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AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS’ ERROR IN ENGLISH FREE WRITING
FOCUSED ON THE USE OF TENSES
(Case study of the eleventh year students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)
A “Skripsi”
Presented to Faculty of Tarbiya and Teacher’s Training in Partial Fulfillment of
Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts)
in English Education Department
By:
RIZKI FAUZIAH
NIM: 105014000359
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
FACULTY OF TARBIYA AND TEACHERS’ TRAINING
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY
JAKARTA
2011
AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS’ ERROR IN ENGLISH FREE WRITING
FOCUSED ON THE USE OF TENSES
(Case Study of the Eleventh Year Students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)
A “Skripsi”
Presented to Faculty of Tarbiya and Teacher’s Training in Partial Fulfillment of
Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts)
in English Education Department
Approved by the Advisor;
Drs. Syauki, M. Pd
NIP: 1964121219911031002
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
FACULTY OF TARBIYA AND TEACHERS’ TRAINING
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY
JAKARTA
2010
ENDORSEMENT SHEET
The “Skripsi” (Scientific Paper) entitled “An Analysis of Student’s Error in
English Free Writing Focused on the Use of Tenses (Case Study of the Eleventh Year
Students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)”, written by Rizki Fauziah, student’s registration
number 105014000359, was examined in the examination session of Faculty of
Tarbiya and Teachers’ Training, Syarif Hidayatullah State Islamic University Jakarta
on March 31st, 2011. The “Skripsi” has been accepted and declared to have fulfilled
one of the requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts) in English
Education Department.
Jakarta, March 31st, 2011
The Examination Committee
Chairman : Drs. Syauki, M. Pd (………………….)
NIP: 1964121219911031002
Secretary : Neneng Sunengsih, S.Pd (………………….)
NIP: 150 293 236
Examiner I : Drs. Bahrul Hasibuan, M. Ed (………………….)
Examiner II : Dr. Fahriany, M. Pd (………………….)
NIP: 197006111991012001
Acknowledgment by
Dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’ Training
Prof. DR. Dede Rosyada, M.A
NIP 150 231 356
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
In the name of Allah the Beneficent, the Merciful
In this opportunity the writer would like to thank to Allah SWT, who gives her
guidance and everything. Then, peace and blessing be upon our prophet Muhammad
SAW, may we always be in straight way until the end of the world.
Concerning the process of writing this paper, the writer is so grateful to her
advisor, Drs. Syauki, M. Pd, for his guidance, suggestions, corrections, and valuable
help during the writing of this paper.
The writer also would like to express the deepest gratitude to those who helped
the writer finishing this “Skripsi”, namely:
1. Her sweetest family; her father Mr. Sunadi, her mother Mrs. Juwayriah, her
brother Ahmad Fahrurroji, and her sister Arini Alfa Hasanah for giving the
spiritual support during the study and the process of writing this “Skripsi”.
2. All nice lecturers of English Education Department for their guidance to the
writer during her study at UIN Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta.
3. Prof. Dr. Dede Rosada, M A, the dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’
Training.
4. All teachers and students of MAN Cikarang, for giving permission and
helping the writer to do the research.
5. Ka’ Rafi, for guiding and supporting the writer to finish this “Skripsi”. Thanks
a lot for your love.
6. All her friends in English Education Department especially B Class ’05
community. Bakti, thanks for your laptop and printer. Her inspiring friends
Yayah, Ucha, Itha, Nitha, and the Cordova’s crew for sharing and being best
friend.
7. Anyone whose name can not be mentioned one by one for their contribution to
the writer in finishing this “Skripsi”.
May Allah, the almighty bless them all, so be it.
Finally, the writer realizes that this “Skripsi” is still far from being perfect. Any
positive or constructive comments are welcome.
Jakarta, Desember 26, 2010
The Writer
AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS’ ERROR IN ENGLISH FREE WRITING
FOCUSED ON THE USE OF TENSES
(Case study of the eleventh year students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)
A “Skripsi”
Presented to Faculty of Tarbiya and Teacher’s Training in a Partial Fulfillment of
Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts)
in English Education Department
By:
RIZKI FAUZIAH
NIM: 105014000359
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
FACULTY OF TARBIYA AND TEACHERS TRAINING
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY
JAKARTA
2011
AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS’ ERROR IN ENGLISH FREE WRITING
FOCUSED ON THE USE OF TENSES
(Case Study of the Eleventh Year Students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)
A “Skripsi”
Presented to Faculty of Tarbiya and Teacher’s Training in Partial Fulfillment of
Requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts)
in English Education Department
Approved by the Advisor;
Drs. Syauki, M. Pd
NIP: 19641212 1991103 1 002
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION
FACULTY OF TARBIYA AND TEACHERS TRAINING
SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY
JAKARTA
2011
ENDORSEMENT SHEET
The “Skripsi” (Scientific Paper) entitled “An Analysis of Student’s Error in
English Free Writing Focused on the Use of Tenses (Case Study of the Eleventh Year
Students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi)”, written by Rizki Fauziah, student’s registration
number 105014000359, was examined in the examination session of Faculty of
Tarbiya and Teachers’ Training, Syarif Hidayatullah State Islamic University Jakarta
on March 31st, 2011. The “Skripsi” has been accepted and declared to have fulfilled
one of the requirements for the Degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts) in English
Education Department.
Jakarta, March 31st, 2011
The Examination Committee
Chairman : Drs. Syauki, M. Pd (………………….)
NIP: 19641212 199103 1 002
Secretary : Neneng Sunengsih, S.Pd (………………….)
NIP: 19730625 199903 2 001
Examiner I : Dr. Fahriany, M. Pd (………………….)
NIP: 19700611 199101 2 001
Examiner II : Drs. Bahrul Hasibuan, M. Ed (………………….)
Acknowledged by
Dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’ Training
Prof. Dr. Dede Rosyada, M.A
NIP.19571005 198703 1 003
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
In the name of Allah the Beneficent, the Merciful
In this opportunity the writer would like to thank to Allah SWT, who gives her
guidance and everything. Then, peace and blessing be upon our prophet Muhammad
SAW, may we always be in straight way until the end of the world.
Concerning the process of writing this paper, the writer is so grateful to her
advisor, Drs. Syauki, M. Pd, for his guidance, suggestions, corrections, and valuable
help during the writing of this paper.
The writer also would like to express the deepest gratitude to those who helped
the writer finishing this “Skripsi”, namely:
1. Her sweetest family; her father Mr. Sunadi, her mother Mrs. Juwayriah, her
brother Ahmad Fahrurroji, and her sister Arini Alfa Hasanah for giving the
spiritual support during the study and the process of writing this “Skripsi”.
2. All nice lecturers of English Education Department for their guidance to the
writer during her study at UIN Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta.
3. Prof. Dr. Dede Rosada, M A, the dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’
Training.
4. All teachers and students of MAN Cikarang, for giving permission and
helping the writer to do the research.
5. Ka’ Rafi, for guiding and supporting the writer to finish this “Skripsi”. Thanks
a lot for your love.
6. All her friends in English Education Department especially B Class ’05
community. Bakti, thanks for your laptop and printer. Her inspiring friends
Yayah, Ucha, Itha, Nitha, and the Cordova’s crew for sharing and being best
friend.
7. Anyone whose name can not be mentioned one by one for their contribution to
the writer in finishing this “Skripsi”.
May Allah, the almighty bless them all, so be it.
Finally, the writer realizes that this “Skripsi” is still far from being perfect. Any
positive or constructive comments are welcome.
Jakarta, Desember 26, 2010
The Writer
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
ABSTRACT...................................................................................................................i
ABSTRAK.....................................................................................................................ii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT..........................................................................................iii
TABLE OF CONTENTS............................................................................................iv
LIST OF TABLES.......................................................................................................vi
LIST OF APPENDICES............................................................................................vii
LIST OF FIGURE.....................................................................................................viii
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION....................................................................1
A. The Background of the Study...............................................1
B. The Statement of Problem....................................................4
C. The Limitation and Formulation of the Study......................4
D. The Objective of the Study...................................................4
E. The Significance of the Study .............................................4
CHAPTER II THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK..........................................5
A. Error Analysis.......................................................................5
1. The Meaning of Error.....................................................6
2. The Classification of Error.............................................7
3. Distinction between Mistake and Error..........................8
4. The Ways How to Analyze the Errors .........................13
B. English Tense.....................................................................12
1. The Meaning of Tense..................................................12
2. The Kinds of Tense......................................................13
C. Writing................................................................................40
1. The Meaning of Writing ..............................................41
2. The Kinds of Writing....................................................42
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHODOLOGY..........................................44
A. The Purpose of the Research..............................................44
B. Place and Time of the Research.........................................44
C. Technique of Sample taking...............................................44
D. Research Instruments..........................................................45
E. Technique of Data Analysis...............................................45
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CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDINGS.......................................................46
A. Data Description.................................................................46
B. Data Analysis......................................................................53
C. Data Interpretation..............................................................54
CHAPTER V CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTIONS................................56
A. Conclusion..........................................................................56
B. Suggestions.........................................................................57
REFERENCES...........................................................................................................58
APPENDICES
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ABSTRACT
Fauziah, Rizki. 2010. An Analysis of Students’ Error in English Free Writing Test
Focused on the Use of Tenses (Case study of the eleventh year students of MAN
Cikarang, Bekasi, Skripsi, English Education Department, Faculty of Tarbiya and
Teachers Training, Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta State Islamic University, Jakarta.
Advisor: Syauki, Drs. M. Pd.
Key terms : Errors - Error Analysis – Error Types
Competence : Writing
This research is aimed to analyze the students’ error in English free writing test on
using the tenses. The limitation of the problem is classifying the students’ writing
errors into Pit Corder’s error classifications, to know the highest frequency of the
students’ error type.
The object of the research is the eleventh grade students of MAN Cikarang, Bekasi. In
collecting the data, the writer gives the free writing test. The writer gives the test
consists of the theme “My Holiday”, and each of them have to make the paragraph at
least consist of 75 words or more than that in one paragraph. Then, she gives the test
to the 26 students. Survey method is used in this research. All of the data are taken in
the same time and the writer also gives more attention the students’ writing to analyze
them then. Besides that the writer also used the quantitative method and descriptive
analysis technique to analyze the data by using formula: P= F x100%. The data is
taken from the students’ test.
And after the writer analyzing the data by classifying them into the tenses error types,
then the highest frequency of tenses error type that is done by eleventh grade students
of MAN Cikarang Bekasi is the simple past tense, as much as 61 errors/ 67.7 %. Then
the highest frequency of error type that is done by the eleventh grade students of MAN
Cikarang Bekasi is addition. The most of the students add the letter in their writing. It
happens because of intra-lingual transfer and inter-lingual transfer.
i
ABSTRAK
Fauziah, Rizki. 2010. An Analysis of Students’ Error in English Free Writing Focused
on the Use of Tenses (Case study of the eleventh year students of MAN Cikarang,
Bekasi), Skripsi, Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris, Fakultas Tarbiyah dah Keguruan, UIN
Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta.
Pembimbing: Syauki, Drs. M. Pd
Kata kunci :Error- analisa error- macam- macam error
Kompetensi :Menulis
Penelitian in bertujuan untuk menganalisa kesalahan siswa dalam tes menulis bebas
berbahasa Inggris. Pembatasan masalah dalam penelitian ini adalah pengklasifikasian
kesalahan tulisan siswa berdasarkan pengklasifikasian yang dibuat oleh Pit Corder,
untuk mengetahui frekuensi tertinggi dari tipe kesalahan siswa.
Objek penelitian ini adalah siswa kelas sebelas MAN Cikarang Bekasi. dalam
mengumpulkan data, penulis memberikan tes menulis bebas berbahasa Inggris.
Penulis memberikan tes yang bertema “My Holiday”, dan setiap mereka harus
membuat tulisan dengan minimal 75 kata atau lebih dalam satu paragraph. Kemudian,
penulis memberikan tes itu kepada 26 siswa. Metode survey digunakan dalam
penelitian ini, semua data diambil dalam waktu yang sama dan dalam melakukan
penelitian ini, penulis mencermati tulisan siswa untuk menganalisanya lebih lanjut.
Penulis juga menggunakan metode kuantitatif dan tekhnik analisa deskriptif untuk
menganalisa data dengan menggunakan rumus: P= F x 100%. Data diambil dari tes
siswa.
Sesudah penulis menganalisa data dengan mengklasifikasi data tulisan tersebut ke
dalam tipe-tipe tenses yang mereka gunakan dan tipe- tipe kesalahan, hasil analisa
menunjukkan bahwa frekuensi tertinggi dari tipe tenses yang dilakukan siswa kelas
sebelas MAN Cikarang Bekasi adalah simple past tense (61 kesalahan atau 67.7%).
Lalu frekuensi tertinggi dari tipe kesalahan yang dilakukan siswa MAN Cikarang
Bekasi adalah addition. Dengan hasil tersebut, Kebanyakan siswa menambahkan
huruf dalam menulis kata yang sangat penting untuk kata dan kalimat itu sendiri
dalam tulisan mereka. Semua itu terjadi karena intra-lingual transfer dan inter-lingual
transfer, ketika mereka menulis.
ii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
In the name of Allah the Beneficent, the Merciful
In this opportunity the writer would like to thank to Allah SWT, who gives her
guidance and everything. Then, peace and blessing be upon our prophet Muhammad
SAW, may we always be in straight way until the end of the world.
Concerning the process of writing this paper, the writer is so grateful to her
advisor, Drs. Syauki, M. Pd, for his guidance, suggestions, corrections, and valuable
help during the writing of this paper.
The writer also would like to express the deepest gratitude to those who helped
the writer finishing this “Skripsi”, namely:
1. Her sweetest family; her father Mr. Sunadi, her mother Mrs. Juwairiah, her
brother Ahmad Fahrurroji, and her sister Arini Alfa Hasanah for giving the
spiritual support during the study and the process of writing this “Skripsi”.
2. All nice lecturers of English Education Department for their guidance to the
writer during her study at UIN Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta.
3. Prof. Dr. Dede Rosada, M A, the dean of Faculty of Tarbiya and Teachers’
Training.
4. All teachers and students of MAN Cikarang, for giving permission and
helping the writer to do the research.
5. Ka’ Rafi, for guiding and supporting the writer to finish this “Skripsi”. Thanks
a lot for your love.
6. All her friends in English Education Department especially B Class. Bakti,
thanks for your laptop and printer. Her inspiring friends Yayah, Ucha, Itha,
Nitha, and the Cordova’s crew for sharing and being best friend.
7. Anyone whose name cannot be mentioned one by one for their contribution to
the writer in finishing this “Skripsi”.
May Allah, the almighty bless them all, so be it.
Finally, the writer realizes that this “Skripsi” is still far from being perfect. Any
positive or constructive comments are welcomed.
