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ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE? IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN? IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING? WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG? HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED? HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?

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ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK

DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?

IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN?

IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?

WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?

HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?

HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?

Student
Yes, I could follow the storyline easily.
Student
Yes, I could notice the bit with the pen.
Student
Student
It could do with a bit more dialoge to help it run better.
Student
The shot with the letter could be a bit to long. Maybe follow words with the camera.
Student
Bit more dialogue.
Student
The colours get a bit confusing at times.