Audiences feedback- short commentary

Embed Size (px)

Citation preview

1. Audiences feedbackAudiences feedbackAudiences feedbackAudiences feedback Using Facebook and an iPhone to help me evaluate my music magazine. 2. Comment 1- Female aged 18 3. Comment 2- Female aged 22 4. Comment 3- Male aged 28 This comment was done on a voice recorder from my iPhone as It allowed me to play-back any comments and to get a general view on what my target audience thinks of my magazine without having to deal with writing it out- this helps the comment be more valid. 5. ConclusionConclusion From the audience feedback I received I have noticed that both genders are interested in this magazine. They like the overall house style in terms of text colour, text style, and the use of Images. They also found the quotations in the article relating to something that is going on in the word, and general comments have noticed the intertextual references of the Inbetweeners. They found themselves immediately attracted to the particular artists wrote on the music magazine. However I think if I did use shorter answers in my article my audience would probably be more attracted to the artist as well as the article. It was extremely helpful when my audiences mentioned the spelling mistakes as I could go back to make any changes to the magazine as soon as possible, gaining a professional product. The style of images I used are very common in R&B and was a typical convention of this genre, I could of used a less serious image but by doing this my genre would then be alternating between POP and R&B. In terms of comment 3 mentioning about DJ. Kerr not having his own cover-line was because there was a page number instead, this is used in music magazines as the audience can instantly see the artist and read up on them If they are interested. I feel that from this feedback I can see that my magazine does succeed in meeting its aims, It attracts both Male and Females aged 14-28 who are interested in R&B, however it seems to attract more females than males, this could be the colours, or how the main artist is a female. Overall I have received a lot of positive comments about my magazine and I feel that it is successful. 6. ConclusionConclusion From the audience feedback I received I have noticed that both genders are interested in this magazine. They like the overall house style in terms of text colour, text style, and the use of Images. They also found the quotations in the article relating to something that is going on in the word, and general comments have noticed the intertextual references of the Inbetweeners. They found themselves immediately attracted to the particular artists wrote on the music magazine. However I think if I did use shorter answers in my article my audience would probably be more attracted to the artist as well as the article. It was extremely helpful when my audiences mentioned the spelling mistakes as I could go back to make any changes to the magazine as soon as possible, gaining a professional product. The style of images I used are very common in R&B and was a typical convention of this genre, I could of used a less serious image but by doing this my genre would then be alternating between POP and R&B. In terms of comment 3 mentioning about DJ. Kerr not having his own cover-line was because there was a page number instead, this is used in music magazines as the audience can instantly see the artist and read up on them If they are interested. I feel that from this feedback I can see that my magazine does succeed in meeting its aims, It attracts both Male and Females aged 14-28 who are interested in R&B, however it seems to attract more females than males, this could be the colours, or how the main artist is a female. Overall I have received a lot of positive comments about my magazine and I feel that it is successful.