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The Groovy Sentence!
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According to the Grammar Dude…
The only way to get righteous
with grammar is by using it, for
real, man!
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Source: the following information is borrowed from the work of Lynne Weber, St. Mark’s School of Texas, 2010.
Dude, you’re gonna need a
sheet of paper and pencil for
this.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Start with the word:
TheBy the way, this word is called an DEFINITE ARTICLE,
which is a word that introduces a specific thing.
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Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Now, come up with a subject (in this case, an animal):
wombatBy the way, this word is NOUN; a person, place, or thing.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Now, come up with a verb (a participle):Choose one of these:taste smell hear see listen feel touch run walk jogbike skate turn twist shout jump laugh cry cream playswim draw paint build create read write sing joke telllie wobble glue cut sharpen doodle leave come enterexit wake up sleep skate eat drink dance squeeze lick sneeze cough break make skip ride decide planbuy shop
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Here’s mine:
wobble
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Make it Past Tense.
wobbled
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Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Smish all three words together.
The wombatwobbled.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
“The wombat wobbled.”
This is called a simple sentence. It has an Article, a Subject, and a Predicate.
A Definite ArticleA Single Subject A Single Predicate: the
part of the sentence that says something about the subject.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
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Why are they still staring at
us, Ringo?
Notice the Groovy books of words in
front of you!
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Add adjectives and adverbs:
The wily wombat wobbled weirdly.
By the way, an adjective is a word that modifies a noun. An adverb modifies a verb.
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Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Add prepositional phrases:
In the wilderness, the wily wombat wobbled weirdly toward
the billabong.By the way, a prepositional phrase contains a preposition, the noun or pronoun
and the modifier of the object. Prepositional phrases can act like an adjective or adverb.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Dude, now you’re gonna need your Righteous Cheat Sheets. Can you
dig it?
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Add an appositive phrase:
In the wilderness, the wily wombat, a furry fellow unfortunately named Poindexter,
wobbled weirdly toward the billabong.
By the way, an appositive phrase is a group of words that provides more information about a noun in a sentence.
Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Add subordinate (dependent) clause:
In the wilderness, the wily wombat, a furry fellow unfortunately named Poindexter,
wobbled weirdly toward the billabong as the monsoon zoomed through the pale
Australian sky.
By the way, a subordinate or dependent clause needs the rest of the sentence for the full impact of its meaning to be felt.
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Making Groovy Sentences (The Gnarly Easy One)
Add a triad (3) of absolute phrases:
In the wilderness, the wily wombat, a furry fellow unfortunately named Poindexter, wobbled weirdly toward the billabong as the monsoon zoomed through the pale
Australian sky, the winds whipping the waves, the rain streaming down upon the parched land like confetti,
the light fading into an ominous darkness.
By the way, an absolute phrase is a modifier that is attached to a sentence or noun, with no conjunction. Frequently, is modifies an
entire sentences, rather than one word.
Groovy Grammar Poetry!
Credit: http://freedomisgroovy.comSource: the following information is borrowed from the work of Lynne Weber, St. Mark’s School of Texas, 2010.
According to the Grammar Dude…
The only way to get righteous
with grammar is by using it, for
real, man!
Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
Source: the following information is borrowed from the work of Lynne Weber, St. Mark’s School of Texas, 2010.
Dude, now you’re gonna need your Righteous Cheat Sheets. Solid!
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TIME TO GET BY TIME TO GET BY TIME TO GET BY TIME TO GET BY
WITH A LITTLE WITH A LITTLE WITH A LITTLE WITH A LITTLE
HELP FROM HELP FROM HELP FROM HELP FROM
YOUR FRIENDSYOUR FRIENDSYOUR FRIENDSYOUR FRIENDS
Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
This is a group activity.
You will be randomly randomized.
Using your Righteous Cheat Sheet, you, and your new partners, are going to write three (3) Grammar Poems.
Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
In a moment, you will see the Poetry Form you must follow.
Your job is to write ONE poem per group.
Take your time and be sure that everyone is happy and they know it!
Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
When you are ready, write your poem on the piece of construction paper given to you (final draft).
Someone with neat handwriting should do the writing.
Then, everyone MUST sign the back.
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Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
Even though you have a group final copy (the construction paper), YOUneed to also copy the poem yourself.
You’ll need your own, personal copy for later.
Making Groovy Grammar Poetry
Finally, choose one victim – er –volunteer to read the poem!
I’m down with that, Daddy O!
Here’s Poetry Form (1)
Absolute phraseAbsolute phraseAbsolute phrase
Independent clause split by an Appositive phrase
Prepositional phrasePrepositional phrasePrepositional phrasePrepositional phrasePrepositional phrase
Example (1)Thin branches reaching raggedly for the sky,Chunky roots planted deep inside the soil,
Feathery boughs sheltering the tiny woodland creatures,
The ancient pine tree, tall sentinel of the forest, keeps its vigil
At dawnIn the silvery darkness
Without a wordDuring the solemn ceremony
Of the sunrise
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Here’s Poetry Form (2)
Independent clause with an Appositive phrase in it
Participial phrase
Participial phrase
Participial phraseParticipial phrase
Participial phrase
Example (2)
The bats, dark demons of the sunset, swirl and flutter
squeaking their songs of chaos
gathering in patterns of shadow
blocking the sun’s streaking
clustered in nightmare battalions
swooping from their underground lair.
