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//. //. .1o 4 /. From: Steve lA/allace [[email protected] Sent: Decernber 17. 2007 4:51 PM To: Alec BlYth SuE'ect RE: repott comments Hl Alec, some rpre @mments on the EmEt report that br sorrn reason I falled to ,ncludo bel'o'*: Ernst Report (con't1 Pg 19 - not surE Wkipedia is a valid r€Eron€ souroe, trough l've been out of th€ academb sceno br arrfille Pg 19'No CDlrl/G llmib have been elceeded'-can you finbh he sentence off so ib c{ear il apdles b all dl$ued organl( Pg 23 - stab r€Etson why Ersil udl b not on €&ffie dot Fig f 0. Pg 27 t28 - Menlirn that propan@ftane 8C h any of the uabr uEIq htt popanqmnane caffir hobpes imply impact Itanlq s*erc wer€ measured on 2 wabrwdtsdbse ffifipn!-q_uam. Pg 2s--2F bst eenbrp. graffincs[nafura simihrbrCBM ald wabrrruelb does notnecessarily Flom: SEve Wallaa Senh Frlday, [Eaernber t4,20[J7 10:43 AM To:'Atsc Blyth' $E* report@mmentr HiAlec Sorry br he delay in nry comments, its been pretty cEtzy around bere the last week Etnrt ReFtrt / ; Pg 3t9 - use early 2006 insted of Jan or Feb. I wifl ry b nail down a rpnfi wth he complhnce guys 4/. Pg5-bstparainsec2.'Largedowrnuardvertcalgradbnts.........areeleected'.Canyoutackon'(seepg. 12or4.4.21'al ,. the end so that it Is cbar'expected'b veffied later in report '/ o Pg.6 - CBM well 100/07-13-27-UIW4M on Table 2 is 00/07-1Y027-22V!4. Preftx 00 or 100 needs to be conecteil {./-. Pg 8-dadry unibas mbgl (could becorfirad hrrd) { . fFgq-4.z corretudhn strou[*Oe qrfir6d y'o bgC-# - 1epa, whd b edandyses ? 2d pra,'debciod h freu,efl in tre pasf -when? /a Fig 2 - red dots look like welts. Can arorE be lnserbdfionr label b black dots? /g Pg. 12, ld para- insertreftrence b Bacfru&Mk*rael2t02atthe end. 'Please leave the Kenny well out br now, as you'll address it lnfie other reports. Perhaps send me an updabd draft bebre we finalize approprbb (eg. has ornpled insEed of nfiomde) Pg 6 sec 2.3 - b 3 l[GV $re[s corecf? , A Pg 8 sec2.4.2 -AQrcE Pg 11 sec 3.1.1 -'These rve[..-.'. SarrE bffin of pg h Scc 3.2 Pg 12 sec 3.3.2 - ld para, 'analy* dgas *6 lap by AE?{\f Pg 14 sec 5.1.1 -'This basin o bnned-...'Also. cofiuna atend'....craton'- should be pefud Pg 18 sec 5.3 -'A cetrer* log sltffIcd good a cerpnt bontr Pg 28, 2d para - n-...in h€ D35 waterwell......- Zlhnmennen ReDort -/. tnt o @nse sounds a litle odd b me (not to mention Mr. Zlmmerman), what do you thlnlo Perhaps pest bnse is mor ./. r. ,r

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From: Steve lA/allace [[email protected]

Sent: Decernber 17. 2007 4:51 PM

To: Alec BlYth

SuE'ect RE: repott comments

Hl Alec, some rpre @mments on the EmEt report that br sorrn reason I falled to ,ncludo bel'o'*:

Ernst Report (con't1

Pg 19 - not surE Wkipedia is a valid r€Eron€ souroe, trough l've been out of th€ academb sceno br arrfillePg 19'No CDlrl/G llmib have been elceeded'-can you finbh he sentence off so ib c{ear il apdles b all dl$ued organl(Pg 23 - stab r€Etson why Ersil udl b not on €&ffie dot Fig f 0.Pg 27 t28 - Menlirn that propan@ftane 8C h any of the uabr uEIq htt popanqmnane caffir hobpes

imply impact

Itanlqs*erc

wer€ measured on 2 wabrwdtsdbse ffifipn!-q_uam.Pg 2s--2F bst eenbrp. graffincs[nafura simihrbrCBM ald wabrrruelb does notnecessarily

Flom: SEve WallaaSenh Frlday, [Eaernber t4,20[J7 10:43 AMTo:'Atsc Blyth'$E* report@mmentr

HiAlec

Sorry br he delay in nry comments, its been pretty cEtzy around bere the last week

