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S-3a Identifying Comma Splices and Fused Sentences
Multiple Choice
Select the answer that contains neither a comma splice nor a fused
sentence.
1.
a. The sculptor Alexander Calder (1898-1976) gained fame for his
mobiles and wire sculptures of circuses he went on to produce large
sculptures for public areas.
b. The painter Mary Cassatt (1845-1926) was born in Pennsylvania but
spent many years in Paris, where the Impressionists thrived, she
chose women and children as her special subject.
c. Feminist artist Judy Chicago (born 1939) creates multimedia
projects. Her best-known work is The Dinner Party, which explores
women’s history.
ANS: c
REF: The correct answer is c.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
2.
a. John Singleton Copley (1738-1815) was a master portraitist and
painter of historical scenes, his works are considered aristocratically
elegant.
b. Known for glass-covered boxes filled with enigmatically arranged
found objects and collages, Joseph Cornell (1903-1972) was a
product of surrealism, which relied on irrational juxtaposition.
c. Stuart Davis (1894-1964) borrowed cubism from European artists
and made it American his paintings present bright colors.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
3.
a. A major exponent of abstract expressionism and action painting,
Willem de Kooning (1904-1997) arrived in the United States as a
stowaway and first supported himself here as a house painter,
toward the end of his life he worked on sculptures.
b. One of the best-known paintings by Thomas Eakins (1844-1916),
The Gross Clinic, captures a surgical operation, a subject considered
inappropriate at the time. Eakins lost an academic position because
he used nude models in mixed classes.
c. Jenny Holzer (born 1950) produces multimedia works electronic
message boards are one of the media she uses.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
4.
a. Winslow Homer (1836-1910) excelled in painting dramatic
seascapes, one example is On a Lee Shore.
b. Lonely streets, buildings, and interiors dominate the canvasses of
Edward Hopper (1882-1967) his work has influenced a twenty-first-
century photographer of street scenes.
c. Robert Indiana (born 1928) produces pop paintings and sculptures,
such as his Love series, that sometimes call to mind large signs.
ANS: c
REF: The correct answer is c.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
5.
a. A pop artist, Jasper Johns (born 1930) has used flags, beer cans, and
targets in his sculpture and paintings; he finds meaning in everyday
objects.
b. Franz Kline (1910-1962) produced monumental black-and-white
works these are examples of abstract expressionism.
c. Roy Lichtenstein (1923-1997) was the pop artist recognized for his
paintings based on comic strips, later he created pop versions of
well-known nineteenth- and twentieth-century artworks.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
6.
a. Georgia O’Keeffe (1887-1986) painted scenes reflecting the
landscape in the southwestern part of the United States, she made
her home in New Mexico.
b. Renowned for his abstract works, Isamu Noguchi (1904-1988)
produced materials for architectural spaces one of his most famous
works is the sculpture garden of the UNESCO building in Paris.
c. The paintings of Barnett Newman (1905-1971) range from abstract
expressionism to the color-field movement. He developed a unique
geometric style that became his trademark.
ANS: c
REF: The correct answer is c.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
7.
a. The most famous of Flemish artists and a leading baroque figure,
Peter Paul Rubens created material that demonstrated his energy
and enthusiasm for his work. He turned out such masterpieces as
The Raising of the Cross (1610-1611) and The Judgment of Paris
(1638-1639).
b. James Abbott McNeil Whistler (1834-1903) created paintings that
exhibit a compelling sense of design and color, his series Nocturnes
was a forerunner of what came to be known as abstract art.
c. Known as the leading portraitist of America’s Federal period, Gilbert
Stuart (1775-1828) produced more than a thousand portraits of four
presidents, diplomats, and notables he was best known for his
portraits of George Washington.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
8.
a. Art historians refer to Rembrandt Harmenszoon van Rijn (1606-
1669) as a master of the Dutch school; he turned out approximately
six hundred works.
b. Vincent Van Gogh (1853-1890) is known as one of the nineteenth
century’s most influential artists, much of his work was produced in
a twenty-nine-month period leading up to his suicide.
c. Paul Gaugin (1848-1903) was a leading postimpressionist painter at
the age of thirty-five, he abandoned his family to focus on his
painting career.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
9.
a. Henri Rousseau was a self-taught practitioner, and he produced
colorful portraits, frequently of jungle scenes.
b. Michelangelo Buonarroti (1475-1564) was a poet, architect, and
sculptor in addition to achieving fame as a painter, he is probably
best known for his frescoes on the Sistine Chapel’s ceiling.
c. Michelangelo Merisi da Caravaggio (c. 1573-1610) produced bold
paintings marked by light and shadow breaking with past artistic
practice, he showed the saints as everyday people.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
10.
a. The creations of Diego Rivera (1886-1957) celebrate Mexico’s
history and workers, he is a founder of the Mexican mural
renaissance.
b. Leonardo da Vinci (1452-1519) possessed many talents; two of his
most famous paintings are The Last Supper (1495-1498) and the
Mona Lisa (1503-1506).
c. Pablo Picasso (1881-1973) produced many important paintings
including The Three Musicians (1921) and Guernica (1937) beyond
his life as a painter, he was a sculptor, graphic artist, and
ceramicist.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3a.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3a.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3a.html
S-3b Editing Comma Splices and Fused Sentences
Multiple Choice
Each of the following passages may contain a comma splice or a fused
sentence. Select the answer that eliminates the problem in the original
without introducing another comma splice or fused sentence. If the
original passage is correct, select c. No change.
