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English SPM ESSAYWRITING.
About Q. 5 in SPM English itis narrative writing. Youare often required to writeessay in these 2 ways.
Write a story ending likethis:
1...They looked at each
other and smiledmeaningfully.(SPM 2011)
or
Write a storybe innin with:
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This type of story/narrativewriting is popular with candidatesas they can
memorize anystory and use them in writing.
However, if the narrative ismemorized work & writing is
really good compared to the 1stessay(Directed) then the essaymarks will be adjusted to reflectthe true/fair writing ability
Story must be INTERESTING andDescription vivid/ accurate
with details.
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incident Iever
experienced.
Many people haveexperienced all kinds ofscary incidents orsituations. I wish torelate the scariestincident I have ever
experienced.It all started one fine
afternoon when .. dadasked me .. go to the
bank to get .. money.
When I arrived, there were
only few people in...
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Every thing lookednormal and I could
not imagine even inmy wildest dreamwhat was to happen
next!
I quickly queued up at
a counter to carry outmy transaction andget home.
My dad expected me
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Scene: Robbers burst into bank
Soon the bank wasquite empty. It wasnear closing time so
Suddenly, there wasa commotion and aloud bang. Turningaround I was shockedto see
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Everyone lied faced down on floor
Get down on the floor
now.. Or I will blast yourhead off! screamed oneof the men who looked
like he was in charge. Very quickly, every one
obeyed ..
We were all terrified to
see a shotgun pointed.
I started to pray that ..
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oThen the leader walkedright up to the manager
and pointed the gun athis head!
He shouted Give me
all the money or youcan kiss your wifegoodbye.
Although I was lyingon the ground, I could
see that the situationwas very serious.
One of the man wasready to shoot at any
one who tried toescape or scream forhelp
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Put in all the moneyhere, now or
He sounded very nervousand we were sure he wasgoing to shoot
However while all this wasgoing on the police
already knew about ..A patrol car was on its way
to
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Within minutes, thepolice were outside thebank. We could see therobbers getting morenervous.
Come out with yourhands up! a voiceboomed from a policehailer.
The robbers were nowarguing and eventhreatened to kill us all if
..
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After a while, therobbers decided to
surrender because.
They did not want todie. We were all so.
Soon the policedkicked down the door
and ..