Etnrt ReFtrt

/ ; Pg 3t9 - use early 2006 insted of Jan or Feb. I wifl ry b nail down a rpnfi wth he complhnce guys

4/. Pg5-bstparainsec2.'Largedowrnuardvertcalgradbnts.........areeleected'.Canyoutackon'(seepg. 12or4.4.21'al,. the end so that it Is cbar'expected'b veffied later in report'/ o Pg.6 - CBM well 100/07-13-27-UIW4M on Table 2 is 00/07-1Y027-22V!4. Preftx 00 or 100 needs to be conecteil{./-. Pg 8-dadry unibas mbgl (could becorfirad hrrd){ . fFgq-4.z corretudhn strou[*Oe qrfir6dy'o bgC-# - 1epa, whd b edandyses ? 2d pra,'debciod h freu,efl in tre pasf -when?/a Fig 2 - red dots look like welts. Can arorE be lnserbdfionr label b black dots?/g Pg. 12, ld para- insertreftrence b Bacfru&Mk*rael2t02atthe end.

'Please leave the Kenny well out br now, as you'll address it lnfie other reports. Perhaps send me an updabd draft bebre we

finalize

approprbb (eg. has ornpled insEed of nfiomde)Pg 6 sec 2.3 - b 3 l[GV $re[s corecf? , APg 8 sec2.4.2 -AQrcEPg 11 sec 3.1.1 -'These rve[..-.'. SarrE bffin of pg h Scc 3.2Pg 12 sec 3.3.2 - ld para, 'analy* dgas *6 lap by AE?{\fPg 14 sec 5.1.1 -'This basin o bnned-...'Also. cofiuna atend'....craton'- should be pefudPg 18 sec 5.3 -'A cetrer* log sltffIcd good a cerpnt bontrPg 28, 2d para - n-...in h€ D35 waterwell......-

Zlhnmennen ReDort

-/. tnt o @nse sounds a litle odd b me (not to mention Mr. Zlmmerman), what do you thlnlo Perhaps pest bnse is mor

./.

r.,r

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. ,/ Pg 30, znd paa - " Of these eight well, the average. ...."

. Pg 32,znd bullet - "The AENV (staff member?) involved in the case was not a Hydrogeologist, but they....."

For this report, just send me an electronic final version.

Thankssteve

Steve Vl/allace, fuI.Sc., P.Geol.Hydrogeologist

Alberta Environment, Groundwater Policy Unitl0thfl Oxbridge Place,9820 - 106 StreetEdmonton, Alberta T5K 2J6Phone: (780) 427-9759 Fax: (780) 422-4192

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From: Sleve l/lfallace [Steve.V\[email protected]$enft December2A,20/}T 8:19AM

To: Alec Bly0r

Su$ect tanlidsen repqtAthclrrrents: RE l-aurfulsen s,B[ comphint drdi

HiAlec, 4B*e find oornrnents bdotir, l4q ta il) t1./

"/ , Pg 5, 3tu Fre- ppase r*rrc f,or h lhe de€per]fCF o tre norffreq/Bacrru and Mf*rad?)/: Pg 6, 2d para - 175.9 - tf{.qirlC, does not rnabtr up wttr TaUe l,f,rough it nraffires Frg 3./o Pg 7, bp - Encana CBM ur*t0OOS,{ 1&7,A,VY4ll. SeposeO b be m? As pg I a br ttunes

y't Pg E, 2d para - a st dy of the pobrdd frr mdrane ni.faton.....b orrersf unda irwesEdim by AEI{V.rc pgn to npntiu tds sfudy when we dl out the ornplaint review ftdingo, so perhaps we stpuld leave itoutdftbrptt

/,. Trcof pageg? o

,,/ . Pg 11, bp - pertry tse 'HtiaH the in@ative prooess'as a fumal 'investigation' (as per legbffion)was nddoneas fus I anraweTabfe 1 - mis*ng silrdlot perts on fll/[I7-11 {Pt7-ZBtU4 -T.lfr aat ta#Pg12-ot125 typoro il-l$Uf +(tr?.{trl-zUtftlt LW17 4.5.2-tUhqfiPad-> "p8 " -vL'w\P^^'^'' 4ot4Pg 31 - H para - "Itrls ffiliufly vdHaEs.....are the sarne as the e[hane.....'. Pertaps ]rrcntion ftis doesnd necessarly fnply leact

. AnyoffproommenEfiom Emsfi reporthatrny appfi

Alsd I atEctr a comment by Leslie Mill€r, whidr you may rrant to consider hcorporbting.

