Conquering the Comma. Sentence Structure: Commas in a Series Place commas in a sentence to divide...

Conquering the Comma

Sentence Structure: Commas in a Series

• Place commas in a sentence to divide items in a list.

• The commas will help the reader to avoid confusion.

• The comma before the conjunction is generally required, but it can be omitted if there is no possibility of confusion.

Sentence Structure: Commas in a Series

Consider the difference in the following:

Last month, Alex dated Mary Ann Lee and Kim.

Last month, Alex dated Mary, Ann, Lee, and Kim.

Last month, Alex dated Mary Ann, Lee, and Kim.

How many women did Alex date?

Sentence Structure: Commas in a Series

• Commas should be placed in series of words, phrases, or clauses.

• Place commas in the following sentences:

Martina brushed her hair put on her pajamas, and went to bed.

She fell asleep and dreamed that she was a princess she kissed a frog and she rescued her prince.

Commas after Interjections

• Oh, I understand now. • Wow, what a beautiful rainbow.

An interjection is a word that shows emotion such as oh, well, ouch, wow, ah

After introductory phrases

• Put a comma after 2 or more introductory prep.phrases

• Or a short prep phrase (optional) • that is not followed by a verb• In the light of the moon, the flowers opened.

• Do not put a comma after a prepositional phrase if a verb immediately follows.

• At the edge of the garden were many flowers.

Direct address

• When you address someone, set if off with commas.

• Next, students, you need to write.• Bob, listen.

interrupters

• Set off interrupters with commas• In fact, for example, by the way, after all, to be

exact

Appositive

• Appositives are noun phrases that rename the noun. If it adds information set off with commas

• If the appositive is necessary do use commas.• Vanesa, my favorite cousin, likes to surf.• My favorite cousin Vanessa likes to surf.

• Use commas to set off two items in a date or address

• Biloxi, Mississippi, is found on the Gulf.

• On December 10,1817, Mississippi was admitted.

Use commas to avoid misreading

• In the summer, time seems to go more quickly.• Those who can, can go home.• He had had the mumps.

• The emergency room was filled with bleeding patients, and doctors.

• She ate, and fed the baby.

Coordinate adjectives

• Two or more adjectives that modify the same noun need to be separated by a comma

• They can be reversed and and can be put btw. Them• Cool, windy night• Two used bookcases• Some colorful, decorated eggs

• If items in a series contain commas use semi-colons to separate.

• We ate apple, pineapple, and orange slices; celery, carrot, and bell pepper sticks; and mixed nuts.

• Ryan, my best friend; Craig, my next door neighbor; and Lad, my brother, met.

Clauses and Phrases

• A clause is a group of words that contains both a subject and a verb that complement each other.

• A phrase is a group of words that does not contain a subject or a verb that complement each other.

Compound sentence

• Has 2 or more independent clauses.

Sentence Structure: Compound Sentence

• A sentence that contains two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction is called a compound sentence.

• A conjunction joins words, phrases, and clauses together in a sentence.

• Conjunctions– for– and– nor– but– or– yet– so

F A N B O Y S

Compound subjects and verbs vs. compound sentences

• Carlos and Callie searched for a car.

• They visited lots and checked the internet.

• She is my cousin; she is also my best friend.

Correlative conjunction

• Either..or

• Neither…nor

• Not only… but also

• Both…and

• We will either order pizza tonight or pick up burgers.

• Either you or your brother should climb the tree and get the kite for him.

Joining compound sentences

• Join two clauses with semicolons

• Or

• Two clauses with a FANBOYS and ,

• Conjunctive adverb

Also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, incidentally, indeed, instead, likewise, meanwhile, nevertheless, nonetheless, otherwise, still, therefore, thus

; + conjunctive adverb + comma

Carlos visited car lots; however, Callie searched the internet.

• Carlos looked for a car; Callie stayed at home.Carlos wanted a Toyota, but Callie preferred a Mercedes.

• Bob looked in the classifieds; however, Callie searched the internet.

Sentence Structure: Compound Sentence

Where would you place the comma in the following sentence?

S V S

Dan struggled with his homework so his father

V

helped him.

Sentence Structure: Compound Sentences

• The comma in a compound sentence is placed before the coordinating conjunction.

S V Conj. S V

Andy built a snowman, and Jeff played with his dog.

Sentence Structure: Dependent Clause

• A dependent clause contains a subject and verb, but the clause cannot stand independently.

• Dependent clauses can often be identified by the use of dependent clause markers.

• Some dependent clause markers:

because

since

when

while

until

if

as

though

although

unless

after

before

once

whether

Sentence Structure: Introductory Clause

• When a dependent clause is placed at the beginning of a sentence, place a comma between the independent clause and the dependent clause.

