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He was born on ….When he was a small boy, he ….When he was 17,In 2008, he visited China
Nick, one of the most world famous speakers, loves life very much.
He has learned how to ….He has successfully changed ….
Who is he?his achievements his experiencesthe structure( 结构 ) of the article
when what
on December 4th, 1982
Nick was laughed at by people.
When he was 17
Nick graduated from university.
In 2008
His book came out.
He started to give talks in the church.
He visited Chengdu, China.
Nick was born.
Nick’s Story
When he was
a little boy,
At the age of 21,
In 2010
Nick, one of the most world famous speakers, loves life very much. Nick was born in Australia on December 4th, 1982. Unluckily, he was born without arms or legs. When he was a little boy, he was laughed at by people. They thought he could do nothing. It was difficult for him to dress himself. He had also problems brushing his teeth. As he couldn’t move easily, writing with his mouth was also hard. However, he tried his best to learn how to do normal things. When he was 17, he started to give talks in the church. At the age of 21, Nick graduated from university. From then on, he became so confident that he could speak to people freely. He has ever visited China five times. In 2008, he visited Chengdu to help the people.
People sure change. Over the years, Nick has learned how to do many things, such as dressing himself, answering the telephone and even using the computer. What‘s more, he is so lucky that he has married a Japanese girl because of his hard work. He never gives up his dream. Instead he shares his experiences in life and how to get over challenges by giving talks around the world. So far he has travelled to about 35 countries to help people who have problems since his book “Life Without Limits” came out in 2010. In a word, Nick has successfully changed from a life without limbs to a life without limits.
Connecting Words
（ 1 ）表示举例： such as, for example, like
（ 2 ）表示总结： in a word, as a result, so
（ 3 ）表示强调： above all, especially, in fact
（ 4 ）表示比较： as…as…, more than, less than
（ 5 ）表示转折： however, instead, but
（ 6 ）表示层次： what’s more\worse, and, at first,
then, at last/finally, besides,
（ 7 ）表示原因： because, because of, since
（ 8 ）表示条件： if, unless
（ 9 ）表示让步： though, although, even though
Nick is one of the most famous speakers.Nick loves life very much.
Nick is a man with a strong heart. Nick has changed problems into challenges.Nick is a man without arms or legs. Nick has his dream.
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Nick ， one of the most famous speakers ，loves life very much.
Nick ， a man with a strong heart ，has changed problems into challenges.
Nick ， a man without arms or legs ， has his dream.
Nothing is impossible to a strong heart.
Nine
Stephen Hawking, a very clever scientist, regards his many physical problems as unimportant. …… He can’t walk or even speak, but he has become very famous and successful. From Page 9, Unit 1 of “Go for it” Book III. According to Stephen Hawking’s story, write a speech to encourage us.
Time What
on 8 January, 1942
When he was 17
When he was 21
In 1988
In 2006
achievements
get a bad disease
graduate from Oxford University
A Brief History Of Time, come out.visit China.
be born in Oxford, England
Stephen Hawking’s Personal Information
be interested in science , get many medals and prizes, even want to travel to space in the future,
Read it aloud yourself, and pay attention to the word spelling, punctuations( 标点 ), capital letters and c
onnecting words.
Exchange your article with your partner and pay attention to the structure, tense, word spelling, capital letters, punctuations( 标点 ), and
connecting words.内容完整
5 分结构严谨
3 分行文通顺
3 分词句优美
2 分创 新 1
分 书 写 1
分总 分 1
5 分
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