Autobiography My name is Paola Corredor Perez, I’m eighteen years old. I’m from Villavicencio, Colombia. I was born in April 4 of 1996. My mother’s name is Blanca Edy Perez and my father’s name is Jorge Corredor. I have one sister, her name is Laura Valentina and she is seven years old. I lived in Villavicencio for sixteen years, since I was born. There, I studied in four schools. I have a lot of friends. In my last school, I studied from 6 th grade to 11 th grade; the name of my last school is Liceo Campestre de las Americas. I graduated on December 2 nd of 2012; I was so excited for leave the school. In January of 2013 I arrived to Bogota, here I´d study Law; in Santo Tomás University. I begin in January 14 th . Is a difficult change but the best experience, now I’m finishing 4 th semester. I love my career and I hope to become in a good Lawyer. Now, in my little free time I go to the gym also I really love to listen house music, and to go to DJ sets; my favorite DJ is Axwell, I’m very happy for having recently met him.I like to see and play tennis, my favorite tennis player is Roger Federer, he’s the best in history.
AutobiographyMy name is Paola Corredor Perez, Im eighteen years
old. Im from Villavicencio, Colombia. I was born in April 4 of
1996. My mothers name is Blanca Edy Perez and my fathers name is
Jorge Corredor. I have one sister, her name is Laura Valentina and
she is seven years old. I lived in Villavicencio for sixteen years,
since I was born. There, I studied in four schools. I have a lot of
friends. In my last school, I studied from 6th grade to 11th grade;
the name of my last school is Liceo Campestre de las Americas. I
graduated on December 2nd of 2012; I was so excited for leave the
school.Comment by user: I was so excited to leave the schoolIn
January of 2013 I arrived to Bogota, here Id study Law; in Santo
Toms University. I begin in January 14th. Is a difficult change but
the best experience, now Im finishing 4th semester. I love my
career and I hope to become in a good Lawyer.Comment by user: Here
Im studying law (Present Continuos)Comment by user: I began
(present simple)Now, in my little free time I go to the gym also I
really love to listen house music, and to go to DJ sets; my
favorite DJ is Axwell, Im very happy for having recently met him.I
like to see and play tennis, my favorite tennis player is Roger
Federer, hes the best in history. Comment by user: He isMy life is
the normal life of a girl, I like to share with my family and my
friends, to go to parties, to go to the cinema and practice
sports.
WRITING MARK CRITERIA attempts to address the task but does not
cover all key features/bullet points; the format may be
inappropriate uses only a limited range of structures Attempts
sentence forms but errors in grammar predominate and distort the
meaning. You have to compose more accurate and detailed ideas. At
times sentences are very simple. Practice the times(Present simple,
present continuos, etc.) Practice the use of the infinitive. In an
essay there are some useful structures, like star topic, main idea
and conclusion. 65% Mark 3.3
