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ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE? IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN? IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING? WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG? HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED? HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?

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ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK

DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?

IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN?

IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?

WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?

HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?

HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?

Student
Yes, the narrative does make sense, although talking with screen changes confused me a little.
Student
The special effects are easy to see with the use of close ups.
Student
Very easy dialogue, easy conversation.
Student
At the end when duke tells us about his power, scene could have been cut down a little.
Student
There aren't enough shots. Story is too quick.
Student
Drawing of the people could be improved, confusing to see who's who throughout the sequence.