EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONRoxie (16) is knelt down picking up dead branches. Duration: 4 secondsCamera movements – camera pans until Roxie being centralSound: Ambient diegetic sounds – birds, wind, crunches of leaves etc. Speech: Roxie humming to herself

EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONCamera cuts to an over the should shot over Roxie’s shoulder as her head is down continuing to pick up wood. Depth of field is use as we see the side of Roxie clearly but the dead girl stood in front of her during this shot the camera then focuses on the girl as Roxie raises her head. Durations 4 secondsCamera movement – tilts slightly as Roxie’s head rises. Sound – Ambient diegticbird sounds fadeNon – diegetic – quiet slow paced strings creating eeire music start to play.Speech – slight gasp from Roxie

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: Long shot of Roxie as she is rising from the ground as a P.OV shot from the girls perspective. Shot Duration: 5 secondsCamera Movement: camera rises as Roxie doesFigure Movement: Rises from the floor Editing: CutSound: Speech - “Oh h-hello, are you lost?” Non Digetic sounds continue - Eerie sounds continue

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: P.O.V long shot from Roxie’s points of view of the girl. The girl then vanishes.Shot Duration: 3 secondsCamera Movement: Camera stays stationary Figure Movement: StationaryEditing: cutSound: Silence apart from Roxie’s fast heavy breathing

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: P.O.V from Roxie realising the dead girl has actually disappearedShot Duration: 3 secondsCamera Movement: Camera swiftly moves left and rightEditing: cutSound: Silence continues and Roxie’s heavy breathing

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: Close up of Roxie Shot Duration: 3 secondsCamera Movement: Camera StationaryFigure Movement: Roxie is stationary but breathing heavily Editing: cutSound: Silence continues and Roxie’s heavy breathing

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: The dead girl stabs Roxie in the armShot Duration: 3 secondsCamera Movement: StationaryFigure Movement: Dead girl stabs Roxie and she reacts in pain Editing: cutSound: After Roxie has been stabbed the girl giggles childishly whilst Roxie screams. Non diegetic sound becomes more dramatic increasing tempo, volume, pitch etc.

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: The girl smiles satisfied then lowers her arm and disappearsShot Duration: 3 secondsCamera Movement: StationaryFigure Movement: Lowers her arm and then disappears Editing: cutSound: Non diegetic music continues but fades when she disappears. Distant sounds of Roxie’s screaming.

Slugline: EXT. ABANDONED WOODS – NOONShot Description: Roxie runs deep into the forest Shot Duration: 4 secondsCamera Movement: StationaryFigure Movement: Sprints forwardEditing: cutSound: Heavy breathing and she runs. Speech: “H-help! Jay! Darren!” Eerie silence.

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Jay and Darren sat outside the tent laughing with Darren’s dog.Shot Duration: 6 secondsCamera Movement: Begins as a long shot but camera zooms closerFigure Movement: Sat down Editing: cutSound: Ambient sounds – birds, rustling of trees etc. Speech: Jay: “why’s Roxie taking so long?” Darren “Probably broke a nail” both laugh.

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Roxies runs towards Jay and Darren and stops in front of them in hysterics Shot Duration: 4 secondsCamera Movement: StationaryFigure Movement: Roxie runs and stops in front of Jay and Darren, and hunches over breathing heavily.Editing: cutSound: Hysterical sounds coming from Roxie. Jay and Darren Gasp.

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Back shout of Roxie and see Jay standing up moving towards her. She turns slightly so Jay and Darren can see the blood. Shot Duration: 6 secondsFigure Movement: Darren stands and moves closer towards Roxie Editing: cutSound: Speech – Jay “What’s wrong Roxie?”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Over the shoulder shot of Jay speaking to RoxieShot Duration:3 secondsFigure Movement: StationaryEditing: cutSound: Speech – Jay: “What’s happened?” Roxie’s heavy breathing continues

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Roxies explains that she has been stabbed. Shot Duration: 4 secondsFigure Movement: Roxie bent over in painEditing: cutSound: Speech Roxie – A girl she appeared from nowhere like a ghost… She had a knife! My arm it’s been cut!”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Darren steps in and accuses Roxie and imagining things Shot Duration: 8 secondsFigure Movement: Darren steps between Jay and Roxie Editing:CutSound: Speech – Darren: “You don’t actually believe her Jay? Roxie you probably cut yourself on a branch and imagined the girl.”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Roxie is angered by Darren’s acusation Shot Duration: 4 secondsFigure Movement: Roxie balls her hand into a fist in angerEditing: CutSound: Speech – Roxie: “No! I know what I saw Darren!”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Jay and Darren look at each other in confusionShot Duration: 3 secondsFigure Movement: Jay and Darren turn towards each otherEditing: CutSound:

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Mid shot of Roxie pointing n between Jay and Darren Shot Duration: 2 secondsFigure Movement: Roxie raises her arm and points Editing: CutSound: Speech – Roxie: “Look!”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Roxie points and the dead girl and the others look at her as the girl smilesShot Duration: 3 secondsFigure Movement: stationaryEditing: CutSound: non-diegetic eerie string music begins to play and the girl giggles innocently

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Over the should shot of the groups reaction to the girl, Roxie places hand on mouth whilst Jay talks to the girl.Shot Duration: 5 secondsEditing: CutSound: Eerie music continues Speech – Jay: “Our friend here seems to have gotten hurt; perhaps you could tell us what happened?”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: Long shot of the girl and she reveals the knife which was hidden behind her back.Shot Duration: 3 secondsCamera movements: StationaryFigure Movement: Brings her arms back from behind her back holding up knifeEditing: CutSound: Music dramatically increases in pace, pitch and volume and we hear a scream from Roxie . Jay and Darren gasp.

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description/figure movements: Roxie puts hand to her mouth in shock, Darren pushes Roxie to the side and runs away making a quick escape and Jay starts to step back unaware he’s about to trip.Shot Duration: 6 secondsCamera movements: StationaryEditing: CutSound: Diegetic sounds - sounds of Darren running . No diegetic music continues to increase pace, pitch and volume.

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description/figure movements: As the girl launches the knife at Jay he steps back and falls over as the knife hits him in the leg. Roxie runs to Jay’s side.Shot Duration:5 secondsEditing: CutSound: Non diegetic music reaches a climax

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description: The girl vanishes as Jay pulls the knife out from his leg with Roxie beside him.Shot Duration:7 secondsFigure Movement:Editing: CutSound: Diegetic Sounds of the Jeans being ripped and sounds of the girl giggling which fades as she dissapears. Non diegetic music (motif of the dead girl) fades when the girl disappears after the knife cuts his leg. Speech Jay – “Agh”Roxie – “Jay! Darren come back Jay is injured!”

Slugline: EXT – ABANDONED WOODS – CAMPShot Description/fire moivements: Darren runs back as Jay attempts to stand. Roxie blames Darren for leaving.Shot Duration:Editing: CutSound: Non-diegetic ambient sounds of birds etc return, Darren panting. Speech: Darren: “Are you guy’s ok?”Roxie: “Does it look like we’re ok? Some help you were!”