Here’s Poetry Form (3)
A subordinate clause
An independent clauseAn infinitive phrase and a prepositional phrase
An infinitive phrase and a prepositional phrase
An infinitive phrase and a prepositional phrase
An infinitive phrase and a prepositional phraseA final independent clause
Example (3)
Because cats are wise
They know these things are good:
To sleep on a sunny afternoon pillow
To point their heads and tails toward the sky
To snuggle on warm laps
To survey the world from high perches
These are the wise ways of the feline.
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The Skeleton Story
Source: the following information is borrowed from the work of Lynne Weber, St. Mark’s School of Texas, 2010.
According to the Grammar Dude…
The only way to get righteous
with grammar is by using it, for
real, man!
Making Groovy Stories
Source: the following information is borrowed from the work of Lynne Weber, St. Mark’s School of Texas, 2010.
Dude, you’re gonna need a
pencil for this. Cool!
Revising the Skeleton Story
This is individual activity.
Using your Righteous Cheat Sheet, you, are going to revise a Skeleton Story.
Then, once you have revised, you must retype the story. No hand-written stories! Italicize all your new improvements.
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Revising the Skeleton Story
Big Mongo Hint: A copy of the
Skeleton Story is on my website. If
you have the ability to copy text from
a PDF, then copy-n-paste the story.
Afterwards, just add your revisions.
Revised Skeleton ExampleOne rainy, grey day in June, John Walker, a man without hope, was limping drearily down the
street toward the bank when he spied a stray dog with a sad face slouching under a tree looking miserable, its tail drooping wetly, its fur bedraggled, its ribs silhouetted against its soggy fur. Shivering in his thin raincoat, John pitied the drenched animal despite its appearance, so he approached it warily and petted it and spoke to it in a kind voice. As he set off for home in the chilly downpour, the gaunt dog followed him. Though John tried to get it to go away, the dog insisted on tagging along all the way to his home in a dark, poverty-stricken part of London. When he got home, John went into the house, a tiny cottage with a thatched roof, and tried to forget the dog outside his poor dwelling, but its insistent whining and barking were impossible to ignore. But ignoring the suffering of animals was not something that compassionate John could do. To soothe his conscience, John finally went out to the dog and dried it off with a warm blanket and brought it inside the small house. He offered the dog some left-over hamburger in a cracked bowl and lit a toasty fire in the fireplace. Listening to the dog’s quiet sounds of contentment, John hunkered down beside the fireplace in the corner of the small room with a cup of hot coffee and a book. The dog came over and sat beside him in the dim firelight. Because he had been lonely for a long time after his wife had died, John felt contented and happy that the abandoned dog had come to live with him. “Welcome home, old fellow,” he said with a bittersweet smile that flickered over his face like a fleeting shadow.
Giving Directions
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According to the Grammar Dude…
The only way to get righteous
with grammar is by using it, for
real, man!
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Giving Groovy Directions
Dude, you’re gonna need a
pencil, paper, and tech for this.
Far out!
Giving Groovy Directions
This is individual activity.
Using your knowledge of where you live (and maybe Google Earth), and using Prepositions, you have to write down direction from your home to another place.
Giving Groovy Directions
Big Mongo Hint:
Use the folder of Prepositions.
Your directions should be accurate so
that someone else could follow them.
Giving Groovy Directions
Don’t Forget:
When you have typed up your
directions, your final step is to
underline every preposition used.
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Groovy Directions ExampleBe sure to lock the front door of my house when you leave.From my driveway, turn right (South) onto 52nd Street.Go straight for about 500 feet until you come to a stop.Turn left (East) onto Carefree Highway and travel for about ¼ mile until you get to the intersection of Carefree
Highway and Cave Creek Road.Turn right (South) onto Cave Creek Road.Continue traveling on Cave Creek Road for about 8 minutes or until you get to the intersection of Cave Creek
Road and Tatum Boulevard.Turn left (East) onto Tatum Boulevard. Tatum will curve from East to South. Continue traveling on Tatum for about 15 minutes or until you get to the
intersection of Tatum Boulevard and East Deer Valley Road.Turn left (East) onto East Deer Valley Road and go straight for approximately ¼ mile until you get to the light
at East City North Drive.Turn right (South) on East City North Drive and take this little road straight for about 500 feet. The road dead
ends at East The Blvd. (a weird name for a road). Turn right (West). You are now in Desert Ridge Marketplace. Quickly take the second left. Find a parking spot. You are now behind the AMC Theatres building.There is a sidewalk against the back of the building. Walk around the North-side of the
building. As you walk toward a restaurant called The Yard, you’ll notice a breezeway in-between AMC
and The Yard. Turn left (South) and go through the breezeway. As you come out the other side, you’ll see
AMC to your left.You have arrived, but don’t forget to buy a movie ticket before you walk inside.
Groovy Checklist
Dude, you should have all of this in your
stash:1 Groovy Sentence
2 Groovy Poems (group)1 Groovy Skeleton Story
(with revision in Italics)
1 Groovy Directions (with all prepositions underlined)