Jakarta, April 26, 2010
The Writer
vi
LIST OF TABLES
Table 2.1 The Verb Be...........................................................................................15
Table 2.2 The Verb Have and other Verbs............................................................15
Table 2.3 The Forms of Simple Past Tense...........................................................19
Table 2.4 The Forms of Simple Future Tense........................................................23
Table 4.1 Students’ Errors in Simple Present Tense..............................................45
Table 4.2 Students’ Errors in Present Continuous Tense.......................................46
Table 4.3 Student’s Errors in Simple Past Tense...................................................47
Table 4.4 Students’ Errors in Past Continuous Tense............................................51
Table 4.5 Students’ Errors in Simple Future Tense...............................................51
Table 4.6 Data Interpretation.................................................................................53
vii
LIST OF APPENDICES
Appendix 1 Writing task (research instrument)
Appendix 2 Lembar Jawaban Siswa
Appendix 3 Silabus B. Inggris kelas XI semester 1 & 2
Appendix 4 Surat pengajuan judul skripsi
Appendix 5 Surat Bimbingan Skripsi
Appendix 6 Surat permohonan penelitian dari UIN Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta
Appendix 7 Surat keterangan izin penelitian dari MAN Cikarang
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LIST OF FIGURE
Figure 2.1 Repeated Action (Simple Present) ........................................................16
Figure 2.2 Facts or Generalization (Simple Present).............................................17
Figure 2.3 Scheduled Events in the Near Future....................................................17
Figure 2.4 Now (Non-Continuous Verbs)..............................................................18
Figure 2.5 Completed Action in the Past...............................................................19
Figure 2.6 A Series of Completed Actions............................................................20
Figure 2.7 Figure 2.7 Duration in Past...................................................................20
Figure 2.8 Habits in the Past..................................................................................21
Figure 2.9 Past Facts or Generalizations................................................................21
Figure 2.10 Simple Future......................................................................................22
Figure 2.11 Now (Present Continous)....................................................................25
Figure 2.12 Longer Actions in Progress Now........................................................26
Figure 2.13 Near Future.........................................................................................26
Figure 2.14 Repetitions and Irritation with "Always"............................................27
Figure 2.15 Interrupted Action in the Past.............................................................28
Figure 2.16 Specific Time as an Interruption.........................................................28
Figure 2.17 Parallel Actions...................................................................................29
Figure 2.18 Repetition and Irritation with "Always".............................................29
Figure 2.19 Interrupted Action in the Future.........................................................30
Figure 2.20 Specific Time as an Interruption in the Future...................................31
Figure 2.21 Parallel Actions in the Future.............................................................31
Figure 2.22 Unspecified Time Before Now...........................................................33
Figure 2.23 Completed Action Before Something in the Past...............................34
Figure 2.24 Duration Before Something in the Past (Non-Continuous Verbs).....34
Figure 2.25 Duration from the Past Until Now......................................................36
Figure 2.26 Recently, Lately..................................................................................37
Figure 2.27 Duration Before Something in the Past..............................................38
Figure 2.28 Cause of Something in the Past..........................................................39
Figure 2.29 Duration Before Something in the Future..........................................40
Figure 2.30 Cause of Something in the Future......................................................41
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. The Background of the Study
English is one of the international languages that has an important
role in the world. It is widely studied and used as a tool of communication
among people all over the world. English becomes one of the important
subject matters taught at school. In Indonesia, English is considered as the
first foreign language and becomes a compulsory subject learned by all
students from the elementary school up to university.
English language teaching includes four skills such as listening,
speaking, reading and writing. One of the language skill which is very
difficult to study is writing. English writing is a subject that learns about
how to express our idea in written form. The students of elementary
school, junior high school, and senior high school in writing skill
especially learn to write words, phrases, clauses, and sentences. Then,
when the students make a sentence they should concern with: subject,
verb, and tense.
In English learning process, students sometimes make some errors
and mistakes. In science, the word "error" does not mean "mistake" or
"blunder" but rather the inevitable uncertainty of all measurements.
Because they cannot be avoided, errors in this context are not, strictly
speaking, "mistakes." At best, they can be made as small as reasonably
2
possible, and their size can be reliably estimated.1 Errors are considered as
essential things to both learners and teachers since the making errors can
be regarded as an important part of learning in order to get information.
The information indicates which part of the target language that students
have the most difficult to produce correctly. Errors also give another
benefit to teachers by showing what learners have not mastered yet in the
lesson.
According to competence based curriculum, one of the goals in
learning English is to increase communication competence in the language
that consists of listening, speaking, reading, and writing of course.2 In
other words, learning English means learn to communicate through the
target language, not only spoken but also written. As stated in English
syllabus, the goal in learning writing for eleventh grade of senior high
school is the students could understand and use the short functional texts in
their daily life.
As the writer’s experience, when she was teaching the students of
State Islamic Senior High School (MAN) Cikarang, Bekasi, she found the
most of students made errors in using the tenses. That is why the writer
tries to analyze the students’ problems in using the tenses of English verb.
Exactly, these problems were at eleventh grade students of State Islamic
Senior High School (MAN) Cikarang, Bekasi. Here, the writer need the
students know more about the use of tenses correctly.
Tense is an aspect of language that should be learnt by the students.
Tense is used to show the relation between the action or state described by
the verb and the time, which is reflected in the form of the verb. There are
two basic tenses in English; the present tense and the past tense. The
present is like the base form, although the third person singular adds -s.
1 http://www.usingenglish.com/ErrorAnalysis.html
2 Departemen Pendidikan dan Kebudayaan RI, Kurikulum 2004 Pedoman Khusus Bahasa
Inggris Tingkat Sekolah Menengah Umum, (Jakarta: Departemen Pendidikan dan Kebudayaan,
2004), P.11
3
Regular verbs add -ed or -d to show the past tense, while irregular verbs
change in many different ways, or not at all in some cases.3 To make a
good sentence they should master tense. Tense is difficult to study. When
they write a sentence, most of the students found some problems to
determine and to choose the appropriate tense. Tense related with
changing of verb agree with the time. There are two kinds of verb namely
regular and irregular verb. The students always make error to change the
verb in different tense because in indonesia has not irregular and regular
verb.
The English tense system is quite complicated, but the most
common problem is not how to form tenses. The mechanical manipulation
of verbs is easily learned through a few rules and formulas. The biggest
problem is deciding which tense to use in a given situation. In order to
choose correctly and easily, the student must understand the meaning of
the tense itself, its time picture or time line. He must know what kinds of
activities and states can be described by certain verbs. And this can present
problems, too. Finally, the students need to be able to choose accurate time
markers to clarify the time picture.
According to the writer, the students made errors of using tense
because three reasons. First, that english has great variety of tense, is one
of reason why the indonesian students have difficulties in understanding
tenses. The second reason is that Indonesian students are influenced by
their mother tongue. The last reason is in indonesia there is no subject-verb
agreement. The students make a sentence without concern with subject-
verb agreement.
3 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
4
From the description above, the writer is interested in doing
research about “An Analysis of Students Error in English free Writing
Focused on the Use of Tenses”.
B. The Statement of the Problem
Based on the background of the study described above, the writer is
interested in analyzing the errors done by the eleventh grade students of
Madrasah Aliyah Negeri (MAN) Cikarang in English free writing focused
on the use of tenses.
These errors are taken from the test. The writer would like to
formulate the problem as follow: “what kinds of tenses errors do the
eleventh grade students of MAN Cikarang in English free writing?
C. The Limitation and the Formulation of the Study
The writer limits her study on the errors done by eleventh grade
students of MAN Cikarang on English Writing. These errors are taken
from the test that focused on the tenses. Tenses they have learned, there
are: (Simple Tenses); Simple Present, Simple Past, Simple Future.
(Continous Tenses); Present Continous, Past Continous, Future
Continous. (Perfect Tenses); Present Perfect, Past Perfect, Future Perfect.
(Perfect Continous Tenses); Present Perfect Continous, Past Perfect
Continous, Future Perfect Continous.
D. The Objective of the Study
The objective of the study is to find out the students’ free writing
errors focused on the use of Tenses by eleventh grade students of MAN
Cikarang, Bekasi. Then, the writer analyzes the same errors to the students
as well.
E. The Significance of the study
This study is intended for the improvement of the students and
teachers in learning and teaching English based on the analysis of errors
made by students on English writing test. The writer hopes that this study
will be useful for both teachers and students to study harder in order to
avoid in making same errors.
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CHAPTER II
THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK
A. Error analysis
In language learning process, any student attempting to avoid
making errors is impossible. It is very natural for him or her to make errors
in this process. Even the students will get feedbacks that will make them
selves become better students in writing through the errors that they make.
In other words, to achieve English acquisition, the students must get
through some errors first, and then automatically they can learn from their
own errors. And before knowing more about error analysis, it is good to
understand the definition of error analysis.
Error analysis is a process based on analysis of learner‟s error in
their process of second language learning. Sharma wrote on his article
“Error analysis is defined as a process based on analysis of learner‟s with
one clear objective, evolving a suitable and effective teaching learning
strategy and remedial measures neccessary in certain clearly marked out
areas of the foreign language”. 1
Errors have an important role in the study of language the learner‟s
who made errors; automatically they can learn from their own errors and
develop the language. Lengo says, “errors are believed to be an indicator
1 SK. Sharma, Error analysis: Why and how, English Teaching Forum (April 1982 vol.
XXX) p.21
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of the learners‟ stages in their target language development from the errors
that learners commit, one can determine their level of mastery of the
language system”. 2
According to the definitions above, error analysis can be said as an
effort to get data about the students‟ difficulty in learning a language,
especially in writing; then she tries to do analyze the data to know more
detail about the problems faced by the students and solve the problems by
making improvement in teaching and learning language.
1. The Meaning of Error
Errors are noticeable and cannot be self-corrected, they are
deviation from the adult grammar of a native speaker, and the portion
of the learners competence in the target language. 3
Dulay stated, “Error is the flawed side of learner speech or
writing”. It means that there is something wrong in norm of language
performance.4 Then Brown said, “put in other way, an error is a
noticeable deviation from the adult grammar of a native speaker,
reflecting the interlanguage competence of the learner”. 5
Harmer said that the errors are part of the learner inter language
that is the version of the language which a learner has any one stage of
development and which is continually reshaped as he/she aims toward
full mastery. 6
From the definitions above, the writer summarizes that error is
a part of second language acquisition that happens systematically and
consistently learners do that and it‟s caused by lack of comprehending
the linguistic competence. On the other hand, making errors are part of
2 Nsakala Lengo, What is an error? English Teaching Forum (July,1995 Vol 33), p.20
3 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching ... p. 205
4 Heidy Dulay, et. Al, Language Two (New York: Oxford University Press 1985), p.138
5 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching ... p. 217
6 Jeremy Harmer, The Practice of English Language Teaching Acquisition, (Oxford:
Oxford University Press, 1995), p. 51
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learning process and no one can learn language without his/her first
making errors.
2. The Classification of Error
According to Corder, errors fall into four main categories:
Omission of same required element, addition of unnecessary or
incorrect element, selection of an incorrect element and misordering of
element. 7
a. Omission
Certain linguistic forms may be omitted by the learner
because of their complexity in production. Omission also occurs in
Morphology, learners often leave out the third person singular
morpheme –s, the plural marker-s and the past tense inflection –ed.
For example: “a strange thing happen to me yesterday”. Instead of :
“a strange thing happened to me yesterday”.
b. Addition
Learners not only commit elements which they regard as
redundant but they also add redundant element. For example:
1) I thinks
2) The books is here
c. Selection
Learners commit errors in pronunciation, morphology,
syntax, and vocabulary, due to the selection of the wrong phoneme,
structure vocabulary item. For example: “My friend is oldest than
me”. Instead of: “My friend is older than me”.
7 Nsakala Lengo, What is an Error? English Teaching Forum ... pp. 22-24
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d. Ordering
Misordering can occur in morphological level misordering of
bound morpheme in English is perhaps less frequent, given their
limited number; but in the example “he is get upping now”, the
learners attaches the inflection-ing to the two words verb “get up”.8
3. Distinction between Mistake and Error
Most of people misunderstand about errors and mistakes; they
think they are in the same meaning. So we need to distinguish errors
and mistakes. Errors reflect gaps in a learner‟s knowledge; they occur
because the learner does not know what is correct. Mistakes reflect
occasional lapses in performance; they occur because, in particular
instance, the learner is unable to perform what he or she knows.
In other words, error is a lack of knowledge and mistake is
the students possess knowledge of the correct form and are just
slipping up.9
Brown (2000: 217) also gives the similar opinion about error
and mistake. According to him, an error is a noticeable deviation from
the adult grammar of a native speaker, reflects the competence of the
learner. And a mistake is a “slip,” a failure to utilize a known system
correctly, and mistakes can be self-corrected.10
Then the writer concludes that students make error because
they do not know of the knowledge about what they write, and they
can not recognize it unless other people, their friends or their teachers
tell and correct them. And for mistake, actually the students have
known about what they write but they just „slip up‟ and do mistakes.
In this case, students are able to correct and realize their own mistake.
8 Nsakala Lengo, What is an Error?English Teaching Forum ... pp. 22-24
9 Rod Ellis, Second Language Acquisition, (New York: Oxford University Press, 2003), p.
17 10
H. Douglas Brown, Principles of Learning …, p.217
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4. The Cause of Error
Examining error analysis procedures used to identify errors in
second written language learner is determining the source of error.
According to Brown (2000: 223- 227), there are three sources of error:
inter-lingual transfer, intra-lingual transfer, and context of learning. More
specific about the sources are in the following passages.11
First, inter-lingual transfer, in this term, before the system of the
second language is familiar for the learners; the mother tongue is the only
previous linguistic system upon which the students can draw. Indonesian
students tend to write “She eat an apple,” than “She eats an apple,” and
other example, “I have three book,” instead of “I have three books.” All
of these errors are caused by negative inter-lingual transfer. While it is
not always clear that an error is the result of the native language transfer,
many such errors are detectable in learner speech. Fluent knowledge or
even familiarity with a learner‟s native language of course aids the
teacher in detecting and analyzing such errors.
Next, intra-lingual transfer (within the target language itself), is a
major factor in second language learning. Negative intra-lingual transfer
then produces overgeneralization. The students habitually are not sure of
what they want to express in their writing, which would cause them to
make errors in any language. Negative intra-lingual transfer or
overgeneralization can be showed through the sentence that students of
second language learning make, “does the boy can not run?” and “he
eated fried rice.”
And the last is context of learning. “Context” refers, for example,
to the classroom with its teacher and its materials in the case of school
learning or the social situation in the case of untutored second language
learning. In a classroom context the teacher or the textbook can lead the
learner to make faulty hypotheses about the language. Students often
11 H. Douglas Brown, Principles of Learning …,pp. 223- 227
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make errors because of a misleading explanation from the teacher, faulty
presentation of a structure or a word in a textbook, or even because of a
pattern that was rarely memorized in a drill but improperly
contextualized. Two vocabulary items presented contiguously- e.g. look
up and look at- might in later recall be confused simply because of the
contiguity of presentation. Or a teacher may provide incorrect
information- not an uncommon occurrence- by way of a misleading
definition, word, or grammatical generalization. Another manifestation of
language learned in classroom contexts is the occasional tendency on the
part of learners to give unconstructed and inappropriately formal forms
of language. We have all experienced foreign learners whose “bookish”
language gives them away as classroom language learners.
Based on Pit Corder (in Hubbard, 1983), there are three major
causes of errors, which he labels „transfer errors‟, „analogical errors,‟ and
„teaching-induced errors‟.
a. Transfer Errors
The beginning stages of learning a second language are characterized
by a predominance of interference of learner‟s native language. In
this early stages, before the system of the second language is a
familiar, the native language is only linguistic system in previous
experience upon which the learner can draw.
b. Analogical errors
Although when the learners have discovered a correct rule of the target
language, they may still continue to make errors, because they have
not discovered yet the precise set of categories to which the rule
applies. Errors which result from this strategy are called analogical
errors.
c. Teaching Induced Errors
Errors in second language learning may appear to be induced by the
teaching process itself. In this term the method and the material that
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used by the teachers can lead learners to make faulty hypothesis
about the language.
While Hubbard proposed slightly different names: 12
a. Mother-tongue interference
Although young children appear to be able to learn a foreign
language quite easily and to reproduce new sound very
effectively, older learners experience considerable difficulty.
The sound system (phonology) and the grammar of the first
language impose themselves on the new language and this lead
to a “foreign” pronunciation, faulty grammatical patterns and,
occasionally, to the wrong choice of vocabulary.
b. Overgeneralization
The mentalist theory claims that errors are inevitable because
they reflect various stages in the language development of the
learner. It claims that the learner processes new language data
in his mind and produces rules for its production, based on the
evidence. Where the data are inadequate, or the evidence only
partial, such rules may produce incorrect pattern.
c. Context of learning
A third major source of error, through is overlaps both types of
transfer, is the context of learning. “Context” refers to the
classroom with the teacher and the material in the case of
school learning or the social situation. In a classroom context,
the teacher or the textbook can lead the learner to make faulty
hypothesis about the language what Richards called “False
concept” and what Stenson termed “Induced errors.” Students
often make errors because of a misleading explanation from
the teacher, faulty presentation of a structure or word in the
12 Peter Hubbard et. al., A Training Course for TEFL, (New York: Oxford University
Press, 1983), pp. 140-143.
