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A collection of poems written by Year 5. The aim was to describe an animal, using similes, metaphors and, where possible, personification. The reader then guesses what the creature is!
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Animal riddle by Ashley Isle
Champion a parkour, free runner.
Stretchy , fearless and sneaky with
Mussels’ as hard as rock he clings on to.
Zig zagging as he scurries up the buildings
A long tongue to intercept his pray
A revolting dinosaur with shifty eyes
Driving through the air to escape.
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Racing his way through the crowd,
Showing off as he goes,
Gracefully jumping up and down,
His ears hear every sound,
Even from miles around,
He can carry heavy loads,
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He majestically lumbers his colossal body through the wild.
His rough skin is wrinkly like a retired old man.
Enemies, he has few, perhaps a crocodile or two.
These animals are seldom quiet leaves are part of their diet.
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I can hear and smell from miles away
And I also hate sun colored yellow
I am similar to a murderer
I eat fish like a penguin
And I am cold blooded like a snake and a frog
I attack fish and I am a mammal you can swim
with me but beware I may bite.
by Rosie eves
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They Are so strong.
A good Navigator
And Terrific soldiers.
Work aS a team to protect.
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Animal riddle
He flies through the air like a spy
As silent as water rushing by
Jumpier than a kangaroo
He glides through water like
An eel
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By Finlay McRoy
A Fluent at tacker
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Sharp as a Needle
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As small as the palm of a hand. As obedient as a dog. As quiet as a fish.
As swift as a leopard.
As energetic as a runner.
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High tree spirited.
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