Stev6

Steye Wallace, DISa, P.G@LIlydrogeologist

Albefio hvirowstt, M*aq PolW Unit|0thfl Ox.bridge Place, 9820 - lM SvectMnonton Alfurta T5KU6Phone: (780) 427-9759 Far,: (7E0) 1224192

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Alec Blytt

fiom: S'Eve l/Uallace [Steve.\[email protected]

Sent December27,2007 11:27 A?fr

To: Alec Bly0t

Subfect Emst report

Hi Aie

Just a couple of more comments on the Ertrst report, ptrease make the changesthen send final hanlcopiesand CD.

4. Pg 5 - last para of Sec 2 - perhqps *@lculated" is more accurate than 'measured'/ o Pg 19 (4.5.3) - BETX should beaTE(,/ . Pg 19 (4.5.4) - last tno sentences - should there only be one?/, . Fg 2Q -senEncaattop needs conected (The analytical techniques....),1/ . Pg.30, 4rt butlet - need to cfrange gradient value (t see ib been revised)

C----'+ €* fu />

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ThanksSteve

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Alec Blyth

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Fom: Steveta{afiae [[email protected]]

Sent December2B, 2W7 9:29AM

To: Alec Blyth

Subject Slgnerand Emst Reports

HiAlec

Gomments on the Signer report Please finallze and send report

PgsS€-10/05Pg 6, O - dease tefrue bsfi enEnce Hc befueTablel-rill(bhtabbPg 10, 4.3 -Agpod qudlty rccorQ b...'Tabb 2 -rc make sure taHe is rpt spfft bdrren two pagpsPg 14 - 1.1.,1. Oily w#r dop (and pocseb g* otsofr0on) oocurc liorn ZXll€mg fit*s dnce). So trbheof evt{encebnotmsfrong. Dortreessadly needbct}arge, hltrcedwe n€d b begepered frrhequedion. ForlnsEne, dalyprpirlgdropsrry befteotsriffiUfiadorreyou mention. SdnebrLauftbenWop 19n-m3, rhe dne). lf re-mdedt drange h oorctrslon secfron bo.Pg 34.- rc elpard at fie erd of hst paragr4h 6 you dH in tle condus&rnsPg 34, Sd hdtet Dos not mabfi ffinent in sec 2.2Comrrenb ln drer rcuiere tH may appf

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Also, I lke hor you phrase things at he end of page 31 abotft pmpane/butane (hst senEnce) and wonder if yorcan use ftis rnoding in the Emst report as wdl lf ils not bo late.

f\On- f€sPonsiuc-

Steve

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Alec BffiFrom: Ledie Miller lleslie.Mille]@gov.ab-cal

Scnt Decernber 18,2@712:08 PM

To: Steve Wbllace

Subfec{: RE: Lauddsen well complalnt draft

HiSbve,

ln Seefron {2 of Sre repdt, t want b dd that rrrhen Genitsen Dd[ing co]dtJcH the doum hde camerainspedion of the rrdl, he also did a "frush and brush'of the rydl (baslcally deand some of tte encrusfiation fsnme'friOe tre vrdl caslng r.rdrc high prmsnrcd sbem) prftr to instdling e IEt v PVC liner in trc uell. The tu$lard brush' conducbd bf fte aAnei was fre dosest fting b nrainbnance firat has bst done on the LaurUsenurells{ne he initid oottffiwifit AEI{V.Nob: afur the holes urere discorrercd in the eirg, the cadng was not rephced - ttre nen A/G lher was madyplaed insile the conoded c*$ng.

Use the information as you see ftt.

Thanks,Leslie

Frcm: Steve WallaceSenE lvlonday, Deernber t7,?:007 8:38 AM

To: Leslle MillerSubIecfi FW: Laurldsen tadl omplaint draft

HiLeslie

Here is the link b he tauridsen draft rWft I dL nd ter fiom Ma0n or Daren on the Emst report, if you trinkUrey rnay urant b look at ftis one please pm it on. I wputs sugges( you pdnt q coPy dght alpyt ?s he leporbOoi't smy up on tre ARC FTP siti bo lorg. l'tl be ty[E frnaffze a[ thes reporc by year end, so best b gFue rEany oomments m qron as yil cen (this uueek petsraHy).

Steve

Frcm: Alec BlyUr [mailb:[email protected]]Sel& Frlday, December 14,2W71:18 Pt'lTo: Steve WallaceSubjech Lauridsen well comphint draft

HiSEve,The drad of ffre taudrlsen repot is comple&e. lt is bo Bqq to gend -so-yoq_can

get it here:

ntteyioGiOe.aruaO.calOounifdnauridsen rlven gomplaint revlew OratpOt

f VoUTAe anytouble orquestion, give ne a call.

Research Hydrogeologist