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ALL COMMENTS - Draft ISPMs for member consultation, June 2008 DRAFT ISPM: FRUIT FLY TRAPPING (proposed Annex 1 to ISPM No. 26 (Establishment of pest free areas for fruit flies (Tephritidae)) Section Para grap h no. Location Comment type Comment Explanation Country 0. GENERAL COMMENTS G Los comentarios realizados a este proyecto de NIMF, están hechos sobre la versión al español del proyecto. Mexico 1. GENERAL COMMENTS G Technical Table of Acronyms would be useful The references included at the end of the annex could be placed in the relevant sections of the annex to help the reader if they wished to access specific information (for example, in the trap deployment section (3.4.2). An explanation of the change from a proposed appendix to ISPM 26 would be useful as this changes the nature of the guidance provided from a reference document to a prescriptive part of the standard. It is also noted that this proposed annex has broader application than just PFA for fruit flies. Determining and documenting, with confidence, the incidence of fruit flies in a defined area is essential for establishing pest free areas, areas of low pest prevalence, pest free production sites and places of production and also has application in systems approaches. Consideration should be given to the appropriate placement of this annex. Should it be a standard it Australia

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ALL COMMENTS - Draft ISPMs for member consultation, June 2008DRAFT ISPM: FRUIT FLY TRAPPING (proposed Annex 1 to ISPM No. 26 (Establishment of pest free areas for fruit flies (Tephritidae))

Section Paragraph no.

Location Comment type

Comment Explanation Country

0. GENERAL COMMENTS

G Los comentarios realizados a este proyecto de NIMF, están hechos sobre la versión al español del proyecto.

Mexico

1. GENERAL COMMENTS

G Technical Table of Acronyms would be usefulThe references included at the end of the annex could be placed in the relevant sections of the annex to help the reader if they wished to access specific information (for example, in the trap deployment section (3.4.2).

An explanation of the change from a proposed appendix to ISPM 26 would be useful as this changes the nature of the guidance provided from a reference document to a prescriptive part of the standard. It is also noted that this proposed annex has broader application than just PFA for fruit flies. Determining and documenting, with confidence, the incidence of fruit flies in a defined area is essential for establishing pest free areas, areas of low pest prevalence, pest free production sites and places of production and also has application in systems approaches. Consideration should be given to the appropriate placement of this annex. Should it be a standard it its own right or modified as relevant for insertion into each of the fruit fly interpretive standards as an annex? A determination on its placement will be necessary before final text can be agreed as the introductory section will need to be broad (if applicable to all relevant standards without modification) or narrower and in the context of the specific standard (if a separate annex to each standard).  Alternative introductory text is suggested.

Australia

2. GENERAL COMMENTS

G 1 Considerar este proyecto como un Apendice de las NIMF relacionadas (26 y 30 y próximas) para no ser prescriptivo.  2 Tiene que estar referido también a (monitoreo, detección, delimitación), no solo a encuesta de

Costa Rica

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delimitación.

3. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive In view of the kind of information this project deals with, it should not be a dictating document (e.g. a standard or an Annex of a standard, as proposed), but an Appendix to ISPM No. 26 or another type of document, such as a technical handbook.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

4. GENERAL COMMENTS

G

Restructure the whole annex and treat the paragraphs from 32 to 148 (incl.) as appendix to this annex

Such information is just for reference but not an integral part of the annex.

China

5. GENERAL COMMENTS

G

1)       Consider location as an appendix of related ISPMs (26 and 30 and the new coming).2)       This document refers to other surveys (monitoring, detection, delimiting in infested areas), but only delimiting surveys for free areas were developed (point 5), it is necessary to include also clear instructions on the two remaining trapping surveys and delimitation surveys for contaminated areas.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

6. GENERAL COMMENTS

G ANNEX 1 to ISPM No. 26

Substantive APPENDIX or separate text into an Annex and an Appendix

Much of the information contained in the proposed Annex 1 to ISPM No. 26 is non-prescriptive such as Section 3. 1, 3.2, 3.3.  Either the document should be an Appendix in its entirety, as originally planned, or the non-prescriptive information should be moved to an Appendix to the Standard.

Canada

7. GENERAL COMMENTS

G Technical Debería incluirse en el glosario la definición de área infestada.

Las áreas de baja prevalencia (ABPP) son áreas infestadas.

Peru

8. GENERAL COMMENTS

G Suggest linking to 3.2

Substantive Include a note indicating that many chemicals are not approved for use in traps in certain regions/countries.  Suggest to link this note to section 3.2.   Also, is it necessary to include a footnote to indicate that inclusion of brand names does not imply endorsement (like for diagnostic protocols)? We recommend to avoid brand names as much as

European Commission and its 27 member states (EC), EPPO

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possible.   Although ISPM 26 is generic for all fruit flies, this annex introduces a number of requirements which are not appropriate for all types of tephritid fruit flies (Para 197 and 198 for example). It might be appropriate to include examples for temperate fruit flies in Figures 20 and 21 such as Rhagoletis.   If the annex is not relevant to temperate fruit flies it should be stated.The text needs to be reviewed again to address consistency, formatting and editorial issues. For example see comment on table 2, descriptions of traps could be clearer, there are new terms such as trappers (165, 172), control brigades (165) and screeners (207) - if they all have vital roles, then should these be defined, otherwise they could be described as personnel involved in servicing traps, applying control measures or supervising activities etcThere is also overuse of the word “proper” (156 x2, 168, 169, 174, 204, 205, 206; suggest global replacement with “an appropriate”). Need to also address the definition and appropriate application of the terms 'attractants' and 'lures'. 

ISPMs should not direct NPPOs, so there should be a global change of “To be used for the following ... (Table 2)” to “[trap types] are used for  [fruit fly species]” and only refer to Table 2 if a number of species in a genus or all fruit fly species listed in the table are relevant.  These changes have not all been filled in the template below.The use of the term incursion and its interpretation in paras 7, 166 and 195 does not seem to fit with the IPPC definition. An outbreak in this text is deemed to be actionable, but the text talks about eradication of an incursion.Repeated text in the descriptions of the traps which refers to tables 3 and 4 (attractants and rebaiting)

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Technical

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Technical

and table 5 (scenarios and densities) could be put in a chapeau for them all. This would minimise repetition. These have not been filled in the template below.Is there a need for a separate section on identification? It is referred to in the main text of the standard under trapping procedures (ISPM 26, section 2.2.1 Trapping procedures). There is reference to evaluation of identification capability in para 207, but no guidance on identification. The tables (2, 3 & 4) should be placed after the terminology is explained e.g. Table 2 after 3.1.2.  Why is reference not always given to the replacement (servicing) of killing agents??

9. GENERAL COMMENTS

G Editorial Substantive Technical

Consider if the use of exclusion is appropriate for this standard. In the FF stds – ‘maintenance of pest freedom’ or ‘specified level’ is commonly used. Exclusion really refers to action taken outside of the area preventing entry.Regarding the terms Commercial / Primary / Wild/ Secondary / Occasional agreement is needed on the meanings of this terms Either change Annex to Appendix or have as an Annex with the trap information (3.3) removed to an AppendixNeed to be aware that specifying commercial products may be seen as endorsing certain products and thereby causing impediment of other suppliers etc entering the market.

Consistency with other App's New Zealand

10. SPECIFIC COMMENTS

116 a Technical

Technical

Add new paragraph including text and illustration describing the green sphere trap (GS) mentioned on Tables 3b and 5f

1. As regards paragraph [160], it is indicated that the opposite might occur2. With respect to paragraph [160], some publications indicate that the opposite might occur.

Modify section on McPhail traps

It is necessary to describe this type of trap because it is also used as a trapping device for Toxotrypana species

When different specific attractants are placed in the same tree, there is no interference with the attracting ability, because the fly responds to the specific attractant. Therefore, both situations should be defined, not just one.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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77 - 89Technical Define use of “McPhail traps” or “McPhail type

traps” in paras. 77 to 89, if appropriate

11. SPECIFIC COMMENTS

S 116 a

160

77 - 89

1. Technical

2. Technical

3. Technical

1. Incluir en nuevo párrafo un texto y figura que describa la trampa de esfera verde (GS) la cual aparece indicada en la tabla 3b y 5f 2. Con relación a lo expresado en párrafo [160] se indica que puede ocurrir lo contrario.2. Con relación a lo expresado en párrafo [160] Alguna literatura señala  que puede ocurrir lo contrario.  3. Modificar sección sobre trampas McPhail

1. Es necesario describir este tipo de trampa porque también se utiliza como un dispositivo de trampeo para el género Toxotrypana 2. Si se colocan atrayentes específicos diferentes en un mismo árbol no ocurre interferencia con la capacidad de atracción porque la mosca responde al atrayente específico. Por lo tanto se debe definir claramente ambas situaciones y no solamente una.  3. Definir el uso ya sea de “trampas McPhail” o “trampas tipo McPhail” en los párrafos 77 al 89, si procede.

Mexico, Costa Rica

12. SPECIFIC COMMENTS

S Substantive

Substantive

Tables “5” give trap densities for a range of the fruit flies identified in the annex however there are no tables for Dacus spp. As with all fruit fly standards there still is the requirement for the standard reference to hosts. Section 3.4.1 has “fruit hosts”, “commercial and wild hosts” and section 3.4.2 has “primary, secondary and occasional hosts” as examples. Was there agreement within the technical panel on fruit flies as to what terms should be agreed and used in fruit fly standards? These should be applied in this annex.

Australia

13. SPECIFIC COMMENTS

S Technical Generally Bactrocera spp occurs in the Asia Pacific region but only one reference from the region are included in the selected list.According to Drew and Hopper, 1981, B.cucumis is a fruit fly species currently known to occur only in Australia and it is not attracted to CUE.

Self-explanatory New Zealand

14. TITLE 1 Substantive Guidelines for Fruit fly trapping Australia

15. TITLE 1 Title Substantive Guidelines for Fruit Fly trapping Clarity New Zealand

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16. CONTENTS 2 Before row 1 Substantive Add new paragraph befote row 1:EndorsementAbbreviations

This Standard was adopted by ……… Vietnam

17. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

3 Change title Unknown FRUIT FLY TRAPPING SCOPE Should not rewrite the same title Vietnam

18. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 Sentence 2 Substantive Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the fruit fly status of the target areas, which can be either an infested areas, an areas of low pest prevalence (ALPPs), or a pest free areas (PFAs)

This Standard describes the requirement for the establishment of pest free areas for fruit flies

Vietnam

19. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 Whole para Editorial This annex provides detailed information for trapping surveys under different conditions scenarios of pest population and control situations for different fruit fly species (Tephritidae) of economic importance. Specific Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the fruit fly phytosanitary status of the target area, which can be either an infested area, an area of low pest prevalence (ALPP), or a pest free area (PFA). The information in this annex can therefore be applied to other ISPMs relating to fruit flies. The annex describes the most widely used trapping systems and procedures; nevertheless, there might be are others available that may be applied to obtain equivalent results for fruit fly surveys.

Clearer wording and align with the following paragraphs90

International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA)

20. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 This annex provides detailed information for trapping surveys under different scenarios of pest population and control situations for different fruit fly species (Tephritidae) of economic importance. Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the fruit fly status of the target area, which can be either an infested area, an area of low pest prevalence (ALPP), or a pest free area (PFA).

Texto innecesario Mexico

21. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 1. Editorial This annex appendix provides detailed information for trapping surveys under different scenarios

1)       To clarify and adjust language 

COSAVE, Argentina,

Section Paragraph no.

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2. Technical

3. Technical

4. Editorial

situations of pest  population and control situations for different fruit fly species (Tephritidae) of economic importance. Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the technical feasibility, the species of fruit fly and their population levels status of in the target area, which can be either an infested area, an area of low pest prevalence (FF-ALPP), or a pest free area (FF-PFA).....

 2)       Different trapping procedures depend also of the technical feasibility. 3)       Target is not applied to areas in IPPC language. 4)       Add FF before the type of area

Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

22. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 Replace para with 3 paras

Substantive This annex provides detailed information for trapping surveys under different scenarios of pest population and control situations for different fruit fly species (Tephritidae) of economic importance. Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the fruit fly status of the target area, which can be either an infested area, an area of low pest prevalence (ALPP), or a pest free area (PFA). The information in this annex can therefore be applied to other ISPMs relating to fruit flies. The annex describes the most widely used trapping systems and procedures; nevertheless, there are others available that may be applied to obtain equivalent results for fruit fly surveys. on the materials, procedures and operating systems for conducting surveys for fruit flies   (Tephritidae) using traps.   Surveys are used to detect and potentially quantify the number of fruit flies in a defined area.   Survey data may be used to support or verify the official status of fruit fly free areas (PFA), areas of low pest prevalence (ALPP), pest free production sites or places of production, or may be integrated into a systems approach for fruit fly management to meet phytosanitary requirements of an importing NPPO. Different trapping systems and procedures should be used depending on the fruit fly status of the target area.   Most often, fruit fly surveys

Provides a broader introduction to the annex to enable its application to other situations than PFA. 

Australia

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are used to detect, delimit or monitor fruit flies of economic importance. The system design should support the purpose and outcome sought by the survey.   It should take into account relevant aspects of fruit fly biology and behaviour, trap and lure efficacy, the hosts and environment in the area and the level of confidence in survey outcomes to be achieved.  The information in this annex can be used by NPPOs to aid them in developing PFAs and ALPPs in line with guidance provided in other ISPMs relating to fruit flies.   It describes the most widely used trapping systems including materials such as traps and lures, trapping densities, delimiting surveys as well as procedures including evaluation and audit, data capture and analysis.   There are other systems and procedures in use that may be applied to obtain equivalent results for fruit fly surveys.

23. FRUIT FLY TRAPPING

4 3rd sentence??Last line

Editorial “…information in this annex can be used by NPPOs to aid them in developing PFAs or ALPPs in accordance with guidance provided in ISPM No.s 26 and 30.”Delete “equivalent” and insert “equally valid”

clarity & accurancy????

New Zealand

24. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

5 Editorial technical

Trapping Survey Objectives Types and Control Situations

Clearer wording and align with the following paragraphs

IAEA

25. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

5 Title Technical 1.       Trapping Survey Objectives and control pest population situations

Changes in the text have been performed to clarify and adjust language to ISPMs No.5, 6 and 8

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

26. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

5 Oración 1 Editorial Objetivos de la encuestas del trampeo y situaciones de control

La palabra encuesta está más relacionada con entrevistas Acorde a NIMF 5, 6 y 8

Mexico

27. 1. Trapping Survey 5 Fila, 1 Technical Objetivos de la encuesta de trampeo y situaciones Lugar más apropiado. Peru

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Objectives and … de control Las situaciones de control deberían presentarse como un punto separado  

28. 1. TRAPPING SURVEY OBJECTIVES

6 First sentence Substantive Depending on the pest status, trapping survey objectives can be one or combination of the three mentioned objectives below:

To capture wide array of situations Philippines

29. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

6 Whole para Editorial Depending on the pest status, tThere are three types objectives of trapping surveys:-To verify the characteristics of the pest population, monitoring surveys, to verify the characteristics of the pest population. ., should be implemented.-To determine if the pest is present in an area, detection surveys, to determine if the pest is present in an area. should be implemented.-To determine the boundaries of an area considered to be infested or free from the pest, delimiting surveys, to determine the boundaries of an area considered to be infested by or free from the pest. should be implemented.

Clearer wording and align with the following paragraphs

IAEA

30. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and

6

El trampero tiene por objetivo general determinar la ausencia o presencia de la mosca de la futa en un área determinada.

Adicionar texto Mexico

31. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

6 1. Parrafo nuevo (antes de , oracion, 1)-, Tecnico,

2. viñeta, 1-Tecnico ,

3. viñeta, 2 - tecnico,

Technical 1. El trampeo tiene como objetivo general determinar la presencia o ausencia de la mosca de la fruta en una determinada área geográfica.Existen tres objetivos de las encuestas de trampeo, dependiendo del estatus de la plaga:2. -Para verificar las características de la población de la plaga, se deberían implementar encuestas de monitoreo. Para determinar si la especie objetivo de mosca de la fruta se encuentra presente en un área determinada, se deberá implementar encuestas de detección.3. - Para determinar si está presente una plaga en un área, se deberían implementar encuestas de detección. Cuando se determina que la plaga objetivo de mosca de la fruta se encuentra presente en un área determinada, se deberá implementar el

1. Se sugiere añadir la oración para detallar los objetivos generales de la encuesta antes de mencionar los objetivos específicos. 2. Orden más apropiado. Primero se define si existe la plaga o no (ver objetivo general): Encuesta de detección. 3. Una vez definida la presencia,  se hará encuesta de monitoreo o de delimitación.  

Peru

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trampeo de Monitoreo, el cual tiene como objetivo verificar sus características.- Para determinar........

32. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

6 Whole, paragraph

Editorial Depending on the pest status, there are three objectives of trapping surveys that should be implemented: -           Monitoring surveys: to To verify the characteristics of the pest population. , monitoring surveys should be implemented.-           Detection surveys: to To  determine if the pest is present in an area. , detection surveys should be implemented.-           Delimiting surveys: to To  determine the boundaries of an area considered to be infested or free from the pest, delimiting surveys should be implemented.

For clarity, avoid repetition Ghana

33. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

6 Whole, paragraph

Editorial Depending on the pest status, there are three objectives of trapping surveys that should be implemented: -           To verify the characteristics of the pest population, monitoring surveys should be implemented.-           To determine if the pest is present in an area, detection surveys should be implemented.-           To determine the boundaries of an area considered to be infested or free from the pest, delimiting surveys should be implemented.

For clarity, avoid repettion Zambia

34. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

6 All over the paragraph

Technical Regardless of the Depending on the pest status, there are three objectives for specific surveys, which are defined by their objectives, of trapping surveys: -           To verify the characteristics of the pest population: monitoring surveys should be implemented.-           To determine if the pest is present in an area, detection surveys should be implemented.-           To determine the boundaries of an area considered to be infested or free from the pest, delimiting surveys should be implemented as stated

Changes in the text have been performed to clarify and adjust language to ISPMs No.5, 6 and 8 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay,

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in ISPM No. 8: Pest Stauts in an area ; ISPM No 6:   Guidelines for surveillance and according to the definitions in ISPM No. 5 Glossary of phytosanitary terms.

35. 7 Substantive Add: dash point- or combination of the above types of control

To capture wide array of situations Philippines

36. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 1st indent, 2nd sentence

5th indent, 2nd sentence

Technical

Technical/editorial

Nevertheless, such a population should be monitored to determine if application of suppression measures are necessary

Once surveys have determined the nature and extent of the incursion and if the incursion is actionable, eradication surveys may be required to confirm that eradication measures have been successful.

It clarifies the sentence

Better wording

United States

37. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 1. Fouth Indent

2. Fouth Indent

1. Editorial

2. Substantive

1. Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures, and surveys are required to detect the entry of the pest.

Define “exclusion measures”

1. Abbreviation PFA alraedy defined in paragraph 4 Sentence 2

2. Either define “exclusion measures” or use ISPM No 4 Paragraph 1.2.2 that refers to “ phytosanitary measures”, terms.

South Africa

38. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 Whole para Editorial There are five types of control situations where trapping surveys should be applied:-No control. The pest population is present but not subject to any suppression measures. Nevertheless, such a population should be monitored Monitoring surveys are required to verify the characteristics of the pest population before the initiation of suppression measures.-Suppression. The pest population is present and subject to control measures and .Monitoring surveys are required to monitor evaluate the efficacy of these measures.-Eradication of established population. The pest population is present and subject to control measures. and Monitoring surveys are required to monitor determine the progress towards eradication

Clearer wording and align with the following paragraphs

IAEA

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of the pest population.-Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures. , and Detection surveys are required to detect the an eventual entry of the pest. -Eradication of incursion. After detection of an incursion has been determined in a PFA by the detection survey, (any type of detection prior to determining if it is an outbreak) of the target pest, are required. Once surveys have delimiting surveys should be implemented to verify d the nature and extent of the incursion. and iIf it is actionable (an outbreak), eradication monitoring surveys may be are required to determine the progress towards its eradication so that the area could eventually get its reinstatement as a PFA.

39. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 1st sentence

suppression

Exclusion

Technical

Technnical

Editorial

There are five types of control situations where trapping surveys should may be applied:The pest population is present and subject to control measures, and surveys are required to monitor the determine the timing, duration and sometimes efficacy of these measures.

The pest population is absent, the (pest free area (PFA)) is under exclusion measures, and surveys are required to detect the entry of the pest.

There may be other options.