1. What’s the difference between psychology and psychiatry? The
former studies mental processes and behavior, the latter is a branch of
medicine specializing in mental illness.
a. What’s the difference between psychology and psychiatry? The
former studies mental processes and behavior the latter is a branch
of medicine specializing in mental illness.
b. What’s the difference between psychology and psychiatry? The
former studies mental processes and behavior; the latter is a branch
of medicine specializing in mental illness.
c. No change.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
2. In clinical psychology, the therapist tries to treat mental
disturbances without prescribing drugs therefore this branch of
psychology often carries the label talk therapy.
a. In clinical psychology, the therapist tries to treat mental
disturbances without prescribing drugs; therefore, this branch of
psychology often carries the label talk therapy.
b. In clinical psychology, the therapist tries to treat mental
disturbances without prescribing drugs, this branch of psychology
often carries the label talk therapy.
c. No change.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
3. Social psychologists observe people during experiments or in day-to-
day life, the goal is to learn how people interact. Sometimes the
observers do not make themselves known to the participants.
a. Social psychologists observe people during experiments or in day-to-
day life. The goal is to learn how people interact. Sometimes the
observers do not make themselves known to the participants.
b. Social psychologists observe people during experiments or in day-to-
day life. The goal is to learn how people interact, sometimes the
observers do not make themselves known to the participants.
c. No change.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
4. The field of developmental psychology deals with changes in mental
and behavioral performance over time, the field began with a focus on
child psychology, it has grown to track changes throughout a lifetime.
a. The field of developmental psychology deals with changes in mental
and behavioral performance over time. The field began with a focus
on child psychology, it has grown to track changes throughout a
lifetime.
b. The field of developmental psychology deals with changes in mental
and behavioral performance over time. Although the field began
with a focus on child psychology, it has grown to track changes
throughout a lifetime.
c. No change.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
5. Cognitive psychology is yet another branch of psychology.
Researchers in cognitive psychology look at how people learn, how
people solve problems, and how brains store information.
a. Cognitive psychology is yet another branch of psychology,
researchers in cognitive psychology look at how people learn; how
people solve problems; and how brains store information.
b. Cognitive psychology is yet another branch of psychology
researchers in cognitive psychology look at how people learn, how
people solve problems, and how brains store information.
c. No change.
ANS: c
REF: The correct answer is c.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
6. Modern psychology began with the work of Wilhelm Wundt (1832-
1920), who set up a laboratory in Germany for the study of the mind,
about the same time, William James (1842-1910), a Harvard professor,
published Principles of Psychology. Both men taught many students,
who continued their work.
a. Modern psychology began with the work of Wilhelm Wundt (1832-
1920), who set up a laboratory in Germany for the study of the
mind, and of William James (1842-1910), a Harvard professor, who
published Principles of Psychology, both men taught many students,
who continued their work.
b. Modern psychology began with the work of Wilhelm Wundt (1832-
1920), who set up a laboratory in Germany for the study of the
mind, and of William James (1842-1910), a Harvard professor, who
published Principles of Psychology. Both men taught many students,
who continued their work.
c. No change.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
7. Another early contributor to psychology was Hermann Ebbinghaus
(1850-1909), who developed a system for studying memory, as part of
his approach, he asked subjects to memorize nonsense syllables,
which had no meaning for them.
a. Another early contributor to psychology was Hermann Ebbinghaus
(1850-1909), who developed a system for studying memory. As part
of his approach, he asked subjects to memorize nonsense syllables
these had no meaning for them.
b. Another early contributor to psychology was Hermann Ebbinghaus
(1850-1909), who developed a system for studying memory; as part
of his approach, he asked subjects to memorize nonsense syllables,
which had no meaning for them.
c. No change.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
8. Lightner Witmer (1867-1956) was the father of clinical psychology
and set up the first psychological clinic. Alfred Binet (1851-1911)
designed the first intelligence test.
a. Lightner Witmer (1867-1956) was the father of clinical psychology,
he had set up the first psychological clinic. Alfred Binet (1851-1911)
designed the first intelligence test.
b. Lightner Witmer (1867-1956) was the father of clinical psychology;
he had set up the first psychological clinic, Alfred Binet (1851-1911)
designed the first intelligence test.
c. No change.
ANS: c
REF: The correct answer is c.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
9. Another early contributor to psychology was Max Wertheimer (1880-
1943) he helped develop gestalt psychology. This branch of
psychology dealt with human perception.
a. Another early contributor to psychology was Max Wertheimer (1880-
1943), who helped develop gestalt psychology, this branch of
psychology dealt with human perception.
b. Another early contributor to psychology was Max Wertheimer (1880-
1943), who helped develop gestalt psychology. This branch of
psychology dealt with human perception.
c. No change.
ANS: b
REF: The correct answer is b.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html
10. The major figure in early psychology was Sigmund Freud (1856-
1939), who had been practicing neurology, he observed that some
patients who had symptoms of ailments but no physical problems
seemed to get better simply by talking. This observation led to Freud’s
interest in the unconscious mind.
a. The major figure in early psychology was Sigmund Freud (1856-
1939), who had been practicing neurology. He observed that some
patients who had symptoms of ailments but no physical problems
seemed to get better simply by talking, and this observation led to
Freud’s interest in the unconscious mind.
b. The major figure in early psychology was Sigmund Freud (1856-
1939), who had been practicing neurology. He observed that some
patients who had symptoms of ailments but no physical problems
seemed to get better simply by talking this observation led to
Freud’s interest in the unconscious mind.
c. No change.
ANS: a
REF: The correct answer is a.
In The Norton Field Guide to Writing, see S-3b.
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/bullock2_readings_handbook
_ebook/welcome.asp?page=10
In The Little Seagull Handbook, see S-3b.
http://wwnorton.com/college/english/write/LSH/full/s-3b.html