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textbook, or even because of a pattern, that was rote
memorized in a drill but not properly contextualized.
5. The Ways How to Analyze the Errors
One of the common difficulties in understanding the linguistic
system of both first and second language learners is the fact that such
system cannot be directly observed.13
Sridhar arranges the steps in
error analysis as follow:
1. Collection of data (either from a „free‟ composition by students on
s given theme or from examanation answers ).
2. Identification of errors
3. Classification into error types (e.g. errors of agreement, articles,
verb forms, etc).
4. Statement of relative frequency of error types.
5. Identification of the areas of difficulty in the target language.
6. Therapy (remedial drills, lesson, etc).14
B. English Tense
1. The Meaning of Tense
Tense means time, however, it should be pointed out that time in
relation to action is a concept that exist in the mind of the speaker,
reader, or listener. Tense, in actual usage, refers consistently only to
grammatical forms. Often tense and time do not correspond at all. 15
The word “Tense” derived ultimatelly from the Latin word
“Tempus” meaning “Time”. 16
Tense commonly refers to the time of
the situation which relates to the situation of the utterance or at the
moment of speaking. For example, the commonest tense found in the
13 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of language learning and teaching ... pp. 207-208
14 Jacek Fisiak, Contrastive Linguistics and Language Teacher: Contrastive Analysis,
Error analysis. (Pergamon Press Ltd, 1981), p.222 15
George E.Wishon and Julia M.Burks, Let’s Write English. (American Book Company
Litton Educational Publishing, inc.1980), p. 192 Revised Edition
16 Jhon Lyons, Linguistic semantic an Introduction, (New York: Cambridge University
Press, 1995), p. 312
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languages are present, past and future; a situation described in the
present, past and future; a situation described in the present tense is
related as simultaneous with the moment of speaking (John is singing);
the situation described in the past as related prior to the moment of
speaking (Jhon was singing); while the situation described the future as
relates subsequent to the moment of speaking (Jhon will sing) since
tense refers to the time of the situation which relates to the situation of
the utterance or to relate the content of the message to the speaker in
items of the “Here and Now”, it can be described as “deictic”.17
2. The Kinds of Tenses
a. Simple Tenses
1) Simple Present
The simple Present tense known as “The Historical Present”. It
uses the present tense to relate a past event and is very common in
oral narrative.18
The present tense shows clearly that in English, tense is not the
same time. The present tense is not usually used to describe present
time. Instead, it describes activities and states which are generally
and universally true. The present tense is the tense for description,
definition, and statements of general truth.19
The simple present tense can describe habits, routines, or
events that happen regularly. It can also express opinions or make
general statement of fact.
a) Form
[VERB] + s/es in third person20
17
www.helsinki Fi/-mpalande/meaning_of_tense_and_aspect_html.
18 Marianne Celce-Murcia and Diane Larsen-Freeman, The Grammar Book (An ESL/EFL
Teacher’s Course). (Heinle and Heinle Publisher, 1999), p.166, Second Edition. 19
Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses. (Washington: United
States Information Agency, 1985) p. 10 20
http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
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Table 2.1
The Verb Be
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1. Long Forms I am a student
She is at the college
We are in the library
I am not a teacher
He is not at the
college
They are not in the
library
2. Contracted form I‟m here
She‟s here
We‟re in the library
I‟m not there
He isn‟t there
They aren‟t in the
library
Table 2.2
The Verb Have and Other Verbs
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1. Long forms I have class every day
I study a lot
She has classes
everyday
She studies a lot
They do not have
class everyday
They do not study a
lot
He does not have
class everyday
He does not study a
lot
2. Contracted forms They don‟t have class
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everyday
He doesn‟t study a lot
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Examples:
a. You speak English.
b. Do you speak English?
c. You do not speak English.22
b) Usage
USE 1 Repeated Action
Figure 2.1 Repeated Action (Simple Present)
Use the Simple Present to express the idea that an action is
repeated or usual. The action can be a habit, a hobby, a daily event, a
scheduled event or something that often happens. It can also be something
a person often forgets or usually does not do.
Examples:
a. I play tennis.
b. She does not play tennis.
c. Does he play tennis?
21John P. Nelson, Interaction 2 Grammar (McGraw – Hill Contemporary, 2002), pp. 3-4
22 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
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USE 2 Facts or Generalizations
Figure 2.2 Facts or Generalization (Simple Present)
The Simple Present can also indicate the speaker believes that a
fact was true before, is true now, and will be true in the future. It is not
important if the speaker is correct about the fact. It is also used to make
generalizations about people or things.
Examples:
a. Cats like milk.
b. Birds do not like milk.
c. Do pigs like milk?
USE 3 Scheduled Events in the Near Future
Figure 2.3 Scheduled Events in the Near Future
Speakers occasionally use Simple Present to talk about scheduled
events in the near future. This is most commonly done when talking about
public transportation, but it can be used with other scheduled events as
well.
Examples:
a. The train leaves tonight at 6 PM.
b. The bus does not arrive at 11 AM, it arrives at 11 PM.
c. When do we board the plane?
d. The party starts at 8 o'clock.
e. When does class begin tomorrow?
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USE 4 Now (Non-Continuous Verbs)
Figure 2.4 Now (Non-Continuous Verbs)
Speakers sometimes use the Simple Present to express the idea that
an action is happening or is not happening now. This can only be done
with Non-Continuous Verbs and certain Mixed Verbs.
Examples:
a. I am here now.
b. She is not here now.
c. He has his passport in his hand.
d. Do you have your passport with you?23
2) Simple Past
The simple past indicates that an activity or situation began and
ended at a particular time in the past. 24
Past tense is often used to tell
about events that happen quickly, one right after the other.25
a) Form
[VERB+ed] or irregular verbs
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Betty Schramper Azar, Understanding and Using English Grammar, Third Edition
(Pearson education, 1999), p. 27 25
Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 70
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Table 2.3
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1 Long Forms I studied for an hour
It looked yesterday.
They took math last
year
I did not study
It did not worked
yesterday
They did not take
math
2 Contracted Forms It didn‟t work
yesterday
It didn‟t work
yesterday
They didn‟t take
math 26
Examples:
a. The airplane arrived at noon
b. I received some visitors and cleaned my desk
c. I saw him three years ago 27
b) Usage
USE 1 Completed Action in the Past
Figure 2.5 Completed Action in the Past
26 John P. Nelson, Interaction 2 Grammar ... p. 20
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George E.Wishon and julia M.Burks, Let’s Write English ... p.195
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Use the Simple Past to express the idea that an action started and
finished at a specific time in the past. Sometimes, the speaker may not
actually mention the specific time, but they do have one specific time in
mind.
Examples:
a. I saw a movie yesterday.
b. I didn't see a play yesterday.
c. Did you have dinner last night?
USE 2 A Series of Completed Actions
\
Figure 2.6 A Series of Completed Actions
We use the Simple Past to list a series of completed actions in the
past. These actions happen 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and so on.
Examples:s
a. I finished work, walked to the beach, and found a nice place to
swim.
b. He arrived from the airport at 8:00, checked into the hotel at 9:00,
and met the others at 10:00.
c. Did you add flour, pour in the milk, and then add the eggs?
USE 3 Duration in Past
Figure 2.7 Duration in Past
The Simple Past can be used with a duration which starts and stops
in the past. Duration is a longer action often indicated by expressions such
as: for two years, for five minutes, all day, all year, etc.
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Examples:
a. I lived in Brazil for two years.
b. They did not stay at the party the entire time.
c. We talked on the phone for thirty minutes.
d. A: How long did you wait for them?
B: We waited for one hour.
USE 4 Habits in the Past
Figure 2.8 Habits in the Past
The Simple Past can also be used to describe a habit which stopped
in the past. It can have the same meaning as "used to." To make it clear
that we are talking about a habit, we often add expressions such as:
always, often, usually, never, when I was a child, when I was younger, etc.
Examples:
a. He played the violin.
b. He didn't play the piano.
c. Did you play a musical instrument when you were a kid?
USE 5 Past Facts or Generalizations
Figure 2.9 Past Facts or Generalizations
The Simple Past can also be used to describe past facts or
generalizations which are no longer true. As in USE 4 above, this use of
the Simple Past is quite similar to the expression "used to."
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Examples:
a. She was shy as a child, but now she is very outgoing.
b. He didn't like tomatoes before.
c. Did you live in Texas when you were a kid?28
3) Simple Future
The simple future tense expresses future intentions. In some,
cases will and be going to are interchangable. However, will (not going
to) is normally used to express offers, predictions, promoses, and
requests. In spoken English, the contracted are common.
Simple Future has two different forms in English: "will" and
"be going to." Although the two forms can sometimes be used
interchangeably, they often express two very different meanings.
These different meanings might seem too abstract at first, but with
time and practice, the differences will become clear. Both "will" and
"be going to" refer to a specific time in the future.29
The future tense
with “will” describes actions, activities, and states in the future.
Another future tense in English is formed with the “verb be + going to
+ verb” describes events thet are going to happen in the near future are:
soon, right away, in just a minute.30
Figure 2.10 Simple Future
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30 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... pp. 122 & 128
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a) Form
1. [Will + verb]
Examples:
a. You will help him later.
b. Will you help him later?
c. You will not help him later.
2. [Am/is/are + going to + verb]
Examples:
a. You are going to meet Jane tonight.
b. Are you going to meet Jane tonight?
c. You are not going to meet Jane tonight. 31
Table 2.4
31 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1
Long Forms
It will work very
well
They I will study
tonight
will take math next
term
I will not study
tonight
It will not work very
well
They will not take
math next term.
2 Contracted Forms I‟ll study tonight
It‟ll take work very
well
The‟ll take math
next term
I won‟t study tonight
It won‟t work very
well
They won‟t take math
next term
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b) Usage
USE 1 "Will" to Express a Voluntary Action
"Will" often suggests that a speaker will do something voluntarily.
A voluntary action is one the speaker offers to do for someone else. Often,
we use "will" to respond to someone else's complaint or request for help.
We also use "will" when we request that someone help us or volunteer to
do something for us. Similarly, we use "will not" or "won't" when we
refuse to voluntarily do something.
Examples:
a. I will send you the information when I get it.
b. I will not do your homework for you.
c. Will you help me move this heavy table?
USE 2 "Will" to Express a Promise
"Will" is usually used in promises.
Examples:
a. I will call you when I arrive.
b. I promise I will not tell him about the surprise party.
c. Don't worry, I'll be careful.
d. I won't tell anyone you‟re secret.
USE 3 "Be going to" to express a Plan
"Be going to" expresses that something is a plan. It expresses the
idea that a person intends to do something in the future. It does not matter
whether the plan is realistic or not.
Examples:
a. He is going to spend his vacation in Hawaii.
b. She is not going to spend her vacation in Hawaii.
c. A: When are we going to meet each other tonight?
USE 4 "Will" or "Be Going to" to Express a Prediction
Both "will" and "be going to" can express the idea of a general
prediction about the future. Predictions are guesses about what might
happen in the future. In "prediction" sentences, the subject usually has
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little control over the future and therefore USES 1-3 do not apply. In the
following examples, there is no difference in meaning.
Examples:
a. John Smith will be the next President.
b. John Smith is going to be the next President.
c. The movie "Zenith" will win several Academy Awards.
d. The movie "Zenith" is going to win several Academy Awards.32
b. Continuous Tenses
1) Present Continuous
The present continous tense describes present time. It used
for actions which are happening in the present, and for a period of
time which includes the present. 33
a) Form
[Am/is/are + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are watching TV.
b. Are you watching TV?
c. You are not watching TV.
b) Usage
USE 1 Now
Figure 2.11 Now (Present Continous)
Use the Present Continuous with Normal Verbs to express the
idea that something is happening now, at this very moment. It can also be
used to show that something is not happening now.
32 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
33John P. Nelson, Interaction 2 Grammar (McGraw – Hill Contemporary), P. 28-29
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Examples:
a. You are learning English now.
b. You are not learning now.
c. Are you learning?
USE 2 Longer Actions in Progress Now
Figure 2.12 Longer Actions in Progress Now
In English, "now" can mean: this second, today, this month, this
year, this century, and so on. Sometimes, we use the Present Continuous to
say that we are in the process of doing a longer action which is in progress;
however, we might not be doing it at this exact second.
Examples: (All of these sentences can be said while eating dinner in a
restaurant.)
a. I am not reading any books right now.
b. Are you working on any special projects at work?
c. Aren't you teaching at the university now?
USE 3 Near Future
Figure 2.13 Near Future
Sometimes, speakers use the Present Continuous to indicate that
something will or will not happen in the near future.
Examples:
a. I am meeting some friends after work.
b. I am not going to the party tonight.
c. Is he visiting his parents next weekend
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USE 4 Repetitions and Irritation with "Always"
Figure 2.14 Repetitions and Irritation with "Always"
The Present Continuous with words such as "always" or
"constantly" expresses the idea that something irritating or shocking often
happens. Notice that the meaning is like Simple Present, but with negative
emotion. Remember to put the words "always" or "constantly" between
"be" and "verb+ing."
Examples:
a. She is always coming to class late.
b. He is constantly talking. I wish he would shut up.
c. I don't like them because they are always complaining.34
2) Past Continuous
The past continous tense is rarely used by itself. Rather, it is used
to describe what was taking place when another activity happened in
the past. Usually the past continous is joined to another clause in the
past continous or in the past tense.35
a) Form
[Was/were + present participle]
Examples:
a. You were studying when she called.
b. Were you studying when she called?
c. You were not studying when she called.
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35 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 97
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b) Usage
USE 1 Interrupted Action in the Past
Figure 2.15 Interrupted Action in the Past
Use the Past Continuous to indicate that a longer action in the
past was interrupted. The interruption is usually a shorter action in the
Simple Past. Remember this can be a real interruption or just an
interruption in time.
Examples:
a. I was watching TV when she called.
b. When the phone rang, she was writing a letter.
c. While we were having the picnic, it started to rain.
d. What were you doing when the earthquake started?
USE 2 Specific Time as an Interruption
Figure 2.16 Specific Time as an Interruption
In USE 1, described above, the Past Continuous is interrupted by
a shorter action in the Simple Past. However, you can also use a specific
time as an interruption.
Examples:
a. Last night at 6 PM, I was eating dinner.
b. At midnight, we were still driving through the desert.
c. Yesterday at this time, I was sitting at my desk at work.
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USE 3 Parallel Actions
Figure 2.17 Parallel Actions
When you use the Past Continuous with two actions in the same
sentence, it expresses the idea that both actions were happening at the
same time. The actions are parallel.
Examples:
a. I was studying while he was making dinner.
b. While Ellen was reading, Tim was watching television.
c. Were you listening while he was talking?
USE 4 Atmosphere
In English, we often use a series of parallel actions to describe
the atmosphere at a particular time in the past.
Example:
a. When I walked into the office, several people were busily typing,
some were talking on the phones, the boss was yelling directions,
and customers were waiting to be helped. One customer was
yelling at a secretary and waving his hands. Others were
complaining to each other about the bad service.
USE 5 Repetition and Irritation with "Always"
Figure 2.18 Repetition and Irritation with "Always"
The Past Continuous with words such as "always" or "constantly"
expresses the idea that something irritating or shocking often happened in
the past. The concept is very similar to the expression "used to" but with
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negative emotion. Remember to put the words "always" or "constantly"
between "be" and "verb+ing."
Examples:
a. She was always coming to class late.
b. I didn't like them because they were always complaining.
3) Future Continuous
The future continous is generally used to set up background
activity that is in progress when another action takes place.36
Future
Continuous has two different forms: "will be doing " and "be going to
be doing." Unlike Simple Future forms, Future Continuous forms are
usually interchangeable.
a) Form
1. [will be + present participle]
Examples:
a. You will be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
b. Will you be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight?
c. You will not be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
2. [am/is/are + going to be + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
b. Are you going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight?
c. You are not going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives
tonight.
b) Usage
USE 1 Interrupted Action in the Future
Figure 2.19 Interrupted Action in the Future
36 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 135
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Use the Future Continuous to indicate that a longer action in the
future will be interrupted by a shorter action in the future. Remember this
can be a real interruption or just an interruption in time.
