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Copywriting Secret of the Masters:

11 Easy Things You Can Do Right Now to Fix a Client’s Website

(and Yours!)

by: John Forde

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11 Easy Things You Can Do Right Now to Fix a

Client’s Website (and Yours!)

The bigger the Internet gets, the more you’ll find yourself being called upon

by clients to "fix" websites that aren’t working. And I’m talking not only about sales websites that aren’t making money but also about editorial-style

websites. Here are the 11 best ways I know of to do it:

1. Define the site’s purpose in five words or less.

Is this a sales site? Then the goal is: "Sell ______________." Is its

purpose to build an e-zine’s mailing list? Then the goal is: "Get names for mailing list."

The purpose needs to be that simple. Pick the most important result, make it narrow, and stick to it. The more you try to accomplish, the

less the site will accomplish in terms of quality results. You can always

create other websites to serve other purposes.

2. Get a headline at the top of the first page.

Forget big logos. Forget splash pages. Get words up top in type bigger

than you think you need. And not just any words. You need a powerful emotional "hook." A big problem identified. A shocking statement. A

huge benefit.

3. Get a big benefit "above the fold."

If your headline at the top of the page is benefit-driven, you’ve done this. If your headline is fear-driven or something other than a clear

benefit, apply the "no-scroll" rule: Make sure the reader sees the

benefit before he starts scrolling down the page.

4. Get rid of "click here to continue" page breaks.

For a fluid, more effective reading experience, you need one long scroll. The less clicking your readers do while soaking up your

message, the better. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.

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5. If it’s a site for building a mailing list, get your signup box "above the fold."

If you’re after email addresses, the sign-up box should be featured prominently in one of the corners. And it should reassure readers that

there’s no risk to their privacy when they sign up (which had better be true).

6. Strip away pointless graphics and links.

Don’t risk having readers miss what you have to say by obscuring it with unnecessary links and graphics. You don’t want images that aren’t

relevant to your message, no matter how cool, cute, or stylish. Nor do you want to give links to other websites (at least, on a promotional

page) or anything that does not further the sale. Stay in control of the reader’s attention.

7. Eliminate technological "tricks."

Flashing banners, java-programming, flash-programming or frames are

not only distractions, they take too long to load. Worse, they could crash your website or the user’s Web browser. Obliterate them.

8. Reread all your subheads.

Skim through the document and read the subheads. Not all of them have to sell, sell, sell. But it’s a mistake for none of them to do so. You

need subheads to keep hooking the interest of the page skimmer, which is what most people are when they read both online and printed

direct mail. Subheads are there to pull the reader back in. Well-crafted subheads offer a path that the reader will want to follow.

9. Check and recheck your offer.

When sales go wrong, the offer is often the reason they flop. Is it the

best possible offer the owner of the business can make? Is there an aspect of the sale that can be fulfilled online (to cut costs and motivate

the buyer with instant-satisfaction urgency)? Can you offer a better guarantee? Is the guarantee featured close to the push for action?

Have you reassured your readers that your reply page and their information is secure?

10. Read the copy out loud.

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This old technique still works. Print the page and read the copy out

loud. You can even record it and listen to the playback. Do any phrases sound dull? Are there sections that are boring or long-winded? Or parts

so good you realize they should land closer to the front? You’ll discover flaws and opportunities this way that you’ll completely miss otherwise.

11. Get a local usability test.

Get at least three other people who know little or nothing about the product you’re selling. Let them read the Web page without giving

them instructions on how to navigate. Provide no warm-up about what to expect. If they all have similar complaints, fix the problem. If their

best response is that they "like" it, you still have work to do. If they start asking questions about the product and how to get it, you’ve got

a winner.

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John Forde:A Master at Writing

More Controls More Often

"If you write copy … how many chances to sell your talents to the businesses you know and trust have you overlooked? Company websites … local sales

brochures … online ads and sales letters … print ads in local papers … even P.R. pieces or ezine editorial.

It might be the small gigs that get you started. It might be the big opportunities that let you smack the cover off the ball at your first at bat.

Either way, I’ve met plenty of people who had no grasp about what role copywriters play.

Masterson’s [Accelerated Program for Six-Figure Copywriting] offers the

most thorough and well-organized approach to the subject I’ve seen anywhere. There’s not a technique or secret in there that I haven’t found

helpful over the years. I owe a great deal of my own success to Mike

Masterson. And I tell him so regularly. As for the program, I’d recommend it to anybody – not just direct-mail copywriters, but anyone who’s trying to get

a grip on what makes marketing work."

— John Forde

JOHN FORDE has been writing winning controls for going on two decades now. He’s made untold millions for clients in the financial, health, and travel

industries. John also works as a copy coach, hosting intense seminars for

two or three hundred marketers and copywriters at a time.

John Forde also writes the successful and very useful eletter, The Copywriter’s Roundtable.