In area-wide programs traps might indicate control efficacy, but at the individual farm level they may provide little indication of control success as they can attract flies from considerable distances beyond the farm boundary.  This is a risk in some situations.Also verify ongoing freedom, essential in re-instatement following corrective action

Australia

40. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 1. [6a   2. Todas las viñetas - Tecnico   (Nueva redacción)  

Technical 1. 2. Situaciones de control Son cinco los tipos de situaciones de control para los cuales se deberían aplicar encuestas de trampeo:  2. -Ningún control. La plaga está presente, pero no está sujeta a ninguna medida de control. Sin embargo, la población de la plaga debería ser monitoreada antes de iniciar las medidas de supresión.-Supresión. Proceso utilizado para obtener Áreas de Baja Prevalencia. La población de la plaga está presente y está sujeta a intensivas medidas de control con la finalidad de reducir la población

1. Lugar más apropiado. Para mayor claridad debe estar separado de objetivos de la encuesta.  2.Bajo el párrafo de Situaciones de control. Modificaciones de todas la viñetas para dar más claridad y precisión en las situaciones de control.

Peru

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plaga de moscas de la fruta, limitar sus daños y dispersión. El trampeo se utiliza para monitorear la eficacia de dichas medidas.   -Erradicación . Proceso seguido para obtener Áreas Libres de mosca de la fruta. La plaga está presente en bajas densidades y las medidas de control aplicadas tienen como objetivo la eliminación de la plaga. Se aplica el trampeo para monitorear la eficacia de las medidas de erradicación. -Exclusión o Prevención. Proceso utilizado para minimizar el riesgo de introducción de la especie objetivo de   mosca de la fruta en el Área Libre. La plaga está ausente, el área libre de plagas (ALP) se encuentra bajo medidas de exclusión o prevención. El trampeo se aplica para detectar oportunamente el ingreso de la plaga y confirmar o rechazar la condición de área Libre. Acciones correctivas. Tras la detección de una incursión de la plaga objetivo de mosca de la fruta en el ALP, se deberá aplicar encuestas de delimitación. Una vez que se hayan determinado la naturaleza y extensión de la incursión y, si se precisa de acción (brote), se aplicará medidas de erradicación (como parte del Plan de Acciones Correctivas)

41. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 1.Sentence 1

2. Indent 4  

3. Indent 5

1. Editorial

2. Technical

3. Editorial

There are five types of control pest situations where trapping surveys should be applied:  - Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures, and surveys are required to detect the entry of the pest.  

 - Eradication of incursion. After detection of an incursion (any type of detection prior to determining if it is an outbreak) of the target pest, A pest population has been detected and

1. Replace the word control by pest for clarity.  2. For clarity – Please note that exclusion measures according to ISPM No. 10 Section 2.2.2 means physical barriers, screen, control on equipment, machinery, plants, soil and growing media which does not seem to fit the use of this word under indent 4. The words “exclusion measures” are not used in ISPM No. 26. 3. For consistency with the text in the previous indents.

Canada

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delimiting surveys are required. Once surveys have determined the nature and extent of the incursion and if it is actionable (an outbreak), eradication surveys may be required.

42. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 editorial

-           Exclusion. The pest population is absent, PFAis under exclusion measures, and surveys are required to detect the entry of the pest.  

Abbreviation PFA already defined  in paragraph 4 sentence 2. It is proponed that  exclusión measures be defined with refernce to ISPM no. 4 paragraph 1.2.2. that refers to phytosanitary measures.

Zambia, Ghana

43. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 4th point Editorial Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures, measures are employed to ensure that the area remains pest free and surveys are required to detect the entry of the pest.

Clarification Trinidad and Tobago

44. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 Indent 4 

5th indent,

Editorial

Editorial

- Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures, and surveys are required to detect the possible entry of the pest.After detection of an incursion (any type of detection prior to determining if it is an outbreak) of the target pest, delimiting surveys are required. Once surveys have determined the nature and extent of the incursion and if it is actionable (an outbreak), eradication surveys may be required.

Because it is not sure the pest will ever enter the pest free area.

An incursion is included in the definition of an outbreak (A recently detected pest population, including an incursion, or a sudden significant increase of an established pest population in an area) The title of this indent is eradication of an incursion, so surely an incursion would be actionable?

EC, EPPO

45. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 All over the paragraph

Technical There are five types of control situations   regarding the   pest populations (fruit flies) where trapping surveys should be applied:-           No Pest status present, without control. The pest population is present but not subject to any suppression control measures. Nevertheless, such a population should be monitored before the initiation of suppression control measures.-           Pest status present, under Suppression. The pest population is present and subject to control measures, and surveys are  trapping is required to monitor the efficacy of these measures.

Control situation” is not a clear term and  in this text the concept managed is the status or situation of a pest. For clarification,” No control” has no meaning if not referred to the pest.  Language has been adjusted to incorporate language of ISPM No. 8.  

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

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-           Pest status present, under Eradication of established population. The pest population is present and subject to control measures, and surveys trapping is are required to monitor the progress towards eradication of the pest population. -           Pest   status absent, under Exclusion. The pest population is absent, the pest free area (PFA) is under exclusion measures, and surveys are trapping is required to detect the entry of the pest. -           Pest status transient, Eradication of incursion. After detection of an incursion (any type of detection prior to determining if it is an outbreak) of the target pest, delimiting surveys are required. Once surveys have determined the nature and extent of the incursion and if it is actionable (an outbreak), eradication surveys may be required.

46. 1. Trapping Survey Objectives and …

7 4th dashpoint Substantive Delete “exclusión” insert “Maintenance of pest absence or specified level”..last sentence ..... if it is feasible, eradication may be required.

Exclusión not used in ISPMs re FFs New Zealand

47. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Whole para Editorial Replace the paragraph by the following:T here are five possible scenarios illustrating the interaction of the three types of trapping surveys and the five control situations. Table 1 depicts which type of trapping survey is required for each specific control situation.

Clearer wording and align with the following paragraphs

IAEA

48. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Pest, absent Substantive - starting from a PFA where an incursion occurs, and where detection surveys have to be complemented with delimiting and monitoring surveys.

Need both a delimiting survey and a monitoring survey to ensure that FF have not come back.

Australia

49. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Technical Based on the status of the target pest, there are two possible starting points for trapping surveys: -           pest present – starting from an established population with no control and gradually progressing to a control situation, which in some cases progresses toward an ALPP and eventually may reach a PFA

There is no need to define scenarios, ISPM No. 8 is clear about pest status. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

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-           pest absent – starting from a  PFA where an incursion occurs, and where detection surveys have to be complemented with delimiting surveys.

50. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Indent 2 and new indent 3

Substantive indent 2:-          pest absent – starting from a PFA where the pest is absent and detection surveys are required to detect the entry of a pest.New indent 3:-          pest transient - starting from a PFA where an incursion occurs, and where detection surveys have to be complemented with delimiting surveys.

To capture the concepts of pest absence and transience as outlined in ISPM No. 8 under section 3.1.2 and 3.1.3.

Canada

51. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Viñeta 1 Technical plaga presente –iniciando con una población establecida ( Área Infestada)

Precisión Peru

52. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 Whole para Substantive Delete para 9 This paragraph does not influence the definition of the 5 trapping scenarios and it is rather confusing. Paragraphs 10, 11 and 12 must directly follow paragraphs 7 and 8.

EC, EPPO

53. 2. Trapping Scenarios 9 2nd dashpoint

Substantive and where detection surveys have to be complemented with delimiting and monitoring surveys.

accuracy New Zealand

54. 2. Trapping Scenarios 10 Technical Table 1 depicts which type of trapping survey is required for each specific control pest population situation.

See above COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

55. 2. Trapping Scenarios 10 Whole para Editorial Table 1 depicts which type of trapping survey is required for each specific control situation

Clearer wording and IAEA

56. 2. Trapping Scenarios 10 1st sentence editorial Table 1 provides information on which type of trapping survey is required for each specific control situation.

Better wording United States

57. 2. Trapping Scenarios 10 Table 1 technical Suggest to remove the table The paragraph below this table could easily contain all the information displayed in the table. Suggest removing the table as it is unnecessary.

United States

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58. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 After table 1 Substantive FTD = flies per trap per day (for further detail to see 3.4.6)

More clearly FTD Vietnam

59. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Whole table Editorial technical

Delete all FTD. Clearer wording. FTD does not add any essential information to the table. Moreover, FTD is mentioned at the end of the document so readers will notice its meaning until the end.

IAEA

60. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 New footnote for “FTD=flies per trap per day”

Editorial 1. see section 3.4.6 for more information Clarity China

61. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Top box of table

Editorial Control Pest situations To be consistent with proposed change in sentence 7.

Canada

62. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 1. Fila 2, Columna 5 2. Fila 2, Columna 6

Technical 1. Exclusión o prevención2. Erradicación de una incursión Acciones correctivas

1 y 2. Acorde con los cambios del párrafo 7. Peru

63. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Footnote to table

Editorial Add t footnote - (refer to section 3.4.6) clarity New Zealand

64. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Last row (annotation) Editorial

FTD=flies per trap per day refer to section 3.4.6 of this standard

Detailed explanation on FTD is made in section 3.4.6

Japan

65. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Technical Table 1. Matrix of the different trapping surveys required for different control pest populations situations

Changes reflect comments performed above and have been proposed to adapt the text to ISPM No. 8

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

66. 2. Trapping Scenarios: Table 1

11 Technical   Control Pest population situations

Trapping surveys

Pest present without control No control(FTD>Suppression any control

Pest present under Suppression(FTD>Eradication)

Pest present under Eradication of established population

Pest absent and under Exclusion(FTD=0)

Pest transient as incursion/ outbreak Eradication of incursion

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

Section Paragraph no.

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Comment Explanation Country

measure) (FTD~0) (FTD~0)

Monitoring A B C

Detection D

Delimiting EFTD = flies per trap per day.

67. 2. Trapping Scenarios 12 Sentence 1 Editorial technical

According to Table 1, there are five possible scenarios, illustrating the interaction of the three types of trapping surveys and the five control situations:Based on the status of the pest there are two possible starting scenarios which gradually may progress towards the subsequent scenario.-Pest present. Starting from an established population with no control (scenario A), and gradually progressing to a control situation, which in some cases progresses toward an ALPP (scenario B), and eventually, may reach a PFA (scenario C) -Pest absent. Starting from a PFA (scenario D) where an actionable incursion occurs (scenario E), and gradually progressing to a control situation aimed at reaching the PFA status again.

Clearer wording and align with the former paragraphs

IAEA

68. 2. Trapping Scenarios 12 Technical According to Table 1, there are five possible cases scenarios, illustrating the interaction of the three types of trapping surveys and the five pest population  control situations:-           Scenario Case A: uncontrolled population subject to monitoring surveys-           Scenario Case B: population under suppression subject to monitoring surveys-           Scenario Case C: population under eradication subject to monitoring surveys-           Scenario Case D: no population, detection surveys for exclusion in a FF-PFA-           Scenario Case E: incursion detected through ongoing detection surveys, therefore additional

See above, to be consistent with changes previously introduced on the text

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

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Comment Explanation Country

implementation of delimiting surveys.

69. 2. Trapping Scenarios 12 Todas las viñetas

Technical - Escenario A: Plaga presente sin control sujeta a encuestas de monitoreo. - Escenario B: Plaga presente bajo acciones de supresión. Se aplica encuestas de monitoreo.- Escenario C: Plaga presente bajo erradicación. Se aplica encuestas de monitoreo. - Escenario D: Plaga ausente, sujeta a encuestas de detección para prevenir su ingreso a una ALP- Escenario E: incursión detectada mediante constantes encuestas de detección, por lo cual se precisa implementar adicionalmente encuestas de delimitación.

No se requiere la palabra población. Peru

70. 2. Trapping Scenarios 12 New sentence at the end of paragraph 12 

Editorial Add after scenario E:Trapping densities are dependent on both scenario and the biology of the target Tephritidae, as explained above and associated Table 5.

There needs to be some explanation of why this list is present.

EC, EPPO

71. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

13 Change title Technical Trapping and Baits Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

In case, Trapping systems consist of attractants and killing agens. Particulaly, there is an ammonia source as baits in a trap

Vietnam

72. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

13 title

Trapping Systems - Materials Replace components with materials.  These are the physical components as opposed to the system procedures outlined in the next section.

Australia

73. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

13 Fila 1. Technical Sistemas de trampeo para encuestas de la vigilancia de moscas de la fruta

Las encuestas son procedimientos que forman parte de “vigilancia”. Se sugiere modificar también en el texto inglés.

Peru

74. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

13 Editorial Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys Clearer wording IAEA

75. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Editorial Trapping systems used for fruit fly surveillance surveys consist of the following components:-attractants (pheromones, para-pheromones and or food attractants)-killing agents (dry; wet; or bothdry or wet) -devices for trapping -procedures for use of the above items.

Clearer wording IAEA

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76. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Sentence 1 Technical Trapping and baits systems used for fruit fly surveys consist of the following components

In case, Trapping systems consist of attractants and killing agens. Particulaly, there is an ammonia source as baits in a trap

Vietnam

77. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1. Sentence 1

2. Indent 2

1. Editorial

2. Translation/Technical

Components used for fruit fly trapping systems used for fruit fly and surveys are consist of the following components:- attractants (pheromones, para-pheromones or food attractants)- killing agents (dry; wet; or dry or wet) - devices for trapping - procedures for use of the above items.

Los componentes que se utilizan en los sistemas de trampeo que se utilizan para y las encuestas de moscas de la fruta son consisten de los siguientes componentes:- atrayentes (feromonas, paraferomonas o atrayentes alimenticios)- agentes que matan aniquilantes (seco; húmedo; o seco o húmedo) - dispositivos para trampeo - procedimientos para uso de los anteriores.

1. Better wording of sentence improves text understanding.

2. More suitable term in Spanish

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

78. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1.Oración 1

2.Sangría 2

1. Editorial

2. Translation/ Technical

         Los componentes que se utilizan en los sistemas de trampeo que se utilizan para y las encuestas de moscas de la fruta son consisten de los siguientes componentes:-           atrayentes (feromonas, paraferomonas o atrayentes alimenticios)-           agentes que matan aniquilantes (seco; húmedo; o seco o húmedo) -           dispositivos para trampeo -           procedimientos para uso de los anteriores. 

1.Mejor estructura de la frase y mayor comprensión del texto  

2. Termino más adecuado al español

Mexico, Costa Rica

79. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 New sentence 0A

1st sentence

The effective use of traps in undertaking fruit fly surveys relies on the combined ability of the trap, lure or attractant and killing agent to attract and capture target fruit fly species and then to kill and preserve them for effective identification, counting, data collection and

Replace components with materials.  These are the physical components as opposed to the system

Australia

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4th dash point

analysis.Trapping systems used for fruit fly surveys consist of use the following components materials:

Delete

procedures outlined in the next section.

Procedures could start from 3.4 which could be changed to a new section 4 to separate materials from operations.

80. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Second Indent

Editorial - killing agents (dry; wet; or dry or wet) Delete “or” for clarity South Africa

81. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Editorial Editorial

killing agents (dry; wet; or dry or wet) attractants (pheromones, para-pheromones or attractants)

Delete or for clarity Remove attractant for consistency

Zambia

82. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1st indent editorial parapheromones Global change United States

83. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1. Indent 1

2. Indent 2

1. Editorial

2. Editorial

1. (Pheromones, para-pheromones or food attractants) 2. (dry; wet; or dry or wet)

1.        Unnecessary 

2.        Unecessary

China

84. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Technical Trapping systems used for fruit fly surveys consist of the following components:-           attractants (pheromones, para-pheromones or food attractants)-           killing agents in wet and dry traps (dry; wet; or dry or wet, with physical or chemical action ) -           devices for trapping -           procedures for use of the above items.

Language has been adjusted to clarify 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

85. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 Indent 1 and 2

Technical -               attractants (pheromones, para-pheromones or food attractants)-               killing agents (dry; wet; or dry or wet)

The deleted parts are addressed further in the standard (Section 3.2 and 3.3 – Para. 28 and 31) and the bracketed text behind killing agents is misplaced or wrong.   It is recommended to delete those parts as no bracketed text is provided for the other two indents and complete information is provided in the following sections.

Canada

86. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1.Oración 1 Editorial Technical

Los sistemas de trampeo que se utilizan para encuestas en la vigilancia de moscas de la fruta consisten de utilizan los siguientes componentes:

Las encuestas son procedimientos que forman parte de “vigilancia”. Se sugiere modificar también en el texto inglés.

Peru

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87. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

14 1st & 2nd dashpoint

Editorial remove bracket text unncessary New Zealand, Korea (Republic)

88. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

15 Sentence 1 Substantive The major A number of fruit fly species of economic importance, as they may be determined by pest risk analysis conducted by the NPPO of the importing country, and the attractants...

There is a broad span of potential economic impact in the species listed in the table and no reference to their relative impacts.  A PRA would determine the economic importance and help identify appropriate measures that would be underpinned by surveys.

Australia

89. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

15 Whole para Substantive Move para. 15 to after para.17 More appropriate location as Section 3.1 refers specifically to attractants and lures.

Canada

90. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys

15 Sentence 1 Substantive Many of the major fruit fly species of economic importance and the attractants commonly used to attract them are presented in Table 2. Presence or absence of a species from this table does not indicate a risk analysis has been performed and in no way is it indicative of the regulatory status of Tephritid species.

Rewrite. This is in no way a definitive list of economically important Tephritids – simple comparison with the 2 sheet wall chart produced by IAEA Fruit fly pests of the world is proof enough. As an example it illustrates seven Rhagoletis and this has only two. Note also next comment

EC, EPPO

91. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Row 2, 3 and 5

Substantive PA, 2C1 attractant Not necessary Vietnam

92. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 1. List of scientific names2. List of scientific names3. List of scientific names

1. Technical

2. Technical

3. Technical

1. Bactrocera cucurbitae (Croquillet) (Coquillett)

2. Ceratitis rosa (Karsh) (Karsch)

3. Myopardalis Myiopardalis pardalina (Bigot)

1. Spelling

2. Spelling

3. Spelling

South Africa

93. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Scientific Name

Technical Anastrepha serpentina PA Additional species Trinidad and Tobago

94. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys:

16 Sentence 1 Substantive Major A number of fruit fly species of economic importance and their attractants.

More accurate as may not be an exhaustive list and economic impact is related to determinations of the

Australia

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Table 2

B. cucumis

Lines 17-20

Technical

Technical

CUE, PA

PRA.  The economic importance of B. cucumis is questioned.  In accordance with the guidance provided in APPPC regional RSPM No. 4 (Guideliines for the confirmation of non-host staus of fruit and vegetables to Tephritid fruit flies) (Section 2.3) Australia is of the view that this species would, at best, be classed as a conditional non-host. The species requires specialist conditions to oviposit.  Even in naturally soft fruit the species is generally unable to penetrate most undamaged fruit.  For example, if rockmelons were to be targeted by the species for egg laying, the fruit would need to be over-ripe and pulling away from the stem causing a wound site for easy ovipositing.   In disinfestation trials undamaged fruit has had to be pierced to facilitate ovipositing prior to treatment delivery to ensure sufficient infestation to generate efficacy data.   The species has very limited potential hosts in mainly cucurbits for example choco, cucumber, pumpkin, squash, zucchini, rockmelon, pawpaw and tomato.

B. cucumis is not attracted to Cue-lure.Acronym PB not previously mentioned, assumed refers to PA

The list of CUE responding pest flies could be expanded to include B.frauenfeldi, B.trivialis, B.passiflorae and B.facialis as they are significant pest species in the South Pacific.  Need to determine if they are economically damaging species as per comment at para 16

95. 3. Trapping Systems 16 1. After 6 1. Substantive 1. Add a new specie after A. suspensa: 1. This species is of economic importance in tropical IAEA

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for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

2. After 17

3. After 21

2. Substantive

3. Substantive

Anastrepha serpentina (Wiedemann). Its attractant is PA

2. In B cucumis delete CUE and change PB by PA

3. After B. latifrons. Bactrocera citri ( B. minax )

areas

2. B. cucumis does not respond to CUE. PB is not in the footnotes but PA

3. These are the same insect: Names are synonyms.

96. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Table 2.Column 1, Scientific Name between rows 1 and 2. 2. Column 2, Attractant between rows 1 and 2

1. Technical

2. Technical

1. Anastrepha grandis

2. Attractant PA, 2C 1

1. Include in Table 2 this species of economical importance.

2. Specific attractant for proposed species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

97. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Tabla 2. En la columna 1 Nombre científico entre fila 1 y 2.   2. En la columna 2 Atrayente entre fila 1 y 2

1. Technical

2. Technical

1. Anastrepha grandis         2. Atrayente PA, 2C 1  

1. Incluir en la tabal 2especie por ser de importancia económica     2. Atrayente especifico para la especie propuesta.

Mexico,

98. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Tabla 2. En la columna 1 Nombre científico entre fila 1 y 2. 2. En la columna 2 Atrayente entre fila 1 y 2

1. Technical

2. Technical

1. Anastrepha grandis         2. Atrayente PA,  

1. Incluir en la tabal 2especie por ser de importancia económica     2. Atrayente especifico para la especie propuesta.

Costa Rica

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99. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16  Table 2 Technical Technical Technical

1. Batrocera cucurbitae (Croquillet) (Coquillett) 2. Ceratitis rosa (karsh) (karsch)3. Mytopardalis Myiopardalis pardalina

Wrong spelling Wrong spelling Wrong spelling

Ghana, Zambia

100. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 1. Technical

2. editorial

3. Technical

Add more species to the list:Bactrocera albistrigata (de Meijer )( 葡桃果 实 蝇 ) Anastrepha serpentina ( 山 榄按实蝇 ) Bactrocera aquilones ( 番荔枝果 实蝇 ) Bactrocera jarvici ( 澳洲果 实蝇 ) Bactrocera neohumeralis ( 褐肩果 实蝇 ) Bactrocera prifoliae Bactrocera cucumis (French)   CUE, PB PA Bactrocera citri (Chen)

1. Those are also major fruit fly species of economic importance    

2. Writing mistake 3. “Bactrocera citri (Chen)” is synonym to “Bactrocera oleae (Gmelin)”

China

101. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Whole para. (table 2.)