Examples:
a. I will be watching TV when she arrives tonight.
b. I will be waiting for you when your bus arrives.
c. I am going to be staying at the Madison Hotel, if anything happens
and you need to contact me.
d. He will be studying at the library tonight, so he will not see
Jennifer when she arrives.
USE 2 Specific Time as an Interruption in the Future
Figure 2.20 Specific Time as an Interruption in the Future
In USE 1, described above, the Future Continuous is interrupted
by a short action in the future. In addition to using short actions as
interruptions, you can also use a specific time as an interruption.
Examples:
a. Tonight at 6 PM, I am going to be eating dinner.
b. I will be in the process of eating dinner.
c. At midnight tonight, we will still be driving through the desert.
d. We will be in the process of driving through the desert.
USE 3 Parallel Actions in the Future
Figure 2.21 Parallel Actions in the Future
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When you use the Future Continuous with two actions in the
same sentence, it expresses the idea that both actions will be happening at
the same time. The actions are parallel.
Examples:
a. I am going to be studying and he is going to be making dinner.
b. Tonight, they will be eating dinner, discussing their plans, and
having a good time.
c. While Ellen is reading, Tim will be watching television.
USE 4 Atmosphere in the Future
In English, we often use a series of Parallel Actions to describe
atmosphere at a specific point in the future.
Example:
a. When I arrive at the party, everybody is going to be celebrating.
Some will be dancing. Others are going to be talking. A few people
will be eating pizza, and several people are going to be drinking
beer. They always do the same thing.37
c. Perfect Tenses
1) Present Perfect
The present perfect tense is that an action has been
completed before the present time. This action has an effect on the
present situation, but it is not happening in the present.38
a) Form
[has/have + past participle]
Examples:
a. You have seen that movie many times.
b. Have you seen that movie many times?
c. You have not seen that movie many times.
37 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
38 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 48
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b) Usage
USE 1 Unspecified Time Before Now
Figure 2.22 Unspecified Time Before Now
We use the Present Perfect to say that an action happened at an
unspecified time before now. The exact time is not important. You
CANNOT use the Present Perfect with specific time expressions such as:
yesterday, one year ago, last week, when I was a child, when I lived in
Japan, at that moment, that day, one day, etc. We can use the Present
Perfect with unspecific expressions such as: ever, never, once, many times,
several times, before, so far, already, yet, etc.
Examples:
a. I have seen that movie twenty times.
b. I think I have met him once before.
c. People have traveled to the Moon.
d. People have not traveled to Mars.
e. Have you read the book yet?
2) Past perfect
The past perfect tense has two uses. The first use is to show an
action which was completed before a second time in the past. When a
past perfect tense is used in the same sentence with a past tense, the
order of events is clear from the tenses themselves. The past perfect
action happened first. Chronological markers such as before and after
are not necessary. The word when can be used to join such sentences.39
39 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 105
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a) Form
[Had + past participle]
Examples:
a. You had studied English before you moved to New York.
b. Had you studied English before you moved to New York?
c. You had not studied English before you moved to New Y
b) Usage
USE 1 Completed Action Before Something in the Past
Figure 2.23 Completed Action Before Something in the Past
The Past Perfect expresses the idea that something occurred before
another action in the past. It can also show that something happened before
a specific time in the past.
Examples:
a. I did not have any money because I had lost my wallet.
b. Tony knew Istanbul so well because he had visited the city several
times.
c. Had Susan ever studied Thai before she moved to Thailand?
USE 2 Duration Before Something in the Past (Non-Continuous
Verbs)
Figure 2.24 Duration Before Something in the Past
(Non-Continuous Verbs)
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With Non-Continuous Verbs and some non-continuous uses of
Mixed Verbs, we use the Past Perfect to show that something started in the
past and continued up until another action in the past.
Examples:
a. We had had that car for ten years before it broke down.
b. By the time Alex finished his studies, he had been in London for
over eight years.40
3) Future Perfect
The future perfect tense can describe a state, an activity, or a
period of time before a second action in the future. When it is used
with durative verbs, the lenght of time is clearly shown. The future
perfect can also be used with punctual verbs.41
Future Perfect has two different forms: "will have done" and
"be going to have done." Unlike Simple Future forms, Future Perfect
forms are usually interchangeable.
a) Form
1. [Will have + past participle]
Examples:
a. You will have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.
b. Will you have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.?
c. You will not have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.
2. [Am/is/are + going to have + past participle]
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41 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses.....p. 148
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Examples:
a. You are going to have perfected your English by the time you
come back from the U.S.
b. Are you going to have perfected your English by the time you
come back from the U.S.?
c. You are not going to have perfected your English by the time
you come back from the U.S.
d. Perfect Continous Tense
1) Present Perfect Continous
The present perfect continous stresses the duration or
repetition of an action that began in the past and continous to the
present.42
a) Form
[Has/have + been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You have been waiting here for two hours.
b. Have you been waiting here for two hours?
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration from the Past Until Now
Figure 2.25 Duration from the Past Until Now
42 Darcy Jack, Interaction 1 Grammar 4th edition. (The McGraw-Hill Companies,
inc.,2002) p. 275
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We use the Present Perfect Continuous to show that
something started in the past and has continued up until now. "For
five minutes," "for two weeks," and "since Tuesday" are all
durations which can be used with the Present Perfect Continuous
Examples:
a. They have been talking for the last hour.
b. She has been working at that company for three years.
c. What have you been doing for the last 30 minutes?
d. James has been teaching at the university since June.
e. We have been waiting here for over two hours!
USE 2 Recently, Lately
Figure 2.26 Recently, Lately
You can also use the Present Perfect Continuous
WITHOUT a duration such as "for two weeks." Without the
duration, the tense has a more general meaning of "lately." We
often use the words "lately" or "recently" to emphasize this
meaning.
Examples:
a. Recently, I have been feeling really tired.
b. She has been watching too much television lately.
c. Have you been exercising lately?
d. Mary has been feeling a little depressed.
e. Lisa has not been practicing her English.
f. What have you been doing?
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2) Past Perfect Continous
The past perfect continous emphasizes the duration of an activity
that was in progress before another activity or time in the past. This tense
also may express an activity in progress close in time to another activity
or time in the past.43
a) Form
[Had been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You had been waiting there for more than two hours when she
finally arrived.
b. Had you been waiting there for more than two hours when she
finally arrived?
c. You had not been waiting there for more than two hours when
she finally arrived.
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration Before Something in the Past
Figure 2.27 Duration Before Something in the Past
We use the Past Perfect Continuous to show that something
started in the past and continued up until another time in the past.
"For five minutes" and "for two weeks" are both durations which
can be used with the Past Perfect Continuous. Notice that this is
related to the Present Perfect Continuous; however, the duration
does not continue until now, it stops before something else in the
past.
43 Betty Schrampfer Azar, Understanding and Using English Grammar ... p. 47
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Examples:
a. They had been talking for over an hour before Tony
arrived.
b. She had been working at that company for three years when
it went out of business.
c. How long had you been waiting to get on the bus?
d. Mike wanted to sit down because he had been standing all
day at work.
e. James had been teaching at the university for more than a
year before he left for Asia.
USE 2 Cause of Something in the Past
Figure 2.28 Cause of Something in the Past
Using the Past Perfect Continuous before another action in
the past is a good way to show cause and effect.
Examples:
a. Jason was tired because he had been jogging.
b. Sam gained weight because he had been overeating.
c. Betty failed the final test because she had not been
attending class.
3) Future Perfect Continous
The future perfect continous emphasizes the duration of an
activity that will be in progress before another time or even in the
future.44
Future Perfect Continuous has two different forms: "will
have been doing " and "be going to have been doing." Unlike
Simple Future forms, Future Perfect Continuous forms are usually
interchangeable.
44 Betty Schrampfer Azar, Understanding and Using English Grammar ... p. 62
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a) Form
1. [Will have been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You will have been waiting for more than two hours when
her plane finally arrives.
b. Will you have been waiting for more than two hours when
her plane finally arrives?
c. You will not have been waiting for more than two hours
when her plane finally arrives.
2. [Am/is/are + going to have been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives.
b. Are you going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives?
c. You are not going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration Before Something in the Future
Figure 2.29 Duration Before Something in the Future
We use the Future Perfect Continuous to show that
something will continue up until a particular event or time in the
future. "For five minutes," "for two weeks," and "since Friday" are
all durations which can be used with the Future Perfect
Continuous. Notice that this is related to the Present Perfect
Continuous and the Past Perfect Continuous; however, with Future
Perfect Continuous, the duration stops at or before a reference
point in the future.
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Examples:
a. They will have been talking for over an hour by the time
Thomas arrives.
b. She is going to have been working at that company for
three years when it finally closes.
c. James will have been teaching at the university for more
than a year by the time he leaves for Asia.
d. How long will you have been studying when you graduate?
USE 2 Cause of Something in the Future
Figure 2.30 Cause of Something in the Future
Using the Future Perfect Continuous before another action
in the future is a good way to show cause and effect.
Examples:
a. Jason will be tired when he gets home because he will have
been jogging for over an hour.45
C. Writing
Writing is the most difficult skill among other language skills,
because of that, to make a good writing, the students need hard thinking
and they have to have extent knowledge especially in writing to get a
correct writing. Because when the students are writing something like a
diary, a novel, a short story, etc., they not only have to produce some
words, sentences, and paragraphs at the same time. But also they have to
spell the words in right spelling and punctuate the sentences in suitable
punctuation. Therefore, if the students want to be a good writer they have
to master all aspect about writing and need more practice.
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In this chapter, the writer will explain some theories that still relate
to the topic. First, the writer explains the definition of writing itself.
Second, it is about the kinds of writing consisting of free writing,
controlled writing, and guided writing. The last chapter, she discusses the
role of writing in learning language.
1. The Meaning of Writing
In this chapter the writer quotes some definitions of writing.
According to Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary writing is “to
make letters or other symbols (ideographs) on a surface”. 46
Based on the definition above writing is an activity to make or
to arrange written or printed words, letters or symbols which have
meaning.
National council of teachers of English commission stated that
writing is “An important medium for self-expression, for
communication, and for the discovery of meaning. Its need increased
rather than decreased by the development of new media for mass
communication”.47
Murcia also stated in her book that writing is “The ability to
express one‟s ideas in written form in a second or foreign language”.48
Lindeman proposed the definition of writing as a process of
communication which uses a conventional graphic system to convey a
message to a reader. 49
in addition writing can also be defined as the
process of recording spoken language using a system of visual marks
on a surface. The concept includes the particular medium expression
46 As Hornby, Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary of current English, (Oxford:
Oxford University Press, 1984) p. 362
47 National Council of Teachers of English Commission on Composition. “Composition:
A position statement”, elementary English s2 (February 1975) p. 194 by Walter T Petty and Julie
M. Jensen, in developing children‟s language.
48 Marianne Celce Murcia, Teaching English as a second foreign language, (Boston
Massachusetts) p.233
49
Erika Lindeman, a Rhetoric for Writing Teachers, (Oxford: Oxford University Press,
1982), p. 11
42
(Usually hand writing or typing) and the product which emerges the
piece of writing or composition. 50
Writing skill is one of four language skills that someone will
get in language learning and it is the most difficult one. As the last skill
gained, this skill is considered as one of productive skills because
writer, in writing activity, expresses her/his ideas for reader. 51
Sara
added, “even though is the fourth skill, writing has also become more
important as tenets of communicative language teaching and also as an
essential too for learning”.52
2. The Kinds of Writing
a. Free Writing
Free writing is a technique for finding the ideas in your head
that you do not even know are there.53
It means writing whatever
comes to mind without worrying about whether the ideas are good
or grammar is correct. The technique of free writing is very simple.
The students just pick up a pen and start writing, and do not
develop their ideas or get stuck, they just repeat what they have just
written.
b. Controlled Writing
Controlled writing is the opposite of free writing . controlled
writing is all the writing for which a great deal of the content
and/or form is supplied. In using this kind of writing to teaching
writing. The students are focused to get words down on paper and
in concentrating on one or two problems at a time; they are thus
spared from tackling the full range of complexity that free writing
50 David Crystal, an Encyclopedia of Language and Language. (Oxford: Blackwell
Publishers, 1993), p. 421
51 Joni Alfino, Helping students to develop a paragraph by using information questions
technique, paper abstract for 55th
TEFLIN International Conference, (Jakarta: UIN, December 4-
6th
, 2007), p. 27
52 Sara Curshing Weidge, Assesing Writing, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press,
2002), p. 3
53 Dorothy Sedley, College Writer’s Workbook (Ohio: Bell and Howell Company, 1981)
p.2
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entails controlled writing focuses the students attention on specific
features of the written language. It is good method of reinforsing
grammar, vocabulary, and syntax in context. 54
c. Guided Writing
Guided writing is an extension of controlled writing; it is less
controlled than controlled writing. In using this kind of writing to
teaching writing, students are given a first sentence, a last sentence,
an outline to fill out, a series of questions to respond to, or
information to include in their piece of writing. Students should be
able to discuss, make notes, share findings, and plan strategies
together before they begin to write.55
In guided writing, the
students will not make serious errors if they follow the instruction,
which are given by their teachers as stated by Lois Robinson in his
book, “guided or controlled writing is writing in which one cannot
make a serious error so long as he follows direction. 56
54
Lois Robinson, Guided Writing and Free writing, (New York: Harper and Row, 1967)
p.22
55 Ann Raimes., Technique in Teaching Writing, (London: Oxford American English,
1983) p.103
56 Lois Robinson, Guided Writing and Free writing ... p.2
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
A. Method of Research
The method used in this study can be categorized into descriptive
analysis. This descriptive analysis is concerned with a quantitative
analysis. Quantitative is used in analyzing the data of the students’ English
writing, by counting the total of each of error classification to know the
highest frequency of the students’ error.
In this case, the writer used survey research which is collecting all
of the data at the same time, then analyzing them by identifying the errors,
describing and classifying the errors.1 Based on the limitation that the
writer stated in the first chapter, and then the error classifications that used
in this research are omission, addition, selection and misordering.
B. Place and Time of Research
The research was conducted at “MAN CIKARANG” Bekasi. It was
done in March 2010. The writer took the question sheets and the students’
answer sheets as the instrument of its research.
C. Technique of Sample Taking
The writer took the sample form the eleventh grade students of
“MAN CIKARANG” Bekasi. There are three classes of the students which
are divided into two specifications; the science class (IPA) and the social
1 Prof. Dr. Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian, suatu pendekatan praktik, (Jakarta:
PT Asdi Mahasatya, 2006), p. 108
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class (IPS), and the total population is about 85 students. The writer took
the sample from 30 % of the population. So, The sample of this research
is 26 students, which are divided into two classes; 13 students of XI IPA
and 13 students of XI IPS.
D. Research Instrument
The instrument of the research used by the writer is a test given to
the students to find out their ability in writing. The writer made the free
writing test with the theme “My Holiday”. It consists of 75 words or more
than that in one paragraph.
The students done the test on 9 of March 2010 at 12.30 pm. They
have to make a short story by improving the theme that was given by the
writer in the test.
The writer found some students did the test not more than 75
words. It means, some of them did not make the story based on the writer
rule.
E. Technique of Data Analysis
The technique of data analysis used by the writer in this research is
descriptive analysis technique (Percentage), with the percentage from
frequency of information and divided with number of cases.
The formula is:
P = X 100%
P = F/N X 100 %
P = Percentage
F = Frequency of Error
N = Number of Sample Which is Observed
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CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDINGS
A. Data Description
In this sub-chapter, the writer discussed about the description of
students’ errors in English writing test that focused on the use of tenses.
Their errors are using Simple Present Tense, Present Continuous Tense,
Simple Past Tense, Past Continuous Tense, and Simple Future Tense. Here
are their results of the test.
