Lesson 11 Writing Business Letters 1210556377680231 9

Lesson ElevenWriting Business Letters

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Writing a Business Letter

1. Form

2. Content

Parts of a Business Letter

1. Date

2. Sender’s Address

3.Insider Address

4. Salutation

5. Body

6. Closing

7. Enclosures

8. Typist Initials

Sender’s AddressDate

Inside Address

Salutation

Body

Closing

Parts of a Business LetterSender's Address

Including the address of the sender is optional.

Do not write the sender's name or title, as it is included in the letter's closing. Include only the street address, city and zip code.

Another option is to include the sender's address directly after the closing signature.

Date

Parts of a Business LetterDate

The date line is used to indicate the date the letter was written. When writing to companies within the United States, use the American date format. Write out the month, day and year two inches from the top of the page.

Inside Address

Parts of a Business LetterInside Address

The inside address is the recipient's address. It is always best to write to a specific individual at the firm to which you are writing. If you do not have the person's name, do some research by calling the company or speaking with employees from the company.

Parts of a Business LetterInside Address (continued)

Include a personal title such as Ms., Mrs., Mr., or Dr. Follow a woman's preference in being addressed as Miss, Mrs., or Ms. If you are unsure of a woman's preference in being addressed, use Ms. If there is a possibility that the person to whom you are writing is a Dr. or has some other title, use that title.

Parts of a Business LetterInside Address (continued)

Usually, people will not mind being addressed by a higher title than they actually possess. To write the address, use the U.S. Post Office Format.

Salutation

Parts of a Business LetterSalutation

Use the same name as the inside address, including the personal title. If you know the person and typically address them by their first name, it is acceptable to use only the first name in the salutation (for example: Dear Lucy:). In all other cases, however, use the personal title and full name followed by a colon. Leave one line blank after the salutation.

Parts of a Business LetterSalutation (continued)

If you don't know a reader's gender, use a nonsexist salutation, such as "To Whom it May Concern." It is also acceptable to use the full name in a salutation if you cannot determine gender. For example, you might write Dear Chris Harmon: if you were unsure of Chris's gender.

Body

Parts of a Business LetterBody

For block and modified block formats, single space and left justify each paragraph within the body of the letter. Leave a blank line between each paragraph.

When writing a business letter, be careful to remember that conciseness is very important.

Parts of a Business LetterBody (continued)

In the first paragraph, consider a friendly opening and then a statement of the main point.

The next paragraph should begin justifying the importance of the main point.

Parts of a Business LetterBody (continued)

In the next few paragraphs, continue justification with background information and supporting details.

The closing paragraph should restate the purpose of the letter and, in some cases, request some type of action.

Closing

Parts of a Business LetterClosing

The closing begins at the same horizontal point as your date and one line after the last body paragraph. Capitalize the first word only (for example: Thank you) and leave four lines between the closing and the sender's name for a signature.

A comma should follow the closing.

Parts of a Business LetterEnclosures

If you have enclosed any documents along with the letter, such as a resume, you indicate this simply by typing Enclosures one line below the closing.

See page 215

Parts of a Business LetterEnclosures (continued)

As an option, you may list the name of each document you are including in the envelope. For instance, if you have included many documents and need to ensure that the recipient is aware of each document, it may be a good idea to list the names.

Parts of a Business LetterTypist Initials

Typist initials are used to indicate the person who typed the letter. If you typed the letter yourself, omit the typist initials.

Writing for a North American Business Audience

Every country has its own set of rules and expectations about the ways to communicate in a business setting. In some countries, they may place less emphasis on written materials and more emphasis on verbal communication. However, in the United States, memos, letters, and emails are important and play a role in creating a person's business reputation.

Writing for a North American Business Audience

1. Getting to the point2. Keeping it simple3. Using passive and active voice4. Using nondiscriminatory language

1. Getting to the point

The question "so what is your point" is very common with American audiences. In general, North Americans prefer to get a preview of the main ideas so that they know what to expect. Time is an important factor for U.S. business people because they do not have much of it. So it is important to state your purpose or "the bottom line" for writing at the beginning of your document.

1. Getting to the pointHere is an example of a hidden main point

where the writer is requesting employment verification:

Dear Personnel Director:

On March 27, I received a phone call from Mrs. Karen Krane from New York, who was once a data entry clerk in your Ohio office. She was under the direct supervision of.....

1. Getting to the point

As you can see, the above statement goes on several sentences and the writer still has not revealed his or her purpose. A busy personnel director might skip over this request and make it a last priority.

1. Getting to the pointThis is an example with the main point clearly

stated:

Dear Personnel Director:

Would you verify the employment of Mrs. Karen Krane? She was a data entry clerk in your Ohio office (fill in the details)…

Sincerely,

1. Getting to the pointOften times writers will place their main point

at the bottom of their document because they are either delivering bad news or they are afraid their ideas will be rejected. But business writing experts warn against this style of writing. Bad news should always be delivered up front.

1. Getting to the pointAlso remember that while you do not want to

be too shy about delivering bad news, you also do not want to be too aggressive when you submit an idea or suggestion.

1. Getting to the pointFor example, "We must hire a new secretary

now" has an aggressive tone that your reader may not appreciate.

Instead write something like, "I know that you do not think we should hire a new secretary now, but I really think we need to. Please let me explain my reasons."