Substantive Move para. 16 to after para. 15 which has been moved to after para. 17.

More appropriate location as Section 3.1 refers specifically to attractants and lures.

Canada

102. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 1. Title 2. Whole table

3. Bottom of columns 1 and 2

1. technical 2. Editorial

3. Technical

1. Major fruit fly species of economic importance and their commonly used attractants 2. Move to after para 22 and re arrange into alphabetic order of scientific names.

3.Modify / Add : Rhagoletis cerasiAttractant:Butyl hexanoate (BuH), aAmmonium salts (AS), ammonium acetate (AA), ammonium bicarbonate (AC) 

According to Table 3a, Methyl euginol is not an attractant for females – misleading as written; the proposed text is consistent with text in 15 This table and the chapeau should be placed after 3.1. It is not clear why it has been placed in para 2.  The acronyms used to describe the attractants should be in a list at the front, or a key to the table and not muddled into parts of paragraph 3.

AC ammonium (bi)carbonate At R. cerasi butyl hexanoate is most probably a mistake. R. cingulata occurs in some ECropean countries on cherry and sour cherry, which is know to answer to ammonium salts, ammonium acetate and ammonium

EC

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Comment Explanation Country

Scientific Name:Rhagoletis cingulata (Loew) Attractant:Ammonium salts (AS), ammonium acetate (AA), ammonium bicarbonate (AC)

bicarbonate, just like R. cerasi.

103. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 1. Title 2. whole table

1. Technical 2. Editorial

1. Major fruit fly species of economic importance and their commonly used attractants 2. Move to after para 22 and re arrange into alphabetic order of scientific names.

According to Table 3a, Methyl euginol is not an attractant for females – misleading as written; the proposed text is consistent with text in 15 This table and the chapeau should be placed after 3.1. It is not clear why it has been placed in para 2.  the acronyms used to describe the attractants should be in a list at the front, or a key to the table and not muddled into parts of paragraph 3.

EPPO

104. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Alongside B cucumis in table

Editorial Technical

CUE, PB Refer to Drew and Hooper, 1981 – reference included in the selected references list. ??Typo?? Or Protein Bait? PB not noted in document. Should this read PA protein attractant??

New Zealand

105. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 add????B. cucumis

Substantive :Bactrocera albistrigata (de Meijere) for CUE listAnastrepha serpentinaBactrocera aquilonesBactrocera jarviciBactrocera neohumeralisBactrocera prifoliae B cucumis change PB to PA

Request TPFF to consider additions to list ??Typo?? Or Protein Bait? PB not noted in document

Korea (Republic)

106. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Technical Delete Bactrocera citri (Chen)  

Bactrocera citri (Chen) is synonym with Bactrocera minax (Enderlein). References are as follow,1. Norrbom, A.L., L.E. Carroll &A.Freidberg (1998)Status of knowledge. P. 101. In Thompson, F.C. (ed.), Fruit fly expert identification system and systematic information database. Myia 9, ix + 524 pp.2. White, I.M. & Elson-Harris, M.M. (1994) Fruit

Japan

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flies of economic significance; their identification and bionomics. Wallingford: CAB International. First published 1992; reprinted 1994 with addendum. P. 256

107. 3. Trapping Systems for Fruit Fly Surveys: Table 2

16 Whole table technical Bactrocera musae Not all Bactrocera that should be listed on the table are listed.In addition, parentheses have a specific meaning when used with names (i.e. a name in parenthesis indicates the authority that described the species, Without parenthesis, the name indicates the authority that described the genus). Not all the authorities seem to be correct on the table.

United States

108. 3.1 Attractants and lures

17 After para 17

Substantive Two new para. after para. 17:Para. 15:The major fruit fly species of economic importance and the attractants commonly used to attract them are presented in Table 2.And Table 2

More appropriate location. Canada

109. 3.1.1 Male specific 18 section Substantive Technical

Specifications on longevity of pheromone lures are very dependent upon manufacturer and inherent local environmental factors, and changes in formulation are driven by manufacturers and this is an unregulated industry. Some sources of lures may actually be ineffective in some inherent conditions, thus if these info are to be retained in the final ISPM there should be some caution included.Quality control of lures is an important issue. Need a section on this.

Accuracy New Zealand

110. 3.1.1 Male specific 19 Sentence 1 Editorial The most widely used attractants traps contain are para-pheromones attractants that are male specific

Clearer wording IAEA

111. 3.1.1 Male specific 19 1. First sentence 2. New second sentence

Technical The most widely used traps contain pheromone or para-pheromone attractants that are male specific. The pheromone Spiroketal captures Bactrocera oleae .  

No mention of pheromone mentioned in Table 4. EC, EPPO

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112. 3.1.1 Male specific 19 2nd row3rd row

Technicaltechnical

…(TML) captures species of the genus Ceratitis……a large number of species of Bactrocera…

More technically correctMore technically correct

United States

113. 3.1.1 Male specific 19 Sentence 3 Technical The most widely used traps contain para-pheromone attractants that are male specific. The para-pheromone trimedlure (TML) captures Ceratitis species (including C. capitata and C. rosa). The para-pheromone methyl eugenol (ME) captures a large number of Bactrocera species (including B. dorsalis, B. zonata, B. carambolae, B. philippinensis and B. musae, B. invadens).

Batrocera invadens  is an important  fruit fly Ghana,

114. 3.1.1 Male specific 19 Sentence 5A Substantive ....traps (Table 3a).  Examples are listed in Table 3a.

Indicates that this is a list and as such is not exhaustive – there may be other options as indicated in the introductory paragraph to the annex.

Australia

115. 3.1.2 Female biased 20 technical The most widely used traps contain para-pheromone attractants that are male specific. The para-pheromone trimedlure (TML) captures Ceratitis species (including C. capitata and C. rosa). The para-pheromone methyl eugenol (ME) captures a large number of Bactrocera species (including B. dorsalis, B. zonata, B. carambolae, B. philippinensis and B. musae, B. invadens).

include Batrocera invadens. Zambia

116. 3.1.2 Female biased 20 Title Editorial 3.1.2 Female-biased Inconsistent spelling of the word “female-biased”.  Para. 21 has the correct spelling with a hyphen.

Canada

117. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Sentence 1 Editorial Female-biased attractants are based on food or host odours  (natural, synthetic, liquid or dry) are based on food or host odours  (Table 3b)

Move to clarify meaning.  The words in brackets refer to the types of attractants rather than the host odours

Ghana, Zambia

118. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Insert new sentence before 1st sentence    

Technical Female specific pheromones/parapheromones are not usually commercially applicable (except, for example, the pheromone , 2-methyl-6-vinylpyrazine for Toxotrypana curvicauda ), therefore Ffemale-biased attractants are commonly used that are based on food or host odours

Further explanation on specific pheromones – based on table 4  

EC, EPPO

119. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Sentence 1 Editorial Female biased attractants (natural, synthetic, liquid or dry) are based on host odours (natural, synthetic,

Move to clarify meaning. The words in brackets refer to the types of attractants rather than the host

South Africa

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liquid or dry) (Table 3b) odours.

120. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 2nd row

4th row

Editorial

Technical/editorial

Historically, liquid protein attractants have been used to capture a wide range of different fruit fly species.

…sensitive as parapheromone-baited traps. In addition, the use of liquid attractants capture high numbers of non-target insects.

More appropriate use of the term

Global change and better wording

United States

121. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Sentence 3 Editorial These liquid attractants are generally not as sensitive as the para-pheromones traps

Clearer wording IAEA

122. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Oración 4 Substantive Dichos atrayentes líquidos son, por lo general, no tan selectivos como las trampas que utilizan paraferomonas

Redacción más clara Mexico

123. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Sentence 4

Sentence 6

Technical

Editorial

These liquid attractants are generally not as sensitive as less sensitive than the para-pheromone traps.

Move the last sentence of para 21 “Several food-based synthetic attractants have been developed using ammonia and its derivatives.” to become the first sentence of para 22 as they deal with the same subject.

Male lure traps are far more effective at catching flies than those with other attractants.

Provides context for the examples.

Australia

124. 3.1.2 Female biased 21 Oración 4 Editorial Technical

Las trampas que utilizan atrayentes líquidos, por lo general, no son tan sensibles como las trampas que utilizan paraferomonas.

Las trampas son las que tienen más o menos sensibilidad en la captura. En el caso que se quiera comparar solo los atrayentes se debería usar la palabra “especifidad”

Peru

125. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Sentence 1 Substantive For example, for capturing C. capitata a synthetic food attractant consisting of three-component attractants (ammonium acetate, putrescine and trimethylamine) is used

More clearly Vietnam

126. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Sentence 1

Sentence 2

1. Translation

2. Translation

For example, for capturing C. capitata a synthetic attractant consisting of three attractants (ammonium acetate, putrescine and trimethylamine) is used. For capture of Anastrepha species, the trimethylamine attractant may be removed. A synthetic attractant

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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will last approximately 6–10 weeks depending on climate conditions, captures few non-target insects and captures significantly less male flies, making this attractant suited for use in programmes releasing sterile flies.

Por ejemplo, para atrapar capturar C. capitata se utiliza un atrayente sintético compuesto por tres atrayentes (acetato de amonio, putrescina y trimetilamina). Para atrapar capturar especies de Anastrepha se podrá eliminar el atrayente de trimetilamina. Un atrayente sintético durará aproximadamente de 6 a 10 semanas, dependiendo de las condiciones del clima, captura pocos insectos no objetivo y considerablemente menos moscas macho, lo que hace que este atrayente sea adecuado para utilizar en programas de liberación de moscas estériles.

1. More suitable term in Spanish

2. More suitable term in Spanish

127. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Oración 1  

Oración 2

1. Translation

2. Translation

Por ejemplo, para atrapar capturar C. capitata se utiliza un atrayente sintético compuesto por tres atrayentes (acetato de amonio, putrescina y trimetilamina). Para atrapar capturar especies de Anastrepha se podrá eliminar el atrayente de trimetilamina. Un atrayente sintético durará aproximadamente de 6 a 10 semanas, dependiendo de las condiciones del clima, captura pocos insectos no objetivo y considerablemente menos moscas macho, lo que hace que este atrayente sea adecuado para utilizar en programas de liberación de moscas estériles.

1. Termino más apropiado   2. Termino más apropiado

Mexico, Costa Rica

128. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 1st row

2nd row

3rd row

Technical

Technical

Editorial

For example, for capturing C. capitata a synthetic lure consisting of three attractants…

For capture of Anastrepha species the trimethylamine component may be removed.

A synthetic attractant will last approximately 6-10 weeks depending on climatic conditions

More technically correct

More technically correct

Better word

United States

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4th row

5th row

Editorial

Editorial

…conditions, captures few non-target insects and captures significantly fewer male flies…

well-suited for use in sterile insect release programmes.

Better word

More technically correct

129. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Start para with moved sentence 6 and new Sentence 0ASentence 4

Technical

Editorial

Several food-based synthetic attractants have been developed using ammonia and its derivatives. These may reduce the number of non-target insects captured.

...cone shaped plug (Tables 2 and 4 )

This is picked up in a subsequent sentence but does add a reason for using synthetic attractants in the introduction to them.Mixtures are also included in Table 2.

Mixtures are also included in Table 2.

Australia

130. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Technical For example, for capturing C. capitata a synthetic attractant consisting of three attractants (ammonium acetate, putrescine and trimethylamine) is used. For capture of Anastrepha species the trimethylamine attractant may be removed. A synthetic attractant will last approximately 4-8   6–10 weeks depending on climate conditions,

Change suggested based on the practical expertise of FF specialist in our region.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

131. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Sentence 3 Substantive A synthetic attractant will last approximately 6–10 weeks depending on climate conditions, captures few non-target insects and captures significantly fewer male fruit flies, making this attractant suited for use in programmes releasing sterile fruit flies.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

132. 3.1.2 Female biased 22 Sentence, 3 Editorial captures few non-target insects and captures significantly less male fruit flies, making this attractant suited for use in programmes releasing sterile fruit flies.

This Standard deals with fruit flies and as such it name should be indicated accordingly for consistency and clarity.

Ghana, Zambia

133. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3a

23 Title of table 3a

Technical Table 3a. Para-pheromone Attractants and traps for male fruit fly surveys

More clearly Vietnam

134. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3a

23 1. Sentence 72. Sentence 9

1. Substantive

2. Substantive

1. After B. caryeae: Bactrocera citri ( B. minax ) 2. In B. cucumis, delete all records related to CUE

1. As in paragraph 16

2. As in paragraph 16

IAEA

135. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table

23 1B. cucumis 2. Table

Technical

Technical

1. delete B. cucumis from Cue lure 2. Insert Bactrocera papayae and relevant details

1. B. cucumis is not attracted to Cue-lure. 2.  Species mentioned in para 16 (Table 2) but

Australia

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3a missing here

136. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 Additional species after “, Bactrocera oleae, ” in fill in “x” accordingly

Editorial Bactrocera papayae This species appears in table 2 while disappears in table 3a

China

137. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 Along side B. cumumis

Editorial Technical

Add Bactrocera papayae Need clarification on B.cucumis being attracted to trap types that are listed under CUE column?B.papayae Note: attractant ME?Missing from this table?

New Zealand

138. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 Along side B. cumumis

Editorial Technical

Add Bactrocera papayae Missing from this table? Korea (Republic),

139. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3a

23 Column of Fruit fly species

Editorial Add Bactrocera papayae. To be consistency with table2.This species is included in table2 but is missing in table 3a.

JAPAN

140. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 1. Oración 1 - Editorial 2. Nueva columna "Atrayente y trampa" "ME"

Editorial

Technical

1. Tabla 3a. Atrayentes y trampas para encuestas la vigilancia de moscas de la fruta machos. 2. ME    Multilure 

1. Término más acorde con el texto.  2. La trampa Multilure debe ser considerada para utilizarla en conjunto  con atrayentes como el Trimedlure, Metileugenol y Cuelure para zonas lluviosas. Al tener paraferomona la atracción  de la trampa esta orientada a la captura de machos.

Peru

141. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 Table Editorial

Technical

Delete rows with no entries

 VARs+ trap type should be included in the TML column with efficacy against Ceratitis capitata

Save space. No information presented in these rowsThe VARs+/TML trap bait combination is effective against males of Ceratitis capitata

EC

142. 3.1.2 Attractants and traps for male specific fruit fly surveys: Table 3a

23 Table 3A Editorial Mytopardalis Myiopardalis pardalina Wrong spelling Ghana, Zambia

143. 3.1.2 Female biased: 24 Title of table Technical Table 3b. Food-based Attractants (or Baits) and More clearly Vietnam

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Table 3b 3b traps for female-biased fruit fly surveys

144. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 1. Sentence 72. Sentence 31

1. Substantive

2. Substantive

1. After B. caryeae: Bactrocera citri ( B. minax )

2. In R. pomonella, include BuH in RS and YP

1. As in paragraph 16

2. It is explained in paraa 16 but somehow missed in this

IAEA

145. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Table 3b, between rows 1 and 2

Technical Anastrepha grandisPA McP, MLT

Add a line in table 3B to include the proposed species and attractants and traps for the said species (PA McP, MLT )

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

146. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Tabla 3b, entre las filas 1y 2

Technical Anastrepha grandisPA McP, MLT

Agregar una línea a la tabla 3B para incluir la especie propuesta y además  los atrayentes y trampas para dicha especie (PA McP, MLT )

MexicoCosta Rica.

147. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 1. Additional species after “Bactrocera oleae”and”x” accordingly   2. 5th cell in the 1st row   3. 6th cell in 1st row     4. 7th cell in 1st row

1. Technical

2. technical

3. Technical

4. Technical

1. Bactrocera papayae     2.PA, TP   3. SK+,AC 

 4. (AA,AC)

1.        This species appears in table while disappears in table 3ª   2.         TP can also be used as traps with PA  3.        SK and AC are independent attractants which are uesd seperately.

 4.        Not consist with the text

China

148. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Table

Table

Technical

Technical

Add:Rhagoletis cingulata PALz trap should be included in the table with efficacy against both R. cingulata and R. cerasi with AA/AC lure

R. cingulata occurs in some European countries on cherry and sour cherry.

R. cingulata and R. cerasi can be caught with PALz and AA/AC trap lure combination.

EC

149. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Table Editorial Delete rows with no entries Save space. No information presented in these rows EPPO

150. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Table Editorial Add Bactrocera papayae Missing from table New Zealand, Korea (Republic),

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151. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Column of Fruit fly species

Editorial Add Bactrocera papayae. To be consistency with table2.This species is included in table2 but is missing in table 3b.

JAPAN

152. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 3b

24 Table 3A Editorial Mytopardalis Myiopardalis pardalina Wrong spelling Ghana, Zambia

153. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 New para below title or as a foot note

Attractant longevity is indicative only.   Actual timings should be supported by field testing and validation but may be guided by manufacturers instructions.   Bait/lure replacement schedules are based on the efficacy of the attractant and not on other factors that may necessitate replacement including environmental impacts on traps, density of flies trapped, longevity of killing agents.  

The table is providing guidance and is indicative only. Actual inspection and servicing may vary and should be determined for each system and appropriate documented for consistent practice and as the basis for evaluation and audit.

Australia

154. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 2nd cell in row 15

Editorial AS To be consistent in context China

155. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 1.Table heading 2. attractant name

Row of trimedlure

New row for ammonium acetate, ammonium carbonate

Editorial Technical

Technical

Technical

1. Change to: List of attractants, field longevity and service intervals 2. 2-methyl-6-vinylpyrazine

include new formulation to trimedlure:Formulation: PE bag, Field longevity (weeks): 4-5, Monitoring/Detection - Inspection (days): 3-4 rebait (days): 4-5, Delimiting - Inspection (days): 7-10, Service (rebait)(weeks): 4-5

include new formulation to ammonium acetate, ammonium carbonate:Acronym: AA/AC, Formulation: PE bag w. alufoil cover, Field longevity (weeks): 3-4, Monitoring/Detection - Inspection (days): 3-4 rebait (days): 4, Delimiting - Inspection (days): 7-10, Service (rebait) (weeks): 4

1. Make heading reflect content2. Make heading reflect comments

Additional formulation

Additional formulation

EC

156. 3.1.2 Female biased: 25 1.Table 1. Editorial 1. Change to: List of attractants, field longevity and 1. Make heading reflect content EPPO

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Table 4 heading 2. Attractant name 2. Technical

service intervals.  3. 2-methyl-6-vinylpyrazine

Make heading reflect comments

157. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 Column of Papaya fruit fly     Column of, Ammonium acetate Trimethylamine Column of Ammonium acetate Putrescine   Column of Survey programme

Editorial Editorial

Describe a scientific name in Papaya fruit fly for clarification.  2C→2C1

 

 

 

 

2C→2C2

    [Inspection interval of each Monitoring/Detection and Delimiting should be identical because the interval is depending on effectiveness of the attractants.] 

Papaya fruit fly has two species (Toxotrypana curvicauda and Bactrocera papayae) with the same English name. To keep consistency with Table 3b.    To keep consistency with Table 3b.   The frequency of changing attractant should be same for the survey of Monitoring/Detection and Delimiting if same attracts are used for both survey programmes. Technical justification should be clarified.

Japan

158. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 Technical Erase the following columns ( right sector of Table 4) because it is not possible to reach agreement on timing for these specific operations

The reason for this is that longetivity and fixed timings for frequency of inspection and trap servicing are not agreeable. They have to be stated considering climatic conditions and the bait manufacturer recommendations. Frequency of inspection of monitoring/detection surveys depends on climatic conditions.The frequency of inspection for delimitation surveys depends on the corrective action plan.There is no reason to establish different rebaiting timing for different types of survey.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

159. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 Technical Survey programme

Monitoring/Detection Delimiting

Inspection2 Service3 (rebait) Inspection2 Service3

(rebait)(days) (weeks) (days) (weeks)

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

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160. 3.1.2 Female biased: Table 4

25 Footnote 2 editorial Inspection refers to checking traps for target fruit fly captures

Consistent use of the term United States

161. 3.1.2 Female biased 26 Substantive

Editorial

1. In addition, because food-foraging female and male fruit flies respond to synthetic food attractants at the sexually immature adult stage, these attractant types are capable of detecting female fruit flies earlier and at lower population levels than liquid protein attractants.

