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When: Last SummerWho: My Family

What: Went on a trip to DisneylandWhy: family wanted to go on a vacation

Rode RidesAte Unusual

FoodsBought

Souvenirs

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Roller Coaster

Space Mountain

Log Rides

Chicken on a stick

Spicy

Tangy

Mickey Mouse Ears

T-shirt

Key chain

First Then Next

Finally

Last summer my family took a trip to

Disneyland. First, we rode on rides. My faverite ride was

the roller coaster called Space mountain. Another one of

my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. Next, we ate

some unusual food. I ate chicken on a stick. It tasted

spicey and tangy. Later on that day, we bought

souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse, a t-shirt with Snow

white, and I also bought some key chains. Finally, our

family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding

all the rides, eating tasty food and buying souvunirs.

This is one vacation I will never forget.

Last summer my family took a trip to

Disneyland. First, we rode on rides. My faverite ride was

the roller coaster called Space mountain. Another one of

my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. Next, we ate

some unusual food. I ate chicken on a stick. It tasted

spicey and tangy. Later on that day, we bought

souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse, a t-shirt with Snow

white, and I also bought some key chains. Finally, our

family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding

all the rides, eating tasty food and buying souvunirs.

This is one vacation I will never forget.

My Trip to Disneyland

Last summer my family and I decided to take a trip to Disneyland, it was so much fun riding on rides, eating unusual foods and buying souvenirs.

First, we rode on rides. My favorite ride was the roller coaster called Space Mountain. I screamed the entire time I was on the ride. Another one of my favorite ride was the Loggers Run. I was so wet it looked like I had just got out of the shower.

Next, we ate some unusual food at a nice restaurant. I ate chicken on a stick it looked very yummy. It tasted spicy and tangy. My mouth felt like it was on fire.

Later that day we bought souvenirs. I bought Mickey Mouse ears for my sister, a t-shirt with Snow White for myself, and I also bought some key chains for my friends. I can’t wait to see their face when I give them these cool sourvenirs.

Finally, our family vacation was over. I had such a great time riding all the cool rides, eating tasty food and buying great souvenirs. This is one vacation I will never forget.