2. Keeping it simpleUse simple language to get your point across

and you will have more success. You might feel compelled to use bigger words or more complex sentences to build credibility with your audience, but try to avoid this.

2. Keeping it simpleThe two primary reasons to avoid such tactics

are:

a) You might be perceived as a con artistb) Your message might become confusing.

2. Keeping it simpleAn example of using "impressive words":

“Subsequent to the passage of the subject legislation, it is incumbent upon you to

advise your organization to comply with it.”

2. Keeping it simpleAn example using simple words:

“After the law passes, you must tell your people to comply with it.”

2. Keeping it simpleThe second passage is much easier to

understand and it gets straight to the point. There is little room for misunderstanding with that statement.

3. Using Passive and Active Voice

A writer uses passive voice to purposefully leave out the actor or subject of the sentence in an effort to sound more diplomatic.

3. Using Passive and Active VoiceLook at this example:

Active: "I decided that everyone must retake the exam."

Passive: "It has been decided that everyone must retake the exam.“

What is the difference between these sentences?

3. Using Passive and Active Voice

The passive example takes the actor out of the sentence so that the audience cannot directly blame someone.

3. Using Passive and Active VoiceThere are three instances to use the passive

voice:

1.When you don't know the actor or the actor is unimportant.

Example: Every year, thousands of people are diagnosed as having cancer.


voice:

2.To emphasize the action rather than the actor

Example: After long debate, the proposal was endorsed by the long-range planning committee.


voice:

3.To be tactful by not naming the actor.

Example: The procedures were somehow misinterpreted.

3. Using Passive and Active VoiceIf your purpose does not fall into one of three categories above then use active direct voice.

But be careful not to be too direct. You would not want to tell an employer that he or she should hire you because "I am the best."

4. Using Nondiscriminatory Language

Nondiscriminatory language is language that treats all people equally. It does not use any discriminatory words, remarks, or ideas. It is very important that the business writer communicate in a way that expresses equality and respect for all individuals.


It is the kind of language that can come between you and your reader. Make sure your writing is free of sexist language and free of bias based on such factors as race, ethnicity, religion, age, sexual orientation, and disability.


Use neutral job titles.Not Good: ChairmanBetter: Chairperson

4.Using Nondiscriminatory Language

Avoid demeaning or stereotypical terms.Not Good: After the girls in the office receive

an order, our office fills it within 24 hoursBetter: When orders are received from the

office, they are filled within 24 hours


Avoid words and phrases that unnecessarily imply gender.

Not Good: Executives and their wivesBetter: Executives and their spouses


Omit information about group membership

Not Good: Connie Green performed the job well for her age.

Better: Connie Green performed the job well


If you do not know a reader's gender, use a nonsexist salutation.

Not Good: Dear Gentlemen:Better: To Whom it May Concern:


Do not use masculine pronounsNot Good: Each student must provide his

own lab jacketBetter: Students must provide their own lab

jackets. Or Each student must provide his or her own lab jacket.

Accentuating the Positives When you need to present negative information,

soften its effects by superimposing a positive picture on a negative one.

•Stress what something is rather than what it is not.•Emphasize what the firm or product can and will do rather than what it cannot.•Open with action rather than apology or explanation.•Avoid words which convey unpleasant facts.

Accentuating the Positives Compare the following examples.

Which would be more likely to elicit positive reader response?

Accentuating the Positives

Example 1“In response to your question about how many coats of Chem-Treat are needed to cover new surfaces: I regret to report that usually two are required. For such surfaces you should figure

about 200 square feet per gallon for a good heavy coating that will give you five years or more of

beautiful protection.”


Example 2“In response to your question about how many coats of Chem-Treat are needed to cover new

surfaces: One gallon is usually enough for one-coat coverage of 500 square feet of previously

painted surface. For the best results on new surfaces, you will want to apply two coats.”


Example 3“We cannot ship in lots of less than 12.”


Example 4“To keep down packaging costs and to help

customers save on shipping costs, we ship in lots of 12 or more.”

Embedded PositionPlace good news in positions of high emphasis: at the beginnings and endings of paragraphs, letters, and even sentences.

Place bad news in secondary positions: in the center of paragraphs, letters, and, if possible, sentences.

Effective Use Of SpaceGive more space to good news and less to bad

news.

Evaluate the following examples to determine whether or not they present negative

information favorably.

Effective Use Of SpaceExample 1

“No special training programs are normally offered other than that of the College Graduate in Training rotational training period. We do not expect our employees to continue their education, but we do have an excellent tuition refund program to assist in this regard. Where an advanced degree is essential, individuals are recruited with those particular advanced degrees. Both Butler and IUPUI offer courses leading to an MBA degree.”

Effective Use Of SpaceExample 2

“With our rigid quality standards, corrections of Adidas merchandise run less than .02 percent of our total line. Because of an oversight in our stitching department, a damaged needle was inadvertently used and caused the threads to come loose in these particular bags. Since we now have a check on all our machine needles before work each day, you can be assured that the stitching on our Adidas carrying bags will last the lifetime of the bags. Thank you for calling our attention to the loose stitching.”

Next Week:Writing Personal Letters & Envelopes

Reading AssignmentRead pages 208 – 215.

Writing AssignmentI will be collecting all of your resumes next

week! Be ready.

Writing AssignmentWrite a resume to obtain a job after graduation. You may choose whatever job you would like to

apply for. Pay attention to both form and content.

Your resume must be typed.Due in 1week.