2. these type of attractant are capable of detecting female fruit flies earlier and at lower population levels than liquid protein attractants

This Standard deals with fruit flies and as such it should be indicated accordingly for consistency and clarity.

Clarity and consistency

Zambia

162. 3.1.2 Female biased 26 Sentence 1  

Sentence 1

Substantive

Editorial

1. In addition, because food-foraging female and male fruit flies respond to synthetic food attractants at the sexually immature adult stage, these attractant types are capable of detecting female fruit flies earlier and at lower population levels than liquid protein attractants.

2. these type of attractant are capable of detecting female fruit flies earlier and at lower population levels than liquid protein attractants

For clarity and consistency  Ghana,

163. 3.1.2 Female biased 26 Sentence 1 Substantive In addition, because food-foraging female and male fruit flies respond to synthetic food attractants at the sexually immature adult stage, these attractant types are capable of detecting female fruit flies earlier and at lower population levels than liquid protein attractants

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

164. 3.1.2 Female biased 26 Ultima línea Editorial Además, debido a que las moscas hembras y machos que buscan alimento responden a atrayentes alimenticios sintéticos durante la fase de inmadurez sexual, estos tipos de atrayentes pueden detectar moscas hembras más tempranamente temprano y a niveles

Redacción más clara Peru

165. 3.1.2 Female biased 26 Whole para Editorial Para 26 to be moved after para 22 Seems more logical because this para is the end of EC, EPPO

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166. 3.2 Killing agents 27 Title Translation/Technical

Killing agents Agentes que matan aniquilantes

[28]

More suitable term in Spanish OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

167. 3.2 Killing agents 27 Titulo       Translation /Technical

Agentes que matan aniquilantes 

Termino más apropiado 

Mexico, Costa Rica

168. 3.2 Killing agents 27 title Editorial Killing and preserving agents Describes both Australia

169. 3.2 Killing agents 27 section Substantive Technical

This section is probably under emphasised compared to Section 3.1 and Table 3b and 4. Failure of the “killing agent” component can cause failure of a survey despite getting all other factors right. A summary of how the preferred active ingredients dichlorvos, malathion, spinosad and pyrethroids are to be deployed in each trap type effectively would be helpful, eg. concentration and replacement intervals.

Clarity New Zealand

170. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Sentence 1 Substantive Attracted fruit flies are retained in a variety of traps This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

171. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Sentence 2 Technical Spinosad should be separated from toxicants/insecticide.

It has no knockdown effect as it is not an insecticide.

Philippines

172. 3.2 Killing agents 28 1. 1st sentence  

2. 2nd sentence    

Substantive 1. or a toxicant such as dichlorvos, malathion, spinosad and pyrethroids (such as deltamethrin). 2. Some organophosphates may act as a repellent at higher doses.

1. Avoid mention of specific toxicants as dichlorvos and malathion are not permitted in many countries.   2. Without further explanation of which organophosphates or what doses will act as repellents this information is meaningless. 

EC, EPPO

173. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Sentence 1 row 2

Technical Delete Dichlovos Residues of this pesticide is long lasting Grenada

174. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Sentence 2 Substantive dichlorvos, malathion, spinosad and pyrethroids. In some cases spinosad can be used in dry traps for Bactrocera dorsalis and B. cucurbitae , as an environmentally friendly   substitute of other

1. According to:Vargas, R.I., N. W. Millar and J. S. Stark. 2003. Trials of Spinosad as a Replacement for Naled, DDVP, and Malathion in Methyl Eugenol and Cue-Lure Bucket Traps to Attract and Kill Male

IAEA

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insecticides. Oriental Fruit Flies and Melon Flies (Diptera: Teprhitidae) in Hawaii. J. Econo. Entomol. 96 (6): 1780-1785

175. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Sentence 2 Translation/Technical

In some dry traps, killing agents are a sticky material or a toxicant such as dichlorvos, malathion, spinosad and pyrethroids (such as deltamethrin). Some organophosphates may act as a repellent at higher doses.

El agente que mata aniquilante en algunas trampas secas puede ser algún material pegajoso o tóxico como dichlorvos, malation, spinosad y piretroides (como deltametrin).

More suitable term in Spanish

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

176. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Oración 2 Translation/ Technical

El agente que mata aniquilante en algunas trampas secas puede ser algún material pegajoso o tóxico como dichlorvos, malation, spinosad y piretroides (como deltametrin).

Termino más apropiado Mexico, Costa Rica

177. 3.2 Killing agents 28 Oración 2 Técnico

Technical Son varias las trampas que retienen a las moscas atraídas. El agente que mata en algunas trampas secas puede ser algún material pegajoso o tóxico como dichlorvos, malation, spinosad y piretroides (como deltametrin). Algunos organofosforados podrán funcionar como repelentes a dosis más altas.

No se requiere incluir el nombre de los productos. En algunos países pueden no estar autorizados algunos de ellos

Peru

178. 3.2 Killing agents 28 2nd sentence Substantive Include Fipronil in the list It's at a very low concentration effective in controlling CUE flies

New Zealand

179. 3.2 Killing agents 28 2 sentence Substantive remove names of killing agents. some cpds may not be available in some countries Korea (Republic)

180. 3.2 Killing agents 28 second sentence

Substantive In some dry traps, killing agents are a sticky material or a toxicant such as dichlorvos, malathion, spinosad and pyrethroids (such as deltamethrin).

Mention of specific toxicant should generally be avoided. Dichlorvos and malathion are not permitted in many countries.

Norway

181. 3.2 Killing agents 29 Sentence 1 Translation/Technical

In other traps, liquid is the killing agent.

Otras trampas utilizan agentes aniquilantes líquidos que matan.

More suitable term in Spanish

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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182. 3.2 Killing agents 29 Oración 1 translation/ Technical

Otras trampas utilizan agentes líquidos que matan aniquilantes.

Termino más apropiado Mexico, Costa Rica

183. 3.2 Killing agents 29 Technical

Technical

In other traps, liquid is the killing agent. When liquid protein attractants are used, 1.5 to 2 g of borax per volume unit is added to preserve the captured fruit flies. There are protein attractants that are formulated with borax, and thus no additional borax is required. When water is used, 10% propylene glycol is added to preserve captured flies.  Toxic substances must be registered and authorized by the national competent authorities, before considering its use   as killing agent.

Clarify borax concentration     Add one phrase about:Toxic substances  must be registered and authorized by the national competent authorities, before considering its use  as killing agent, to state an important problem of use

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

184. 3.2 Killing agents 29 Sentence 4 Substantive When water is used, 10% propylene glycol is added to preserve captured fruit flies

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

185. 3.2 Killing agents 29 Sentence 4 Substantive When water is used in tropical areas, 10% propylene glycol is added to prevent evaporation of the bait and to preserve captured flies as well.

Propylene glycol is also used to prevent evaporation of liquids

IAEA

186. 3.3 Trapping devices 30 Para 31 -148 substantive This entire section of the standard should be moved into an appendix

Specific traps come and go with new technologies etc - if they are part of the standard it would have to be reviewed often. Providing the information in an appendix means the appendix can be updated easily on and annual basis without having to go through a formal standard review process.

New Zealand

187. 3.3 Trapping devices 31 Proposed addition

Substantive Add: Improvised traps – Regardless of trap design, fruitflies can be collected by the use of parapheromones/pheromones and food-based attractants. Traps can be designed locally based on availability of materials, functionality and cost. This will allow a country to be innovative, not depending on trapping devices recommended.

This is a suggested paragraph in which alternative traps are to be presented and given consideration.

Philippines

188. 3.3 Trapping devices 31 Whole para

2nd indent

Technical

editorial

Include information on sensitivity of traps.

Wet traps. The fly is captured and drowns in the attractant solution or in water with surfactant.

Sensitivity of traps for different flies is important information for choosing the right trap.

Better wording

United States

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189. 3.3 Trapping devices 31 Editorial Dry traps. The fly is caught on a sticky material board or killed by a chemical agent. Some of the most widely used dry traps are Cook and Cunningham (C & C), ChamP

Consistency on spacing Zambia

190. 3.3 Trapping devices 31 Add at the end of this part

Technical The inherent feature of sticky traps is that their catching capacity decreases over time. Other, non-saturable trap types like funnel traps have constant catching capacity, which makes them more suitable for quantitative comparisons.

Please, see Wall, 1989 among references. EC

191. 3.3 Trapping devices 32 After paragraph 32

Substantive Add new paragraph after 32:Dry traps:

To follow types of traps commonly used Vietnam

192. 3.3 Trapping devices 32 1. Whole paragraph

2. Sentence 1

1. Substantive

2. Editorial

1. General concern 2. Commonly used traps are described below and their uses are indicated. Tables 3 and 4 list the attractants used and recommended rebaiting intervals. Recommendations for the use of traps under different scenarios and trap densities are given in Table 5.

1. Before agreeing to any of these being included we would request a safety of use assessment as re-assurance. From the content of 28 it seems likely that some of these traps are not suitable for safe use. 2. The information on the tables is common to all traps, by putting it at the beginning, it saves having the wording repeated after each trap type.

EC, EPPO

193. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Oración 1 Editorial amovibles removibles Término de uso más común en español- Son sinónimos.

Peru

194. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Sentence 1 Translation The C&C trap consists of three removable creamy white panels, spaced approximately 2.5 cm apart.

La trampa C&C consiste de tres paneles amovibles removibles de color blanco cremoso, situados a aproximadamente 2.5 cm uno del otro.

More suitable term in Spanish

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

195. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Oración 1 Translation La trampa C&C consiste de tres paneles amovibles removibles de color blanco cremoso, situados a aproximadamente 2.5 cm uno del otro.

 Termino más adecuado

Mexico, Costa Rica,

196. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Substantive The standard panel (15.2 cm × 15.2 cm) contains 20 g of TML, while the half size (7.6 cm × 15.2 cm) contains 10 g.

To specify which attractant  is meant. Zambia

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197. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Sentence 7 Substantive The standard panel (15.2 cm × 15.2 cm) contains 20 g of TML, while the half size (7.6 cm × 15.2 cm) contains 10 g of TML.

To specify which attractant is meant. South Africa

198. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (general description)

35 Sentence 8 Technical The entire unit is held together with clips, and suspended in the tree canopy with a wire hanger which was applied anti-ant compound

Necessary Vietnam

199. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

37 Whole paragraph

Editorial rewrite Not clear what is meant. Do we discuss higher catches, longer-lasting or stronger attraction over larger areas? 

EC, EPPO

200. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

38 Sentence 1 Editorial The C&C trap is To be used for the following species: Ceratitis capitata (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2.

EC, EPPO

201. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

38 in bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

202. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

38 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

203. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

39 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

204. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

39 Sentence 1 editorial Delete Redundant EC, EPPO

205. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

40 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5d.

It is the only one that refers to this type of trap. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

206. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

40 Oración 1 fila 1

Editorial La Tabla 5d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Mexico, Costa Rica

207. 3.3 Cook and 40 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended Australia

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Cunningham Trap (use)

densities, (see Table 5d).

208. 3.3 Cook and Cunningham Trap (use)

40 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete Redundant EC, EPPO

209. 3.3 Trapping devices: ChamP Trap

41 Phrase 1, Row 1

Technical ChamP Trap (CH) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text of proposed Annex

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

210. 3.3 Trapping devices: ChamP Trap

41 Frase 1, fila1 Technical Trampa ChamP (CH)La

Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

211. 3.3 ChamP Trap (general description)

43 Sentence 3 Technical A wire hanger with anti-ant compound placed at the top of the trap is used to place it on branches.

Necessary Vietnam

212. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 45 2nd, sentence

Editorial It is equivalent to a Yellow panel/Rebell trap in sensitivity.

Consistency with title on Page 15 Australia

213. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 46 Sentence 1, Row 1

Technical To be used for the following species: All Bactroceras oleae except B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax and B. Tsuneonis ; and Ceratitis capitata and C . rosa . (Table 2). (3a, 3b)

Include these species to be consistent with what is stated in Tables 3a and 3b.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

214. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 46 Oración 1, fila 1

Technical Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies : Bactrocera oleae Todas las Bactrocera s excepto B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax y   B. Tsuneonis; Ceratitis capitata y C . rosa. (Tabla 2) (3a, 3b)

Incluir especies indicadas para ser consistente a lo especificado en las tablas 3a y 3b.

Mexico, Costa Rica

215. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 46 Sentence 1 Editorial To be Champ traps are used for the following species: Bactrocera oleae and Ceratitis capitata (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC, EPPO

216. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 46 in bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic),

217. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 46 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

218. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 47 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial See Tables 3 a, 3b and 4. Both tables (3a and 3b) indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador,

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Guatemala, Honduras

219. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 47 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Véanse la tabla 3 a, 3b y 4 Ambas tablas (3a y 3b) indican el uso de las trampas según la especie

Mexico, Costa Rica

220. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 47 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 and 4 ) .

Australia

221. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 47 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC, EPPO

222. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 After paragraph 48

Substantive Move paragraph 58-76 to after para 48 Belong to dry traps Vietnam

223. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5 b and c.

Both indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

224. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Las tablas 5 b y c indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

225. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 Oración 1, fila 1  

Editorial Las tablas 5 b y c indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

226. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 Sentence 1

Para 48A

Editorial

Substantive

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5a–f).Moved 143 to 148Insert 3.3 Trapping devices: Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap paras

Move to directly after description of “Cham P Trap” as the description notes similarities.

Australia

227. 3.3 ChamP Trap (use) 48 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC, EPPO

228. 3.3 Trapping devices: Easy Trap

49 Sentence 1, Row 1

Technical Easy Trap (ET) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

229. 3.3 Trapping devices: Easy Trap

49 Oración 1, fila 1

Technical Trampa Easy (ET) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

230. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 51 Last sentence editorial It combines visual effects with parapheromone Global change United States

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and food-based attractants.

231. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 53 Whole paragraph

Substantive Review and revise Some of the use as explained here is unsafe – use of dichlorvos as an example. The dangers of fat solubility of dichlorvos were known at least 40 years ago!

EC, EPPO

232. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 53 1st row, 2nd sentence

editorial It can be used dry baited with parapheromones (e.g. TML, CUE, ME) or synthetic food attractants…

Global change United States

233. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 53 Sentence 2 Technical It can be used dry baited with para-pheromones (e.g. TML, CUE, ME) or synthetic food attractants (e.g. 3C and 2C attractants) and a retention system such as dichlorvos

In this case, which is component of 2C? (synthetic food attractant of ammonium acetate and putrescine or synthetic food attractant of ammonium acetate and trimethylamine or all of them)

Vietnam

234. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 55 Sentence 1, Row 1

Technical To be used for the following species: all fruit fly species of genus Bactrocera and Ceratitis (Table 2) (Tables 3a and 3b)

Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies: todas las especies de moscas de los géneros Bactrocera y Ceratitis (Tabla 2). (tablas 3a y 3b)

To be consistent with what is stated in Tables 3a and 3b.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

235. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 55 Oración 1, fila 1

Technical Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies: todas las especies de moscas de los   géneros Bactrocera y Ceratitis (Tabla 2). (tablas 3a y 3b)

De acuerdo a lo especificado en las tablas 3a y 3b. Mexico, Costa Rica

236. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 55 Sentence 1 Editorial To be Easy traps are used for the following species: all fruit fly species ( listed in Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC, EPPO

237. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 55 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

238. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 55 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic),

239. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 56 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3a and 3b and 4.

Both tables (3a and 3b) indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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240. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 56 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Véanse las tablas 3 a , 3 b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Ambas tablas (3a y 3b) indican el uso de las trampas según la especie

Mexico, Costa Rica

241. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 56 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC, EPPO

242. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 57 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5 d.

Indicates the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

243. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 57 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial La Tabla 5d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

244. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 57 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial La Tabla 5d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

245. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 57 Sentence 1

Alphabetic order

Editorial

Technical

Delete

Add : Fluorescent yellow sticky “cloak” trap (PALz) General descriptionThe PALz trap is prepared from fluorescent yellow plastic sheets (36 x 23 cm). One side is covered with sticky material. When setting up, the sticky sheet is placed around a vertical branch or a pole in a "cloaklike" manner, with the sticky side facing outward, and the back corners are fastened together with clips. The trap is kept in place by a piece of wire, attached to the branch or pole. The bait dispenser is fastened to the front top edge of the trap, with the bait hanging in front of the sticky surface. The sticky surface of the trap has a catch capacity of ca 5-600 flies. UseThe trap uses the optimal combination of visual (= fluorescent yellow) and chemical (= cherry fruit fly synthetic bait) attractant cues for the European cherry fruit fly ( R. cerasi ) and the American eastern

See general comment

PALz trap type is used widely in some European countries. Please find photos of the PALz trap at www.julia-nki.hu/traps. 

EC

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cherry fruit fly ( R. cingulata ). Insects attracted by the combined action of these two stimuli are caught on the sticky surface. The PALz trap is used for Rhagoletis cerasi and R. cingulata .

246. 3.3 Easy Trap (use) 57 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EPPO

247. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (general description)

60 Substantive Additional parts include a white or yellow rectangular insert of waxed cardboard which is covered with a thin layer of adhesive known as “sticky material” used to trap fruit flies once they land inside the trap body;

The standard deals with fruit flies hence it should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

248. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (general description)

60 Sentence 2 Technical Additional parts include a white or yellow rectangular insert of waxed cardboard which is covered with a thin layer of adhesive known as “sticky material” used to trap flies once they land inside the trap body; a polymeric plug or cotton wick in a plastic basket or wire holder; and a wire hanger with anti-ant compound placed at the top of the trap body.

Necessary Vietnam

249. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (general description)

60 Sentence 3 Substantive Additional parts include a white or yellow rectangular insert of waxed cardboard which is covered with a thin layer of adhesive known as “sticky material” used to trap fruit flies once they land inside the trap body; a polymeric plug or cotton wick in a plastic basket or wire holder; and a wire hanger placed at the top of the trap body.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

250. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (general description)

60 Sentence 3 Editorial Additional parts include a white or yellow rectangular insert of waxed cardboard which is covered with a thin layer of adhesive known as “sticky material” used to trap the flies once they land inside the trap body;

For clarity  

Ghana

251. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

62 1st sentence editorial This trap is mainly used with parapheromone attractants to capture male fruit flies.

Global change United States

252. 3.3 Jackson Trap or 62 Last sentence Technical When ME and CUE are used a toxicant must be Toxicant is used only when appropriate. Because China

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Delta Trap (use) may be added when appropriate.  

toxicant usually smells badly, it might repel rather than kill the attracted target pests.

253. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

63 Sentence 1 Substantive For many years this trap has been used in exclusion and suppression AND/OR eradication control programmes...

need consistency of terms Australia

254. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

63 Substantive 1.JT/Delta  traps may not be suitable for some environmental conditions (e.g. rain or dust). 2.and surveying sterile fruit fly populations in areas subjected to sterile fruit fly mass releases.

Consistent use of word “trap(s)” and for clarity The standard deals with fruit flies hence it should be indicated accordingly

Zambia

255. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

63 Sentence 2 Substantive JT/Delta traps may not be suitable for some environmental conditions (e.g. rain or dust).

Consistent use of words “trap” and “traps” for clarity

South Africa

256. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

63 Sentence 2 editorial   JT/Delta traps may not be suitable for ssome environmental conditions (e.g. rain or dust).

Consistent use of word “trap(s)” and for clarity Ghana

257. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

65 Sentence 1, Row 1

Technical To be used for the following genus: Bactrocera spp., Ceratitis spp. and Dacus spp. (Table 2). (Table 3a)

Delete. Use of Jackson traps is not mentioned for this species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

258. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

65 Oración 1, fila 1

Technical Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies: Bactrocera spp., Ceratitis spp. y Dacus spp. (Tabla 2). (Tabla 3a)

Eliminar porque no se menciona el uso de la trampa Jackson para este género.

Mexico, Costa Rica

259. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

65 Sentence 1 Editorial JT/Delta traps are To be used for the following genus: Bactrocera spp., Ceratitis spp. and Dacus spp. (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

260. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

65 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

261. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

65 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

262. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

66 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3a and 4.

Indicates the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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263. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

66 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Véanse la tabla 3 a y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico, Costa Rica

264. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

66 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 and 4 ) .

Australia

265. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

66 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

266. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

67 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5b and 5d.

Indicate the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

267. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

67 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Las tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

268. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

67 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Las tablas 5 b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

269. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

67 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5b and 5d).

Australia

270. 3.3 Jackson Trap or Delta Trap (use)

67 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

271. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

72 Oración 1 Editorial La trampa utiliza un atrayente y un sistema de insecticida para atraer y matar a las moscas de la fruta objetivo.

Redacción más clara Peru

272. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

72 Last row editorial The trap uses the male-specific parapheromone attractants CUE, Capilure (CE), TML, and ME.

Global change United States

273. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

73 Substantive a dichlorvos-impregnated matrix is placed inside the trap to kill fruit flies that enter

The  standard deals with fruit flies hence it should be indicated accordingly

Zambia

274. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

73 Sentence 2 Substantive However, because CE and TML are not ingested by either C. capitata or C. rosa, a dichlorvos-impregnated matrix is placed inside the trap to kill fruit flies that enter.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

South Africa

275. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

73 Whole paragraph

Substantive Review and revise The use of malathion and dichlorvos makes this unsuitable for international recommendation.

