Jalisa Brown Nija Daniels ECED 4300-A Dr. Tonja Root Spring 2010 Grade Level: 4 th Specific form of...

Jalisa Brown Nija Daniels

ECED 4300-ADr. Tonja RootSpring 2010

Grade Level: 4th

Specific form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Jalisa Brown

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

PLO: The student will develop

a cinquain poem using a graphic organizer.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry

5 line poemDescribes topic, object, or picture

Tells a storyTotal of 22 syllables2, 4, 6, 8, 2 pattern

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: 978-0-13-195576-4)

Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry

Line 1: One-Word subject: 2 syllables

Line 2: Description: 4 syllables

Line 3: Action: 6 syllables

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: 978-0-13-195576-4)

Form of Writing:Cinquain Poetry

Line 4: Feeling or observation: 8 syllables

Line 5: Describing/renaming subject: 2 syllables

Do a brief review of syllables.Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing:Prewriting

Beginning stageFoundation; organize thoughts on paper

No sentences (words/phrases)

Spelling unimportant (this stage)Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta

State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing:Prewriting

Form: Cinquain PoetryTopic: Puppies (For practice), Turtles (For assessment)

Purpose: Describe a subject or picture; tell a storyBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta

State University, Valdosta, GA.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Cinquain PoetryGraphic Organizer

Line 1: 1 Word Subject (2 syllables)

Line 2: Description (4 syllables)

Line 3: Action (6 syllables)

Line 4: Expressing Feeling/Observation (8

syllables)

Line 5: Describing or Renaming (2

syllables)

APA Citation for Example

Project learning tree: Pre K-8 environmental education activity guide. (2009). Washington D.C.: American Forest Foundation.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Example

Earth WormsSquiggly squirmersAerating our topsoilHappily helping our

gardenCrawlers

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity4th graders shown a picture of a puppy (next slide)

Develop a cinquain poem (about puppies) Use a graphic organizer. Work in groups of threeTwo groups share

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity Picture

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Maltese puppies for sale in Australia. (2005-2008). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au: http://www.pups4sale.com.au/maltese_pups.htm

Assessment Activity4th graders shown a picture of turtles (next slide)

Work individually to create a

cinquain poem (about turtles)

Use graphic organizerBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment Activity Picture

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Nija Daniels

Cinquain poetry: drafting, editing, revising, and publishing

ELA4W4. The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully.

GPS

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

b. Revises selected drafts to improve coherence and progression by adding, deleting, consolidating, and rearranging text. c. Edits to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, etc.

GPS

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

•Students will transfer information constructed on the graphic organizer into cinquain poetry form. •Students will change, add, delete, rearrange content on their draft and look for mechanical errors.

PLOs

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

•Students will finalize their cinquain poem for publication.

PLO

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing: Drafting, Editing, Revising, Publishing

•Copy the information from your graphic organizer to a sheet of paper•Be sure to put each lines on separate lines on your paper

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

•Check for cinquain poetry format•Correct number of syllables•Correct form for each line•Mechanical errors•Capitalization, spelling and punctuation.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

•Copy the revised and edited poem on a new sheet of paper•Include drawing or picture appropriate to the title

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

APA Citation for Example

(2010). Retrieved from http:// www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/lesson_images/lesson43/RWT016-1.PDF

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Example

Penguin black white waddling, swimming, leaping a tuxedo in the cold wateremperorBrown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta

State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice ActivityGet into groupsLook at the picture on the next slide

Practice writing a cinquain poem

APA citationMaltese puppies for sale in Australia. (2005-2008). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au: http://www.pups4sale.com.au/maltese_pups.htm

 Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity Picture

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment

Look at picture on the next page

Individually (as fourth graders) write a cinquain poem

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment Activity Picture

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.