http://kwrigh73.wix.com/mylife (Kaylah Wright) I love your layout. it shows how much time you spent on it. it was easy to follow

(madison) I like that you added your favorite show was the black list. it really tied your whole

portfolio together. I think that it was a good idea to do that(madison) maybe you could add more pictures of you. like ones that are more current. i

think you should definitely do that (madson) did you site the pictures you added? i couldn't find it but maybe it was there. i

know that is important to do that. (madison) i had trouble loading your revised copy. maybe double check that. wouldn't want

to get point off. (madison) Maybe add some more pictures and videos. i think that could help it too.

(madison) Your sneak peek page is so cute!! I love how you added that, it makes yours

different than everyone else's! It also shows above and beyond. Good work! (Andrea Levi)

I like in your about me page that set it up as if you were asking yourself questions and then you answered them. It made it a lot easier to follow and it gave the audience a chance to ask themselves the same questions (Andrea Levi)

Maybe you should add a picture of you. It would give the audience a little bit more of an idea of you! It would also make it a little more personal. (Andrea Levi)

Your reflections to your homework responses are really good. But maybe find a different way to display the actual homework responses. The screenshot makes the font really tiny and difficult to read. (Andrea Levi)

I really like how you separated your assignment section into two different parts. The only thing I see that needs to be fixed is the spelling and grammar within the reflections. Other than that you did a wonderful job. (Andrea Levi)