EC, EPPO

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276. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

74 Sentence 1 Editorial The Lynfield trap is To be used for the following species: Bactrocera spp. (including B. tryoni) and Ceratitis spp. (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

277. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

74 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

278. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

74 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

279. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

75 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

280. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

75 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

281. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 Sentence 1, Row 1

Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5b and 5d

Indicate the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

282. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Las tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico

283. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 Oración 1, fila 1

Editorial Las tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie.Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa

Costa Rica

284. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5b and 5d).

Australia

285. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

286. 3.3 Lynfield Trap (use)

76 After paragraph 76

Substantive Move paragraph 100-116 to after para 76 Belong to dry traps Vietnam

287. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

79 Sentence 3 Technical The trap parts include a rubber cork or plastic lid that seals the upper part of the trap and a wire hook to hang traps on tree branches.

La trampa consta además, de un tapón de corcho o de hule que sella la parte superior de la trampa y de

The original trap has a rubber or cork cap. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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un gancho de alambre para colgar la trampa de las ramas de árboles.

288. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

79 Oración 3   Technical La trampa consta además, de un tapón de corcho o de hule que sella la parte superior de la trampa y de un gancho de alambre para colgar la trampa de las ramas de árboles

El tapón de la versión original es de corcho o de hule.  

Mexico, Costa Rica

289. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

81 Last row editorial …inspection of fruit fly captures. Better word United States

290. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

83 Technical To bait with yeast tablets, mix the tablets with water at the dose recommended according with its concentration  three to five torula tablets in 500 ml of water. Stir to dissolve tablets. To bait with protein hydrolysate, mix protein hydrolysate and borax (if not already added to the protein) in water to reach 5–9% hydrolysed protein concentration and 2-3% of borax.

Change proposed based on regional expertise 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

291. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

84 Editorial McP traps tend to also catch a wide range of other non-target tephritid and non-tephritid fruit flies in addition to the target species.

The standard deals with fruit flies hence it should be indicated accordingly

Zambia

292. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

85 3rd row editorial Female captures are crucial… Better word United States

293. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

85 2nd, sentence

Substantive these traps are used mainly to monitor track female populations.

Consistency of language Australia

294. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

85 Sentence 4

Whole paragraph

Editorial

Technical

...whereas other traps (e.g. Jackson traps), used with male-specific attractants, catch the released sterile males, and their use should be limited to in programmes with an SIT component.

Not clear whether it is only Jackson traps that are used in conjunction with McP traps. The object of the “their” is not clear in the second half of the sentence. If it relates to use of Jackson traps, it should be added to paragraph 63. There are references in the descriptions of traps to SIT and male annihilation technique – these are not mentioned in the general text – perhaps it would be useful?

EC, EPPO

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295. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

85 Sentence 5 Editorial Furthermore, in fruit fly-free areas, McP traps are an important

Clarification Trinidad and Tobago

296. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

86 Sentence 2 Editorial McP traps with liquid protein attractant are labour intensive. Servicing and rebaiting take time, and the number of traps that can be serviced in a normal working day is half that of some other traps described in this guideline Annex.

Las trampas McP cebadas con proteína líquida requieren mucha mano de obra. El servicio y el recebado llevan tiempo, y el número de trampas a las que pueden dárseles servicio durante un día de trabajo normal es la mitad, que en el caso de las otras trampas descritas en estae guía Anexo.

This proposal is an Annex to ISPM No. 26

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

297. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

86 Oración 2 Editorial Las trampas McP cebadas con proteína líquida requieren mucha mano de obra. El servicio y el recebado llevan tiempo, y el número de trampas a las que pueden dárseles servicio durante un día de trabajo normal es la mitad, que en el caso de las otras trampas descritas en estae guía Anexo.

    La propuesta es un anexo a la NIMF No. 26

Mexico, Costa Rica

298. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

86 Sentence 2 Editorial ... traps described in this annexguideline. Australia

299. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

87 Sentence 1 Editorial To To be used for the following species: all fruit flies species (Table 2).

Clarification Trinidad and Tobago

300. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

87 Sentence 1 Editorial McP traps are To be used for the following species: all fruit fly species listed in (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs. Check whether McP traps can be used for all species in Table 2.

EC

301. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

87 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

302. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

87 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

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303. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

88 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3a, 3b and 4.

Both tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

304. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

88 Oración 1 Editorial Véanse las tablas 3 a , 3 b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Ambas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie. 

Mexico, Costa Rica

305. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

88 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

306. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

88 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

307. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

89 Oración 1 Editorial Las tablas 5 a , 5b y 5e indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

308. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

89 Oración 1 Editorial Las tablas 5 a , 5b y 5e indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

309. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

89 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5a–f).

Australia

310. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (general description)

89 Sentence 1

alphabetic order

Editorial

Technical

Delete

Add : Modified funnel trap (VARs+) General descriptionThe modified funnel VARs+ trap was found to be very efficient for the capture of C. capitata . Since it is a non-sticky trap design, it has a virtually unlimited catch capacity and very long field life. It consists of a plastic funnel and a lower catch container. The top roof has a large (5 cm diam)

See general comment

VARs+ trap type is used widely in some European countries and is effective against C. capitata. Please find photos of the VARs+ trap at www.julia-nki.hu/traps.

EC

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hole, over which an upper catch container (transparent plastic) is placed. The bait is attached to the roof, so that the bait dispenser is positioned into the middle of the large hole on the roof. A small piece of matrix impregnated with a killing agent is placed inside both the upper and lower catch containers to kill flies that enter. UseThe trap uses TML to attract male C. capitata flies.  The VARs+ trap is used for Ceratitis capitata

311. 3.3 McPhail Trap Type (use)

89 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5a, 5b and 5e.

Indicate the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

312. 3.3 Trapping devices: Multilure Trap

90 Title Technical Multilure Trap (MLT) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

313. 3.3 Trapping devices: Multilure Trap

90 Titulo Technical Trampa Multilure (MLT) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto.

Mexico, Costa Rica

314. 3.3 Multilure Trap (general description)

92 Sentence 6 Technical A wire hanger with anti-ant compound, placed on top of the trap body, is used to hang the trap from tree branches

Necessary Vietnam

315. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

94 1. Sentence 1

2. Sentence 2

1. Substantive

2. Substantive

1. This trap follows the same principles as those of the McP trap.

2. However, an MLT used with dry synthetic attractant is more efficient and selective than an MLT or McP trap used with liquid protein attractant.

1. Consistent use of words “trap” and “traps” for clarity

2. Consistent use of words “trap” and “traps” for clarity.

South Africa

316. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

94 Substantive This trap follows the same principles as those of the McP trap . However, an MLT trap used with dry synthetic attractant is more efficient and selective

Clarity and consistency Zambia

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than an MLT or McP trap used with liquid protein attractant

317. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

95 Sentence 2 Substantive In hot climates 10% propylene glycol can be used to decrease water evaporation and decomposition of captured fruit flies.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

South Africa

318. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

96 Sentence 1 Technical When the MLT is used as a dry trap, a suitable (non-repellent at the concentration used) insecticide such as dichlorvos or a deltamethrin (DM) strip device or material (e.g. pellet, strip, adhesive paper) is placed inside the trap to kill the flies.

Other types of presentation f the material should be considered.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

319. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

96 Oración1 Technical Cuando se utiliza la MLT como trampa seca, una tira un dispositivo o material (por ejemplo tableta, tira, papel adhesivo) con algún insecticida adecuado (no repelente en la concentración usada) como dichlorvos o alguna deltametrina (DM) se coloca dentro de la trampa para matar a las moscas.

Deben considerarse otros tipos de presentación de material

Mexico, Costa Rica

320. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

96 Sentence 1 Substantive When the MLT is used as a dry trap, a suitable (non-repellent at the concentration used) insecticide such as dichlorvos or a deltamethrin (DM) strip is placed inside the trap to kill the fruit flies.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

South Africa

321. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

96 Substantive insecticide such as dichlorvos or a deltamethrin (DM) strip is placed inside the trap to kill the fruit flies.

Clarity and consistency Zambia

322. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

96 Whole paragraph

Substantive Review The use of dichlorvos makes this unsuitable for international recommendation

EC , EPPO

323. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

97 Editorial To be used for the following species: all fruit fliy species

Grammar Zambia

324. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

97 Sentence 1 Editorial To be used for the following species: all species of fruit fly species

For clarity Ghana

325. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

97 Sentence 1 Editorial The Multilure trap is To be used for the following species: all fruit flies species listed in (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs. Check whether the Multilure trap is used for all species listed in Table 2.

EC

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326. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

97 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

327. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

97 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

328. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

98 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3b and 4.

Indicate the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

329. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

98 Oración 1 Editorial Véanse las Tablas 3 b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico, Costa Rica

330. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

98 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 and 4 ) .

Australia

331. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

98 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

332. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

99 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5a, 5b, 5c, 5d.

Indicate the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

333. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

99 Oración 1 Editorial Las tablas 5 a, 5b, 5c, 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

334. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

99 Oración 1 Editorial Las tablas 5 a , 5 b, 5c, 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

335. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

99 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5a-f).

Australia

336. 3.3 Multilure Trap (use)

99 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

337. 3.3 Trapping devices: Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap

100 Title Technical/Editorial

Open Bottom Dry Trap or (Phase IV) Trap (OBDT)

Remove parenthesis of Phase IV Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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338. 3.3 Trapping devices: Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap

100 Titulo Technical Editorial

Trampa seca de fondo abierto o Trampa ( Fase IV ) (OBDT)

Eliminar paréntesis de Fase IV Incluir la abreviación con que se conoce la trampa para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

339. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

104 Sentence 1

Sentence 2

1. Technical

2. Editorial

A food-based synthetic chemical attractant can be used to capture female and male C. capitata. It serves to capture males also.

Puede utilizarse un atrayente químico sintético de tipo alimenticio para atrapar capturar principalmente hembras y machos de C. capitata, pero también sirve para capturar machos.

1. More suitable term in Spanish.

2. To make concept understandable.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

340. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

104 Oración 1   Oración 2

1. Technical

2. Editorial

Puede utilizarse un atrayente químico sintético de tipo alimenticio para atrapar capturar principalmente hembras y machos de C. capitata, pero también sirve para capturar machos.

1. Termino más adecuado  2. Para clarificar el concepto

Mexico, Costa Rica

341. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

104 Sentence 3 Editorial similarly similar to the inserts used in the JT. Grammar Ghana

342. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

104 Editorial similar to the inserts used in the JT trap. Clarity and consistency Zambia,

343. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

105 Sentence 1 Editorial The open bottom dry trap or (phase IV) trap is To be used for the following spocies: Ceratitis capitata (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

344. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

105 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

345. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

105 bracket Editorial (see table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

346. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

106 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3 b and 4..

Only table 3b corresponds to trap OBDT for Ceratitis capitata.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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347. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

106 Oración 1 Technical Editorial

Véanse las Tablas 3b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Solo la tabla 3b corresponde a la trampa OBDT para Ceratitis capitata.

Mexico, Costa Rica

348. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

106 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 and 4 ) .

Australia

349. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

106 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

350. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

107 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5 d

Indicates the use of traps according to the species. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

351. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

107 Oración 1 Técnico / Editorial

La Tabla 5 d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

352. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

107 Oración 1 Technical Editorial

La Tabla 5d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Mexico,

353. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

107 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, ( see Table 5 d) .

Australia

354. 3.3 Open Bottom Dry or (Phase IV) Trap (use)

107 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

355. 3.3 Trapping devices: Red Sphere Trap

108 Sentence 1 Editorial Red Sphere Trap (RS) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

356. 3.3 Trapping devices: Red Sphere Trap

108 Oración 1 Editorial Trampa Esfera Roja (RS) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

357. 3.3 Trapping devices: 108 title technical Red and Green Sphere Traps There are also green sphere traps in use United States

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Red Sphere Trap

358. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (general description)

110 1st sentence technical The trap is a red or green sphere 8 cm in diameter (Figure 11).

There are also green sphere traps in use United States

359. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (general description)

110 Sentence 3 Technical A wire hanger with anti-ant compound, placed on top of the trap body is used to hang the trap from tree branches

Vietnam

360. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

112 Editorial but it is much more efficient in catching fruit flies when baited. Fruit flies that are sexually mature and ready to lay eggs are attracted to this trap.

Clarity and consistency Zambia

361. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

112 1. Sentence 1

2. Sentence 2

Substantive

Substantive

1. The red sphere trap can be used unbaited, but it is much more efficient in catching fruit flies when baited.

2. Fruit Fflies that are sexually mature and ready to lay eggs are attracted to this trap.

1. This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

2. This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

South Africa

362. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

112 1st sentence Technical/editorial

The red or green traps can be used unbaited but they are much more efficient in capturing flies when baited.

There are also green sphere traps in use

Better word

United States

363. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

113 Substantive it will be necessary to positively identify the target fruit fly from the non-target insects likely to be present on the traps

The Standard deals with fruit flies, as such should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

364. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

113 Technical Many types of insects will be caught by these traps. If the traps are used as a way to time insecticide sprays, it will be necessary to positively identify the target fly from the non-target insects likely to be present on the traps.

This phrase is unnecessary and irrelevant for the objectives of this ISPM

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay,Peru

365. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

114 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

366. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

114 Sentence 1 Editorial The red sphere trap is To be used for the following species: Rhagoletis pomonella (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

367. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

115 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3b and 4.

Only table 3b corresponds to RS traps for R. pomonella

OIRSA, El Salvador,

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Guatemala, Honduras

368. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

115 Oración 1 Technical Editorial

Véase las tabla 3b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Solo la tabla 3b corresponde a la trampa RS para R. pomonella

Mexico, Costa Rica

369. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

115 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

370. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

115 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

371. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

116 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5e

Only table 5e corresponds to Rhagoletis spp OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

372. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

116 Oración 1 Technical Editorial

La Tabla 5 e indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Solo la tabla 5e corresponde a Rhagoletis spp 

Mexico, Costa Rica

373. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

116 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Table 5e).

Australia

374. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

116 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

375. 3.3 Red Sphere Trap (use)

116 After para 116

Substantive Move paragraph 125-132 to after para 116 Belong to dry traps Vietnam

376. 3.3 Trapping devices: Sensus Trap

117 Sentence 1 Editorial Sensus Trap (SE) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

377. 3.3 Trapping devices: Sensus Trap

117 Oración 1 Editorial Trampa Sensus (SE) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

378. 3.3 Sensus Trap (general description)

119 Sentence 12nd, sentence

Editorial

Editorial

12.5 cm in high height and 11.5 cm in diameter

...which has a series of holes just underneath it.

Improved grammar

The picture seems to show a row of holes

Australia

379. 3.3 Sensus Trap (general description)

119 Sentence 1 1. Editorial 1. The Sensus trap consists of a vertical plastic bucket 12.5 cm in high and 11.5 cm in diameter

1. Corrected grammar South Africa

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(Figure 12).

2. It has a transparent body and a blue overhanging lid which has a hole just with entrance holes underneath it.

2. This trap has more than one hole in the overhanging lid.

380. 3.3 Sensus Trap (general description)

119 Sentence, 1 Editorial The Sensus trap consists of a vertical plastic bucket 12.5 cm in high height and 11.5 cm in diameter (Figure 12). It has a transparent body and a blue overhanging lid which has entrance holes just underneath it.

Grammar Ghana,

381. 3.3 Sensus Trap (general description)

119 Sentence 1 Editorial The Sensus trap consists of a vertical plastic bucket 12.5 cm in high height and 11.5 cm in diameter (Figure 12). It has a transparent body and a blue overhanging lid which has entrance holes just underneath it.

Clarity and consistency Zambia

382. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 121 1st row editorial The trap is dry and uses male-specific parapheromones or for female-biased captures, dry synthetic food attractants.

Global change United States

383. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 121 Substantive A dic a dichlorvos block is placed in the comb on the lid to kill the fruit flies.

The Standard deals with fruit flies as such should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

384. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 121 Sentence 2 Substantive A dichlorvos block is placed in the comb on the lid to kill the fruit flies.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

385. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 122 Sentence 1 Editorial The Sensus trap is To be used for the following species: Ceratitis capitata and C. rosa (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

386. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 122 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

387. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 122 bracket Editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

388. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 123 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3a, 3b and 4.

Both tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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389. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 123 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Véanse las tablas 3a, 3b  y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Ambas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie.

Mexico, Costa Rica

390. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 123 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 and 4 ) .

Australia

391. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 123 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

392. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 124 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Table 5d

Only table 5d corresponds to Ceratitis spp OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

393. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 124 Oración 1 Technical/ Editorial

La Tabla 5d indica el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Solo la Tabla 5d corresponde a Ceratitis spp Mexico, Costa Rica

394. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 124 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Table 5d).

Australia

395. 3.3 Sensus Trap (use) 124 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

396. 3.3 Trapping devices: Steiner Trap

125 Sentence 1 Technical Steiner Trap (ST) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

397. 3.3 Trapping devices: Steiner Trap

125 Oración 1 Technical Trampa Steiner (ST) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

398. 3.3 Steiner Trap (general description)

127 Sentence 4 Technical A wire hanger with anti-ant compound, placed on top of the trap body, is used to hang the trap from tree branches

Vietnam

399. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 1st row

4th row

Editorial

editorial

This trap uses the male-specific parapheromone attractants TML, ME

mixture of parapheromone or a dispenser with the attractant…

Global change United States

400. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 Sentence 3 Editorial The attractant may be a cotton wick soaked in 2–3 ml of a mixture of para-pheromone or a dispenser with the attractant and an insecticide (usually

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala,

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malathion, dibrom or deltamethrin) as a killing agent.

El atrayente podrá ser una mecha de algodón impregnado en 2 a 3 ml de una mezcla de paraferomonas o un dispensador con el atrayente y un insecticida (usualmente malation, dibrom o deltametrina) como agente que mata aniquila.

More suitable term in Spanish.

Honduras

401. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 Oración 3 Editorial El atrayente podrá ser una mecha de algodón impregnado en 2 a 3 ml de una mezcla de paraferomonas o un dispensador con el atrayente y un insecticida (usualmente malation, dibrom o deltametrina) como agente que mata aniquila.

Termino más apropiado Mexico, Costa Rica

402. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 Whole paragraph

Substantive Review and revise The use of malathion, dibrom and deltamethrin makes this unsuitable for international recommendation without adequate safety guidance.

EC, EPPO

403. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 3 sentence Substantive delete bracketed text not necessary Korea (Republic)

404. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 129 Figures 14 and 15

Editorial Reposition figures on page 14 so that Figure 14 is first (left on page) and Figure 15 follows (right on page)

South Africa

405. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 130 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

406. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 130 Sentence 1Editorial

The Steiner trap is To be used for the following species: Ceratitis capitata Bactrocera spp. and Dacus spp. (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

407. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 131 1. Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3 a and 4.

Indicate the use of traps according to the species.This table refers to neither ST use nor to attractant for Dacus spp males.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

408. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 131 1. Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Véase la Tabla 3a y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Indican el uso de la trampa según la especie. Esta tabla no hace referencia del uso de la ST y atrayentes para machos de Dacus spp

Mexico, Costa Rica

409. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 131 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, ( see Tables 3 Australia

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and 4 ) .

410. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 131 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

411. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5 b y 5d.

Las Tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Both tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

412. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 Oración 1 Técnico / Editorial

Las Tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Ambas tablas son las únicas que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa

Costa Rica

413. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 Oración 1 Technical Editorial

Las Tablas 5b y 5d indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Ambas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie.

Mexico,

414. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Table 5b and 5d).

Australia

415. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

416. 3.3 Steiner Trap (use) 132 After para 132

Substantive Move paragraph 141-148 to after para 132 Belong to dry traps Vietnam

417. 3.3 Trapping devices: Tephri Trap

133 Sentence 1 Editorial Tephri Trap (TP) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

418. 3.3 Trapping devices: Tephri Trap

133 Oración 1 Editorial Trampa Tephri (TP) Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

419. 3.3 Tephri Trap (general description)

135 The Tephri trap is similar to a McP trap. It is a vertical cylinder 15 cm high and 12 cm in diameter at the base and can hold up to 450 ml of liquid (Figure 16). It has a yellow base and a clear top, which can be separated to facilitate servicing. There are entrance holes around the top of the periphery of the yellow base, and an invaginated opening in the bottom. Inside the top is a platform to hold attractants. A wire hanger, placed on top of the trap body, is used to hang the trap from tree branches.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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2. Sentence 5

1. Editorial

2. Editorial

La Trampa Tephri es similar a la trampa McP. Consiste en un cilindro vertical de 15 cm de alto y una base de 12 cm de diámetro y tiene puede contener capacidad para hasta 450 ml de líquido (Figura 16). Su base es amarilla y su tapa es transparente, que pueden separarse para facilitar el servicio. Tiene agujeros de entrada alrededor de la periferia de la parte superior de la base amarilla, y una abertura invaginada en el fondo. Dentro de la tapa se halla encuentra una plataforma sobre la cual se colocan los atrayentes.

