Audience Feedback and what I plan to improve on

What I’m going to improve/fix based upon audience feedback…

A lot of people who took part in giving me feedback didn’t really like the way Callum stood out from the background on my back pane of my Digipak. So therefore I am going to work hard by adjusting colours and brightness to try and make him blend more into the background – giving the picture a more natural look. The amount of empty space on my advert is also a little problem which someone mentioned… However I will not fix anything on my advert as I feel it really captures the minimalism and basicness that I want to show… It is also a common convention of my genre as the audience prefer music to the visuals so therefore basic and simple print work would really capture the genre and it’s audience very well. Another bit of improvement was the fact that Callum should hold the camera on the CD, however I do not have any more time to take pictures and it was brought up by someone in my class and people who did the audience feedback who were not in my class didn’t comment on the CDS image, therefore I will not change the image on my CD. Finally another issues was the visibility of the band’s name on the front pane of my Digipak.. So I shall adjust the colouring of the front pane image to make the text stand out more.

Before and After changes on back pane of Digipak

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Before and After changes on front pane of Digipak

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