition today in

    Doctors Hospital is Erland Escobanez,71, a street sweeper. Escobanez ofSSS Building, Rizal St., Iloilo City wasfound early this morning unconsciouson a sidewalk near the AglipayanChurch in the Iloilo Terminal Market.

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    Sample News

    Less important factsPolice theorized that

    Escobanez was knockedunconscious when he fell, his head

    hitting a stone. Potpot, his dog,apparently tried to shield its masterfrom the cold and the rain by

    draping itself over the fallen man.

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    Sample News

    Less important factsWhen discovered this morning by

    the Police Patrol, Escobanez was stillout cold. The dog lay near, dead.

    Relatives of Escobanez who is stilla bachelor, told authorities that healways took nightly strolls at about 11

    p.m. with his dog.

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    Sample News

    Minor facts According to doctors, only the

    warmth from the dogs body savedEscobanez from certain death.Escobanez told police that he

    remembers nothing of the incident. Awallet containing P500 was still in hispocket leading the authorities to ruleout robbery.

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    Types of news stories

    Scope or origin Local newsForeign newsDateline news

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    Types of news stories

    Chronology or sequence

    Advanced or anticipated(dope or prognostication)Spot news (reporter aneyewitness of the event)Coverage news (beat)

    Follow-up news

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    Types of news stories

    Treatment

    Fact story (plain exposition)Action story (narrative ofactions)Speech or quote story(verse news)

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    Types of news stories

    Content

    Routine storyPolice reportsScience newsDevelopment communicationSports news

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    Types of news stories

    Advanced news

    InvestigativeInterpretative

    Depthnews

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    Parts of the news

    Headline (capsulized lead)

    Lead (most important facts)Bridge (connects lead andbody)Body (less important and leastimportant facts)

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    Kinds of lead

    Conventional or summary lead

    Grammatical beginning leadNovelty lead

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    Conventional or summary lead

    This kind of lead used instraight news, answers rightaway all or any of the 5 Wsand/or the H (Who, What,

    When, Where, Why, How) .It may be one of the following:

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    Conventional or summary lead

    WHO lead

    PRESIDENT GloriaMacapagal-Arroyo addressed,April 20, the PMA graduatesin Baguio City.

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    Conventional or summary lead

    WHAT lead

    AN ENTRANCE examinationwill be given Nov. 24 to allgraduating high schoolstudents desiring to enroll inthe four-year college course.

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    Conventional or summary lead

    WHERE lead

    TRAPICHE, Oton, Iloilo will bethe site of the nextInternational Film Festival.

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    Conventional or summary lead

    WHEN lead

    TODAY, almost to the hour,the RevolutionaryGovernment was proclaimed

    by former President CorazonAquino.

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    Conventional or summary lead

    WHY lead

    BECAUSE of poverty, arounda hundred students droppedfrom school last year. This

    was learned from Ateneo deIloilo principal Aurora delaCruz.

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    Conventional or summary lead

    HOW lead

    BY APPEALING to the schoolboard, the University of Iloilowas able to construct a 30-

    storey, concrete building.

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    Grammatical-beginning lead

    Prepositional-phrase lead

    WITH BROOMS and othercleaning equipment, boy scoutsfrom the Iloilo public high schools

    cleaned the city markets inconsonance with the city mayorsClean and Beautiful Drive.

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    Grammatical-beginning lead

    Infinitive-phrase lead

    TO ENCOURAGE tourism,balikbayans are given a warmwelcome by their fellow

    Filipinos.

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    Grammatical-beginning lead

    Participial-phrase lead HOPING to cop first place, theAteneo woodpushers honed up forthe chess championship games.(present participle)DRESSED like priests, robberswere able to enter the bank. (pastparticiple)

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    Grammatical-beginning lead

    Gerundial-phrase lead

    WINNING the developmentalcommunications trophy duringthe national press conference

    was Ateneo de Iloilos bestachievement of the year.

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    Grammatical-beginning lead

    Clause lead

    BECAUSE Sept. 9 wasOsmena Day, all lessons inclass dealt with the life of the

    late President Sergio OsmenaSr. (subordinate, adverbial)

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    Novelty lead

    Astonisher lead

    CHAMPION of Division ofIloilo City!BETTER look your best thisweek!

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    Novelty lead

    Contrast lead FOUR MONTHS before the GreenDrive, Zone 3 of Brgy. Bo. Obrero,Iloilo City was the dirtiest community.Three months after the campaign, itwon first place in the cleanlinesscontest sponsored by the Departmentof Interior and Local Government.

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    Novelty lead

    Epigram LIKE father, like son.Herman Lagon Jr. graduated first honor

    this year. Twenty years ago, his father,Engr. Herman Lagon Sr. also topped hisclass and delivered his valedictoryaddress on the same rostrum where theyoung Lagon gave his.

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    Novelty lead

    Picture lead

    THE NEW principal, Ms. ArianneAgnes Lao, although only in herearly thirties, is already silver-

    haired. She seldom talks, butwhen she does, she talks withsense.

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    Novelty lead

    Background lead THE CPU campus was turned into aminiature carnival ground Sept. 1during the 89th Foundation Daycelebration of the school. Decoratedwith buntings and multicolored lights,the University quadrangle was agrand setting for a barrio fiesta.

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    Novelty lead

    Descriptive lead

    DRESSED in white polobarong, and with diplomas intheir hands, 109 graduates

    marched down the stage tothe tune of Hail Alma Mater.

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    Novelty lead

    Parody lead

    WATER, water everywhere,but no water to drink. Thiswas what the flood victims

    found to their dismay.

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    Novelty lead

    Punch lead

    VICTORY Day!Bonifacio High Schoolcelebrated March 18 its fifthvictory in the city-wide

    journalism contest.

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    Novelty lead

    One-word lead

    MARCH!Thus ordered Chess Clubpresident Pol Buenconsejo tostart the Walk to Win fund -raising drive.

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    Novelty lead

    Quotation lead

    THE YOUTH sucks, thus saidSpecial Association of Dimwits(SAD) president Don Pepot in a

    seminar-workshop yesterday inBrgy. Walang Kwenta, SietePegados, Guimaras.

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    Novelty lead

    Question lead

    WHO WILL reign as MissIntramurals this year?This will be known Aug. 8after the final screening to beheld at the WVSU gym.

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    NEWS WRITING EXERCISE

    Identify what kind of lead isused in the following:

    He used to be a mechanic. Now,he is president of a college.Dressed in caps and gowns, andwith diplomas in their hands, thegraduates sang their farewellsong to their alma mater.

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    THE END

    All Rights ReservedEngr. Herman Lagon