1. Better wording of sentence to make it understandable in Spanish.

2. Better wording of sentence to make it understandable in Spanish.

420. 3.3 Tephri Trap (general description)

135 1.Oración 2  

            2.Oración 5  

1. Editorial

2. Editorial

La Trampa Tephri es similar a la trampa McP. Consiste en un cilindro vertical de 15 cm de alto y una base de 12 cm de diámetro y tiene puede contener capacidad para hasta 450 ml de líquido (Figura 16). Su base es amarilla y su tapa es transparente, que pueden separarse para facilitar el servicio. Tiene agujeros de entrada alrededor de la periferia de la parte superior de la base amarilla, y una abertura invaginada en el fondo. Dentro de la tapa se halla encuentra una plataforma sobre la cual se colocan los atrayentes.

 1. Mejorar redacción y clarificar la oración.     2. Mejorar redacción y clarificar la oración. 

Mexico, Costa Rica

421. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 137 Sentence 4 Substantive Other suitable insecticides are dichlorvos or deltamethrin (DM) strips placed inside the trap to kill the fruit flies

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

422. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 137 new sentence 6A

Substantive ... will retain its killing effect for at least six months under field conditions. However, the trap should be serviced in accordance with manufacturers recommendations. The net must...

Need to note that they should be serviced a little more regularly than 6 monthly.

Australia

423. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 137 Substantive strips placed inside the trap to kill the fruit flies. DM is applied in a polyethylene strip,

The Standard is for fruit flies as such be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

424. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 137 Whole paragraph

Substantive Review and revise The use of malathion, dibrom and deltamethrin makes this unsuitable for international recommendation without adequate safety guidance.

EC, EPPO

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425. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138Sentence 1 Technical

To be used for the following species: all Bactroceras oleae, except B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax and B. tsuneonis ; Ceratitis capitata and C . rosa , Rhagoletis cerasi (Table 2) (tables 3a y 3b).

Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies : Bactrocera oleae, Todas las Bactroceras excepto B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax y B. tsuneonis, Ceratitis capitata y C . rosa y Rhagoletis cerasi Ceratitis (tabla 2) (tabla 3a y 3b)

To be consistent with what is stated in Tables 3a and 3b.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

426. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138 Oración 1 Technical Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies : Bactrocera oleae,Todas las Bactroceras excepto B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax y   B. tsuneonis , Ceratitis capitata y C . rosa y Rhagoletis cerasi Ceratitis (tabla 2) (tabla 3a y 3b)

 De acuerdo a lo especificado en las tablas 3a y 3b. Mexico, Costa Rica

427. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138 Sentence 1 Editorial Bactrocera oleae, Ceratitis capitata and Rhagoletis cerasi

Australia

428. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138 Sentence 1 Editorial The Tephri trap is To be used for the following species: Bactrocera oleae, Ceratitis capitata, and Rhagoletis cerasi (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

429. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138 Editorial , See (Table 2) To be consistent with other references China

430. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 138 bracket editorial (see Table 2) to be consistent with other references Korea (Republic) ,

431. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 139 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3 a, 3b and 4.

These tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

What is stated in Tables 3a and 3b is not in agreement with what is specified in para. [138]

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

432. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 139 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Véanse las tablas 3 a, 3b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Estas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie. Lo indicado  Tablas 3a y 3b no es congruente con lo especificado en el  párrafo [138].

Mexico, Costa Rica

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433. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 139 Sentence 1 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

434. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 139 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

435. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 140 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5 b y 5d. .

Las Tablas 5 b y 5d. indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Both tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

436. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 140 Oración 1 technical /Editorial

Las Tablas 5 b y 5d. indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Ambas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie.

Mexico

437. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 140 Oración 1 technical /Editorial

Las Tablas 5 b y 5d. indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

438. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 140 Sentence 1 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5b, 5c, 5d and 5e).

Australia

439. 3.3 Tephri Trap (use) 140 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

440. 3.3 Trapping devices: Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap

141 Sentence 1 Technical Yellow Panel Trap/Rebell Trap (YP/RB) Add abbreviation to be consistent with text in proposed Annex.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

441. 3.3 Trapping devices: Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap

141 Oración 1 Technical Trampa de panel amarillo/Trampa Rebell (YP/RB)

Incluir la abreviación para ser consistente con el texto del anexo propuesto

Mexico, Costa Rica

442. 3.3 Trapping devices: Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap

141 entire description

Editorial Move to directly after description of “Cham P Trap” as the description notes similarities.

Australia

443. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

145 Sentence 5 Technical It is important to consider that these traps require special procedures for transportation, submission and fly screening methods because they are so sticky that specimens captures can be destroyed in handling.

Es importante considerar que estas trampas

More suitable term, includes specimens. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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requieren procedimientos especiales de transporte y entrega, y métodos especiales de preselección de las moscas porque son tan pegajosas que los especímenes las capturas pueden destruirse durante la manipulación.

444. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

145 5th row editorial efficient, in terms of fly captures, than the JT and Mc Phail-type traps.

Consistent use of this more appropriate term throughout the document

United States

445. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

145 Oración 5 Technical Es importante considerar que estas trampas requieren procedimientos especiales de transporte y entrega, y métodos especiales de preselección de las moscas porque son tan pegajosas que los especímenes las capturas pueden destruirse durante la manipulación.

Termino más apropiado que incluye el espécimen Mexico, Costa Rica

446. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

145 Sentence 8 Substantive These traps should not be used in areas subjected to mass release of sterile fruit flies because of the large number of released fruit flies that would be caught.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

447. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

145 Editorial ...open design allow them to catch other non-target insects including natural enemies of fruit flies and pollinators.

Australia

448. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146

Sentence 1Technical

To be used for the following species: (YP or Rebell) Ceratitis spp. and Rhagoletis spp.; (YP only) all Bactroceras oleae except B. citri, B. latifrons, B. minax and B. tsuneonis , Ceratitis cosyra. (Table 2) (Tables 3a y 3b).

Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies: (YP o Rebell) Ceratitis spp. y Rhagoletis spp.; (sólo YP), todas las Bactroceras oleae excepto B. citri , B. latifrons , B. minax , B. tsuneonis, Ceratitis cosyra. (tabla 2) (tablas 3a y 3b)

To be consistent with what is stated in Tables 3a and 3b.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

449. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146  Oración 1 Technical Para utilizarse con las siguientes especies: (YP o Rebell) Ceratitis spp. y Rhagoletis spp.; (sólo YP) , todas las Bactroceras oleae excepto B. citri ,   B. latifrons , B. minax , B. tsuneonis, Ceratitis cosyra.

  De acuerdo a lo que significaban las tablas 3a y 3b

Mexico, Costa Rica

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(tabla 2) (tabla 3a y 3b)

450. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146 Sentence 1 Substantive To be used for the following species: (YP or Rebell traps for ) Ceratitis spp. and Rhagoletis spp.; ( Only YP traps for only) Bactrocera oleae (Table 2).

Improvements for clarity South Africa

451. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146 Editorial To be used for the following species: (YP or Rebell traps) Ceratitis spp. and Rhagoletis spp.; only YP traps for Bactrocera oleae (Table 2).

Improvement for clarity. Zambia

452. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146Editorial

To be used for the following species: YP or Rebell for (YP or Rebell) Ceratitis spp. and Rhagoletis spp.; (YP only) YP only for Bactrocera oleae (Table 2).

Improvement for clarity. Ghana

453. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146 1. Editorial

2. Editorial

1. To be used for the following species: (YP or Rebell) Ceratitis spp and Rhagoletis spp in YP or Rebell; (YP only)  while Bactrocera oleae in YP only. 2. ,See (Table 2)

1. Clarification   

2. To be consistent with other references

China

454. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146 Sentence 1 Editorial The Yellow panel and Rebell traps are To be used for the following species: (YP or Rebell) Ceratitis spp. and Rhagoletis spp.; (the Yellow Ppanel only) is used for Bactrocera oleae (Table 2).

ISPMs do not instruct NPPOs and there is no need to refer to Table 2

EC

455. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

146 brackets Editorial Ceratitis spp. and Phagoletis spp. in YP or Rebell while Bactrocera oleae in Yp only(see Table 2)

clarity??to be consistent with other references

Korea (Republic)

456. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

147 Sentence 1 Technical /Editorial

For attractants used and rebaiting, see Tables 3a, 3b and 4.

These tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

457. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

147 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Véanse las Tablas 3 a, 3b y 4 para información sobre atrayentes y recebado.

Estas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie.

Mexico, Costa Rica

458. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

147 Editorial For attractants used and rebaiting, (see Tables 3 and 4).

Australia

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459. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

147 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

460. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 Sentence 1 Technical /Editorial

For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, see Tables 5c, 5d and 5e.

Las tablas 5c, 5d y 5 e indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

These tables indicate the use of traps according to the species.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

461. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Las tablas 5c, 5d y 5 e indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Estas tablas indican el uso de las trampas según la especie.

Mexico

462. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Las tablas 5c, 5d y 5 e indican el uso en diferentes escenarios y para densidades recomendadas.

Es la única que hace referencia a este tipo de trampa Costa Rica

463. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 Editorial For use under different scenarios and recommended densities, (see Tables 5b, 5c, 5d and 5e).

Australia

464. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 Sentence 1 Editorial Delete See general comment EC

465. 3.3 Yellow Panel/Rebell Trap (use)

148 After para 148

Substantive Add new paragraph after 148:Wet traps: Paragraph 77-89 Paragraph 117-124Dry or wet traps:Paragraph 49-57Paragraph 90-99Paragraph 133-140

To follow types of traps commonly used

Belong to wet trapsBelong to wet traps

Belong to dry or wet trapsBelong to dry or wet trapsBelong to dry or wet traps

Vietnam

466. 3.4 Trapping procedures

149 Title number Substantive 3.4  4.  Trapping system procedures Suggest a new section as this deals with operational procedures (how to) rather than materials (what with)

Australia

467. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

150 title Editorial 4.1 4.3.1 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

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468. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

151 Sentence 1 Substantive [152] The trapping network layout will depend on the intrinsic characteristics of the area. In areas where continuous compact blocks of commercial orchards are present and in urban and suburban areas where hosts exist, traps are usually deployed in a grid system which may have a uniform distribution.

[153] In areas with scattered commercial orchards, rural areas with fruit hosts and in marginal areas where commercial and wild hosts exist, trap network arrays are normally distributed along roads that provide access to host material.

[154] Trapping networks are also placed as part of exclusion programmes for early detection of introduced fruit flies of quarantine importance. In this case traps are placed in high-risk areas such as points of entry, fruit markets and urban areas, as appropriate.

[151] In suppression and eradication programmes, an extensive trapping network should be deployed over the entire area subject to survey and control actions.

Move paragraph 151 to after paragraph 154. The old paragraph 152 firsts explains the intrinsic characteristics of the area.

Then the next paragraphs follow regarding the different types of programmes like suppression, eradication and exclusion.

South Africa

469. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

151 New sentence 0A Sentence 1

Substantive Trap layout will be guided by the purpose of the survey and the biological characteristics of the fruit fly and its interaction with its hosts, as well as the efficacy of the lure and trap. In suppression...  over the entire area that is subject to survey....

Provides and introduction to the following applications.   Grammar

Australia

470. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

151 Substantive In suppression and eradication programmes, an extensive trapping network should be deployed over the entire area subject to survey and control actions

Paragraph 151 should become 154, and 152, 153 and 154 become 151, 152 and 153 for improving sequence and order for clarity.

Zambia

471. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

151 In suppression and eradication programmes, an extensive trapping network should be deployed over the entire area subject to survey illance and control actions.

Language has been adjusted for clarification. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

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472. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

151 Ultima parte Technical Translation

En los programas de supresión y erradicación, se debería desplegar una extensa red de trampeo en toda el área sometida a medidas de encuesta y control. acciones de control y vigilancia.

En la versión de inglés debe cambiarse por “surveillance and control actions”

Peru

473. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

152 See 151 Substantive See 151 See 151 South Africa

474. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

152 Sentence 2 Translation In areas where continuous compact blocks of commercial orchards are present and in urban and suburban areas where hosts exist, traps are usually deployed in a grid system, which may have a uniform distribution.

En las áreas en que existen bloques compactos y continuos de hortalizas huertos comerciales y en las áreas urbanas y suburbanas donde existen hospedantes, las trampas usualmente se disponen en un sistema tipo cuadrícula, que podrá tener una distribución uniforme.

In Spanish ‘Orchards’ is translated ‘huertos’

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

475. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

152 Oración 2 Translation En las áreas en que existen bloques compactos y continuos de hortalizas huertos comerciales y en las áreas urbanas y suburbanas donde existen hospedantes, las trampas usualmente se disponen en un sistema tipo cuadrícula, que podrá tener una distribución uniforme.

Orchards debe traducirse como huertos en la versión en español

Mexico, Costa Rica

476. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

152 Technical The trapping network layout will depend on the intrinsic characteristics of the area, the risk and objectives of the country . In areas where continuous compact blocks of commercial orchards are present and in urban and suburban areas where hosts exist, traps are usually deployed in a grid system which may have a uniform distribution.

To better specify 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

477. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

153 See 151 Substantive See 151 See 151 South Africa

478. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

153 Sentence 1 Substantive In areas with scattered commercial orchards, rural areas with fruit hosts and in marginal areas where

see specific comments regarding hosts Australia

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commercial and wild hosts exist, trap network arrays are normally distributed along roads that provide access to host material.

479. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

153 Oración 1 Technical En las áreas con huertos comerciales dispersos en áreas rurales con hospedantes frutales y en las zonas marginales donde existen hospedantes comerciales y silvestres, la disposición de la red de trampeo podrá ser bajo un sistema de cuadrículas que determina un menor número de trampas por área  normalmente tiene o puede tener un patrón de distribución que sigue los caminos que dan acceso al material hospedante.

Si el sistema de cuadricula involucra un  numero menor de trampas y consigue tener una buena cobertura es preferible emplear este en lugar de seguir la distribución de los caminos.

Peru

480. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

154 See 151 Substantive See 151 See 151 South Africa

481. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

154 Oración 2 Technical En estos casos, las trampas se colocan en las áreas de alto riesgo, como puntos de entrada, mercados de frutas y áreas urbanas, depósitos de desechos orgánicos (basureros) en la medida pertinente.

   Los basureros son áreas de alto riesgos  

Mexico, Costa Rica

482. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

154 1. Oración 1 2Oración 2

Technical Se establecen también redes de trampeo como parte  de los programas de erradicación y exclusión (prevención) para la detección temprana de las moscas de la fruta de importancia cuarentenaria introducidas. En estos casos, las trampas se colocan en las áreas de alto riesgo, como puntos de entrada, mercados de frutas, y áreas urbanas, huertos abandonados y huertos con presencia de hospedantes preferenciales en maduración para la plaga objetivo, en la medida pertinente.

Texto añadido para dar mayor precisión Peru

483. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

154

Sentence 2 Translation

In this case, traps are placed in high-risk areas such as points of entry, fruit markets and urban areas, organic wastes deposits (garbage dumps) as appropriate.

En estos casos, las trampas se colocan en las áreas de alto riesgo, como puntos de entrada, mercados de frutas y áreas urbanas, depósitos de desechos

Garbage dumps are high-risk areas

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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orgánicos (basureros) en la medida pertinente.

484. 3.4.1 Layout of trapping network

154 1st line Editorial Replace “exclusion” with “maintenace” of pests absence

Clarity New Zealand

485. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

155 title Editorial 3.4.2 4.2 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

486. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

156 2nd row

End of para

Editorial

technical

Trap deployment is selecting a proper trap site. It is important to have a list of the primary, …

Add: A systematic rotation of traps would be necessary for best results.

Better word

Systematic trap rotation is an important detail. Mature host is not the only consideration. Also, lure sensitivity.

United States

487. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

156 2nd sentence Substantive It is of vital importance to have a list of the primary, secondary and occasional fruit fly hosts, their phenology, distribution and abundance.

see specific comments regarding hosts Australia

488. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

156 Oración, 2 Editorial La colocación de trampas consiste en ubicar las trampas en el campo. Uno de los factores más importantes de la colocación de trampas esta actividad es la selección del sitio más adecuado para la tramp

redacción más clara Peru

489. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

156 2nd sentence Editorial Technical

Consider use of primary, secondary and occasional fruit fly hosts…cf 153 and commercial and wild hosts and 158 and 161

Clarity New Zealand

490. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

156 Last sentence Technical Add: Ideal Trap Placement - Average height (m) of trap placement from the ground should be included.

Recommended ideal trap placement should be indicated.

Philippines

491. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157 Sentence 3 Substantive Other suitable trap sites are resting and feeding areas in plants that provide shelter and protect fruit flies from strong winds and predators.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

492. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157 When possible, pheromone traps should be placed in mating areas. Fruit flies normally mate in the crown of host plants or close by, selecting semi-shaded spots and usually on the upwind side of the crown. Other suitable trap sites are the eastern side of trees where the first sunlight of the day fall into, resting

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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2. Sentence 3

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2. Technical

and feeding areas in plants that provide shelter and protect flies from strong winds and predators.

Cuando sea posible, se deberían colocar las trampas que usan feromonas en las áreas de apareamiento. Las moscas de la fruta normalmente se aparean en la copa de los árboles frutales hospedantes o cerca de ellos; eligen puntos semisombreados, usualmente en el lado donde sopla el viento. Otros sitios adecuados para colocar las trampas son el lado Este de los árboles en donde inciden los primeros rayos solares del día, las áreas de descanso y de alimentación en plantas que proporcionan refugio y protegen a las moscas de los fuertes vientos y de los depredadores.

1. Omitted in Spanish version

2. The eastern side is a strategic location in the early hours of the morning for feeding and mating.

493. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157  1. Oración 1 

2. Oración 3

1. Translation

2. Technical

Cuando sea posible, se deberían colocar las trampas que usan feromonas en las áreas de apareamiento. Las moscas de la fruta normalmente se aparean en la copa de los árboles frutales hospedantes o cerca de ellos; eligen puntos semisombreados, usualmente en el lado donde sopla el viento. Otros sitios adecuados para colocar las trampas son el lado Este de los arboles en donde inciden los primeros rayos solares del día, las áreas de descanso y de alimentación en plantas que proporcionan refugio y protegen a las moscas de los fuertes vientos y de los depredadores.

 1. Omisión  en la versión en español     2. El lado Este, en las primeras horas de la mañana es un lugar importante de alimentación y copula.

Mexico, Costa Rica

494. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157 sentence three

Substantive Other suitable trap sites are resting and feeding areas in plants that provide shelter and protect fruit flies from strong winds and predators.

The Standard deals with fruit flies hence should be indicated accordingly

Zambia

495. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157 Technical When possible, pheromone traps should be placed in mating areas. Fruit flies normally mate in the crown of host plants with fruits or close by, selecting semi-shaded spots and usually on the upwind side of the crown. Other suitable trap sites are resting and feeding areas in plants that provide shelter and protect flies from strong winds and predators.

Host plants without fruits are less attractive 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

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496. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

157 Section Substantive Reference needed for trap site selection This is very short for such an important subject New Zealand

497. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

158 2nd sentence Substantive ... deployed in primary host plants during... see specific comments regarding hosts Australia

498. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

159 Last sentence editorial obstructions such as spider webs to allow proper airflow and easy access for the fruit flies.

Correct spelling United States

499. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

160 Technical Placement of traps in the same tree baited with different attractants should be avoided because it may cause interference among attractants and a reduction of trap efficiency. For example, placing a C. capitata male-specific TML trap and a protein attractant trap in the same tree will cause a reduction of female catches in the protein traps because TML acts as a female repellent.

Not always true 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

500. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

160 3rd row editorial specific TML trap and a protein attractant trap in the same tree will cause a reduction of female captures

Consistent use of better term United States

501. 3.4.2 Trap deployment (placement)

161 1st sentence

Sentence 1.

Substantive

Substantive

Traps have to be relocated following the maturation phenology of the primary fruit hosts and the biology of the fruit fly species.Traps have to be should be relocated following the maturation phenology of the primary fruit hosts.

see specific comments regarding hosts

It would be unmanageable and uneccessary to be relocating parapheromone traps for large scale detection surveillance programs.  This should be considered in the design of the trapping program against survey purpose.

Australia

502. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 162 Title Editorial 4.3 3.4.3 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

503. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 163 2nd, sentence

Editorial ... with the use of the global positioning system (GPS)...

grammar Australia

504. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 163 Sentence 2 Editorial geo-referenced recorded Better English EC, EPPO

505. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 164 Sentences 1 & 2

Editorial The application of the GPS and geographic information systems (GIS) in the management of trapping network has proved to be a very powerful tool. The GPS allows each trap to be geo-referenced

grammar Australia

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through geographical coordinates, which are then used as input information in a the GIS.

506. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 164 Sentence 2 Editorial change “ each trap to be geo-referenced” to “the location of each trap to be recorded”

Better English EC EPPO

507. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 165 Sentence 1 Substantive If GPS equipment is not available, the references of the trap location should include visible landmarks, and in the case of traps placed in host plants located in suburban and urban areas, references should include the full address of the property where the trap was placed

For improved understanding as GPS is a system and appropriate GPS “equipment” is needed to apply the GPS

South Africa

508. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 165 1st sentence

2nd sentence

Substantive

Substantive

, the  If GPS is not available, the In addition to GPS location data or in the event that GPS data is not available for trap locations, references for of the trap location should include visible landmarks and.  I i n the case of traps placed in host plants located in suburban and urban areas...The trap reference should be clear enough to allow those servicing the traps trappers, control brigades and supervisors to find the trap easily.

GPS location data is always useful for mapping purposes but in urban areas is especially important that descriptive data for trap location is also recorded.  Staff do not navigate urban areas with a GPS unit but look to street names and landmarks to guide them in practice. Both waypoint and descriptive data should be recorded for each trap wherever possible.

Very specific language that may not be applicable in all contracting parties.

Australia

509. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 165 Substantive If GPS equipment is not available, the references of the trap location should include visible landmarks,

For improved understanding as GPS is a system and appropriate GPS equipment is needed to apply the GPS

Zambia

510. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 166 2nd row editorial records of trap devices, rebaiting, trap captures, etc.

Consistent use of better term United States

511. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 166 Sentence 2 & 3

Editorial . as exact location of fruit fly finds (incursions or outbreaks), historical profiles of the geographical distribution patterns of the fruit flies pest, and relative size of the populations in given areas. This information is extremely useful in planning control and/or suppression activities, ensuring that bait sprays and sterile fly releases are accurately placed and cost-effective in their application

Australia

512. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 166 location of each trap and other valuable information The Standard deals with fruit flies hence need to Zambia

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such as exact location of fruit fly finds (incursions or outbreaks), historical profiles of the geographical distribution patterns of the pest, and relative size of the populations in given areas. This information is extremely useful in planning control activities, ensuring that bait sprays and sterile fruit fly releases are accurately placed and cost-effective in their application

indicate accordingly.

513. 3.4.3 Trap mapping 166 Technical A database or trapping book of all traps with their corresponding coordinates is kept, ....., historical profiles of the geographical distribution patterns of the pest, and relative size of the populations in given areas and to easily visualize and evaluate the spread during an incursion . ....

To add an useful application during outbreak detection in FF-PFAs  

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

514. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

167 Title number Editorial 4.4 3.4.4 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

515. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

168 Sentence 2 Substantive Capturing fruit flies will depend, in part, on how well the trap is serviced.

This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity.

South Africa

516. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

168 Sentence 1 & 2

Add new sentence 3A

Editorial

Technical

Trap servicing intervals are specific to each trap system (see Tables 5a – 5f) . Capturing fruit flies will depend, in part, on how well the trap is serviced....operating conditions. Traps should be in a condition to consistently kill and retain in good condition any target flies that have been captured.

Further explanation

Australia

517. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

168 Technical Trap servicing intervals are specific to each trap model and system. Capturing flies will depend, in part, on how well the trap is serviced. Trap servicing includes rebaiting and maintaining the trap in a clean and proper operating condition.

For clarification COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

518. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

168 Add new sentence to para

Substantive It is recommended that an anti-ant material be applied to the trap to prevent the possible invasion by ants.

accuracy New Zealand, Korea (Republic),

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Japan, China

519. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

169 New sentence 5A and 5B

...hot conditions. Attractant longevity outlined in Table 4 is indicative only.   Actual timings should be supported by field testing and validation but may be guided by manufacturers instructions.   Bait/lure replacement schedules are based on the efficacy of the attractant and not on other factors that may necessitate replacement including environmental impacts on traps, density of flies trapped, longevity of killing agents. 

Pick up either here or directly referenced as footnote to Table 4.The table is providing guidance and is indicative only.  Actual inspection and servicing may vary and should be determined for each system and appropriate documented for consistent practice and as the basis for evaluation and audit.

Australia

520. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

169 Technical Attractants have to be used in the proper volumes and concentrations and replaced at the recommended intervals, as indicated by the manufacturer. ....

For clarification. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

521. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

170 Add sentence at the end

1st row

technical

editorial

Inspection intervals must take into account the biology of the fruit fly.

(i.e. checking for fruit fly captures)

Inspection intervals recommended in this draft do not take into account the biology of temperate zone fruit flies, such as Rhagoletis pomonella, which are single generation species with specific diapause requirements under natural conditions.

Consistent use of better term

United States

522. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

170 Technical Inspection intervals (i.e. checking for fruit fly catches) should be adjusted according to the prevailing environmental conditions and pest population control situations. The interval can range from one day up to 30 days. However, the most common inspection interval is seven days in areas where fruit fly populations are present and 14 days in fruit fly free areas. In the case of delimiting surveys inspection intervals may be more frequent

For clarification, see comments above    Trap inspection intervals depend extremely on climatic conditions and it is therefore not advisable to set fix recommendations.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

523. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

171 1. Sentence 2 1. Substantive Attractant spillage or trap contamination would reduce the chances of fruit flies entering the trap.

For traps that use a sticky insert to capture fruit flies,

1. This standard deals with fruit flies and this should be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

2. This standard deals with fruit flies and this should

South Africa

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2. Sentence 3 2. Sunstantive it is important to avoid contaminating areas in the trap that are not meant for catching fruit flies with the sticky material

be indicated accordingly, for consistency and clarity

524. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

171 new sentences 0A and 0B

New sentence 4A

1. Sentence 4

Technical

Substantive

Editorial

Avoid handling more than one lure type at a time if more than one lure type is being used at a single locality. Cross contamination between traps of different lure types (eg Cue and ME) reduces trap efficacy and makes laboratory identification unduly difficult. When changing....

...trap surroundings. Attractants, by their nature, are highly volatile and care should be taken when storing, packaging, handling and disposing of lures to avoid compromising the lure and operator safety.

This also applies for to leaves and twigs

Lure type contamination is a significant issue and care must be taken not to cross-contaminate lures.  Cross contamination may occur when multiple parapheromones are used in detection surveillance. 

Be aware of health and safety requirements when storing, packaging, handling and disposing of lures.

Improved grammar

Australia

525. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

171 Substantive Attractant spillage or trap contamination would reduce the chances of fruit flies entering the trap. For traps that use a sticky insert to capture fruit flies

The Standard deals with fruit flies hence should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

526. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

171 Sentence 2 Technical In case of accidental spillage or contamination use an appropriate neutralising agent.

Grenada

527. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

172 Sentence 1 Substantive The number of traps serviced per day per person will vary depending on type of survey, environmental and topographic conditions and trapper experience of the operator.

Very specific language that may not be applicable in all contracting parties

Australia

528. 3.4.4 Trap servicing and inspection

172 Technical The number of traps serviced per day per person will vary depending on type of trap, survey, environmental and topographic conditions and trapper experience.

It also depends on the type of trap COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

529. 3.4.5 Trapping records 173 Title Editorial 3.4.6 4.5 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

530. 3.4.5 Trapping records 174 Sentence 1 Substantive The following information must should be included Explains why comprehensive trapping records Australia

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in order to keep proper trapping records as they provide confidence in the survey results:... target fruit fly capture.  ..to the trapping records. The trapping records should be retained for at least 24 months and made available to the NPPO of the importing country on request. Retaining results for longer can provide useful information on spatial changes in fruit fly populations.

should be kept.   Delete - this information should be in the PFA/ALPP standards not in a trapping standard. Inclusion of the requirement to keep records should be sufficient. Raw data can over time provide information on changes in populations and may support moves between different control options for example, from ALPP to PFA

531. 3.4.5 Trapping records 174 Sentence 1 Editorial The following information must be included in order to keep proper trapping records: - trap location, plant where the trap is placed- trap and attractant type- servicing and inspection dates- target fly capture

Any other information considered necessary can be added to the trapping records. The trapping records should be retained for at least 24 months and made available to the NPPO of the importing country on request.

Wording remains teh same. Proposed new format to facilitate easier reading/ understanding

South Africa

532. 3.4.5 Trapping records 174 Sentence, 1 Editorial The following information must be included in order to keep proper trapping records: -         trap location, plant where the trap is placed-         trap and attractant type-         servicing and inspection dates-         target fly capture Any other information ......

Proposed new format for sentence one and sentence 2 to start new paragraph, to facilitate easier reading/ understanding

Zambia

533. 3.4.5 Trapping records 174 Sentence, 1 Editorial The following information must be included in order to keep proper trapping records: trap location, plant where the trap is placed, trap and attractant type, servicing and inspection dates and target fly capture

Proposed new format for sentence one and sentence 2 to start new paragraph, to facilitate easier reading/ understanding

Ghana

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  The following information must be included in order to keep proper trapping records: -         trap location, plant where the trap is placed-         trap and attractant type-         servicing and inspection dates-         target fly capture Any other information ......

534. 3.4.5 Trapping records 174 Technical The following information must be included in order to keep proper trapping records: trap location, plant where the trap is placed, trap and attractant type, servicing and inspection dates, and target fly capture. Any other information considered necessary can be added to the trapping records. The trapping records should be retained for at least 24 months and made available to the NPPO of the importing contracting parties  country on request.

To adjust language to the IPPC text. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

535. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

175 Title Editorial 3.4.6 4.6 Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

536. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

176 Sentence 1 Technical Review and revise if appropriate Use wording from Annex 1 of ISPM 30 for consistency or at least check that there is no conflict between this annex and ISPM 30.

EC, EPPO

537. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

178 Sentence 2 Editorial The FTD should be used in all reports of trapping surveys.

Australia

538. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

178 Technical It is used as baseline information to compare the size of the population before, during and after the application of a fruit fly control programme. The FTD should be used in all report of trapping monitoring surveys.

To correctly name the surveys, detection surveys usually don't use FTD.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

539. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

180 1st row technical In areas where sterile insect release programmes are in operation FTD is used…

Better wording United States

540. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per 180 Sentence 1 Editorial In areas where sterile fruit flies are being released it Australia

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day is used to measure the relative abundance of the sterile and wild fruit flies.

541. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

180 Substantive In areas where sterile fruit flies are being released it is used to measure the relative abundance of the sterile and wild fruit flies.

The Standard deals with fruit flies as such should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

542. 3.4.6 Flies per trap per day

181 Substantive FTD is obtained by dividing the total number of captured fruit flies by the product obtained from multiplying the total number of inspected traps by the average number of days the traps were exposed.

The Standard deals with fruit flies as such should be indicated accordingly. The FDT should be used throughout consistently.

Zambia

543. 4. Trap Densities 182 title Editorial 5. 4 Trap Densities Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

544. 4. Trap Densities 182

and trapping densities for that pest should be higher in the production field and decrease toward points of entry

Remove fig. 19 as it was highlighted  previously. Zambia

545. 4. Trap Densities 183 Sentence 1

Sentence 2  

    Sentence 3

Substantive

Substantive

Editorial

Trap density is critical for fruit fly surveys. Establishing a trapping density appropriate to the purpose of the survey is critical and underpins confidence in the survey results.

..., climate, topography, and programme phase and lure type .  ... the following types of location are may be of concern:

Provides more detail

Some lures have a greater area of attractancy than others (eg ME vs CUE).  Trap denstity should reflect the attractancy of the lure type.

Possibly not an exhaustive list but examples.

Australia

546. 4. Trap Densities 183 Indents 1-4 technical Suggest to define each of the locations For clarification and harmonization purposes United States

547. 4. Trap Densities 183 Sentence 2 Editorial The trap densities need to be adjusted based on many factors including type of survey, trap efficiency, location regarding (type and presence of host, climate, and topography)

Clearer 

EC, EPPO

548. 4. Trap Densities 184 1. Technical 2. Technical

Trap densities may also have to vary as a gradient from production areas to marginal areas, urban areas and points of entry. For example, in a pest free area, a higher density of traps is required at points of entry in high risk areas and a lower density in

1)       It is not a prescriptive issue. 2)       Not every point of entry requires higher density. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay,

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commercial orchards (Figure 19). Or, in an area where suppression is applied, such as in a low prevalence area or an area under a systems approach where the target species is present, the reverse occurs, and trapping densities for that pest should be higher in the production field and decrease toward points of entry. Independently of the above mentioned situations, other cases, such as detection of populations mainly in urban areas, must be taken into consideration when planning trapping densities.

     

To include other situations that currently happen in our region. 

Peru

549. 4. Trap Densities 184 Sentence 2 Editorial For example, in a pest free area, a higher density of traps is required at points of entry and a lower density in commercial orchards (Figure 19).

It is understood that the whole paragraph referes to Figure 19 (referenced at the end of the paragraph) and it is therefore not needed to repeat reference in sentence 2

South Africa

550. 4. Trap Densities 184 Sentence 3 Technical Or, in an area where suppression is applied, such as in a n area of low pest prevalence area or an area under a systems approach where the target species is present, the reverse occurs, and trapping densities for that pest should be higher in the production field and decrease toward points of entry (Figure 19).

Add words for consistency with terminology used in ISPM No. 22 and for clarity.

Canada

551. 4. Trap Densities 184 Sentence 3 Editorial For example, in a pest free area, a higher density of traps is required at points of entry and a lower density in commercial orchards (Figure 19).

It is understood that the whole paragraph  refers to Figure 19 (referenced at the end of the paragraph) and it is therefore not needed to repeat reference in sentence 2

Ghana, Zambia

552. 4. Trap Densities: Figure 19

185 figure substantive Remove this figure It is not helpful. It does not add much to the draft.

United States

553. 4. Trap Densities: Figure 19

185 Technical It is suggested to eliminate  Figure 19.Unnecessary.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

554. 4. Trap Densities: Figure 19

185 Figure 19. 1. Editorial Pest Free aArea (trap density) Area of Low Pest p Prev alence (trap density)

1. Key words are missing in the figure and must be added for clarity and consistency with

Canada

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2. Technical

 Insert a density scale on figure 19 e.g. low, medium, high

terminology used in ISPM No. 22. 2.  Scale is not provided for density in the figure and is needed for clarity.

555. 4. Trap Densities 186 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

En los casos en que los programas de encuestas de trampeo se complementan con actividades equivalentes de muestreo de frutas, las densidades de trampas pueden ser menores que las densidades recomendadas mostradas en las Tablas 5

   Se refiere a las  seis Tablas 5

Mexico, Costa Rica

556. 4. Trap Densities 186 Sentence 3 Editorial ... than the recommended densities shown in Table 5a–5f.

Australia

557. 4. Trap Densities 186Sentence 1 Technical/

Editorial

In those cases where trapping survey programmes are complemented with equivalent fruit sampling activities, trap densities can be lower than the recommended densities shown in Tables 5.

All six Tables 5 are meant.

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

558. 4. Trap Densities 186 1. Substantive

2. Technical

Tables 5a–5f show recommended trap densities for various fruit fly species. Trap densities in these tables must be considered as an orientation and   vary according to   the fruit flies species,   the type of trap , the objectives of trapping and the climatic conditions and depends on what is agreed as corrective action plans..Trap densities are also dependent on associated survey activities, such as the type and intensity of fruit sampling to detect immature stages of fruit flies. In those cases where trapping survey programmes are complemented with equivalent fruit sampling activities, trap densities can be lower than the recommended densities shown in Table 5.

1) It is impossible to generalize numbers for trap densities     2) The text marked in red needs to be reassessed, more justification and clarification is required to facilitate understanding, specifically whether data sourcing from fruit sampling can affect a recommended density and also if trap density is recommended to drop upon fruit sampling. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

559. 4. Trap Densities 187 Oración 1 Technical /Editorial

Las recomendaciones de densidad que se presentan en las  Tablas 5

Se refiere a las  seis Tablas 5 Mexico, Costa Rica

560. 4. Trap Densities 187 Sentence 1 Technical/Editorial

The density recommendations presented in Tables 5 All six Tables 5 are meant. OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

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561. 4. Trap Densities 187 Para, It would be useful to provide guidance or references on how to go about determining density recommendations for situations outside the examples given. Is there a thought process that could be described that can inform how to take information from Tables 1 and 2 and Figure 19.

Australia

562. 4. Trap Densities 187 Technical The density recommendations presented in Table 5 have been made taking into account:-           various survey objectives and control pest population situations (Table 1)-           target fruit flies species of economic importance (Table 2)-           production and other areas (Figure 19).level of risk of the location

See comments above.Density  depends on  the target species characteristics  and economic importance is a previous criteria and an unrelated issue.Density depends on  the level of risk of an area and not  on the fact of being a production area. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

563. 4. Trap Densities 187 Viñeta 1 Editorial - varios objetivos y situaciones de control de encuestas (Tabla 1)

Para ser concordante con enunciados anteriores. Peru

564. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5a

188 Whole table Substantive Suggest redo the table considering lure effectiveness

Table is misleading. Shows trap densities without differentiating lures (attractants), giving the impression that they all have the same effectiveness.

United States

565. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5b

189 Whole table substantive Suggest redo the table considering lure effectiveness

Table is misleading. Shows trap densities without differentiating lures (attractants), giving the impression that they all have the same effectiveness.

United States

566. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5b

189 Line A. Column 4 , 5 & 6 (Marginal, Urban, Points of Entry)

Substantive 0.25-0.5  0.2-0.5 1 trap per 5 km2 is the standard used for ports detection surveillance in Australia as set by NZ Ministry for Agriculture and Fisheries (ME, CUE, CE)

Australia

567. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5b

189 Whole para. Substantive Recommend that trap density be reconsidered in this table.1. Different trap types have different effect and different pests have different reaction to the attractants. It is not reasonal to set a fixed density

China

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for different trap and pest combinations.2. The density for Scenario E is too high.

568. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5b

189 Footnote 1 Technical (3- and 2-component attractants lures and other ammonium-based synthetic food attractants lures).

In the footnote of table 4 it mentions attractants and here lures

EC, EPPO

569. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5c

190 Whole table substantive Suggest redo the table considering lure effectiveness

Table is misleading. Shows trap densities without differentiating lures (attractants), giving the impression that they all have the same effectiveness.

United States

570. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5d

191 Whole table substantive Suggest redo the table considering lure effectiveness

Table is misleading. Shows trap densities without differentiating lures (attractants), giving the impression that they all have the same effectiveness.

United States

571. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5d

191 Technical McP       Delete footnotes, 4, 5 and 6

The McPhail trap is very important in COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay countries fruit flies programmes.  Delete Footnotes 4, 5 and 6.  What it is really relevant is to detect populations, regardless the sex of the specimens captured. According to commercial availability, the attractants may vary, resulting in different proportions of sexes detection in the field.  The male/female ratio detected is not relevant for the objective of the survey.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

572. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5d

191 Trap type MLT   OBDT     TP

Technical Multilure trap (with 2C and 3C attractants lures for female-biased captures) Open Bottom Dry Trap (with 2C and 3C attractants lures for female-biased captures) Tephri trap (with 2C and 3C attractants lures for female-biased captures)

In the footnote of table 4 it mentions attractants and here lures

EC, EPPO

573. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5e

192 Whole table substantive Suggest redo the table considering wider ranges of trap densities. A proposed trap densities table is attached at the end of this format.

The US has been conducting trapping for Rhagoletis pomonella (apple maggot) in the Pacific North West states since 1980. The purpose of this trapping was initially to delimit the

United States

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distribution of this pest in the PNW, evolving to a program which documents the area of AM freedom. During the almost 30 years that this program has been in place there has never been a detection of AM in commercially-grown fruit in the region. However, the proposed trapping protocols are more restrictive than the protocols used in the U.S. and could prevent us from documenting adequate surveillance for AM in those areas that are AM-free. This could lead to some trading partners closing their markets because the areas claiming to be AM pest-free are now not in “compliance” with international standards.

Table is misleading. Shows trap densities without differentiating lures (attractants), giving the impression that they all have the same effectiveness.

574. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5e

192Table 5e Trap densities for Rhagoletis spp.

Trap density/k m2

(2)

Scenario Trap type1 Attractant Production area

Marginal Urban Points of entry3

A. Monitoring survey, no control

RB/RS/YP/McP BuH/AS Not Applicable

B. Monitoring survey for suppression

RB/RS/YP/McP BuH/AS Depending on Host Availability

C. Monitoring survey for eradication

RB/RS/YP/McP BuH/AS Not Applicable

D. Detection survey for exclusion

RB/RS/YP/McP BuH/AS 0.8-.4

E. Delimitation survey after incursion in addition to detection survey

RB/RS/YP/McP BuH/AS Depending on Host Availability

1 Different traps can be combined to reach the total number. (2) Refers to the total number of traps.3 Also other high-risk sites.4 Depending on host density, all risk scenarios in original table are treated equally. Points of entry are not a factor with species of

United States

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quarantine concern.

575. 4. Trap Densities: Table 5f

193 Last Sentence

Substantive Suggestion: There is a need to define trap density as a method/process used as monitoring or control measure/strategy.

Some growers use traps not to monitor population but as a control measure.