1. Simple Present Tense
Table 4.1
Table of Students’ Errors in Simple Present Tense
No Identification of
Errors
Description
of Errors
Cause of
Errors
Reconstruction
1 I’m to follow aunt to
buy food
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I follow my aunt to
buy food
2 I like just to reading,
studied hard
Addition &
selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
I like reading and
studying hard
3 I to visit my house
sister
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I visit my sister’s
house
4 Mother and father to
see far and smile to
me
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
My mother and father
see and give me smile
from faraway
5 I to help my uncle Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I help my uncle
6 He always to help
me
Addition &
Omission
Inter-lingual
Transfer &
Intra-lingual
Transfer
He always helps me
7 After grand mother Addition Intra-lingual After we meet our
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we to meet Transfer grand mother
8 I’m to help all
people
Addition I help all people
9 I usually to help my
grand mother
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I usually help my
grand mother
10 I look a big snake, it
eat Mouse …
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
I look a big snake, it
eats mouse …
11 I’m go to Ancol Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I go to Ancol
12 I’m play with friends Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I play with my friends
13 Over there situation
looking beautiful
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
The situation over
there looks beautiful
14 I am and my friend
go to Jakarta
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friend and I go to
Jakarta
15 I am coming to
museum Al-Qur’an
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I come to the museum
of Al-Qur’an
16 I am look many Al-
Qur’an
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I look many Al-
Qur’ans
17 I am take a picture Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I take a picture
18 Finally, I talking
thank you very much
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
Finally, I say thank
you very much
2. Present Continuous Tense
Table 4.2
Table of Students’ Errors in Present Continuous Tense
No Identification of
Errors
Description
of Errors
Cause of
Errors
Reconstruction
1 We speaking
together
Ommision Inter-lingual
Transfer
We are speaking
together
2 I’m happy and fun
because look two
younger brothers
play water in the
pool
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
I’m happy and fun
because I’m looking
two young brothers
playing water in the
pool
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3. Simple Past Tense
Table 4.3
Table of Students’ Errors in Simple Past Tense
No Identification of
Errors
Description
of Errors
Cause of
Errors
Reconstruction
1 I’m and my brother
go to Bandung
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
My brother and I went
to Bandung
2 I go to the museum Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to the museum
3 I and my best friend
going to Salak
Mountain
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My best friend and I
went to Salak
Mountain
4 I take a picture Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I took a picture
5 Finally, I to be found
the lesson
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
Finally, I found the
lesson
6 She very surprise see
me
Omission She was very
surprised to see me
7 On holiday me and
my family go to
house grand mother
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
On holiday my family
and I went to grand
mother’s house
8 We had not visited
this grand mother
and grand father
house
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
We did not visit to our
grand mother and
grand father’s house
9 Grand father invited
and pick it to garden
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
My Grand father
invited and picked me
to garden
10 I go with my brother Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My brother and I went
to my grand mother’s
house
11 I met a student
named Mita who
became his friend so
far. In two day I
come home Mita and
met a man named
Rio
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I met a student named
Mita, she is my
brother’s friend so
long. And the next day
I came to Mita’s home
and met a man named
Rio.
12 To see different
kinds of flowers
Omission &
Selection
Intra & Inter-
lingual
Transfer
We saw different
kinds of flower
13 Do not forget we Addition Intra-lingual We did not forget to
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were buying Transfer buy souvenir
14 Last week I went to
the market, I buy
shoes
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
Last week I went to
the market, I bought
shoes
15 I go to market with
my mom
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to the market
with my mom
16 I go to holiday Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went for holiday
17 After we eat…..
We seek beautiful
coral, after that we
go to bring
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
After we ate we
sought the beautiful
coral, and then we
brought it
18 I go to Ragunan wild
animals
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to Ragunan
19 During in trip I not
stopped
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
During the trip I did
not stop
20 I go to water fall in
Cigentis
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to water fall in
Cigentis
21 We wash in water
fall
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
We washed our hand
in the water fall
22 We do not buy food
for my friends
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
We did not buy food
for my friends
23 My last holiday go
to Bali
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
Last holiday I went to
Bali
24 The tourist to wear
bikini
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
The tourist wore
bikini
25 I don’t see because I
close my eyes
Selection &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
I did not see because I
closed my eyes
26 I and friend go to
garden park, I and
friends see show
mask monkey with
enjoy.
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friend and I went
to garden park, and we
saw “Topeng Monyet”
show happily. .
27 We also go hurry for
go home each, I
arrive at home. I
direct eat
Selection &
Omission
Intra & Inter-
lingual
Transfer
Each of us went home
quickly. When I
arrived at home I ate
directly.
28 My last free day me
and family go to
from home at 09.00
o’clock
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My last free day my
family and I left
home at 09.00 o’clock
29 I’m and friend go
holiday to Bandung
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friend and I went
holiday to Bandung
30 I’m and friend take a Addition & Intra-lingual My friend and I took a
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picture Selection Transfer picture
31 ……. I’m and friend
buy food and drink
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
……. My friend and I
bought food and drink
32 I and my friends go
to studio music
…....we show in
MAN CIKARANG
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friends and I went
to the music studio
…....we performed at
MAN CIKARANG
33 One time I was go to
the Zoo
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
Once, I went to the
Zoo
34 He not follow to
look it
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
He did not follow for
looking it
35 I’m and family very
happy came to the
Zoo
Addition &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
My family and I were
very happy going to
the Zoo
36 I am and family go
home after we eat
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I went
home after we ate
37 I have made the
experience that I do
not forget it
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
I got the unforgettable
experience
38 I was visited grand
mother’s house
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I visited to my grand
mother’s house
39 My brother swim in
river
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My brother swam in
the river
40 I was go to
Cibodas……I was
eat
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to Cibodas
41 I’m and my brother
go to grand mother
house
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My brother and I went
to grand mother’s
house
42 I’m and my sister go
to grand mother
house
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My sister and I went
to grand mother’s
house
43 I am and my family
with mother, father,
brother, and my
sister go to Danau
Toba
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I went
to Danau Toba
44 I and friends to feel
my holiday
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friends and I felt
happy on holiday
45 I am go holiday to
Lubang Buaya
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went holiday to
Lubang Buaya
46 I and my friends go
to holiday
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friends and I went
holiday
47 I and family see the
view is very
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I saw
the view which was
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beautiful very beautiful
48 My friend go to
forest
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My friend went to the
forest
49 I get experience over
there
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I got the experience
over there
50 - We go to the zoo,
and we feel happy
- We take a rest in
home
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
- We went to the zoo,
and we felt happy
- We took a rest in
home
51 In my holiday I was
invited grand
mother’s house
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
In my holiday I visited
grand mother’s house
52 I go to grand mother
house
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to grand
mother’s house
53 I look a beautiful
view…. look some
mountains
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
I looked a beautiful
view….
I looked some
mountains
54 When I and my
family will to creep
every where
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I crept
to every where
55 After to arrive
direction
Addition &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
After I arrived I ate
directly
56 We to try there game
fault is Tornado
Addition &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
We straight tried
Tornado game
57 We straight to try
there game fault is
Tornado
Addition &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
We straight tried
Tornado game
58 After finish we to try
there game, we
break to eat
Addition &
Omission
Intra & Inter
lingual
Transfer
After we finished
trying the game, we
ate.
59 After eat we straight
back to home
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
After we ate we went
home directly
60 I go to my uncle
house in Jakarta
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I went to my uncle’s
house in Jakarta
61 Me and family go to
Mekarsari Garden
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I went
to Mekarsari
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4. Past Continuous Tense
Table 4.4
Table of Students’ Errors in Past Continuous Tense
No Identification of
Errors
Description
of Errors
Cause of
Errors
Reconstruction
1 We speaking
together
Ommision Inter-lingual
Transfer
We were speaking
together
2 I playing in the sea,
and playing ball with
my brother
Omission Inter-lingual
Transfer
I was playing the ball
with my brother in the
sea
5. Simple Future
Table 4.5
Table of Students’ Errors in Simple Future Tense
No Identification of
Errors
Description of
Errors
Cause of
Errors
Reconstruction
1 I will to make Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I will make
2 We will together one
family to eating cake
Addition &
Selection
Intra-lingual
Transfer
We will eat cake
together
3 I’m not will forget Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
I will not forget the
beautiful view
4 I’m and family will
go to house grand
mother
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I will
go to grand mother’s
house
5 I and my family will
to stay during three
days
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
My family and I will
stay during three days
6 I and friends will
played
Selection Intra-lingual
Transfer
I will play with my
friends
7 Tomorrow I will
reading magazine
and sleeping
Addition Intra-lingual
Transfer
Tomorrow I will read
magazine and then
sleep
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B. Data Analysis
The writer analyzed that most of the students made errors on using
simple past tense. They made this error because they did not care the form
simple past tense, they are still using the V1 for the simple past form, they
did not change V1 into the V2 as the form of simple past tense. That’s why
most of the students made many errors in English free writing especially
on using simple past tense. In this error, most students exactly made errors
on Selection. Selection means that the students did not write the verbs,
phonemes, structures, or vocabularies item well. The example of student’s
error is “my last holiday go to Bali”. This sentence is wrong. It should be
“last holiday I went to Bali”. The error happens because of Intra-Lingual
Transfer. Besides, many students made errors on Omission. Omission
means that students did not write sentence well. They often leave out the
third person singular morpheme-s, the plural marker-s, and the past tense
inflection-ed. The example of student’s error is “we speaking together”.
This sentence is wrong. It should be “we are speaking together”. They
leave out “to be” in the sentence. Most students made these errors in
Present or Past Continuous Tense. These errors happen because of Inter-
Lingual transfer.
Second, many students made errors on Simple Present Tense. They
made this error because they did not really understand yet how to use the
form of simple present tense correctly. They add “to” before the verb. It
means most of the students made errors on addition. Addition means that
students not only commit elements which they regard as redundant but
they also add redundant element. The example of the student’s error is “I
am go to Ancol”. This sentence is wrong. It should be “I go to Ancol”.
Another example is “I to help my uncle”. This sentence should be “I help
my uncle”. This case could happen because they took the words from
dictionary without select it first; they just move the verb from dictionary
into their books. And also it happens because of Intra-Lingual Transfer.
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Furthermore, most students were frequently made errors on using
simple future tense. The example of this error is “I will played with my
friends”. This sentence is absolutely wrong. It should be followed the first
verb (V1) as the correct form of Simple Future Tense.
The reason why they made this error is because they did not know
the form of Simple Future Tense systematically. They ignore the use of
this tense correctly.
To sum up, the errors which students made are errors on using
Simple Past Tense, Simple Present Tense, Simple Future Tense, Present
Continuous Tense, and Past Continuous Tense in English writing test. And
the error types that they have made are Selection, Addition, and Omission.
The reasons why they made these errors are because of their lack of
knowledge on the use of tenses.
C. Data Interpretation
From the data mentioned above, we can see that there are 5 kinds
of tenses errors made by the students. They are: Simple Present Tense,
Present Continuous Tense, Simple Past Tense, Past Continuous Tense, and
Simple Future Tense.
The following table describes the problems area along with the
frequency of error, arranged from the highest to the lowest.
Table 4.6
Data Interpretation
No Kinds of Tenses Frequency of
Error
Percentage of
Error
1 Simple Past Tense 61 67.7 %
2 Simple Present Tense 18 20 %
3 Simple Future 7 7.7 %
4 Past Continuous Tense 2 2.2 %
5 Present Continuous Tense 2 2.2 %
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There were 33 students and 61 errors committed in simple past
tense area with 67.7 % as the highest frequency of error. Most of them
didn’t care the certain time that must to be used in simple past form. For
example: “One day, I go to garden park”. It indicates the time in simple
past form was not used by the students.
There were 13 students and 18 errors committed in Present Tense
area with 20 % as the second rate. They made an errors in adding the first
verb as the form by “to be”, “Verb-ing”, and “to”. For example “I to help
my uncle”, “I’m take a picture”, and “I’m coming”. The writer assumes
that the students didn’t really understand yet how to use the simple present
tense correctly.
Third, there were 5 students and 7 errors committed in simple
future tense area with 7.7 %. Most of them combine the form “Will” with
“to” and “V1-ing” in the sentences. It shows the students generally made
errors in adding the first verb with “ing”.
Fourth, there were 2 students and 2 errors committed in present
continuous tense area with 2.2 %. Most of them make an omission “ing” in
using the present continuous tense form. For example: “I’m and my
brother go to Bandung”. It means the students didn’t really understand yet
as well.
Fifth, there were 2 students and 2 errors committed in past
continuous tense area with 2.2 %. Most of them make an omission the
“Verb-ing” in using the past continuous tense form. It means the students
didn’t use the past continuous tense form correctly.
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTIONS
A. Conclusion
From the previous data, the writer concluded that the commonest
error on the use of tenses which most students made is using Simple Past
Tense. Its frequency is 61 errors. Those are caused by difficulty in putting
the right verbs. Then, the error on Simple Present Tense is 18 errors. It is
followed by errors of add proposition “to” caused by ignorance of rule
restriction. The third error is simple Future. Its frequency is 7 errors. It is
followed by errors of add “to be”, proposition “to”, and “V-ing” caused by
the less of student’s understanding in using Simple Future tense. Then, the
error on using Present Continuous Tense and Past Continuous Tense is 2
errors. It is followed by the student’s carelessness.
The reasons why they made many errors in English free writing
focused on the use of tenses are because of Intra-Lingual Transfer and
Inter-Lingual Transfer.
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B. suggestions
Some suggstion are needed by the english teachers in order to avoid
the students of making some errors, that is why the writer feels that it is a
must to give some suggestions and hopefully, they are worthwhile, some
suggestions are given below.
1. The techers must give repetition and pay more attention of Simple Past
Tense more than any others tenses.
2. The teachers must give and explain in every single detail.
3. The teachers must try some teaching methods that are suitable for the
students, so they do not feel bored.
4. The teachers must create a good atmosphere in the class in order to get
the students’ attention as well as their interest too.
5. The teachers must give the test as much as possible. Eventhough the
students still make errors, they will find a new case and it will be very
worth for them.
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CHAPTER II
THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK
A. Error analysis
Error analysis was born in 1967 initiated by Pit Corder to challenge
the behaviorists theory on learner error, i.e. contrastive analysis. 1The
contrastive analysis treatement of errors rested on a comparison of learners
native and target languages. Differences between the two were thought to
account for the majority of an L2 learners error . The behaviorist view of
learning prevalent on that time provided the theoretical justificaticion for
contrsative analysis. It held that learning was basically a process of
forming automatic habits and that errors should therefore result from first
language habits interfering with the learners attempts to learn new
linguistics behaviors. It was thought that contrastive analysis of the
learners two language that would pose the most difficulty. 2
Error is natural part of language learning. This is true of
development of child‟s first language as well as of second language
1 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching, (New York: Prentice
Hall Regents, 1987) p. 170
2 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching ... p. 207
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learning by children and adult. It will always occur although the best effort
has been done. But it still needs to be analyzed.
Error analysis is a process based on analysis of learner‟s error in
their process of second language learning. Sharma wrote on his article
“Error analysis is defined as a process based on analysis of learner‟s with
one clear objective, evolving a suitable and effective teaching learning
strategy and remedial measures neccessary in certain clearly marked out
areas of the foreign language”. 3
Errors have an important role in the study of language the learner‟s
who made errors; automatically they can learn from their own errors and
develop the language. Nsakala Lengo says, “errors are believed to be an
indicator of the learners‟ stages in their target language development from
the errors that learners commit, one can determine their level of mastery of
the language system”. 4
1. The Meaning of Error
. Errors are noticeable and cannot be self-corrected, they are
deviation from the adult grammar of a native speaker, and the portion
of the learners competence in the target language. 5
Dullay stated, “Error is the flawed side of learner speech or
writing”. It means that there is something wrong in norm of language
performance.6 Then Douglas Brown said, “put in other way, an error is
a noticeable deviation from the adult grammar of a native speaker,
reflecting the interlanguage competence of the learner”. 7
3 SK. Sharma, Error analysis: Why and how, English Teaching Forum April 1982 vol.
XXX P.21
4 Nsakala Lengo, What is an error? English Teaching Forum (July,1995 Vol 33), p.20
5 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching ... p. 205
6 Heidy Dulay, et. Al, Language Two (New York: Oxford University Press 1985), p.138
7 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of Language Learning and Teaching ... p. 217
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Jeremy Harmer said that the errors are part of the learner inter
language that is the version of the language which a learner has any
one stage of development and which is continually reshaped as he/she
aims toward full mastery. 8
From the definitions above, the writer summarizes that error is
a part of second language acquisition that happens systematically and
consistently learners do that and it‟s caused by lack of comprehending
the linguistic competence. On the other hand, making errors are part of
learning process and no one can learn language without his/her first
making errors.
