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Pearson Edexcel International GCSE 4EB0/01
English Language B
Paper 1
The purpose of this pack is to provide centres with a set of
exemplars with commentaries.
Included in this pack:
• Questions 4, 5, 9, 10, 11, 12 from January 2014 paper
• Range of responses with marks
• Examiner commentary
Questions 1, 2, 3, 6, 7 and 8 are n o t included as the range of correct
responses to these are fully exemplified in the mark scheme. This pack
focuses on the reading questions where students are asked to respond ‘in
your own words’.
Contents
Pages
Question 4 1-2
Question 5 3-4
Question 9 5-6
Question 10 7-15Question 11 16-39
Question 12(a) 40-47
Question 12(b) 48-58
Question 12(c) 59-67
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Question 4 (Total = 4 marks)
Candidate A
Mark: 4
Candidate B
Mark: 2
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Candidate C
Mark: 1
Candidate D
Mark: 4
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Question 5 (Total = 3 marks)
Candidate A
Mark: 3
Candidate B
Mark: 2
3
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Candidate C
Mark: 3
Candidate D
Mark: 2
Candidate E
Mark: 3
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Question 9 (Total = 3 marks)
Candidate A
Mark: 2
Candidate B
Mark: 3
Candidate C
Mark: 9
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Candidate D
Mark: 1
Candidate E
Mark: 0
Candidate F
Mark: 3
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Question 10 (Total = 6 marks)
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Candidate A
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Candidate A cont.
Commentary
The candidate has made a choice in the first sentence but the remainder of the
response is narrative, re-telling the events of the two texts.
Mark: 1
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Candidate B
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Candidate B cont.
Commentary
The response has two clear reasons for the choice of the second text: ‘that it tells us about Amy’s major injuries’; ‘Amy stood up for life and survival’
with clear examples from the text to support each reason (4 marks). There is a
clear reason: ‘it describes a survival story of someone who was in a less remote
place’ and support for the text not chosen (2 marks).
Mark: 6
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Candidate C
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Candidate C cont.
Commentary
There is sufficient personal response and development to support the choice of
Text 1 in a comparative response (4 marks); however, there is not sufficient
development in support of the text not chosen (1 mark).
Mark: 5
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Candidate D
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Candidate D cont.
Commentary
The candidate has presented two reasons for the chosen text: ‘from the real
experience’ and ‘places are well know and the present time’ [sic] with a
quotation in support of the latter point (3 marks). There is a reason for notchoosing the other text: ‘date back to 1971 reader will find it hard to relate’
[sic] (1 mark).
Mark: 4
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Question 11 (Total = 35 marks)
Candidate A
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
Commentary
The response covers the three bullet points. There is some attempt to write an
article, but weak control limits the response. There is some accurate spelling,but grammatical structuring lacks control.
Marks:
AO1: 5
AO2: 7
AO3: 2
Total: 14
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Candidate B
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
Commentary
This is a re-telling of the original extracts and there is little evidence of the
candidate’s own work.
Marks:
AO1: 1
AO2 1
AO3 1
Total: 3
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Candidate C cont.
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Candidate C cont.
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Candidate C cont.
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Candidate C cont.
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Candidate C cont.
Commentary
The response offers quite a wide range of relevant points and relates well to
the intended audience. Quality of written communication is generallyaccurate across a fairly wide range but lacks the sophistication required for
level 5.
Marks:
AO1: 9
AO2: 15
AO3: 4
Total: 28
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Candidate D
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Candidate D cont.
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Candidate D cont.
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Candidate D cont.
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Candidate D cont.
Commentary
The response is well adapted for its intended audience. It covers a wide range
of ideas. The quality of written communication is ambitious and assured.
Marks:
AO1: 10
AO2: 20
AO3: 5
Total: 35
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Candidate E
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Candidate E cont.
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Candidate E cont.
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Candidate E cont.
Commentary
This is a sound response which has a good number of relevant points. The
response has a clear grasp of how to relate to the intended audience. Quality
of written communication is mostly secure with a few errors.
Marks:
AO1: 6
AO2: 12
AO3: 3
Total: 21
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Question 12 (Total marks: 35)
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Question 12(a)
Candidate A
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
Commentary
The ideas are effective and sustained. The argument is well structured.
Quality of written communication is accurate although there are some errorsbut also ambitious vocabulary.
Marks:
AO2: 18
AO3: 7
Total: 25
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Candidate B
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
Commentary
The ideas are broadly appropriate with some attempt at organisation. Quality
of written communication: the punctuation is mostly correct with some
correct spelling, but the grammar and expression are weak.
Marks:
AO2: 8
AO3: 3
Total: 11
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Question 12(b)
Candidate A
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate B
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
Commentary
The ideas are broadly appropriate but they lack detail and development. The
response is pedestrian. Quality of written communication: the spelling issecure, but the grammar is weak.
Marks:
AO2: 10
AO3: 4
Total: 14
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Question 12(c)
Candidate A
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
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Candidate A cont.
Commentary A skilfully controlled response, which has compelling and fully developed
ideas. The occasional slips do not detract from the overall quality of this
mature and engaging response.
Marks:
AO2: 25
AO3: 10
Total: 35
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Candidate B
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Candidate B cont.
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Candidate B cont.
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