Philippines

576. 5. Delimiting Surveys 194 title 5 6. Delimiting Surveys Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149

Australia

577. 5. Delimiting Surveys 194 Title Technical 5 Trapping for Delimiting Surveys in free areas To reflect that it only deals with delimiting trapping in free areas.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

578. 5. Delimiting Surveys 195 2nd row

4th sentence

Technical

technical

determine if the incursion is an outbreak.

The core area is defined by a set radius surrounding each detection or capture.

For clarification

For clarification

United States

579. 5. Delimiting Surveys 195 Sentence 1 Substantive A delimiting survey is designed to determine the boundaries of an incursion into a fruit fly free area and to determine if it is an outbreak.

Section 1 outlines the various surveys and notes that a delimiting survey is to establish the boundaries of an incursion while a “detection survey” is used to determine if the pest is present.

Australia

580. 5. Delimiting Surveys 195 All over the paragraph

Substantive A Delimiting surveys is are mentioned in Annex 1 of ISPM 26. designed to determine the boundaries of an incursion into a fruit fly free area and to determine if it is an outbreak. The Accordingly, trap density may vary by situation (climatic conditions, biology of species, etc), but there are some commonalities. The area immediately surrounding each find is termed a core area. The core area is defined by a set radius surrounding each find, sizes of different core areas may vary according to the species of fruit fly, types of traps uses and other considerations. The area defined by this a radius is often squared off to produce a grid. The trapping density in the core area is higher than that used for detection surveys. Around the core area may be a one surrounding zone which may be tiered in

It is not necessary to repeat purposes already described in ISPM 26.  Text has been adjusted to describe major commonalities and particularities, as well as to clarify language. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

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decreasing trap density.   This zone may also be subdivided for operational purposes or more surrounding zones where the trap density is higher than for detection surveys but usually lower than that of the core area, as appropriate. Trap densities in the surrounding zones may be proportionally tiered in a decreasing density the further away they are from the core area. Examples of delimiting surveys for single and multiple core areas are presented in Figures 20 and 21, respectively.

581. 5. Delimiting Surveys 195 Last sentence

Substantive Examples of delimiting surveys for a single and multiple core areas are is presented in Figures 20 and 21, respectively.

There is no explanation of why fig 21 does not vary according to genera Tephritid and why the density is higher than in Fig 20

EC, EPPO

582. 5. Delimiting Surveys 195 1st sentence Substantive Delete "and to determine if it is an outbreak" Delimiting surveys do not do this - accuracy New Zealand

583. 5. Delimiting Surveys 196 Whole para Technical/editorial

A delimiting survey must be implemented as soon as possible after the initial detection of the targeted fly species. The duration of a delimiting survey should depend on the developmental biology of the species. In general, delimiting survey trapping continues for three life cycles beyond the last trap capture for multivoltine species. However…

Better wording United States

584. 5. Delimiting Surveys 196 Sentence 1 & 2             Sentence 4

Substantive A delimiting survey should must be implemented as soon as possible after the initial detection of a targeted fruit fly. The duration of a delimiting survey should beis dependent on the developmental biology of the species. ..particular situations or fruit fly species based on scientific information, as well as that provided by the surveillance system in place.

Agreed use of should, shall, may and must Australia

585. 5. Delimiting Surveys 196 Figure 20 on page 22

Editorial For consistency the heading of Figure 20 should be moved to appear at the bottom of the figure on pp 22.

South Africa

586. 5. Delimiting Surveys 196 1. A delimiting survey must be implemented as The Standard deals with fruit flies and it should be Zambia

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soon as possible after the initial detection of a targeted fruit fly

2. However, one or two generations may be used for particular situations or fruit fly species

indicated accordingly.

587. 5. Delimiting Surveys 196 Substantive A delimiting survey must be implemented as soon as possible after the initial detection of a targeted fly. The duration of a delimiting survey should be dependent on the developmental biology of the species. In general, delimiting survey trapping occurs for three life cycles past the last find for multivoltine species. However, one or two generations may be used for particular situations or fly species based on scientific information, as well as that provided by the surveillance system in place.

These provisions are already addressed in ISPM 26 COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Peru

588. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 Table below figure 20, top of 3rd column

Technical Anastrepha spp. Correct name United States

589. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 Header of table, columns 4 & 5    

Technical Bactrocera spp.CUE + McP (McP core only) B. dorsalis ME + McP (McP core only)

McPhail traps should only be deployed in preferred host trees with mature fruit. The value of McPhail traps in delimiting fruit fly outbreaks is questionable. Sources of fly breeding can normally be determined from the size of male trap catches. Fruit rearing will also help to determine breeding sites.

Australia

590. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 Figure 20 on page 22

Editorial For consistency the heading of Figure 20 should be moved to appear at the bottom of the figure on pp 22.

Zambia, Ghana

591. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 Technical Add B. carambolae on fifth column of the table. To reflect actual situations occurring in COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay region.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

592. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 Title   Editorial Example of delimiting survey using single km2 core and surrounding zones for various flies and attractants/trap types (number of traps per km2)

Change title to reflect the contents of the table (or add a separate title for the table) 

EC, EPPO

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593. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 20

197 table Editorial Anastrepha spp. precise Korea (Republic)

594. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 21

198 Technical Example sample of delimiting survey showing a multiple Km 2

Example is the right word COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

595. 5. Delimiting Surveys: Figure 21

198 Figure 21 Substantive Delete fig 21 See explanation in para 195 EC, EPPO

596. 6. Supervision Activities

199 Title Substantive 6. Surpervision Activities 7. Systems evaluation and audit

More accurately reflects content, Re-number sections to reflect suggestion of making new section at para 149.

Australia

597. 6. Supervision Activities

202 3rd sentence Editorial The timing of evaluations will vary by programme but it is recommended to occur at least twice a year in programmes that run for six months or longer.

Better word United States

598. 6. Supervision Activities

202 Sentence 2  

Sentence 4

Editorial ..trapping programme should be conducted by a party independent of the someone who is not a part of the trapping programme.  The evaluation should addresses all aspects related to the ability of the trapping programme to detect targeted fruit flies pests in a timely manner. within the time frames required to meet program outcomes eg. Early detection of incursions .

Applies a reference to 'timely manner' – the outcome sought from the trapping program.

Australia

599. 6. Supervision Activities

202 Technical Formal Official independent evaluations should occur periodically to assess the effectiveness of the trapping survey. In order to allow for an independent evaluation, formal evaluations of the trapping  programmes assessment should be conducted by someone who is not a part of the trapping programme activity. The timing of evaluations will vary by programme, but it is recommended to occur at least twice a year in

Formal is not an IPPC term and the evaluations must be official.  Trapping is an activity within the fruit fly programme.    

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programmes that run for six months or more. The evaluation addresses all aspects related to the ability of the trapping  programme to detect targeted pests in a timely manner....

  

600. 6. Supervision Activities

202 Whole paragraph

Substantive Delete whole paragraph [202]. Independent evaluation is introduced in the annex and not explained in the ISPM.  Should be deleted.Section 6 needs to be clarified regarding responsibilities.

EC

601. 6. Supervision Activities

202 Remove this section regarding formal independent evaluations and add to an annex

Substantive Independent evaluation is introduced in the annex and not explained in the ISPM.  Should be explained and whether it is linked to supervision or not or deleted.  Section 6 needs to be clarified regarding responsibilities.  

EPPO

602. 6. Supervision Activities

202 Sentence 1 line 3

Insert phrase, ...who is not a part of 'or does not have a vested interest in' the trapping program

Further qualifies the term independent evaluation

Grenada

603. 6. Supervision Activities

202 3rd, sentence

Editorial The timing of evaluations will vary by programme, but it is recommended to occur at a frequency of least twice a year minimum in programmes that run for six months or more.

To make description on frequency of supervision activities clearly.  

Japan

604. 6. Supervision Activities

203 Sentence 1 Translation The trap deployment should be evaluated to ensure that the prescribed types and densities of traps are in place. Field confirmation is achieved through inspection of individual routes.Se debería evaluar el la distribución despliegue de las trampas para asegurar que se han ubicado los tipos y densidades de trampas prescritos. La confirmación de campo se logra mediante inspección de las rutas individuales.

More suitable term in Spanish

OIRSA, El Salvador, Guatemala, Honduras

605. 6. Supervision Activities

203 Oración 1 Translation Se debería evaluar el la distribución despliegue de las trampas para asegurar que se han ubicado los tipos y densidades de trampas prescritos. La

Término apropiado en español Mexico, Costa Rica

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confirmación de campo se logra mediante inspección de las rutas individuales.

606. 6. Supervision Activities

203 Whole paragraph

Substantive Steward if appropriate to conserve some parts or to delete whole paragraph

EC

607. 6. Supervision Activities

204 Sentence 1 Editorial Trap placement should be evaluated for proper host selection, trap relocation schedule, height, light/shade balance, fruit fly...

Australia

608. 6. Supervision Activities

204 Sentence 3 Substantive Host selection, placement and proximity to other traps can be further evaluated by field examination.

To clarify “proximity” in relation to other traps South Africa

609. 6. Supervision Activities

204 Whole paragraph

Substantive Steward if appropriate to conserve some parts or to delete whole paragraph

EC

610. 6. Supervision Activities

205 Whole section

1st sentence

Substantive

Editorial

Suggest to make record keeping a separate, more elaborate section.

Proper record-keeping is crucial to the proper functioning of a trapping programme.

This is an important part for any trapping programme. It needs to be emphasized more in the draft standard.

United States

611. 6. Supervision Activities

205 Sentence 1 Editorial Proper record-keeping is a key to the proper functioning of a trapping programme.

Improved grammar Australia

612. 6. Supervision Activities

205 Technical Proper record-keeping is key to the proper functioning of a trapping programme. The records for each trap route should be inspected to ensure that they are complete and up to date. Field confirmation can then be used to validate the accuracy of the records.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

613. 6. Supervision Activities

205 Whole paragraph

Substantive Steward if appropriate to conserve some parts or to delete whole paragraph

EC

614. 6. Supervision Activities

206 Whole paragraph

Substantive Steward if appropriate to conserve some parts or to delete whole paragraph

EC

615. 6. Supervision Activities

207 8th row technical different method is necessary under a sterile insect release programme…

For clarification United States

616. 6. Supervision Activities

207 Whole para Editorial Evaluation of identification capability can occur via target fruit flies that have been marked in some

Australia

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manner in order to distinguish them from wild trapped fruit flies. These marked fruit flies are placed in traps in order to evaluate the operator's trapper's diligence in servicing the traps, competence in recognizing the targeted fruit fly species, and knowledge of the proper reporting procedures once a fruit fly is found. Commonly used marking systems are fluorescent dyes and/or wing clipping. In some programmes that survey for eradication or exclusion, the fruit flies may also be marked by using sterile irradiated fruit flies in order to further reduce the chances of the marked fruit fly being falsely identified as a wild fruit fly and resulting in unnecessary actions by the programme. A slightly different method is necessary under a sterile fruit fly release programme in order to evaluate the operator's screeners on their ability to accurately distinguish target wild fruit flies from the released sterile fruit flies. The marked fruit flies used are sterile and lack the fluorescent dye, but are marked physically by wing clipping or some other method. These fruit flies are placed into the trap samples after they have been collected in the field but before they are inspected by the operator's screeners.

617. 6. Supervision Activities

207 Substantive Evaluation of identification capability can occur via target flies that have been marked in some manner in order to distinguish them from wild trapped flies. These marked flies are placed in traps in order to evaluate the trapper's diligence in servicing the traps, competence in recognizing the targeted species, and knowledge of the proper reporting procedures once a fruit flies is found. Commonly used marking systems are fluorescent dyes and/or wing clipping. In some programmes that survey for eradication or exclusion, the flies may also be marked by using sterile irradiated flies in order to further reduce the chances of the marked fly being falsely identified as a wild fruit flies and resulting in

The Standard deal with fruit flies, therefore for consistency it should be indicated accordingly.

Zambia

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unnecessary actions by the programme. A slightly different method is necessary under a sterile fruit flies release programme in order to evaluate the screeners on their ability to accurately distinguish target wild flies from the released sterile fruit  flies. The marked flies used are sterile and lack the fluorescent dye, but are marked physically by wing clipping or some other method. These fruit flies are placed into the trap samples after they have been collected in the field but before they are inspected by the screeners.

618. 6. Supervision Activities

207 Technical Evaluation of identification capability can occur via target flies that have been marked in some manner in order to distinguish them from wild trapped flies. These marked flies are placed in traps in order to evaluate the trapper's diligence in servicing the traps, competence in recognizing the targeted species, and knowledge of the proper reporting procedures once a fly is found. Commonly used marking systems are fluorescent dyes and/or wing clipping. In some programmes that survey for eradication or exclusion, the flies may also be marked by using sterile irradiated flies in order to further reduce the chances of the marked fly being falsely identified as a wild fly and resulting in unnecessary actions by the programme. A slightly different method is necessary under a sterile fly release programme in order to evaluate the screeners on their ability to accurately distinguish target wild flies from the released sterile flies. The marked flies used are sterile and lack the fluorescent dye, but are marked physically by wing clipping or some other method. These flies are placed into the trap samples after they have been collected in the field but before they are inspected by the screeners.

Paragraph 207 has been divided into two paragraphs, to adequately separate different issuesParagraph 207 has been divided into two paragraphs, to adequately separate different issues

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

619. 6. Supervision Activities

207 Whole paragraph

Substantive Steward if appropriate to conserve some parts or to delete whole paragraph

EC

620. 6. Supervision 207 Throughout Editorial Change all the "fly's" to "fruit fly's" Correct term - accuracy New Zealand

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Activities para 207

621. 6. Supervision Activities

208 Whole paragraph

Substantive Delete whole paragraph [208]. Should be deleted.Independent evaluation is introduced in the annex and not explained in the ISPM. 

EC

- 6. Supervision Activities

209 Sentence 1 & 2

Editorial .. at least 24 months because importing NPPOs trading partners may request this information or some evidence of an active independent evaluation programme. Alternatively, importing NPPOs trading partners may request that they conduct their own independent evaluation of the programme.

Clarity that it is NPPOs that may request this information.

Australia

622. 6. Supervision Activities

209 Technical In cases where the trapping programme is a component of an export programme, records of independent evaluations should be retained for at least 24 months because trading partners may request this information or some evidence of an active independent evaluation programme. Alternatively,  trading partners may request that they conduct their own independent evaluation programme.

This paragraph must be erased because provisions are included in other ISPMs. 

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

623. 6. Supervision Activities

209 Whole paragraph

Substantive Delete paragraph 209 This paragraph rather deals with bilateral agreements in the framework of exporting programs.

EC , EPPO

624. 6. Supervision Activities

209 Last Sentence

Substantive

Substantive

Add: Provision for including procedure, manpower and result of activities of fly-trapping “best practice”. This could include budgetary requirements, labor, etc.

Add: Appendix of brand names of fruitfly attractants and manufacturers.

To provide stakeholders with clear procedures and an idea of the costings.

To provide Stakeholders information on where to procure the attractants.

Philippines

625. 7. Selected References 210 Technical Item on references must be eliminated, to avoid possible discrepancies with the contents of the document.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

626. 7. Selected References 210 Whole Technical Delete whole paragraph [210]. Delete the references because problem of update. EC

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section If the whole section is not deleted, not at all sure about the provision of so many references to research literature. More acceptable if linked to the relevant information in the body of the text, or grouped according to subject – perhaps by genera of fly or by trap type. Consider reduction to some main review texts?

627. 7. Selected References 210 Whole section

Technical Consider and revise as appropriate Not at all sure about the provision of so many references to research literature. More acceptable if linked to the relevant information in the body of the text, or grouped according to subject – perhaps by genera of fly or by trap type. Consider reduction to some main review texts?

EPPO

628. 7. Selected References 210 new reference

Editorial Drew and Hooper 1981, Journal of Australian Entomological Society pg 203.

self-explanatory New Zealand

629. 7. Selected References 211 Technical The following references to accessible scientific publications may provide further guidance on the methods and procedures contained in this document. Based on: IAEA. 2003. Trapping guidelines for area-wide fruit fly programmes . Joint FAO/IAEA Division, Vienna, Austria. 47 pp.

Item on references must be eliminated, to avoid possible discrepancies with the contents of the document. It is only necessary to quote the IAEA document that has been the basis for this text.

COSAVE, Argentina, Brazil, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay

630. 7. Selected References 212 Editorial P.E. & and Jones To be consistent in context China

631. 7. Selected References 213 1st row Technical Calkins, C.O., Schroeder, W.J. & Chambers, … United States

632. 7. Selected References 215 1st row Editorial Conway, H.E. & Forrester, … United States

633. 7. Selected References 216 1st row Editorial Cowley, J.M., Page, F.D. Nimmo, P.R. & Cowley, …

United States

634. 7. Selected References 216 Sentence 2 Editorial Comparison of the effectiveness of two traps for Bactrocera tryoni (Froggat) (Diptera: Tephritidae) and implications for quarantine surveillance systems. J. Ent. Soc., 29: 171–176.

Space required between brackets: ...(Froggat) (Diptera: Tephritidae)...

Canada

635. 7. Selected References 217 Editorial Seewooruthum S.I. & and Heath To be consistent in context China

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636. 7. Selected References 218 Editorial Manukian, A. & and Meyer To be consistent in context China

637. 7. Selected References 219 Editorial P.E. & and Jones To be consistent in context China

638. 7. Selected References 226 1st row editorial Jang, E.J., Holler, T.C., Moses, A.L., Salvato, M.H. & Fraser, S. Evaluation…

United States

639. 7. Selected References 228 1strow 3rd sentence

editorial In A.S. Robinson… No underline United States

640. 7. Selected References 236 After paragraph 236

Substantive Add new paragraph after para 236:White, I.M. & Elson-Harris M.M. 1994. Fruit flies of economic significance: their identification and bionomics, ACIAR, 17-21

Add referente Vietnam

641. 7. Selected References 236 New paragraph

Technical Tóth, M., Szarukán, I., Voigt, E., Kozár, F. 2004. Hatékony cseresznyelégy- (Rhagoletis cerasi L., Diptera, Tephritidae) csapda kifejlesztése vizuális és kémiai ingerek figyelembevételével. Importance of visual and chemical stimuli in the development of an efficient trap for the European cherry fruit fly (Rhagoletis cerasi L.) (Diptera, Tephritidae) Növényvédelem 40:229-236.Tóth, M., Tabilio, R., Nobili, P. 2004. Különféle csapdatípusok hatékonyságának összehasonlitása a földközi-tengeri gyümölcslégy (Ceratitis capitata Wiedemann) hímek fogására. Comparison of efficiency of different trap types for capturing males of the Mediterranean fruit fly Ceratitis capitata Wiedemann (Diptera: Tephritidae) Növényvédelem 40:179-183.Tóth, M., Tabilio, M.R., Nobili, P. 2006. Le trappole per la cattura dei maschi della Moscha mediterranea della fruta. Frutticoltura 2006/1:70-73.Tóth, M., Tabilio, R., Nobili, P., Mandatori, R., Quaranta, M., Carbone, G., Ujváry, I. 2007. A földközi-tengeri gyümölcslégy (Ceratitis capitata Wiedemann) kémiai kommunikációja: alkalmazási lehetŒségek észlelési és rajzáskövetési célokra. Chemical communication of the Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata Wiedemann): applicaton

To be added only if section 7 (Selected References) is not deleted.Unfortunately the literature we can provide is partially in Hungarian. However, it supports the efficacy of the two trap bait combinations.   

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opportunities for detection and monitoring Integr. Term. Kert. Szántóf. Kult. 28:78-88.Tóth, M., Tabilio, R., Mandatori, R., Quaranta, M., Carbone, G. 2007. Comparative performance of traps for the Mediterranean fruit fly Ceratitis capitata Wiedemann (Diptera: Tephritidae) baited with female-targeted or male-targeted lures. Int. J. Hortic. Sci. 13:11-14.Tóth, M., Voigt, E. 2009. Relative importance of visual and chemical cues in trapping Rhagoletis cingulata and R. cerasi in Hungary. J. Pest. Sci. Submitted

Voigt, E., Tóth, M. 2008. Az amerikai keleti cseresznyelegyet és az európai cseresznyelegyet egyaránt fogó csapdatípusok. Trap types catcing both Rhagoletis cingulata and R. cerasi equally well. Agrofórum 19:70-71.Wall, C. (1989): Monitoring and spray timing. 39-66. In: Jutsum A. R., Gordon R. F. S. (Eds): Insect pheromones in plant protection. New York: Wiley, 369 p.

To be added only if section 7 (Selected References) is not deleted.Unfortunately the literature we can provide is partially in Hungarian. However, it supports the efficacy of the two trap bait combinations.

Extra comments3.3 Trapping devicesnew trap type :Fluorescent yellow sticky “cloak” trap (PALz)

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Fluorescent yellow sticky “cloak” trap (PALz)

Picture 1 attached EC

3.3 Trapping devicesnew trap type :modified funnel trap (VARs+)

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Modified funnel trap (VARs+)

Picture 2 attached EC