2. The Cause of Error
Corder says that there are three major causes of error arise in
second language learning. Those errors are transfer errors, analogical
errors and teaching induced errors. 9
a. Transfer Errors
The beginning stages of learning a second language are
characterized by a predominance of interference of learner‟s native
language. In this early stages, before the system of the second
language is a familiar, the native language is only linguistic system
in previous experience upon which the learner can draw.
b. Analogical errors
Although when the learners have discovered a correct rule of
the target language, they may still continue to make errors, because
8 Jeremy Harmer, The Practice of English Language Teaching Acquisition, (Oxford
University Press, 1995), p. 51
9 Peter Hubbard, et al.,A training Course of TEFL. (Oxford : Oxford University Press,
1983) p. 140
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they have not discovered yet the precise set of categories to which
the rule applies. Errors which result from this strategy are called
analogical errors.
c. Teaching Induced Errors
Errors in second language learning may appear to be induced
by the teaching process itself. In this term the method and the
material that used by the teachers can lead learners to make faulty
hypothesis about the language.
3. The Classification of Error
According to Corder, errors fall into four main categories:
Omission of same required element, addition of of unnecessary or
incorrect element, selection of an incorrect element and misordering of
element. 10
a. Omission
Certain linguistic forms may be omitted by the learner
because of their complexity in production. Omission also occurs in
Morphology, learners often leave out the third person singular
morpheme –s, the plural marker-s and the past tense inflection –ed.
For example: “a strange thing happen to me yesterday”. Instead of :
“a strange thing happened to me yesterday”.
b. Addition
Learners not only commit elements which they regard as
redundant but they also add redundant element. For example:
1) I thinks
2) The books is here
10
Nsakala Lengo, What is an Error?English Teaching Forum ... pp. 22-24
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c. Selection
Learners commit errors in pronunciation, morphology,
syntax, and vocabulary, due to the selection of the wrong phoneme,
structure vocabulary item. For example: “My friend is oldest than
me”. Instead of: “My friend is older than me”.
d. Ordering
Misordering can occur in morphological level misordering of
bound morpheme in English is perhaps less frequent, given their
limited number; but in the example “he is get upping now”, the
learners attaches the inflection-ing to the two words verb “get
up”.11
4. Identifying and Analyzing the Errors
One of the common difficulties in understanding the linguistic
system of both first and second language learners is the fact that such
system cannot be directly observed.12
Sridhar arranges the steps in
error analysis as follow:
1. Collection of data (either from a „free‟ composition by students on
s given theme or from examanation answers ).
2. Identification of errors
3. Classification into error types (e.g. errors of agreement, articles,
verb forms, etc).
4. Statement of relative frequency of error types.
5. Identification of the areas of difficulty in the target language.
6. Therapy (remedial drills, lesson, etc).13
11 Nsakala Lengo, What is an Error?English Teaching Forum ... pp. 22-24
12 H. Douglas Brown, Principle of language learning and teaching ... pp. 207-208
13 Jacek Fisiak, Contrastive Linguistics and Language Teacher: Contrastive Analysis,
Error analysis. (Pergamon Press Ltd, 1981), p.222
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B. English Tense
1. The Meaning of Tense
Tense means time, however, it should be pointed out that time in
relation to action is a concept that exist in the mind of the speaker,
reader, or listener. Tense, in actual usage, refers consistently only to
grammatical forms. Often tense and time do not correspond at all. 14
The word “Tense” derived ultimatelly from the Latin word
“Tempus” meaning “Time”. 15
Tense commonly refers to the time of
the situation which relates to the situation of the utterance or at the
moment of speakin. For example, the commonest tense found in the
languages are present, past and future; a situation described in the
present, past and future; a situation described in the present tense is
related as simultaneous with the moment of speaking (John is singing);
the situation described in the past as related prior to the moment of
speaking (Jhon was singing); while the situation described the future as
relates subsequent to the moment of speaking (Jhon will sing) since
tense refers to the time of the situation which relates to the situation of
the utterance or to relate the content of the message to the speaker in
items of the “Here and Now”, it can be described as “deictic”.16
In
other word deictic refers to an interval or period of time which
contains the moment of utterance. It can be expressed by such word;
yesterday, now, tomorrow.
Tense is a method that we use in English to refer to time. Past,
present, and future. Many languages use tenses to talk about time.
Other languages have no tenses, but of course they can still talk about
14 George E.Wishon and julia M.Burks, Let’s Write English. (American Book Company
Litton Educational Publishing, inc.1980), p. 192 Revised Edition
15 Jhon Lyons, Linguistic semantic an Introduction, (Cambridge University Press, 1995),
p. 312
16 www.helsinki Fi/-mpalande/meaning_of_tense_and_aspect_html.
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time, using different methods. According to Marcella Frank, tense is
special verb endings or accompying auxiliary verb signal the time an
event takes place.17
2. The Kinds of Tenses
a. Simple Tenses
1) Simple Present
The simple Present tense known as “The Historical Present”. It
uses the present tense to relate a past event and is very common in
oral narrative.18
The present tense shows clearly that in English, tense is not the
same time. The present tense is not usually used to describe present
time. Instead, it describes activities and states which are generally
and universally true. The present tense is the tense for description,
definition, and statements of general truth.19
The simple present tense can describe habits, routines, or
events that happen regularly. It can also express opinions or make
general statement of fact.
a) Form
[VERB] + s/es in third person20
17
Marcella Frank, Modern English. A practical Reference Guide, (Englewood Cliffs,
New Jersey: Prentice – Hall, inc.,1972 ), p.47
18 Marianne Celce-Murcia and Diane Larsen-Freeman, The Grammar Book (An ESL/EFL
Teacher’s Course). (Heinle and Heinle Publisher, 1999), p.166, Second Edition. 19
Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses. (United States
Information Agency, Washington, D.C. 1985) p. 10 20
http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
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Table 2.1
The Verb Be
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1. Long Forms I am a student
She is at the college
We are in the library
I am not a teacher
He is not at the
college
They are not in the
library
2. Contracted form I‟m here
She‟s here
We‟re in the library
I‟m not there
He isn‟t there
They aren‟t in the
library
Table 2.2
The Verb Have and Other Verbs
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1. Long forms I have class every day
I study a lot
She has classes
everyday
She studies a lot
They do not have
class everyday
They do not study a
lot
He does not have
class everyday
He does not study a
lot
2. Contracted forms They don‟t have class
everyday
He doesn‟t study a lot 21
Examples:
a. You speak English.
b. Do you speak English?
21John P. Nelson, Interaction 2 Grammar (McGraw – Hill Contemporary, 2002), P. 3-4
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c. You do not speak English.22
b) Usage
USE 1 Repeated Action
Use the Simple Present to express the idea that an action is
repeated or usual. The action can be a habit, a hobby, a daily event, a
scheduled event or something that often happens. It can also be something
a person often forgets or usually does not do.
Examples:
a. I play tennis.
b. She does not play tennis.
c. Does he play tennis?
USE 2 Facts or Generalizations
The Simple Present can also indicate the speaker believes that a
fact was true before, is true now, and will be true in the future. It is not
important if the speaker is correct about the fact. It is also used to make
generalizations about people or things.
Examples:
a. Cats like milk.
b. Birds do not like milk.
c. Do pigs like milk
22 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
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USE 3 Scheduled Events in the Near Future
Speakers occasionally use Simple Present to talk about scheduled
events in the near future. This is most commonly done when talking about
public transportation, but it can be used with other scheduled events as
well.
Examples:
a. The train leaves tonight at 6 PM.
b. The bus does not arrive at 11 AM, it arrives at 11 PM.
c. When do we board the plane?
d. The party starts at 8 o'clock.
e. When does class begin tomorrow?
USE 4 Now (Non-Continuous Verbs)
Speakers sometimes use the Simple Present to express the idea that
an action is happening or is not happening now. This can only be done
with Non-Continuous Verbs and certain Mixed Verbs.
Examples:
a. I am here now.
b. She is not here now.
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c. He has his passport in his hand.
d. Do you have your passport with you?23
2) Simple Past
The simple past indicates that an activity or situation began and
ended at a particular time in the past. 24
Past tense is often used to tell
about events that happen quickly, one right after the other.25
a) Form
[VERB+ed] or irregular verbs
Table 2.3
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1 Long Forms I studied for an hour
It looked yesterday.
They took math last
year
I did not study
It did not worked
yesterday
They did not take
math
2 Contracted Forms It didn‟t work
yesterday
It didn‟t work
yesterday
They didn‟t take
math 26
23 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
24
Betty Schramper Azar, Understanding and Using English Grammar, Third Edition
(Pearson education, 1999), p. 27 25
Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 70 26
John P. Nelson, Interaction 2 Grammar ... p. 20
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Examples:
a. The airplane arrived at noon
b. I received some visitors and cleaned my desk
c. I saw him three years ago 27
b) Usage
USE 1 Completed Action in the Past
Use the Simple Past to express the idea that an action started and
finished at a specific time in the past. Sometimes, the speaker may not
actually mention the specific time, but they do have one specific time in
mind.
Examples:
a. I saw a movie yesterday.
b. I didn't see a play yesterday.
c. Did you have dinner last night?
USE 2 A Series of Completed Actions
We use the Simple Past to list a series of completed actions in the
past. These actions happen 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and so on.
Examples:s
27
George E.Wishon and julia M.Burks, Let’s Write English ... p.195
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a. I finished work, walked to the beach, and found a nice place to
swim.
b. He arrived from the airport at 8:00, checked into the hotel at 9:00,
and met the others at 10:00.
c. Did you add flour, pour in the milk, and then add the eggs?
USE 3 Duration in Past
The Simple Past can be used with a duration which starts and stops
in the past. Duration is a longer action often indicated by expressions such
as: for two years, for five minutes, all day, all year, etc.
Examples:
a. I lived in Brazil for two years.
b. They did not stay at the party the entire time.
c. We talked on the phone for thirty minutes.
d. A: How long did you wait for them?
B: We waited for one hour.
USE 4 Habits in the Past
The Simple Past can also be used to describe a habit which stopped
in the past. It can have the same meaning as "used to." To make it clear
that we are talking about a habit, we often add expressions such as:
always, often, usually, never, when I was a child, when I was younger, etc.
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Examples:
a. He played the violin.
b. He didn't play the piano.
c. Did you play a musical instrument when you were a kid?
USE 5 Past Facts or Generalizations
The Simple Past can also be used to describe past facts or
generalizations which are no longer true. As in USE 4 above, this use of
the Simple Past is quite similar to the expression "used to."
Examples:
a. She was shy as a child, but now she is very outgoing.
b. He didn't like tomatoes before.
c. Did you live in Texas when you were a kid?28
3) Simple Future
The simple future tense expresses future intentions. In some,
cases will and be going to are interchangable. However, will (not going
to) is normally used to express offers, predictions, promoses, and
requests. In spoken English, the contracted are common.
Simple Future has two different forms in English: "will" and
"be going to." Although the two forms can sometimes be used
interchangeably, they often express two very different meanings.
These different meanings might seem too abstract at first, but with
28 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
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time and practice, the differences will become clear. Both "will" and
"be going to" refer to a specific time in the future.29
The future tense
with “will” describes actions, activities, and states in the future.
Another future tense in English is formed with the “verb be + going to
+ verb” describes events thet are going to happen in the near future are:
soon, right away, in just a minute.30
a) Form
1. [Will + verb]
Examples:
a. You will help him later.
b. Will you help him later?
c. You will not help him later.
2. [Am/is/are + going to + verb]
Examples:
a. You are going to meet Jane tonight.
b. Are you going to meet Jane tonight?
c. You are not going to meet Jane tonight. 31
Table 2.4
29 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
30 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... pp. 122 & 128
31 http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/tense.html
No Forms Affirmative
Statement
Negative Statement
1 Long Forms It will work very I will not study
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b) Usage
USE 1 "Will" to Express a Voluntary Action
"Will" often suggests that a speaker will do something voluntarily.
A voluntary action is one the speaker offers to do for someone else. Often,
we use "will" to respond to someone else's complaint or request for help.
We also use "will" when we request that someone help us or volunteer to
do something for us. Similarly, we use "will not" or "won't" when we
refuse to voluntarily do something.
Examples:
a. I will send you the information when I get it.
b. I will not do your homework for you.
c. Will you help me move this heavy table?
USE 2 "Will" to Express a Promise
"Will" is usually used in promises.
Examples:
a. I will call you when I arrive.
b. I promise I will not tell him about the surprise party.
well
They I will study
tonight
will take math next
term
tonight
It will not work very
well
They will not take
math next term.
2 Contracted Forms I‟ll study tonight
It‟ll take work very
well
The‟ll take math
next term
I won‟t study tonight
It won‟t work very
well
They won‟t take math
next term
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c. Don't worry, I'll be careful.
d. I won't tell anyone you‟re secret.
USE 3 "Be going to" to express a Plan
"Be going to" expresses that something is a plan. It expresses the
idea that a person intends to do something in the future. It does not matter
whether the plan is realistic or not.
Examples:
a. He is going to spend his vacation in Hawaii.
b. She is not going to spend her vacation in Hawaii.
c. A: When are we going to meet each other tonight?
USE 4 "Will" or "Be Going to" to Express a Prediction
Both "will" and "be going to" can express the idea of a general
prediction about the future. Predictions are guesses about what might
happen in the future. In "prediction" sentences, the subject usually has
little control over the future and therefore USES 1-3 do not apply. In the
following examples, there is no difference in meaning.
Examples:
a. John Smith will be the next President.
b. John Smith is going to be the next President.
c. The movie "Zenith" will win several Academy Awards.
d. The movie "Zenith" is going to win several Academy Awards.32
b. Continuous Tenses
1) Present Continuous
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The present continous tense describes present time. It used
for actions which are happening in the present, and for a period of
time which includes the present. 33
a) Form
[Am/is/are + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are watching TV.
b. Are you watching TV?
c. You are not watching TV.
b) Usage
USE 1 Now
Use the Present Continuous with Normal Verbs to express the
idea that something is happening now, at this very moment. It can also be
used to show that something is not happening now.
Examples:
a. You are learning English now.
b. You are not learning now.
c. Are you learning?
USE 2 Longer Actions in Progress Now
33Patricia K. Warner. et. al., Interaction 2 Grammar (McGraw – Hill Contemporary,
2002), P. 28-29
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In English, "now" can mean: this second, today, this month, this
year, this century, and so on. Sometimes, we use the Present Continuous to
say that we are in the process of doing a longer action which is in progress;
however, we might not be doing it at this exact second.
Examples: (All of these sentences can be said while eating dinner in a
restaurant.)
a. I am not reading any books right now.
b. Are you working on any special projects at work?
c. Aren't you teaching at the university now?
USE 3 Near Future
Sometimes, speakers use the Present Continuous to indicate that
something will or will not happen in the near future.
Examples:
a. I am meeting some friends after work.
b. I am not going to the party tonight.
c. Is he visiting his parents next weekend
USE 4 Repetitions and Irritation with "Always"
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The Present Continuous with words such as "always" or
"constantly" expresses the idea that something irritating or shocking often
happens. Notice that the meaning is like Simple Present, but with negative
emotion. Remember to put the words "always" or "constantly" between
"be" and "verb+ing."
