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Job Search
Week 4, Part 2
Reminder
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Today
1. Indirect letter hand in2. Grammar quiz preparation3. Job search: the resume
Grammar Quiz
Next class On:
Comma splices 3Cs (Constructive, courteous, clear and
concise)
Grammar-rama
7Cs constructive courteous clear and concise concrete and specific complete coherent correct
Comma Splices
Identify the subject and verb in each sentence:
The youth left the housing complex earlier last year.
The student was off drugs for 6 months.Her biological mother lives on the Island.Luckily, Michael has found work close to
his child’s school.
Comma Splices and Run-ons Comma splices and Run-ons Same problem: two independent clauses
fused together improperly
Comma splice:Subject verb, subject verb
I love ice cream, I love chocolateRun on:Subject verb subject verb
I love ice cream I love chocolate
Comma Splices
Dependent clause Cannot stand alone as a sentence May be missing a subject, a verb, or
have both but also a subordinating conjunction.
Example: Before I leave, I want to dance.
Comma Splices
Independent clause Can stand alone as a sentence Has at least a subject and a verb Example: The star shines.
Comma Splices
Two independent clauses cannot be fused together on their own.
Comma Splices
Comma Splice: When a comma is doing the work of period. Comma is too weak to take this role Comma = weak Period = strong
Comma Splices
Examples His new album has an interesting picture
on the cover, in other words the cover demands attention.
Hand gestures are important for everyone, however they are a means of survival for the hearing impaired.
Tools We Need:
Coordinating Conjunction (“co-con”) FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Subordinating Conjunctions (“sub-cons”) Examples: after, although, as, because,
before, even though, if, once, rather, than, since, that, though, unless, while
How to Fix a comma splice/run-on1. Stronger punctuation2. Use a coordinating conjunction3. Make one phrase dependent
How to Fix a comma splice/run-on1. Use stronger punctuation
1. Period2. Semi-colon and a transitional phrase
1. Examples: also, anyway, besides, furthermore, incidentally, moreover, otherwise, thus, however, in addition
He’s an excellent swimmer; he won an Olympic medal.
He’s an excellent swimmer. He won an Olympic medal.
He’s not a good swimmer; however, he enjoys the water.
How to Fix a comma splice/run-on2. Add a coordinating conjunction
FANBOYS
He’s an excellent swimmer, and he won an Olympic medal.
How to Fix a comma splice/run-on3. Make one phrase dependent
with a subordinating word.by changing it entirely
He is recognized as a great swimmer because he won an Olympic medal.
His great swimming ability won him an Olympic medal.
Comma Splice Practice
Grammar Quiz Review Constructive
You are not eligible for our credit card because you have not yet graduated.
Courteous Thank you for agreeing last month to attend our board
meeting today to hear how your company can support us in the good work that we do in the community.
Clear and concise It is advised that the meter reading should be recorded
hourly by your technician.
Job Search Introduction
Job posting Coverletter Resume
Job Search
Find a posting Camosun postings Your work Times Colonist classifieds Workopolis Monster.ca Craig’s List Government Listings
Resumes
Professional Educational Personal accomplishments
Resume Format
Keep it simple White space One typeface only Use headings/subheadings: be
consistent (no caps) Maximum two pages
Major Headings
Mandatory Education Work Experience
Optional Related Experience Other Skills Volunteer Licences and Certifications Awards and Commendations
Education
Present to past Only put date ranges if in the middle
(different than textbook) Do not include elementary Do not include incomplete courses
Resumes
Two styles Functional (153) Chronological (140)
What do you notice about these two style? Which will you use?
Job Duties
Page 140 (exercise)
Be Specific
Worked on newspaper design Working on a weekly newspaper,
assisted programmers in design of a program to translate computer generated ads into full-page compositions by advising them on how typesetting works.
Action Verbs
designed, developed, demonstrated, received, achieved, trained, coached, facilitated, taught, advised, resolved, reorganized, assisted, identified, tested, reported, diagnosed, machined, created, collaborated, completed, coordinated, troubleshot, documented, wrote, provided, handled, acted as chair, umpired.
Accomplishments SKILL + CONTEXT/SITUATION = ACCOMPLISHMENT
SKILLS: Can use Microsoft Office CONTEXT: English 170 ACCOMPLISHMENT: Used Word, Excel, and PowerPoint to write and illustrate User Manual, illustrated reports, and
workplace documents in Technical Communications course at Camosun College.
Accomplishments
Able to work in groups
Excellent written and oral communication
Good at problem solving
Patient and empathetic ?
Tips
Use lists to present information concisely, and check them for parallelism.
Proofread fastidiously, use a spell-check and grammar check, and get a peer edit. A résumé must be letter perfect.