Dep. clause S V

Before taking the test, Dan struggled with

Conj. S V

his homework, so his father helped him.

Sentence Structure: Dependent Phrases & Clauses

• Dependent phrases and clauses help to clarify and add detail to an independent clause.

• Dependent clauses may appear at the beginning, middle, or end of a sentence.

Sentence Structure: Independent Clause

• A complete sentence has two components, a subject and a verb.

• The subject and verb must form a complete thought to be considered an independent clause.

The couple dances.

subject (S) verb (v)

Dependent Clause

When a dependent clause is

located after an independent clause,

Do Not place a comma between the two.

S V

We decided to go to the movies because we were bored.

Introductory Clause

• Where would you place the comma in the following example?

S V

Because it was raining we decided to go to the movies.

Comma Practice

• Would you place commas in the following sentences? If so, where?

I am planning a trip to Paris which is one of the greatest cities in the world.

The place that I would most like to see is the Eiffel Tower.

Pierre, who is one of my business contacts, will meet me at the airport.

• Words that introduce adj phrases

• Who, whom, whose, which, that, when, where

• She is a teacher who influenced me most.

• Counters that are uncluttered make cooking easier.

• Introductory words can be omitted.

• Reader’s Digest is the magazine he likes best.

• Reader’s Digest is the magazine that he likes best.

Sentence Structure: Essential Phrases and Clauses

• An essential clause or phrase is used to modify a noun. General to specific

• It also adds information that is critical to the meaning of the sentence.

• Essential clauses are NOT set off by commas.

S essential phrase V

The people who work in my office are loud.

Sentence Structure: Essential Phrases and Clauses

• The word “that” is almost always an indicator of an essential phrase or clause.

S essential V

The tiramisu that I had at Joe’s was great.

Sentence Structure: Nonessential Phrases & Clauses

• A nonessential phrase or clause adds extra information to a sentence.

• This information can be eliminated from the sentence without jeopardizing the meaning of the sentence.

• Always place commas around nonessential phrases and clauses.

• Specific to general

Sentence Structure: Nonessential Phrases & Clauses

• Even without the phrase the sentence still makes sense: My brother plans to throw a party.

• May begin with which

S non-essential V

My brother, who lives across town, plans to throw a party.

Sentence Structure: Nonessential Phrases & Clauses

• Use commas to set off additional information.

S VSteve said that he would propose to me on

non-essential

Valentine’s Day, which is my favorite holiday.

Adverb clause

• After, although, as, as soon as, as though, before, because, even though, if, in order that, since, than, though, until, unless, when, while, where, whenever, wherever

When the bell rang, the students left.

They walked where the sign pointed.

• Caution adverb clause vs prep. Phrase

• She had three appointments before noon.

• If an adverb clause interrupts the flow of the sentence, set it off with commas.

• The walk, even though it was only a mile, seemed to take forever.

Noun clause

• How, whether, whoever, wherever, if, which, whose, where, that, whichever, however, whatever, who, what, when, whom, why

• Where you choose will be fine.• I did not know how I could make the

mistake.• Her answer was that she did not know.• The quote begins with what he said about

the war.

Subordination

• Dependent clause is not emphasized.

• Independent clause is emphasized.

• My dog is big and strong although he is also very gentle.

• Even though my dog is big and strong, he is very gentle.

• My dog is big and strong, but he is also very gentle.

Commas with Adjectives

• Use commas to separate adjectives that provide an equal description of a noun.

The Test:

Can you put “and” between the adjectives?

Can they be described in reverse order?

If so, use a comma.

big blue house | three hungry kittens | a cranky, bald man

A Common Error: The Comma Splice

• A comma splice is an error in which two independent clauses are joined by a comma.

S V

Dan struggled with his homework, his

S V

father helped him.

To Correct a Comma Splice

• Insert a conjunction between the two independent clauses.

• Start a new sentence.

• Insert a semi-colon between the two independent clauses (only in cases where the independent clauses are closely related in topic).

To Correct a Comma Splice

S V Conj.

Dan struggled with his homework, so his

S V

father helped him.

To Correct a Comma Splice

S V

Dan struggled with his homework. His

S V

father helped him.

To Correct a Comma Splice

S V

Dan struggled with his homework; his

S V

father helped him.

Comma Splice Practice

• How would you correct the following?

This semester I am taking calculus physics and economics.

Calculus is my best subject, I am certain I will get an A.

Although I am very busy, I still find time to have fun.

Last weekend my brother visited me and we went to a football game a party and a rock concert.

Additional Help

• Purdue University Writing Lab

• Heavilon 226

• Grammar Hotline: (765) 494-3723• Check our web site: http://

owl.english.purdue.edu

• Email brief questions: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/writinglab/email/owlmail

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