Examples:
a. She is always coming to class late.
b. He is constantly talking. I wish he would shut up.
c. I don't like them because they are always complaining.34
2) Past Continuous
The past continous tense is rarely used by itself. Rather, it is used
to describe what was taking place when another activity happened in
the past. Usually the past continous is joined to another clause in the
past continous or in the past tense.35
a) Form
[Was/were + present participle]
Examples:
a. You were studying when she called.
b. Were you studying when she called?
c. You were not studying when she called.
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b) Usage
USE 1 Interrupted Action in the Past
Use the Past Continuous to indicate that a longer action in the
past was interrupted. The interruption is usually a shorter action in the
Simple Past. Remember this can be a real interruption or just an
interruption in time.
Examples:
a. I was watching TV when she called.
b. When the phone rang, she was writing a letter.
c. While we were having the picnic, it started to rain.
d. What were you doing when the earthquake started?
USE 2 Specific Time as an Interruption
In USE 1, described above, the Past Continuous is interrupted by
a shorter action in the Simple Past. However, you can also use a specific
time as an interruption.
Examples:
a. Last night at 6 PM, I was eating dinner.
b. At midnight, we were still driving through the desert.
c. Yesterday at this time, I was sitting at my desk at work.
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USE 3 Parallel Actions
When you use the Past Continuous with two actions in the same
sentence, it expresses the idea that both actions were happening at the
same time. The actions are parallel.
Examples:
a. I was studying while he was making dinner.
b. While Ellen was reading, Tim was watching television.
c. Were you listening while he was talking?
USE 4 Atmosphere
In English, we often use a series of parallel actions to describe
the atmosphere at a particular time in the past.
Example:
a. When I walked into the office, several people were busily typing,
some were talking on the phones, the boss was yelling directions,
and customers were waiting to be helped. One customer was
yelling at a secretary and waving his hands. Others were
complaining to each other about the bad service.
USE 5 Repetition and Irritation with "Always"
The Past Continuous with words such as "always" or "constantly"
expresses the idea that something irritating or shocking often happened in
the past. The concept is very similar to the expression "used to" but with
negative emotion. Remember to put the words "always" or "constantly"
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between "be" and "verb+ing."
Examples:
a. She was always coming to class late.
b. I didn't like them because they were always complaining.
3) Future Continuous
The future continous is generally used to set up background
activity that is in progress when another action takes place.36
Future
Continuous has two different forms: "will be doing " and "be going to
be doing." Unlike Simple Future forms, Future Continuous forms are
usually interchangeable.
a) Form
1. [will be + present participle]
Examples:
a. You will be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
b. Will you be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight?
c. You will not be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
2. [am/is/are + going to be + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight.
b. Are you going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives tonight?
c. You are not going to be waiting for her when her plane arrives
tonight.
36 Patricia Wilcox Peterson, Changing Times Changing Tenses ... p. 135
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b) Usage
USE 1 Interrupted Action in the Future
Use the Future Continuous to indicate that a longer action in the
future will be interrupted by a shorter action in the future. Remember this
can be a real interruption or just an interruption in time.
Examples:
a. I will be watching TV when she arrives tonight.
b. I will be waiting for you when your bus arrives.
c. I am going to be staying at the Madison Hotel, if anything happens
and you need to contact me.
d. He will be studying at the library tonight, so he will not see
Jennifer when she arrives.
USE 2 Specific Time as an Interruption in the Future
In USE 1, described above, the Future Continuous is interrupted
by a short action in the future. In addition to using short actions as
interruptions, you can also use a specific time as an interruption.
Examples:
a. Tonight at 6 PM, I am going to be eating dinner.
b. I will be in the process of eating dinner.
c. At midnight tonight, we will still be driving through the desert.
d. We will be in the process of driving through the desert.
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USE 3 Parallel Actions in the Future
When you use the Future Continuous with two actions in the
same sentence, it expresses the idea that both actions will be happening at
the same time. The actions are parallel.
Examples:
a. I am going to be studying and he is going to be making dinner.
b. Tonight, they will be eating dinner, discussing their plans, and
having a good time.
c. While Ellen is reading, Tim will be watching television.
USE 4 Atmosphere in the Future
In English, we often use a series of Parallel Actions to describe
atmosphere at a specific point in the future.
Example:
a. When I arrive at the party, everybody is going to be celebrating.
Some will be dancing. Others are going to be talking. A few people
will be eating pizza, and several people are going to be drinking
beer. They always do the same thing.37
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c. Perfect Tenses
1) Present Perfect
The present perfect tense is that an action has been
completed before the present time. This action has an effect on the
present situation, but it is not happening in the present.38
a) Form
[has/have + past participle]
Examples:
a. You have seen that movie many times.
b. Have you seen that movie many times?
c. You have not seen that movie many times.
b) Usage
USE 1 Unspecified Time Before Now
We use the Present Perfect to say that an action happened at an
unspecified time before now. The exact time is not important. You
CANNOT use the Present Perfect with specific time expressions such as:
yesterday, one year ago, last week, when I was a child, when I lived in
Japan, at that moment, that day, one day, etc. We CAN use the Present
Perfect with unspecific expressions such as: ever, never, once, many times,
several times, before, so far, already, yet, etc.
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Examples:
a. I have seen that movie twenty times.
b. I think I have met him once before.
c. People have traveled to the Moon.
d. People have not traveled to Mars.
e. Have you read the book yet?
2) Past perfect
The past perfect tense has two uses. The first use is to show an
action which was completed before a second time in the past. When a
past perfect tense is used in the same sentence with a past tense, the
order of events is clear from the tenses themselves. The past perfect
action happened first. Chronological markers such as before and after
are not necessary. The word when can be used to join such sentences.39
a) Form
[Had + past participle]
Examples:
a. You had studied English before you moved to New York.
b. Had you studied English before you moved to New York?
c. You had not studied English before you moved to New Y
b) Usage
USE 1 Completed Action Before Something in the Past
The Past Perfect expresses the idea that something occurred before
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another action in the past. It can also show that something happened before
a specific time in the past.
Examples:
a. I did not have any money because I had lost my wallet.
b. Tony knew Istanbul so well because he had visited the city several
times.
c. Had Susan ever studied Thai before she moved to Thailand?
USE 2 Duration Before Something in the Past (Non-Continuous
Verbs)
With Non-Continuous Verbs and some non-continuous uses of
Mixed Verbs, we use the Past Perfect to show that something started in the
past and continued up until another action in the past.
Examples:
a. We had had that car for ten years before it broke down.
b. By the time Alex finished his studies, he had been in London for
over eight years.40
3) Future Perfect
The future perfect tense can describe a state, an activity, or a
period of time before a second action in the future. When it is used
with durative verbs, the lenght of time is clearly shown. The future
perfect can also be used with punctual verbs.41
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Future Perfect has two different forms: "will have done" and
"be going to have done." Unlike Simple Future forms, Future Perfect
forms are usually interchangeable.
a) Form
1. [Will have + past participle]
Examples:
a. You will have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.
b. Will you have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.?
c. You will not have perfected your English by the time you come
back from the U.S.
2. [Am/is/are + going to have + past participle]
Examples:
a. You are going to have perfected your English by the time you
come back from the U.S.
b. Are you going to have perfected your English by the time you
come back from the U.S.?
c. You are not going to have perfected your English by the time
you come back from the U.S.
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d. Perfect Continous Tenses
1) Present Perfect Continous
The present perfect continous stresses the duration or
repetition of an action that began in the past and continous to the
present.42
a) Form
[Has/have + been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You have been waiting here for two hours.
b. Have you been waiting here for two hours?
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration from the Past Until Now
We use the Present Perfect Continuous to show that
something started in the past and has continued up until now. "For
five minutes," "for two weeks," and "since Tuesday" are all
durations which can be used with the Present Perfect Continuous
Examples:
a. They have been talking for the last hour.
b. She has been working at that company for three years.
c. What have you been doing for the last 30 minutes?
d. James has been teaching at the university since June.
e. We have been waiting here for over two hours!
42 Darcy Jack, Interaction 1 Grammar 4th edition. (The McGraw-Hill Companies,
inc.,2002) p. 275
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USE 2 Recently, Lately
You can also use the Present Perfect Continuous
WITHOUT a duration such as "for two weeks." Without the
duration, the tense has a more general meaning of "lately." We
often use the words "lately" or "recently" to emphasize this
meaning.
Examples:
a. Recently, I have been feeling really tired.
b. She has been watching too much television lately.
c. Have you been exercising lately?
d. Mary has been feeling a little depressed.
e. Lisa has not been practicing her English.
f. What have you been doing?
g.
2) Past Perfect Continous
The past perfect continous emphasizes the duration of an activity
that was in progress before another activity or time in the past. This tense
also may express an activity in progress close in time to another activity
or time in the past.43
a) Form
[Had been + present participle]
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Examples:
a. You had been waiting there for more than two hours when she
finally arrived.
b. Had you been waiting there for more than two hours when she
finally arrived?
c. You had not been waiting there for more than two hours when
she finally arrived.
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration Before Something in the Past
We use the Past Perfect Continuous to show that something
started in the past and continued up until another time in the past.
"For five minutes" and "for two weeks" are both durations which
can be used with the Past Perfect Continuous. Notice that this is
related to the Present Perfect Continuous; however, the duration
does not continue until now, it stops before something else in the
past.
Examples:
a. They had been talking for over an hour before Tony
arrived.
b. She had been working at that company for three years when
it went out of business.
c. How long had you been waiting to get on the bus?
d. Mike wanted to sit down because he had been standing all
day at work.
e. James had been teaching at the university for more than a
year before he left for Asia.
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USE 2 Cause of Something in the Past
Using the Past Perfect Continuous before another action in
the past is a good way to show cause and effect.
Examples:
a. Jason was tired because he had been jogging.
b. Sam gained weight because he had been overeating.
c. Betty failed the final test because she had not been
attending class.
3) Future Perfect Continous
The future perfect continous emphasizes the duration of an
activity that will be in progress before another time or even in the
future.44
Future Perfect Continuous has two different forms: "will
have been doing " and "be going to have been doing." Unlike
Simple Future forms, Future Perfect Continuous forms are usually
interchangeable.
a) Form
1. [Will have been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You will have been waiting for more than two hours when
her plane finally arrives.
b. Will you have been waiting for more than two hours when
her plane finally arrives?
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c. You will not have been waiting for more than two hours
when her plane finally arrives.
2. [Am/is/are + going to have been + present participle]
Examples:
a. You are going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives.
b. Are you going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives?
c. You are not going to have been waiting for more than two
hours when her plane finally arrives
b) Usage
USE 1 Duration Before Something in the Future
We use the Future Perfect Continuous to show that
something will continue up until a particular event or time in the
future. "For five minutes," "for two weeks," and "since Friday" are
all durations which can be used with the Future Perfect
Continuous. Notice that this is related to the Present Perfect
Continuous and the Past Perfect Continuous; however, with Future
Perfect Continuous, the duration stops at or before a reference
point in the future.
Examples:
a. They will have been talking for over an hour by the time
Thomas arrives.
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b. She is going to have been working at that company for
three years when it finally closes.
c. James will have been teaching at the university for more
than a year by the time he leaves for Asia.
d. How long will you have been studying when you graduate?
USE 2 Cause of Something in the Future
Using the Future Perfect Continuous before another action
in the future is a good way to show cause and effect.
Examples:
a. Jason will be tired when he gets home because he will have
been jogging for over an hour.45
C. Writing English
Writing English is the most difficult skill among other language
skills, because of that, to make a good writing, the students need hard
thinking and they have to have extent knowledge especially in writing to
get a correct writing. Because when the students are writing something
like a diary, a novel, a short story, etc., they not only have to produce some
words, sentences, and paragraphs at the same time. But also they have to
spell the words in right spelling and punctuate the sentences in suitable
punctuation. Therefore, if the students want to be a good writer they have
to master all aspect about writing and need more practice.
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In this chapter, the writer will explain some theories that still relate
to the topic. First, the writer explains the definition of writing itself.
Second, it is about the kinds of writing consisting of free writing,
controlled writing, and guided writing. The last chapter, she discusses the
role of writing in learning language.
1. The Definition of Writing
In this chapter the writer quotes some definitions of writing.
According to Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary writing is “to
make letters or other symbols (ideographs) on a surface”. 46
Based on the definition above writing is an activity to make or
to arrange written or printed words, letters or symbols which have
meaning.
According to Walter T. Petty and Julie M. Jensen, writing is
“the mental and physical act of forming letters and words”. 47
National
council of teachers of English commission stated that writing is “An
important medium for self-expression, for communication, and for the
discovery of meaning. Its need increased rather than decreased by the
development of new media for mass communication”.48
Marianne C. Murcia also stated in her book that writing is “The
ability to express one‟s ideas in written form in a second or foreign
language”.49
46 As Hornby, Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary of current English, (Oxford:
Oxford University Press, 1984) p. 362 47
Walter T. Petty and Julie M. Jensen, Developing Children’s Language, (New York:
Allyn and Bacon Mc, 1963) p. 362 48
National Council of Teachers of English Commission on Composition. “Composition:
A position statement”, elementary English s2 (February 1975) p. 194 by Walter T Petty and Julie
M. Jensen, in developing children‟s language. 49
Marianne Celce Murcia, Teaching English as a second foreign language, (United
States: Massachusetts, 1991) p.233
42
Erika Lindemann proposed the definition of writing as a
process of communication which uses a conventional graphic system
to convey a message to a reader. 50
in addition writing can also be
defined as the process of recording spoken language using a system of
visual marks on a surface. The concept includes the particular medium
expression (Usually hand writing or typing) and the product which
emerges the piece of writing or composition. 51
Writing skill is one of four language skills that someone will
get in language learning and it is the most difficult one. As the last skill
gained, this skill is considered as one of productive skills because
writer, in writing activity, expresses her/his ides for reader. 52
Sara
added, “even though is the fourth skill, writing has also become more
important as tenets of communicative language teaching and also as an
essential too for learning”.53
2. The Kinds of Writing
a. Free Writing
Free writing is a technique for finding the ideas in your head
that you do not even know are there.54
It means writing whatever
comes to mind without worrying about whether the ideas are good
or grammar is correct. The technique of free writing is very simple.
The students just pick up a pen and start writing, and do not
50
Erika Lindemann, a Rhetoric for Writing Teachers, (Oxford: Oxford University Press,
1982), p. 11 51
David Crystal, an Encyclopedia of Language and Language. (Oxford: Blackwell
Publishers, 1993), p. 421 52
Joni Alfino, Helping students to develop a paragraph by using information questions
technique, paper abstract for 55th
TEFLIN International Conference, (Jakarta, UIN, December 4-
6th
, 2007), p. 129 53
Sara Curshing Weidge, Assesing Writing, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press,
2002), p. 3 54
Dorothy Sedley, College Writer’s Workbook (Ohio: Bell and Howell Company, 1981)
p.2
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develop their ideas or get stuck, they just repeat what they have just
written.
b. Controlled Writing
Controlled writing is the opposite of free writing . controlled
writing is all the writing for which a great deal of the content
and/or form is supplied. In using this kind of writing to teaching
writing. The students are focused to get words down on paper and
in concentrating on one or two problems at a time; they are thus
spared from tackling the full range of complexity that free writing
entails controlled writing focuses the students attention on specific
features of the written language. It is good method of reinforsing
grammar, vocabulary, and syntax in context. 55
c. Guided Writing
Guided writing is an extension of controlled writing; it is less
controlled than controlled writing. In using this kind of writing to
teaching writing, students are given a first sentence, a last sentence,
an outline to fill out, a series of questions to respond to, or
information to include in their piece of writing. Students should be
able to discuss, make notes, share findings, and plan strategies
together before they begin to write.56
In guided writing, the
students will not make serious errors if they follow the instruction,
which are given by their teachers as stated by Lois Robinson in his
55
Lois Robinson, Guided Writing and Free writing, (New York: Harper and Row, 1967)
p.22
56
Ann Raimes., Technique in Teaching Writing, (London: Oxford American English,
1983) p.103
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book, “guided or controlled writing is writing in which one cannot
make a serious error so long as he follows direction. 57
3. The Forms of Writing
Forms of writing are required for different purposes, in
general, writing can be devided into seven forms narration,
description, exposition, recount, report, news item, and anecdote.
a. Narration
Narration or story telling is writing about a ssuccession of
events. The simplest kind of narration follows chronological
order.58
Its purpose is to make the audience think about an
issue, tech them a lesson, or excite their emotion.59
Narration Paragraph
SANGKURIANG
Once, there was a kingdom in Priangan Land. Lived a
happy family. They were a father in form of dog,his name is
Tumang, a mother which was called is Dayang Sumbi, and a
child which was called Sangkuriang. One day, Dayang Sumbi
asked her son to go hunting with his lovely dog, Tumang. After
hunting all day, Sangkuriang began desperate and worried
because he hunted no deer. Then he thought to shot his own
dog. Then he took the dog liver and carried home.
Soon Dayang Sumbi found out that it was not deer lever
but Tumang's, his own dog. So, She was very angry and hit
Sangkuriang's head. In that incident, Sangkuriang got wounded
and scar then cast away from their home.
Years go bye, Sangkuriang had travel many places and
finally arrived at a village. He met a beautiful woman and felt
in love with her. When they were discussing their wedding
plans, The woman looked at the wound in Sangkuriang's head.
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It matched to her son's wound who had left severall years
earlier. Soon she realized that she felt in love with her own son.
She couldn't marry him but how to say it. Then, she found the
way. She needed a lake and a boat for celebrating their
wedding day. Sangkuriang had to make them in one night. He
built a lake. With a dawn just moment away and the boat was
almost complete. Dayang Sumbi had to stop it. Then, she lit up
the eastern horizon with flashes of light. It made the cock
crowed for a new day.
Sangkuriang failed to marry her. She was very angry and
kicked the boat. It felt over and became the mountain of
Tangkuban Perahu Bandung.60
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b. Description
Description is writing about the way persons, animals,
or things appear. It normally takes on of three forms.
Description tells how something looks or feels or sounds. It
talks about such features as sizes, shape, color, sound, or state.
Description Paragraph
TAJ MAHAL
Taj Mahal is regarded as one of the eight wonders of the
world. It was built by a Muslim Emperor Shah Jahan in the
memory of his dear wife at Agra. Taj Mahal is a Mausoleum
that houses the grave of queen Mumtaz Mahal. The mausoleum
is a part of a vast complex comprising of a main gateway, an
elaborate garden, a mosque (to the left), a guest house (to the
right), and several other palatial buildings. The Taj is at the
farthest end of this complex, with the river Jamuna behind it.
The Taj stands on a raised, square platform (186 x 186 feet)
with its four corners truncated, forming an unequal octagon.
The architectural design uses the interlocking arabesque
concept, in which each element stands on its own and perfectly
integrates with the main structure. It uses the principles of self-
replicating geometry and a symmetry of architectural elements.
Its central dome is fifty-eight feet in diameter and rises to a
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height of 213 feet. It is flanked by four subsidiary domed
chambers. The four graceful, slender minarets are 162.5 feet
each. The central domed chamber and four adjoining chambers
include many walls and panels of Islamic decoration. Taj
Mahal is built entirely of white marble. Its stunning
architectural beauty is beyond adequate description,
particularly at dawn and sunset. The Taj seems to glow in the
light of the full moon. On a foggy morning, the visitors
experience the Taj as if suspended when viewed from across
the Jamuna river.61
c. Exposition
Exposition is a piece of text that presents one side of an
issue.62
Exposition is writing that explains something. Its
purpose is to present ideas and to make the ideas as clear as
possible. Exposition is writing with a referential aim. It seeks to
explain someone or something in the world outside the writer.
In text genre especially, exposition devided into two kinds;
Analytical exposition and Hortatory exposition.
1) Analytical Exposition
Analytical Exposition is one classified type as
hortatory exposition in text genre. Both analytical
exposition and hortatory exposition present arguments for
supporting the issued thesis. The different from one to each
other is the last stage of the text, which the analytical
exposition will end with a re-iteration. In the other hand,
hortatory will close the essay with a recommendation.
Analytical exposition will try to influence the reader by
presenting some arguments to prove that the writer' idea is
important. Furthermore, hortatory will try to persuade the
61 www.islamicity.com/culture/Taj/default.htm
62 Mark Andrean, and Kathy Anderson, Text Types in English, … p. 22
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reader how should or not do concerning the writer's idea. 63
Analytical Exposition paragraph
Jakarta as a Bad Working Place for Expatriates
Jakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to
work in outside of the United States of America, Canada
and Western Europe. It is according to a recent report
published by Business week.
The Business week report ranked emerging markets
that might be challenging to move into due to their level of
pollution, disease, political violence and availability of
good and services.
The report ranked Jakarta second, just below Lagos
in Nigeria and above Riyadh Saudi Arabia, saying the
threat of violence from extremist, in particular, was serious
drawback to living in Jakarta. Bombings targeting foreign
interests in Jakarta, such as the JW Marriot hotel bombing
in 2003, have been repeated elsewhere in the city.
The report said despite problem common to many
developing cities such as the risk of disease, poor
sanitation, and excessive pollution, Indonesia can be an
enticing location.
In response, the Jakarta administration took the
report positively, saying it could spur the administration to
improve its performance.64
(Simplified from www.thejakartapost.com/news/2009/04/15/)
2) Hortatory Exposition
Hortatory text is one text type of argumentative
genres which has function to persuade readers. Since it is
one type of argumentative passages, it is very similar to
analytical exposition both hortatory and analytical
exposition state thesis as the introduction. Both present
argumentation to support the stated thesis. However,
63 http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2009/05/example-of-analytical-exposition-
in.html
64 www.thejakartapost.com/news/2009/04/15/
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hortatory exposition makes the argumentation into a higher
level. It is closed by certain recommendation and this
makes hortatory exposition differ from analytical
exposition. Hortatory exposition can be seen in various
functional text. It can be formed of sales letter, advertising
slogan, speech, or letter to editor. The following example of
hortatory exposition is simplified from a letter issued in The
Jakarta Post which was written by Tomas Lasam Manila. 65
Hortatory Exposition Paragraph
SHOULD MUSIC BE COMPULSORY IN JUNIOR
HIGH SCHOOL?
Statement of position
I believe that music should be compulsory in Junior
High School. Firstly, Everyone likes music of some kind
music is enjoyable.
Argument 1
Secondly, the music industry is very popular in our
society and the music industry is a very big one. It is
importantto know something about it.
Argument 2
Thirdly, learning to ply music and to ply an
instrument helps you with other subjects. Studies have
shown this playing an instrument is interesting and
enjoyable. Also, songs tell stories, help us with English and
make us happy.
Recommendation
In conclusion, for the above reasons, I believe that
music should be compulsory in Junior High School.66
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65 http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2010/01/example-of-hortatory-text-in-letter-
to.html 66
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d. Recount
Recount is a piece of text that retells past events, usually
in the order in which they occured.67
Its purpose is either to
inform or to entertain the audience. There is no complication
among the participants and that differentiates from narrative.68
Recount Paragaraph
My Rush Time as a Journalist
I usually woke up at eight o'clock a.m. and went to the
Press Center to check the daily schedule of briefings and press
conferences. It was usually held by the United Nation officials
or disaster mitigation team.
It was challenging to visit different refugee camps to find
soft stories, human interest stories. After that I went back to the
Press Center to cover the press conferences of the day.
It was heart breaking when I saw these survivors fight for
food and secondhand clothing. Unfortunately as they said, the
food and clothing were limited and inadequate. Emerging to
glaring, fool noon, it was time to go back to Press Center to
write stories and race against time. I was always fearing that
the internet would come crushing down.
After everything was done, only then I remembered to
eat. Most times, I only ate once a day because I always had to
rush and again it was difficult to find food. I had to travel quite
far. I needed to spend a 30 to 45 minutes by car just to find
fresh food.69
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journalists-diary.html
67 Mark Andrean, and Kathy Anderson, Text Types in English, … p. 24
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e. Report
Report is a piece of text that presents information about a
subject.70
It is as a result of systematic observation and
analysis.71
Report Paragraph
MANGROVE
A mangrove is a tropical marine tree. Mangroves have
special aerial roots and salt-filtering tap roots which enable
them to thrive in brackish water. Brackish water is salty but not
as salty as sea water. Mangrove trees are commonly planted
and found in coastal areas. Mangroves can serve as walls of
protection for natural disaster in coastal area like tsunami
According to healthy mangrove forests had helped save lives in
the Asia disaster tsunami and people tended to respect these
natural barriers even more, especially after the tsunami.
There are several species of mangrove tree found all over
the world. Some prefer more salinity, while others like to be
very-close to a large fresh water source such as river. Some
prefer areas that are sheltered from waves. Some species have
their roots covered with sea water every day during high tide.
Other species grow on dry land but are still part of the
ecosystem reported that rare species of mangrove had been
found and was also known as the looking-glass tree, probably
because the leaves are silver-coated. Mangroves need to keep
their trunk and leave above the surface of the water. Yet they
also need to be firmly attached to the ground so they are not
moved by waves.
Any part of root that appears above the water flows
oxygen to the plant under water surface. As the soil begin to
build up, these roots procedure additional roots that become
embedded in the soil.72
70 Mark Andrean, and Kathy Anderson, Text Types in English, ... p. 17
71 http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2007/12/what-is-report.html
72http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2010/01/example-of-report-text-about-
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f. News Item
A News Item text is a text which is grouped into the text
genre of narration. The main function of narration is is telling
stories or informing about events in chronological order. The
order in the narration can be based of time, place and the events
them selves.73
News Item Paragraph
An Indonesian migrant worker Munti Binti Bani has died
on Monday after being hospitalized for several days due to
alleged torture by her employees in Selangor, Malaysia. Antara
state news agency has reported that Munti had been treated at
Tengku Ampuan Rahimah hospital since last Tuesday and died
on Monday at 10 a.m, local time. Munti was found unconscious
with her hands and feet were tied in a bathroom in Taman
Sentosa housing complex last Tuesday. She was suffering from
major wounds on her body and had apparently been beaten
with iron.
Munti's body will be sent tomorrow to her hometown in
Pondok Jeruk Barat village of Jombang, East Java after
undergoing autopsy at the hospital. “We express our deep
condolences as there is yet another worker who was tortured
and passed away at the hospital,” Indonesia's Ambassador for
Malaysia, Da'i Bachtiar said in Kuala Lumpur on Monday.
“The Embassy will arrange for all compensation, including
insurance, she deserves to receive,” Da'i said. He added that
Munti's employees Vanitha and Murugan had been detained
and were undergoing questioning at the local police office.
“We hope the police can uphold justice and punish them should
they be proven to be involved in the case,” he said.74
Composed from:
www.thejakartapost.com/news/2009/10/26/another-migrant-worker-dies-
alleged-torture-malaysia.html
73http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2009/11/understanding-news-item-text.html
74 http://understandingtext.blogspot.com/2009/10/contoh-example-of-news-item-text-
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g. Anecdote
Anecdote is a text which retells funny and unusual
incidents in fact or imagination. Its purpose is to entertain the
readers.75
Anecdote Paragraph
There was a black family in Scotland years ago. They
were Clark family with nine children. They had a dream to go
to America. The family worked and saved. They were making
plan to travel with their children to America. It had taken
several years but finally they had saved enough money. They
had gotten passport. They had booked seats for the whole
family member in a new liner to America.
The entire family was full of anticipation and excitement
with their new life in America. However few days before their
departure, the youngest son was bitten by a dog. The doctor
sewed up the boy. Because of the possibility of getting rabies,
there were being quarantined for long days. They were in
quarantine when the departure time came. The family dreams
were dashed. They could not make the trip to America as they
had planned. The father was full of disappointed and anger. He
stomped the dock to watch the ship leaved without him and his
family. He shed tears of disappointment. He cursed both his
son and God for the misfortune.
Five days latter, the tragic news spread throughout
Scotland. The ship, the mighty Titanic, had shank. It took
hundreds of passenger and crew with it. Titanic which had been
called the unsinkable ship had sunk. It was unbelievable but it
was.
The Clak family should have been on that ship, but
because of the bitten son by a dog, they were left behind. When
the father heard the news, he hugged the son and thanked him
for saving the family. He thanked God for saving their lives. It
was a blessing behind a tragedy.
(Adapted from Look Ahead 2).
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5. Memahami makna teks fungsional pendek dan esei sederhana berbentuk report, narrative dan analytical exposition dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari dan untuk mengakses ilmu pengetahuan
Menulis
6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional pendek dan esei sederhana report, narrative dan analytical exposition dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari
5.2 Merespon makna dan langkah
retorika dalam esei yang menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari dan untuk
Merespon makna dalam teks
fungsional resmi dan tak resmi yang menggunakan ragam bahasa lisan secara akurat, lancar dan berterima dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari untuk mengakses ilmu.
Noun phrase
Ajectve clause
Teks tulis berbentuk narrative
Teks tulis berbentuk report
Teks tulis berbentuk analytical exposition
Membaca nyaring bermakna teks narrative/report/analytical exposition secara individu
Mendiskusikan berbagai aspek dari teks seperti isi, struktur teks, secara berkelompok.
Berlatih menggunakan kalimat simple present untuk menyatakan fakta dan kalimat kompleks yang menggunakan modal untuk menyatakan opini
Membuat draft teks naratif,berita atau deskripsi dengan melakukan chain writing.
Melakukan koreksi teman sejawat untuk menyempurnakan draft.
Menyempurnakan draft berdasarkan hasil koreksi teman.
Mengidentifikasi makna kata dalam teks yang dibaca.
Mengidentifikasi komplikasi dalam sebuah cerita narasi
Mengidentifikasi kejadian dalam teks yang dibaca
Mengidentifikasi ciri-ciri dari benda/orang yang dilaporkan
Mengidentifikasi kasus yang dibahas dalam teks
Mengidentifikasi argument yang diberikan
Mengidentifikasi langkah-langkah retorika dari teks
Mengidentifikasi tujuan komunikasi teks dibaca
Menggunakan kalimat adjective clause dalam menyampai sebuah berita
Menggunakan kalimat adjective phrase dalam membuat sebuah report
Menghasilkan teks berbentuk report
Menghasilkan teks berbentuk narrative
Menghasilkan teks berbentuk analytical exposition
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2 x 45
2 x 45
2 x 45
4 x 45
1 x 45
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Menulis
11 Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional pendek dan esei sederhana narrative, spoof, dan hortatory exposition dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari
11.1 Merespon makna dalam teks
fungsional pendek (misalnya banner, poster, pamphlet, dll.) resmi dan tak resmi yang menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima dalam konteks kehidupan sehari-hari
12.1 Mengungkapkan makna dalam bentuk teks fungsional pendek (misalnya banner, poster, pamphlet, dll.) resmi dan tak resmi dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima dalam konteks
banner, poster, pamphlet
Membaca nyaring bermakna sebuah banner, poster, pamphlet secara individu
Mendiskusikan isi teks yang dibaca secara berpasangan.
Mendiskusikan ciri-ciri gramatikal yang digunakan dalam teks yang dibaca secara berkelompok.
Menuliskan sebuah banner, poster, pamphlet secara berkelompok dan mempublikasikanny di lingkungan sekolah
Membaca nyaring bermakna wacana ragam tulis yang dibahas dengan ucapan dan intonasi yang benar
Mengidentifikasi topic dari teks yang dibaca
Mengidentifikasi informasi tertentu dari banner, poster, pamphlet
Menggunakan tata bahasa, kosa kata, tanda baca, ejaan, dan tata tulis dengan akurat
Menulis gagasan utama
Mengelaborasi gagasan utama
Membuat draft, merevisi, menyunting
Menghasilkan banner, poster, atau pamphlet
Performans Tertulis (PG dan Uraian) Quiz Tugas Tugas unjuk kerja
(8 x 45)
1 x 45
1 x 45
2 x 45
2 x 45
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